EVERYONE: - Ongoing Pi-pika-chan!

[Naruchu_believe_it]

Preview:Ash is in shinioh.He and his friends "find" a collar that can make pokemon talk in the voice they would have if they were human...What happens when they buy the only other one ever?
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"Pi-pikachu?" wondered Pikachu..."Pi?" it said as it walked over too the window of the pokemon center,it and it's gang were staying at...."Piplup!Pipppp-LUP!" said Piplup as it did bubble beam."Buneary!Bune!" said Buneary as it dogede and then used Bounce. "Piplup." screamed the little peinguin pokemon as it fell onto the ground..."Pip..lup" said pipluup as it touched it's head...It had a bump.."Pip-lup..Pip-pip-lup." said piplup as it retreated..."Buneary?Bune-bune?" wondered Buneary....[Back where pikachu is]...Pikachu's eyes were shining[A/N:..ackward ].."Pika-chu" exclaimed Pikachu..."Pikachu!" said Ash as he walked into the room."Pika-..chu?" said pikachu as it shook it's head and looked at it's best buddie in the whole wide poke-world..."Pika-pi!Pika-pi-pichu!" exclaimed pikachu as it jumped onto Ash.."Umm,pikachu are you ok..You...look alittle funny." said Ash with a giggle.."Pika-chu-chu?..Piiiii..Pika!Chu-chu-chu." said pikachu as it bowed at the end..."Pikachu,what were you looking at?"...."Pika?...Pi!*blush*Pi-ka-chu-ka." said pikachu..."Huh?" said ash as he went to the window..."Pika-pi!Kaa....chu...Chu." said pikachu as it pulled it's trainer by his shirt and pointed to the door..."Pikachu,"giggled ash,"Come on buddy.No worrys..Right bro." said ash in a very ooc manner "Pika?..PI!Pika-chu-chu-ka!...Pika..-chu." said pikachu as it sighed and let go of Ash's shirt...It went on the couch and curled up.."Pika.Chu" said in a yawn...."...ASH!" said Dawn as she ran into the room.."Have you seen Piplup or Buneary?" exclamied Dawn in a semi-worried way..."Pika-chu!....Pika-pi-chu pi pika-pika-chu pi pikachu-chu..Ka?" said pikachu...."Pika-pi!" said Pikachu but Ash didn't hear it.

 

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I Love It!!!!!!!

 

[Naruchu_believe_it]

I Love It!!!!!!!

R-really?Thanks!It's my first fic actually...I thought no one would like it...Do you think pikachu is a girl or a boy?

 

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R-really?Thanks!It's my first fic actually...I thought no one would like it...Do you think pikachu is a girl or a boy?

Well I watched the show when i was only a Young grasshoper so I don't know, but I kinda think its male because of the Tail.

 

[Naruchu_believe_it]

Well I watched the show when i was only a Young grasshoper so I don't know, but I kinda think its male because of the Tail.

...*cricket*...*points to -chan* I think..."it" is a she...And: 1.The tail thing was made after Pikachu was born,2.Maybe it's only shinoh region that has the diffrences[how do so many people know about the tail thing?]......Yea,I'm not yelling or screaming or trying to sound harse but...just it pointed out...Okie-dokie,buddy!

 

[The Pig King]

You're not supposed to double post. You might be allowed to do it on fanfics, but only if it's falling to the bottom or you've got a new chapter. But it's not a good idea, especially not right after you post it. There's an edit button for that. Also, could you use proper spacing? You enter after every paragraph, and you start a new paragraph when someone speaks or the speaker changes. It's kind of hard to read. Sorry if I'm being too harsh.

 

[Naruchu_believe_it]

Umm...sorry..Here's a short chappie.



"Pi-ka," pikachu sighed as it looked out the window,"Pika-pika..Chu-chu..chu....Pika-chu pi Pika-pi pi....Pikachu...Pi-ka" muttered Pikachu.It remembered what happened just a few weeks ago...[Flashback time!]

"Pika-pi!!!" yelled Pikachu as it hopped onto it's best buds sholder..."Hehehe,hey pikachu.How are ya,buddy?Thanks mom for letting Pikachu stay here for the night." said Ash.Ash,Dawn,Brock,Buneary,Piplup and Pikachu had visited Ash's mom today."No worrys,dear...Pikachu was acting very strange today..he was acting very weird...Buneary was hiding all day." stated Delia."Oh mom,Buneary always hides from Pikachu...*whispers in ear*She has a crush on him,hehehe." said ash...."Oh dear I mean Oh!That's...nice!" Delia stammered.....BOOM!

A crash was heard from inside..."Pika-pika-pi!!!" screeched Pikachu in a ooc manner.."Huh?Pikachu!" said Ash as he ran into the living room."Bun-bun..BUNEARY!" yelped Buneary with a slight giggle..."Pika-OMG!" screeched Ash...."What!?" yelled everyone else as they ran into the room."Oh..My...Gosh" said Dawn with her hand on her mouth....Pikachu glomped Buneary as was trying to lick it's face.."Pikachu..." said Pikachu as it un-glomped Buneary,stepped a few feet back,blushed and mumered "Pikachu..." as it gave her a poffin.."Buneary!" said Buneary as it hugged Pikachu.."Pikachu?" said Pikachu confused before running out the room..."Bun..eary" said Buneary...very saddily..."Umm...what happened here?" said Dawn and Aash simontamisly..."Pachi!Pachi-risu!" giggled Pachirisu under breath..."Piplup!" said Pipulup as it pecked Pachirisu..."Pachi!Pachi-pachi-PACH!" said Pachirisu as it tryed to dodge Piplup's attacks with it's paws..." Did I mention I let Pachirisu and Piplup out of there pokeballs?." said Dawn uncertainly...

[END of Flashback]

"Pika..chu" sighed Pikachu after that sudden flashback...

"Huh?What's a this?" said Meowth as he picked up a poffin with the words "Pika-pika-chu Pi" on it..."Uhhhhhhh" stammered Meowth with a blush as he ran away with the Poffin.

 

[Blackjack Gabbiani]

Please! I'm sick of telling people this! Start a new paragraph when someone new talks!

 

[Naruchu_believe_it]

Please! I'm sick of telling people this! Start a new paragraph when someone new talks!

Ok...*sigh*Whenever someone talks..As in after the sentence..As in skipping a space...Uh,we are having a lesson on paragraphs in my school...I still haven't perfected the "skill of paragraphing"....Anywho,did anyone like it?

 

[Perxio]

Ok...*sigh*Whenever someone talks..As in after the sentence..As in skipping a space...Uh,we are having a lesson on paragraphs in my school...I still haven't perfected the "skill of paragraphing"....Anywho,did anyone like it?

...are you in elementary school? o.o; You're just going over paragraphs? (I guess I'm pretty surprised since so many people here...have perfected it. And I assumed most people here are in their older teens since that seems to be the majority according to a poll.)

 

[Naruchu_believe_it]

...are you in elementary school? o.o; You're just going over paragraphs? (I guess I'm pretty surprised since so many people here...have perfected it. And I assumed most people here are in their older teens since that seems to be the majority according to a poll.)

No I am not in elementry school...My school it just going over paragraphs..It's odd.

EDIT: I'm changing about what the fic is about....

Preview:Struggles and hardships are confronting out Poke-friends as the head along there journey in Shinoh...But will rivalries,love and friendship flutter as the days go bye?The pokemon are getting a fic!