Pocket Hearts III (PG) (Pokemon/KH RP with KH3 theories)

[Terra Force]

It's been a year since Xemnas' demise, and the fall of the Trainer's Organization XIII, and strange portals that lead to other dimensions, have appeared for a third time. Now, Pokemon Trainers that are equipped with either a Keyblade, a Staff, or a Shield, must go into these portals. They will fight for either the side of good, or evil, alongside with the characters that live in the worlds the portals lead to. You have SIX fully evolved, NON-legendary Pokemon, also. You can summon the Legendaries with certain Gems (except Mewtwo, who is an actual character in the plot). You also can temporarily be in a Drive form with one of your Pokemon. You also can summon Disney/Final Fantasy characters whose worlds were destroyed. It's your choice. Fight for Good? Or Evil? The evil Teams are also going through the portals.

The new worlds here as follows and where the portals are in the Pokemon world

Terra Town, the new Traverse/Twilight Town-Twinleaf Town
Grand Alaska, a Brother Bear World, where Kenai is a Party Member- Snowpoint City
Hawaii/Outer Space, a Lilo & Stitch World, where Stitch is a party member-Mossdeep City
Oakey Oaks, a Chicken Little World, where Chicken Little is a party mmber-Violet City
Great Barrier Reef/Sydney, a Finding Nemo world where Marlin is a party member-Cerulean City
Midgar, a Final Fantasy VII World, where Cloud is a party member-Sunyshore City
Chaotic Abyss the new EotW/TWtNw- Victory Road (Hoenn)

The returning worlds from KH2 are as follows and the areas the portals are in the Pokemon world


Pride Lands-Ilex Forest
Radiant Garden-Pallet Town
Agrabah-Route 228
Port Royal-Cyanwood City
The Land of Dragons-Blackthorn City
100 Acre Wood-Safari Zone (Hoenn)




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Name: Eric Daimon
Gender: Male
Alignment: Good
Physical Description: The playable boy Trainer from Emerald
Personality: He is brave, and kind (but only if you're on HIS side), and can be easily angered and will lose his patience at times.
Alignment: Good
History: He saved the worlds twice, and is willing to do it again, and to stop evil and find his girlfriend Peggy Nohrstein. Eric would be dead without Mewtwo, who saved his life when his village was obliterated by Team Rocket. Eric also knows King Ash Ketchum
Weapon: Jungle King Keyblade
Pokemon: Rhyperior, Sceptile, Donphan, Kingdra, Crobat, Gyarados

 

[Terra Force]

*I really feel the need to bump this*

 

[Turtle Tamer Kammy]

If something hasn't been posted on, it's because no one cares about what you have written.

 

[Terra Force]

You're jokin', right?

 

[Turtle Tamer Kammy]

I'm not.

 

[The Dark Fiddler]

I think this would've been a beeter fanfic than role play

 

[Keela]

I think this would've been a beeter fanfic than role play

You haven't read Turbo's fanfics XD

 

[Terra Force]

You've got THAT right!

 

[Turtle Tamer Kammy]

You've got THAT right!

That wasn't a compliment. They were implying that your fics are horrible because you refuse to take any of the advice given to you.

 

[Terra Force]

I know!

 

[Keela]

I know!

So why don't you take anyone's advice, if you know that your fics are horrible? xD

 

[Terra Force]

Some of my fics (like the Digimon one I just posted) are actually rather decent. Sign up, people!

 

[Atomsk]

It's been a year since Xemnas' demise, and the fall of the Trainer's Organization XIII,

Who's Xemnas? Why did he die? What's the Organization XIII?

and strange portals that lead to other dimensions, have appeared for a third time.

Why are they appearing? What caused them to appear before?

Now, Pokemon Trainers that are equipped with either a Keyblade, a Staff, or a Shield, must go into these portals.

What's a Keyblade? Does it have any powers? If so, what are they? Why are Pokemon Trainers being given weapons?

They will fight for either the side of good, or evil, alongside with the characters that live in the worlds the portals lead to. You have SIX fully evolved, NON-legendary Pokemon, also.

Wouldn't these Pokemon themselves be enough? I mean, at this stage, they're incredibly powerful. You need to settle a middle ground, as odds are, you'll be relying on your Keyblade, not your Pokemon.

You can summon the Legendaries with certain Gems (except Mewtwo, who is an actual character in the plot).

This contradicts your statement that you can't have Legendaries. Summoning them with an item is basically the same as having a Legendary.

You also can temporarily be in a Drive form with one of your Pokemon.

I thought Drive Forms were done with party members? How does one go about fusing with these Pokemon anyway?

You also can summon Disney/Final Fantasy characters whose worlds were destroyed. It's your choice. Fight for Good? Or Evil? The evil Teams are also going through the portals.

