paul and his team

[Brocodelol]

I'm making a fanart of Paul and his pokemon team. It's still a work in progress, I just started this morning so yeah.. I sketched a bit, and overlined some things already.. But I'm far from done yet. After the line-art is done I'll colour it with copics.

WIP 1

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comments/tips are welcome!

 

[Mr. Slowpoke]

Good art, I like N-King the most.
But you should add spoiler tags:
like this: [*spoiler]imagehere[*/spoiler] but without the *s.

 

[Shiay]

First... this:

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And to move onto the next aspect that I paid more attention to than most of the picture:

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The first thing that I noticed about Nidoking in the image were both the arms and the legs. The legs more so than the arms. Because of the girth that the Nidoking sports and the way that its legs would look, they would be more spaced out than what you have pictured. Especially if striking a pose that's like that one there.

Not to mention that Nidoking's stance seems to be naturally widened:

Moving more on the Nidoking's arms...

Nidoking and Nidoqueen may both be stubby in comparison to a lot of other Pokémon (as they should be, as neither of them break five feet. Nidoking being 4'07" and Nidoqueen being 4'3"). Though this is the case, the same rule applies for arms to them. Their arm and forearm will both be the same length from shoulder to elbow and from elbow to wrist (where the approximated wrist line would be on either one of them).

The last thing are the spikes. Since the body is curving somewhat, the spikes would be curving along with the body. Another thing about the spikes is this:

You'll notice a pattern with them. There's a long spike, a short spike, a long spike, a short spike -- just a simple pattern like that. And... no outcropping spikes that border over along its shoulders

Hope that helped.

 

[Brocodelol]

thanks for the tips! I really appreciate that! Though the proportions of nidoking are a bit out of space because I drew them without a proper example. Too bad I already finelined the nidoking... But I'll keep this in my mind for next time!