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EVERYONE: - Complete Pokemon: Shadow Reign

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This is will be pretty much summed up this way:Ash/Misty, Dawn/Ash(one sided=Dawn), Dawn/OC, May and Drew, Molly/Max and etc. It would be T for some foul langugage.



Prologue-Returning to Pallet

In the world live creatures known as Pokemon. Humans and Pokemon have co-existed together for thousands of years. There are over 400 known species of Pokemon in the world of many kinds. Many live in the woods while others would live in the scorching deserts and freeezing tundras. Other types of Pokemon live in the wide spread grasslands. There are some who live deep in the ocean and soar high in the skies.

There are still many mysteries surrounding Pokemon and hundreds more left waiting to be discovered. To find out more Pokemon, many scientists such as Professor Krane of the Orre region have dedicated their lives to research.

There are many ways that people bond with their Pokemon. Some become Coordinators and participate in Pokemon Contests in a great mix of battles and showing off. Others would fight Gym Leaders and participate in League Competitions and become Pokemon Masters. Some would later become Pokemon researchers.

There are some people who mistreat Pokemon and use them for their own evil, selfish purposes like Team Rocket. Yet, one criminal organization was most infamous and is Cipher, a group who steals Pokemon from their trainers and corrupt them by closing their hearts. It was thought that Cipher was put to a end when Michael, a young teenage trainer with his Jolteon managed to take down the organization and its leader Grand Master Greevil. After taking down Cipher, he partcipated in the newly established Orre Colosseum Circuit and the Champion Eagun and left for Kanto.

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During the night in northern Orre, a transport magnet train was passing through the region from Sinnoh. It worked with magnets to hover over the tracks. The monorail was painted black and white along its side and titled the Silph Magnet Line, an expansion project of the current Magnet Line overseen by Silph Co. to allow communications between Sinnoh and Orre.

It was currently passing through a mountainous area and had to slow down due to the sharp turns in the area. While passing through the mountains on their way to Gateon Port, it was ambushed by a squadron of helicoptors and people came out of the choppers entering into the train. The driver attempted to speed up but saw a bunch of large boulders blocking the way and a large creature with menacing eyes with only shining rainbow wings to distinguish it from the night. The train driver attempted to stop the train in order to save the Pokemon in transport and it fell out of the tracks and went on its side.

The driver went out the window and was frightened to see men pull out Pokemon, but they had a sort of dark aura. He broke out the door and tried to escape and was right in front of the creature which made a strong screech that frightened the driver to the woods. It grabbed the train and flew into the night sky with the helicoptors following it. He went as far he can and knew what he saw.

"Cipher's back...." Said the driver looking on as the creature and helicoptors disappeared in the night sky.

"I have to tell the police..." He ran into the woods into the nearest town to tell the authorities.

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This is the adventures of Ash Ketchum and his pal Pikachu as after their adventures in Sinnoh have ended and the gang has split up. With Dawn said she was heading home after winning the Sinnoh Grand Festival while Brock was called up to home not to soon after the Sinnoh Championships had ended to tell him that he had to take care of his siblingsd since they were on a third honeymoon. Ash was walking with Pikachu on his shoulder with Brock.

"This is where we part, Ash." says Brock looking at the fork on the road.

"Yup....I guess this is good-bye. So why you're needed in Pewter?"

Brock began explaining,"Well, my mom persuaded my dad to go on a third honeymoon to head over to the Hoenn region."

"That's nice.....so what about your siblings?" asked Ash

Brock was sad,"Well, I got stuck babysitting again...hopefully not for too long."

"Hey Brock, do you know how Misty and May are doing?" Wondered Ash of his two most closest female friends.

"That reminds me. Misty from I got via e-mail said that she was getting ready for a Water Pokemon convention in a place far away."

"Did it say where she is going to go?" Ash asked.

Brock read the email,"She didn't exactly give details.."

Ash then felt disappointed,"Ohhh...Well at least she's happy being the Cerulean Gym Leader."

"Oh I almost forgot, I heard from May."

Brock takes off his backpack and pulls out a postcard,"May had done good in the Grand Festival managing to reach a tie with Drew. She says right now they are dating and are staying over at Olivine."

"DREW??", Ash was shocked since when he first saw Drew, he was like a younger green-haired version of his former rival Gary Oak. It was surprising to him that they became a couple." You got to be joking."

"If you weren't so dense......." Brock was going to say something

Ash was angry,"How am i dense? Do you believe that Pikachu?"

"Pika-pi" Pikachu was nodding its head up and down agreeing with Brock's statment.

"You too?"

"Look Ash I understand that your present goals so far is to be a Pokemon Master. Am I right?" Ash could tell that Brock was being serious this time

"Yea you knew that all along since the day you joined me on my journey and the adventures through Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, the Battle Frontier and Sinnoh. What about that?"

Brock put his arm on Ash's shoulder,"I understand that you want to be the best but don't you think it's time to think of life after reaching your goal. You're probably the only one your age who hasn't or now has a girlfriend. I mean look at Gary. He's dating and he's a total jerk."

"What do you mean?"

"You know wha. Forget it...you'll get it soon." Looking again at the right path which leads to Pewter,"Well I have to go..see ya Ash." Gives Ash a small black case.

"Hey what's this, Brock?" looks at it.

"Oh I know that I won't be with you for a while and since you liked my cooking. I saved some leftovers of food and put it in this case. This can hopefully keep you full for at least a couple of days."

"Thanks Brock" They shake hands and go their seperate ways as Ash and Pikachu walk to Pallet Town while Brock looks at them.

"Good-bye Ash....Good luck to where you go next. Good-bye Pikachu!" Brock is waving his hand to his two friends

"Bye Brock.." Ash waves his hand until he couldn't see Brock anymore

"Pika-pi!!" Pikachu was on Ash's shoulder waving its front paw saying good-bye. He sees Ash saddened at the fact for the first time since he started his journey, he is only with Pikachu.

"Pika-Pika" Pikachu asked to is trainer on what is going to happen next.

"I don't know, Pikachu. For now, let's chill in Pallet Town and plan our next adventure. I need to put my Sinnoh Pokemon in Professor Oak's lab.."

Ash and Pikachu walk through the grasslands and woodlands between Pewter and Virdian. There he sees young amateur trainers battling in the woods or catching wild Pokemon. He wished he was with someone so he can have company and decided along the way walking to Virdian City to remember all the adventures he had so far......

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It was around the late afternoon around 5 P.M and after a few hours getting lost, he found his way past the Virdian Forest and was only a few miles. He knew he didn't have Max with him to use the Pokenav or Brock who was sort of handy with the map. Ash and Pikachu went past a few bushes and saw themselves right in a hill overlooking Virdian

"Pika-pikachu!!!" Pikachu looked in awe since it haven't seen the buzzing metropolis for some time now.

"I know Pikachu...Virdian seems beautiful this time of year. It has really increased in size. I never seen skyscrapers that tall in Virdian."

"Pika"

"I wonder if Agatha is still the Gym Leader of Virdian City."

He remembers the last time he visited Virdian City after the Hoenn League Championships when he saw an old woman who revealed herself to be Agatha, one of the Kanto League Elite Four, was serving as temporary gym leader of Virdian after its gym leader disappeared.

"Why don't we visit the Virdian Gym? What do you say Pikachu?"

"Pika-pi" It nodded in agreement wanting to go see.

"Let's go then Pikachu to Virdian"

While walking along the road to Virdian, they saw Officer Jenny rides in a policemotorcycle with her Growlithe, standard Pokemon for the PoliceKorps of Kanto. She waved to Ash and his Pikachu.

Jenny asked,"Hey, aren't you Ash Ketchum who went into second place in the Sinnoh Championships a few days ago."

"Yeah...I am...Did you watch the Sinnoh Championships?" Ash asked Officer Jenny.

"Of course. It makes me proud to see a fellow Kanto native represent his region in the Sinnoh Championships. Can I have your autograph please?"

Ash was blushing that he had a fan,"Well of course, do you have a pen?"

"Here you go." Hands him her blue pen,"Make it out to Officer Jenny."

Ash finished signing it and hands back the pad,"Here you go...mind doing me a favor Officer Jenny?"

"Sure..anything to help the second place winner of the Sinnoh League Championships." Officer Jenny seemed willing to do anything.

"Will you be willing to give me and Pikachu a ride to Virdian?" Ash asked her.

"Of course.." looks o her Growlithe who was sitting by the passenger seat, "Return Growlithe." She returns Growlithe to its Pokeball and Ash hangs on right in back of Jenny.

"Hang on tight....guys." Officer Jenny with Ash and Pikachu on back ride into Virdian in high speed getting pass all the traffic in the highway.

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Ash and Pikachu and Officer Jenny ride on the motorcycle throught the bustling streets of Virdians filled with amateur trainers buying Pokeballs and having battles with one another. They arrive at the Virdian Gym repaired and renovated and under the charge of a new Gym Leader ever since Giovanni,found to be the head of Team Rocket disappeared.

Ash and Pikachu go off the bike,"Thanks Officer Jenny. This is my stop."

"Okay bye Ash and Pikachu. Hope you enjoy your stay in Virdian."

"Okay I will. Bye." Ash waves his hand in good-bye as Officer Jenny rode off into the wind.

"Pika-pi" Pikachu was waving his little paw in thanks.

Ash turns around and sees the Virdian Gym, ever since he had left for the Battle Frontier has been fully repaired and expanded in size. He was in awe to see the large gym.

"Pika-pi" Said the little Pikachu who decided to walk on the streets.

Ash looked on,"It has gotten bigger since we last visited. I wonder where Agatha is???"

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A few blocks away, came a familar brown-haired spiky haired kid wearing a black shirt and khaki pants carrying a bunch of boxes with his Blastoise helping moving into the Gym.Gary was across the street with his Blastoise getting into the gym.

"I can't believe out of all the people they had to choose to become Gym Leader of this town...they had to pick me."

"Blast..." Blastoise seemed to be in agreement.

Gary continued complaining,"Ever since I got beat by Ash back in the Silver Conference, my life has gone down the toilet. I may have lost all my fame and respect but at least I have something to do other than live in the shadow of my friend."

"I wondered what ever happened to the other Gym Leader...."

"Blast..oise" Blastoise dropped his boxes on the street and Gary put his down to see what was bothering his Blastoise.

"What's wrong Blastoise?" Blastoise points his large blue paw to Ash Ketchum with Pikachu on the ground looking around for the Gym Leader.

"I wonder why he's in Virdian..I thought he was in Sinnoh. Oh well, might as well say hi to my former rival." Blastoise nodded and they walked over to say Ash.

Gary and Blastoise were nearby where Ash and Pikachu were who were still looking around the street not seeing Agatha.

"Pika-pi" Pikachu was scratching its yellow head imitating what its trainer was doing.

"I guess she's not here...might as well head back to Pallet."

Pikachu nodded in agreement and it jumped back to Ash's shoulder as they were about to leave.

"Hey Ashy-loser! You going to leave without saying hi to me." Said a familar voice to Ash.

"That can't be who I think it is", Ash turns around and sees Gary in his black shirt and khaki pants," Gary??"

"Yea, surprise! surprise! Thought that I was still in the Sinnoh region studying Pokemon?" Gary was laughing knowing that Ash have not seen in a year.

"Pika-pi" Pikachu was in shock and began talking to Blastoise of the reason why they in Virdian.

"Yea I did. Why the hell you're in Virdian and what's up with all those boxes." Ash was wondering.

Gary scoffed at Ash,"Is that how you treat an old friend? I say hi and you say why the hell I'm here. No wonder you're by yourself. Where's your girlfriend Misty?"

"She is not my girlfriend, Gary!" He explained of Misty's absence. "Where are your cheerleader squad, Gary?" Ash soon remembered the cheerleader squad that used to follow him in his early years as a trainer in Kanto and Johto." Ash ever asked with curiosity.

"I can blame you for the lost of my cheerleaders. Ever since I lost to you at the Silver Conference, it looked like they found someone else to cheer for and I got left in the dust." Gary was putting the blame on him.

Ash shrugged with Pikachu,"Hey...the better trainer won fair and square." Ash looked at the bozes that Gary was leaning on."Hey Gary, do you know what happened to Agatha? What's with the boxes?"

"Oh yeah, Agatha retired from the Elite Four and in effect, gave up the gym leader title to this town a while ago. The Elite Four decided to look up experienced trainers as candidates to run the Gym."

Ash looks at the boxes again,"So what are you Gary? You couldn't be a Pokemon researcher like your grandpa so now your a delivery guy for the New Gym Leader here."

"Actually if you must know, you're looking at the new Virdian City Gym Leader." Gary stated in his former prideful way.

Ash's jaw dropped as his neighbor and former rival had become the new Gym Leader and didn't believe it,"When did that happen? I thought you were going to be a Pokemon researcher."

Gary responded,"I thought my career as a Pokemon researcher was going to be permanent but not after I losed to you, Lance battled me and I won which she said i was going to be a candidate to be a Gym Leader. Not after you were in second place, I was confirmed by the League to become a Gym Leader."

Ash was well impressed,"So I'm assuming your Pokemon is more powerful than the last time we fought." Ash said

"I guess so...." Gary knew what Ash wanted to do and decided to say it himself,"So you wanna battle, Ash?"

"You read my mind Gary!" Ash and Gary head inside the Gym arena and they each went to their own side. Gary called one of his referees to come and referee the battle.

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While Ash tells Gary of his adventures with Brock and Dawn over in the Sinnoh region, Jessie, James and Meowth were in their Team Rocket Meowth Balloon lost for days since they lost track of the twerps since they split up back at Sinnoh

"I'm so hungry.."said James

"Mime-Mime" Said James' Mime Jr. who was hungry as well.

Jessie looked down from the balloon looking at the beautiful Kanto grasslands with her goggles,"Now where are we?"

Wobuffet comes out of its ball,"Wobbbafet!!!" It put its arm in the form of a salute and Jessie quickly returned it to its Pokeball.

"It's been days since we seen the twerps..." said Meowth who's stomach was growling,"I could use some baby back ribs."

"Are you checking the map?" asked Jessie who was wondering where they were.

James and Mime Jr. was getting from their bag, an old PDA that was bought in a pawn shop and was looking over a holographic image of the Kanto region.

A holographic voice made,"Location is in the Kanto region in the vicinity north of Virdian City.Mime Jr. packs up the PDA.

"Where are we again ?" asked Meowth

"It's days like this that make me want to stop chasing those twerps." James said.

"What are you sayin' James?" Said Meowth,"Just because for the past 7 years we had failed to capture Pikachu or any Pokemon by the way.

Jessie said,"You guys would think in those seven years, we would've had something for the Boss. Maybe we should just quit."

Meowth angry does Fury Swipes on both James and Jessie.

"What did you do that for?????" They said in unison with a angry tone.

"Sure, we may have not caught any Pokemon especially Pikachu but we had never gave up and with failure, comes learning so each time you get better. We did conquer Hoenn and Sinnoh for Pokemon."

James said,"Don't you mean they conuered us? The twerps did the work and we got blasted off."

"Who cares about the minor details. It was the three of us that survived, now the Boss is definetely going to make us Admins of our own branch." Meowth said.

Jessie jumped up in a renewed sense of confidence,"Meowth, you're right! Through thick and thin, we'll won't stop until Pikachu is ours!"

"That's right!" Meowth and James said in unison

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Gary Oak and Ash Ketchum decided to have a small battle for old time's sake. The referee was there and agreed to supervise the Pokemon battle and they entered the battlefield, the same as it was when Ash challenged the gym.

Gary grinned, "Just because I'm no longer your rival doesn't mean I'll give you a run for your money," He grabbed one of his Pokeballs.

"I'm sure you will after all you're the Gym Leader of the Virdian Gym now! So are you ready?" Ash said

Gary smiled, "Of course!"

The referee came in, "This is a two on two friendly battle between the Virdian Gym Leader Gary Oak and the challenger Ash Ketchum. The challenger will go first. Only the Gym Leader may use substitutions."

Ash smiled and threw his Pokeball, "Let's go Aipom!!"

"Ehhh...Ooo...Ahhh...EEeee" Aipom was ready to battle.

Gary said, "Hmmmm...an Aipom. Come on out Scizor!"

"Scizor!!" It showed off its claws to Aipom to intimidate it...

The referee lowered his flag, "NOW BEGIN!!!"

"Now Aipom! Use Swift!!" The Monkey Pokemon jumped up in the air and with its hand-tail, unleashed a Swift Attack right for Scizor.

Gary ordered, "Dodge it and use Quick Attack!!!" Scizor nodded and jumped high in the air at top speed and went quickly hitting Aipom causing much damage.

Ash was thinking, 'That Scizor of Gary's sure became quicker since the Silver Conference but my Aipom can still take his Pokemon down.' "Now Aipom use Mach Punch on Scizor's chest!" With Scizor being in such close contact with Aipom, it was easy for it to punch Scizor with much difficulty causing it to fly into the ground. "Ha!! Looks like we beat your Scizor, huh Gary??"

Gary tapped into the mind of Scizor, 'Okay Scizor. We fooled Ashy-boy and his Aipom. I want you to use a Hyper Beam on Aipom.' Scizor right before landing hard on the ground delivered a Hyper Beam knocking out Aipom.

"AIPOM!!!!!" screamed Ash running to the fallen Pokemon, "Are you okay??"

"EH......" Aipom fainted and Ash returned it to its Pokeball while Scizor was returned to its Pokeball.

The referee said, "Aipom is unable to battle. Scizor is the winner!"

"Wow Ashy-boy. I expected much from the runner-up from the Sinnoh Championships," Gary laughed.

Ash smiled, "I was just testing you," looks to Pikachu, "Ready buddy?"

"Pika-PIKA!!!!"

Gary smiled, "Your first Pokemon? I always wanted to battle again your Pikachu so lets see if your first Pokemon could handle mines. GO BLASTOISE!!"

"BLASTOISE!!!!" It flexed its large body and gave a glaring look to it.

The referee said, "BEGIN!!!"

"Blastoise use Hydro Cannon!!" This shocked Ash, as only the most powerful Water Starter Pokemon could learn this rare, yet powerful attack and he couldn't even teach it to his Squirtle or Totodile. Blastoise using its cannons sprayed a huge load of water right for Pikachu.

Ash ordered, "Let's dodge that and use Quick Attack!" Pikachu quickly dodged the water blast and with its agility hit Blastoise pretty hard.

"Nice moves...let's see if you'll dodge this. Use Water Pulse on Pikachu!!!," grinned the spiky-haired Gym Leader.

'Wow he's really going to scare with me with a Water Pulse. Doesn't he know that Water-type moves are not that effective on Electric," He thought and ordered, "Pikachu! Jump high in the air and dodge that attack!" It jumped in the air seeming to have missed the Water Pulse

Gary begins to laugh uncontrollably, "Hehehehehehehehe..."

"What so funny Gary," said an annoyed Ash, "Let me in on the joke."

Gary said, "That Water Pulse that Pikachu dodged is still there. Look behind you." Ash turned and saw a watery ball right above him. "NOW BLASTOISE AIM FOR PIKACHU!!!" The Water Pulse hit Pikachu very hard and yet in anger, sparks were flying over the we battlefield.

"Looks like you made Pikachu mad! Pikachu use Volt Tackle!!" Ash pointed to Blastoise. Pikachu began running to Blastoise eventually becoming a quick, yellow ball of electricity and the heavy Water-type couldn't dodge it making it fall to the ground and faint.

"Blastoise!!" Gary was surprised that his mightiest Pokemon in his roster has fallen to the little cute electric rat.

"Blastoise is unable to battle and Pikachu is the winner," said the referee which caused Ash to shout in joy and hug the little Electric type giving it compliments.

Gary screamed, "HEY ASHY-LOSER!!! ITS NOT OVER 'TIL ITS OVER! GO MAGMAR!!" The Pokeball was thrown unto the battlefield and the Pokeball materialized into Gary's Magmar which showed off its large, flaming body to the electric rodent.

"You still have enough energy, buddy to destroy Gary's Magmar?" He asked the little rodent in his arms and the little rodent nodded and jumped back on the field.

"BEGIN!!!!!!!!," shouted the referee.

Ash then shouted, "Okay Pikachu use Thunder!!!!"

"Magmar! Use Ember!!" Gary ordered. At the same time, both Pokemon unleashed their attacks injuring them both but Pikachu's attack managed to take down Magmar causing it to faint

"Magmar is unable to battle and Pikachu is the winn....." The referee was about to say but Pikachu didn't have a scratch.

"Magmar is unable to battle. Pikachu is the winner. The challenger won the match." The referee said.

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Gary and Ash were now outside the city and congratulating his old rival for the amazing first battle as the new Gym Leader. It was the late afternoon at around 6:30 PM and Ash was on his way to Pallet and the sun was setting over the golden sky.

"Hey Ash, that was a good battle. I didn't have a good battle like that with someone for a long time. Better than those challengers today...."

Ash responded,"Only you can guarantee a great battle, Gary. Not even the trainers up north in Sinnoh were as good as you, man."

"So Ashy-boy, so where are you going next?" asked Gary.

Ash scratched his head,"Hmmmm...I don't know. I been to pretty much everywhere as far as I know."

"Oh Ashy-boy, no matter how good you are. There will be better trainers." Gary whispers to Ash,"There's a region north of Johto known as the Orre region. It's a very arid region and many of the toughest trainers gather there and they recently have something called the Orre Colosseum Circuit."

"Orre?" Ash was questioning since he never heard of the place,"Why come I never heard of this place from my parents?"

"It used to be very infamous for its crime. That's what I heard from my pen-pal Rui that it is."

Ash was wondering,"Okay, thanks Gary. I think I might pay a visit to the Orre region so when the next ferry?"

Gary goes on his PDA and goes searching the information on ferry schedules to head to Orre from Pallet Town."It's tomorrow and all you have to do is show your Trainer Card."

"Hey what's that thing there?" Ash was wondering at the multimedia disc-shaped item that Gary was using with his stylus.

"Oh this little thing. Grandpa gave this while he was visiting his collegague Professor Krane. It's an old model since it has the email function, map and radio function only."

Ash was very curious and wanted to know about the Orre region,"Who is this Professor Krane and what does he specialize in?"

"How can you not know about Professor Krane? He's like Grandpa here...he's very famous ever since him and a collegague invented the Purify Chamber and a modified version of the Snag Machine." Closes his PDA

"What is the Purify Chamber?" Ash was rather curious that Gary knew about these things and Ash didn't.

"Okay. Have you heard of Shadow Pokemon?"

"No."