Yet again, you either have Disney/Final Fantasy characters or Legendary Pokemon. Not both.

The new worlds here as follows and where the portals are in the Pokemon world

Terra Town, the new Traverse/Twilight Town-Twinleaf Town
Grand Alaska, a Brother Bear World, where Kenai is a Party Member- Snowpoint City
Hawaii/Outer Space, a Lilo & Stitch World, where Stitch is a party member-Mossdeep City
Oakey Oaks, a Chicken Little World, where Chicken Little is a party mmber-Violet City
Great Barrier Reef/Sydney, a Finding Nemo world where Marlin is a party member-Cerulean City
Midgar, a Final Fantasy VII World, where Cloud is a party member-Sunyshore City
Chaotic Abyss the new EotW/TWtNw- Victory Road (Hoenn)

What if we've never played Kingdom Hearts and don't know what these worlds look like? What if we haven't seen these movies or played these games. What do the abbreviations mean? TELL US EVERYTHING.

The returning worlds from KH2 are as follows and the areas the portals are in the Pokemon world


Pride Lands-Ilex Forest
Radiant Garden-Pallet Town
Agrabah-Route 228
Port Royal-Cyanwood City
The Land of Dragons-Blackthorn City
100 Acre Wood-Safari Zone (Hoenn)

See above.

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Name: Eric Daimon
Gender: Male
Alignment: Good
Physical Description: The playable boy Trainer from Emerald

That is nowhere near the level of description. One line shouldn't cut it. Is the Trainer thin or fat? Weak or muscly? DESCRIBE, DESCRIBE, DESCRIBE!

Personality: He is brave, and kind (but only if you're on HIS side), and can be easily angered and will lose his patience at times.

*coughGaryStucough*

Alignment: Good

You already said that.

History: He saved the worlds twice, and is willing to do it again, and to stop evil and find his girlfriend Peggy Nohrstein. Eric would be dead without Mewtwo, who saved his life when his village was obliterated by Team Rocket. Eric also knows King Ash Ketchum

Yet again, Gary-Stu. Why does Mewtwo save your character? Doesn't he hate humanity? Why is Ash king?

Weapon: Jungle King Keyblade
Pokemon: Rhyperior, Sceptile, Donphan, Kingdra, Crobat, Gyarados

What the hell does the Keyblade look like?

So yeah, this is what's wrong with your RPG and what needs to be improved on. I doubt you'll listen, but it was either helpful advice or screaming at you, and I can't really lose my voice.

 

[Terra Force]

These are all mysteries to be solved....

 

[Atomsk]

These are all mysteries to be solved....

Don't you dare give me that excuse. What are? The fact that no-one knows who Xemnas was? That your character is best buds with Ash Ketchum and Mewtwo? No-one with an ounce of common sense will like this. And before you whine, "But it worked last time!", your posts were barely over a line, and it just consisted of three players. Everything needs to be cleared up here, EVERYTHING. Like what a Keyblade is, what powers it has, etc. Granted, if you want to sign-up doubtless you'd know about KH but assume we don't. Assume we're children who don't know about this. You have no idea how much that helps.

And for the record, I read about you on SPPf as turboredeemed and you came across as a real brat. You still come across as one here. I also heard you blame your Asperger's Syndrome on your level of description. I have AS, Blackjack has AS; description and detail are our strong points, mate! If there's one thing I acknowledge, it's that your terrible, TERRIBLE RPGs, fics, what have you, always make me laugh. Not in a good way, either.

Oh, and people aren't joining because of your reputation of not listening to advice, your terrible writing and how quickly your last attempt at this went down the can. If you were confused about that, there we are. Please, for Christ's sake, LISTEN TO WHAT WE'RE TELLING YOU! YOU'LL GET PERMABANNED ALL OVER AGAIN!!

 

[Terra Force]

I LEFT SPPf for a good reason.....

 

[Atomsk]

I LEFT SPPf for a good reason.....

You were permabanned. Evicted. Whichever term you prefer. Don't deny it. You refused to listen to advice, posted the same shite time after time, and irritated everyone and satisifed nobody. Even on PokeCommunity, the situation for this RPG is like the Russian Revolution; an uprising waiting to happen.

If nothing else, listen to what people are telling you, or tempers will be lost. And trust me, you don't want that to happen, much less from me or Blackjack, fellow Aspies.

 

[Terra Force]

No.. Serebii said he deleted my account because I LEFT!

 

[Atomsk]

No.. Serebii said he deleted my account because I LEFT!

Still, nobody misses you. They're quite glad to be shot of you. And what's your reason for leaving? Care to share it with the class?

 

[Terra Force]

there were fuckloads of n00bs, and NO custom avatars