TEEN: - Complete Orre Saga of Max

[Luis92]

Chapter 1-New Beginnings
DISCLAIMER:I DONT OWN ANYTHING INVOLVED WITH THE POKEMON FRANCHISE.OKAY

Somwhere in the Orre region in the high mountains,Cipher was under an revival under a new Grand Master,Ardos,the only Cipher survivor of the explosion at Citadark three years before.He was a blue-haired man in his late 30s in a dark cape and dark boots surrounded by guards was entering an large airship coming out of a large base carved out of the abandoned Mt. Battle."Are all systems ready?"he asked his pilots from his throne.
"Yes,sir engines and rudders ready in T minus 5 seconds."said one of the male pilots.
"In Five...."another one of the pilots
Four...."Another pilots,a female..
Three...."Said one of the Admins
Two...."Another of the pilots
One..."said Ardos....


The airship began to rise and the doors in their base opened up as the airship and several dozen helicoptors left the base and headed out to their goal."All engine systems are stable,sir."
"Excellent"said Ardos looking from his throne the mountains.
One of the Admins,a blonde-haired female wearing dark blue skin tight clothing and a sapphire necklace,"Sir,don't you think it's risky bringing most of our agents on this mission especially with other groups moving in?"
"I understand your worry but this is an important mission.So it would be wise not to question my authority,Admin Agua."
"I'm sorry,sir."stays by his side."By the way,sir where are we going and why?"
"I'll tell you in time."an hologram of a figure appeared on his Holodisk.It was from Admin Fuego,someone with great knowledge of Shadow Research.
"Sir,we have translated the tablet."
"And what you found from it?"
"The Pokemon described in the tablet is the Guardian of the Skies,the Legendary Pokemon Ho-oh.The only way to detect of it nearby is if one has possesion of a Rainbow Wing,rare for a feather from this Pokemon to be obtained.Ho-oh flies around he world searching for a trainer of a pure heart to be one with it.That's all we know."
"That will be all."the hologram fades off.
Admin Agua,"Why are we pursuing a Ho-oh?Didn't you listen,there are extremely rare and are always on the move."
"Listen to me,if you question my orders again,i swear,that you will suffer."
"Yes,my lord."bows down and leaves..


After flying above the mountains and deserts of Orre for hours now,the Cipher agents even the Grand Master himself was thinking of losing hope."Maybe.What I been looking for is not here.Let's turn back,men."
"As you wish,my lord."the pilots followed orders and were steering the ship back when a hologram went online.
"Grand Master Ardos,we have found it!"
"You have found the Ho-oh i been looking for.Where?"
"The guardian of the skies,the legendary Pokemon Ho-oh has been found in the northern mountains near Orre's northern border.Just a few miles away."
"Thank you,Admin."hologram signs off


Ardos gets off from his throne and advises another of his Admins,Tierra,a black-haired man in a white uniform."Let's head out men,Tierra,ready the choppers,We have ourself a Ho-oh to catch."
"You heard the man,turn around.Get into the choppers!"
"It has begun.."Chopper began flying ahead of the main airship to scout for the Ho-oh.


In the northern mountains,a squadron of choppers guiding the airship through the cold,freezing winds.One of the pilots,saw a shiny,golden flying figure with streaks of gold falling from it."Looks like we found ourself our Ho-oh."he alerts the Grand Master who from the observation deck is watching the entire operation go by and recieves a hologram."Sir,Ho-oh is in the distance,what should we do?"
"Attack it with your ice missiles!"
Right away sir.You heard the boss men.Shoot that boogey with our missiles."


They begin shooting down the beast with their ice missiles causing it apparently to fall to the mountains only to rise up,turn around and use its most powerful attack,Sacred Fire on the choppers.
"Dodge that boogey!"Ho-oh's Sacred Fire destroys most of the choppers.
"Damn it!"The pilot barely dodges Ho-oh's fiery blaze and goes on hologram














The sun today was shining over Petalburg City,the hometown of Max,who just today turned ten years old and was ready to begin his own adventure as a trainer.He already had a combined knowledge of the Pokemon World through reading and more importantly,traveling with his older sister May,Ash and Brock through Hoenn and Kanto.


It has been already five months since May at a Saturday dinner,she announced she was going to continue to pursue her Coordinator dreams in the Johto region giving assurance to her parents she be safe by herself.Max was hurt that he couldn't go but understand her and today was his birthday.He was given his own Trainer Card the day before.


Today,Max woke up with joy knowing that today he would start his journey but decided his journey was needed to be unique.Even Professor Birch from all the way in Littleroot Town was coming over to with his case of starter Pokemon and a Pokedex.He brushed his teeth,made his bed and got new clothes for his journey(a green variation of what Ash wore in his Hoenn adventures but without the hat.)Max went downstairs into the dining room where his mom Caroline was making breakfast."Good morning,mom!"
"Good morning to yourself,son."was cooking
Max was smelling the food,"Whatever you're making,it smells good!"
"It's your favorite,pancakes with some pancakes with some OJ !"gives him the plate.
Starts chowing down on the food,"Thanks,it's so good!"
Caroline looked at him,"Chew your food slowly,there's no rush!"Max begins to eat his pancakes slowly.
"Okay mom.Where's my dad?"
"Your father is at the Gym waiting for you.I swear that that man is always at the Gym."Max finishes with his pancakes and bacon and is drinking his glass of OJ.Looks at her son,"I never been so proud of you,I'm gonna miss you."starts weeping.
"Awww mom.I'll be okay.I try to call when i can.I gotta go,Mom.Bye"gives his mom a kiss and leaves.


Max is walking outside of his house and is walking through the grass looking at the sun and sees Pokemon of all kinds pass by him.After a few minutes of walking in the grass,he enters the Gym seeing trainers have practice battles with each other greeting Max"Hey guys,did you see my dad."One of them pointed to the room on the right.Max entered the room and sees his dad,Norman,the Gym Leader."Hey dad"
"Hey son,how was your breakfast?"
"It was pretty good,Mom made me pancakes with some bacon and OJ."Max remarked
"Thats good,son.you don't know how happy I am.This is the day you become a trainer!I brought Professor Birch to be here to give you a Pokedex and a case of Starter Pokemon to choose.."
"Dad, I'll be honest,I was thinking to catch my own Pokemon."

Norman:" I can lend one of my Pokemon to get you one?"

Max:" No dad,it's not necessary"

Norman:"Are you sure,son?I'm just trying to help you."

Max:"Yea,dad I know, but I need to do this journey myself."

Norman:"Your sister would be proud.We should call her.She's probably somewhere in Johto."

Max:"I call her later"

Professor Birch enters the Gym

Birch:"Sorry,Max i couldn't be here sooner.A pack of Poochyena were chasing me around these woods. By the way happy Birthday."Puts his case by the floor.

Max:"Thanks Professor for coming."

Birch:"Norman, I came as soon u told me of the news.Here's my case of Pokemon.chose wisely,Max.Do you want Torchic,Treecko or Mudkip.And i gave your Pokedex."Hands him the Pokedex

Max:"Sorry that you had to come here in such a hurry.But i want really none.Thanks for the Pokedex."

