TEEN: - Ongoing Pokemon Flame (Sinnoh Stories 3th season)

[Pyshcosocial12]

Here season three. This time there will be more action than ever! There are two new charaters, Pete(Charmeleon) and Sam(Flareon). October is based off anime aficonda.
Hope you love it!

Sam was ready to set off for an adventure. She has waited along time to leave, to fight other Pokemon, and to make a map of the Sinnoh's Jungle Islands. Last night her father told her to team up with someone so she will never be alone. She run to the closest jungle on the island. She saw an angry Fearow. He attacked with Wing Attack, pushing her away.

Sam,"Uhhh!!"
Fearow come in for a killer attack. Sam closed her eyes. When she opened them she saw a Charmeleon with a Shark toothed shape-blade. He used the flat front. Fearow got a nose bleed. He fell unconsious on the ground.

Charmeleon,"Pityful. Just pityful. That was so easy."
He layed his blade on his shoulder.

Sam,"Thank you!"
He grinned.

Charmeleon,"You're welcome."
He began to walk away.
Sam,"Wait! I want to go with you. I have a dream of traveling around the islands. Please team up with me."

Charmeleon,"Sure. The name is Pete."

Sam,"Thanks again. My name is Sam."
They walked away to the middle of the island.

Pete,"We'll rest here. Tomorrow we can get to the habor and go to Shaki Island."
They set a camp. Sam cooked some chicken. Pete rested his blade against a nearby tree.
As they slept, Sam began to hear noises. She had try to wake up Pete. She looked around the camp site. There was a Prinplup.

Sam,"Who are you?"

Johny,"The name's Johny. I was called to kill you and your friend."
He prepared to use Metal Claw. When it hit, it was against Pete's blade.

Pete,"Don't you dare."
They began to fight. The clashed the blade and Metal Claw. Johny side kicked him and gave Pete a punch that blasted him through a tree.

Johny,"Hah! No one can survive my 40th degree punch! You're next."
Sam was paralized in fear. As attacked the blade got in the way.

Johny,"What?! I thought-"
Pete punched him in the gut. He went flighting. The punch was 400th degree.

Sam,"How did you?!"
Pete licked the blood off his jaw.

Pete,"My old man gave me 400th degree punches. So I can survive 40th degree. Come on. I like to sleep soon."They went back to sleep. The next morning they left to the harbor.
End

 

[Pseudonymiss]

AWW! Thank you! ^^ You're such a gem! *infinity hugs* You're style has improved a bit from all the others! GOOD JOB! ^^ But i kno this is kinda bias, but could you change April to October since i was born in it? But i don't mind if you keep April tho! ^^

AWWwww Thanks you SO much Chimmy! You are one of the beststtetetststst friends in Bulba you could eva have! ^^ I'll make a fan fic for you right away! ^^ ALong with all my other three! ^^;

 

[The Pig King]

It's okay. Much better thean the previous Sinnoh Stories chapters. But did you have to use the One Piece line? It didn't really fit.

 

[Pyshcosocial12]

Sure thing anime! And I know Blaziken. I just needed some idea from it for this. Arlong's blade really helped though!

 

[Pseudonymiss]

oh, you need to change the title Chimmy it's 3rd Season, not 3th! ^^

 

[Pyshcosocial12]

Here's my next part. Please post if you like it.

Pete and Sam got to Shaki Island. Sam was happy that they got there. Pete looked
unhappy, having a blank look on his face. Sam,"Cheer up!"

Pete,"I not in the mood. We are going to need a navigator, because the bill for going on a ship is too much."
A Raichu poped up to them.

Raichu,"Need a navigator? I'm your Pokemon!"

Sam,"You can help?"

Raichu,"Yep. My name's Marc, and I will love to help."

Sam,"Great! My name's Sam, and this is Pete."
Marc wanted to shake Pete's hand, but Pete refused.

Sam,"Cheer up!"

Pete,"No. I got to go."
Pete walked away from them. He went to the middle of the island, where the leader's place was. Pete went up to him. He was a Salamenace named Bill. Bill,"Pete... I thought I kill you 2 yrs. ago."Pete put his blade up to Bill's face.

Pete,"You know why I came. Revenge. I want my honor back."
2 yrs. back Pete had pushed Bill's buttons and changed him. Bill deafed him, thinking he died. He promised he will kill him. Bill had the people of the village suffer, including his mother. Bill,"You will die here." They began to battle. Pete used Flame Thrower but missed.
Bill used a Skull Bash in Pete's gut. Pete threw up blood. Bill used Flame Thrower, showing Pete true power.

Later back in the other side of the village Sam and Marc looked for Pete. Pokemon were running to the miidle of the island. Pokemon,"That kid Pete is fighting for the rights of us!!"

Sam,"Oh.." They ran to the middle of the island. Pokemon were cheering for Pete to win.
Sam and Marc saw Pete lossing. He was being throw threw walls. Pete,"Uhh..."
He try to slice Bill, but missed. Bill burned his wounds. Pete was bleeding from the temple, gut, left shoulder, and mouth. Bill,"I will kill you now."

Pete,"I will not lose to-"
Bill used Dragon Claw. Pete went flying through a tree. Bill,"He's done now."
He looked back. Pete was standing, supported from his blade. Bill,"What will it take!? I keep attacking, yet you still live! I gave you scars, yet you still stand!" He Headbutted Pete to the ground. He flied up and used Sky Attack. Pete was sent to the crowd. Bill,"You are still alive?!"

