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Pokemon 2010 Sharpedo olympics!

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Set in the world of mystery dungeon 2, this focus's on the 2010 Sharpedo bluff olympics! Enjoy as we follow Kahli ( Charmander ) and his exciting campaign!

Chapter 1:
The sea swayed calmfully, For this month the ocean's and sea's were empty, for all Pokemon loved this event, every two years they would see the fantastic olympics.
Kahli: Oh man, How I long to be in the tournament....'
Kahli was a little Charmander, he was only seven regions old and he was sad, it was bad to cry when you was a fire type but he couldn't help it, he was a strange Charmander, when his friends blew fire it was amazing, he could barely puff a smoke of air, they tessed him and laughed at him, and he wasn't aloud in the olympics also, his mother was a Blaziken, and he could only bo one species.
Charizard: Son, I got great news! ( Charizard Khalis dad face beemed with happiness ) I went to Chatot and I gave him a little tuss- I mean, I asked him to allow you in, he said yes...! '
Khali: What? Your joking?! What?! '
Khali jumped in his fathers hand and beemed with joy, then his mum Blaziken came.
Blaziken: Hey, Lets go and buy some kit! I heard The Guild is doing some good prices! And, Chari? Go and get some Bidoof and some Wailord fat, he will need a feast!
Charizard nodding his head sagely, jumping on his mothers back Khali looked at the sun and, to this they he swears he saw Cresselia, it was full moon and it smiled, and off he and his mum went, to the shops, for the olympics:


Well, thanks, If I get popular demand for a second version I will, please comment! And yes, I hate Bidoofs and in this all Pokemon are edible.
 
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Well, first of all, calmfully isn't actually a word. You probably meant to put calmly. As well as that, there are a few other spelling mistakes, notably where you put "aloud" at one point, and "allow" at another.

But, I like the idea. If you just fix the spelling issues by writing it out in Microsoft Word first, and make your chapters a bit longer, this could turn out to be a nice little story.
 
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