"They are Pokemon who are corrupted and their hearts are closed making them cold-hearted battle machines." Gary explained to Ash.

"Don't worry Ash, it has at least three years since Orre has seen Shadow Pokemon. It's a pretty untamed region of mainly arid deserts in the south and the many mountains in the north."

Gary looks at his watch,"Well my assistants at the gym must be worried and it is getting late so I got to go."

"Okay I guess this is good-bye Gary. I hope you enjoy your new Gym Leader position."

"Well, it was good to see you Ashy-boy. Good luck on everything you do."

Ash with Pikachu on his shoulders begins walking away from Gary in the path to Pallet Town. Ash and Pikachu said their good-byes to Gary Oak and are now en route to Pallet Town.

"So, Pikachu.." Ash from hearing of what Gary said decided to head to the Orre region as his next destination,"Looks like Orre is going to the next place we're gonna travel buddy!"

"Pika-Pika-pi" Pikachu agreed on their destination and were now headed back to Pallet to take the ferry to Gateon. What they didn't know of the dark forces emerging out of somewhere far away...
 
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I DONT OWN POKEMON AND I NEVER WILL


Chapter 1-Meeting with Old friends

It was the early night as Ash and Pikachu managed to be in close promixity since from the path, he could see good old Professor Oak's lab and further on, his home. He was homesick and wanted to see his mom and Professor Oak and all the Pokemon in the lab so he decided to head for the Lab. Pallet Town hasn't changed a bit except for the addition of a few recently-built homes.

"Pika-pi!" Pikachu was happy to return to his trainer's hometown

"Just a few more miles until we get back home and rest for tomorrow."

"Pika-pi!" Pikachu didn't want to hesitate and began running to Pallet Town on all fours.

Ash was shocked as within seconds, Pikachu was nearly a hundred yards ahead and getting further away,"Hey! So you wanna race?'

Pikachu was at first ahead of Ash but its small body quickly needed energy to continue and it had a little body so it had to slow down leading Ash to quickly catch up and was now ahead..

"Pika-pi!!! Pika-pikachu! (Not fair!)" Pikachu was in a angry tone saying it wasn't fair that its trainer was larger.

"Too bad Pikachu. Looks like I'm getting there before you!" Ash then laughs at Pikachu and accidentaly hits himself into a tree really really hard..

"Owww...my face...It hurts." He removes his hands from his face and sees Pikachu laughing at it

"Pika-Pika-pi (Ha-ha-ha you went right into the tree!)" Pikachu began running to take advantage and was within only a mile away from home.

Quickly recovering,"Oh damn, Pikachu 's beating me! Won't let that happen!" Ash begins running very fast and does manage to outrun Pikachu.

"Ha-ha-ha!" Ash was laughing and began speeding up

"Pika-pi!!!" Pikachu was too tired to continue on and began walking leading Ash to win.

"Yes!" Ash looks at Pikachu who was crawling in the dirt path refusing to admit defeat,"Looks like I won this time!"

"Pika-pika"

"Looks like neither Professor Oak or Tracey is there. Strange...."Ash knocks on the door but he doesn't hear anyone come down. He knocks again patiently and finds the door open.

"Weird, I guess Tracey forgot to lock the door...." Ash was a bit creeped out as there was no one in the house.

"Pika-Pika" Pikachu was frightened a bit.

Ash passed the room where Professor Oak did his research and was searching for Professor Oak or Tracey or his mom if they were around and the door he left opened suddenly closed."Damn, if anyone here, I get my Pikachu to Thunderbolt you!)

Everyone went out of their hiding places in the lab and jumped throwing balloons and party favors all over the room. They yelled, "Surprise!!" at unexpecting Ash who fell to the floor and bumped his head.

"Why is everyone here in my house?" He asked his mom, Delia Ketchum, a brown-haired woman in her mid 30s. Pikachu was chased by some of the Pokemon outside.

"Everyone is here to say congratulations to you on reaching second place in the Sinnoh League Championships. Almost all your friends are here to bring you a present."

Ash looks around and sees one of his friends who used to travel with him, May Maple who was carrying a present. "May,you here?"

"Yea, Ash. Aren't you glad to see me? Here's your present." She smiles and hands him a colorfully wrapped present.

"What is it??" Ash asked trying to shake up the box to see what it was. "Hopefully it's not something stupid and girly I hope!"

May said angrily, "Hey! Me and Drew spent days going around the grasslands in Johto wasting valuable time training looking for a present!! DO YOU WANT YOUR PRESENT OR NOT!"

"Okay! Okay ! I want your present." Ash immediately rips off the wrapping paper and sees a small glasslike case with an blue and black egg inside, "Cool, a Pokemon Egg. Thanks May..." hugs May very tightly being grateful with the present

Ash asked May, "So how was the Johto region by the way?"

"It was beautiful especially with my Drew around...." May was about to go into detail about their many dates.

"Okay Okay! I don't want to know. I just wanted to know how did you get here?" Ash asked and in the background, all of his friends were celebrating and chatting to one another.

"It was your friend....Geru Gara..something???"May was saying the wrong name of course and Ash quickly corrected her

"It's Gary! But how does he know about you?" Ash wondered since May and Gary never met since Gary was over at the Sinnoh region.

May responded,"Drew knows Gary Oak since their friends in that new social network website known as MyTrainer and that he gave me and Drew the money for airplane tickets directly to Cinnabar where we took a ferry to Pallet. He planned the entire party"

While Ash and May were talking, Gary, wearing his usual black shirt and beige cargo pants, came up from behind Ash,"Peeka-boo Ashy-boy."

"Oh, hi Gary.." May greeted the spiky haired kid.

Gary saw her,"Hi May, where's Drew??"

"Outside with everyone else and their Pokemon..." Gary told her and May said thanks and went outside..

Ash turned around,"Gary,how did you manage to get here before I could??"

"Ashy-boy you are slow in traveling. I used your Charizard to fly myself from Virdian right after you left...." Gary explained..

Ash asked,"How did Liza lend you MY Charizard??"

"We've dated a while back and still are close friends and I told her I was your friend and so she lend me him." Gary smirked at him.

Ash asked,"So where is my Charizard?"

"He's outside resting watching the other Pokemon play. I go let ya see him." Ash and Gary go outside to where everyone was either talking or dancing outside. "I'll hold on here to your Egg and place it in your bedroom." Carries the Egg and Ash thanks him

Points to Charizard showing off its Flamethrower to Ritchie's Quilava and Liza's Charizard, "He's with the other Pokemon in the far left." Gary turns with the Egg and talks to Tyson, one of Ash's rivals who was with his Meowth by the punchbowl.

Ash walks to Charizard and in the bushes, not that far away the infamous Team Rocket trio, James and Meowth were looking from the bushes at the party while Jessie was searching for berries. Meowth was looking with his binoculars at the food everyone was eating

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"Look at the amount of food they have at that party! It's a delicacy from shrimp puffs to cheeseburgers." Meowth's mouth was watering at the food everyone was eating. Meowth's stomach was growling,"Ooohhh I didn't have anything to eat in weeks."

James' mouth was watering and took the binoculars,"Let me see that!"

"Ya' didn't have to snag it from me!" said Meowth..

"Ohhh....they have shrimp puffs!! My absolute favorite! I haven't had them since I was a little boy..." He begins remembering putting an image of a younger version of himself in one of his parent's many summer cottage,"When the Sinnoh summer cottage was flooded by the occasional rain, we come to the one in the Orange Islands to stay..."

"Wait a minute, you had a summer cottage back at them Orange Islands and you didn't tell us." Meowth was putting his arms to his sides.

"Oh yea,I must have forgot..." James shrugged his shoulder, "Can I go on, now??" James asked Meowth..

"Oh yea sure go on.." Meowth told and James began to continue where he left off...

"So in our cottage, we had a man named Chives who was a excellent French gourmet chef who was skilled at shrimp puffs and he...." He heard noises from the bushes only to see it was Jessie who was carrying a basket of berries from the forest.

"Hey guys, where were you guys? I've been searching through this large forest collecting berries on the way trying to find you guys."

"Oh Jessie. Sorry we saw a fire nearby so we thought come there to see what was there. They have food!" James was excited and wanted to go there and eat.

Jessie was angry,"So i wasted my time gathering these berries for us and you guys didn't TELL ME there was food only a couple of miles AWAY! I'm gonna wring your necks!!!!"

" Sorry Jessie that we didn't tell ya. Just have a look at the food yourself!"Meowth said .Jessie snatches the binoculars from Meowth..

"Let's see what we have here.....hmmmmm There's burgers, chicken, baby back ribs and all that good stuff.." She sees through the binoculars Pikachu and many of the guest's Pokemon out playing and sees Ash walking towards a Charizard, "Hey its the twerp and his Pikachu!"

Meowth takes back the binoculars,"Forget the Pikachu, look at all the Pokemon over there!!!!"

Meowth like he usually does pictures his teamates an imaginary picture with the Team Rocket Boss using the Pokemon they are looking at for his own personal uses and imagine him saying him and Jessie and James will be greatly rewarded.

"Pokemon equals promotion, yachts, friends!!!" Jessie, James and Meowth shouted with joy at picturing the Boss rewarding them. They head to the woods to built a machine capable to catching all those Pokemon..

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Meanwhile back at the party, Ash saw Charizard showing off its flamethrower to the fellow Fire-type Pokemon that were around roaring to impress Liza's Charizard which it had a small crush on.

"Hey Charizard! You missed me???" Ash butted in the middle of the Fire Pokemon looking in awe at Charizard who to show that he missed his master, showered him with a Flamethrower burning his clothes to a crisp and was roaring.

Max, a black-haired kid about 12 years old, came up with his Gallade, evolved from the Ralts he rescued once and became his first Pokemon after he returned to Petalburg, was right behind him greeting him. Max wore the hat Ash gave to him and had a green variation of the clothes Ash wore on his Hoenn adventures and now wore contacts. Along with him, was a young blonde-haired teenager around the same age who looked a little familiar to Ash holding her hand with Max

"Hey Ash! No time no see.." Max said waving his right hand to Ash.

Ash turned around and saw the black haired teenager, "Hey Max, long time no see!" He saw the girl next to him and knew she seemed familiar somewhere,"So who's this??"

Molly said, "Don't you remember me Ash??" It had been more than five years since Ash saw her as the sweet, little daughter of the Pokemon researcher back at Greenfield in the Johto region.

"You seem familiar....from somewhere.." Ash has a faint idea of who the teenager is but couldn't make it out...

She said, "It's me Molly Hale?? The little girl and the daughter of Professor Hale!! Don't you reconize me??"

Ash then could remember the little girl imaged in his head, "Molly?? You grown a lot. So assuming from the Pokeballs you have, you're a trainer along with Max here?"

"Of course, I managed to get my 8 Badges and beat the Johto League while Max here beat the Hoenn League and then we both met for the Kanto league and we became rivals." Molly said.

Max interrupted, "In the Indigo Conference after collecting eight badges we both cheered on for each other as we defeated everyone in the preliminaries then the main tournament then the semi finals and the final match between me and Molly."

"So who won??" Ash inquired Max, "You or Molly here?"

Molly answered, "Well we were neck in neck and each had one Pokemon left. He had his Gallade while I had my Ursaing and after a tough battle both are Pokemon had fell and it was a tie. Then after that..." She stopped blushing at Max who was blushing as well looking into her eyes.

"So what's going on between you guys? You guys do seem prettty close if you know what I mean..." Ash was teasing Molly and Max

"I can we can go out with it. After both winning a trophy of the Indigo Conference, we did have feelings for each other and kissed and started going out taking a break from Pokemon for the time being. Then your friend Gary came in while we were in Vermillion to invite us to here." Max told Ash.

"Should've known from the moment I saw you guys that you two were an item. Love was never a thing for me..." Ash said

Molly interrupted, "....If you weren't so dense, you could've had that Misty girl who has hanging around with you..By the way, where is she? Isn't she in this party?"

"No, she wasn't in Cerulean City and it looks like she was no longer serving as the Gym Leader there anymore..." He said then decided to change the subject, "So Molly and Max? I would like to see some of you guy's Pokemon."

Molly grabbed her six Pokeballs, custom made by Kurt, and threw him in into the air, "Guys! Come on out and have some fresh air!" The Pokeballs fell to the ground and a Urasing, Hitmontop, Remoraid, Tauros, Scyther, and Wartortle materialized and were playing around with the other Pokemon in the backyard.

"Okay, Ash time to show you my Pokemon!" grabs his five Pokeballs, each having a mark on them to distinguish them from the rest, and throws 'em in the air, "Come on, guys!" The Pokeballs fell to the ground and a Quilava, Rhyhorn, Pidegotto, Miniskhan(pre evolved form of KangasKhan, and Grovyle.

"What kind of Pokemon is that there?" Ash pointed to the purple Miniskhan that was looking around at its new environment it was in and looking at the new Pokemon.

Ash looks up on his Sinnoh Pokedex and tries looking up on the little Pokemon by searching it, "No data on this Pokemon." he closes his Pokedex. "Where did you find that little Pokemon?"

Max grabbed Miniskhan and grabbed him, "This little Pokemon I got from Professor Oak when I just arrived in the Kanto region as an Egg. I didn't have any information on this little cutie on my Pokedex neither . It was from the region called Orre or something." Max explained....

"Hey Max, how about a battle with me ? What do you say?" Ash asked of the young teenage trainer.

"A battle? With the Sinnoh frontrunner ? I don't think so......" Max was going to head with Molly to talk to Brendan Birch, one of Hoenn's finest trainers who was talking with his old pal, May.

"Remember back before you returned to Petalburg that I promised when you became a Trainer, that someday we'll have a battle just the two of us." Ash had a flashback......

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May was waiting in the ferry showing the tickets to the sailor ready to head back to Petalburg after getting in a tie with Ash in a unofficial Pokemon contest. She was with her Blaziken of course and waiting for her brother talking to Ash and Brock on the docks..

"Come on Max! If you don't come in the next few minutes, I'll leave you there with Ash and Brock!" May was shouting out loud since she was on the ship..

The sailor informed her, "Miss, tell your brother to hurry up. We're on a tight schedule and we are needed to arrive at Slateport by tomorrow morning..."

"Okay sir." She said nicely to the old sailor and turned to Max, "You heard that! Get your butt down here!"

Max turned to his sister, "Give me a few moments talking to Ash and Brock.." She sighed with the fact of having a little brother and went with her Blaziken to the ship to wait.

"So I guess this is where we part ways..." Brock looked at the calm peaceful sunset...

Max was crying, "I'll miss you guys. I promise you I will be a great trainer once I return to Petalburg to get my first Pokemon..."

Ash remarked putting his hand on Max's black hair, "We believe you will be a great trainer. Who knows you might be a better trainer than me?"

"Do you really mean that, Ash??"

"Of course, so where are you going to start your journey, Max?" Ash wanted to know of where this new trainer was headed for.

Max responded, "I think I'm going to head to Hoenn first of all and become the Champion!!"

"I want to wish you good luck to become Hoenn League Champion. Here I want you to have this..” Ash took off his hat and showed his messy black hair.

"You don't need to give me your hat, Ash...It's fine really.." Max tried to give back the hat.

"It's okay...I have plenty of hats. That's just my gift to you for your first journey. In fact, I promise the next time we meet, we'll have a battle."

Max hugs Ash and starts crying, "Thank you, Ash. You don't know how much this meant to me...." He starts wailing..

Brock interrupts, "Your sister is waiting for you. You should go now. Here's some food for you and your sister when you come back to Petalburg and some recipes for your mom."

"I appreciate this guys..Well good-bye guys and good-bye Pikachu." Max heads for the ship and waves his hand. Ash and Brock does the same.

"Pika-pi Pikachu!" Pikachu waves along in good-bye and within minutes, the ship left port and Ash and Brock went home...

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"Now I remember, Ash. Those were good times. I accept your challenge, Ash. How about a six on six battle to make this interesting?"

"Fine by me. I show some of my pals from Sinnoh. So who's going to judge?" Ash asked Max and out of the blue, Tracey shows up with his Scizor.

"Hey Ash! Hey Max. How's it going with you two?" Tracey asked.

Max said, "We're doing okay. I can see you evolved your Scyther into a Scizor."

"Oh yea Scyther evolved when I left him with Professor Oak for a quick trip to the Orange Islands. I was quite surprised when I saw him. Isn't that right Scizor?"

"Scizorrr.." It was in a happy mood despite its age, it was very strong.

"So Tracey since Brock isn't here to judge us in our battle. Can you judge?" Ash asked.

"Of course, Ash." Tracey said and the three guys went to a patch of grassland not that far from the party so they could battle. Ash called his Pikachu and his other Pokemon to come while Max did the same.

"You better be ready. Just cause we're friends won't say I'll be easy with you." Ash said to his teenage challenger.

"I only want the best from you, Ash Ketchum." Max said

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"Okay now we're here. Let's get this over with!" Ash declared

"This is a three on three Pokemon Battle. Both trainers may switch Pokemon when necessary. The trainer with the least amount of fainted Pokemon in ten minutes is the winner.

"That will be me.." Ash bragged

Max grabs one of his Pokeballs, "You wish....Go Quilava!"

The Pokemon materialized and like its flames, had a fiery attitude, "Quilava!"

"Hmmmm Quilava a Fire Type good choice. Come on out Aipom !" He threw the pokeball into the ground materializing.

"Pom-Pom" Aipom was jumping around happily and saw Quilava and was ready for battle.

"Aipom Use Focus Punch!" Aipom's tail began to glow slowly ready to charge up for the attack.

Max laughed, "Bad move Ash. Quilava use Flamethrower!" Quilava threw a fiery attack straight for Aipom injuring it making it fall to the ground. "Now that Aipom's down. Get close and use Hyper Beam!" Quilava was heading for Aipom at high speed and looked like Aipom was a goner.

Ash laughed, "That's what I knew you would do. Aipom use Protect and then Mach Punch!"

"Pom!" Aipom used Protect to shield itself from the Hyper Beam then while Quilava was trying to restore energy, Aipom threw a Mach Punch at Quilava making it fall to the ground.

"Quilava get up!" Max begged its Quilava to go on and then in a surprise, began to glow...

"Is Quilava evolving now???" Max was in amazement seeing his Pokemon evolve.

Quilava's body gotten larger and its flame increased in size and was now on two legs instead of four. "Typhlooo..sion."

Ash claps his hand, "I should commend you for your new Typhlosion. Doesn't mean you'll win."

Max checks his Pokedex for Typhlosion, " Typhlosion, the Volcano Pokemon. It can hide behind a shimmering heat haze that it creates using its intense flames. Typhlosion create blazing explosive blasts that burn everything to cinders."

"Aipom. Pay no mind to the Typhlosion. Use Agility then Mach Punch." Aipom is running and comes up with a Mach Punch."

"Use Flamethrower!" Typhlosion burns Aipom to a crisp but its Flamethrower did not deter Aipom's Mach Punch causing it to faint."

"Typhlosion is unable to battle. Aipom wins." Tracey declared. A few people from the party decided to come and watch from a distance.

"You did good, Typhlosion return." He returned his tired Pokemon back to his Pokeball.

"Aipom return. You need your rest." He returned Aipom to his Pokeball and called out Pikachu, "You ready pal?"

"Pika-pika-pi!!"

Max said, "Nice choice picking Pikachu. But come on out Miniskhan!" The little Pokemon materialized and growled cutely..

"Mini...." The little purple googely eyed Pokemon began looking at the flowers and growled happily.

"You must be kiddin me. Pikachu will beat that thing in a second." While Ash was laughing at the choice Max picked out, Pikachu was laughing at its opponet.

"Shouldn't underestimate Miniskhan. He's been well raised and is more than a match for Pikachu. Let's begin. Why don't you start Ash?'"

"Pikachu, use Agility then Thunderbolt!" Pikachu starts speeding up and thunderbolts Miniskhan but it looked like it didn't obtain any damage. "What the hell?"

Max was laughing, "You should know that Electric types like Pikachu have no effect on Ground types like Miniskhan. Now Miniskhan use Focus Punch!"

"Minis...KHAN!" Miniskhan's claw glowed as it charged energy and headed straight for Pikachu.

Ash ordered, "Iron Tail to counter Focus Punch!"

"CHuuuu!" It's tail managed to deflect Miniskhan's Focus Punch and losing focus it sprang up launching another Iron Tail hitting Miniskhan in the head.

Ash and Max noticed more and more people from the party coming to watch but they remain focus on their battle. "Now Miniskhan, use Hyper Beam on Pikachu!"

"Mini.....KHAN!!!" For a small Pokemon, it managed to pull a powerful Hyper Beam with Pikachu narrowly dodging it but it was enough for it to be injured causing it to fall.

Right when Miniskhan was about to blow away Pikachu, Harrison came in the middle of the battlefield to stop the match. He looked severly injured with his shirt ripped and blood in his mouth. "Stop the match guys!!!"

"Hey what happened to you, Harrison? What's going on??" Ash asked holding Harrison since he was too weak to walk.

"They're stealing the Pokemon back there at the party!!!! I tried to stop 'em with my Blaziken but they overpowered me..." Harrison struggled to speak. "They had a Meowth...." He fainted.

Ash ordered Tyson and Gary who were nearby, "Call 911! Harrison here need some help." Gary took his PDA and tried to call 911 while Tyson tended Harrison's wounds Turns to Drew and Max, "I need you two to help me what's going on."

May held to Drew's hand, "Don't do anything stupid, Drew....Please."

He let go, "No worry. I'll come back safe and sound with Ash and Max." He left while Max did the same thing with Molly and ran with Ash and Pikachu and Drew to head to the Oak Laboratory

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Meanwhile back at the Lab, a giant mechanical robotic vehicle with six large arms with the Team Rocket emblem in the middle. In the cockpit, a Meowth was driving the machine stealing all the Pokemon left there. With the Meowth was a lavender haired man and red-haired woman, both in their early 30s.

"Look all 'em Pokemon getting snagged!" Meowth was laughing as he used one of the machine's many arms to grab a Grovyle and Bayleef resisting and catches them, "Got ya."

"Finally, with all these Pokemon that we gonna give 'em to the Boss, he's bound to give us a promotion and a big fat bonus."

"HE'S BOUND TO MAKE US THREE EXCEUTIVES!!!" cheered Meowth, Jessie and James as they hugged each for their apparently sucessful steal.

Jessie was happy, "Finally one day we suceed without the twerp squad coming into the rescue."

"Your not getting away with this, whoever you are!" they hear a familiar twerpish voice.

James said, "Maybe you spoke too soon, Jess. Oh well, might as well get blasted off now."

