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Pokemon True Power

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Okay this is my first attempt to a cross over fic, this is a crossover between Pokemon and Naruto, so it has a lot of things form Naruto.

This fic is rated pg-13 for profanity, sexual content (What you read in this chapter doesn't have anything to do with it)and violance.

Well here you go

Pokemon: true power

Chapter 1: A day of tests

A long time ago, people live in this world by themselves; they lived in peace and harmony. One day strange creatures appeared on the world, this creatures had special powers and great abilities that could destroy the humans for sure.

Pokemon and humans were constantly fighting with each other, humans used weapons to kill pokemon, and pokemon used their powers to kill humans.

But one day a giant looking pokemon appeared. This pokemon was a great monster of evil that could destroy anything with its breath. This monster commanded pokemon to do the final attack on humans.

After a battle that took ages, the evil pokemon attacked both sides on his own; he even killed the powerful mewtwo. Humans were afraid of this pokemon but they knew that they had to make a truce with the pokemon to destroy this great evil.

They fought against the diabolical beast, a lot of pokemon and humans died on their attempt. Just when they were about to give up all hope a man decided to stand down and fight the monster till his death.

This man was called Arron, he was a warrior of the great kingdom; he was also one of the few humans that interacted with pokemon. His trusted lucario was always fighting alongside him, and they were also trying to stop the war between pokemon and humans.

They battled together but no matter what they did, every thing was lost. But in the last moment Arron used the power of his great magical spear and it charged the power of all humans and pokemon within it. This power was enough to seal away the beast.

The only problem is that the price for that great power was death it self. Arron told everybody that they should try their best to live at peace with pokemon no matter what, and that they should always remember this battle before they plan on doing something that could break peace.

After he died another great pokemon was born, ho oh, the great phoenix pokemon that became sacred and it started flying around the world verifying that peace stayed, and it also revived all the people and pokemon that died on the battle. Ever since then this day has been known as the Golden Day.

“So 500 years had passed since that day and people still haven’t forgotten what they promised” a man dressed in a brown coat, with a red tie and brown pants was reading the story to the kids in his class.

All of the kids were staring at the man from their desk. Most of them were gazing outside to see the town of Pallet town in the morning.

“Wake up class!” The man yelled throwing the book on his desk. The whole class jumped up and stared at the man. “Now that’s better” he got his book back and opened it again.

“So…” a huge explosion was heard on the central part of Pallet. “Stay here, I’m sure the police is already there” he said while he kept reading.

Down on the center a kid is running from the cops. The kid was wearing a blue jacket with white sleeves, he had a black shirt under it, blue jeans, black sneakers, a hat, and brown skin with a few lines on his face; like dirt lines.

“Try to catch me dumbasses” Ash yelled at the cops that were following him. The cops just got angrier and ran faster.

“Comeback here Ash Ketchum, this time we’ll catch you” the cop on the front said throwing his arm around. Ash got his tongue out at them. “Try to catch me first’ he made a turn on a close alley. “We got him” the cop said.

When they got to the alley Ash wasn’t there. “Damn it, we lost him again” the cop turned around and left. Ash had jumped over the wall at the end of the alley and was on a pile of flour that was on the other side. “Idiots” Ash laughed silently. He got up and dusted himself up. “God, I just wanted to make a few fire works and shoot them at Oak’s lab, I don’t know what the problem is” he said while he started walking.

Ash Ketchum was the trouble maker of Pallet, he was always making pranks to other people and he was always dissing people off. He lived with his mom Delia in Pallet and they were a small family, his dad had run out on them when he was a kid so he only had his mom.

Ash finally got into the class after scaping from those cops. The teacher shouted at him sot that he would tell him why he was late. “Sorry dude, but I was just having fun” Ash smiled. The class smirked, they couldn’t wait to hear Ash’s punishment.

“Dweeb” on kid said from the back. Ash jumped, “Hey shut up” Ash yelled. It turns out Gary Oak was the one that said that. He was wearing his usual blue jacket with brown pants and brown shoes; he was also wearing his yellow and green pendant.


“I said it so what” Gary smirked at Ash. Ash went to his seat and got closed to his face. “You think your so good ha Gary” Ash glared at him with fury. “Well after all I’m the best in the class” Gary brushed his hair; this got a lot of girls in the class to melt.

You see, Gary was the grandson of professor Oak, a great pokemon researcher and he studied pokemon all around. Thanks to that Gary became a great trainer he was good at controlling pokemon, and training them. Gary was also good with girls, they were always following him and they were all fighting for him, to the despair of Ash. Well Gary and Ash were different, Ash well he sucked to put in simple terms, he didn’t have fans or nothing so he hated Gary.

