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Operation: Sinnoh Storm Remake PG-13- R

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Don't ask about the rating, this contains violence, censored language, and some romantic stuff. I can't determine the exact rating.
I am trying to remake my story Sinnoh storm. The last one sucked, and I hope this one does better. The fun Facts about the chapter are at the very bottom. This is the type of story where I can ask the audience if there are certain tools the person can use to what happens to them. Well, here goes.
7/30/09 update!
[*]Forgot to mention USATSM, the main Military force in the Story
[*]More discovered fun facts
[*]Typos.
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Operation: Sinnoh Storm
Prolouge: Red Spread and Other Events

12/ 22/ 12

After Failure to launch Nukes on the U.S., North Korea had other Plans. On December 22, North Korea overwhelmed South Korean and American forces in South Korea. Technically, there is no South or North Korea anymore, Just The Democratic People's Republic of Korea. The United Nations conclude that the invasion of South Korea was against the 1949 Geneva Convention. North Korea used Chemical and Biological warfare causing controversy all around the world. President Barack Obama made a speech in response of the invasion:

"North Korea broke the line and killed thousands if not millions of innocent men, woman, and children with the use of bio and chemical weapons. Along the death toll were 21,451 US troops stationed near the DMZ. As president, with permission from congress...The United States of America is at War!"

Production of iron, Kevlar, and other minerals and plastics to increase the US Armed Forces production to 465.895%. This is where new technology starts and where old styles of warfare come back. the introduction of new technology include the XHNB (Advanced Healing NanoBots), however they are not completely advanced so there are separate versions which include: Anti Internal Bleeding, Amputation, Muscle Reattachment, Anti-Infection, And many more. While the US War effort grows, The Democratic People's Republic of Korea launches attack on other countries and makes new allies. Korea launches Invasions on Northern China, Parts of Japan and parts of Russia. Republic of Mongolia and East Russia (Known by Americans as the Neo-Soviet Union).

War takes full gear in January 7 2013. US and Japanese Forces storm the Southern Japan which was invaded just months ago and ended up in failure. In number, Korea outnumbers the Japanese and US forces combine. It was a 3/1 battle. 56,452 US and Japanese soldiers perish in the 3 week fight. Korea used Chemical Weapons in the battle which is difficult to get through because it is corrosive to anything, even Kevlar. Southern Japan was lost to Korea. The War lasts for two more decades as more land gets taken.

The Year is 2029, and a New Private Military is formed. The USATSM. The United States Advanced Tchnology and Specialized military is a privately funded Armed forces. It is owed, created, and funded by the Entos Company, a Trillion (yes, trillion) dollar company due to it's successful XHNB Project. Due to it's high budget, they did extremely advanced reserch, 2 specific projects just started. ProdIgy: Project Involving Adolescence with Integrated Chips and Advanced Technology. The lack of adult soldiers forced many countries, even the US, to use Children in Battle. So with this technology, the can be as good if not better than their adult counterparts. There was a problem, a majority of the ProdIgy volunteers don't have good leadership. Very few do, but there are. One of which is Nicolai Luigi Bizzarini. A local in Hawaii is also in an Italian Family. Nicolai is considered very skillful and is said to have barely any emotions to things. He even has no crush on a girl.

This is where technology really gets...well...technical. In attempt to create a teleporter for troops, they ran into something that is more advanced, the ability to travel through Dimensions and the Parallel Universe. The theory was stated by Albert Oppenheimer that since the Universe is infinite, everyone's imagination in the world is somewhere in the universe. One of the first to be explored is Di-1615115131514. During exploration lead by Nicolai, they learned the area called "Sinnoh" by locals. And very Unusual species of Animals are there. One notable one was Rattus desumo: The Electric Rat. Another is fuga citatus (rutilus and puteulanus): The Jet Animal (red and blue). Locals call Rattus desumo Pikachu and fuga citatus (rutilus and puteulanus) Latias (fuga citatus rutilus) and Latios (fuga citatus puteulanus).

During Exploration, there came a great migration between Earth and "Sinnoh". Strangely, locals call their planet Earth too. The body style is strange: They do have humanoid bodies, however there are differences. Eyes are 2-3 times the size of a human, arms are 1.15 longer than a human's and legs are 1.75 longer than a human's. More facts are is that These locals also contain 75% more blood than us. This style of body relates to a animation style in Japan called "Anime", in fact, this specific one was called "The Pokemon region". Pokemon was an anime series on Earth, it was around 2 decades old before it died out in 2019. There came a great migration between Earth and Anime World. Approx 9,000,000 Humans came to "Sinnoh" while 12,000,000 "Characters" came to Earth. It took a few month before bad things happened in Sinnoh.

Febuary 13, 2029. A Mafia called the il nome della famiglia di morte (Family Called Death) Settled into Jubelife, a city in Sinnoh that looks strikingly similar to New York. The Mafia leader was blackmailing a shop and was seen by a man named Jack Hikari along with his daughter Dawn Hikari. The leader was gonna attack him but Dawn tried to attack back. Despite the fact Dawn is 7, she still fought hard but was ended shortly. the leader pulled out his Lupara and melees Dawn and shot at Jack right in the waist. He was severely injured and in extreme pain, Dawn who is right in the corner was watching in terror as the leader walks up to him. He then pulls up his broomstick up to Jacks face and says "buona notte". *Bang* Blood sprays all over the place and Dawn. The leader reloads his gun heading toward Dawn and as he finishes and points...*Bang*Dawn sees white for a few seconds and everything clears out. She sees the leader handless and his bent Sawed off on the floor. He runs away. The General Nicolai saved her, a complete stranger from death. Dawn starts to tear up and cry. The Funeral of Jack starts on the 14, and Dawn gives roses to Nicolai in thanks of saving her. Nicolai feels some emotion, but not alot. He says "Thanks, I'm sorry about your dad. I hope the world will be kind to you in the future".

