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Lapras of The Carribbean

Lapras King of Water!!!!!
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Hello, and welcome to Pokemon comics made by me, or PCMM for short. This is a place you can rate my comics, and give me feedback, and possibly requests for what to put in my comics. I will reply to whoever I can. Here are some rules to follow:

1:Follow Bulbagarden rules
2: There is a hall of shame here, so if you make a request, and it doesn't come, and you are on the hall of shame, you will not get your request, even if I can
do it!
3: Certain constructive critcism will be tolerated.
4: Evreyone has three warnings and a freebie.
5: No you may not work here, I am good enough thank you!
6: No bad words, doing the **** to replace bad words, and please, please give me feedback on my comics!!!
7: If you want to start a sprite shop on this thread, PM me and you might get your wish. If you want to work here as a spriter or artist this form must be completed:

1. Name of your sub-sprite shop/ artist shop/ both
2. What you can do with examples
3. Your rules

That's about it. I can only do one scene at a time, so one will come evrey once in a little while! In fact, I'll give an example of my work! But it's the begging, so never mind!

The begining of the story:
http://img389.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics2qi9.jpg

The main characters are Brendan and Belle, and it could get messy beetween them!

Hall of shame:
No one yet!
Good!

Workers
Lapraslvr
Slashing_Sceptile

Lapraslvr and what he can do:

Persolization:

Text:
Picture:
Backround color:(can only do basic colors!)
Text Color: (I might change it depending on the ocus of the text)
Example: http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gemini3xm1.gif


Lapraslvr's Art rules:
1:Follow Bulbagarden and My thread rules
2:Patience. Imapatience leads to fear, fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate, and hate leads to suffering...- Yoda Episode III The revenge of the Sith
3: Do not use Pokemon in my orders. I can't change the Pokemon!

Slashing_Sceptile and what he can do(no examles yet!):
1. Banners
2. Animation Banners
3. Trainer Animation Banners
4. Trainer Cards
5. Pokemon pokeballs
6. Recolors
7. Revamps
8. Trainer Revamps
9. Chaos
10. Animation
11. Non-related-Pokemon Banners

Sllashing_Sceptiles Rules:
1. No SPAMMING
2. No double or more posting
3. BE PATIENT don't ask when it's coming, or why it's not done yet, etc.
4. Follow the Bulbagarden Forum Rules!
5. Use the forms given.
6. ALWAYS GIVE CREDIT
7. When the shop's closed,it's closed. Otherwise, I'll do your request quickly
8. Don't ask for things I CAN'T do, only ask for the things shown above
9. Be nice(quite simple, i'm sure you guys can understand THAT)
10. PM me if you need anything changed on the product that you got, NEVER CHANGE IT YOURSELF, just PM me, and I'll edit it)
11. If you want to work here, PM Lapras of the Carribean first, but he'll definitley say yes
12. If you see more than five people waiting for their request, please don't request until at least one has been given their request. Or, Lapras of the Carribean will put you on his Hall of Shame list!
13. The shop is usually never closed unless it is
14. You can only have two requests a post, because I might have other customers who want their request done.
15. PLEASE, if you're making a request, please if you can, PROVIDE THE SPRITE/URL OF SPRITE. It would make my work SO MUCH easier and quicker!
16. REQUEST AGAIN

Here is the comic index for Season 1! In order, too!
http://img389.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics2qi9.jpg 1
http://img368.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics3gl1.png 2
http://img428.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics4lq2.png 3
http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pokemonpikenb4.png 4
http://img460.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics8zi7.png 5
http://img58.imageshack.us/my.php?image=commics8qc2.jpg 6
http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics95ee8.png 7
http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics115gm5.png 8
http://img345.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics105hy1.png 9
http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=groudoncomics15tw8.png 10
http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=groudoncomics05ic0.png 11 http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=groudoncomics25eh1.png 12
http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=groudoncomics35in3.png 13
http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=groudoncomics45as2.png 14
http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=groudoncomics55bv0.png 15
http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kyogrecomics0wv8.png 16
http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=groudonkyogrecomicpq8.png 17
http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rayquazacocomicbj7.png 18
http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rayquazacomic2cz7.png 19
http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rayquazacomic3em9.png 20
http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rayquazacomic4lb3.png 21
http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rayquazacomic5ca1.png 22

Season 2 index:
http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mewcomicto9.png 1
 
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Well.