“Okay guys calm down” A deep voice said entering the classroom. The man had a white lab coat with a red shirt, he was wearing brown pants and moccasin shoes, and he looked around 60 so he had white short hair. This man was professor Oak the major authority in the pokemon world and Gary’s grandpa.

“Professor Oak is a great pleasure to see you” The teacher gave Oak a shirt to sit on; Oak just decided to stand. “So what are you teaching them now, Koichi” Oak asked the teacher. “I was just talking about the story of the Golden Day” he said. “Well that’s good, is good to see children be interested in those old traditional stories” Oak smiled at the class.

“Hey gramps” Gary said to his grandpa as he saw him coming. “Oh hey Gary, hey Ash” Oak said to both of them. “Hey old man, I heard someone was trying to set your house on fire, who knew all the violence in the town ha” Ash started scratching his head. “Yeah, your right” Okay winked at him; he knew it was Ash, it wasn’t the first time but Oak was very fund of him, he had a lot of confidence it reminded him of himself.

“Hey, Ash you know you should have respect for professor Oak!” Koichi yelled at him. “Oh come on, you know Ash can’t understand loud words, then again he can’t understand soft words either” Gary snickered at Ash; the whole class laughed at him after that. “Shut up Gary!” Ash yelled at Gary up close. Just them another kid got up he had to run to the bathroom; too bad for Ash he pushed him when he passed and he and Gary ended up kissing.

The whole class was grossed out at the sight, Ash jumped out of Gary’s sit; he started spitting out. Gary jumped out too, “That was gross, are you gay or something” he said getting some spit out. “No, but I’m pretty sure you were enjoying that” they started glaring at each other.

“Well, if we’re done with that” Koichi said getting the class’s attention back. Oak coughed up, “You see, I’m here cause all of you are fourteen already, which means that you can legally become trainers now, so today we’re having your final exams” Oak smiled at them passing papers with the rules for the final exams.

“Yeaahhhhhhh!!” Ash yelled not caring what the class would say. “Finally I can become the best trainer in the world” he said laughing confidently. “Yeah right, you can’t fight for nothing, plus I don’t think they let dumbasses become trainers” Gary laughed. “Shut up I’m going to show you, I’m going to past that exam and become a trainer” Ash said pointing at Gary. “Why don’t we just wait and see” they glared again.

“Okay, like I was saying this exams will be special ranking test” Oak stated; the whole class got a clueless face. “In other words, you’ll be battling with one member of the class, Koichi and I will be judges after each match and we will rank you on it” he paused before continuing. “You’ll be rank on numbers from one to five, if you get a three or more you’ll pass, if you get a two or less you fail” Oak coughed up a little bit after that.

“So does that means that we just have to repeat this year?” a kid in the front said. “Not really, you’ll just have to past summer school and you can start by the beginning of the year” Oak replied. “Well, tell that to all the suckers that aren’t me old man” Ash said getting up from his seat. “Seat down idiot” Gary pushed him down onto his seat.

“Okay, everybody grab your backpacks, we will be gone for the rest of the day so you have to bring your stuff” the teacher and Oak started walking out; Ash just stared at the class that was getting up. He clenched his fists and smiled, “Cool, today I’ll become a trainer!” Ash yelled loudly.

They went to a stadium that was next to the school, the stadium was a metal building it had blue stands in it; it also had a pokemon arena on the middle. A sh stared at the field. “Wow, I’m always surprised to see this” he said gazing. Gary went past him and smirked “Enjoy it loser, because this will be the only time you’ll see a pokemon field.” Oak walked up to them. “Since you guys have been having such a hard time on knowing who’s stronger, why don’t you guys have the first battle” Oak said putting his arms around both teenagers.

“Hell yeah, I got first battle and my chance to battle Gary” Ash said throwing his fist in the air; he jumped down on the field. Gary jumped down too; Ash just kept glaring at him and the class just sighed even Oak.

Koichi walked up to them. “Okay guys look at this” he showed them a red box and Oak came to them too. “Now, we will explain this, we rattle the pokeballs that are on the box around, once we’re done both of you will put your hands in and get a pokeball to use” Oak said rattling the box. Ash and Gary nodded. “Sorry Ash, winners firsts” Gary pushed Ash aside and put his hand on the box.

Gary finally got his hand out after a minute of choosing. “This guy will be it” Gary said getting a pokeball out and walking to his side of the field. Ash started walking back to the box and put his hand in. Ash felt something weird about one of the pokeball; it felt like it was giving off static. Ash smiled and took out the pokeball. “I’ll take this one, it feels like its better than the other ones” Ash laughed all around; he was showing off his pokeball.

Ash looked at the pokeball after having his daily show off time; he saw that the pokeball had a lightning sticker on it. “Hey loser you ready” Gary snapped his fingers to wake Ash up. “You better believe it” he clenched his teeth.