Nicolai had a brother, his name is Nicholas Lorenzo Bizarini, his story begins when he had a crush on a girl named Bianca Florence. She came from the Anime world, but is not from Sinnoh or the Pokemon area of the world. February 14, 2031 (two years later) During school, Nicholas walks up to Bianca giving her a red rose. Bianca is satisfied and puts it in a vase. She hugs Nicholas, and starts puckering. Suddenly, the door of the classroom blows. The explosion kills 4 students and forces everyone else on the ground. Students yell "REDS ARE ATTACKING!", but they are not Koreans. Terrorists attack the school. The lower level terrorists finish off the closest to the door, the leader (Al Abdul-Quddus Hussein) pulls out his machete killing students on the other side of the room, where Bianca was blown to. He slices the first student in the center of the head, the second suffered a stab to the chest. Bianca was pulled up, Nicholas watches in horror. Abdul-Quddus takes his machete and slits her throat and the roses in the vase just right of him, gets cut and the petals fall to the floor. Nicholas was heartbroken, he wanted to cry, but somehow no tears dripped from his face. Probably because he was afraid to be shot. He remained motionless for minutes. The leader comes up to him, looking down on the motionless but living Nicholas and kicks him in the face. It hurt, but Nicholas resisted. The terrorists leave the area via helicopter and the police crew just arrived. No fighter jet was able to pursuit because they are all fighting against Korea. When they left, Nicholas stands up. He is limping toward the lifeless body of Bianca. He starts to sob, when he is just meters away, he falls to his knees and cries so loud, the police outside could hear. S.W.A.T. stormed the School and entered the room. They saw Nicholas on the floor crying on front of his crush. They tried their best to calm him down, but no word can help Nicholas from his depressing episode.

Almost a year later, the depressed Nicholas Bizarini looks into the yearbook which had a picture of him next to Bianca during a school dance, he teared up a little bit. "Today is January 5, 2032, and I'm gonna get revenge." Nicholas promised himself.
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Fun Facts:
The time when North Korea attacks South Korea is the day after the predicted end of the world which is 12/21/2012, the belief came from the Maya.

The time Dawn's dad get's buried is Valentines day. this is also where Nicholas's crush (Bianca Florence, she has nothing to do with pokemon movie 5) dies 2 years later.

The Bizarini Bros. names start with N.

In ProdIgy, stands for Project involving adolescence using Intergrated Chips and Advanced Tchnology
In the story There is no such thing as a North and South Korean anymore.

A majority of the opposing force is communist.

Dawn and her father's last name is Hikari, which is her name in the Japanese version of the Anime.

I never stated, when NK launches Nukes before the attack of SK.

The war lasted for more than two decades.

The successors of Barack Obama Haven't been revealed.

Nicholas Lorenzo Bizarini represents me: ferrariguy1000. (well the personality)

If you know your Alphabet placement, 1615115131514 stands for pokemon.
16-15-11-5-13-15-14=Pokemon

Abdul-Quddus according to the site I found the name in means: Servant of the Most Holy

The scene where Bianca gets her throat cut and flower pedals fall to the floor is a reference to a scene in saints row 2 found here at 1:04-1:10

il nome della famiglia di morte lietrally means: the name of the family of death

Albert Oppenheimer is a parody of Albert Einstein and J. Robert Oppenheimer, both participated in the Manhattan Project.
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Do you have any questions or comments, please make it constructive criticism. don't say stuff like "this crap sucks!" or anything like it.
 
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*DROOLS*
THIS.
SEEMS.
AWESOME!





My fanfic is really similar to this too, except there's no cross-realm thingy majiger.

EDIT: Make sure your numbers are written in word form like one, two, three. I've got a new possible favorite if this is done right. Really creative! Seriously, GOOD JOB.
 
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Ch 1 is here. Remember, use constructive criticism, I'm just freestyling my fanfics. If you can, report any typos.
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Ch 1: Excellens Vox (Superior Power)

January 5, 2032; Location: Hilo Citadel, Hawaii. (19.652659,-155.177107)

I am tired of doing nothing, I want just let it out. Abdul-Quddus has killed my crush, and I want to kill him. I'm joining the USATSM. The USATSM uses technology so advanced, even a kid could go into battle. So far, there are a total of 45,431 ProdIgy Volunteers, I will become one. I go up to the soldier registration. Suddenly my bro comes up to me and greets me. “Hello Nick” He says. Nicolai is totally different than me. He is more of a formal dude while I am more of a person who talks as if I am one of those Compton people. “Wassup Nico” I reply back. “Nick, you listen to too much West Coast.” He relpy’s back. “So you decided to go to the USATSM, is it because you might attract a lot of girls?”. “Hell no!” I replied. “Well sorta…”, Nicolai grins after I say that”...But the real reason I want to join is because I want revenge for Bianca: The cutest girl I ever saw” I realize that I said it amongst a large crowd. “Well good luck finding Abdul-Quddus, he’s the hardest person to find since Osama Bin Laden” Nicolai says.