The picture has bizarre quality, the word box is off, and you have grammatical errors.
 
Lapraslvr said:
1:Follow Bulbagarden rules
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You could do that yourself by making your sig about 99% smaller and less like a Skyscraper.

Also, comics are by definition, a number of panels of images. Not a single badly produced panel made once every month or so.

Sorry, but this is a pretty poor effort. :/

Also, unless this is meant to be a game (I'm not sure) this is in the wrong forum too... >_>
 
Doctor Oak's right: Your signature is too big. Please use only ONE image.
And I'm sorry to say, but both him and Habunake are right about the comic. :/

Also, this doesn't belong in the club's forum. *moves to fanart*
 
Okay, listen up. I am new. Please go easy on me. Suggestions are easily accepted, as long as I can do them. I was waiting all of this day at Middle School, saying, " I hope Bulbagardens likes my thread!" so, I am new to this, the picture is blury, I know I made grammatical errors, and I'm sorry. The character is like that. Well, I'll change the meaning of this shop. Well, I can take orders on emerld scenes! But, depending. Here are the rules:

1: You must not order what Pokemon is that you want. You get what you get.
2: No making fun of my work
3: I sorta make Pokemon battle and regular scenes, sort of, but in a way that I like to keep secret!
4: Text, Lv., and HP are the only things I can change!
5: Patience. Imapatience leads to fear, and fear leads to hate, and hate leads to suffering- Yoda the hut Episode III The revenge of the Sith

Soon, I will put these rules and what I can make in my first post.


Edit: Darn it! I hate doing this by accident! Why is my computer screwing up?
Plus: Part 2: http://img368.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics3gl1.png
 
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Lapraslvr said:
5: Patience. Imapatience leads to fear, and fear leads to hate, and hate leads to suffering- Yoda the hut Episode III The revenge of the Sith
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"Yoda the hut" there was not. Only Yoda there was. Thinking of Jabba you are.
 
Dolphin Man said:
And wasn't that from Episode I?
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Yes, but he also said it to remind Anakin in Episode III, and Yoda is a hut, my mom knows the trilogy very well, but lets get back to the comics okay?
Well, here's part three, where Belle, the other main character, is Battling a Ralts with her favorite Pokemon, Zigzagoon!

http://img428.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics4lq2.png

Edit: Well, actually, Yoda is another breed of hut, at least if Yoda was a hut, then he would, hmmmmm.
Edit (agan): Here is the correct way he said it: Fear leads to jealousy, jealousy leads to anger, anger leads to hate, and hate leads to suffering.
 
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Yoda is not a hut......

He looks nothing like Jabba the Hut. Or any other "Huts".

EDIT: yeah...that panel is...well, lame.

You should of edited the HP bar instead, and made a panel showing the attack.
 
Umm, I am kinda new to this, and to me, it's like speaking Japanese. I can't replace ANYTHING! I just need practice with my skill.... But, I can now take offers on Pokemon Doodles!!!!

Here are some examples!

http://img487.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitledmg3.png http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=weavilelu6.gif
http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gemini3xm1.gif

Please quote them, they are new to me, kinda, and they may look silly, but if you give me a picture, I can doodle on it and make some changes. Remember, go easy on me.
 
Um..yeah.....

No offense, but plainly...those are terrible.
 
None taken, but please, I can improve. Hopefully. Sigh... Well, I am terrible. Maybe I should just hire someone to help get this place going....