Birch:a little frustrated but calms down"It's okay Max,running here is good exercise for me anyways since I'm always at the Lab."laughs"So,Max,are you going to register for the Evergrande Conference a year from now?"

Max:"I'm actually thinking of going to another region where I won't hear of May or Ash."

Norman:"How about the Sevii Islands south of Sinnoh and east of Kanto?There you can do you journey and be nearby Ash and his friends."

Max:"No,i want to prove myself.I want to head to Orre."

Norman: is shocked"You don't mean that!Do you.It's a very dangerous region with much criminal activity and people there will steal your Pokemon!"


Birch:"Now calm down,Norman Max is smart...."

Norman:interrupts"But you never been to the Orre region.It's a desolate region with little authority and crime being rampant.That's why when i met Caroline,it was love at true sight and i decided it was best to move to the Johto region where we had May then moved to Hoenn."

Birch:"It's okay,a lot has changed in Orre and crime has lowered.I know the Professor up there his name is Professor Krane and he specializes in the research of Shadow Pokemon."

Max:curious"What are Shadow Pokemon?"

Birch:"Never heard of it but Professor Krane should know.I suggest you capture a Pokemon before you head to Orre."

Max:"I will"gets the empty Pokeballs"I gonna be going now"starts to head for the door

Norman:interrupts"Before i forget,ur mother wanted to give you some clothes before she left to go to Slateport and May decided to give you her Go-Goggles."Sees a note

Max:reads" Dear Max, Sorry i couldn't be here for your tenth birthday.Here i entrust you with my Go-Goggles.You need them more than me.I hear Ash is doing good in Sinnoh.I miss him,you and Brock,its weird without you guys.So far,i caught a Totodile and won a contest in New Bark town.Wish you good luck on your adventures. Love,May"theres a short silence and Max burst into tears"I make you proud,Ash and May!"turns to Norman and Birch"Now I should go"

Birch and Norman:"See ya,Max come home safely.Be the best you can be."Max leaves Petalburg City as the Sun begins to rise.

Somewhere outside of Petalburg ...

Max:"My feet are tired already.... I wonder if there is a town nearby."Checks his Pokenav."The nearest town is only two miles away...

A noise appears in the bushes.Max decides to check it out and gets one of his Pokeballs.He sees an Elekid and looks at his Sinnoh-brand Pokedex

Pokedex: Birch and Norman:"See ya,Max come home safely.Be the best you can be."Max leaves Petalburg City as the Sun begins to rise.

A few hours later somewhere far from Petalburg City ...

Max:"My feet are tired already.... I wonder if there is a town nearby."Checks his Pokenav."The nearest town is only two miles away...

A noise appears in the bushes.Max decides to check it out and gets one of his Pokeballs.He sees an yellow Egg with black stripes on it.When he went close by it and carried it,an group of Electabuzz came down from the tree and were about to use Thunder.

Max:"Oh no!"He without realizing ran away while carrying the egg with him and the Electabuzzes chasing after him by using Quick Attack.Max ran right into the edge of a cliff and there was no way out.The Electabuzzes use Thunderbolt but miss him causing him to fall off and then loses conscious............

Somewhere in Petalburg Woods(raining)

Max:"Where am i?"tries to see he had any wounds"No wounds,kinda strange and my clothes dont seem damaged and sees the egg"So thats why those Electabuzz were chasing me!"He then sees his egg hatch into a Elekid."Wow my first Pokemon an Elekid!"Looks at his Pokedex"Elekid seems tired once it sees Max and sleeps.

Pokedex:"Elekid,the Electric Pokemon,it feeds off electrical currents and are common to find in the middle of thunderstorms."Max then uses a Pokeball to enclose his new Elekid

Max:looked around"I still wonder who or wat helped me"then saw in the bushes and then was scared"Oh man,another Pokemon"then saw it was a Ralts but Max was still frightened if it was wild.It hugged Max and after reminscing in his early Hoenn adventures,he realized that the Ralts was the Ralts he rescued and aided more than two years before that saved him from almost certain death."Ralts,your back!"

Ralts:hugged Max

Max:"So,Ralts you want to go with me?"

Ralts agreed and Maz remembring what Ash had done with refusing to put Pikachu in a Pokeball decides to do the same.With two Pokemon already on his first day,he heads to the Pokemon Center in Rustboro City which recently established a port called Rustboto Nova which has ferries from Johto and Orre.While walking,a mysterious figure in silver armor and helmet pushed him and wanted to battle him

Max:trying to stand up"Who are you?"

???:"None of your business!!!!!! go Totodile.!"Max could tell these were not normal Pokemon and had a dark aura coming from them.

Max:decided to battle"Go Ralts!"Itleft Max's shoulder and was ready for battle"Let this teach this guy a lesson!Use Psychic"Ralts used Psychic to hit Totodile into the trees.

???:"Use Hydro Pump"

Max:"Dodge it!"Ralts narrowly dodged it and Totodile used Shadow blast on it and Ralts then used Shock Wave on Totodile causing it to be injured.

???:"Don't be weak Totodile,use Frustration!"Totodile attacks Ralts causing extreme injury."Now attack it with Rage!

Max:"No,Ralts!Get up!!Use Psychic"uses it on Totodile giving one giant slam into the oak tree


???:”Return Totodile!."Gets another pokeball"Go Zubat!"As with Totodile,a dark aura is coming out of the Pokemon.

Max:realizing Ralts might be tired from battling Totodile"Return."Grabs his second pokeball"Go,Elekid"The Elekid pops out ready for action

???:"Zubat,use Aerial Ace on Elekid"Zubat swoops down aiming for Elekid.

Max:"Dodge and go on Zubat and use Thundershock."Elekid dodges and uses thundershock injuring both and the Zubat.Elekid falls to the ground struggling to go back up."Get up!"

???:knowing that he was going to lose"Zubat,use Poison Sting on Elekid and Ralts"Zubat did what it was told and fainted."You pathetic boy,you might have defeated me,but at least your Pokemon won't make it alive."The man disappears.

Max:goes to see his Pokemon injured and weakening every moment going into tears"Sorry guys,i should never have made you battle.I swear,I'm gonna help you"Crying"I'm sorry Ralts and Elekid"not having time to return them,he carries them in the rain running to the nearest place to get healed.

Max continued running through the Petalburg Woods to be attacked by packs of rogue Spearow and Taillow being injured along the way to the point of bleeding everywhere.Max was to the point of collasping into the ground and drops them.

Max:in tears"I'mmm sorry guys"and faints.His Elekid and Kirlia angered in losing what they considered their dearest friends evolve into a Electabuzz and Kirlia.Electabuzz used Thunder while Kirlia used Psybeam then were too weak to continue as they returned.

A Pokemon ranger appeared and used a Plusle to use Thunderbolt on the flock of Spearow and Taillow

Pokemon Ranger's home,Petalburg Woods....