"No worry we ain't going to get beat again by some twerp and that Pikachu."

Ash was now right in front of them, "You'll better give back the Pokemon or else!!! Who are you guys! Answer us."

"Prepare for trouble from beyond the skies!"

"From beyond the stars, a nasty surprise !"

"An evil as old as the galaxy... "

"....sent here to fulfill our destiny! "

Meowth came in," Plus, there's me!"

"To denounce the evils of truth and love!"

"To extend our reach to the stars above!"

"Jessie! "

"And James!"

"Meowth's my name!"

"Anywhere there’s peace in the universe... "

"Team Rocket... "

"...Will be there...

" To make everything worse!"

" Wobbuffet!"

" Mime Mime!"

"Not you guys again ! When will you ever stop doing bad stuff!" Ash said.

"When you stop being twerps of course!" Jessie said, "Now if you excuse us, we'll be on our way to Team Rocket HQ!" The robot was heading for the direction of Ash, Drew and Max blocking the exit of the lab.

"Not if I can help it!" Ash grabs one of his Pokeballs, "Come on out, Cyndaquil!"

"Cyndaquil!!"

Drew grabbed a Pokeball and threw it, "Roserade come on out!"

"Roserade!"

"Don't forget me!" Max said, "Come on out Miniskhan!"

"Miniskhan!"

"HA! You think you're gonna stop us with your puny Pokemon..Get out of the way!" The robot sped up which it was within several yards of Ash, Drew and Max.

Ash said, "Use Flamethrower to melt the robot.!"

"CYNNNNAQUILLLLL!!!" It threw out a Flamethrower aimed for the center of the robot which caused it to malfunction. It burned a hole in the middle of the robot where the stolen Pokemon where held allowing them to escape.

"What's wrong!" James screamed as smoke filled the cockpit

"Didn't you pay all our money for this so called high-tech machine!" Fire broke out

"Yea but to save money I bought the basic package!" The robot blew up and pieces scattered everywhere across the Oak Lab. From the ashes, Jessie and James and Meowth emerged pissed off since the "twerps" ruined yet another scheme.

"You pay for that, twerps!" Jessie said, "Let's teach 'em a lesson, Seviper!"

It materialized into the ground and pulled its menacing stare at them, "SEVIPPPER!"

"You too come on out Cacnea!" James said throwing its Pokeball

"Cacnea!" It removed its attention from Ash and his friends and decided to show his affection to James but unaware to the fact that its needle-covered arms hurt him.

"ARHHHHHHHHH!!! Don't HUG ME! UR ATTENTION IS WITH THE TWERPS! Use Needle Arml!"

"Seviper use Poison Tail!" Jessie ordered pointing to the twerps' Pokemon

"Dodge Roserade! And use Protect to help Miniskhan and Cyndaquil from Seviper and Cacnea!"

Roserade nodded, "Roserrade!" It went in front of the scared Miniskhan and Cyndaquil and created a veil which blocked Cacnea's and Seviper's atacks.

Max and Ash in unison said, "Thanks Drew!"

"No Problem Guys! Do your thing guys!"

In unison, Max and Ash ordered, "Use Hidden Power on Seviper and Cacnea!" Miniskhan and Cyndaquil together threw a Hidden Power on the Pokemon making fall on Team Rocket.

Max turned to Ash, "Its your turn now!"

"You betcha. Now Pikachu send 'em blasting with Thundebolt!" Ash pointed Pikachu to them.

"PIIIKKKKAAAA-CHUUUUU!!!' It send Team Rocket blasting off from the ground!

"Why for thirteen seasons we haven't stole a thing! We didn't suck this much!" Jessie screamed

"Wobuffet!"

"Blame the writers!" James said

Meowth said, "Oh cares! We're blasting off again....."

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With Team Rocket gone and Harrison only recieved minor wounds, the party returned back to normal. Ash and Max continued to their battle in which it ended in a draw as both Miniskhan and Pikachu were unable to battle. Pidegotto defeated Aipom and got in a draw with Ash's Cyndaquil. It was a night to remember as the next day, Ash and Pikachu were headed for Orre.
 
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Chapter 2 -Last Night in Pallet

It was around midnight and several hours had passed since the party for Ash ended. Everyone left back to their respective homes. Tracey was finishing cleaning the place when Ash came in carrying a sleeping Pikachu in his arms, tired from the party.

"Hey Tracey, still cleaning?" Ash came in carrying Pikachu who was sleeping.

Tracey put the broom againist the table, "I was just finishing up. Some party huh Ash?"

"Yup, best party ever.."

"Pikachu must be tired after partying off with the Pokemon."

"Sure is.." Ash smiled looking at his sleeping Pikachu.

Tracey asked, "So where Pallet Town's own native Pokemon master heading off to next?"

"The Orre region of course.."

"I heard its pretty hot there. So when you heading off?" Tracey asked.

Ash responded, "Well from asking Gary, the earliest ferry to Gateon Port is tomorrow early in the morning."

"Typical Ash. You just ended one journey and you're heading for another one. Why not consider staying in Pallet for a couple of more days? I'm sure your mom and Professor Oak would like to hear about your Sinnoh journey."

"Nah...Mom and Professor Oak understands. I'll be heading to Orre alone with Pikachu and my Egg." Ash said.

Tracey interrupted, "I almost forgot your mom and Professor Oak would like to have you back in the house. They have something to tell you." He returned to cleaning

"Oh really? What do they have to say." Ash wondered.

"I don't know. Professor Oak always keeps secrets from me and your Mom won't open up to me.." Tracey said.

"I see what Mom and the Professor want. Well night Tracey." Ash and Pikachu head for the door."

"Night. Good luck in the Orre region." Ash left the lab and looking at the full moon wondered what did they wanted to tell him.

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Ash and Pikachu were right in front of his house after walking a midnight stroll around peaceful Pallet Town. He saw from the window in the living room, his mom and Professor Oak talking and laughing. He knocked on the door.

"Hmmm I wonder who would be knocking on the door this late at night." Professor Oak wondering drinking his cup of tea.

Mrs. Ketchum said, "I check on who it is."

The door opened and Ash came in, "Hey Mom. Tracey told me to come here."

"Oh Ash, me and Professor Oak were just talking about you in the Sinnoh Grand Championships..." His mom smiled and let him in and went upstairs to bring Pikachu and his bag containing his ribbon and Sinnoh badges to his room.

"Oh you were." He saw Professor Oak sipping his tea, "Oh hey Professor Oak!"

Professor Oak said, "Hello, son. You sure grew since the last time I saw you. Two years it's been? Where's that Dawn girl and Brock"

"Sinnoh been a pretty big place. Dawn's back home while Brock is babysitting back at Pewter City."

"Oh."

His mom returned from upstairs, "Did I miss anything?"

"Nothing really, just chatting with Ash here about his adventures in the Sinnoh region." Professor Oak said.

His mom asked, "What kind of Pokemon you have from the Sinnoh region?"

"Well I have my Staraptor, my first Pokemon in the Sinnoh region. Aipom snuck in with me and Pikachu. My Turtwig was quite helpful in my early Gym battles. I brought in Cyndaquil from Johto and helped me beat Paul. My most recent one that I had caught at Sinnoh was my Dragonair."

"It looked like you raised a powerful roster of Pokemon over at Sinnoh." His mom and Professor Oak said.

"Am i expecting to have all your Pokemon except Pikachu to join the others?" Professor Oak said.

"Of course. I already planned out my next adventure." Ash said.

His mom asked, "Where is that, honey?"

"The Orre region of course?" Ash said proudly.

Professor Oak started laughing, "You must be pulling our legs, Ash. I almost thought you said the Orre region."

"No I being serious here. The Orre region is where I'm heading next." Ash said

His mother said, "Professor Oak, he is being serious. He wants to head to the Orre region."

"But the Orre region is full of criminal groups such as Team Snagem and Cipher. It has a very horrible reputation and only the fools among trainers go there." Professor Oak said, "It's recommended that you don't travel to that region."

Ash's mom butted in, "Excuse me, you told me around the same age Ash is now you headed for the Orre region yourself."

"It was a mistake. It nearly costed me all my Pokemon and up to this point, I regret ever traveling there."

"Tell me what happened." Ash said.

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While Professor Oak was explaining to Ash of why he had his reasons of thinking again of traveling to the infamous Orre region. Team Rocket was listening on the conversation with their mouths watering at the food in the Ketchum residence but more importantly wondering where the "twerp" was headed next.

"I'mm so hungry,...." Meowth said having to put his paw to where his stomach was growling.."Why can't we swipe the food?"

"I know what you meant. But what's the point if the twerp is gonna blast us off." James said.

Jessie said, "We're listening to the twerp's conversation to Professor Oak. Looks like the twerp wants to head for the Orre region."

"THE ORRE REGION!!!!!" Meowth and James screamed, "SCREW THAT! IF THE TWERP WANTS TO GO THERE AND GET HIMSELF KILLED, HE CAN BUT WE AIN'T GOING DOWN!"

"Why you babies complaining about the Orre region? Whats so bad about it?" Jessie said looking away from the window.

James said, "You don' understand. There is a powerful organization, even more powerful than Team Rocket that set base there."

"Oh please you said the same thing back in Sinnoh about Team Galactic? And don't let me get started on Team Magma and Aqua at Hoenn." Jessie said.

Meowth said, "But we didn't take down those organizations. The twerps did that.."

"Who cares about minor details? Because of us, Hoenn and Sinnoh are now fully under the grasp of Team Rocket. It'll be the same with those Cipher punks." Jessie said.

"I guess you're right, Jess." James said

"If we stand together, Team Rocket will expand to the Orre region and then the world!" James and Meowth screamed loudly

Ash said, "Did you hear something?" Professor Oak and his mom said no so he let Professor Oak continued.

"Shut up, stupid" Jessie said putting her hands onto James and Meowth's mouths. They apologized and they left."

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"Now I understand why you don't want me to the Orre region now." Ash said

Oak said, "Now you see through my point of view."

"I couldn't imagine Pikachu turned againist me and its heart corrupted by an evil organization." Ash said, "But Gary informed of how Orre has changed in the recent years. Cipher was disbanded by this kid named Michael."

"Come on Professor Oak, you know that Ash knows what he's doing and make sure he's safe." His mom puppy-eyed him..

Professor Oak said, "Okay okay just stop with the puppy eyes." Turns to Ash, "I brought this for you for the occasion." He hands him a visor-like device.

"What is it ?" Ash looked curiously at the visor.

"Its the new Pokedex. You adjust it on your ear." Ash puts it on his ear, "And when you want look up data, you push this button there."

Ash points the button and the Pokedex opened up, "Cool."

"The amazing thing that it has data on new Pokemon just recently discovered by my colleaguge over at the Pokemon HQ Lab at Orre, Professor Krane. In fact, you should visit him sometime." Professor Oak said.

Ash's mom gave him a black-covered disk-shaped device, "Here you go. Its the latest model of the PDA directly from Silph Co. It has many new functions tha you see once you use it."

Ash hugs her and Professor Oak, "Thanks. I don't know what I do without you guys."

"So when you leaving for Orre?" Ash's mom said.

"I wish I could stay a little longer but tomorrow is when I'm leaving." Ash said sadly, "Oh well I call you and Professor Oak on videophone when I get there."

"Well I should be leaving and head back to the Lab. Bye Delia and bye Ash. Be safe when at the Orre region." He heads for the door and Ash and his mom watch Professor Oak walk home and wave good-bye."

Mrs. Ketchum decided to watch some late night Poke-soap and offered Ash to come and watch it with her to have some company. Ash of course refused, wanting to go upstairs to his room to think for himself and rest for his boat trip. He was right by Pikachu sitting at his bed looking at the night sky.

"Pikachu, tomorrow you and me will be heading to Orre by ourself and of course, my Egg." Ash said to the sleeping Pikachu.

"Pika-pika-pi" Pikachu was snoring.

"Good night buddy" He petted his sleeping Pikachu and went to sleep, "Just only a few more hours and we’re headed to the Orre region." He fell asleep waiting for the time to head out.
 
I DONT OWN POKEMON

Chapter 3-Orre or Bust

As we now see our hero along with his pal Pikachu, it was a beautiful morning and we see our hero excited that today was the day he was heading to the Orre region. He was all packed up and ready. He was going to his last good-byes to his mom.

"I guess this is bye for now, Mom." Ash said to his Mom.

His Mom said, "You just came back from Sinnoh yesterday and it had been two years since you were here."

"I know Mom." Ash said

"Wouldn't it kill ya to spend a month or two here at least before you wander off somewhere?" His mom said.

"Yea. I know. Well when I return to Orre maybe I stay a little longer. After all, I wonder how my friends like Casey and Ritchie doing." Ash said

"Well. Do you have everything packed? Don't forget your Egg since you said earlier you're bringing it with you."

"Thanks for reminding me Mom. Where is it?" He asked putting down his backpack.

His Mom opened the backpack and showed the Egg and zipped it back up, "Since I know you would forget it, I put it in your backpack."

He put it back on his back, "Thanks Mom. I talk to you on videophone once I arrive at the Pokemon Center in Gateon Port if not the Pokemon HQ Lab."

Looks at her clock in the living room, "It's still like an hour until its time for the passengers to head into the ferry. Where you headed off to?"

"I'm gonna leave the Pokemon i captured at Sinnoh at the Lab and visit Professor Oak. My Pokemon already know I heading to Orre." Ash said.

His mom smiled and said, "Well at least don't forget to change your....."

"MOM! I'm 17. I don't want you saying things like that." He was blushing hearing Pikachu snickering.

"Okay Okay. It just hard to see you already as a young adult. Next thing I know you get married and have kids." His mom teared up a bit.

"You know that will a long time from now. Well I gotta go. Bye" He left the door and was heading for the direction of Professor Oak's Lab.

"Good-bye Ash. Be careful and don't hang out with strangers." His mom waved his hand and Ash along with Pikachu waved their hands.

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Ash and Pikachu passed by one of the bushes not that far from the Ketchum residence. He heard whispering but didn't pay much mind to it and continued on. Team Rocket of course was following him since they saw him alone with Pikachu.

"Shut you two!" She beat them up, "You nearly blown our cover!"

"Pikachu's there for the grabbin'" Meowth said to Jessie, "He's all by himself."

"He's all alone since the slinty-eyed twerp and twerpette are gone." James said, "We could just grab him and he make a nice addition for the Boss."

"You're forgetting that the twerp has a full arsenal of Pokemon with him and that we spent all our money on the last machine." Jessie said.

James was saddened, "All those bottlecaps saved over the years sold for a dumb machine that couldn't even grab all those Pokemon!"

"If you collected something more valuable, we could've bought a better machine!" Meowth said.

James screamed at him, "Are you saying my bottlecaps are worthless! Why you little..." James and Meowth begin struggling each other.

"Shut it! You two It caz of you I losed track of the twerp!.." Jessie screamed..

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Ash and Pikachu talking a walk arcoss the bustling little town of Pallet, manages to reach Professor Oak's lab and Ash starts knocking on the door.

The door opens to find Tracey there, "Oh hey Ash and Pikachu!"

"Hey Tracey!" Ash said

"Pika-pika!" Pikachu waved its paw saying hello

Tracey said, "What brings you here? I thought you were heading to Orre today."

"I am. I just here just to drop off my Pokemon here. Where's Professor Oak?" Ash looked around.

"He's at his library researching the new Eevee evolutions. I show him to you."

"Okay." Ash and Pikachu follows Tracey who leads them into the library where Professor Oak was at his computer looking up stuff."

"Hey Professor Oak!" Ash said

He turns away from the computer, "Oh hey Ash! Aren't you at Orre?"

"No, I'm here just to drop off my Sinnoh Pokemon and then head out." He looks at the computer, "So how are the new Eevee evolutions?"

"Amazing, Ash we were surprised that Leafeon and Glaceon were discovered but from my scouts led by Tracey here researching at the Sevii Islands with help from Professor Celio discovered four new evolutions of Eevee."

"Thats amazing. I wished I had an Eevee." Ash said.

"Well Orre famous for its abundance of Eevee. There's even a forest only inhabited by Eevee there."

"Awesome I probably catch one there." Remembers why he was there, "Oh yeah I'm here to drop off my Pokemon. Only Pikachu and my Egg are coming with me." Ash said.

Professor Oak smiled, "I guess your Pokemon at the ranch will have more company!"

"Yea." He looks at his PDA, "Oh man, the ferry going to leave soon. I gotta go. Bye Tracey. Bye Professor Oak!" He runs out the door.

"Bye Ash" Tracey and Professor Oak waved their hands.

"PIKA-PIKA!" Pikachu waved its paw saying good bye.

From outside, Ash screamed, "Pikachu hurry up!" Pikachu runs out along with Ash and there gone.

"Classic Ash." Professor Oak said, "He'll never change."

"Yup." Tracey nodded

"Tracey mind putting Ash's Pokeballs into the storage room by his file. I later when I'm done, I put them outside."

"Okay." Tracey said grabbing the tray of Pokeball and feeling a bit thirsty, put them down so he could have a bit of OJ.

While Tracey was drinking his cup of OJ, Aipom went out of its Pokeball, "Pom. Pom Pom" It was looking around not seeing its trainer.

It had a scent knowing that Ash was nearby, "Pom Pom Aipom!" Aipom used its tail to open the window and it ran out looking for its trainer.

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Ash and Pikachu were sitting in a bench resting after running at Pallet Town's ferry terminal and already used his Trainer Card to buy himself and Pikachu a ticket for the ferry ride to Orre. He bought Pikachu and himself a small ice cream cone.

"Well buddy we're heading for Orre. Aren't you excited?" Ash took a chomp out of his ice cream.

"PIKA-PIKA-PI!!!" Pikachu was excited mostly for the yummy ice cream he was eating.

The speakers announced, "The 9:00 Ferry from Pallet Town to Gateon Port is now ready to accept passengers. They have only five minutes to come to the ferry in Terminal A."

He throws away his ice cream cone and wipes his mouth, "Well thats our cue. You're not finished with that ice cream?"

"Pika-pi!" It still was taking small bites out its cone.

"Let's head out." Pikachu and Ash were walking looking at the directory in the ticket office and points out Terminal A which is right nearby.

"Terminal A. It's a small walk away.." They walk towards Terminal A and leave the central office.

Just a few seconds later, Aipom came out looking for its trainer, "Pom Pom Pom?"

It was sad that it didn't find him, "Pom." It saw someone wearing a hat and it had an affection for the hat, "Pom! Pom!" It jumped and grabbed the person's hat,

"Hey, you give me back my hat!" The person shouted but the Aipom manage to get away wearing a hat. The Aipom saw a convenyor belt for people putting their luggage to the Orre ferry.

"Pom Pom." It was curious and went into the convenyor belt being sent into the storage compartment of the ferry.

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Team Rocket after a long search were trying to find the "twerp' and the much desired Pikachu of his. Since Team Rocket was infamous in the Kanto region, they put on disguises. James and Jessie wore Halloween costumes from the costume store in the ferry terminal mall.

"How do we look?" James said

Meowth said, "To tell youse guys the truth, you look like high school janitors." He begins laughing.

"Your just jealous you won't wear a costume. So shut your yap, Meowth if you dont want to attract attention."

Mime Jr. came out of its ball, "Mime Mime" it was pointing his finger a Meowth.

"Since you look like janitors, go clean this mess." Drops his can of PokeCola on the floor.

"Why you little!!!!" Jessie scowled choking Meowth Homer Simpson style, "I make sure Ho-oh sends you down to Hell."

"Umm Jessie...." James said.

Jessie screamed, "WHAT DO YOU WANT! CANT U SEE IM CHOKING MEOWTH HERE."

"Thats the point...you two are kinda gathering attention.." Points to the Officer Jenny and her Growlithe right behind him.

"Why is that janitor choking that Meowth?" She said.

Jessie stopped from choking Meowth and said to Jenny, "Listen Bluehair, we are not......" Her mouth gets muffled by James.

"It was just a misunderstanding between her and her Meowth. We'll go now. Okay?" He smiled nervously.

"You may go now. But, I have my eye on you two." James nods and heads outside into the mall area....

"What did you do that for? I can handle myself!" Jessie said.

James said, "I don't want you guys gathering attention since we done crimes here and we're one of the most wanted. You don't want any people suspecting we're Team Rocket."

"He has a point..." Meowth said.

"Oh shut up! Meowth no one asked for you to talk. I'm still mad at you!" Jessie said putting her arms on her waist.

"Have a sense of humor!" Meowth said. They started agrueing and during this, Ash passed by along with Pikachu and heading to the ferry

"Umm guys...." James said but they didn't listen.

"GUYS!"

"WHAT!" Jessie and Meowth scowled at James.

"The twerp just passed by while you two were ready to bite each other heads off." James said.

"Why don't we call a truce and concentrate on getting Pikachu!" Meowth said

"Yeah, but not now, we'll hide in the storage compartment in the ferry. After all the twerp is certain to head for this ferry to Orre. So let's go."

"Your lead.." James and Meowth said as while no one was looking, they snuck into the storage compartment of the ferry.

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Ash and Pikachu manage to arrive in Terminal A where the ferry had begun accepting passengers for the trip to the Orre region. Ash was filled with excitement while Pikachu was still finishing his chocolate ice cream cone.

"Last call for Ferry 0001 heading from Pallet Town to Gateon Port. Any people still not onboard still have five minutes to head to the ferry."

Ash and Pikachu were sitting in one of the benches not that far from the ferry looking at children feeding the flocks of Wingull and Peliper flying around, "This is the day, buddy! I cant wait til I become Champion of the Circuit."

"Pika Pika chu!" Pikachu was still chowing down on his ice cream cone.

"Are you even listening to me or you too busy eating ice cream?" Ash said angrily.

"Pika??? Pika-Pika-Pika!" Pikachu said throwing away regretfully the ice cream cone.

'Whatever. It's time to head for the ferry. Pikachu!" Ash said heading to the ferry where surprisingly, there was little people in line and he was next.

A buff sailor in his mid 20s made sure everyone on board showed their tickets to him said to Ash, "Ticket sir?"

Grabs his ticket from his pocket, "Here's my ticket sir.." Ash gave it to him. Pikachu jumped onto Ash's shoulder looking at the sailor.

"You may go." Before Ash went on board, "Are you heading to challenging the Orre Colosseum Circuit?"

"Yea I am, how did you know that?" Ash questioned.

"Nothing really, we usually get Coordinators or Trainers on this boat. So you can practice, there is a battlefield within the ship os you can train and there's a daily competition for Masters and Coordinators-to-be. Well here's your ticket and room number and keys."