I am the second person to the front and get ready to get my pen. “Go to channel 5, there’s big news about that Sinnoh place!” one recruit yells. The screen on front of registration turns to Channel 5 news. ”This is Katie Curry reporting breaking news. A abandoned project is used for the Reds to spread their reign of Red Terror. The Land is Sinnoh seems to be very weak in terms of it’s military during a 2029 Foreign Affairs Military inspection. In fact, they have no sign of firearms, just a bunch of animals with special powers. There was even controversy over the use of these “special” animals. The Democratic People’s Republic of Korea announced…” I suddenly whisper to Nicolai somewhat useless info. “It’s funny that dispite being a Communist, they put the word Democratic in their Country’s name” “Just watch” Nicolai whispers back. “… The Big Six Superpowers are already judging weather we should help the Sinnoh people or not.

The Big Six (originally called the Big Five) is a group of the world’s most powerful countries. They include: The Russian Federation, The Democratic Federation of China, Japan, The French Republic, The United Kingdom, and The United States of America. In 2015, Japan was added to the United Nations Security Council. So far 5/6 of the Big six: Russia, Japan, Britain, US, and France vote to fight the Red Menace in Sinnoh, they are waiting for China… … …China votes yes.

President Zoey Johnson, The First Female President and Female African American President, started a speech.

“We are the protectors of a soon to be peaceful world, but how about the other world? Where is their peace? They can’t be left alone in the dark, they can’t be left with The Red Menace on their soil. We must fight not only to protect ourselves and other countries, but also other worlds. We will fight…We will fight to win peace on the other world!”

The broadcast ends and we get on with our schedule. I sign my sheet. I am stationed on Sinnoh, unknown Military base (however). Nicolai also relocates himself to Sinnoh to make sure I don’t get hurt. In the USATSM as a ProdIgy volunteer, there is no training, but you have to take a Nanobot shot. The shot injects Nanobots into the bloodstream. The Nanobots relocate themselves to the brain and implant themselves. Indication for if it plants onto the brain include, more responsive reflexes, increase of vision beyond 20/20, and having the ability to fight as if the person has had a black belt for years. You have to go through a test just to see if it works. Dispite being highly skilled, just like others in the USATSM, have to start at the lowest rank: Private 2nd class.

I pass the test and sleep in Barracks for tonight, for tomorrow I’m going to Sinnoh.

4:39 AM, Hawaii-Aleutian Standard Time

I go with my team on the USS Barack Obama, a Aircraft Carrier built and finished in 2029, along with other carriers, cruisers, destroyers, and battleships (yes battleships). The Dimension Travel machine is in fact a satellite that emits rays on a certain part of the Ocean. Anything that passes through get’s sent to the dimension that the command center gives. The warm winds of Hawaii and the beautiful sunrise suddenly turn to Hot and humid air with the sun right over our head. The water changes color too. This indicates that we entered the Anime World.

“50 miles to go until we reach Sinnoh.” The PA says. I lay in my cabin with my team: General of the ATSM Nicolai Luigi Bizarini (my bro),Sergeant Kelly Harp Robinson, Gunnery Sergeant Albert “Terminator” H.G. Johnson, Private 1st class Arnold Daniel Kenya, Captain Bridgette Al Akilah, and Lieutenant Jackson A. Marcus. Kelly is the communications and sniping person of our team, she is Caucasian, brunette, and has brown eyes. Albert ,"Terminator" many people call him, is the demolitions and heavy weapons dude. He is African American and is extremely muscular, he has black hair and dark blue eyes. Arnold is a light infantry, he usually carries a FN SCAR-L W/undermount Double barreled pump action shotgun. He is South African and has black hair and brown eyes. Bridgette is a beautiful 12 year old girl who joined ProdIgy because she wanted to avenge her family's massacre in Afghanistan. She is Middle-eastern, black haired and light blue eyes. Jackson is a 15 year old who joined ProdIgy for the money, his family is in dire need of food and Jackson just loves his family so much, he is risking his life for it. He is a Caucasian, blond haired, and has green eyes. I just can’t wait for some action.
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Fun facts:
In real life, Hilo has no Military base or at least a very big one.

President Zoey is the first Female President and African American Female President. She is one of the successors of Barack Obama.

In the team introduction, it says the FN SCAR-L has a undermount double barreled pump action shotgun. It is truly imagination. One of the only double barreled pump action shotguns around is the Neostead 2000.

Nicolai Luigi Bizarini is a 5 star General.

Excellens Vox is the USATSM's Motto. Excellens Vox means "Superior Power" in Latin.

China is Democratic in this story.

There is a anchor woman named Katie Curry, this is a parody of Katie Couric.

There is an Aircraft Carrier named USS Barack Obama.

Battleships make a debut in my story. As of today, there are no Battleships in the US NAVY being used.

More fun facts will be found later.
 