Max is in bed sleeping until he hears a familiar female voice,older than him try and wake him..

Ranger:tugs him"Max,Max,Max,wake up"

Max:he still as asleep"Snore,snore...."

Ranger:screams at him"Wake up,sleepyhead"Max falls off his bed and wakes up

Max:"Who!What!Where!Where's my Pokemon!"then remembers the Ranger's face as Solana"Hey Solana!"

Ranger:"Hi urself.Don't worry,Max,there are just sleeping and are fully healed."

Max:"Oh thank you.We could never have maked it without you Solana.What brings you into Petalburg Woods?"

Solana:"your Pokemon were in extreme pain and I was right on time saving you.The Pokemon Center is miles away so i came here to my cabin,And thank Plusle.She did the work."

Max:scratches the head of Plusle"But,why are you in this sector of Hoenn.Anything the matter?"

Solana:"Once you mentioned it,there has been much criminal activity involving Pokemon going on in Hoenn."

Max:"Is it team Magma and Aqua?"

Solana:"No,because They have long disbanded and they don't fit the characteristics of those organizations."

Max:"Was it Team Rocket?"

Solana:"The presence of Team Rocket is very minimal and the uniforms between them and the villians are not the same."stopped and continued"Did you see anything suspicious in the forest?"

Max:"I only saw this guy in silver armor and had a strange machine attached to his arm.He caused my Pokemon to be poisoned but i defeated him."

Solana:"I know that now this can't be a native criminal organization"

Max:"Have you heard anything from the other regions?"

Solana:"We had and they are reporting crime similar to what's going on especially in Orre."looks at Max's Pokemon"Max,your Pokemon are ready to go.I have a favor to ask of you?'

"Of course,sure anything.Ask away."
"Devon is doing research on the Capture Styler,the item we Rangers use to temporarily use wild Pokemon for good in which they plan to enhance with their own technology.By Devon's letter,there are scientists within that are planning to steal it.Your job is to make sure they don't."
Max interrupts,"What if they steal it before i can come?"
"If that happens,I know you're going to Gateon Port,the Pokemon HQ Lab is nearby and Professor Krane has developed an item just in case that happens."
"Good luck on your journey."
Max opens the door and says his good-bye"Bye."

Chapter 1 ends

 

[Luis92]

By the way,thats the end of the chapter

feel free to criticize but be nice

 

[Luis92]

adeChapter 2-Call from the Folks

As Max continues his adventure into Orre to help Devon protect the Capture Styler,he heads to the nearby Pokemon center by Lake Rustboro to call his friends and family to reassure him he is okay.He enters inside the Pokemon center and greets Nurse Joy"Hello."
"Oh hello,whats your name?"Nurse Joy was cleaning the front desk with Chansey
"Max is my name."

Nurse Joy:"Do you need your Pokemon to be healed?"looking at the Pokeballs

Max:"No,i just need a room for the afteroom.Are there any empty rooms available."

Nurse Joy:goes on her computer and searches" Give me a minute to check for any empty rooms.Hmmmmmmmmm.Ahh there we go."

Max:"Have you found one?"

Nurse Joy:"Yes,let me give you the keys."Max thanks her and she opens the room to him."If you need anything,jus go to the front desk.

Max:"Thanks"Nurse Joy leaves and Max puts his Pokeballs by his bed.He looks out the window and sees the beautiful Lake Rustboro and from a distance can see Rustboro City especially the Devon headquarters.Nearby,he sees Pokemon trainers battling each other and Wild Wingull and Pelipper fly."The view is great."His stomach begins growling and he is reminded of Brock's cooking."Oh man,i give anything to have Brock cook again.I haven't eaten in two days."Sighs for a moments

Max:"Oh yea! Thats right, i still have 500 coins from Dad.I could sure use a muffin."grabs his Pokeballs and goes downstairs..."Where the vending machine"finds one near the entrance."Okay come on Danish 1F!Come to papa!"The danish were about to fall but then stopped."What the....The machine ate money....GIVE ME MY DANISH....."He begins cursing a language thought only to have been spoken by the Hoenn Regional Navy...

One of the guests in the Pokemon Center,someone of elderly age along with his Pikachu went up to Max to help him.

Elder Guy:"Whats with the foul language youngster?"

Max:"My danish won't come to me"

Elder Guy:"Whats the big deal?You look like you havent eaten in a couple of days?"

Max:"Thats the point.I need some food to eat."

Elder Guy:"Here's a trick i learned in my younger days when i was a trainer.Just give one big kick from behind and it get your danish and save ya some change."Kicked the vending machine and gave Max his danish.

Max:"Thanks man"

Elder Guys:"No problem,I did it for Nurse Joy since you were cursing so loud that Rustboro City can hear you.Where are you off too?"

Max:"Orre"he responds

Elder Guy:in a happy gesture"I believe we will meet again,young man"leaves in a sudden hurry.

Max:looks at the exit"Seems pretty cool and knows much about his Pokemon"He looks out until Nurse Joy calls him

Nurse Joy:"Max,Max"

Max:heads to the front desk"Yea Nurse Joy"

Nurse Joy:"You have someone asking of you"Max heads to the video phone.

Ash and Brock:"Hey Max!"

Max:"Hey guys,hows Sinnoh?"

Ash:"It's alright......"

Brock:interrupts"Hey,what do u mean it's alright?How about that new girl Dawn?"Ash beats him down.

Ash:whispers:"Shut up...Dawn might hear"Brock leaves

Max:"Okay?? I thought you had a thing for my sis"

Ash:"I always will but she's with that guy Drew in Johto."gets a little irritated"This Dawn girl is nothing special"

Max:not believing him"Sureeeeeee....so did you win any badges in the Sinnoh gyms?"

Ash:"Oh yea i losed to the Gym Leader Roark but i got a rematch and got the Coalbadge."

Max:"So you heard from May?"

Ash:"I heard from Professor Elm she was last seen in New Bark Town.I also hear of your dad saying she's been with that Drew guy a lot"stops for a minute"So where your going?"

Max:"I'm going to the Orre region,its right next to Sinnoh and north of Johto.Right now,i'm heading to Nova Rustboro to take a ferry to Gateon while making a stop at Olivine."

Ash:"Your going to Olivine?That takes make me back memories with an old friend of mines."

Max:"Was it a girl?"

Ash:silent and is reminscing

Max:"Hello,Ash!"

Ash:"What!"

Max:"You can think about Misty later?"

Ash:"Who said it was Misty?"

Max:"Who said it wasn't?"

Ash:hesitant"I gotta go Max say hi to May in Olivine City if you catch her nearby."

Max:"Okay,i will"turns off the videophones and goes outside.

The grasslands nearby Rustboro City

Max:checks his Pokenav"Rustboro City should be just past this place"turns off his Pokenav

Max was awed seeing many species of Pokemon living in coexistence peacefully not just native to Hoenn but in many other regions.One of the Pokemon he saw was a Gligar relaxing nearby watching a bunch of Pidgey.Max opens his Pokedex

Pokedex:Gligar,the Flyscorpion Pokémon.It glides without making a single sound. It grasps the face of its foe using its hind and large front claws, then stabs with its poison barb.

