Pokémon Infinity (hand drawn fan comic)

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Introducing the latest Pokémon webcomic, courtesy of myself and Savvy! The comic is scripted, drawn and edited by the two of us, so the art style will fluctuate accordingly.

Pokémon Infinity
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The comic is hosted on our website, which can be found at: www.robocomics.com

Summary
In the region of Pelua, the Pokémon League Championships have once again begun! Two aspiring young trainers, Oscar and Bill, embark on a quest with their newly-obtained Pokémon to explore the mysteries of Pelua, create their 'dream teams', and conquer the Pokémon League!

The comic

Prologue
Comic 1
Comic 2
Comic 3

Chapter 1
Title page
Comic 1
Comic 2
Comic 3
Comic 4
Comic 5
Comic 6
Comic 7
Comic 8

Well, it's no Stuff of Legend, but we've all gotta start somewhere, right?

Yes, the comic will be featuring a number of original Pokémon created by Savvy and me. Don't worry, we plan on updating the site with a Pokédex so you can keep track of them. If you have any ideas or suggestions for new Pokémon, let us know - we may very well incorporate them into the comic!

Pokémon Infinity will be updated every Friday, but with any luck we'll build momentum and start updating twice, maybe three times a week.

We're already a part of the Drawn Pokémon Comic Alliance, but would like to get the word out about the comic in as many places as possible. If you'd like to help advertise our comic, here's a handy banner for you:


And that's everything! Fire away with your comments and constructive criticisms! Even advice about the site itself is welcome!
 
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I love, love, LOVE this to death! I'm half asleep right now, so I'll have to read this in the morning, but I love it! It has excellent panel layout for at least the first ones, but the last page with the prof has a lot with a bunch of dialog. (but it's probably merited I didn't read it yet)

Panelling and Panel pacing is so important to comics and is vastly overlooked. It won't matter how well you draw, if the panels are bad the comic looks bad. I also noticed you guys don't over use shading either! That is really impressive! I'll give a better critique when I start reading it, but really two big thumbs up so far.

I've been working on a Doshijin myself, I've got about 15 chapters written out with an arc summery for the first three done. I wanted to release it for July (with one chapter a month), but I guess it's only be if schedule permits (Which hasn't been so friendly as of now).

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Okay, now that I've read it, I can try to critique it a little better. First off, let me say that I love it! Writing is pretty good, Characters are pretty good, It really seems to have potential to do well!

I guess most people will immediately comment on the art not being up to par, but I think it works for this series because everything is drawn to style that it doesn't look out of place. My only comment would be sometimes the Balloon order is confusing, wither it is left to right or right to left, usually I thought balloon order to placement priority would be the top to bottom,then the sides (either left or right) (Unless they are separated enough apart). I think in a few panels the first balloon was near the bottom then the next was at the top, I had to double read it because I missed the bottom one. I wouldn't fix it, only think about it from the future on.
 
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Our first positive review! :crush: It's good to hear that we are getting the technical aspects, such as panelling, correct, as we have pretty much zero experience in comic making! And the point about the speech balloon order has been noted.

Today we have updated with a new comic and a series of profiles! This was actually made before the others, so is of noticeably... different... quality. Nevermind! Check 'em out!
 
You're talented, I really like the way you drew it. The story is nice, it's put together nicely too.
 
I may not comment, but I have to tell you, you guys got me hooked because I check back often for the new pages!
 
Wootage, our first regular reader!

We have updated again, introducing the last of our three starters and a new character!
 
lol, technically a Rock Throw hits ghost pokemon, but, lol keep it going!
 
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>_>

Maybe it was Strength (remembers the Gen II animation of a rock being thrown)
 
hmm. interesting. I might have to keep an eye on this.
 
Sorry everybody! Me and Savvy spent a couple of days in London, so were unable to finish today's strip in time. I know a missed update after an absence isn't very reassuring, but I promise we'll update as usual next Friday!
 
Updated once more! The shading took me ages so you'd better like it!
 
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