ClawofBeta
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After slogging through the upteenth story about how Ash/self-insert character has super Aura powers and a talking Lucario, I thought ENOUGH! I'm sick of this. I'll create my own story without blackjack and hookers...I meant Ash.
I had more ideas the more I thought about it. Being a fan of the recent XY anime, I've decided to use their characters. Hmm. But older fans might not be familiar with the newer cast. What about I set it in Kanto then? Yeah, that'll be great! And then I can have Brock...and Misty...hey, wouldn't it be cool to have Paul? And even Alain?
So this popped out. Barely edited, hardly revised, this came out of the mixer. Primarily based on the anime, there are references to the games. It reads like the anime. That means no sex, drugs, cursing, yada yada. There are a bunch of darker Pokemon works that do it much better than I could possibly imagine.
Serena's the main character. It made the most sense. She has enough personality that no one really hates her but she's bland enough that I can help mold her myself. It'll be fun to write her grow both as a Pokemon trainer but also as a human being.
All characters existed in the anime or games or manga. None of them are my creation, even the person in the prologue. I try to keep personalities intact, but that might be a bit hard since I haven't watched the anime for years until XY. Yes, this means there will be horrible gags and puns. Yes. Team Rocket will be blasting off nearly every chapter. Yes, this means Serena still has a crush on Ash, and they'll be lolAmourshipping even though no one know where on Earth Ash is. A side effect of using her as the main character.
So, here it is. I hope I haven't bored you to death already. I promise you the work itself has a lot more dialogue and less description. In fact, it definitely has too little description. I just want to get this over with in a "reasonable" amount of time unlike all of those other fanfiction put on infinite hiatus.
Thank you for reading.
Oh, and I have posted this on Fanfiction.net and I even made a SubReddit or an Ao3 if you prefer those formats, but those aren't exactly the best to facilitate reader/writer communication.
I had more ideas the more I thought about it. Being a fan of the recent XY anime, I've decided to use their characters. Hmm. But older fans might not be familiar with the newer cast. What about I set it in Kanto then? Yeah, that'll be great! And then I can have Brock...and Misty...hey, wouldn't it be cool to have Paul? And even Alain?
So this popped out. Barely edited, hardly revised, this came out of the mixer. Primarily based on the anime, there are references to the games. It reads like the anime. That means no sex, drugs, cursing, yada yada. There are a bunch of darker Pokemon works that do it much better than I could possibly imagine.
Serena's the main character. It made the most sense. She has enough personality that no one really hates her but she's bland enough that I can help mold her myself. It'll be fun to write her grow both as a Pokemon trainer but also as a human being.
All characters existed in the anime or games or manga. None of them are my creation, even the person in the prologue. I try to keep personalities intact, but that might be a bit hard since I haven't watched the anime for years until XY. Yes, this means there will be horrible gags and puns. Yes. Team Rocket will be blasting off nearly every chapter. Yes, this means Serena still has a crush on Ash, and they'll be lolAmourshipping even though no one know where on Earth Ash is. A side effect of using her as the main character.
So, here it is. I hope I haven't bored you to death already. I promise you the work itself has a lot more dialogue and less description. In fact, it definitely has too little description. I just want to get this over with in a "reasonable" amount of time unlike all of those other fanfiction put on infinite hiatus.
Thank you for reading.
Oh, and I have posted this on Fanfiction.net and I even made a SubReddit or an Ao3 if you prefer those formats, but those aren't exactly the best to facilitate reader/writer communication.
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