danh19
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this is a sample of a series I decided to do in script form since it's something I always been interested please let me know what you think so I know weather it's worth carrying on
ep 1
INT. team rocket HQ Giovanni's office - night
Giovanni sit's encased in shadow
the rocket trio stand feet from desk staring intensely at the boss trying to make out what sort of mood he is in
the boss leans forward coming into focus fist clenched trying to keep in control of his anger
the trio look down at the ground to afraid to look him in the eyes
Giovanni
I have had enough of you incompetent fools
(pauses)
I suggest you leave now while you still can
James forgetting his fear leans over the desk inches from
Giovanni's face taking everyone by surprise
Giovanni quickly recovering pauses lost in thought he turns to face Jessie intently staring at her
confusing them all
GIOVANNI
(to self)
I owe her mother
(speaking up)
one last chance but one more screw up
EXT. team rocket H.Q - night
the rocket trio slowly make their way from the building still numb from the shock Jessie recovers standing tall determined
Jessie
we just have to work harder we'll soon show the boss what we really made off
meowth
(standing straighter)
Jessie's right second time's the charm
James
(still concerned)
I hope you right
ext./int. Maria's home Hilda's room - night
the elegant house and garden sit silhouetted in the dazzling moonlight
through open window silhouette of a young girl her back to the window seemly transfixed by poster
she turns around behind her is image of slightly older ash doing his famous pose with Pikachu
stood high full of determination
Hilda
I know I can do it
(deflating quietly to self)
I hope
Hilda is sweet somewhat naïve and shy girl
she turns her attention to the TV paused image of Pikachu fighting nidoking
ep 1
INT. team rocket HQ Giovanni's office - night
Giovanni sit's encased in shadow
the rocket trio stand feet from desk staring intensely at the boss trying to make out what sort of mood he is in
the boss leans forward coming into focus fist clenched trying to keep in control of his anger
the trio look down at the ground to afraid to look him in the eyes
Giovanni
I have had enough of you incompetent fools
(pauses)
I suggest you leave now while you still can
James forgetting his fear leans over the desk inches from
Giovanni's face taking everyone by surprise
Giovanni quickly recovering pauses lost in thought he turns to face Jessie intently staring at her
confusing them all
GIOVANNI
(to self)
I owe her mother
(speaking up)
one last chance but one more screw up
EXT. team rocket H.Q - night
the rocket trio slowly make their way from the building still numb from the shock Jessie recovers standing tall determined
Jessie
we just have to work harder we'll soon show the boss what we really made off
meowth
(standing straighter)
Jessie's right second time's the charm
James
(still concerned)
I hope you right
ext./int. Maria's home Hilda's room - night
the elegant house and garden sit silhouetted in the dazzling moonlight
through open window silhouette of a young girl her back to the window seemly transfixed by poster
she turns around behind her is image of slightly older ash doing his famous pose with Pikachu
stood high full of determination
Hilda
I know I can do it
(deflating quietly to self)
I hope
Hilda is sweet somewhat naïve and shy girl
she turns her attention to the TV paused image of Pikachu fighting nidoking