Max:"Wow,gotta be careful"Takes one of his Pokeballs"Go Electabuzz!Use Thunderpunch!"

The Electabuzz looked liked it was gonna give a direct hit on Gligar but just in the knick of time,it jumped and used Sand Attack blinding Electabuzz then swooped in for Fury Cutter."

Max:"Electabuzz dodge and use Low Kick!"

it was a direct hit and Gligar went down but it continued to fight using Faint Attack which hit Electabuzz but Electabuzz used another Low Kick making Gligar fall and faint.

Max:grabs an GreatBall"Go Pokeball!"he Gligar went inside and the pokeball was shaking and shaking but Gligar was caught."I caught Gligar!"Electabuzz cheered with it.Max continued to head to Rustboro City.

At the end of the day,after crossing the Petalburg Woods,heading to Rustboro Lake and catching a Gligar...Max has reached his first stop on the way to Orre.

Max:"Finally guys,I'm here at Rustboro City.Things had sure changed around here."He sits on a park bench in the middle of Rustboro and then hears a huge explosion and a cry for help.

Explosion occurs somewhere in a distance.

Max:"I wonder where that's coming from"Max goes to where this is happening..

In a distance,an undercover Devon scientist working for the criminal organization robbed the company of its new research project,the enhanced Capture Styler to corrupt to snag people's Pokemon.When Max arrives,he sees the building in smoke and fires breaking up


"Stand back"said an nearby officer trying to keep the curious crowds from going to close to the burning building.


"What's been going on here?"said Max"Looks like something ravaged the entire building.
"There's has been a robbery in the Devon building"the officer told Max"It looked like one of the scientists was an undercover Cipher agent..."
"Who are Cipher?"Max questioned
"They are an criminal organization that steal Pokemon and use them for their corrupt and selfish ways"The officer continued explaining to Max"Originally,there are from the Orre region but it looks like they're back."
"Did they steal anything?"
"Yes,they stole the Capture Styler,used by the Pokemon rangers to temporary use Wild Pokemon but it looks like Cipher wants it for their own use."the officer.


"Did Cipher hurt anyone?"Max retorted
"Not really,but they kidnapped the President,Mr.Stone a while ago.
Max was in shock because he like Mr. Stone as a good old friend in his early Hoenn adventures and asked"Where did Cipher go?"
"From what our officers know,they look like they're headed to the new ferry terminal to escape"Officer looks again at the building then turns back at where Max only to leave

"Hey wait Max!"Officer screamed"Your asking for trouble!"
"I'm sorry,I have to do this"grabs a bike from a bystander
The bystander screamed"Where are you going with my bike??"
Max sped off to head to the ferry terminal


The traffic in Rustboro City has hectic and noisy everyday especially today with roadblocks being put up by police because of the robbery.Max rode on the bike between cars."I hope i'm not too late."He rushes through traffic"Ya think people will drive a little faster"Max rides for several dozen blocks....."I won't make it in time"sees an alleyway"Yes,a shortcut"Rides through the dark alleyways block to block ..


Max was within just a few blocks of the ferry terminal.The ferry terminal has recently opened up to the public a couple of weeks and was part of a mega-project designed by Devon Corporation to establish a western gateway to Johto and Orre.The port was usually busy today with freighters coming in but not today.The main terminal was surrounded by the local Police force who had just arrived.There was a ramp in the middle of the police cars.

"Time to jump"Max began speeding up on his bike and goes up in the air.
"What's the kid doing !"Onlooking bystanders and police officers"Hey,you kid,get back,this is police work"


Max ignored them and busted right through the door and saw several Cipher agents..One of the Cipher agents,held Mr. Stone,a man wearing his regular business clothes,looked scared and in fear of what they were going to do.
"Mr. Stone,I'm here to save you"Max came in grabbing a Pokeball
"Kid,there won't be any saving here."one of the Cipher agents snorted "Go home and play with your toys"
"I'm gonna make you eat your words!"throws a Pokeball"Go Electabuzz!"
Mr. Stone replied"What's going on,Max?"
The Cipher agent kicks Mr. Stone"Shut up,old man.""Enough horsing around,guys we gotta deliver this old foogey and Capture Styler to Admin Fuego"turned to one of the grunts"Stop that kid with that Pokemon the Admin gave us"
"Okay man"The Cipher agent took Mr. Stone along with his comrades.
"Are you going to try and stop me?"
"Don't have to."The Cipher grunt releases his pokemon"Go Scizor!"The Cipher agent's Scizor was unusually powerful with menacing eyes and a dark aura coming from it"Attack Electabuzz with Aerial Ace."


Electabuzz took a hit but then used Thunderpunch on Scizor.Electabuzz then used Swift on Scizor letting it be distracted for Electabuzz to perform Shock Wave on Scizor and uses Slam as a finishing move to throw Scizor to the wall.

"Use Thunder on the Cipher goon"he was trying to head upstairs but was immbolized by Electabuzz"I gotta save Mr. Stone from those Cipher agents.Lets go Electabuzz!"Heads upstairs


Will our hero be able to come in time to save Mr. Stone and stop Cipher?Will Cipher be able to get away with the Capture Styler.Tune in next time.LOL

Chapter 2 ends

 

[Luis92]

Chapter 3-The Revival of Cipher

As we last left our hero,an criminal organization named Cipher has robbed the Devon building of its latest project and kidnapped its President.Now Cipher is attempting to escape,will Max be able to save him?


The Cipher agents ,that took part in the robbery and kidnapping, managed to head up the stairs all ten floors of the terminal complex arriving in the ceiling meeting with fellow Cipher guards and the Cipher Admin Fuego."Have you obtained what we are here for?"
One of the Cipher agents,a female reported to the Admin"Our mission has been successful."
"Then show me you are successful"said the Admin
"Here is to show that we had done our job the best we did,the Capture Styler"hands the Capture Styler to Fuego
"You have done a good job.Now that we have the Capture Styler,our scientists back in Orre can research it and use it to turn wild Pokemon into loyal Shadow Pokemon."laughs then looks a Mr. Stone"Who is this old man?"
"Sir,this man is the President of Devon Corp.he tried to resist us in a pathetic attempt by throwing around his cane.
"Pathetic man"
looks at Mr. Stone"I don't see much use for you"
Mr. Stone tries to struggle"I wouldn't want to work for a bunch of scum like you stealing people's Pokemon and worst turning them into corrupt fighting machines"


"You close-minded fool.Do you not see the potential if we humans took control of Pokemon."He retorted
"You're a sick human being.Even Team Magma and Aqua had morals,you're almost as bad as Team Rocket in the Kanto region."
The Admin gives him a punch in the President's stomach"You fool."The President faints and falls to the ground.
The Cipher agents asked"Sir,how are we going to escape?"
"Escape?"Turns to his guards who handled transportation matters,"Yes,men how are we going to get all twenty of us?"