"Thanks. I'll look forward to that. Thanks." He and Pikachu went on board.

"Pika-pi!!!"

"The ferry is big and looks like there's Coordinators and Trainers from all over the world. I see people from all over. Let's check the stern and check the view."

"Pika!" Pikachu was exciting looking at the exotic types of Pokemon on board.

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Ash and Pikachu were looking at the wonderful view looking at people going in and out of the ferries. He and Pikachu especially focused on a raven-haired boy with a Pichu and following him was a slightly older red-haired girl and a slinty-eyed teenager. He was overhearing the conversation and laughed about it.

"I'm gonna be the most powerful trainer in the whole world. A Pokmemon Master. Isn't that right Sparks?" The boy said.

"Pichu Pichu!" The young Pichu said.

"Hey remember you still owe me for what your Sparks did to my scooter, Tory!" The young girl said.

"No worry Rachel! Once I get my Kanto badges and become League Champion, I buy ten bikes for you!" He said.

"Yea right. And of course get a girl to actually like Flint." She pointed to a kid around 14 or 15 resembling a younger version of Brock who was flirting with an teenage cadet Officer Jenny.

"Oh Officer Jenny. I've been a baddd boyy. Can't you correct me privately?" Flint was flirting..

She was blushing, "I don't think that's what cadets do." Luckily Rachel pulled Flint's ear in pain bringing him back.

"Do you have to do this?"

Ash and Pikachu was laughing from looking at the three. The kids reminded him so much of the many memories he had with his friends Misty and Brock in Kanto, the Orange Isles and Johto before splitting up. He was in deep thought wondering what all the friends he met were doing. Pikachu was looking at him strangely. He woke up from his deep thought once he heard the kids notice him.

"Hey Tory!" Rachel poked at his back

"What Rachel! Can you see I'm excited for my first Gym Battle in Pewter City?" He said.

"Did you notice that the guy over there looks a lot like you?' Rachel said.

Tory said, "He probably doesn't look like me. Which one?"

Flint pointed to Ash, "Right there. The one with the Pikachu."

"Wow. It's strange how he dresses like me, looks like me, has a Pikachu which is only the evolved form of Pichu. He looks strong. I wonder if I will become like him."

Rachel went right next to him, "I'm sure whoever he is you'll be just as good or better than he is."

"Well I guess we're headed for Pewter City." Ash sees the three kids walk away from the ferry terminal and head to the direction to Pewter City. At the same time, the ferry starts moving out of port.

"Pika-pi????" Pikachu said.

"I know. He's very much like me. Hopefully unlike me, he'll understand the importance of his friends before he loses them." Ash said.

"I can't believe this is the first time, I'll be on a journey alone like i originally intended for. It feels weird."

"Pika-pi!" Pikachu was sad since it had no other Pokemon friends to play with.

Out of the blue, a Buneary showed up showing its affection to Pikachu, "Bunnearry!" It started huggging Pikachu which it tried to get out off.

"Pika-pi!"

Ash looked at the Buneary,a light brown bunny-like Pokemon with puffs on the ends of its ears, who was hugging Ash, "Hmmm whats a Buneary doing here. I know the only Buneary that has the hots for Pikachu has to belong to...."

A familiar face called out to Ash, "Did you miss me?"

"Is that you??"
 
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Your story is fairly well written. However, you could describe the characters a bit more. You write that Delia Ketchum is a "brown haired woman in her 30s." What color brown is her hair: dark brown, chocolate, light brown, auburn? Is she short or tall? What is she wearing?

That's what's known as subjective description. You, as a writer, are painting a picture in the minds of your readers and to do that effectively you need to use figures of speech (metaphors and similes) as well as adjectives. Description tells the reader how something tastes, smells, looks, sounds, feels, or behaves.

You describe battle scenes pretty well in terms of Pokémon and their moves; try to extend that to your human characters as well.
 
thank you for the compliment ummm i have to do that much detail in my story
 
Well, yes, if you want people to read it. Description draws the reader into the story. Your conclusion has a Buneary hugging Pikachu. This is sweet, but without knowing what a Buneary looks like or how it hugs Pikachu (with arms? Paws? Tentacles?), it falls flat.
 
could u tell me what do I need improvement on

sorry this is the first fic im determined to finish
 
Chapter 4- An Old Friend


As we last left our hero and Pikachu, he saw a familiar Buneary wanting to make kissy kissy with Pikachu. We see our hero reunite with an old friend of hers. Will this be the rebirth of a friendship or something more?

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"Is that you?" Ash was surprised to see a familiar blue-haired 13 year old Coordinator, Dawn just a few feet away from him.

"Yup, its me all right." She said leaning onto the wall.

Ash said, "What are you doing here onboard the SS Tsunami? I thought you were back home with your Mom."

"So my Buneary can be all lovey-dovey with your Pikachu." Dawn joked.

"No really, what brings you here and more importantly, how you came here?" Ash wondered and saw Pikachu being chased by her Buneary.

"Okay? Well things got boring for me once I came home and since I'm not ever the loner traveler. I tried contacting you and Gary. No one was home so I called your friend of yours Gary." She said.

"You met Gary. Do you know that now he is a...." Ash said.

She interupts, "A Gym Leader. He told me about how you were heading to the Orre region today and so I was pretty excited that I was gonne be in a new adventure so I hightailed with Buneary to Pallet Town and went to Professor Oak. He told me you just past by and was in the ferry terminal. And I went and here I am."

"Wow big story..." Ash said.

She looked around the ship, "So where's lover boy hiding at? Wouldn't he be here flirting with every girl on this ship."

Ash said, "Brock is taking care of his little brothers and sisters while his parents are on vacation."

"Aww man. It wouldn't be a party without Brocko here. I always wanted to do that ear-pulling thing." Dawn smiled.

Ash smiled, "I know me too." Looks at Buneary and Pikachu with Pikachu giving up and Buneary hugging it, "Don' you think Buneary and Pikachu wouldn't make a cute couple."

"PIKA?????" Pikachu was shocked that its trainer said that only to be kissed by Buneary.

"BUNEAARY!" It hugged Pikachu and gave it a peck on the cheek.

Dawn smiled, "I agree. There like a two Peas in a Pokepod. Isn't that right Buneary!"

"Bunearry!" It smiled.

"Hey Ash. So what is that thing you have on your ear and left eye?" Dawn looked at the device.

Ash said, "It's the new Pokedex created by this guy named Professor Krane and this has data on at least 100 new types of Pokemon."

"Thats kinda cool." She was bit saddened, "I wished Professor Roawn had upgraded my own Pokedex." Takes own her old worn out Pink Pokedex.

"I'm sure he'll give you one once we head for the Lab. So Dawn?"

Dawn looked at him saying, "Yeah, Ash?"

"Soo you're planning to do any Contests in the Orre region if there are?" Ash asked with Ash and Dawn looking out at sea.

"I don't really think so. Maybe a couple. I'm kinda worn out from the Sinnoh Grand Festival. So are you gonna be challenging the Leaders of this region?" Dawn said to Ash.

"Yeah I am. I'm not in a rush to do anything. I hear from these brochures..." Pulls out one of the brochures and gives to Dawn, "That Orre has beautiful beaches."

She reads them, "Orre looks beautiful from the pictures." She gives back the brochure to Ash and just remembered something, "Oh I almost forgot, I was going to give you a present." She takes out of her bag a small nicely wrapped box.

He unwrapped it and saw it and stared at it.

"Go on, open it Ash." Dawn encouraged Ash. Ash opened it and saw what seemed to be one half of a yin and yang necklace.

"Thank you, Dawn. I really liked it." Ash took the necklace and looked at Dawn.

"Its one half of a yin and yang necklace. I gave you the yang while I myself have the yin." She pulled out her yin.

Dawn said, "The special thing is that these necklaces glow when the other having the other half is in distress or trouble and even points in the direction or so the woman said.

"I really like it. Thanks Dawn." He was going to head inside and Dawn decided to follow him.

"So Ash. Umm Can I join you on your journey to Orre?" Dawn asked.

Ash smiled, "Of course, the more the merrier. I'm really glad that you're here. It blows being alone."

"I know." She saw Ash and Pikachu heading to the door walking inside.

"Where you going Ash?" She was wanting to come follow him.

"I'm gonna check out what my room looks like. Wanna come with?" Ash offered.

"SURE!" She screamed happily and walked right next to Ash with Pikachu and Buneary making kissy...kissy.

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Team Rocket were stowaways on the ferry's bottom area. James's head popped out of the filth and he was covered in garbage and he was moaning and complaining of where they were.

"Ewwwwww.. What is this?" James screamed, "Jessie? Meowth? Where are you guys?" James head was looking around the filth.

Jessie's head pop's out, "Well I'm here. This is SO not the Storage Compartment. Looks like we're in the garbage chute." She threw up.

"Ewwww Jessie.." James was screaming.

She wiped her mouth, "Ewww how did I have old soda cans in my mouth??"

James joked, "You had things worse than soda cans jammed in your mouth if you know what I mean." He started laughing.

"IF MY BODY WASN'T STUCK IN THIS GARBAGE, I WOULD SO KICK UR PRETTY BOY ASS!" Jessie screamed.

James was scared, "Chill Jess. We don't want to attract attention and we still need to find Meowth..."

"Oh right. But I'm still going to kick your ass once i get out." Jessie reminded him. He nodded.

Meowth's head popped out, "Looking for me?"

"Wobuffet!" Wobuffet came out of its ball.

"Where were you?" James said.

Meowth said, "How would you like to see how hard it is to swim through garbage? By the way, youse guys smell like donkey shit!"

James began smelling ourself, "Meowth has a point. Let's try getting out of here and try finding that twerp."

"All right. But how do we get out." Meowth said.

"I'm sure we'll think of something eventually...." Team Rocket said.

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Ash and Dawn were searching inside the ship so Ash could find out where was his room. Right behind them, was Buneary who was hugging it and holding paws with Pikachu. Ash looked behind into Pikachu and laughed.

Ash smiled, "Enjoying your new girlfriend, Pikachu?" He's laughing.

"Pika-Pika-Pika!!!" Pikachu was angry.

Ash then grew angry, "Don't get angry at me or I stick you inside your Pokeball!"

"Pika..chu." Pikachu became more subdued.

"So Ash what's the room you'll be staying at?" Dawn asked Ash.

Ash turned back to Dawn, "Let me check." Goes inside his pocket and pulls out a room number on his crumbled up ticket, "It's Room A31."

"WOW! That's my room number they assigned me too. They said I was going to share with some people. Out of all the people to share a room with, it makes me feel safe with you here instead of some stranger." She looks at him, "Do you feel the same?"

"Not really. I don't stay in my rooms usually." Ash says.

Feeling a bit sad, "Oh...."

Ash knowing he hurt her, "Are you okay, Dawn? Sorry I hurt your feelings by accident."

She lies, "No. I'm okay."

Ash stops and sees the room number, "Well this is where we're gonna say. If only I had the key." He tries looking at his pockets but he forgot it, "Oh....man."

"Very Responsible. Ash Ketchum. You are so a role model for me and other aspiring Trainers." She said with sarcasm.

"Oh be quiet..." Ash said.

"At least I'm responsible and I..," shows Ash her key, "make sure I don't lose my key. Be glad that I get to room with you!" She smiled.

"Let's just get inside. I need to rest." Ash said. Dawn happily smiled and opens the door.

Her jaw opens anime style seeing the quality of the room that could compete with the best hotels in the world, "OH MY FREAKING GOD!"

Ash's jaw dropped as well, "This is no room. It's a freaking suite!"

Pikachu let go of Buneary and saw the room and began jumping on the bed, "PIKA PIKA PIKA!"

Buneary joined in, "BUNN EARYY!!"

Ash smiled, "Looks like our Pokemon approve of the suite."

She smiled and nodded. She saw three beds, "I wonder why there's three beds. Hmmmm." She saw one of the staff working, a young one in his ealry 20s passing by.

"Hello there." She said.

The staff said, "Hello miss. You need anything for you and your friend?"

"Not really. Thanks but can you ask me why there's three beds. Is someone going to say with is?" She asked.

The person said, "Yes in fact you two will be having someone else. I hear it's one of the Gym Leaders from the Kanto region. Will it be any disturbance for you two."

"Yeah. We're fine." Dawn smiled and the person left closing the door.

"Hey Dawn. I'll be checking the place out seeing where are the good places to eat and that arena they said they have. You be doing anything?" Ash said as he called out Pikachu to come with him.

"Maybe later."

"Okay see ya Ash." Ash waved good-bye as he went out the door. While heading into the elevator to check the arena, a dark figure lurking in the shadows grinned as he saw his rival."

"What do you know? That loser Ash's here...this would be fun." It was revealed to be Paul and he went back to his room...

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Ash and Pikachu were walking around the ferry checking out the many resturants. He and Pikachu went into this strange fast-food joint called Burger King. He's heard of it from Gary who told him of his visit to a Pokemon researcher convention in the Ryuku Islands and said good things about the food. He went to go order the food. He went to go see the clerk

"Hey Ash, long time no see!" The clerk said, it was no one other than Damion. (The rival character from Diamond and Pearl version), a kid around 14 and 15 years old, he was wearing the Burger King uniform and his messy blonde hair was covered by the hat.

Ash waved his hand and smiled, "Damion. How are you? And why are you working in Burger King, dude?"

"I'm pretty good. I took this part-time job not that long ago to make some cash since I pretty much spent everything back at Sinnoh. I heard about Orre and..." Damion said.

Ash said, "You're also going to challenge the Orre Colosseum Circuit? Hopefully for you it won't be your loss to me

Damion got angry, "You were only lucky! LUCKY!"

"So when you get off man? I would to love to have a battle with ya man. You have your Pokemon with you?" Ash asked

"I get out soon. And of course I brought my Pokemon with me. By the way, where's Pikachu?"

"Oh he's right here." Ash grabs Pikachu and puts him on the counter.

"PIKA PIKA PIKA PI!" Pikachu heard its stomach growling.

Damion laughed, "Hehehehe. Looks like your Pokemon is hungry. You want some to eat from the menu?"

"You read my mind!" Ash said out loud and looks over the menu, "I would like to have two steak Anguses and.." Looks at Pikachu, "What do you want, buddy?"

Pikachu whispers secretly into Ash's ear.

Ash said to Damion, "My Pikachu has a big fond for ketchup and umm can you give me a big soda cup but fill it with ketchup please if its not too much."

"Sure man. Its okay. I know how thats like my Infernape loves Oreos." He laughed and called out the order to one of the other employees, a raven-haired girl in her early 20s.

"When's the food ready? Me and Pikachu are starving...." He puts his hand a his stomach where i was growling.

Damion said, "It be done in a few...." Within a few seconds, the girl comes back with the two Anguses, the soda, and the ketchup for Pikachu and gives it to Damion, "See what I tell ya?"

"Wow fast food's pretty fast these days.." Takes the tray and gives the ketchup cup to Pikachu, "Here you go!"

Pikachu began slurping down the ketchup happily, "PIKA! PIKA! PIKACHU!" It eyes were all googley.

Damion looks at it, "Your Pikachu should chill on the tomato sauce. He has like 50 Packet's worth.." Ash nodds "Ummm Ash. I go meet up with you later. You're kinda holding up the line for the customers." Ash sees the long line of angry customers and Ash laughed nervously.

"Let's go Pikachu!" He left along with Pikachu and carried his tray to the food court and began eating. Pikachu was of course happy that it had its ketchup cup and Ash was happily eating the food.

"PIKA PIKA" It was asking if Ash liked the food.

"LIKE IT? I LOVE IT! GARY WAS RIGHT WHEN HE TOLD ME ABOUT THIS PLACE!" He started munching down his food almost as much as May's Munchlax.

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Dawn and her Buneary decided to come out of the suite they were in since it was no use being there without any company. She was looking around the clothing stores shopping since all of her money was spend buying those ferry tickets. She was busy looking at a small mom and pop clothing store looking for a new swimsuit.

She picked out a one piece swimsuit which was similar to the clothes she had now and showed it to Buneary, "Buneary. Does this look good on me?"

"Bunearry" It was moving its head saying no.

"Awwww. Oh well what do you suggest Buneary?" She said quietly then the next thing she saw, Buneary was gone, "Now where you ran off too?"

"Bunearry!" It came back out of nowhere holding something in its paw.

Dawn said, "What did you get?" She looked at it closer and gasped, "BUNEARY! You expect me to have this!" A black and white really thin bikini. "Why did you pick this?"

"Bunearry!" It was winking saying what Dawn thought she heard.

She blushed, "Why would you think I'm buying a swimsuit for ASH of course? I only like him as a friend. A FRIEND!"

"Buneaary!" It continued teasing her about her secret crush on the aspiring Pokemon master and Dawn was blushing and turned her face from Buneary

Dawn said, "Oh yea! Let's see what my other Pokemon I brought with have to say about that!" grabs three Pokeballs, "EMPOLEON! BUXIEL! Come on out!" The Pokemon materialized in the ground.

"EMPOLEON!" A large penguin-like Pokemon emerged and looked around the store then realized it was in another clothing store.

A small orange otter-like Pokemon materialized, "Buizel????" It looked around the store and was disappointed it was dragged to another battle.

She went in front of them and Buneary and had the swimsuit in her hand, "Hey guys. Do you agree with Buneary and saying I'm buying swimsuit to get Ash's attention? What do you think Buizel?"

"Buiz Buize BUIZEL!!" It was snickering agreeing with Buneary's statement.

She was slightly blushing, "Come on, not you too!" Turns to Empoleon, her first Pokemon she had with Professor Rowan and the Pokemon she used to beat the former Sinnoh Champ, Richard and become winner of the Sinnoh Grand Festival. She hoped Empoleon would surely agree with her, "How about you Empoleon. Do you think I like Ash?"

Empoleon began snickering as well, "EMPPPPOLEEEON!" It was began laughing loudly along with the other Pokemon.

She was angry and blushed at the fact she did had a small crush on Ash, "I don't need your opinion!" Grabs her Pokeballs, "Now Return!" All four Pokemon were returned to their respective Pokeballs. She was going to leave the store when she saw a familiar face from back at Sinnoh.

"Oh hello there." She grinned wearing her sunglasses. It was Nozomi, a scarlet red-haired girl and was one of her top Coordinating rivals not that long ago in Hearthrome City crushed in the Sinnoh Grand Festival in a close match at the finals. She was wearing her trademark sunglasses along with black cargo pants and a skin tight red shirt

She was shocked, "Nozomi? Why are you here?" The last person she wanted to see was Nozomi and at Sinnoh, tried to win Ash's affections as well to no avail though leading to further resentment.

"Wow. You don't miss me. After all those memories in the Sinnoh region?" Nozomi says, "Thats quite a shame."

"No I don't. So why are you here? Trying to look for Ash? Well, he's not with me." Dawn said angrily

Nozomi pshhed her, "Nah..Ash might be cute but I know you yourself like the guy. Am I right?" Dawn blushed again.

"What made you say that? I see him as a mentor rather then my lover..Besides I bet Ash would agree with me on that." Dawn said while blushing.

Nozomi said, "Since you don't like like Ash, I guess I try my luck with him." She winks at Dawn to spite her, "If you know what I mean.." She pushes Dawn out of the way and was heading for the food court. "Don't try and stop me, or you get burned, you novice!."

Dawn was pissed off at this remark, "Oh no you didn't! You can have Ash and sleep with him for all I care! But you dissing my Coordinator skills just because your still sore about the Grand Festival, I challenge you to a battle!"

Nozomi grinned at this, "That's good with me. Wouldn't hurt to put a little girl in her place! I know the perfect place for our battle!"

Dawn scowled, "And where is that?"

"The arena they have set or the Competition tomorrow is perfect for our battle let's go. Creatures first." Dawn got pissed but ignored the comment as she went to follow Nozomi to the Arena.

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While Dawn's rivalry with Nozomi was being refueled, not that far away at the food court, Ash and Pikachu was still chowing down on the food they ordered from Burger King. It was the mid afternoon and people were hanging around the food court, eating and chatting with their friends. Ash had a large enough belly that could be comparable to pregnant women and Pikachu was in its form of a ketchup hangover.

"Oh my Ho-oh!...." Ash hand his hand on his giant belly from all the Anguses, "That food was awesome! What did you think, buddy?" He saw Pikachu on the floor holding on to a ketchup bottle.

"Pikaaaaaaaa!" It was too tired to get up. "PIKAAAA!!" Its cheeks with electricity in happiness.

Ash said, "You can say that again." He looks around, "I wonder where Damion is. I want that battle!"

A voice came out, "You looking for me, Ash?" He turned out to find out it was Damion and Ash yelled in surprise and fell to the floor.

"Why the hell did you come from behind me? You know I hate that, Damion!" Ash yelled.

"Chill out. I'm out from work." Grabbed Ash's hand and pulled him up, "I know this place where we can battle. They have this arena we can use. Let's go." Damion said.

Ash and Pikachu followed their own friend Damion to the battle arena.

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Misty Waterflower(in her VS artwork), a 18 year old girl who after five years of managing the Cerulean Gym as the Gym Leader while her older sisters live in the lap of luxury as supermodels and actresses. She had enough and she left the Gym abandoned one day and next she knew, she was heading for the next ferry to the Orre region, assured that her sisters wouldn't follow her to this desert wasteland. She was heading to say with some relatives in a mountain village somewhere.

Right next to her, was one of the staff, a man in the his early 60s and his hair was slowly balding and graying carrying a cart, "This is your room, Room 32A. Hope you will enjoy it."

Her mouth opened anime style at the beauty of the room, "It's amazing....How much do I have to pay for this?" She was amazed.

The attendant smiled, "For you since your the Cerulean Gym Leader. It's all paid for by the Kanto League."

Feeling kind of nervous over abandoning the Gym, "Yea sure right.."

"Do you need anything to eat or drink? Miss Waterflower. It's going to be at least before we stop at our destination at Gateon Port?" The attendant said.

"Maybe just a glass of water and some sandwiches. I'm a bit hungry." She said to the attendant.

The attendant smiled, "Of course, Miss Waterflower. In a few seconds." The attendant was heading out with the cart and was about to leave.

Misty was resting on the bed nearest to the door noticing someone's stuff is already there and saw on the bed opposite of her, stuff that seems to belong to a female while what seemed to be her bed was right by the window, "Ummm sir. Before you go, could you tell why I'm sharing a room with three other people? Do you know who else is staying there?"

"No worry, miss. All the suites are like this. As far as I know your sharing rooms with a Coordinator and a trainer with his Pikachu. Well I return with your water and sandwiches in a moment." He leaves.