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Finally done With Ch 2. Remember, use constructive criticism. If you have to say something is bad, say it nicely.
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Ch: 2 Semper Fidelis (Always Faithful)

January 6th, 2032 9:45 Sinnoh Western Standard Time, out at sea

I am at a new world. The funny looking gulls lay on the rails while sailors take pictures of them. A large 6 finned whale swims close to the portside of the ship. I take a walk on deck to watch the nearby islets pass as we go. Suddenly the alarm screams into my ears. It’s time to go. The V26 Osprey IIs, A jet version of the V22 Osprey, is ready for takeoff. Hundreds of troops head into their assigned vehicles ready to storm the Heavily Eroded island of Sinnoh. The cliffs look like Na Pali in Kauai. Hundred-Foot islets span hundreds of feet. They are just miles away. I get into my assigned Osprey II and load up. I call the XM307 Grenade launcher. My position is the rear of the aircraft ready to attack ground troops. The pilot flips switches and pulls handles the…Whoosh…we are suddenly hundreds of feet high within a matter of seconds.

We pass over the beautiful coast. A large gorge leads us to the first town. A small river forms at the gorge. As we exit the gorge, a beautiful waterfall drops from the top of the mouth of the canyon end. We do a dive and end up just meters from the ground. Some people who have abandoned their homes hear loud screeches coming from the west. They see a swarm of Half Helicopter-Half Plane aircraft. I wave at them as we pass by. I see a town up ahead, looks a lot like a town in Mid-United States. “Nicolai, I have a feeling we’re in Kansas right now” I say jokingly. A few members of my team laugh.

Transition of narrator_
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….Switching To Dawn Hikari

It is about 10 O’clock AM when I woke up. I had a dream something bad will happen on my Birthday. I don’t believe it. I remember a lot of guys with guns coming towards me. I screamed but woke up before I found out what might have happened to me. I wake up and greet Glameow. I go downstairs and expect mom to greet me a happy Birth day, and what do I see? She is tied up on a chair with a bunch of guys with hats of a red star on the front. They see me and grab me. They tie me to a chair asking Mom questions. Some spoke another language, but one spoke our English language. I can’t exactly hear what he says, he’s too far, but close enough for me to know few words like “who” or “when”. The Soldier gets angry at mom and slaps her. I close my eyes. When I open them, I see him coming to me. He unties me and drags me by my hair to Mom. He pulls out a very large gun made of wood and metal, it has a large almost 90 degree curve box coming out of it. He aims it at me. He says “DO AS I SAY, OR I’LL BLOW HER F***ING HEAD OFF!” Mom, is starting to panic. I start crying “I DON”T WANT TO DIE!” Suddenly, the window shatters and the gun flies out of his hand smacking one of his teammates unconscious. Then I run outside to see a bunch of guys like the one who tried to kill me. Start running in the direction of where another shot killed one of their soldiers outside. As I look in that direction, I see flashes of light coming from the bush. As I look up, I see a large half helicopter-half plane aircraft fly right above me. I see shots coming from the rear. It is not bullets, because it explodes on contact. I see scary soldiers wearing gasmasks that look like Spoinks faces sliding down a rope.
I start to run away from it. I don’t know where to hide, suddenly another soldier with a hat with a red star in the front grab me and places me on front of him with me facing outward. He is using me as a human shield. A person who looks too young to be in the military come out with a gun and shoot the guy’s head, I’m free. I start running away and that same solder who saved me told me “DON’T RUN AWAY!” I’m panicking, I’m confused. I have nowhere to go. This is like my dream…no nightmare I had last night. As I ran away, that same guy who had that gun to kill me in the house grabbed me and stabbed me in the chest. I screamed as loud as a jet. Lots of blood starts to come out and before he can stab me again another soldier, maybe the one who saved my from the human shield, came out and shot him.

He came up to me. I lay there bleeding. It hurts like there are thousands of thorns inside my chest. The soldier comes up to me and tells me. “Don’t worry, you’ll be alright, I will patch you up very quickly. He takes a needle (I hate needles) and pokes it in my arm. Ouch! that hurt. Suddenly, my wound starts to turn to normal flesh, then skin. I was amazed. He tells me “there is no time, we have to get to a house”. I respond, My house may be fine if those guys aren’t there. The soldier told me, there are no enemies in this town…for now”. When I stand up, it still hurts so I collapse again. He helps me up. He starts to carry me to my house. He puts me on the couch. I see Mom talking to the friendly soldiers to “GO LOOK FOR MY DAWN!” She sees me and runs to me grasping me in her arms. I started crying “Mom, I’m sorry I ran out, I didn’t know what to do. But this guy saved me.” Mom looks at the soldier that carried me over here. “My name is Nicolai Luigi Bizarini.” He says. He reveals himself after removing his gasmask. He is a handsome 13 year old boy, black hair, but I can’t see his eyes, he is wearing sunglasses.