Gary threw his pokeball into the field. “Go pokeball” when the pokeball opened up an arcanine came out. The pokemon looked like a big dog, it had clear yellow fur on its head and its chest, its body was orange with black stripes, he had a yellow tail, and crystal blue eyes. “Arcanine I must be lucky” Gary smirked at the sight of having a great pokemon at his side.

“Oh really, well this pokeball has a lightning on it, I’m sure is a strong pokemon” Ash threw the pokeball with all his strength; Oak recognized Ash’s description, Ash was now in deep trouble.

The pokeball popped open and a pikachu came out. It was a yellow color rat, with brown stripes on its back, it had long yellow ears with black on the top, it also had a tail in the form of lighting. Ash almost jumped out of happiness. “Cool a pikachu” Ash said practically jumping.

“A rat, and a dog that’s an easy win right there” Gary laughed. “Oh really, well this pikachu can beat your arcanine any day, right buddy” Ash turned to the pikachu. Ash tried to give it a handshake but it electrocuted him.

“I feared this would happen” Oak said moving his head. “What is it professor?” Koichi asked looking at Oak. “Well, you see that pikachu has a problem, its too powerful that’s why I had to put it in a special pokeball, but it still isn’t enough, I think Ash is in a real problem if he has to fight with that pokemon” Oak had a serious smile on his face. “But why did you put it in there?” Koichi asked confused. “I didn’t, it must have slipped up when I was putting it” Oak said.

Ash finally got up. Gary laughed, “That thing doesn’t even listens to you dude, your dead.” The whole class stared at Ash before laughing. “Well, I’m going to show you all, I’ll be the best” Ash clenched his fist.

“Now go” Koichi said putting the flags down. “Go arcanine use flamethrower” Gary’s arcanine fired a huge jet of flames at pikachu. “Okay pikachu use quick attack to dodge!” Ash ordered. But pikachu wouldn’t move. The flamethrower was about to hit. “Pikachu, moveee!” Ash yelled.

TO BE CONTINUED…
 
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...dude...um...if you can't even spell the name of a semi-important character...and one with a commonplace name, no less!

Seriously, there was no emotion, and the syntax was horrible. "That thing doesn't even listens to you dude, your dead"? My dead what? "Doesn't even listens"? And that's just one sentence! The whole story reads like that!
 
I can guess what you're trying to say, but that just removes the reader from the story. You want them to read the story and understand it without having to think about what you're trying to say.
 
Chapter 2: Controlling the sparks

Ash Ketchum was having his final exam battle against Gary Oak, after choosing their pokemon Ash ended up with pikachu and Gary with arcanine; problem is that pikachu didn’t listen to any of Ash’s orders and with Gary getting impatient he launched a flamethrower at pikachu; what will happen with Ash’s battle.

“Pikachu move!” Ash yelled; he knew that if he even took a step inside the field he will be disqualified, but pikachu was about to get hit by a flamethrower and it wasn’t moving an inch. When the flamethrower was about to hit pikachu this one jumped up with great speed.

“Apparently that rat can do something” Gary said looking at the pikachu that was almost touching the roof. “Okay pikachu, I knew you’ll obey me eventually” Ash clenched his fist and smiled. “Now use thundershock” Ash ordered pointing at arcanine.

Pikachu got down from the roof and fired the thundershock; too bad he fired the shock to Ash. “Pikachu, come on” Ash burp a cloud of smoke and fell to the floor. Ash got up with an angry face. “Pikachu, why aren’t you obeying, you’re suppose to help me win this battle” Ashian growled at pikachu; pikachu just smirked. “Looks like pikachu knows that you’re stupid, now Ash tell me, who do you think has the brains between you two my bet’s on pikachu” Gary burst out of laughter.

“Now Gary, you shouldn’t treat Ash that way considering that this is his first battle I wouldn’t be surprise of pikachu not listening to him” Oak said walking to Ash. “Ash my boy, you can switch pokemon if you like” Oak said with a comfort smile. “No, I’m going to fight with pikachu, now use thunderbolt” pikachu just smirked at Ash and sat on the floor. “Come on, arcanine this is fun but I want to finish with this idiocy as soon as possible so go” arcanine ran to pikachu; it surrounded itself in fire and started spinning like a wheel.

The flamewheel crashed with pikachu and sent it flying to the wall. “Pikachu are you okay?” Ash asked running to pikachu. Pikachu just got up and brushed himself off ignoring Ash. Gary walked out of the field. “It’s obvious that pikachu won’t fight, so that counts as withdraw I win” Gary returned arcanine to its pokeball. “Come on professor, you can’t seriously let the battle end like that?” Ash said angrily. “Sorry Ash, but that’s the rules you fail the test” Oak started to walk away. “Wait, isn’t there a way that I can pass without winning my battle?” Ash yelled back at the professor. “Well there is a way” Oak said scratching his beard.

