pokemon :the king chronicals

[DXFrost]

ok this is my first rpg here so if i mess up cut me some slack. ok the king chronicals fallow ash and dawn on a new adventure in johto. this time a villian called the king has kid napped an entier ship of trainers. brock isn't with them as he stayed in sinnoh with cheryl. there were around 100 trainers on the ship so thats all players i will allow. you can choose any non-legendary pokemon. also, i have sole control over ash and dawn.

 

[Flaze]

Firts off, your RP is not gonna work that's not enough for a story, second there's no way in hell tha you'll get more than ten people to sign up nd third you need to do a sign up you have to do that if you want other peopleto describe thei characters and how they look and all.

 

[DXFrost]

this is the sign up

 

[Flaze]

Yeah, but peole have to write bios and things about their characters and how they look like they can't just pop up and write something in a disorder matter, you gotta put all that in order.

 

[Gama]

Yeah, E-MAN is right, you should give an example of what information is needed.

For example:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality:
History:
Pokemon:

Something like that.
Also, do you have a vague storyline in mind? That would probably be advisable...

 

[DXFrost]

yes i have a plot ash and dawn have to save ho oh and lugia from the king

 

[Flaze]

That's another problem your RP is centered around Ash and Dawn instead of the actualy players.

 

[Gama]

E-MAN is right again, RPGs tend to be better where the players are the main characters =P However, it COULD work this way...

So, I will give you the benefit of the doubt and sign up. (Please try to use capitals in the right places though or I'm gonna get really pissed off =P, people's and Pokemon's name for instance, also Pokemon species)

Aaaaanyway, I will use my own sign up template as you still do not have one.

Name: Lord Gallant
Age: 50
Gender: Male
Appearance: A rotund man with a few favourite Pokemon. He always wears a suit, he has to have them specially tailored to fit over his large gut. He wears very old-fashioned clothing and has a handle bar moustache.
Personality: Lord Gallant believes he knows everything and usually refuses to listen to other people. Also, when other people have ideas, he usually claims that he thought of it first. If he is beaten in anything he will accuse his opponent of cheating.
History: Lord Gallant's history is not easy to determine, but according to his claims, he was once a traveller and has defeated a grand total of 48 Gym Leaders around the world (when challenged he usually fails to name more than 12 and has never been known to carry a single Gym Badge), after which he battled with a pack of Tyranitar, and upon the defeat of all his Pokemon, he went on to defeat the leader in hand-to-hand combat. (According to Lord Gallant, "Master Kiyo trained me to fight even the strongest of Pokemon on an equal footing!", who Master Kiyo is, or if he is indeed real, in fact is never explained) After that, according to his claims, he became a Gym Leader in a city which no one has heard of called Greenwoodshire, where he ruled for ten years, before being chucked out for being impossible to beat. (He often claims that the Pokemon League Assocation told him "C'mon, Gallant, give these kids a chance, the Elite Four are getting bored.")
After this, according to Gallant's claims, he travelled to Hoenn and summoned Rayquaza, bringing Kyogre and Groudon's battle to an end. ("Apparently some Brendan punk says it was him, but I assure you, it was me.")
After that, sensing disturbance in Johto, he took a ferry all the way there. He then, apparently, took out some Neo Rockets and got on another ship, the one we find him on.
It is almost certain that this history is a complete falsification and that Gallant is a compulsive liar.
Pokemon: Machop, Marowak, Nidoran (M) --- Gallant's Nidoran has a Moon Stone strapped to it, Gallant claims this is so it can absorb evolution energy.

 

[woops]

This is ok but, like the others said, It needs character layouts and needs to be focused around the main players. You could have Ash and Dawn as characters in the story but the players should be the ones doing the main work.

 

[DXFrost]

its about all of the cheractors. and do NOT start on my spelling.

 

[woops]

im starting on your spelling. characters is spelled C H A R A C T E R S.

 

[DXFrost]

i'm a tolerant guy, but thats the one thing i will not tolerate under any cercomstances, so im worning you now, don't push me

 

[Flaze]

Come on man, you need to take advices if you wanna know how to do things better, unless you don't want to get better.

 

[DXFrost]

i'm talking about the spelling thing

 

[Flaze]

That's exactly it, that's advice, that way you can get better at spelling.

 

[woops]

Ill stop annoying people on purpose. Therefore, if you make a character layout and make it more based on the players as the main characters, people will probably sighn up. Thats all I have to say.

 

[Gama]

Wow, I can't believe you said you're a tolerant guy AND you said someone better not tell you to improve your spelling or you'll lose it. Those two statements just don't fit together.

Since this is a forum and therefore almost exclusively text based, spelling is key. It can get very annoying to see constant bad spellings. A couple of spelling errors are forgivable and often unavoidable, but after someone corrects you, you should seek to spell that word correctly from then on and maybe even edit your post.

Also, I don't know what other Explorers do this, but I'm using Google Chrome and it underlines incorrectly spelt words in red like Microsoft Word, so that might be helpful. (It does it in American spellings btw, and of course doesn't account for slang, so you might not be spelling something wrong, especially if you're not from America, but it does help you look out for spelling errors)

 

[DXFrost]

for crying out loud, i'm using a psp! this is as good as it gets to spelling!