I thank him again for saving me. “My name is Dawn Hikari”. Nicolai seems to look as if he is having a flash back. He remembers and immediately tells me “your Dawn!?, I saved you from the Mafia leader” I suddenly remember also. Suddenly another 13 year old soldier barges in here without his mask, he looks almost like him, but wears normal glasses. “Nicholas meet Dawn, that is the girl I saved remember.” He walks up to me and shakes my hand “Hi, My Name is Nicholas Lorenzo Bizarini.” I greet him too. Nicholas (or is it Nicolai, they has such similar names, so confusing) well, the one with normal glasses is talking to Nicolai about Reds starting to Flank from the Northeast. Nicolai calls in an air strike or something like that, I see very loud jets fly across the sky dropping large containers that explode on contact. The enemy has been fully wiped out. I started to wonder, why is a 13 year old in the Military? I ask Nicolai and say that anyone from the age of 10 and up can join. I had a flashback, Daddy dies in front of me. I want revenge. “I want to join!” I yell out loud. Mom starts worrying about me and begs me not to go. “please, I can avenge Daddy for this.” I explain. “Well, I have no choice, you are becoming a Pokémon trainer and coordinator. Pokémon trainer is also hard and dangerous. I hope you know what you are doing” Mon tells me. “No Need to Worry!” I tell her. Nicolai has a car ready and lets me go in. I’m ready to go.

We start to leave. “Well, I have a better car but the Hummer Hzero will do.” Nicolai says. I’m even impressed a 13 year old can drive. “How can you drive if you are 13?” I ask. “Project ProdIgy” he answers. “It allows you to fight like a black belt while you just started to fight for the first time” he explains. Nicholas asks one of his teammates to turn on the radio and put in “The Chronic”. Then I hear Music literally go boom and some fast talking song something I never heard before.”1-2-3 and to the 4 Snoop Doggy Dogg and Dr. Dre is at the door…” The lyrics say. I ask Nicholas, “what is this music?” He replies “West Coast Hip Hop, the best music in the world! You can just call it rap”. “So is there training?” I ask Nicolai. He answers, “Well, not for those with ProdIgy. You get a needle full of nanobots that you inject in your bloodstream which will eventually go to your brain.” “Wait...you...ju...ju...just sa...said...ne…needles?” I stutter. “Yup” Nicholas replies, “let’s do it right now”. I nearly blacked out, suddenly I feel a hand touching my forearm, then a wet towel, then a painful pinch. “Ow! I yelled”. Well I got use to It. I ask ”are we going to Sandgem town?” Nicholas says “what town?” Nicolai answers and says “Sandgem town, it’s a few miles away, that is where the military base is going to be.”

I look out the window and see a ton of loud aircraft land on a air strip mad of dirt. A small base is being made temporarily. “The base is going to be larger than you see it” Nicolai told me. We are all signed to Barracks # 5 Cabin 32. I start to see clearer and move faster, I somehow even know how to fight too. I suddenly remembered that ProdIgy was the cause of all this. I get ready for the test.

I was told to go to the obstacle course, with my normal clothes on. I’m worried that Nicolai or Nicholas would look up my skirt. “Don’t worry, I’m not that type of guy, but look out for Nicholas, he’s a legs man.” Nicolai explained. I started to feel uncomfortable about Nicholas. I started my test getting myself dirty, I go under the barbed wire, over the log wall, in the small tube and reach the finish line in under 30 seconds. “Nice, welcome to the club” Nicholas says. I feel so dirty after running the obstacle course. I get to meet the team and start to pick my weapons.I was given a choice of weapons: M16 A5, FN SCAR-H, FN SCAR-L, M4-A3, M8-A2, and FN F2000. I picked the FN SCAR L, just because I was recommended it. I’m battle ready. I mainly joined the force just so I might find the Mafia leader. Nicolai tells me that is an extremely low chance of happening. However, I told him what I usually say: “No Need to Worry!"
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Fun Facts:
The V26 Osprey II is the jet version of the V22 Osprey

The Hummer Hzero is a joke about Hummer whereas the bigger the number, the smaller the hummer. Hzero is the largest hummer in existence.

The Funny looking gulls refer to the Pokemon Wingull. The six finned whale refers to Wailord.

The XM307 Autocannon/grenade launcher has been canceled in real life as of 2007. The project was revived in the story.

When Nicholas asks one of his teammates to put on "the chronic". It is reffrence to a actual album by Dr. Dre called The Chronic. The Specific song Dawn heard was Nuthin but a G' Thang the song itself is here. (warning: Strong language)

There are 3 fictional weapon models of existing weapons: The M16 A5, the M4 A3, and the M8-A2.

The M8 comes from an actual weapon called the XM8 which has been canceled as of 2005.

Dawn describes a gun in the begining of the story as "a very large gun made of wood and metal, it has a large almost 90 degree curve box coming out of it". She is talking about a common Russian Assault Rifle called the AK 47.

It has been said that Dawn hates needles.

Semper Fidelis is the United States Marine Corps motto. Semper Fidelis stands for "Always Faithful" in Latin and is also shortened to Semper Fi.

The military base is in the outskirts of Sandgem town which hasn't been taken yet.

Just like the real life Ferrariguy1000, Nicholas is a "legs guy" which is that he is attracted to girls with nice legs.

Nicholas and Nicolai are 13 years old in this story.

Nicolai, Nicholas, and many other ProdIgy volunteers can drive vehicles weather it be car, tank, boat, plane, etc. and it is thanks to the ProdIgy Project.

Nicolai said that he has another car, It as the Fictional Rolls Royce Phantom X (10).
 
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Chapter 3 is up, this isn't an action one. I'm just giving you a heads up. It's also relatively short.
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Ch 3: Why We Fight

January 6th, 2032. 3:32 PM Sinnoh Western Standard Time, Sandgem town Outskirts.