After one minute of hesitation,they admitted they haven't really thought about it"Sir,we havent thought about it"The Cipher Admin grew in a fiery rage hence his nickname "Dragon of the South"
"You idiots"screamed the Admin"You did not even call for reinforcements to get us a chopper!!"
"We thought it wasn't necessary seeing how sucessful the mission was"Within then,Fuego hit his guards and turned to the grunts.
"Do you have a Cipher PDA with you?"the grunt nodded and handed it over"


Admin Fuego attempted to contact Cipher HQ out at sea to get helicoptors to help with their escape.Right before he was gonna get someone on the line,his PDA was damaged in a Thunderbolt attack.
"Who did that?"looked upon the raining sky and Max with his Electabuzz were there.
"Oops.Did I do that?I guess you can't call your Cipher buddies now."Max was laughing
"How did you manage to break through the dozens of Cipher agents in the building?"decides to walk backwards..
"I guess you need better guards"
The Cipher Admin is angry"Attack the child"


The Cipher agents all pulled out their Pokeballs ready to battle.Max ushered Electabuzz to use the rain to have one giant Thunderbolt attack immbolizing all the Cipher agents.
"Looks like you have no one else to defend you"sees the body of Mr.Stone lying on the floor"What did you do?"
"Nothing.It was his fault for being uncooperative."Laughs
"You be sorry!"Electabuzz is ready to pull out a Shock Wave."
"No,i won't"pulls a Weezing and it attacks Max and Electabuzz and uses Smokescreen to escape.
"We will meet again child..Count on it!"laughs sinsterely


Max sees through the smoke the Admin jump off the building to enter to a concealed helicoptor and escaped with the Capture Styler.A few minutes later,the smoke cleared and in the rain,he saw Mr. Stone trying to get up and goes to him."Are you okay,Mr. Stone?"
Tries to get up"Yes,i think I'm gonna be okay"
"Did those bad men hurt you bad?"
"Yes,one of them Red haired with a Sinister look in his eye with a black cape gave him a punch"
"Admin Fuego"Max answered
"Yes,that was the fellow's name"answered Mr.Stone getting up.


Mr. Stone explained,"Well i was in my office when i heard there was a security breach in our Research Division and i decided to check it out and the next thing i knew someone grabbed me from behind and attacked me."
"I'm glad its over for now at least in Hoenn"then he asked Max"So what are you doing here again by yourself in Rustboro?"
"I just became a trainer and I'm heading to the Orre region but I don't have a ticket"Max then gets saddened.
Mr. Stone put his arm on Max's back"Well we can't have that.Won't we?"Max looked at him weird
"For saving me,i give you my ticket and with that,an egg"
"What egg is it?"
"I really don't know,Max I found one when i visited Sinnoh once and i figure you have a Pokedex that you could have it"
Max looked at him and hugged him"Thank you,Mr. Stone


Next thing,they know,the police come in along with the news media to make a story on it."Are you okay,Mr. Stone."said the police chief
Turns to the police chief"In fact,yes I am,no thanks to you men."
"We did the best we could without jeopardizing you?"
One of the reporters asked"Mr. Stone,is this the little boy saved you?"
"Yes,it is.Come on Max you got an interview"

Within hours after the interview,all the news channels in Sinnoh,Kanto,Johto,and Hoenn were playing the interview no more than in Sinnoh.In Eterna Ciy,while Ash is resting for his battle for his second Badge.He and Brock in their clothes are watching TV at the lobby while Dawn in her PJs come downstairs shocked that they are still awake
"What are you doing so late guys?"
Ash responded"Watching some TV"petting his sleeping Pikachu
"Why bother?"Brock said"There's nothing on TV"
"So?"Ash is flipping the channels
"Its midnight and you have a Gym battle tomorrow.You should've spent time preparing"Dawn told in a know-it-all attitude
"Why you're nagging me all the time?"
"Because I want what's best for you!"
"You didn't seem to care when you threw me into that waterfall!"
Ash was screaming
"Because you were looking down to see my skirt,you perv!"
Ash retorted"You picked a short skirt.What does that make you!"Ash and Dawn begin another agruement while Brock is flipping the channels until he hits the PokeNews Network.
"Hey guys shut up!I'm watching the news!"
Dawn looked at Brock"I never would see you watching the news!"
Ash whispered"he has a big crush on Christina,the reporter..."
"Typical Brock"Dawn snorted
Brock heard"I do not have a crush.I just like the way she.....does her job.Yea that's it.


A News Bulletin was announced and they temporarily stopped agrueing and Christina Yamagouchi,the news reporter was talking from Rustboro City.
"Hello,this is Christina Yamagouchi.I am reporting from Rustboro City at the recently opened Devons Terminal.But this was no grand opening.There was a massive robbery at Devon HQ by a criminal group originating from Orre and they kidnapped the President,Mr. Stone.With the help of a young trainer from Petalburg known as Max,the President has been saved and now Max will recieve from the Mayor the Cross of Bravery.


"Hey its Max,looks like he managed to save someone by himself"said Brock
"Who's Max?"Dawn butted in
Ash snorted "Go to sleep,Dawn."Dawn went upstairs in anger.Turns back to the TV"I'm impressed with Max."
"Looks like he could hold his own"
Ash turns off the TV"I bet May is watching this right now so is his parents."
"They'll be proud of Max."Brock and Ash go to their rooms


After the interview in the central square of Rustboro City,Max and Mr. Stone head back to the ferry terminal so Max can head to his ferry for Olivine.Max went to Mr. Stone and shook his hand"Thank you,Mr. Stone for giving me the ticket again."
Mr. Stone replied"It's no problem.From what i know,you will become a good Pokemon trainer."
"Thanks,well this is my ferry.Bye Mr. Stone."Max waves his hand in good-bye as he goes inside the ferry.The ferry then leaves the terminal and goes out to sea.It has stopped raining and like the weather,Max's future is bright as the Sun.


As our hero saves the President and recieved the Ferry Ticket,now Max is off for new adventures on the road to Olivine City and later Orre.Tune in next time.
Chapter 3 ends

 

[Luis92]

any criticisms are appreciated as long as they improve the story

 

[Roses Ablaze]

I suggest putting it into prose instead of script format, for starters.

 

[Luis92]

much appreciated

how do u do he prose format because this is my first fan fic

 

[Luis92]

much appreciated

how do u do he prose format because this is my first fan fic

 

[Luis92]

Chapter 4-First Love At Sea
Today is a beautiful day in the late afternoon out on sea as the Sun is up and the Wild Pokemon are everywhere.Max,wearing his green swimming shorts and white T shirt wearing sunglasses taking a nap on one of the beachchairs.His Electabuzz,Kirlia and Gligar were causing mischief around the ship.

Max woke up from his nap"I never had a good amount of sleep in a long time."He was yawning and grabbed the half-empty glass of soda he was drinking and decided to go out and see the Pokemon.

