Pkm Adventures: Boarding School Hell! (PG contains some mature comedy for 13 yo's)

[dajman1996]

I don't own Pokemon!

Will have, RedxYellow, BluexGreen, GoldxCyrstal, RubyxSapphire, DiamondxPlatinum

Chapter 1: SCHOOL!?!?!?

"WHAT!!!!!!???" Shouted Gold and Pearl at the same time! And were held back by the other Dex holders to stop them from charging at Oak who just annouced they with their Parents permission for Oak to do so to send them to Boarding School "Don't Worry I'm sure Senji Boarders would be nice and also your parents want you guys to have a good future."

Red and co. were given 30 minuets to pack all they needed since it was a free-dress school, everyone boarded the Senji Wave and were greeted by the captain who looked at the girls in a kind of a dirty way, "Oh I see nice new students." He said as he examined Sapphires legs, Ruby saw this but before he could make a reply Sapphire said to the Captain "Do that again you'll be lucky your face will be deformed." The captain took the warning and dashed off to start the boat. "Welcome new students and it'll take about 45 minuets to reach Senji Boarders." Cyrstal went up to Sapphire and hooted "Hi-Five girl, showing that perv." Sapphire laughed as Cyrstal said "Speaking of pervs," She glanced at Gold who saw her and he tried to keep an innocent face, "You better not gorpe any girls butts or anything while we're there or your a dead man." "Ahhh young love." Ruby sung to the embarrassed Gold, "Hey it's not like our just firends with Sapphire, fashion boy!" Gold retorted, "Hey atleast I have some taste in girls." Ruby snickered. Gold knew he wasn't going to win this fight and just stomped off.

"We are here people," Annouced the Captain as he saw the Dex Holders looking at the Island, "Enjoy your stay." he added as well. Suddenly they could hear screams! "Wait is someone in trouble?" Red asked, then this time the screams got louder, Yellow just knocked him around the head and said "It's the welcoming commite aka your fangirls and our fanboys!" "Oh crap." Said the rest of them as they reached the Jetty.

When they arrived the Vice-Principle greeted them, while all the students were held back by rails, screaming their heads off, "I Love you!!" "I'm free on Saturday nights!" The boys just shudderd at them as they kept screaming for joy. "Oh I see Red, Blue, Green, Yellow, Gold, Silver, Cyrstal, Ruby, Sapphire, Emerald, Diamond, Pearl and Platinum. I'm Mr. Grimes." Mr Grimes annouced, "Elts get you into your rooms and see you tommorow."

It turned out that all the boys had to share one room while all the girls had to share one room. This had to be done secretly so fans didn't know where their rooms were. When the boys went in, "Ok we need a plan so everyday after school that no one follows us back here. So Red you travel with Ruby and Gold while I wil travel with the rest and Diamond and Pearl you 2 travel." In the girls room, "Well we're offically in hell." Green said. Everyone else agreed and Cyrstal said "There is something worst then the end of the World, School." Everyone else agreed with that aswell but Yellow popped out her Pikachu and said "At least it's a Pokemon school and we're allowed to bring our Pokemon."


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[dajman1996]

Re: Pkm Adventures: Boarding School Hell! (PG contains some mature comedy for 13 yo's

Yeah I got bored and decided to post 2 chapters in 1 day and I Don't Own Pokemon

Chapter 2: Balancing it out!

"Man what a drag." Complained Emerald as they walked through the hallway to their home room (Pokemon School isn't divided in age it's divided by skill), as they entered they were met by screaming fan girls trying to touch them! "Arrg!" Red yelped in surprise and siad "Well thank you but we're all trying to learn hereee!!!" Red couldn't finish what he was saying and got crushed by the crowd, but he was lucky most of the girls were either going for Blue or Silver, "Well it sucks to be you!" Gold laughed at both of them.

"Platinum WAKE UP!!" Screamed Sapphire as she tried to wake up the trainer. "Oh crap I'm going to be late!" Every other girl was dressed in their normal outfits and were waiting for he youngest to get up, when things were finally done Sapphire decided to take of her bandana and put's aclip on instead and asks to Cyrstal "Umm do you think Ruby will like this?" not realizing she said that too loud. Yellow just laughed and was faced with an angry Sapphire saying "What is it?!" Yellow just told her "Well aren't you and Ruby already you know? Well didn't you guys confess?" Sapphire blushed and changed the subject to "Let's go now to our home room."