Part 4!: http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pokemonpikenb4.png

(Belle beat Lucy)

If you are an artist/spriter/whatever please PM me if you want to work here!
I am a master at providing pictures, so if you need me, I need you to work at my comic shop! If you want to work here, please fill this form:

Artist/spriter/whatever and name of sub-shop
What you can do
Examples
Your rules*(not needed, but if wanted, okay.)

NEW: If you are good at making comics online, please, I need your help, because mine are just plain weird! But they are neat, who am I kidding? But I can do Pokemon Personalizations!
If you want to be a comic maker, please fill this form.

Your Comic shop name
Examples of your scenes
Rules*(not needed, but if wanted, okay.)

If you need a picture you are raring to find, and you need it A.S.A.P., I can find it with little difficulty. But you need a job here. Plus, I can only send it by PMing you, because it's only meant for the people I give it to. Trust me. I can find just about anything.
 
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Oh hi Slicing_Scizor! Do you want to be part of my little comic thing? We could really (emphaize on really) use your help! I would like you to be part of my thread! Can you make banners and whatever else you can do here? If so, that would be great! You see, I make persnolizations, and comic scenes. Well, I have to get that banner now!

Edit;Slicing_Scizor, your banner that you gave me was your best work yet! I almost bowed to you!
 
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lol like i've done so 3 or 4 times in the past weeks: Sapphire_Dragonite->Metal_Gear_Scizor-> Some russian name i've forgotten->XD001.5. But on topic, there are websites where you can get the correct font, backdrops, interfaces and speech boxes for your comics. Just look around and you'll be surprised at what you can dig up. (try googling pokemon sprites, and go from there)
 
Well, I don't think he likes his Slicing_Scizor name, so, I think he chaned it because he didn't have something that was supposed to be there. Okay, where were we? Oh yeah, comic number 5: http://img460.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics8zi7.png

This is probably going to be the first one that might be funny. If not, check comic number five coming soon!

EDIT: Pokemon comic 6 here it is, if this isn't funny, wait for 7! It might be funny!
http://img58.imageshack.us/my.php?image=commics8qc2.jpg

ALSO: Slashing_Sceptile can now work here! If you want to request something, first look at what he can do, and what his rules are!
But, I do have some examples of what he can do from whay he made me!

Banners:http://img56.imageshack.us/my.php?image=laprasofthecarribean2ux8
http://img464.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bannerjk5.gif
http://img215.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sephirothbannerfc1.jpg

Animated Banners: http://img482.imageshack.us/my.php?image=blinkiebanner21wd4.gif

Trust me, he can do more than just that! I don't have examples for the other stuff he can make, but his work is really neat!
 
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Lapras of The Carribean said:
Well, I don't think he likes his Slicing_Scizor name, so, I think he chaned it because he didn't have something that was supposed to be there. Okay, where were we? Oh yeah, comic number 5: http://img460.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comics8zi7.png

This is probably going to be the first one that might be funny. If not, check comic number five coming soon!

EDIT: Pokemon comic 6 here it is, if this isn't funny, wait for 7! It might be funny!
http://img58.imageshack.us/my.php?image=commics8qc2.jpg

ALSO: Slashing_Sceptile can now work here! If you want to request something, first look at what he can do, and what his rules are!
But, I do have some examples of what he can do from whay he made me!

Banners:http://img56.imageshack.us/my.php?image=laprasofthecarribean2ux8
http://img464.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bannerjk5.gif
http://img215.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sephirothbannerfc1.jpg

Animated Banners: http://img482.imageshack.us/my.php?image=blinkiebanner21wd4.gif

Trust me, he can do more than just that! I don't have examples for the other stuff he can make, but his work is really neat!
Click to expand...

Lapras of the Carribean, can I have a personlized Absol Sprite? I want it to say," Absols Heartless" thanks! By the way, your comics are funny!
 
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