Since the day was so sunny,the water was clear and Max got to see a diverse array of Pokemon such as Remoraid,Octillery,Relicanth,Tentacool and Tentacruel,Sharpedo,Clampearl,even the Legendary Kygore roaming around the sea.

Looking up,he saw Wingull and Pelipper high in the skies occasionally going down to the ocean to eat fish."Such a great day,if only if i weren't alone."In the skies,he sees a flock of large dark flying figures."Interesting",He grabs his binoculars from his bag to have a better look at the Pokemon and his Pokedex.After looking a bit closer,it was a flock of baby Lugia flying along with what it seems to be his mother."Let's see what Dexette has to say".opens his Pokedex and points it at the Lugia.
"Lugia,the Diving Pokemon.Lugia's wings pack devastating power - a light fluttering of its wings can blow apart regular houses. As a result, this Pokémon chooses to live out of sight deep under the sea. "


Max looked in awe as the Lugia flew so gracefully in the skies"They seem so peaceful yet they wield great power."He sees the Lugia head towards the clouds and disappear in the direction of the Whirl Islands.


Max sees his Pokemon,especially his Gligar run towards him and hide behind him with a hat."Hey,what did you guys did to get that hat?"He was concerned and was taught by his parents not to steal.He turns toward the ocean with the hat on his left hand.He hears a familiar voice nearby.
"Hey Max,I think you have my hat.."takes her hat.
turns toward " Rachel!Long time no see!!!!. "Rachel and Max hug each other.Rachel was from Oldale Town and would occasionaly go to Petalburg by herself to hang out with him.After Max joined May and Ash on a journey about two years ago,he left behind many of his friends especially Rachel.
"I missed you for a long time."Rachel put her hand on Max's.
"I wished i had a chance to talk to you."Max turned to Rachel.
"At least,we can talk at least until the ferry stops at Olivine.By the way,good job saving the Devon President."
Max shrugged"It was nothing really."
Rachel looked at him"Don't try to be modest,I know you.You think your all that!"
"Yea i know,"Max and Rachel began laughing and began reminsce of past memories....


*****A flashback*****

Max and Rachel were playing in the park in the middle of Oldale brought by Rachel's parents.They heard the ice cream truck come by and they rushed in with their money.The ice cream man greeted them,"Hey kids,you want anything to eat?"
Rachel butted in,"Sure do I want a vanilla cone with sprinkles.
"Okay that will be two Hoenn credits."
"Here you go,Mr. Ice cream man,"hands him the money and goes to eat her ice cream cone.
"What would you have,little man?"showed the different brands
"Hmmm,I go with the Aipom Popsicles"
"Okay,coming right up,"brings the popsicle to Max.
The ice cream man said,"That will be one credit."The ice cream man is given the money and drove off.


Max heads off to the park to sit in the bench where Rachel was.She was with her ice cream cone and was angry."Max White,I been waiting for you,mister saving your seat on the bench."
"Sorry,I had to get my ice cream."
"The Aipom Popsicles again?"Rachel made a face."Its okay.Its fun to eat with someone."Right about where she was about to eat her ice cream.A Seviper came up and scared her and Max and ate her ice cream cone and then left.
Rachel starts to cry because she didn't have her cone."Max looked at his popsicle and decided to give it to her,"It's okay,you can have mines."
"Really?"blushes and then gives Max a big hug,"Your so generous."

*****Flashback ends*****
"You were so generous giving me your popsicle."
Max remarked,"It was nothing."Rachel sits down in the beachchair right next to Max's Pokemon.


Rachel pets his Pokemon."So i can guess you're going to be a Pokemon trainer?I like your Pokemon,they're so cute like their trainer!".His Pokemon were happy and became friendly to her.
"Yea,I am and thanks for the compliment."Max turns back toward the sea blushing."Are you?"
"Yea,ever since u left,i decided to do some traveling myself with my Eevee."
Max questioned"Do you have your Eevee with you?"
"Yea but its no longer and Eevee,it evolved."grabs a Pokeball"Come out Glaceon!"

"Cool,an Glaceon"opens his Pokedex
"Glaceon,the Deep Snow Pokemon.The hair over its entire body are frozen and sharpened just like needles. It uses this as a means to protect itself from the enemy. "
Max questioned Rachel "Why dont we have a battle?"
"I don't know?'Rachel was unsure
Max pressured her come on"Its just a friendly battle."
Rachel after some thought "When you put that way,okay?"
"it will be a one on one battle between Gligar and Glaceon.We'll use the deck here as our battlefield since no one else is here.let's begin.


The battle between Max's Gligar and Rachel's Glaceon begins."Go,Gligar use Poison Sting!"A string of attacks were headed straight for Glaceon.
"Dodge and use Quick Attack on Gligar"Glaceon dodged the poison stings and attacked Gligar directly."You shouldn't understimate me.Glaceon use Icy wind."
"I wont..Gligar use Double Team!"Within seconds,a dozen copies surrounded Glaceon and taunted it."
"Calm Down,Glaceon,use Ice Beam on all of them!"Glaceon pulls a powerful Ice Beam attack on all the Gligar copies eliminating them one by one until all of them were gone.
Thinking to herself"Where is Gligar!"
"Now Gligar go from behind and use Aerial Ace"Gligar came in and did a direct hit on Glaceon."Now that Glaceon is weak.Use Iron Tail!"It was a direct hit.
"Glaceon,please get up!"Glaceon fainted
"You take a good rest"returns Glaceon.

Max returns his Gligar and goes to Rachel who's on the floor"Hey,thanks for the battle.Is Glaceon going to be okay?"
"Of course,we always get back on our feet after a defeat!"Rachel proclaimed in confidence.


Max pulls,"By the way,where are you going?"
"I was going to visit my aunt Kathy who works in the Pokemon HQ Lab nearby Gateon Port."
"Cool,I'm heading to the same place.Hey Rachel,since we're heading to about the same place,you wanna travel with me?"Max starts blushing
"Of course,i didn't want to go alone in the first place.I'm glad that I ran into you."Rachel remarks as she looks into the sunset"By the way,what time is it?"
looks into his Pokenav"Its seven thirty."
"Oh man,sorry Max gotta eat!"runs downstairs.


Max looks at Rachel as she leaves if he was in a love-like trance.His Gligar comes out of its ball and looks at Max and teases him about his crush."Oh go back to your ball"Max looks out at sea at the beautiful sunset and sees the Lugia fly again only to disappear.The Captain of the ferry on intercom informed them they were going to stop at Olivine City and should be there by tomorrow morning."Looks like we're going to make a stop at Johto.Maybe i see May."goes back to his room


As our hero reunites with an old friend and seeing the Legendary Guardian of the Seas,Lugia on route to go to Orre making a stop at Olivine City.Tune it next time.Chapter 4 ends

 

[Luis92]

Well here i go this is the 5th chapter so far....it take me 2 days prbly to write 1 chapter down.

