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Pikalution

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This…. This bad story here is not a current work of mine. No, it’s actually my very first fanfic which I have recently found in a book, with a few minor changes added while typing. This hidden fanfic was written when I was only 12, that would be 7 years ago. It was also a tiny fic. When I wrote this I was just getting into Pokémon, and Gen. 3 was just about to come out in the US. I know it’s short, but it was my very first fanfic, way before Taking Over a Trainer’s Heart and Soul.
NOTE: The Final Training Frontier will continue.
And I don't see myself writing anime fics, so this is it. I will continue to write fics based on the games.

Pikalution

Pikachu was tired. He, Ash, and Misty had walked from Saffron City to Celadon. Ash, Misty, and the tired Pikachu were going shopping at the big pokemart today.

“It must be at least five stories tall!” Said Ash.

They then walked through the doors of the pokemart, and Pikachu fainted.

Ash quickly rushed him to the Celadon Pokémon center.

After nurse Joy examined Pikachu she happily said, “He’s just tired and should stay here for a few hours.”

Leaving Pikachu behind, Ash and Misty went back to the pokemart. There Ash passed a counter with evolution stones on sale.

“Will you ever evolve Pikachu?” Misty asked Ash.

“No Way!” Ash cried.

“Well, what if Pikachu want to evolve and get stronger.” Misty tried to put thoughts in Ash’s head.

“He didn’t want to before.” Ash remembered the event in the Pokémon center, after being defeated by Lt. Surge.

Misty was getting angry as usual. “Maybe he would want to now. After all, Pikachu would want to help you get all 150 Pokémon.” (Keep in mind that this is a gen. 1 fic ;) )

Thinking about it, Ash bought a thunder stone.
…………..
NEXT TIME:
“Pika pi.”
“Vui!”

Comments?
 
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lol I'm that age! Pretty good for 7 years ago, but it has no description. XD It is all dialog. (hrm, reminds me of someone familiar(me)) And Short (are you me?????)
 
Seeing as you wrote this seven years ago, do you actually intend to continue it? (Actual question, not a challenge)

Anyway, seems like a pretty blah start I'm afraid. Interesting idea but a very basic one. I'm guessing you don't mind me saying that though, you've probably improved a hell of a lot since you wrote this if it was seven years ago, even if you barely write at all.
 
Gastly's Mama said:
Seeing as you wrote this seven years ago, do you actually intend to continue it? (Actual question, not a challenge)

Anyway, seems like a pretty blah start I'm afraid. Interesting idea but a very basic one. I'm guessing you don't mind me saying that though, you've probably improved a hell of a lot since you wrote this if it was seven years ago, even if you barely write at all.
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I was going to, but it's really bad. I only edited a few things. Does anyone want me to? I'll have a lot of time, and can type it up just for show.

I don't mind. I laugh at this fic when compared to TFTF, or any of my current writing. And yes, if you see my current fanfic, you'll see I have improved a lot. Also, I do not write about the anime anymore. This was before I got into the games.
 
Please note: The thread is from 16 years ago.
Please take the age of this thread into consideration in writing your reply. Depending on what exactly you wanted to say, you may want to consider if it would be better to post a new thread instead.
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