She looks closer at a green bag which seems familiar, "He can't be here....He just can't." She out of curiosity pulled out out a green bag three items, a photo of Ash and her sitting in a bench eating ice cream in Blackthorn City about five years ago, a hankerchief she remembered she gave him when they split up when Ash decided to head to Hoenn, and the lucky lure she gave him while he was challenging the Frontier Brains of Kanto.

She had tears in her eyes that Ash, probably her and only person she had deep feelings for was in the same ship as her. "I have a another chance to tell him how I feel." She looked at the bed opposite her and knew another girl was here with him.

She looked in and couldn't reconize the clothing, "At least I know May's not the one who's with Ash. She's still at the Johto region with Drew. Hmmmm..I wonder..." Misty knew that Ash and the 'mystery girl' would come back to this room. Ash had lots of explaining to do.

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Ash's Aipom was so course causing mischief on board the S.S. as it looked to find its Trainer. Along the way, it done its habit of collecting headgear either throwing it away in dislike and keeping it with its tail. It smelled a very appealing scent and began following it.

"Pom?? Pom?" It was confused whether to look for Ash or to follow the appealing scent. It noticed the scent got closer. It was FOOD!

"Pom! Pom!" It decided it was in no hurry to find Ash. After all it was hungry.

It hid behind a dark corner and saw an elderly attendant, probably around in his 60s, having in his right hand a plate full of recently made toasted tuna sandwiches heading to a cart with a empty glass and

The man said, "These toasted tuna 'wiches sure smell good. Pablo and Gina make some appealing 'wiches." Opens the top and puts the sandwiches and before he closes it, "Hmmm Miss Waterflower wouldn't mind if I took one or two sandwiches.." He took a few and went to the kitchen to take a 'lunch break.'

"Pom??" Aipom saw the food and it wanted to eat and it used is hand to grab the top and closed it so no one would see it eating. The man returned from his short lunch break and began moving.

"Those sandwiches sure are good. Better get these to Miss Waterflower!" He said smiling not knowing Aipom was eating all the sandwiches prepared for Misty....

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Dawn was following Nozomi to the battlefield that she was talking about. She was determined to take down Dawn after her loss to her in the Sinnoh Grand Festival in Hearthome City. She knew Dawn after the Grand Festival been slacking off and hasn't new Pokemon. She on the other hand, captured rare and new species of Pokemon just discovered. They entered the arena which was right in the center of the ferry. The arena had many bleachers that could hold about 2,000-3,000 people. On the side of the battlefield where three seats where it looked like Judges watched from up close.

Dawn was in awe, "It's a pretty large arena. It's amazing how they could fit this ferry with this...."

Nozomi interrupted her, "As much as I would like appreciating the arena's beauty, I would like to get my victory over you done with."

"Oh yea! What makes you say that?" Dawn smirked, "After all, your going to battle with the Sinnoh Grand Festival Champ, the same person I may have you to remind that defeated you!"

Nozomi put on her sunglasses, "You see, Dawn....Once I beat you, you will realize you were just a lucky little amaetur."

Dawn and Nozomi headed to opposite sides of the battlefields and both had a fiery desire to beat the other. They wanted to prove to the another who was more superior than the other.

Dawn smiled, "So your basic girl-on-girl battle rules in place?"

"Winner gets bragging rights and the guy and Loser has to live with it? It will be a two-on-two Pokemon battle." Nozomi said. Dawn nodded, "Ladies come first." Picks out one of her Pokeballs.

Dawn picked out a Pokeball, "I know. I'm first" She snickers, "Let's see how you like to match up againist Empoleon..." Another Pokeball pops out and Buizel comes out determined to fight.

"BUIZEEL!! BUIZEL!!!" It wanted to fight.

"You wanna battle Nozomi, Buizel?" Dawn looked down on the Otter Pokemon.

It nodded. "BUIZEE!!!!"

"Looks like it's your turn, she-witch!" Dawn said to Nozomi on the other side of the battle field.

"I make you eat your own words, you bitch!" Grabs and throws her Pokeball, "Come on out Rapigasus!"

"Rapigasus? I never heard of that Pokemon! Is that a new species?" Dawn asked.

"YOU'LL SOON FIND OUT!" Rapigasus materialized and unlike its previous form, Rapidash, it had a brighter mane, a small unicorn like horn and large shining wings. It was ready to battle.

Dawn pulled out her Pokedex to try and identify this Pokemon but Dextette said, "No data available. Non-Sinnoh Pokemon." She was amazed, "How the hell did you obtain this Pokemon!"

"While you were cheering in victory, I left for the Battle Zone. I obtained me Pokemon I never knew existed so now I'm here to take you down!" Nozomi declared, "RAPIGASUS! FLAMETHROWER ON BUIZEL!"

"RAPPIIIIGAASSUS" A inferno of fire came blasting to where Buizel was.

Dawn ordered, "DODGE AND USE HYDRO PUMP!" Buizel jumped nearly avoiding the Flamethrower and throwing a Water Gun right for Rapigasus.

Nozomi grinned, "Now dodge Rapigasus and use Inferno Barrage!"

"What's Inferno Barrage, Nozomi?" Dawn asked never hearing of that move before.

"You see! INFERNO BARRAGE RAPIGASUS!" Nozomi said.

"RAAPIGASSUS!!!!!!!!!!!" Rapiagasus threw a multitude of apparently weak Fire Blasts in continuity and Buizel seems to dodge it.

"Wow. Inferno Barrage is so scary!" Dawn was saying sacrastically.

Nozomi said, "You should look at you Buizel!" Buizel was tired from dodging the many multitude of Fire Blasts, "I'm not done yet! RAPIGASUS INFERNO BLAST ONCE MORE!"

"RAPIGGGASUS!" It threw another multitude of fire blasts which this time Buizel couldn't dodge getting caught in the crossfire and the field exploded and Buizel screamed in pain as it struggled to get back up!"

"Are you okay Buizel?" She said but Buizel was unable to battle. "Return Buizel" She returned it to her Pokeball, "You did good.."

"Return Rapigasus! Good job!" She returned it to her Pokeball, "Come out Aereon!" (Imagine a white Espeon without the split tail but with large wings)

"Not another new Pokemon! Come on out Buneary!"

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Misty was looking through Ash's green bag having recollections of all the adventures they had together along with Brock. She held on to the hankerchief she gave to Ash and remembered the chance she could've had telling Ash of her feelings before he left for Hoenn. She probably wouldve kept him away from May and Dawn.

"Oh Ash. Why did you leave me?" She had tears in her eyes, "Why did you leave me behind as Gym Leader!" She could only be mad at herself for letting herself follow her sister's orders.

"I HATE YOU LILY AND VIOLET! WHILE YOU'VE BEEN ENJOYING YOURSELF, I HAD TO BE THE RESPONSIBLE ONE! AND DAISY I HATE YOU THE MOST!" She began sobbing deeply, "Why couldn't you leave me be with Ash?" She was crying.

She tried to wipe her tears with the hankerchief she gave Ash, "At least I can travel with Ash again. Just like good times..." She went through Ash's bag seeing items left behind from many of Ash's friends over the years like Brock's silverware, what seems to be half of a Contest ribbon, and what seems to be her lucky lure.

"He kept it!" She was happy as she saw her lucky lure still in perfect condition, "If it were someone else, they would've thrown it by now but Ash kept it!" She was happy and there was a knock on the door. "Who is it?"

"It's me. Your food and water's here" It was the kind elderly staff attendant.

Misty said, "Come in!" She tried to dry up her tears and the elderly staff attendant came in with the food covered by the lid and container and glasses of water. She thanked the man and gave him a tip

The attendant thanked Misty and saw she had been recently crying, "Are you okay? Miss Waterflower? Is everything all right?"

She nodded, "I would just like some alone time please." The attendant nodded and left the cart there and went on his way.

"Maybe a glass of water and some sandwiches will make me feel better" She grabbed a glass and poured some water from the container and drank it. Feeling a bit hungry not having eaten in a couple of days, she opened the lid only to see an Aipom.

"POM!! POM!" It was scared that the lid was opened by a stranger.

"Ahhhh!!!" Misty fell down in surprise instead of having sandwiches that she asked had bread crumbs and a Aipom eating it.

"Pom!! POM!!" It bounced off Misty's head and took the hankerchief she gave to Ash running out the door dropping its many hats from its tail.

Misty ran out of the door angry that aipom took the thing that reminded her of Ash, "GET BAQ HERE!" She wouldn't know that Aipom would lead right to her special someone...

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Ash and Damion, now out from work for today, along with Pikachu are heading to battle for old times sake since they were both rivals. Damion told Ash of this arena built within the ship where it' be perfect for a battle. Ash of course like always was getting excited for a battle. If only he was like this with a girl lol.

"Are we there yet?" An impatient Ash said.

Damion said, "We're close Ash just a little further. I won't go easy on you just because your my friend."

"I expect your battling to be as good as cooking fries..." Ash smiled.

Annoyed he said, "I'll forget I heard that. Well we're here in the Arena!" Damion showed Ash the large Battle Arena built in a classical architectural style.

"Wow. It's pretty big." Ash was impressed with the size of the arena but heard noises such sounded like battling coming from down in the arena. He went in. "Hey Damion. Sounds like someone's already using the battlefield."

Damion looks in with Ash, "Hey, isn't that your friend Dawn battling Nozomi, the famous Sinnoh Coordinator?" He pointed to her.

Nozomi grinned, "Dawn. It looks like your boyfriend came here to cheer you on?" She paused the battle.

Dawn scowled, "Why are you here, Ash? I thought you were stuffing your face at Burger King! Can't you see I'm in the middle of a battle..."

Nozomi coughed, "And losing it...."

"WHY DON'T YOU SHUT UP!" Dawn screamed at Nozomi and she turned to Ash, "So why you and Damion are here?"

"We were going to battle but once since you're battling. I guess me and Damion are cheering for you!" Ash said, "GIVE IT ALL YOU GOT!"

"PIKA-PIKA!"

Dawn turned away her concentration from the bleachers to Nozomi, "Where was I? Oh yea you have Aereon and I was with Buneary!"

"Bunearrry!" It was confident in winning.

Nozomi ordered, "AEREON! AGILITY AND QUICK ATTACK!"

"AEREON!" Its speed increased and made dopplegangers of itself surrounding Buneary and led to attack Buneary at once.

Dawn smirked, "Classic Nozomi! BUNEARY! SPIN AROUND AND USE SWIFT BARRAGE!"

Buneary nodded at the order, "BUNEARRY!!!" It began spinning around quickly as if the Battle were another Contest and used its trademark move that won the Sinnoh Grand Festival, "BUNEARRRY!" Swift attacks were all over the battlefield knocking down each copy of Aereon until it hit the real Aereon

"AEREOON!!" It was severly hit and fell down on the floor.

Nozomi said, "Are you okay, Aereon?? Say something!"

"AAEEEROON!" Despite being hurt, it got up determined to win. Nozomi was glad that it was okay despite heavy damage.

Dawn grinned, "You raised yourself a very tough Aereon..."

"Thanks. Your Pokemon are quite good. NOT! Aereon use Agility and then Tackle!" Nozomi said.

Dawn said, "Buneary, we got 'em right where we wanted! Use Lock-On and then Focus Punch!"

Aereon was heading for Buneary and had no chance at stopping its attack and Buneary's left paw began to shine and glow charging up energy, "BUNNNNNEAAAARRYY!!!!!!" It punched Aereon right on the kisser and it caused it to fly right on the air and it fell right on the floor.

"Aereon?" She ran right to the battlefield and saw it really hurt.

Dawn knew her Buneary probably was a little rough on it, "Hey Nozomi. It's my fault. I should've ordered a different move."

Nozomi stood up carrying her Aereon, "Oh your sorry? I MAKE YOU SORRY." She grabbed a Pokeball, "COME ON OUT RAPIGASUS! LET'S SHOW HER TRUE POWER!"

"RAPIGGGASUS!!!!!!!!!!!" It neighed and had the same fiery personality its trainer had.

Up from the stands, Ash was curious over Rapigasus since it must be a new species of Pokemon so he pressed the button and turned on his Orre Pokedex Visor. "I wonder what Dextette has to say about this Pokemon."

Dextette said, "Rapigasus. The Mystical Pegasus Pokemon. In ancient times before the invention of airplanes, it was used by Orre's ancient armies as early airborne fighters. It is a beautiful sight to see." He closed Dextette.

Damion commented, "It must've been a powerful Pokemon for people to use it in ancient warfare. Dawn better watch out. Let's find out.

Nervous at battling Nozomi's Rapigasus again but realizing her mistakes from the first round with Buizel, she's more determined, "BUNEARRY! USE SWIFT BARRAGE!"

"BUNEAAARRY!" A multitude of stars came flying towards Rapigasus with it expecting to hit it.

Nozomi grinned, "Okay, use your Blast Burn!"

"I THOUGHT BLAST BURN COULD ONLY BE TAUGHT TO FIRE STARTERS!" Dawn said, "IT'S IMPOSSIBLE."

Nozomi grinned, "Nothing's impossible. I trained all my Pokemon to the point that I taught them the most powerful attacks. Now enough chit-chat! BLAST BURN!"

"RAPPPPPIGASSUS!!!!!!!" A powerful inferno of fire came roaring down in quick speed hitting Buneary right before it had any chance of dodging.

"BUNEEEAAAARRY!" It yelped in pain as the Blast Burn turned into a fiery tornado causing larger degrees of pain every second.

Dawn pleaded, "OKAY! You made your point! You win the battle! Now please stop attacking my Buneary!"

"NO! NOT YET! NOT BEFORE I SEND IT FLYING, NOW FLY RIGHT ON TOP OF THE TWISTER AND DO A HYPER BEAM!" She ordered in which Rapigasus used its shining wings to soar above the fiery twister and sent a powerful Hyper Beam on to the pain-ridden Buneary ending the battle.."

She ran to Buneary, which it was bleeding severly and had many injuries, "Oh Buneary, I'm so sorry that I made you battle!" She looked at Nozomi who was grinning, "I HOPE YOUR HAPPY! WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY!"

Nozomi grins, "You better get your Pokemon all healed up! Too bad, there's no Nurse Joy. Oh well, if you improve your skills, I'll hope to see you in some Orre Contests." She leaves laughing and disappears with Aereon in her hands. Ash and Damion head to where Dawn was.

Dawn knew that Nozomi wasn't this cruel and something has took control of her. But this didn't matter as Dawn was weeping over her Buneary and her Empoleon came out. "Empoleon??"

"No worry. Buizel and Buneary will be okay...I hope!" She sees Ash and Damion heading right for where she was.

"DAWN!" Ash screamed, "Are your Pokemon alright?" He and Damion look right with Empoleon and Dawn at Buizel and Buneary.

"Pika-pika-pi" It was worried along with Empoleon about if Buizel and Buneary were okay.

Dawn saw Damion, "Oh hey! Damion." She was sort of happy to see him because she had a crush on him ever since they were little kids and hadn't thought much about him since she was thinking about Ash. She dazed at his dark yellow eyes.

Damion blushed, "Ummm Dawn. What are you staring at?"

"Ohhh. Nothing" She blushed and Ash remained as clueless as possible of what was going on between the two.

Ash looked at Buizel and Buneary, "Nozomi been rough with your Pokemon. It's not like her. If only Brock was here, maybe he could......"

Damion interrupts, "Sorry Ash for interrupting. I think I might help. While at Sinnoh, I spent some time at Celestic Town and this old woman taught me how to make custom-made Pokemon medicine from berries. I have some if you want me to help....."

She screamed, "YES! PLEASE HELP! AS LONG AS THEY GET BETTER! PLEASE!"

Damion went into his bag and pulled out a small wooden cup and poured it with a odd-smelling yellow liquid, "Buizel and Buneary. This might taste bitter for you but you guys and Dawn will thank me." He poured a fair amount of the bitter-tasting liquid each into the mouths of Buizel and Buneary. They coughed a bit but they began shining.

"What's going on with them?" Dawn looked worried.

Damion put finger in her mouth which was a sign to be silent, "Don't worry. That's the medicine working. Trust me." Dawn nodded.

Within a few seconds, Buizel and Buneary's wounds were all gone and they were better than before and they cried out, 'BUNEARRY!' and 'BUIZEEL!' She hugged them both since she was relieved. Buneary left Dawn immediately to hug Pikachu, which this time didn't so much much to the laughter of Dawn, Damion, Ash and Empoleon.

She hugged Damion very tightly causing him to blush, "Thank you so much. You're a true friend." She returned all her Pokemon to her Pokeballs

Damion smiled, "I didn't do anything except healing your Pokemon. You should thank old woman who taught me." Dawn and Damion shared an intimate moment and if it weren't for Ash looking at them, they would've kissed.

"Hey Damion." Dawn said, "Would you mind since Brock isn't here that you come with us until we reach the first Battle Facility in Orre?"

"Of course!" Damion exclaimed, "If Mr. Pokemon Master here won't mind."

"I won't mind! The more, the merrier!" Ash said.

"YES!" Dawn exclaimed at the approval

"Get a room you guys!" Ash joked around and Pikachu laughed with him, happy that Buneary was back at its ball. He thought, 'I thought this was a Pearlshipping fic. Oh well. I'm glad.'

Damion said, "Come on, Ash. Don't be jellin'. You wish you could be this with your girl." Ash nodded saying no but he knew he had someone of his one.

'Misty, Misty' It was all he could think about. He had never had feelings this deep and serious for any other girl except Misty, He was close once with May to attempt his feelings but she fell in love in Drew and went to Johto with him. Next thing he knew, he saw a purple monkey Pokemon running towards their direction. In the distance, he saw a dim image of a orange-red haired girl around his age wearing a red dress chasing him.

Dawn said, "Isn't that your Aipom judging from the hat accesory its wearing and mischief he's causing to that girl?"

Takes a closer look at the monkey Pokemon, "Dawn's right. It is your Aipom being chased."

Ash broke from his trance, "Misty?"
 
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Your story is getting better (a love triangle now?) but you still need to work on descriptions. Your chapters are primarily dialogue. You state that the characters are on a ship, or in a forest, or whatever, but you don't tell us anything else. You have to use details to create a vivid picture.

Use logical-spatial ordering of details. If you're describing a person, you might order your details from head to toe, or begin with a dominant feature (for example, Jessie's long maroon hair) and work from there. If you're describing a place, work from nearest to farthest or from a focal point outward.
 
okay I understand what you mean

so should I edit it and make it more descriptive

any help of course is very much appreciated
 
I DON'T OWN ORRE,CIPHER OR ANYTHING INVOLVED WITH POKEMON....

I know what you want to knowwhen the hell Cipher is going to appear??? Why aren't they at Orre. It will be just two or three more chapters on the ferry and they are off for Orre. Okay guys....

Chapter 5 - Love Triangle!!!

As we last left our heroes, Nozomi inflicted a terrible defeat on our Sinnoh star Coordinator Dawn and her Buneary and Buizel. Determined then and there to register for the Orre Grand Festival. Damion, fellow rival of Ash and old friend of Hikari, helped her defeated Pokemon get better. Asking Damion, he agreed to be with Ash and Dawn on their journey for a while by Dawn's request. Misty comes chasing Ash's Aipom not to realize she's going to run right into the person she was looking for..

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Dawn said, "Isn't that your Aipom judging from the hat accesory its wearing and mischief he's causing to that girl?"

Takes a closer look at the monkey Pokemon, "Dawn's right. It is your Aipom being chased by that girl."

From closing expection, "Why's Misty's chasing my Aipom??? What's she doing here?" Ash wondered.

Aipom was frightened of Misty, "Ehhhh OOhhhh EHHH!" It jumped on Ash's head bouncing off it causing Ash to yelp and it landed on Dawn's arms.

Misty ran right into Ash hitting him putting him on the floor with her on top of him, he said smiling at Misty, "Long time, no see Misty. If you wanted to go on top of me, we should've tooken it slow."

Misty blushed being right on of Ash, "Sorry Ash! I didn't mean to hit you!" She stood up and she offered her hand to pick up Ash, "THAT FREAKING AIPOM ATE ALL MY SANDWICHES AND TOOK THE HANKERCHIEF I GAVE YOU!"

Ash turned to Aipom angrily, "Aipom, I can't believe you snuck out of Professor Oak's Lab! And as always causing trouble! Now give back the hankerchief to Misty!"

"Ehhhh Oooo" Aipom sadly apologized and gave the hankerchief to the still angry Cerulean Gym Leader.

Misty said, "So this is your Aipom? I never you caught one? Naughty little Pokemon is it?"

"Yup. I caught it in the Indigo Plateau while challenging the Battle Frontier a couple of years back. I know what you mean Misty!" Ash smiled.

Misty said, "What makes you say that? That little monkey's been trouble?"

"Yea of course. When I left for Sinnoh only wanting to bring along Pikachu, Aipom snuck in and came in. It has a obession with headgear and always likes to take my hat."

"Ehhh OOHhh" Aipom jumped and grabbed Ash's hat with its tail and jumped to Damion's arms now. Ash revealed his messy raven-colored hair.

"Like that. Look's like Aipom did the same thing when I planned to head to Orre. I swear this little troublemaker as it in for me!" Ash allowed Aipom to go on its other shoulder.

Misty remarked, "It's not the first Pokemon to act like that. Remember Bayleef back at Johto? It always wanted to prove itself in battle and was jealous of Pikachu."

"Oh yea. I remember.." Ash and Misty smile at each other both kinda happy that they get to see each other. Misty saw Pikachu, "HI PIKACHU! YOU SURE LOOK AS CUTE AS EVER!"

"PIKA-PIKA!" Pikachu smiled.

Damion said to Ash, "Hey Mr. Pokemon Master. What are we? Connie Chung? Aren't you going to introduce us to from what it looks like your girlfriend?"

"Yea Ash. Introduce us!" Dawn said.

Misty and Ash blushed at this remark, Misty said, "We're not boyfriend and girlfriend. We're just really close friends."

"Sureeee...." Damion said.

Ash said, "Misty. These are my two friends that I made over at the Sinnoh region. Dawn "was" a amateur Trainer but through her determination, managed to win the Sinnoh Grand Festival. Right next to Dawn is my friend Damion who's my rival." He said to Damion and Dawn, "This is my friend Misty who I met when I first started my journey."

"Hello Dawn and Damion. Pleasure to meet you!" Misty was being friendly.

"Pleasure to meet you." Damion shaked hands.

Dawn screamed, "You're the Misty Ash here would always talk about and mention!"

