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Hello! This is my preveiw of my current fanfic. PMD4. It is my new look on the series, it includes lots of discription, flavorable characters and lots of mythology!
Overveiw:
It is 20 years after the events of explorers of sky, time is restored once again, but a new threat arrises... to stop it the humans have sent two to deal with the problem, Lucas- a riolu, and Ty- a typhosion. but something tragic and unexpected happens. Lucas wakes up in a clinic and a pokemon named Tepig explains he found him after a huge fall. Lucas, unfortunetly has lost his memory, but nontheless, the two become good freinds. they start an exploration team and quickly rise to fame, but. a strange dream tells him of a grave danger and after a stunning realization they set out to find the elemental crystals to stop a great evil from bringing ruin upon the world...
Characters:
Lucas:
The main protagonist, he is a somewhat laid back and humorous person, but is quite serious when the time calls, he is gifted with intelligance and an unknown strengh, but would never put anyone else in danger, which can be his weakness sometimes.
Tepig:
Lucas's best friend, the two seem to go together perfectly at that. Tepig is a advid explorer and knows almost everything about exploring. he aspires to be just like the great explorers from years ago but can be a bit of a coward.
Ty:
He was to accompany Lucas through his journey but they got seperated. he is a technical wizard and even helped consturct the machines that allowed people to travel between worlds.
Zoroark:
The main antagonist. he is a ruthless ruler who wants to use the crystals to destroy the world as revenge. he usally send minions to do the dirty work, but is very powerful without them anyway.
The sages:
They were the ones to create the world along side arceus. there are eight, each for the essental element of the hevans. Ninetales, the kind hearted fire sage. Shaymin, the collected grass sage. Milotic, the beautiful water sage. Rhyperior, the strong earth sage. Luxray, the cool lightning sage. Braviary, the hasty wind sage. Guardevoir, The eldest light sage and the last, the sage of darkness, is yet to be known. they weild and protect their respective crystals and use their power to keep peace to the world.
Shade: (no complaining on the name!)
Classic anti hero, hails from an unknown land, he looks exactly like Lucas but with dark black fur (referance anyone?:look
He acts and speeks with the exact reverse manner as Lucas, cold and dark hearted. His power and capabilities are the only equal to Lucas as well. he was hired by Zoroark to track down and kill Lucas before he could make it to him. Shade followed without question, but along the way he starts to wonder about his lost past...
Locations:
I have no name for the place the country/kingdom the story take place in, so feel free to give me suggestions. :banghead:
Locations so far:
The town (again, no name yet)
Where the center of the action is. there are countless shops and buildings here, it even has a plaza and inn. In the skyline a huge castle overlooks the town, inside his the king Empolion himself along with his Dewott guards.
The sacred forest.
The forest to the north, it is dark and gloomy, but within it holds a holy tresure...
The southern desert.
A desert to the south. barren and lifless except for a small town.
Mt ash.
A blazing volcano, the resting place of a legendary monster.
Eastern coast.
a cape where they say a undersea palace resides.
Northwestern plains.
The storm ridden plains, another rest place of the crystals, but it is impossible to make it there without a horse.
Western ranch.
A Horse/apple ranch just out of town, home to Monferno, a rowdy rancher with a heavy montana accent. famous for both apple and... Ponies? :-/
Cant add story cuz it screws up the post (sorry!)
tell me what you think of this and give me some ideas. ill update when i have more devolopment going so see ya! :ksmile:
Overveiw:
It is 20 years after the events of explorers of sky, time is restored once again, but a new threat arrises... to stop it the humans have sent two to deal with the problem, Lucas- a riolu, and Ty- a typhosion. but something tragic and unexpected happens. Lucas wakes up in a clinic and a pokemon named Tepig explains he found him after a huge fall. Lucas, unfortunetly has lost his memory, but nontheless, the two become good freinds. they start an exploration team and quickly rise to fame, but. a strange dream tells him of a grave danger and after a stunning realization they set out to find the elemental crystals to stop a great evil from bringing ruin upon the world...
Characters:
Lucas:
The main protagonist, he is a somewhat laid back and humorous person, but is quite serious when the time calls, he is gifted with intelligance and an unknown strengh, but would never put anyone else in danger, which can be his weakness sometimes.
Tepig:
Lucas's best friend, the two seem to go together perfectly at that. Tepig is a advid explorer and knows almost everything about exploring. he aspires to be just like the great explorers from years ago but can be a bit of a coward.
Ty:
He was to accompany Lucas through his journey but they got seperated. he is a technical wizard and even helped consturct the machines that allowed people to travel between worlds.
Zoroark:
The main antagonist. he is a ruthless ruler who wants to use the crystals to destroy the world as revenge. he usally send minions to do the dirty work, but is very powerful without them anyway.
The sages:
They were the ones to create the world along side arceus. there are eight, each for the essental element of the hevans. Ninetales, the kind hearted fire sage. Shaymin, the collected grass sage. Milotic, the beautiful water sage. Rhyperior, the strong earth sage. Luxray, the cool lightning sage. Braviary, the hasty wind sage. Guardevoir, The eldest light sage and the last, the sage of darkness, is yet to be known. they weild and protect their respective crystals and use their power to keep peace to the world.
Shade: (no complaining on the name!)
Classic anti hero, hails from an unknown land, he looks exactly like Lucas but with dark black fur (referance anyone?:look
He acts and speeks with the exact reverse manner as Lucas, cold and dark hearted. His power and capabilities are the only equal to Lucas as well. he was hired by Zoroark to track down and kill Lucas before he could make it to him. Shade followed without question, but along the way he starts to wonder about his lost past...Locations:
I have no name for the place the country/kingdom the story take place in, so feel free to give me suggestions. :banghead:
Locations so far:
The town (again, no name yet)
Where the center of the action is. there are countless shops and buildings here, it even has a plaza and inn. In the skyline a huge castle overlooks the town, inside his the king Empolion himself along with his Dewott guards.
The sacred forest.
The forest to the north, it is dark and gloomy, but within it holds a holy tresure...
The southern desert.
A desert to the south. barren and lifless except for a small town.
Mt ash.
A blazing volcano, the resting place of a legendary monster.
Eastern coast.
a cape where they say a undersea palace resides.
Northwestern plains.
The storm ridden plains, another rest place of the crystals, but it is impossible to make it there without a horse.
Western ranch.
A Horse/apple ranch just out of town, home to Monferno, a rowdy rancher with a heavy montana accent. famous for both apple and... Ponies? :-/
Cant add story cuz it screws up the post (sorry!)
tell me what you think of this and give me some ideas. ill update when i have more devolopment going so see ya! :ksmile:
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