Pete,"You can scar me.*Gets up* You can break my bones. You can hurt my people. You can kill me. But what you can't do- IS BREAK MY SPIRIT!!!"
He ran by Bill using Slash. Bill"!!!" Pete took his sword. He elbows Bill's spine, breaking it.
Bill,"!!!!!!" Pete started slashing Bill with his blade. Bill,"!!!!!"

Pete,"Eat this! Dragon Rage!!!"
Blue flame shot out of mouth at Bill. Bill began to burn to death. Everyone began to cheer, happy that they are free of Bill's fury. Pete rested his blade on his shoulder. Pete,"Marc. Sam. Lets leave. I will heal on the way."
Sam and Marc are amazed of his ability. They ran for him and took off to Waki Ta Island.
End

 

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I love it!!! but I know a guy who can help you make that into a movie.

"BREAK MY SPIRIT!!!!" Woo I love that part.

 

[Pyshcosocial12]

I'm listening...

 

[The Pig King]

The second chapter wasn't nearly as good as the first. You really need to spend time on your grammer. The reason the first chapter was good was because it had good sentences and grammer. With chapter two, it went down to the low grammer level of the rest of Sinnoh Stories. I'd really like it if you worked on the grammer a bit. It's a good story, it's just not written very well. No offense. I'm not trying to insult you or anything.

 

[Pyshcosocial12]

I know man! I ain't really good at stories, but no ones good at everything! I do better next time. See ya!

 

[The Pig King]

Allright. Try to make the next chapters like the first one. That was pretty good grammer. I don't mean the story, I mean the writing and grammer.

 

[Pyshcosocial12]

Okay. I dedicate this one to anime_aficonda!
Pete, Sam, and Marc arrived to another island. But not a good one. It was dark everywhere and the trees were like hands. Pete,"Well this is a nice neighborhood."
Sam stood in silence having a flashback.
(Flashback)
Sam was skipping happily as an Eevee. She saw a mean Umbreon.

Umbreon,"I will rule this island one day..."

Sam,"I can help!"

Umbreon,"Stay away! I hate children!"
Dark shadows encased Sam, giving her an ever fear of the darkness.
(Present)
Pete,"Sam are you okay? Sam?"
A shadow grabbed Sam, bringing her to the darkness.

Sam,"Pete!" She disappear.

Marc,"What was that!?"

Pete,"I don't know. But it has Sam."
Pete and Marc looked everywhere for her. As they were looking they found towns people.

Pete,"What happened to you all?"

Pokemon,"The darkness....him..."

Marc,"Who is him?"
A Umbreon walked up to Pete. He was gentle and was a teenager. He had a few stitches every where.

Umbreon,"Him is Mitch. He has taken over the town for 20 years. He is an evil old Umbreon. He uses magic to keep himself young forever. He gives us dark types a bad name. I'm Ryan, the town's people protecter. I fight off his sidekicks."

Marc,"That explains your stitches."

Ryan,"Yes. You should hide."
Six of his sidekicks came in, who were Umbreons.

Pete,"No time for that."
They circled Pete. He had took his blade off his shoulder and killed all of them without getting himself hurt. They dropped to the ground, with Pete's blade dripping blood.

Ryan,"Wow...I can't even fight four without getting a stratch!"

Pete,"Admire later. I got to save Sam."

Ryan,"I will come."

Marc,"Me too."
They walked to his palace. Ryan and Marc defeated all the goons, leaving there Mitch to Pete. Pete walked up to Mitch. All of his followers watched. Pete gave Mitch a punch in the face, seeing him fly over and hs followers watch. Mitch,"I know who and why you came. Pete. You want your friend."

Pete,"You read me like a book." His followers attacked, Pete defeated them all though with a Flame Thrower. He saw Sam in a cage. All the town's people were there, watching and hoping. Mitch attacked with Shadow Ball. Pete caught it and returned it with Fire Punch. Mitch looked unhappily. He started to play dirty, using his Shadows to slash Pete.
Pete,"Uhh!" Mitch came in with a full power Faint Attack, senting Pete into a wall. The wall was cracked with sitting there bleeding from the mouth. He had a huge smile on his face.

Mitch,"Why are you smiling!?"
Pete was behind him quickly.

Pete,"Because of your attemp to kill me."
He gave him a Fire Punch to the jaw, breaking it.

Pete,"This is for Sam!!! Coullier coup!"( Coullier is French for Neck meat)
He kicked him in the neck, flinging him. Ryan and Marc free Sam and Pete gave her his blade to kill Mitch.

Sam,"This is revenge!"
She slashed Mitch neck open, killing him. Pete took back his blade, then hugged with Sam.
Later..
They were at the docks. Pete and Marc gave farwell to Ryan to leade the town well.
They sail away into the morning sun. Ryan,"Hope to see you again!!!"
End

 

[Pseudonymiss]

Yesh! Kick BUTT ACTION!!!! I GET TO KOILLL!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Anyways, this kinda reminds me part Digimon, part One Piece and part our RPG for some reason! ^^ Thank you SO much for dedicating this to me! *milllions of huuugs!* ^^

I love this chapter mainly, cos you saved my life, and because I got to PWN people! ^^

 

[Pyshcosocial12]

Thanks! One part from One Piece was Coullier Coup.(Sanji kick) I need parts from things because it helps.

 

[The Pig King]

Great! But a few things. One, when you said sidekicks, you meant minions, right? And two, I think Coullier Coup really only works on a food-related character.

 

[Pyshcosocial12]

Yeah. To both. But it was worth it! Plus...I love food!