Chapter 5-Olivine City

It is the early morning and the sun has just begun to rise over the city of Olivine.The bay was filled with ships and freighters from all over the Pokemon world.Wingull were common,feeding at the tuna brought in by fisherman out at sea.Rachel,wearing her white and red hat,blue undershirt and white skirt, was carrying her Glaceon on her arms looking on at the city,"It's so beautiful if only Max could see it.I wonder what powers that large lighthouse."She doesn't know that Max is right behind him.
"Hello,did I hear my name being mentioned."Max was grinning
"Shouldn't you be sleepin'?"
"No,I wanted to see the Olivine skyline and there you were.So why did i hear my name?"
blushes,"I was just thinking about you."
"Where they good thoughts?"Max grins and puts his hands over her neck
shrugs off his hands"Of course,hey Max,do you know what powers the Olivine Lighthouse since you know so much."
looks at the lighthouse,"I hear its powered by the Olivine Gym Leader Jasmine's Ampharos."
"Really?It must be powerful to do that every day and night."


Max and Rachel are looking at the city at different directions.Rachel looked at Max,"So your going to do anything today at Olivine City?".
"Are you?"
"Yea,I'm going to do a little shopping for trinkets and some supplies.You?"
"I'm gonna hang around the town,probably go see the Gym."
her stomach rumbles"Ooh,I gonna get something to eat in one of Olivine's famous resturants."
"Max laughs"Still not full from eating 50 shrimp at the dinner buffet?"
"I have a very quick metabolism and i work out."
gets from his bag a sandwich and splits it"You want?"
"Of course,anything to settle my stomach."Rachel starts chowing down on her sandwich as if she hasn't eaten in days.Max began eating his.Rachel and Max and Glaceon were looking out at the city.


Several hours have passed and it is late morning as the ferry managed to enter into port to resupply and check for any damages for safety precautions.Everyone was ordered to leave the ferry and those who were going to return were given a Transfer Pass.One of the sailors was giving out Transfer Passes to those who were returning to the ship.He turns to Rachel who was holding Glaceon,"Ms. Dillman,are you and Glaceon going to return to the ship later on at 4 pm?"
"Yes"was given a Transfer Pass and went down to the docks.The sailor said,"Enjoy your visit to Olivine."The sailor turned to Max,"Sir,since you informed us earlier,you get a Transfer Pass."
"Thanks",Max smiled and went down to meet Rachel at the docks.


Rachel was holding Glaceon and was waving her hand among the crowds of people moving in and out of the docks to Max."Where is he? He's always so slow..."She didn't know that Max was right behind her.
"Did I hear something about me being slow?"said Max
"But..but weren't you....ahh forget it."Rachel follows Max.
"So where you going,Rachel?"
"I was thinking of hitting the marketplace,you?"
"I just be hanging around.Mind doing me a favor and buy some Pokeballs and food.I even lend you the money."passes her his last coins."I hope you won't spend it on shopping."
Rachel punches him the arm,"No worry,I'll try not to shop too much."
"Remember,we'll regroup at the docks at 3:30 pm giving us four hours to go around this city.See ya then."Rachels heads to the downtown district while Max just looks around the city.


He hangs around the lighthouse,a place common where Johto trainers would socialize and warm up for the gym battle againist the Gym Leader or the Pokemon Contest hall.He walks around the place and bumps into a familiar green-haired person and falls.
"Hey watch it,kid"
"You're the one who bumped into me."looks up"Hey,Drew."
turns toward Max," Hey Max,sorry about that.I didn't notice you here."
looking at the pokeballs that Max was trying to pick,"You just became a trainer."
"Yea,Drew."puts back all his Pokeballs in his bag
"What brings you to visit Olivine City?"
"My ferry made a stop here to refuel.We're headed to the Orre region...and"Max was explaining to him of the Cipher incident in Rustboro City.
"Not to interrupt but have you seen May around here?"
Max responded with curiosity,"No i haven't seen my sister.I thought you guys were traveling together."


Drew explained,"Both of us decided after a contest in Goldenrod that we should have a relationship as long as it didn't interfere with our Coordinator dreams and that we would root one another and try not to be in the same Contest.She's supposed to be here to root me so i can get my fifth ribbon to enter the Grand Festival."


Max assures Drew,"I know my sister May and she is well comitted to her promises.She probably got losed around the city."
"I guess so."sees trainers battle each other.
Max was looking at the trainers,"Hey are the trainers here worth practicing with?"
"Don't bother,Max,they're greenhorns."turns to Max,"Can i ask you a favor?"
"Sure,so far I'm a kid of favors.What can I do you for?"
"Max,I'm entering the Heracross I caught in the Johto region in the Contest tomorrow.We need a warmup battle to prepare for the Contest but none of these trainers even tried to fight back.So can you give me a battle.
"Of course,lets come out Electabuzz"Electabuzz took a fighting stance.
"Thats a mighty powerful Electabuzz.Let's go Heracross!"Heracross and Electabuzz each were glaring each other knowing that they were going to give their all.Fellow trainers began surrounding them to warch them battle.


"Heracross attack Electabuzz with your horns"Heracross began charging towards it.
"Electabuzz grabs it horns"Heracross charged right for Electabuzz only for it with its two hands grab on to Heracross horn."Now use Thunderbolt!"Heracross's health was declining as it was sustaining damage.
Drew ordered,"Stand tough.Use Megahorn on Electabuzz!"Heracross's Megahorn was powerful as it threw Electabuzz but it remained able to fight.
"Use another Thunderpunch!"
Drew ordered,"Dodge and Use another Megahorn!"Electabuzz dodged and use Seismic Toss and slammed Heracross right in the door.Heracross was hurt but it continued fighting.
Both Max and Drew ordered their Pokemon to use Focus Punch.They did what they were ordered and did a Focus Punch causing a large cloud of smoke.......


Several minutes have happened and the smoke began to clear with Electabuzz and Heracross's bodies in the battlefield struggling to get up and continue.Electabuzz got up before Heracross and tried to get up but fell to the ground.It was all left to Drew's Heracross even after sustaining mass damage got up and so Drew won the battle.
"Return Heracross,"Drew returns it to its Pokeball and say Max looking at his injured Electabuzz.
"You did your best,return Electabuzz."
Drew goes to Max,"That was a good battle.You raised your Pokemon well."
"Thanks you,too."
"Shouldn't we be looking for my sister?"Max asked
"Don't you need to go to the Pokemon Center?"
"No worry,the ferry has a Pokemon Center inside so i go later."
Drew and Max then left the lighthouse to look for Max's older sister,May.Since May was a materialistic girl at heart,they decided to check the downtown district


Meanwhile,downtown Olivine, May,a brown-haired girl wearing a green bandana on her head and her orange undershirt, was trying to meet up withDrew and tp pass the time, was shopping in Olivine's public marketplace,filled with people,mostly Coordinators ever since they started selling unique Pokeblocks.May was looking at the necklaces in one of the many carts in the marketplace."Hello,miss.Do you see anything that interests you,miss?"
May was looking at the necklass not really being impressed until she saw a Jade necklace that she thought was lovely,"Oh my god,this is so pretty!"
"Do you want to purchase this fine jade necklace?"
"Yes,sir!"
"Your lucky miss,it's the last one"


She was going to grab it until Rachel,passing by the vendor saw the jade necklace and was awed by it and wanted it for herself,grabbed the Jade necklace from May.
"Hey,what are you doing!"May grabbed the necklace away from her."It's mines."
"You wish,sister!"grabs it from May.
Max took off her gloves and was ready to fight,"Look,I got dibs on this necklace.So take your flat chest to another vendor!"May definetely angered Rachel.
"At least I don't have horrible taste in clothing!"
May clenched her fists"Oh no you didn't!"
"Your mom!"