Misty blushed and looked at Ash, "So Ash you've been talking about me for the past two years at Sinnoh! That's so sweet..."

"Well yea of course. I missed you ever so since you stayed at Cerulean as Gym Leader..." He blushed and Pikachu and Aipom was grinning.

Dawn said, "You're the Cerulean Gym Leader? I watch all your water-shows on cable. You're so beautiful in that mermaid costume!" Pulls out a autograph book, "Do you mind if I have your autograph! Make it to my biggest fan, Dawn."

Ash said, "Not again. You do this everytime we meet someone famous. Don't let me get started on the 'Lance incident'." Dawn was angry that Ash still remembered that.

"Don't worry Ash. I don't mind. This is nothing compared to the crowds that would want to see me every day back at Cerulean." Misty said.

Damion whispered to Dawn, "Hey Dawn. Don't you think we should leave these lovebirds alone to catch up? After all, we do need some catching up of our own." She happily agreed since she was merry that her friend Ash had someone he truly liked and since she gets to catch up with old memories...

"Hey Ash and Misty! Me and Damion are going for a walk around the ferry and catch up. We'll leave you alone. Good-bye." Dawn said leaving with Damion to walk away in the distance.

Ash said, "Okay. Do as you wish. As long you don't stay too late. You kids.." He smiled as he, Misty and Pikachu waved their hands saying good-bye for now.

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Ash with Pikachu on his shoulder was walking with his old friend Misty catching up on good times. They were at the food court with Pikachu and Misty sitting on the bench. Ash returned with three cones of ice cream coming back from the ice cream parlor just for the three of them.

"Here you go Misty, I bought you some ice cream. It's your favorite chocolate with sprinkles." He gave her a cone of ice cream in which she gladily accepted.

Misty's face changed to a tint of light pink, "You didn't have to give me ice cream. You'll know."

"But I want to buy you some ice cream. It looks like you haven't much in days. I'm happy as long as you're happy!" Ash said.

Misty blushed now to a tint of light red, "Oooo Ash."

Pikachu was annoyed since it didn't see its cone, "PIKA PIKA PIKA CHU!"

"Come on buddy. I would never forget you." He pulls out a cone instead of ice cream, but of ketchup especially made for Pikachu, "I told them to make it the way you like it."

"PIKA-CHU!!!" Its eyes googled as it snatched the ketchup-filled cone and began eating it.

Misty looked at Pikachu smiling, "Looks like he's happy. Ash, aren't you going to eat?"

He pulls out a vanilla cone, "Of course. I'm kinda full actually but I bought one myself to keep you and Pikachu company."

Misty said, "That's very nice. Why are you acting this way?"

"Well ever since to tell you the truth, when you became Gym Leader and couldn't come with me to Hoenn, I was crushed and a part of me was gone. Sure May was a nice person but it wasn't the same as was with Dawn. I didn't have the same feeling I had back at Johto." Ash said.

"I missed you too Ash. I cherished the memories we and Brock had. Trust me being a Gym Leader is hard work." Misty said.

Ash said, "I'm sure it is. Don't your sisters help you with managing the Gym? They wouldn't just leave their sis like that."

"OF COURSE NOT! THEY'RE USELESS ANYWAYS IF THEY OFFERED HELP ANYWAYS. I ALWAYS DID THE MANUAL WORK! LILY AND VIOLET ARE ALWAYS AT THE SALONS AND SPAS WHILE DAISY ONLY VISITS ONCE A WEEK TO TAKE A BREAK FROM HER ACTING!" She was screaming loudly....

"Misty! Calm down. Everyone in the entire ferry can hear you!" Ash said acting worried.

Misty apologized and returned to a calm tone, "Sorry Ash. You would understand if for the past four years being Gym Leader and not going to one place without it being work..." She changes the subject immediately, "So what's bringing you to the Orre region? Lemme guess. Does it involve battling?"

Ash said, "In fact, it does. I'm going to challenge the Orre Colosseum Circuit in which it is the equivalent of the Pokemon League elsewhere and be Champion!"

Misty sighed, "I guess some things never change. Can't you just take a break from all that battling for once and do something relaxing like going to the beach or read a book...."

"Battling and training is way better than doing all those things. I never been a fan of literature and the suns torches my skin." Ash exclaimed, "You should know me by now! So what brings you into Orre?"

Deciding to not tell the true purpose, "To relax a bit and visit some family..." In her thoughts, 'Let's see how you can run the Gym without scrawny Misty to help. Within a couple of months, that gym will close down.'

"I never knew you had family. You would've mentioned it one day." Ash said while eating his ice cream.

"My family's pretty far away from one another. It's hard to contact one another so I don't know much what happens. Whatever happened to Brock by the way?" Misty said.

"He's babysitting his siblings back at the Pewter Gym while his parents are a honeymoon at Hoenn." Ash said.

Misty responded, "Third Honeymoon?"

"Yup."

Misty wanted to ask this but decided she would be too direct, so she decided to take one by one, "Ash, would you mind if I rejoin while you challenge the Orre Colosseum Circuit."

Ash smiled, "Of course! It would be nice to have you traveling with me. Just like good old times." He said, "So did you obtain any new Pokemon since I last saw you."

Misty said, "Well Azurill is now Azumarill. I also caught a Totodile while fishing."

"Thats cool. Can I see your Pokemon?" Ash asked.

Misty looked onto her Azurill-shaped bag, "Let me just find my Pokeballs.." One of the Pokeballs came out and the Pokemon inside materializes.

"PSSSYYYY. PSYDDUCK." Psyduck as usual came out of its ball and it looked like as if it had a headache, "PSYYDUCK."

Misy got mad, "PSYDUCK AGAIN! RETURN!" Psyduck was returned to its Pokeball, "Some things never change. Ash, I'll show you my Pokemon later."

"Okay. So did you enjoy the ice cream I bought you?" Ash said .

Misty smiled, "Of course, is this from Carvel Ice Cream?" She asked because of the quality of the ice cream.

"Yup. Of course, when I was growing back at Pallet and wanted ice cream, i always got my mom to take me to eat at Carvel!" He and Misty began mutually.

Misty said, "I did the same thing. I so loved Carvel Ice Cream and always went to the Carvel street vendors near the Gym." She then stood up, "I'm going to get some more ice cream! Want some?"

Ash said, "No I'm full. Do you want some more, Pikachu of that ketchup cone?"

"PIKA-PIKA-PIKA!!!!!" It defimetely wanted more.

"Can you please tell the person there to bring another ketchup cone for Pikachu, Misty?" Ash said.

Misty winked. "Of course." She went to go to the ice cream parlor and Ash stared dreamily at Misty's beautiful body.

Pikachu began snickering, "Pika pi pi Pika PIkachu!"

"Do I like her? Of course Pikachu, Misty is like my best friend and I missed her so much. Nothing more to it."

"Pika Pika!" Pikachu said.

Ash blushed, "Maybe you're right. I do like her a lot since she's been with me from the start and always helped me. I wonder if she feels the same..."

"Pika Pika Pi" It went onto Ash's side and began assuring him.

"You think she really does like me. I tell her when I'm ready but not now." Ash and Pikachu saw Misty arrive back.

"Did you and Pikachu miss me?" Misty said, "And here is your ketchup cone, Pikachu?" Pikachu took it and began munching it down.

"Of course we did. Right Pikachu." Ash said turning to Pikachu.

Pikachu squealed happily in agreement, "PIKA PIKA!!"

"Hey Misty. Instead of just sitting a a table, let's just walk around...." Ash said.

"Of course, let's go. Let's see if it's cool with Pikachu. Do you mind walking while eating, Pikachu?" Misty said.

"Pika-Pi!" It said no and went along right behind Ash and Misty and left the parlor taking a walk around the ship.

"So how was the Sinnoh region like?" Misty said.

Ash looked at her and said, "Sinnoh I say is the most beautiful place I seen yet. So natural....You want to know what my favorite place was at Sinnoh?"

Misty said, "Yes, what place was it?"

He looks at a flower shop nearby, "I would say Floaroma Town. You wouldn't believe it. The entire place is covered with field of flowers and it is said that a Legendary Pokemon turned a barren wasteland to a fertile field of flowers."

"It must be a beautiful place. Kinda romantic don't you think." She could just imagine the place and had it in her head daydreaming about Ash and her sitting in the field of flowers enjoying the sunset.

Ash then waved his hands, "Hello Misty! Stop daydreaming! Pikachu shock her a bit so she'll wake up!"

She then woke up, "Ohh. Sorry. Just thinking about the place you were telling me about. I would like to go one day..."

Ash said, "Hey..Maybe I can take you there one day....." His face then turned light pink at the thought of him and Misty alone, 'That would be nice being with Misty alone. The perfect place to tell her my feelings. WAIT! I have feelings for her oh mannn.' He was in deep thought and Misty and Pikachu were just staring..

"Hello, Ash???? ASH??? Man....he says I'm a daydreamer..." She waves her hand and Ash wakes up from his dream.

"Sorry Mist. Just thinking about the place too." He blushed at the thought of Misty and she eventually blushed as well.

"Hey why you called Mist?" She said while eating her ice cream.

Ash said, "Do you mind? It's nothing wrong every now and then to call you Mist. I always called Brock Brocko just for the hell of it."

"No I don't mind. It's nice having a pet name. You mind if I call you Ashy!" She smiles at Ash.

Ash thinks about it, "Ashy?? Hmmmm...Its better than what my rivals call me. I'm cool with it...."

Pikachu sees a poster and runs to it, dropping its cone in the process, and reading the poster and calls out its trainer, "PIKA-PI!!!!"

"Hey Pikachu, what you looking at?" Misty goes up right behind him with her arms around Ash, but he didn't seem to mind.

"Looks like tomorrow there will be a mini-Pokemon battle Tournament for any trainers onboard who want to compete." She knew Ash wanted to compete.

Ash nodded, "Of course, me and Pikachu are going to win!" He was thinking, 'I bet Damion is joining up. I beat 'em like last time...."

"One catch. You need a team of six Pokemon or else you can't qualify. How many Pokemon you have with you?"

"I came planning to go with Pikachu like I did at Hoenn. Aipom snuck in so that's two. My Egg hasn't hatched and it'll be too young. Oh well...." He grew in a slump, "There's no Pokemon Center on board so I can't transport some of my Pokemon from Professor Oak's..."

"Pika....chu.." It said sadly joining in Ash's moping...

Misty gave good news, "There might be no Pokemon Center. But there's a place called the Net Cafe onboard where people can videophone people and transport their Pokemon from their seperate hometowns."

"REALLY THERE IS? THEN, IT MEANS THAT WE'RE COMPETING AFTER ALL!" Ash exclaimed. Pikachu as usual cheered as well.

"In fact, the Net Cafe says the Poster is where you register." Misty read.

He immediately hugs her causing her to blush, "YOU'RE THE BEST! LET's GO!"

Ash then goes off with Pikachu trying to run. Misty in her thoughts, 'He thinks I'm the best!! His body is so warmmm...I almost got Ash..' She smiled and realized Ash and Pikachu were far away.

"HEY MISTY! HURRY UP, YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE IT IS. WAIT UP!" She shouted as she ran. In her thoughts, 'Impatient Ash. He can never wait. Oh well I have him all to myself....' Misty chased after Ash.....

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Meanwhile, on the other side of the ferry, good old Damion was with Dawn walking around since they had to give the 'lovebirds' some privacy. Along the way, they had a chance to look back at their own relationship in which up to now, which up to now had been just a friendship since they were kids back at Twinleaf Town. She lost contact right when she left Twinleaf Town to start a journey eventually meeting up with Ash and Brock. She then found out that he had already started his journey with a Chimchar and became a quick rival of Ash. Yet, he denied it but he was jealous since he thought Dawn would fall for Ash. He soon began to realize he was wrong so he saw Ash as a friend and took pursuit at Dawn........

"So Dawn, how was it traveling with Ash and Brock in those two years?" A curious Damion asked.

"It had its rough spots of course...but it was all right....Me and Ash always agrued over whether Contests or Gym Battles were better. Brock usually kept the peace..." Dawn said..

Damion said, "Did you and Mr. Pokemon Master agrued that much? Wouldn't have you left?"

"Of course, we agrued frequently. Sometimes, I want to wring his little neck and.... Despite all that without Ash's help, I probably wouldn't have made it as a Trainer and especially as Sinnoh's Grand Festival Champion. Plus, I don't do alone....So how was your journey? You traveled alone?"

Damion remembered, "Well it was alright and easy getting all those badges. I traveled with some people for a little while. I could name all of them.." He began telling of all the people and Dawn was amazed of the people...

"You met Riley?" Dawn wondered that Damion met Riley, a highly skilled trainer who had skill comparable to the Elite Four and managed to defeat Ash quite easily.

"Of course I know him. We were quite good friends. In fact I called him today earlier, and he was accepted to replace Byron as one of te Gym Leaders."

Dawn and Damion sat on a bench. Dawn said, "Hmmmmm..thats nice. Anyone else who you traveled with??"

"Well there was this one girl I traveled with? Her name was Cheryl, she was really nice. She was hiding in Eterna Forest from Team Galactic when I met her. For around a month or so, we traveled and became good friends. We parted ways when we reached Floarama Town since she lived there. I could remember her emerald eyes and long green hair..."

Dawn teased him, "Sounds like you LIKED her......" He instantly blushed out of embrassment..

"NOT TRUE! SPEAKING OF CRUSHES, I HEARD YOU LIKED KENGO, REMEMBER BACK WHEN WE WERE KIDS AT TWINLEAF TOWN! YOU TOTALLY CRUSHED ON HIM....AND HE DIDNT EVEN LIKE YOU AT FIRST!!!" He said....

Dawn laughed, "I did like four years ago! I don't like him like that anymore....there was someone I did and still do..."

"How about our own Pokemon Master, Ash Ketchum! Don't deny it! I saw it on your face when you were looking at him when me and Ash had our first battle back at Pastoria." In his thoughts, 'Hopefully Dawn doesn't have feelings for Ash and loves me like I love her.

She blushed, "Well can you keep a secret of course? Damion?"

He said, "Sure, of course." In his deep thoughts, 'Damn she likes him. I know it. That lucky dense bastard.' "Go on."

"Well, at first I had a tiny crush on Ash ever since I saw him suffer just to save Pikachu from Team Rocket. He may be sometimes a jerk, but I kinda grown attached to him. That was in fact the real reason I tried to follow up here onboard to Orre." Dawn said.

Damion felt like the entire world around him collasped and in his thoughts, 'Why, Dawn. You don't know how much I love you. But thank God Ash is dense.' He tried to put on a happy face, "Wow, Dawn have you thought this through? You're just 12 while he's 17. You're too young to think about love yet.."

"I know you share the close minded opinion of everyone else that someone my age can't love and there's a 5 year difference. WELL I LOVE HIM!" Damion with this felt even more crushed but he tried to keep his cool.

Damion tried to mildy crush her hopes, "You do know there's that Misty girl that just came in. She may not look much but I could tell from her eyes that she wants Ash as much as you do."

"I'll see about that......" Dawn said, "HEY DAMION!"

Damion was pretty much crushed but went along, "What do you want, Dawn?"

"I'LL RACE YOU BACK TO MY SUITE! LAST PERSON THERE IS A SLOWBRO!!" She runs quite a distance into the direction of her suite until she bumps into someone. She falls down and falls right on the tile floor. "Oucchhh"

"WATCH IT!!" A familiar teenage boy around 16 years old angry of course and stroking his purple hair, "Oh look who happen to hit me, its whatever your name is..."

Damion runs to where Dawn had bumped to the guy, "Hey Dawn, are you okay? Wait a minute PAUL WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!" Dawn nodded and got up.

"Hey Paul! I got a name you know! We known each other for TWO YEARS ALREADY!" Dawn screamed but of course Paul ignored her.

Paul scoffed at Dawn and turned to Damion, "I was going to ask you guys the same question. I thought the ferry doesn't let losers in I guess there must've been a accident at handing out tickets...I thought only the best came here."

Dawn who so wanted to hit Paul in the jaw was stopped by Damion who said a comeback, "We bought our tickets and speaking of losers, who brought you here!!" Dawn giggled at the comeback.

Paul was mad but decided to be the better man, "Nice comeback. Almost as nice as your whore mom was in bed last night before I came on board!" Damion was angry at this comment and sensitive about things said about his mother, but Dawn stopped him.

"As much as I like to spar quick jabs at you, I'm looking for Mr. Pokemon Master who always hangs around this little girl.." Dawn hated when people did not know her name especially Paul.

"Ash is not here with us. He's with a old friend of his. BY THE WAY, NAME IS DAWN!!!" Dawn screamed at him...

Paul made fun of her, "Awwww...Mr Pokemon Master doesn't like you. At least he's smart at one thing not liking you. Well as much as I like to hang with the geek squad, I'm heading back to my room. Bye losers!" Within a few seconds, Paul disappeared within the constantly moving crowds of visitors...

"What a jerk, I can't believe you, Ash and Brock had to deal with this asshole.." Damion said.

Dawn said, "I knoww....Well let's head back to the suite. You can tell me about some of your travels. I bet Misty and Ash are back also. 'Oh man. What if they are? Hopefully they're not kissing..."

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Ash had made it to the Net Cafe, where he could call Professor Oak to borrow some Pokemon for a Competition tomorrow on board in the Arena. He was cheering along with Pikachu and Aipom, which released itself from its Pokeball that he beat Misty there. Misty of course was panting as she was wearing high heels and it was a pain in the...you know where..

"We did it. We win again, guys! With all this running, I bet I could be a track star in the Kanto Olympic Team." He laughed and thought, 'Where's Misty? Must be behind. God as much as I like her. She's so slow....'

"PIKACHU!!" It squealed happily..

"Ehhhhh OOoo Ahhhhh!!" Aipom joined in with Pikachu.

"My god Ash. Why did you have to go so fast! You sure worked out quite a bit didn't ya??" Misty was panting heavily and fell on the floor.

"Yea of course. Are you okay, Misty?" He pulled her body up.

'He's so nice to me. I love him so....' She said, "I'm fine. Thanks Ash. So we're here? What Pokemon are you gonna get from Professor Oak's?" They were right in front of the Net Cafe, which in his name a Cafe but with Wi-Fi and lots of state of the art Computers and Videophones and it was bustling with people mostly trainers just hanging out.

"Hmmm. I'm not sure. I collected a large collection of Pokemon. I'm gonna probably use the Pokemon I had from my original roster..."

"Ehhhh OOOO AHHHH!!!" Aipom looked at Ash angrily at this comment.

Ash laughed nervously, "Of course Aipom will be participating in the Competition..."

"Oooohhhhn Ehhh Ahhh!" It still wasn't satsified with what Ash said.

Ash said, "Okay Okay! Aipom! You'll participate and you'll be on my journey! Happy now!!"

"Ehhhh Oooo Ahhh!" Aipom was happy and went on Ash's left shoulder opposite to where Pikachu was.

Misty smiled, "Looks like Aipom has an affection for you! Just like a girl. Well Ash let's go...." They went in.

A few minutes later Ash and Misty together paid the fee to use the new PokeApple-brand Videophones they recently had in place. Ash and Misty sat down on a chair in the far corner of the cafe. Aipom and Pikachu were on the floor talking.

"Mist. Thanks for helping me with the fee to use this thing." He smiled at her, 'She's such a good friend.'

Misty of course was happy to help out someone, "Of course, anything for my best friend!!" In her thoughts, 'I mean anything for my love..'

"Thanks again. You're my best friend too." He turns back to the videophone screen, "Okay I'm online. Now to type Oak's videophone number." He takes out a phonebook where he tries to find hi number.

Misty pulls out a paper, "No worry I got it here. I say the numbers and you write okay?" Ash nods and turns to videophone screen.

"Okay 12022-666-911 You got that down???" Misty looked to Ash who nodded.

"Wait. Someone's picking up....." Ash said...

A man around 20-22 picked up. He wore a red headband and his green shirt and was with Marill, "Hello??"

"Hey Tracey. Whatsup!! It's me Ash and Misty!!" The excited trainer said.

Misty went in and said, "Hi Tracey!"

"Hey Misty and Ash! No time to talk! Me and Professor Oak are looking for your Aipom. It seemed to have left the Lab and attempted to follow you."

Aipom jumped right into Ash's shoulder and waved its hand to the screen. Misty and Ash smiled. Ash said, "No need to worry. Aipom's with me."

"Well thanks good to know. We been searching as far as Virdian for that crazy monkey. Misty, by the way, your sisters asked me of where I was. Tell them?" Tracey said.

Misty of course did not want her sisters to know where she was. "Don't tell 'em anything. I''m here with Ash and a friend sharing his suite."

"ook. So Ash, have you already arrived at the Orre region?" Tracey said, "The ferry from Pallet must be quick."

"No, we still have like a week at least before we arrive at Gateon Port. Where's Professor Oak I need to tell him something...."

"He's not at the Lab. He's still searching for Aipom. He's over at Route 1. What do you need?" Tracey said.

"Ohhh. Well I need four Pokemon from back at the Lab so I can participate in this Pokemon Competition Tomorrow....." Ash said, "Could you get some Pokemon please. I want....."

Before he could say the names, Tracey said "Say no more! I know the perfect Pokemon of yours for that!" He ran out before Ash could say anything making him a bit irritated.

"No worry Ash. I'm sure he'll send ya some good Pokemon. I believe you're going to win Ash..." She whispers into Ash's ear making him blush pink, 'It may seem awkward Ash at first, but I have you where I want..'

Tracey came back quickly and teased, "OOOOOOO. I should've stayed out a bit more. Get a room you guys! It's a cafe!" Both teenagers blushed scarlet red at the comment and denied it even though they both liked each other..

"Shut up Tracey!" She still blushed but was also mad.

Ash went along with it, "Yea shut up Tracey. Just give me the Pokemon you got for me."

Tracey laughed, "They've been already transported. There right next to you, dumbie." Points to the 4 Pokeballs there, "Well good-bye...." Tracey signed off.

"Aren't you going to open the Pokeballs here?" Misty said while Ash grabbed the Pokeballs and put it on his belt.

"I'll bring 'em out when we get back to the suite. Frankly, I'm a bit tired and want to rest in the bed before I go outside for training in that tournament. You coming, Mist?"

"Okay, let's go..." Misty said, a little tired himself. Misty and Ash with Aipom and Pikachu go his shoulder...

"Let me call Dawn of course to tell her me and you are heading back to the suite," Grabs his PDA.

Misty said, "Thats nice" 'Oh crap, why does he wanna call her? Stay cool Misty. Ash likes you and he's only friends with that little girl.'

