Pokemon Legend

[Pidgeot]

I am creating a fanfic about this, so this will tie in with it.

Here is the main plot:
All across the pokemon world, an evil group of pokemon is trying to make all pokemon bad. But one group of five people want to change this, and are fighting for the world.

Here are the availible pokemon:

Drifloon
[img]http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Image:218.png
Slugma
[img]http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Image:410.png
Sheildon
[img]http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Image:Spr_4p_408.png
Cranidos


My pokemon is Bulbasaur.
[img]http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Image:Spr_4d_001.png

 

[Gama]

Before I sign up, which I probably will end up doing, I'm going to tell you why pretty soon, people are going to jump on this and relentlessly criticise you until you're crying in the corner.

First of all, your storyline is very unclear. Not in a mysterious kinda way but in a kinda "What do you mean?" kinda way. How are the evil Pokemon making all Pokemon bad? Are they just convincing them to turn bad or have they got some kind of mind laser or something else?

Additionally, you've given an extremely limited choice of characters, with seemingly no reason. Is there a reason it is these five Pokemon or were they just picked out of a hat? I must say, it really does seem bizzarre that it should be those five, only Cranidos and Shieldon seem to have anything at all in common.

Another thing you're missing is a sign up sheet.
Are we actually allowed to make up our own personalities for these characters? And are they supposed to know each other? Arethey a team already? Come on, give us a hint!

Speaking of making up personalities, sign up sheets. How are people supposed to sign up?

Ok, I'll sign up after you look over this post and rectify everything I've said. Might seem like a lot but I *THINK* that if you can't do it, then this RPG probably won't be worth playing.

 

[Pidgeot]

Okay: Heres the sign up sheet:
Name:
Personalities:
History:
Gender:
Second pokemon: (this pokemon can be anything you want, apart from Legendaries)

This is my signup sheet:
Name:Harry
Personalities:Intelligent, strong pokemon trainer
History:Harry decided to stop the evil pokemon as he loves pokemon so much.
Gender:Male
Second pokemon:Rhydon

The evil pokemon are turning pokemon bad because the leader (who shall remain with no name until much further into the RPG) believes that he should have all pokemon bad, because then he would be able to control them easily. He is turning them bad by throwing black rings onto them, hypnotizing them.

Here all the new pokemon:
Omanyte, Kabuto, Lileep, Anorith, Cranidos, Sheildon.

I have put the number of characters to seven. That includes myself, and six other people. I will still have Bulbasaur.

They do know each other, as they were at school together for seven years. They are all 12 years old. And they are a team already.

Hope that's sorted everything out.

 

[Gama]

That's a great improvement! But it has raised a couple more questions... First of all, are we supposed to be trainers or Pokemon? Because now you've made it sound like trainers. Are you Bulbasaur? Or are you an intelligent strong trainer? I'm confused!

Also, do we know anything at all about the leader? Do we know, for example, if they are a Pokemon or a human?

 

[Pidgeot]

Here ya go:
We are all pokemon trainers, I am an intelligent, strong trainer.

And the leader shall remain a secret, apart from the fact that it is a pokemon.