EVERYONE: - Complete Pokemon: Shadow Flame

[Pyshcosocial12]

Here's another story from Chimchar. Hope you like it!

Pete was walking through a forest for some alone time. As he was walking a mist began.
Pete,"Hmmm......Mist wasn't in the forcast." While he was walking he started to hear noises.
They were soft noises but they became loud. Pete looked back, seeing nothing behind himself. Pete,"Hello? Is anyone there?" There was no reply. Pete began walking again. The noises started once more. Pete started to run. Noises gotten louder. Pete fell to the ground. Blade was following him.

Blade,"Hmm....You weren't expecting me were you?" Pete tried to hit him with Flame Wheel.
Blade dodged it, pushing Pete to the ground, stepping on him.

Pete,"What do you want?!"

Blade,"To save you! You gotten weak since we met. I am here to help."

Pete,"How have I gotten weak? How can you help!?"

Blade,"Love, compassion , friendship. I gave you a power. Power of the Black Flame. It was to kill your emotions. To lead you to me."

Pete,"I'll never join you."

Blade,"You are going to."
Blade slashed Pete. Blood began to run. Blade's dark powers heal the slash. Pete's flames went black.

Pete,"Uhhh....Master. I will serve you. What is your biding?"

Blade,"There we go. I want you to go to town and kill the chief of the police force."

Pete,"Yes my lord."
Kon and Julia were in town looking for Pete. Kon,"Where is he?"
Suddenly the chief of the police force, Joe the Lucario, was throw out the window.
Julia,"Are you ok?"

Joe,"Yeah! Run!"

Kon,"Why?"
Pete had walked out of the broken window. Joe,"It's him!"

Kon,"Pete why?!"
Pete walked up, but other Lucarios were about to strike. Pete's paws became long, shadowy claws. He began to slice them all. When he was finished, all of them drop dead.

Kon,"Joe run!"
Pete striked her down, then disappeared.

Kon,"Why?..."
She fell to the ground. Julia picked her up and took her and brought her home.

Pete returned to Blade's base, a cave. Pete,"Lord I'm sorry. Joe lived."

Blade,"It's okay. The police force is cut down to one. Go and relax."

Julia patched up Kon. Kon,"I have to get him..."

Julia,"You can't. You're to banged up. I will get him."

Kon,"Be careful."
Julia had a hint where Blade's base was. She went there, making no noise. She found a room, much like a battling gound. She saw Eric, Blade, and Pete. Pete,"Someone is here."

Eric,"Good, evil, or neutral?"

Pete,"Good. The kind I hate."
Pete stared where Julia was hiding. Pete,"Julia why are you here?"

Julia,"For you. This isn't like you!"

Blade,"I'll kill this one. I don't want to get rusty."
Blade sliced Julia. She fell to the ground, bleeding. She used Bullet Seed but missed. Blade used Shadow Force, flinging her to the wall. Pete was watching, feeling the pain she was feeling. Julia,"Uhhhh....."
Blade was about to do the final hit. Pete's flame went red. He got in front of the attack and blocked it. Blade,"Why did you-"

Pete,"I got over the evil thing."
He began to fight Blade. He was slicing him, and burning him. Pete's paws began long, fire whip lashes. He spined them together and grabbed Blade's face, put him behind himself, and crashed him to the ground.

Pete,"Fire Gavel!"
Blade lied on the floor knocked-out. Eric and Blade disappeared. Pete lend Julia a hand and help her up.

Julia,"You sure you're good now?"

Pete,"Totally."
End

 

[Blackjack Gabbiani]

We've told you this before, but you *really* need to give us descriptions. It's hard to understand what's going on with just dialogue.

 

[The Outrage]

L,"Also needs to stop putting dialogue like this"

 

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Beautiful. Beautiful!! I love it, but please add more descriptions. Who is Eric?

 

[Pyshcosocial12]

Eric is one of Blade's servants. He is a Gengar. I will remember to add more description.