Within seconds,May and Rachel forgot about the necklace and began fighting each other in public in the marketplace.Police officers nearby,saw the two girls fighting and tried to stop them only to get hit in the crossfire.Everyone began crowding around taking sides and betting on who would win."Go May teach her a lesson!"Some others would say,"Kick May's A**."


Other bystanders looking on were taking photos such as the famous photographer,Todd was taking pictures to sell to the Olivine Post."Oh my god,forgot the newspaper.I putting this up on Myspace!"He then ran off only to be grabbed by both May and Rachel by his shirt and thrown into the ground.
"AAHHHHH Please girls don't hurt me!"
"Why shouldn't we?"The girls threw him to the ground.
Todd begged,"I swear I delete the photos right now"he was lying."We don't believe you !"kicks him and destroys his camera.


Becuase of the violence,one of the bystanders called the Olivine Police Department of "fighting on public property and injury of a bystander and government personell.Officer Jenny answered her.
"Hello?"
"Yes,this is the Police Department.What can we do you for?"
"I'm reporting a crime in the Olivine Forum."
"What crime?"
"Two girls are fighting over a jade necklace and have already injured two police officers and a bystander."
"Thank you for reporting this.Bye"Hangs up the phone and calls on his men to bring in ten cars to the Forum.


Within half an hour,police cruisers came in and Officer Jenny came out of one and released her Oddish,"Go Oddish!Use Stun Spore on those two girls!"Oddish as she told it and May and Rachel were paralyzed and Jenny put hand cuffs on both of them.
May wondered,"What's wrong,Officer?"
"What do you what's wrong,you created a public disturbance!You're under arrest."
Rachel kicked May,"See stupid if you just gave me the necklace,none of this happened!"
"Be quiet,you anything you say will be held againist you."They were delivered into the police car and left.


A few minutes later,Drew and Max arrived at the scene and saw police officers all over the place.They saw police officers clearing the forum and ambulances nearby.
Max went up to an officer and asked,"What happened around here?"
The officer responded,"This area is being cleared."
"But why?"
"Two girls were fighting over some jade necklace so Officer Jenny and some others arrested them and sent them to the station...."
"Were one of them wearing a short red skirt,medium white and red hat and brown hair used down?"
"Yea,don't know her name but i know one of them is that famous Coordinator,May from the Hoenn region."
Drew butted in,"I knew without me,old May will get into trouble."laughs"Never knew she got behind bars!"starts laughing.
"Is the police station nearby?"Max asked.
"Sure,its a good half an hour drive from here."
Drew asked,"May we go with you to the police station?"
"Sure,lets go after all I need a cheerleader for my Contest tomorrow."laughs as he enters and the car.Max goes in and they head to the police station to bail out May and Rachel before Max misses his ferry......

Chapter 5 has ended...

 

[Luis92]

aChapter 6-On road to Orre

Max and Drew arrived at the Olivine City Police Station with the help of a fellow officer.Drew went to the police station and went to the receptionist,"Hey,do you know if a May is confined here?"she points to a few floors down.He sees Max,"Pay bail,Max,I'm gonna see if May and your girl are all right..."
"She's not my girl.She just a friend."
"Sure,thats what I used to say about May."laughs and heads downstairs
"Stupid Drew as usual."looks at his watch,"It's almost time for the ferry to leave."


In the cell,May and Rachel were on opposite sides of the cell.May was still mad from before and was murmuring,"How am i suppose to get out of here?"Began to cry,"I hope I can make it before Drew's contest tomorrow."begins to sobber.
"Get a grip and stop crying,"Rachel remarked but thought to herself,"Max is going to be so mad at me.But that Jade necklace was wonderful until this girl tried to mess with me.Serves her right."
May stood up and looked out of the cell,"I hope,Drew if I miss your contest,I didn't mean to and I love.."
Drew was right behind her,"No worry,you won't."
May looked right behind her and was blushing,"Uhhhh Drew....How long were you standing there?"was nervous...
"Just more than enough."
Rachel made a comment,"You Liiikkkke him."
"Shut up!It's not of your business!!"turns to Drew,"How did you find me?"
"Police officer told me of your public disturbance so I came here to bail you out..."
May told him,"It's not my fault,look at her.It's her fault."
Rachel commented,"We're both in jail,aren't we so who's talking."
Drew told Rachel,"Hey your friend Max is looking for you.."
"He is? Is he mad?"Rachel asked Drew
"Wa Wa Wa......You know my little brother Max?"
"Yes,we happen to be friends."turns to Drew,"Is he mad?"
"Yea,he's upstairs waiting for you....The receptionist says you can go"opens the cell door with he keys.


Rachel kissed the floor bowing her head in reverence being glad,"Thank you,God for helping me endure this crazy girl for these last past ten minutes!"
"Hey,i heard that!"May gave her the stink eye.
"Girls settle down unless you want to stay together forever."
In unison,"Uh uh!"


Rachel,May and Drew headed to the main office upstairs where Max was waiting in the bench.Max when passed his sister to talk to Rachel."Hey,are you okay?"
Rachel shrugged,"I'm fine Max.A couple of cuts and bruises but I'm okay."May hit her brother on the head causing him to have a bump."
"You forgot to say hello to your own sister!"Max and Rachel headed outside."Hey!I'm talking to you!"
Drew stopped her,"May,chill out.It is obvious that they want some private time."
May was thinking about this then sayin,"Ohhhhhh..."


Max replied and ignored her,"Anyways,why did you land yourself in jail!!That's probably so far the most stupidest thing you done!"
Rachel tried to make a joke,"Even stupider than the time i jumped into open sea without knowing a thing about swimming?"
"Yes,much stupider than that."Max was grinning and they sat near a bench.
"Stupider than the time we went camping and I decided to head to the wild woodlands by myself to get firewood?"
"It's way stupider than that."Max was started to laugh as he remembers
Rachel continued to reminisce,"How about the time I released all the Pokemon in the Rustboro Zoo."
Max was grinning,"That was kinda funny.Those zoo officials didn't expect a innocent five year old girl to release all those Pokemon from their cages."
Rachel bows down,"Thank you very much.."
"Those were good times.."Max and Rachel were smiling and were about to kiss...


May of course,butted in by dragging Drew around."
Hey Max I didn't interrupt anything.Did I?"She knew that she did it on purpose by looking at Drew,Max and Rachel's face."
"Do you need anything,May!"























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[Blackjack Gabbiani]

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