Transition of narrator_
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….Switching To Nicholas Bizarini.

The new girl looks cute…wow nice legs. But I can’t let myself get distracted. She is just a soldier, just like me. I find out that it is her birthday. I go to the BX/PX and buy a cake for her. I come into the room we are assigned to and see her sitting on the couch, she looks sad. I put the cake down on the table then sit next to her. “what’s going on?” I ask her. “My…My dad, he died.” She replied. She takes a handkerchief out of her pocket and wipes her face. “A gang leader killed my Dad.” She continues. “You joined the USATSM to avenge?” I ask. “Yes,” she says, “even if I have a low chance, I still have a bigger chance than before.” She takes the handkerchief and wipes her face again. “I joined for a related reason too.” I reply. “Why did you join” she asked. “Because, there…there was a girl I liked.” I take out the photo of Bianca and I at the school dance. “She looks just so pretty.” I tell her. “What happened?” she asked.

“Bianca Florence was a girl from this world, she was an immigrant. I first saw her in 2030. Her light brunette hair looks like finely spun silk, her eyes look like Sapphires glistening in the light. I had a crush on her. She is shy, near sighted, and very clumsy. She is also target of bullies.” “That’s mean” Dawn comments. “I know” I respond “Because, she is quite wealthy and looks like she wouldn’t hurt a thing, bullies jump her after school and beat her up and take her money. The first time I saw this, she was lying on the floor crying, she was bleeding from the nose and is scratched up all over her body. I helped her up and took her to the bus. We were headed to my house. I started talking to her, but had a hard time doing it” I pause for a while as I watch Dawn giggle. “I was starting small talk like: Hello, what’s your name? She said her very pretty name, Bianca.” “Wow that is as pretty name” Dawn comments. I continue my story, “I take her home and give her the Medical shot to help with her scratches and broken bones. I had her over for dinner after she called her parents that she is at a friend’s house. We became friends since that day. During school hours when we can’t talk, I admire how graceful she looks sitting in her chair, how cute she looks with her glasses on and how nicely formed her legs look.” Dawn was sipping a glass of water and spits it out after mentioning Bianca’s legs. “wha…you purv!” Dawn, responds loudly. “I’m not a purv, I’m just complimenting the way she looks. Anyway, I start getting in a closer relationship with her. She started to notice that I am flirting with her, she starts to get her face red each time I flirt with her. She gets use to it and starts holding my hand. This is where it was supposed to be my best day of my life.”

“February 14, 2031. I bought the most beautiful roses at a renown flower shop in Hilo and take the bus to school, I walk up to her shaking, my heart was thumping so fast, I start to sweat. I give her the roses…she likes them. She places them in a vase and hugs me, she then puts her face close to mine and our lips are almost touching. Suddenly, the door to our classroom blew up. We were thrown to the ground by the blast. I was across the room from her, that was how powerful the blast was. I thought the Koreans, the ones that attacked your town, were invading, but they are terrorists. I was nearly knocked out, but I can still see a little bit. I see Bianca being approached by the infamous leader, Al Abdul-Quddus Hussein. He came up to her and...and…” I start to tear up, so does Dawn. “…he...he slit her throat, just because she was an American. I saw her fall to the ground, trying to cover her cut throat from bleeding out. She suddenly stops moving, and blood just pools around her lifeless body.” I start to cry. “Oh, Nicholas I’m so sorry.” Dawn responds. “When they leave by helicopter with no pursuit behind them, I stand up limping to her. I start to tear up, I fall to my knees and cry. The Local S.W.A.T. team come into the room and tries to calm me down. I couldn’t stop crying. A few days later, I got to go to her funeral. I came up to her and kissed her on the cheek. I couldn’t believe she just went just like that. I then wanted to join the USATSM. What is your story?”

Dawn sighs and begins her story. “Well, Daddy was taking me to his workplace in Jubelife City. He witnessed a guy beating up his boss for money. He started calling the police for help, I tried to get in the way of the person beating up dad’s boss, but he shoved me away to the wall. He pulled out his gun with two tubes and shot one at his waist, causing extreme pain to dad. He then goes up to him and…” she starts to cry. “…he shot him in the back of the head. I jolted after hearing that loud noise. He started coming to me loading his gun, then bam your partner saved me, Nicolai.” “Nicolai isn’t my partner, he’s my bro.” I interrupt. “Wow, you guys are brothers, no wonder you look so similar. Anyway, I start wobbling to daddy only to see his head cone and blood spewing out of him. I was crying most of the day, Nico tried to calm me down. I actually liked Nico. So on daddy’s funeral, I gave Nicolai roses and thanked him for saving me. I really wanted to kiss him, but I was afraid to. It even seemed odd for a 7 year old to kiss a 10 year old. Today I don’t exactally like him, not because he is mean, just because of time.” “wow, you actually like Nicolai” I respond “DON’T YOU DARE TELL HIM, I’LL KICK YOUR BUTT IF YOU DO!” she screamed.

“Well, I feel so sad for you, hey to cheer you up, I bought a cake for you. Nicolai told me it was your birthday.” I tell her. “Wow, thanks Nick! You’re the best!” I light the candles for her and she blows it out. We started to talk more that night and became friend very quickly.
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Fun Facts:
Why We Fight is the name of an episode of Band of Brothers.