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Dawn and Damion after their encounter with Paul, were walking together outside watching other Trainers train and battle with their Pokemon with others. The sun was beginning to set as the first day at sea was about to end. They saw Wingull and Pelipper flying above everyone on the ship and swimming in the water were Dewgong, Seel and Wailmer and Wailord. A small band hired by the ferry was playing music while all this was going on.

"The sun looks so beautiful over here." Dawn said, "Makes you just want to think. The Pokemon are so cool."

Damion looked on with her, "It's very nice..." 'Although not as beautiful as you are, my sweet.' He thought as he looked on. "Paul was such a jerk to us, wasn't he?"

"Yup, we're being nice by calling him a jerk. He's more of an ASS if you know what I mean..."

"Of course, I know." He sees a large crowd cheering and seems like they were surrounding something, "Hey Dawn. Let's go check it out! You mind?"

"Of course not. It's good to see someone else battle for a change rather than me." Dawn followed Damion shoving the people in the crowd.

He grabbed his friends and shoved his way into the front asking a woman, a blonde-haired woman in her 20s wearing blue jacket and white pants, "Hey, miss what's going on?"

She said, "Don't you know? Two of one of the best Pokemon trainers from overseas are coming here to battle one another?"

Dawn was excited, "Really? Who?"

"It's the Latin lover Antonio Cortes aganist African Serengeti superstar, Akeem." The blonde woman said, "By the way, name's Carla Reed from Jacobilife City at Poloria."

Dawn introduced herself, "I'm Dawn and this is my friend Damion."

"Pleasure to meet you." Dawn and Damion each shake Carla's hand.

"Yea but I never heard of these guys Cortes or Akeem. Then again, I don't pay attention to stuff that goes outside Sinnoh." Damion said.

Dawn grinned, "If you had subscribed monthly to PokeNews International or go on their website as I do, you know about these guys. Antonio Cortez is from the foreign region of Equatoria and the Equatorian Prix Champion for ten years in a row inclduing this year. He is very humanitatarian and always uses a different Pokemon roster in each match."

"Okay....and about the guy Akeem." Damion asked, "What's the info on him.."

"Well Akeem is said to have found his first Pokemon, a Tauros when protecting it from a pack of Persians. He soon had his own journey and at the age of 12, became Champion of Kenya's National PokeTournament. So he's pretty powerful and he concentrates on offense." Dawn said.

Damion said, "Wow they must be even more powerful than the Sinnoh Elite Four..."

"Shushhh the battle is about to begin." Carla was saying...

Dawn's phone began to ring and she decided to leave the crowd saying she had to take this. Damion thought, 'Now who's calling her now.' He decided to leave the crowd too to eavesdrop.

"Yea uh huh. Cool. What were am I? Nothing important and I'm pretty much bored here. Uh huh. Nah, I was going to come back anywayz. Okay good-bye." Dawn hanged up her phone and was about to leave and saw Damion, "Were you eavesdropping? You know I don't like eavesdropping! By the way, I have to go now.."

"Who was it on the phone?" Damion asked, 'I already know who he is.'

Dawn said, "It's Ash. He was telling me of how Misty and he were back at the suite. I have to go to make sure that Misty girl doesn't pull a move on my Ash! Bye! Tell me of how the match will go. See ya at the tournament tomorrow."

Damion nodded and saw her skip happily, 'Ash. I will defeat you and you will not get Dawn!' He begin to tear a bot

Carla came out of the crowd and said, "Hey, where's Dawn. She's missing a good match. What's wrong?"

He wiped out his tears trying to look like nothing happened, "Uhh something came up so she had to go. I'll go tell her tomorrow. He joined Carla in watching the match yet he felt empty without Dawn and grew an greater anger towards Ash....it would grow to something more threatening....

From the distance, Paul was watching and hearing everything with his binoculars and hearing ampliflier. He was grinning, "Looks like there's something romantic tension between Ashy-loser and his friends." He grins and decides to leave.

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Ash and Misty were back at the suite. Ash and Misty were both at bed (not sex, they are at each of their own beds resting.) It had been a long first day and it was still another six to go before they arrived at Orre. Misty took off her white high-heels and stockings and rested. Ash, was going to take off his jacket. The Pokemon were sleeping in the beanbag chair.

'Yeah, take off your jacket. In fact take off your black shirt and show me that hot bod of yours.' Misty stared dreamily.

Ash said, "It's a little stuffy inside. Mind if I take off my jacket."

"Nah. I don't mind." 'If fact, take off your shirt as well and show me your body.'

"Okay." He took off his jacket revealing his black shirt, the same one he pretty much for the past seven years. It didn't reveal much but he had grown more muscular through all that traveling.

Misty said, "Looking good Ashy. Trying to impress me?" She said lustfully.

Ash looked at her as if she was nuts, "Ohhh...nooo! Well I'm gonna go back outside and train with my Pokemon that Tracey sent me.

"Hey! You promised to at least show me what Pokemon you got with you." Misty said..

Ash said, "Okay. But I just show you." Grabs four Pokeballs and throws one of them.

The first Pokemon to appear was a small blue crocodile like Pokemon, "TOTODILE! TOTA TOTA TOTA!" Totodile began dancing.

Misty exclaimed, "HEY ITS TOTODILE!" She was excited since it was a Water Type Pokemon.

Ash threw out another Pokeball, "Let's see what this Pokeball holds..."

A small red turtle-like Pokemon appeared, "Torkoal..."

"Cool, an fire-type Torkoal!!!!" Misty exclaimed.

Scared of seeing Misty for basically the first time, it began crying gushing tears all over, "TORRRK!! TORKAOL!!!!!"

"What did I do??" Misty wondered.

"Nothing. Torkoal just doesn't know you." Turns to Torkoal and comforts him, "It's okay Torkoal. She's a friend no need to worry.." Torkoal calmed down. "Okay now for my fifth Pokemon. Come on out!"

"CORRRPPHISH!!!" The small energetic lobster water-type Pokemon showed off its claws to the others.

Looks at his sixth Pokemon. "Okay. Five Pokemon I got." In his thoughts, 'Hopefully it'll be a strong one.' He kissed it for luck and threw it to the ground.

A familiar lovey dovey grass Starter Pokemon materialized, "BAY BAY!!! BAYLEEF!" It saw its beloved trainer, "BAY!!!!!" Itr ran into Ash and was on top of it licking Ash affectionally.

"Awwwww. Bayleef still has that crush on you. Ashy!!" Misty smiled looking at the display of affection that hasn't been reduced for years without seeing it. 'I know what Bayleef feels like. Finally seeing the person of your desire who's returned to you after so long.'

Ash was being licked, "Heyyy!! BAYLEEF STOP IT! I MISSED YA TOO!" Bayleef eventually stopped and Ash got up.

Totodile to try to play with Torkoal by accidentally biting it causing it to star crying again. Torkoal in its tears accidentally in revenge throws an Ember on Totodile which it dodges hitting Coprhish who launches a Bubblebeam on Bayleef which tries to launch a Razor Leaf on it accidentally hitting Aipom and waking up Pikachu. Aipom, angry at this used Swift on all the other Pokemon causing much tension.

Misty moving her head disappointed that Ash's Pokemon were acting in such a way, "WHAT ARE YOU DOING! CONTROL YOUR POKEMON!!" She screamed when Torkoal accidentaly almost burn her hair with Flamethrower after being hit by Totodile's Water Gun.

"OKAY! PIKACHU USE THUNDERSHOCK TO MAKE 'EM STOP!!" Ash ordered.

Pikachu nodded, "PIKKKKKAAACHUUUUU!!!!!" The Pokemon calmed down and Pikachu began speaking to them, "PIKA PIKACHU PIKAA PIKACHU CHU CHU PIKA!!!" The Pokemon understood and calmed down and apologized to one another and to Ash and Misty.

"NOW GUYS!" Ash said to his Pokemon.

"EEHHHH OOOHHH"

"BAY!"

Ash corrected himself, "Okay guys and GALS!! I need you guys to win me a Pokemon Competition that starts tomorrow. I know it's been years for most of you since I trained you but I know you can beat them. Isn't that right!!"

"PIKAA"

"EHHH OOOHHH AHHH!!!"

"TOTO TOTO DILE"

"TORKOAL!!!"

"COR CORPHISH!"

"BAYLEE!!"

"HEY MISTY!!" Ash said to Misty who was brushing her long red-orange hair.

"What do you want, Ash?" Misty said.

"Me and my Pokemon are going outside for some training. Can you take care of my Egg for me? It's in my bag." Ash asked opening the door.

"Of course, you can ask me anything...Go on and train and win!" She smiled.

Ash smiled, "Thanks, I'll be back at midnight....Don't miss too much.." Misty said good-bye and Ash left returning his Pokemon to his Pokeballs except Pikachu and left.

Misty looked at his green bag and opened it, "COOL! ASH DOES HAVE AN EGG! Just like me one time as I remember..." She tried looking for it beneath all the stuff he had and saw a Blue-colored Egg with Black stripes. "IT'S A RIOLU EGG!" , exclaimed Misty. She knew of the rare Pokemon which evolved to even the rarer, very powerful Lucario, which only the trainers of myth have. "I wonder how Ash obtained it....."

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Damion was walking around the steer of the ferry with his Scizor who he named "Red." His blonde hair was flowing in the wind and looked at the full moon. He had now growing envy for Ash, who not only has Misty but stole the one he loves, Dawn from him. He was determined to win at the tournament and at the Orre Colosseum Circuit and become Champion hopefully impressing Dawn.

"Scizzzorrr." Red looked at its trainer knowing that something was bothering him.

Damion looked at its Pokemon knowing it meant well, "No Scizor nothing's wrong." 'Ash Ketchum, we may be friends but from now on, we're rivals for Dawn's affection.'

"Sciz Scizor...." Scizor knew something was bugging it.

"Okay, okay. There is something wrong. The person of my affections is Dawn. Have you ever felt the pain of rejection and betrayal?"

It nodded no.

Damion felt sadness in his heart, "It's a powerful and negative feeling. For all my life, me and Dawn were friends but once I left for my Pokemon journey, my feelings for her evolved as you have, my friend. Once I saw her with Ash, I felt a bit jealous but tried not to think much of it..."

"Scizzzor." It was amazed of how emotional its trainer was...

"Recently, I thought of telling her my feelings but then I found out that she has feelings for Ash. I'm feeling betrayed since Ash had won her and knows I like her. Maybe I shouldn't think much of it...but I'm feeling a weird feeling inside of me." He had rage growing inside of him soon a dark side was beginning to form, 'I soon destroy Ash Ketchum.' He returned Scizor to its Pokeball.

"Hey Damion!!" A voice called out for him.

'It's him he thought. Destroy him!' His dark presence said but he was ignored by his still powerful somewhat light side. He turned around and saw it was Ash, wearing a black shirt and some jeans carrying Pikachu..."Oh hey Ash..."

"Why are you talking to yourself?" Ash said acting concerned, "Unhealthy I heard a habit that is."

"Nothing. Just thinking."

Ash said, "Hey! Instead of thinking, why don't you train along with me??"

"Nah. I was going to sleep anywayz." Damion said turning to the door walking to that direction.

Ash said, "It's only seven o' clock! The night has yet to be borne....Come on! Don't be a wimp!"

'He did not so call me a WIMP!! I kick his...wait I should calm down. If I keep this on, the darkness in me will grow. Try and act cool. "I want to rest after all my Pokemon to rest also. Goodbye Ash and Pikachu." He left and went back to his suite...

"Weird kid. Huh Pikachu?" Ash looked on in where Damion went.

"Pika-pi"

"Well let's get to training....." Ash said throwing out his Pokeballs.

In the distance, the infamous trio, Jessie, James and Meowth were watching Ash taking out all his Pokemon which they were very valuable if obtained. They were wearing janitor uniforms and fake mustaches so no one would reconize them especially the authorities.

"Hey! Looks like there's some tension growing within the twerps." James popped in.

Meowth looked at Ash, "Did you hear that blonde twerp? He's in love with the little twerpette while she's lovey-dovey over the old twerp while he's at love with the twerpette Misty..."

"I smell a new idea to the writers. It's a Pokemon drama! Young love............" James said

Jessie butted in, "WHY ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT POKEDRAMAS! WE HAVE TO STICK BY THE AUTHOR'S SCRIPT!!"

"Him and what army??" James sneered and ignored Jessie's warning.

Seconds later, a large Thunderbolt from above hits James causing him to scream in pain and he was all charred up. Jessie gave him a 'I told you so.'

"Sorry Luis James will listen! RIGHT??" She prepared a fist to make him comply and he nodded, "Okay. Where we were?"

Meowth looked at his script, "WE HAVE TO GRAB THAT PIKACHU!!!"

"YES, ONE PIKACHU MEANS PROMOTION, MONEY, AND FRIENDS!!!" Jessie, James and Meowth exclaimed.

A large gruff figure appears with a deep and frightening voice, "HEY YOU THREE! STOP YOUR GABBERING AND GET BACK TO WORK, JANITORS!!"]

James responded, "But we're not......"

"OF COURSE YOU ARE! YOU'RE THE NEW IMMIGRANT JANITORS FROM KANTO!!! WELL IF YOU DONT WANT YOUR ASS KICKED, GET BACK TO WORK!" the man grabs Jessie, James and Meowth and drags 'em.

"Looks like..." Meowth said.

They all said, "TEAM ROCKET"S DRAGGIN OFF AGAIN!!!" They disappear in the darkness!"

"Hey you heard that Pikachu?" Ash said thinking he heard Team Rocket

Pikachu said no.

"Oh, let's get back to training...."

"PIKA-CHU!!!"

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Dawn was right outside her, Ash and Misty's suite returning after looking alll over the suites on the ferry to go rest. She wanted to go see Ash in the chance Misty, now targeted as a rival for her affections for Ash, somewhere else. She was so tired from walking around with Damion.

"Finally I'm back at Room 32A. Thank god." She was tired yet was happy, "Walking all afternoon sure can make a girl tired..."

One of her Pokeballs fell on the floor and it materialized, "BUNNEARRYYYY!!!!!!!" It thought it heard Ash so Pikachu it thought it was nearby..."Bunea!! Bunearry!"

"Buneary! How do you get out of your Pokeball? Wait, I know why!!!" She teased the little chocolate covered Pokemon.

It tried to not know, "Bunearrry?????"

Dawn teased, "I know that you love Ash's Pikachu. You naughty thing you.... You stole female lingerie back at the clothing store at small to get Pikachu at bed...huh..."

Buneary's face began to glow pink, "Bunni Buneary!!!"

"I know that feeling. I kinda like the trainer. I just know Ash is here!! And if he's here. PIKACHU THERE TOO!!!"

"BUNNI!!!"

She kicks the door open, "I'M HERE ASH!!!!!!"

What she didn't know that the very person she didn't want to be in that suite was there and she was exactly not that fully clothed.......

Chapter ends
 
I dont own the franchise Pokemon even though that would be cool.

Chapter 6-Ferry Pokemon Competition Part 1

As we last saw our heroes, they were on the SS Tsunami on route to the Orre region. New and old friends meet each other. As Ash and Damion each train their Pokemon for the Competition, tension starts to form within. Misty has reunited with Ash and is determined to confess her feelings as Ash wishes to do the same. Dawn of course, has her own plans with Ash and does not take Misty well. Damion of course, loves Dawn yet knows she likes Ash causing him to grow a hatred. With her defeat to Nozomi, she now is determined to participate in the Orre Ribbon Cup. And of Paul? Stay tuned....

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She kicks the door open, "I'M HERE ASH!!!!!!"

What she didn't know that the very person she didn't want to be in that suite was there and she was exactly not that fully clothed.....

"AHHHHHH!!!!" Misty screamed as she only wore a towel since she just a shower. 'GOD! WHY CAN'T I HAVE SOME PRIVACY!' She thought angrily

Dawn left and slammed the door, "SORRRY!!!!!" She tried to block what she saw, "OH MAN! BUNEARY! I THOUGHT MISTY WASN'T THERE!!"

"BUNEE!!" It squealed while its paws covered its tiny eyes trying to block the image as it never saw a nude human..

She looked at Buneary, "You don't think Misty not too mad with us, Buneary. We didn't mean to barge...." She looked at the Pokemon, "Return!"

Suddenly, they heard Misty's voice from outside, "Okay, Dawn you can come in now. I'm dressed."

'At least Misty's not mad," Dawn opened the door and entered in to the suite . Misty of course was in her light blue pajamas and sitting on bed.

"Hi Misty. Sorry that I came in at the wrong time. I thought..." Dawn tried to explain to Misty who she had heard from Brock had a fiery temper and had a mallet.

'Man. That girl had to barge in while I was dressing. GOD, NO PRIVACY! Calm down, Misty..She said she didn't mean it." Misty faked a smile and said, "It's okay. It happens to everyone. Something similar happened to me too...."

"Oh really, mind telling me??" Dawn was curious.

Misty smiled, "Of course. Well It was like this....." She began to explain the story to Dawn, "Well it was many years ago back when we were traveling in the Johto region."

"Okay go on.." Dawn said..

"Well it was like say five or so years ago. Ash was heading to challenge Jasmine, the Gym Leader of Olivine for this sixth badge. Me and Brock of course were tired and we've been traveling nonstop for weeks and we were tired and of course Ash wanted to come along anyways." Misty said.....

Dawn said, "I so understand what you mean! Please, go on...." She seemed really excited at the story since it was about Ash. And Ash never seemed to mention his old travels with her.

"After nagging him and a game of Rock, Paper, Scissors in which I won, so we stopped at the next Pokemon Center which was pretty big compared to the other ones. So we planned to stay there for the day we came and the one after that. Once we went inside and saw the Nurse Joy, Brock turned to Latin lover mode and started flirting with her...."

Dawn was surprised, "Wow, even back then Brock did that? I just thought it was just a habit he just picked up..."

"Brock was born a pervert. It's a good thing almost everyone rejects him." Misty laughed, "But let me get back to the story....So since it was my job to manhandle Brock whenever he does this. So I grabbed him by the ear giving him pain. A couple of hours later, Brock decided to head into the next town to buy some supplies along with all our Pokemon and Ash was at the hot water pools next to the Pokemon Center so I decided to come in to rest as well. As I was in my towel, I saw Ash take off his towel and I saw him......" Misty then began to blush....

Dawn teased her, "You saw his naked body?" She began laughing.....' She seems nice. But that's not going to stop me to get Ash.'

"I blushed and decided to sneak up on him calling his name making him scream causing to jump into the pool. He was so mad at me..." Misty and Dawn laughed at the story.

Dawn then said, "How did you first meet Ash? I know that Ash been a Trainer for a long time Brock told me."

Misty said, "Let's see. It all happened back seven years ago back at the Kanto region. I was with my Pokemon doing fishing like I usually do looking to catch me a Tentacool which is like my favorite! Then I caught something and I struggled to get it....."

"What did you catch?" Dawn said looking like a little girl being read...'Maybe Misty is not so bad.....She can be a good friend....' ]

"Well I caught Ash and his Pikachu of course. They were all wet of course from being caught in the waterfall and then the nerve of him, he stole my bike and drove offf....." Misty said...

Dawn said, "What happened after that?"

"It began raining heavily and it was thunder and lightning as I remember. My clothes were so soggy and wet walking in the muddy path. Next thing, I saw my bike all burned up and Ash grabbing Pikachu and running to Virdian and for the next three years I traveled with him and Brock." Misty said.

Dawn said, "Your bike got destroyed too? Mines too by Ash's Pikachu!!"

"At least I'm not alone!" Misty smiled...'This Dawn girl looks okay..Ash doesn't look like he likes her

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While Dawn was spending quality time getting to know Misty, Damion was trying to lose some steam of the fact the one he truly loved and his neighbor back at Twinleaf Town, Dawn loved Ash, his rival. His fists were like if he wanted to hit something, he decided to relax by doing some secret training in the Arena, where the Competition tomorrow. He was training his Infernape and his Snorlax by making them battle.

He saw from the middle his Snorlax on the left and Infernape on the right, "Let's do this, guys!" He looked at his Snorlax, "Okay Snorlax use Agility and then Focus Punch!"

"SNNOORRLAX!!!!" It's left paw glowed with energy and despite its weight, came charged to Infernape..

He pointed to Infernape, "Now I'm not going to tell you anything. Fight for yourself!!"

Infernape nodded and it jumped high, "INFFERNA!!!!" It jumped high in the air avoiding the Focus Punch and it looked like it was heading to descent at high speed feet first.

'I trained Infernape well. He manage to avoid Snorlax's attack and now is going to use Sky Uppercut which is supereffective on Snorlax . Let's see what Snorlax will do.' Damion thought.

"SNORRRLAX" It saw its trainer wanted it to battle for itself, so it did Protect blocking Sky Uppercut.

Infernape was still determined to win, "INFERRNAAPE!!!" It threw out a large Flamethrower at Snorlax.

"SNOOORLAX!!!" It threw out a Flamethrower as well causing a large explosion causing both Pokemon great injury...

"Nice battling.....Good use of your rage?" A somewhat evil voice said..

Damion stopped his Pokemon from battle and stepped onto the field looking at the dark middle corridor, "WHO ARE YOU! COME OUT NOW!" He called out his Snorlax and Infernape in battle mode just in case. "Don't make me send Snorlax and Infernape!!"

"Relax. You don't need your Pokemon to sic me. It's just me." The figure came out of the shadows and it was Paul in dark black clothing smiling..

Damion looked at him with hostility, "What the hell are you doing here? I told you, Ash's not here. So don't bother.." He was pretty iffed at his last encounter with Paul earlier.

"I didn't come to ask for that loser, Ash. What a fellow Trainer can see another Trainer train his Pokemon for the upcoming Competition?" Paul grinned.

Damion said, "What for? So you can find out how to beat my Pokemon? No way."

He grinned, "I don't need to prove myself and my Pokemon that I'm the best in some Competition! So you and Ash don't have to worry." He sees Damion frustration, 'I sense there's hatred flowing in him. I know why....'

Damion saw him, "You're still here? It's ten o'clock at night. Why are you bugging me?"

"Because I know what is the source of all your anger, I know you like that Dawn girl and both of us know she likes Ash...." Paul begans to circle around Damion and his Pokemon grinning...

Damion said angrily, "What's your point?"

Paul grinned, "Don't get mad at me. Trust me, I will help you win Dawn." He thought, 'Just a little more coaxing, and I can make him join us.....'

'I can't trust Paul but he has a point. I wonder what he have in mind...' He says to Paul, "What did you have in idea?"