Ruby was sitting on his desk drawing up designs for Sapphire's prom dress. He had already thought of it the moment he was sent to this hell-hole, although he tries to hide he had confessed deep down he knows he still likes the wild girl. "What ya doing?" asked a voice, "Oh nothng just designing a dress for someone special." "Oh Ruby I knew you hadn't given up." The voice sounded familar then he snapped out of La La land and turned around to face Cyrstal, "Oh thank god it wasn't her." Ruby siged but he hadn't watched his mouth as he saw Sapphire coming, "Thank god who it wasn't?" The girl asked, Ruby then realised Sapphire had a new look Ruby looked at her and smiled "Nice look." Sapphire turned away slowly but not being obvious blushs and thinks "Maybe he still does!" Gold then comes and says to Green "Hey ummmmmm Green, your boyfriend Blue to getting mainfested by girls!" Green then puts on her cheeky side and approches the crowd that is surronding Blue and shoves all the girls away and pulls Blue out of the crowd and says "Sorry GF's this cuties all mine."

Period 1: P.E (Pokemon Battles/Human and Pokemon Dodgeball)

The whistle blew, Red was up agaisnt another popular jock in the school in a Pokemon battle, "Go Hitmonlee!" Orders the boy, Red just smiles and throws out a Poke-Ball and says "Let's do it Lax!" The trainer just laughs "Huh? Normal Type you the great Red sending out a normal type to fight an Fighting type this is going to be easy!" Red just hid a smile under his face and orders Lax "Ice Beam!" 'HITMON!!!!!!!!!!!!" The Hitmon Lee screams as he get's frozen, "Lax GIGA IMPACT!!!" Red says to finish things off! The impact made the Pokemon faint instantly and the fangirls get up rushing over to Red! "Oh man.. RUN!!!" Gold yells as he see's this happening and makes a break for it.

"Ok schools over let's go," Diamond said as he was walking with Platinum, Pearl got detention for fighting with one of the students. "Hey ummm Platinum do you think this is actually good for us?" Diamond asked, Platinum just kept silent as both of them made it back without being seen.

In the boys room it was onl Diamond and Ruby, Diamond knew Ruby was designing Sapphires Prom dress and walked up behind him and asked "Ummm can you design a dress for Platinum for me?" Diamond said awkardly, "Oh sure I can after I finish Sapphires." Beamed Ruby, behind the wall was the girls room where Sapphire was listing leaped for joy as she faced Cyrstal giving her "I told you so" look. "Now what about you and Gold?" She teased making Cyrstal blush and keep silent.

"Ok guys I'm back!" Annouced red, who was last to come in even after Pearl, "Quite!" hissed everyone, "And where were you?" asked Silver looking suspicious, "Oh I just had to help Yellow with something!" Red replied casually. Everyone just gave a few smirks as Red was asking "What!?" with a Red fac, then Ruby just says , "When It comes to Pokemon with us, we're good but when it's with girls we just suck." Everyone just laughed as Blue switched on the T.V for a movie.

Soz , had to write please review

 

[Marik]

Re: Pkm Adventures: Boarding School Hell! (PG contains some mature comedy for 13 yo's

Hmmm... maybe too many main characters. It's a bit confusing. I'm not a very good critic though, so take it with a grain of salt. Not bad for a first fic though!

 

[Ino-Chan]

Re: Pkm Adventures: Boarding School Hell! (PG contains some mature comedy for 13 yo's

Not to sound rude but this isn't that great. There isn't really a story from what I could tell and no description. It has potiential. But it is deeply hidden in flaws.

 

[dajman1996]

Re: Pkm Adventures: Boarding School Hell! (PG contains some mature comedy for 13 yo's

K get ya

 

[Kantomasta]

Re: Pkm Adventures: Boarding School Hell! (PG contains some mature comedy for 13 yo's

Not to sound rude but this isn't that great. There isn't really a story from what I could tell and no description. It has potiential. But it is deeply hidden in flaws.

said it all. really though, whats the plot? and who is talking in each paragraph????