BX/PX are goods stores in military bases.

This episode featured only Nicholas and Dawn

Nicholas likes Dawn only as a friend, not romantically. Despite that fact, he thinks Dawn's legs look nice.

Dawn had a slight crush on Nicolai 3 years ago when he saved Dawn.

Facts about Bianca Florence: She wears glasses, light brunette hair, blue eyes, smart, clumsy, shy, is slim. This is also one of Ferrariguy1000's favorite preferences about what he thinks a cute girl is.

Dawn mentions a gun with two tubes, this is reference to the double barreled shotgun.
 
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Ch 4: Acta Non Verba (Action Not Words)

January 7th, 2032. 5:00 AM, Sandgem Town Outskirts.

At five, the Bugle Call Reveille, the song that is played to wake up all soldiers, startled Dawn making her jump out of her bed, dress up quickly, and run outside. Nicolai liked that, thus she is nicknamed: Miniutegirl. She however was scolded, very loudly, by Gunnery Sergeant Albert that she shouldn’t dress up in normal clothes. “YOU HAVE TO DRESS UP IN YOUR UNIFORM, DON’T BE SO STUPID NEW GIRL!” He screams in her face. Dawn is very sensitive and actually started tearing and whining like a dog. “Ye…Ye…Yes…s…s…sir”. She ran back to the barracks crying. General Nicolai turns to Albert. “Look, now look what you did. Dawn is new, you don’t know what she can handle!” Nicolai tells him. “Well, the enemy might do the same thing too, maybe even worse.” Albert replies. Nicolai doesn’t say anything and goes into the barracks. I leave my post and look in the window to our room. He approaches the Dawn. She is sitting on the bed still crying. Nicolai sits next to her. “Don’t mind Albert, he can be scary sometimes, but he’s a good guy.” Nicolai tells her. “Nah, don’t worry about it, I forgive him.” Dawn starts to calm down. “Now since you are new here, I will let you wear your normal clothes for today.” Nicolai says. “Oh, thanks Nicolai” She responds. She goes up to him and hugs him then leaves the room. Nicolai is just standing still, all red on his face. He notices me and screams “WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING AT!?” I jolt and run away.

Nicolai is planning to retake Sandgem from the Reds. He briefs everyone in the base in one large briefing room. He receives a map of Sandgem Town which looks a lot like the town of Pacifica California. We have a friendly aiding the attack: Russia. Russia has been one of our greatest allies during the war. The leaders of the Russian Army came to the brifing. They are Marshal of the Russian Federation Nina Shpagin (Нина Шпагин) and Marshal of the Russian Federation: Nikolai Kalashnikov (Николай Калашников). Nina is a beautiful 13 year old Anime girl who is considered extremely strict, very powerful, and unforgiving. She slaps anyone who describes how beautiful she looks and beats up anyone trying to flirt with her, you don’t even want to know what happens if you touch her. She was from the Anime world, but details of her can be told later. She is Blonde haired, blue eyes, and from an unknown area of the Anime World. Nikolai is a 13 year old Russian boy. Nikolai (must not be confused with Nicolai) is completely opposite of Nina. He is extremely nice, and is very forgiving. He is a natural Russian. He has brunette hair and brown eyes. The briefing goes on for 20 minutes then we get ready. Dawn gets her gun and puts on attachments “that looks cool with it”, yes she says she wants to make her gun look cool. She attaches to her SCAR-L: an EOTech holographic sight, a FN40GL, a silencer (despite there is no use for it now), a heartbeat sensor (quite useless unless there are soldiers hiding in buildings), a Century Magazine, a bipod, a lasersight, a flashlight, and an infrared laser sight (despite the fact it is useful only in nightfights).

Here are mission stats:

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Our vehicles that we are using are the Hummer Hzero (A 4th generation High Mobility Multipurpose Wheeled Vehicle) count: 50, The Grizzly APC count 25, M2 Eisenhower Main Battle Tank count 10, V26 Osprey II count 40, and F39 Raptor II count 5. We have 5,000 soldiers who are ready for battle.

The Russians are using American Hzeros count 50, PCM (Перевозчик народов модели транспортного средства 2028) APC count 30, T120 Main Battle Tank count 25, American V26 Osprey count 20, Su 37 count 5, Su PAK FA count 3, and MiG 35 count 20. They have 5,500 solders that are battle ready.

There are approx 6,000 Reds in the premises. No enemy Air Superiority, about 25 armored vehicles, 30 Light tanks and 5 Main Battle Tanks.

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Recon spots a warehouse just south of Sandgem. They see what looks like Reds questioning a bunch of civilians. Guess what, we are assigned the job. “This is probably the easiest one Dawn can handle” Nicolai tells our team.

We head toward the coordinates we were assigned. Dawn is actually excited about today’s mission. I expected her to be afraid. Dawn Sits happily in the seat she is assigned…wearing normal clothes with a Kevlar vest on. She looks like she would be the most targeted. “1 mile” says The Driver. Suddenly Dawn sees a small bright flying object with smoke behind it and asks Nicolai what it is. “RPG!” Nicolai yells. The RPG hits the Hzero causing us to flip. Thankfully no one was killed. Dawn crawls out of the car helping me out. Suddenly a loud noise comes from behind her. Dawn gets hit in the shoulder. She falls and screams in pain, but quickly gets up and pulls out her SCAR-L. She then notices that there enemy soldiers in the field.