Paul said, "You know that Dawn looks up to that loser Ash because he's an tough battler and way more powerful with a powerful set of Pokemon. So my idea is for you is to beat Ash in the Competition that starts tomorrow..."

"How am I going to win? He always beats me in battle especially with that Pikachu of his? How can I win?" Damion asked meanwhile returning his Pokemon to their Pokeballs..

Paul pulls out a small bottle of what appears to be a symbiote moving around the bottle, "This is XD000. Whatever Pokemon with contact with this symbiote makes them more powerful and gives them rage. The people I'm with supply me with it and seeing ur predicament...I think you need it more than me."

'That looks like a symbiote. It's so familiar wait thats what Cipher uses to create Shadow Pokemon!!!! Paul's with Cipher!' He points to Paul, "YOU FIEND! ONLY CIPHER PRODUCES THIS! YOU MUST BE A MEMBER OF CIPHER!!!"

He just grinned, "Looks like you caught me Damion. I admit it, I'm with the Cipher organization but people give them a bad reputation. The day my parents were killed in a car accident and I was left with no one. Cipher helped me and they taught me that only the strongest survive..And Damion, thats right. I'm just saying if things don't go your way in the Competition, I'll be there..." He walks away into the dark corridor...

'Hmmmm.....Now it all makes sense. Well, got to go sleep to kick Ash's butt tomorrow.' Damion decides it was enough training and he went back to his suite to go to sleep..

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It was now one o' clock in the early morning, the same day later that the Competition was being held in the Arena. The ferry was now passing through the Whirl Islands in Johto en route to Gateon Port. Meanwhile Ash was heading back to his suite after hours to training on the ferry sleepily carrying a snoring Pikachu in his arms. The corridors were dark and empty as with only the guards patrolling the area.

'Man I gotta be quiet so I won't wake up Misty and Dawn. I don't want two girls screaming at me.' He got the key Dawn lended him and opened the door.

Ash opened the door slowly and was happy the two girls were sleeping peacefully in their beds. He put Pikachu to rest on the little bean bag chair, "Good night buddy. You need your rest..."

He took out his belt where he kept his Pokeballs and put them beside the cabinent along with his bag slightly showing his Egg, "Good night, guys. I need you to battle your best.."

"Ash....Ash...Ashhhh"

Ash wondered, "Hmmmm.. Who's saying my name?"

He turns around and sees that it is Misty moving around in her bed saying his name, "Ash....Ash..I love you so much.." She was in her pajamas and was under her Tentacool covers.

He smiled at Misty's innocence and kissed her on her cheeks, "I love you too Misty." He whispered in her ear which made her smile somewhat. He turned to Dawn sleeping, "Night, Dawn."

Ash went to sleep excited over what later in the day had to offer....

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It was now ten o' clock in the morning and the gang, Ash and Pikachu of course ran to the Arena where the Competition was about to begin. Many of the empty bleachers from yesterday were now packed with people coming to watch Trainers on board the SS Tsunami brawl it all with their Pokemon. Ash saw in the middle of the stage, was the MC Stacey Meridian, the little sister of Lilian and Vivian, the MCs of Hoenn and Kanto. She wore a blue shirt along with a white miniskirt and a official Pokemon League hat covering her auburn hair.

"Pika-pika-pika!!" Pikachu was excited to battle..

Ash looked at the electric mouse Pokemon and smiled, "You bet! We're gonna wipe the floor!"

"Pika-pi Pika Pika..."

"Oh yea....Where's Misty and Dawn?" He looks behind them and only see the other Competitors talking amongst themselves with their Pokemon. Ash just scratched his hair sticking out of his hat wondering where they were.

"ASH!!!!" Ash heard two voices scream his name. He and Pikachu turned around and saw it was Misty and Dawn who were in their day clothes. They managed to catch up to Ash and were panting from all the running they did to catch up to him.

Ash smiled, "Finally you guys came! I swear you guys are slow!"

With this response, they fell anime style. Dawn said, "Me and your old buddy Misty here tried to catch up to you. Right Misty?"

"Of course. If only Ashy here slowed down a minute and calmed down before a big match!" Misty said calling Ash by her pet name for him.

"So when does the tournament begin, Ash?" Dawn said..

Ash went on his PDA and used the stylus, "Let's see. It'll start in a few."

"You feeling confident Ash?" Misty said, "You think you're going to win?"

"OF COURSE!! With me and the Pokemon I have on my side! We're bound to win! Isn't that right Pikachu?" Ash was with filled with confidence.

"PI PIKA CHU!!!!" Pikachu was excited to battle!

A voice called out, "The only results you should be expecting is defeat, Ash." Ash turned around and saw it was Paul, in all his gruesomeness.

"What the hell do you want Paul?" Ash said angrily with Pikachu's cheeks filled with electric sparks when seeing Paul's Elekid.

Paul grinned, "Nothing really except to lower your expectations of course." Paul and his Elekid looks at Ash's Pikachu, "You still haven't released that electric mouse. It is a weak Pokemon after all..."

"PIKA_PIKA!!!!" Pikachu was extremely angry at this remark and did not think of himself as weak. It wanted to shock Paul so bad but Elekid stood in the way making sure that happens..

"It's amazing. If You had ditched that rat for something more powerful along with some of your other Pokemon, you might have won the Sinnoh League Championships...." Paul and his Elekid grinned.

Ash said angrily, "YOU BASTARD........." He tried to lunge at him but Misty and Dawn prevented him from doing so

Dawn whispered, "You stop that! Don't let that asshole Paul get into your head. He just wants you to stoop into his level."

"Dawn's right. If you do anything stupid, the Competition officials will kick you out, Ash." Misty said. With Misty's and Dawn's advice, he calmed down but still felt like punching Paul.

Paul grinned, "From what I see, you have another loser on your geek patrol." He was referring to Misty

"Why don't you back off Paul? Don't you have someone else to bother!" Dawn said, "We haven't done anything to you so get away from our sight!"

Paul smiled, "You have a point, I have more important things than talking to a bunch of losers." He and Elekid begin to walk away and he turns to Ash in the last second, "Hope to battle you in Orre, Ash." He walks away.

Misty, still angry at the comment Paul gave her, said sacrastically, "Hmmmph Nice Guy..."

"He's such a jerk. He thinks he's the most powerful Trainer in the world," Dawn said, "That guy always referred to us as the geek patrol."

Ash said, "I know. Why am I always given ignorant jerks for my rivals? God, I hate that Paul so much."

"Too bad he's gonna be in the Orre region along with us. Huh Ash." Misty said.

Dawn then said after looking at the time on her own PDA, "Hey! The tournament is about to start! You better get down to that Arena and do your best!"

"Oh crap! Really! I gotta go then. Bye guys!!" He turned to Pikachu, "Climb on my shoulder. We gotta go Buddy!" He turns to Misty and Dawn waving bye for now, "Wish me luck!"

Misty and Dawn both said good luck to as they saw Ash run downstairs to the room where the Competitors were waiting to see who would battle againist who....

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Ash and his friend Pikachu went down to the waiting room with the other Trainers who were going to compete. He was amazed at the amount of fellow Pokemon trainers who registered themselves along with their Pokemon to compete. He could tell that many of the Trainers here were from faraway regions. They were all speaking their own language and wearing the clothes of their homeland.

"There's a lot of Trainers here coming to compete," an amazed Ash looked at the many Pokemon Trainers talk to each other and discuss battle strategies.

"Pika-Pika" Pikachu wanted to have a little rest as it pointed to a small couch.

Ash nodded, "I'm still a bit tired. Since the Competition is still not going to begin for a few more minutes, we'll rest."

"Pika!" It has happy it could rest its little yellow body on the couch looking at the large TV Wall which had a image of the Arena and all the Spectators. Ash followed suit and relaxed on the couch.

"Pikachu...We're going to defeat all these trainers!" Ash proclaimed..

"Oh are you?" A voice came up right behind him.

"AHHH!!!" Ash screamed in surprise and jumped out of the couch.

He fell on the floor causing the fellow Competitors to turn their attention to the raven-haired boy and snickered a bit then went back to what they were doing,..

"Ouchhhh" Ash was hurt a bit and tried to get back up. Pikachu left the couch and was worried.

Damion was right in front of Ash grinning, "Sorry about that, Ash. Didn't know you were going to be surprised." He began smiling..

Sarcastically, Ash said, "Very Funny. You do know I hate it when people do that!!"

Damion knew this, but did it anyways, "Yeaaa..." Knowing that Ash was hurt, "Here I lift ya. Nothing againist you." He pulled Ash up.

"Geee...thanks. So you're competing, Damion?"

Damion said, "Of course, I'm here to give it my all and crush everyone participating in the Competition!"

"Not if I beat everyone myself! Right Pikachu!" Ash responded.

"PIka PIKA PIKACHU!!!!"

Damion smiled at this confident gesture done by Pikachu and Ash, "You seem very confident since reaching 2nd place in the Sinnoh Championships."

"Of course me and my Pokemon are bound to win this Competition and conquer the Orre region! Of course I'm confident!"

Ash proclaimed in front of Damion and all the older, much experienced Competitors who looked at disgust at the young trainer thinking he was all that and turned away.

"Don't let that confidence of yours go overboard. The trainers here are pretty good here. They have more years of experience than both of us combined and they have powerful and rare Pokemon..." Damion warned him.

Right before Ash could respond, the TV Wall screen turned on and the MC Stacey Meridian smiling right in the center of the stage and all the male spectators cheering at the beautiful brunette MC.

One of the competitors said, "HEY GUYS! ITS THAT HOT BRUNETTE THE ORRE MC STACEY MERIDIAN!" With this announcement, all of the guys except Ash and Damion had their attention on Stacey Meridian having hearts all over while the female Competitors looked at jealousy and envy. Damion and Ash pushed along the way to see what was going on.

Stacey had her mike and said, "This is the first annual Pokemon Tournament we have here on the luxury liner the SS Tsunami! My name is Stacey Meridian, if you know me, I'm the little sister of Lilian and Vivian......"

Damion said, "I never knew that Lilian and Vivian had a little sister. I would have....."

One of the competitors, an blonde-haired man wearing formal clothing, "Hush boy....I'm hearing Stacey!" The man said in a English accent turning back to the TV..

Stacey continued speaking, "This is the first time as me as the MC. And you'll see me MCing the Contests at Orre...SO LET'S GET STARTED." The TV shifted its attention from the MC to the roars of the spectators and eventually saw Dawn and Misty cheering.

Ash said, "Hey its Misty!"

"Along with Dawn!" Damion said happily and the Competitors shushed them...

The TV now returned its attention back to MC Stacey, "Okay these are the 64 Trainers who registered for this Competition. It turned away from Stacey to the large screen box above the Arena which showed the pictures of the Competitors eventually showing Ash and Damion's.

"Now It's time for the first battle of the Premilinaries!" The screen box showed Damion vs a picture of a black haired girl in her 20s wearing casual clothing, "Now for our competitors to come on out."

Ash said, "Looks like it's time for you to battle."

"Yup. Wish me good luck." Damion said turning to the elevator.

Ash said, "You don't need luck. You got the skill to win. Just promise me one thing, Damion."

He turned around to Ash, "What?"

"If we battle, I want you to give it your all and don't hold back. Promise?" Ash offered his hand to Damion.

Damion shaked his hand, "Of course, Ash.." He then went in the elevator and the doors closed..

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Now Misty and Dawn were at the bleachers talking to each other right before the first battle was about to begin. They were getting to know each other since they only met yesterday at the strangest of circumstances. The bleachers were packed with people shouting to get the battle over with.

Misty asked, "Are you really a Coordinator? That must be awesome...."

"Yup. Sure Am, I won the Sinnoh Grand Festival and right now I'm probably going to do the same in Orre." Dawn said, "Being a Coordinator is probably not as good as being a Gym Leader like you."

Misty laughed, "Trust me people may think being a Gym Leader is cool and everything. It's a lot of work and I don't get much free time."

"Ohhhh...then why you became one, Misty?" Dawn said.

Misty said, "Well my entire life revolved around the Gym and I lived there and loved playing and taking care of the Water Pokemon. When my parents died when I was little, my sisters took over the Gym putting its reputation down the drain causing me to leave where I met Ash. Three years later, I heard my sisters leaving the Gym for a world cruise and if I didn't return, it would've closed but thanks to me, it managed to stay open. Being a Gym Leader was never as fun as traveling like you do yet I felt responsible to taking care of it."

"Ohhhhhh...well at least you're traveling with us." They both smiled and one of Dawn's Pokeballs fell and opened.

"BUNNI" It skipped happily and went into Dawn's arms.

Misty's green eyes just increased in size at looking at the cute little bunny Pokemon, "SOOOOO CUUUTTE!!!! THIS IS YOURS???"

"Yup. This here is Buneary! One of my first Pokemon when I started my journey." She grabs Buneary by its waist and puts it in front of Misty's face, "Now say hello, Buneary to Misty here."

"BUNNI! BUNNI!" It kissed Misty on the nose making her smile.

"You have such a cute Bunea....." Misty was about to say....

MC Stacey voice's amplified through the Arena, "Well the first battle of the Preleminary Round is about to start. Our first competitors are Adrienne Rhodes of Scarlet Village and Damion Woods of Twinleaf Town! Come on out!"

Misty asked, "Hey isnt that the name of that blonde friend of yours?"

"Yea, Damion is going to compete! GO DAMION!!" Dawn cheered taking out her pom-poms in support.

"BUNNI!!"

MC Stacey said, "Will now the two Pokemon trainers come on out!"

When said this, two elevators emerged on each side and the doors opened. On the left, came out Damion, determined to win this battle and advance to the next round. On the right came out Adrienne, a teenage girl with long auburn hair and wearing a traditional kimino. As it was with tradition, the two trainers gave a handshake and good luck to one another. The referee ran up to him to discuss the rules of the battle.

"Okay, guys. It's simple. It's a one on one battle and each trainer must use the same type of Pokemon for at least the first 2 rounds. Allright?"

They both nodded and went to their respective side of the field.

Adrienne said, "I let you having the honor, Damion-san of choosing your Pokemon first." She bows to him in respect.

"Thanks." He thought, 'Hmmm. What Pokemon I should send out? I know the perfect one. Speed will be my advantage.' He grabs a green Pokeball, "COME OUT RED!!!!!"

The Pokeball fell on the field and materialized, "Scizzor."

MC Stacey said, "And Damion chooses Red, his very prized Scizor which brought him in the top 8 of the Sinnoh Championships! Now what would Miss Rhodes, the top trainer of the local dojo at her hometown."

She grabs a Pokeball and kisses it for luck, "Let's do our best," She whispered throwing the Pokeball..

The Pokeball fell and materialized, "HERRACCO!!"

"Now Adrienne has chosen her Heracross, a very rare and powerful Pokemon when trained." MC Stacey commented..

The referee lowered his flag, "LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!!"

Damion shouted, "LETS FINISH THIS QUICK AND USE QUICK ATTACK!!!" Scizor began running to the other side at high speed jumping at the same time.

"WOW LOOK AT THAT SCIZOR'S SPEED. HOW CAN ADRIENNE'S HERACROSS REACT!" MC Stacey said.

Misty looked at the Scizor, "Wow Damion sure knows how to train his Scizor!"

"Trust me. This is nothing compared to its top speed!" Dawn looked on..

Adrienne used telepathy, 'Heracross. I want you to stand there until Scizor's up to reach and use Mach Punch!'

Heracross began to sit down like it was meditating like the native Zen Buddhists of Ecutreak City and seems to be waiting much to the shock of the audience and the MC thinking she was forfeiting.

'Hmmmm. Isn't like a Pokemon trainer to let their Pokemon wait to be attacked.' thought Ash as he saw the match along with the other Competitors.

Scizor was within range of Heracross and Adrienne shouted, "NOW USE MACH PUNCH!!!"

Damion grinned, "That's what I thought you do. Now RED GRAB HERACROSS' ARM AND THROW HIM HIGH IN THE AIR!"

Scizor nodded and threw Heracross in the air causing it to wail in how high it was thrown. Adrienne was worried, "Heracross???"

"LOOK AT HOW HIGH HERACROSS IS!!! ITS ONLY METERS AWAY FROM THE CEILING!!!!" MC Stacey shouted.

Damion then grinned, "Now Fly up to Heracross and do a Double Hyper Beam!!!!!"

"SCIZ!!" It nodded and flew at top speed much to the excitement of the audience right where it was a couple of feet. It pulled out its crimson claws and opened them and charged up enough energy to produce two Hyper Beams, "SCCCCIIIIIIZZZZOORRR!!!"

The attack led to a large explosion causing Heracross to crash swirling and swirling into the ground while Scizor landed safely looking at its opponent crash into the ground.

"Heracross? Are you okay?" Adrienne tried to look throuh the debris..

"HErrracrr-ooo" It was sapped of its energy to go on.

The referee put his left flag up, "Heracross is unable to battle. Scizor wins. Damion wins this match." People began cheering.....

"THAT CONCLUDES THE FIRST MATCH!" shouted MC Stacey on her mike. Damion hugged his Scizor and then ran up to Adrienne and said thanks for a good match and was happy to see Dawn smiling.

Paul watched the match from the darkness, 'Hmmmm. The kid's not half bad...if only he joined Cipher...' He and Elekid walked away..

Watching the TV, Ash thought, 'I knew he could do it.' He heard the MC calling from him, "Well, Pikachu its our turn to battle. Let's make Damion, Misty and Dawn proud." He went up the elevator.

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With Damion was trying to find a seat to watch Ash's match which was in a few minutes and saw Misty and Dawn along with her Buneary, "Hey Dawn! Hey Misty!"

Misty looked at him, "Hi, Damion. Aren't you supposed to be at the waiting room?"

"Nah. One of the sailors told me that since there were no more matches for me for a couple of hours, so I decided to try and find you guys." Damion said

"Ohhhh. Thats cool. Where are you going to sit?" Dawn asked.

Damion said, "Uhhhh...I was wondering if you guys saved a seat for me??? Please...it would mean much!"

"Of course! You can sit right next to Dawn!" Misty said happily, 'If Dawn falls in love with Damion, then I have Ash all to myself.' "So Dawn do you mind?"

Dawn said, "Nah I don't mind. I would love to have Damion next to me"

"Now its time for the second match of the Preliminary Round. On my left here is Ash Ketchum!" MC Stacey shouted followed with the roars of the audience, Ash with Pikachu on his shoulder went out of the elevator and greeted everyone in the audience waving his hand.

"Ash here is famous in the Pokemon World. Reaching the top 16 in Kanto, defeating the Orange Crew, reaching the top 8 in the Silver and Evergrande Conferences, defeating the Battle Frontier and reaching 2nd place in the Sinnoh League Conference." MC Stacey said and turned to the right, "Here we have ourselves a celebrity as well. Say hello to John Richardson, champion of the Grand City Championships at Domino City!"

A guy in his late 20s with spiky brown hair and wearing a white jacket with light blue trimmings with sharp edges. He entered and many in the audience, all female were going ga-ga over him. He said, "Thanks very much. Its a honor being here with all of you!" He goes to Ash and shakes his hand, "You better give it your all!"

"No worry I will!" He said confidently and the referee discussed the rules to them in which they nodded and get ready for battle. He looked at John, "Why don't you throw out the first Pokemon!"

"If you say so! COME ON OUT!!!!!" He throws the Pokeball in which it materialized into a large red goat-like Pokemon with large horns and its tail was covered in flames.

"BAAHHHH"

"John starts out with his Pyroserow, a very rare Pokemon found only in Orre," commented the MC.

Ash never saw the Pokemon before so he looked it up on his Pokedex, "Pyroserow, the Mountain Goat Pokemon. Caution when approaching Pyroserow since they are known to attack intruders." He looked at the goat Pokemon, "Okay a fire type! Let's go Torkoal!!"

MC Stacey said, "Ash has chosen Torkoal!"

"TORKOALL!!!!" It was ready to battle and smoke was coming from its mouth.

The referee in the middle lowered his flag, "Begin!"

"Okay Pyroserow use Flamethrower on Torkoal!" John shouted as the goat Pokemon threw flames right for Torkoal..

Ash grinned, "Torkoal! Retreat to your shell and use Iron Defense!" The turtle Pokemon did just that and saved itself a lot of hurt from the Flamethrower, "Now use Magma Blast!!" The turtle spit up a large attack of molten magma.

"Use Protect Pyroserow!!" The goat Pokemon tried to set up a veil to protect itself but was hit by the Magma Blast which soon solidified into hard rock trapping the Pokemon..

"Uh oh! It looks like John's Pyroserow is stuck in the rock created by the Magma Blasts..Looks like we know who the winner is!" MC Stacey said

Ash laughed, "Now we got 'em! Use Overheat to finish off Pyroserow!!" Torkoal gave a powerful Overheat burning it causing it to fall in the ground..

"Pyroserow! Are you okay?"

"Bahhhh" It fainted

The referee went up to John and saw the fainted Pyroserow, "Pyroserow is unable to battle! Torkoal wins! Ash is the victor!" The audience cheered for Ash and he waved his hand and congratulated his opponent for the battle!"

"We did it! Torkoal!" He began hugging Torkoal with Pikachu cheering, "You deserve a good rest! Return Torkoal!" Torkoal happily returned to his Pokeball and Ash went up the stairs to make room for the next matches in which Dawn, Misty, and Damion were waiting..

Misty went up and hugged him to the silent annoyance of Dawn, "You and Torkoal were great!!"

With Misty hugging him so close with her chest pressed againist his, he blushed, "Thanks.....It was Torkoal who did the battling!" He said modestly..

"Nevertheless you did great and now you're in the second round along with Damion here.." Dawn said and turns to Damion, "So Damion? What did you think of Ash's battle just now?"

Damion responded, "It was okay I guess. I don't like the rule that people have to use the same type of Pokemon."

"Its probably only a rule of the preliminaries. So do we have to stay?" Ash asked..

Dawn said, "For the rest of the morning, you guys need to stay here for the afternoon which decides which 16 get to enter the Victory Round."

"Well let's go back to the bleachers before someone takes it. Ash you'll sit next to me? Okay with ya." Misty grabs Ash's hand causing him to blush again making Dawn slightly jealous and took Damion's hand making him happy.

"Its cool." He looks behind Damion and Dawn that Buneary and Pikachu were holding hands as they see the next match come into play

Chapter ends
 
so for any readers, is there more I should add on

all criticisms, as long as they are polite will be allowed
 
You're getting better at your descriptions. I liked the interaction between Misty and Dawn; however, consider putting their thoughts into italics or brackets, just to make it easier to read.
 
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