Pokemon team help!

[Dragonite003]

Okay, so I am remaking my Pokemon team. I am looking for some thoughts and opinions on how this team would do so any suggestions will be appreciated
(Pokemon listed in no specific order)

Dragonite w/ adamant nature item: dragon fang/lum berry
Moves: Outrage, fire punch, roost, dragon dance. Self explanatory, get rid of the main counters send him out and begin to sweep after a dragon dance.

gyardos w/ adamant Item: life orb
moves: Dragon dance, ice fang, waterfall, earthquake. Once again, pretty self explanatory get a dd and sweep.

Metagross w/ adamant item: choice band
moves: bullet punch, hammer arm, meteor mash, pursuit Good revenge killer with BP or hit a switch with pursuit.

Yanmega w/ modest item: choice specs ability: tinted lense
moves: bug buzz, air slash, u-turn, giga drain This guy can get some surprising KOs with this set, giga drain is used if needed to switch into bulky water types.

Umbreon w/ careful item: leftovers
moves: moonlight, curse, payback, toxic Curse up 6 times so pretty much nothing can hurt him and then start hitting with payback for massive damage. Good wall

dusclops w/ relaxed item: eviolite
moves: pain split, curse, payback, will-o-wisp my other wall. Same idea as Umbreon although thinking about switching curse for rest for a little bit better healing ability.

Once again all suggestions would be nice, and if I did something wrong with this I am sorry bear with me it is my first time posting.

 

[Werdnae]

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[Professor Jacel]

Not a bad Idea watch out on Umbreon though for something Faster that is A Heavy Hitter. Darmanitan Flare Blitz with Life orb or Choice Band litteraly Almost One Shots it. Not saying it will happen but I do it usually. If you get a couple curses though it should be fine Especially with Morning Sun.

 

[Stratago]

With the proliferation of X-Scissor wielding STABbers and in Gen V, Umbereon is unfortunately easy to kill. If you don't want to give up having a Dark type, I'd suggest Absol, but I prefer sweepers over walls.

 

[King Eriandor]

I would give metagross Zen headbutt instead of pursuit because catching a pokemon swiching isn't easy and zen headbutt gets stab.

you have quick yangmega, you have sturdy metagross and umbreon, you have powerful dragonite and gyarados now all you nees is to replace dusclops with a troll pokemon.

Eg: Shuckle
-use power swap to bring down opponents atk
-use power trick to make your attack Uber strong (and hope your defence holds up)
-Destroy opponent with superpowerful shuckle!!!!!!!

 

[Dragonite003]

@ Shadow Blaziken - the problem with that stategy is that Shuckle with its amazing base 5 speed will get hit first and go down unless I trick room so yea lol but I will think about the troll pokemon idea.

@ stratago - I am not too worried about that since almost all trainers I have battled only have 1 pokemon on their team at most with a bug type move, I would be more concerned with fighting types.

@ Jacel - very true, but more than likely they would have to switch into darmanitan which would give me a free curse so I may be able to live, or I can just switch lol