Dawn ducks for cover and continue helping me and a few other teammates out of the flipped over car. A Red comes out of the field with a bayonet at the end of his AK stabbing her in the Tibia immobilizing her, and then I pull out my sidearm and shoot him in the eye. He is the only Red there, luckily. As I am skilled in my medical field since I was 10 (dad taught me how to do it all), I was helping her wound. I actually felt nervous helping her out since I have to put together the tibia, which is one of the bones in the leg. I manage to have the tibia connected then I use my XHNB shot to do the rest. Dawn pats me on the shoulder and thanks me. “Well, so much for our ride” Dawn says. “No Need to worry, the warehouse is just 1000 feet from us, see its right there.”

We run the few extra feet and then a bullet skinned me on the scalp. It stung, but wasn’t excruciating. “SNIPER!” Nicolai yells. We all hide behind cover. Albert has a very large case in his hand. Dawn, who is nearby, watches him open it. He assembles his .50 BMG Barrett M107 in a short amount of time. He comes out of cover and aims at the warehouse and spots him. He pulls the trigger we all hear a very loud bang and the target loses his head, literally. We run to the warehouse. We stack up at the door. Nicolai puts a breaching charge on the door and blows it. Boom! It goes. We storm the room killing all the enemy Reds. One of the hostages was struggling in her seat. We untie her first. “I HAVE TO FIND ASH!” She screams. “Calm down, who is this Ash.” Nicolai asks her. “He’s my friend, I have to find him before…” “We’ll find your Ash.” Nicolai tells her. The Girl is a light brunette, blue eyed anime girl that looks like the ones around Sinnoh. She is wearing Clothes that have gang colors (red and blue). Nicolai asks for her name. “I’m May Hakura. I’m from the Hoenn Region.” She tells us. May, what a nice name that is. “Ash is a black haired, black eyed boy who wears a baseball cap.” She continues. “Uh, I’ll try to find her…there are over 20000 people that fit your description.” I butt in. “Oh Dang it.” She says upsettingly. We get the other hostages and call a Grizzly APC through walkie talkie to come over. “ETA is approx 20 minutes.” The APC driver responds.

Dawn explores the area and finds a large arsenal of weapons in one room. “Hey guys, you may want to take a look at this.” She yells to us. I enter the room to see many weapons, including WWII era weapons. I see one WWII era gun I personally think looks cool. “Cool, the PPSh 41, like in Called to Duty.” I exclaim. I keep it for collection but I look at the other weapons. I see a weapon I always wanted, the TDI Vector, known as the Kriss Super V. I take it and replace my Sidearm with it. Dawn finds a cool looking gun called the FN P90. “Hey! Where did you find that P90!?” I complain. “Finders keepers.” Dawn responds. Nicolai goes upstairs where the guy who got shot by the .50 was. He goes up to his headless body. “Excuse me please.” He pushes the dead sniper aside and picks up the Dragunov he dropped. He looks through the scope and sees the invasion. “We might need to give them cover while we are here.” He yells to the team downstairs. We go to the armory and grab long range .50 cal sniper rifles. I get one of my personal favorites: The Barrett M199 Bolt Action .50 BMG Anti Material Rifle. We all go upstairs and snipe the enemies that are like miles away at Sandgem. May looks up at us and is thinking about something, I don’t know what though. The enemies notice our position and shoots at a teammate. “Jackson is hit!” Nicolai yells. Everyone ducks down. May sneaks into the armory and grabs a Sniper Rifle, probably the smaller ones like the Dragunov. She goes to a window at the bottom level and shoots one bullet. The bullet hits the enemy right in the forehead. Nicolai is impressed. The APC arrives and picks up the hostages. Before May gets on, Nicolai goes up to her and asks if she wants to join the USATSM. May hesitates for a while and says “yes.” She goes into the APC and is dropped off at the base.

“Ok, time to move on to Sandgem town” Nicolai says. We garb ammo and supplies from the armory and walk to the Sandgem Warzone.
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Fun Facts:
Acta Non Verba is the motto of a Mercenary in Battlefield: Bad Company.

The Barrett M107 is mentioned in the story. It is 43 years old as of this day in the story.

There are many Barrett guns mentioned in the story, including the fictitious M199.

Nicholas says that he is nervous when fixing her Tibia because the Tibia is a bone in the leg. He is a leg guy, you get it now?

The battle of Sandgem hasn't ended yet.

The Grizzly is a real life prototype APC. 3:41-10:31 in the video to learn more about the Grizzly

The M2 Eisenhower is a joke about the names of tanks. Since the M1 is named the Abrams (a WWII General), the M2 is named the Eisenhower (a WWII General of the ARMY)

May's last name is Hakura, which his her name in the Japanese anime.

The Marshal of the Russian Federation's last names are named after Russian weapons. Nina Shpagin is named after Pistolet-Pulemyot Shpagina (Machine Pistol Shpagin) Which is a Famous Russian SMG of WWII with it's iconic drum magazine and distinct burp noise it makes when fired. Nikolai Kalashnikov is named after the Avtomat Kalashnikova - 47 (Kalashnikov Automatic Rifle, Model 1947) which is a weapon used by many terrorists and third world countries.
 
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