Oak and Ash were outside of Pallet town and were looking straight at the forest nearby. “If you want to pass you’ll need to go through the forest, and to Viridian, once you get there one of my assistants will call me and tell me how much time it took you, you got two hours to get to Viridian and you will take one pokemon to escort you” Oak looked back at pikachu. “So that means I gotta take pikachu right” Ash looked back at pikachu with a look of disgust. “Yep, sorry but pikachu is the pokemon you got for the battle, and its got to be the pokemon you’ll take to Viridian” Oak started to walk away. “Two hours, that’s plenty of time” Oak said and walked off.

Ash turned to pikachu. “Okay, guess I won’t be needing you for now, so return” Ash threw pikachu its pokeball so that it could return; but pikachu just rebounded the ball with its tail; the pokeball his Ash. “That’s not funny now, either you listen to me, or I’ll get rid of you and when I become a great trainer you’re going to be jealous cause you lost your chance of being my pokemon” Ash crossed his shoulders; pikachu smirked and started walking. “Okay, that was a joke, you don’t have to returned you can just walk freely” Ash said with nervousness in his voice; he started to follow pikachu.

Ash was looking at a few tailows that were drinking water from a spring. “The professor didn’t say anything about not capturing pokemon on our way to Viridian” Ash smiled and got closer to the tailows. Pikachu chuckled a little but followed Ash in the end. “Okay, pikachu I want you to throw a thundershock at them, if we aim right I’m sure we can capture them easily” Ash looked at an uninterested pikachu; it was scratching its ear.

Ash walked down slowly so that he could get close to the tailows. “Now pikachu, use thundershock!” Ash yelled and he jumped out of the bushed he was hiding on; too bad pikachu wasn’t there anymore and Ash ended up getting pecked by the tailows.

Ash was walking on the forest with his face all pecked up. “Where the hell is pikachu!” Ash yelled to the sky. Just then he saw pikachu fighting with a tangela. “All right, pikachu use quickattack” pikachu smirked at Ash and used a thundershock instead. The tangela got paralyzed. “We got it go pokeball” Ash threw one of the pokeball that he took from the academy; the pokeball absorbed the tangela and it rolled three time and then pinged. “Yeah, we got a tangela pikachu” Ash tried to give pikachu a high five but pikachu just gave him the cold shoulder. “I see there’s no way I can get you to obey me” Ash sighed.

Ash and pikachu were about to get out of the forest and they stopped to take a rest near a lake. “See, we’re almost in Viridian, want some water” Ash offered his water bottle. Pikachu turned away. “Seriously why do you hate me so much, I mean I didn’t do anything to you” Ash took a drink from his water bottle. Pikachu ran back to the forest while Ash was taking a nap. It saw a spearow and it fired a thundershock at it for fun, pikachu laughed at the now fried spearow. The spearow looked at it with fury and it started squawking around.

Suddenly a fearow flew above pikachu. Pikachu wasn’t scare and it fired a thunderbolt at the fearow. The fearow seemed damaged but it just dove down with its peck spinning, and it hit pikachu with a lot of strength. Pikachu ran away; it knew it couldn’t beat the fearow by itself.

Ash heard the squawking and ran to see what was happening. He saw pikachu running to him and that he was being followed by a fearow and some spearows. “Pikachu” Ash caught pikachu into his arms and ran away. “Don’t worry we’ll find a way to get away from them” Ash said holding pikachu.

Ash was running to the most possible exit of the forest; he couldn’t find a way they could get out without having the fearow and spearows following. “Don’t worry, I’ll get you out” he said to pikachu. Just then a drill peck fell on them and it threw Ash off his balance; he fell to the floor all bruised up; pikachu had fell too.

Ash got up and grabbed pikachu; he just kept running no matter what. Ash saw a girl with a bicycle nearby; the girl had orange hair, she was wearing a yellow shirt with suspenders, she had aqua blue shorts on. Ash didn’t noticed the girl and just grabbed the bike. “I’ll give it back to you” Ash said as he drove off.

“Hey come back here you thief!” The girl yelled; she tried to follow them but she lost her breath fast. Ash kept pedaling with all his might. “Damn it, I should’ve used my bike more, maybe I’ll be faster that way” Ash looked back at the fearow and spearows that were catching up to them. “Okay pikachu, we’re almost there” Ash looked at a rock that was in front; he tried to turned around but instead the bike slipped and they fell down to the floor.

Ash looked at the fearow and spearows that were closing in on them. “Pikachu, you gotta run!” Ash yelled; pikachu was practically knocked out, it could barely listen. Ash looked at the fearow, it was preparing to use another drill peck. Ash jumped in front of pikachu and received the drill peck straight on.

Ash let out a shriek of pain that was heard through the forest. He looked at the now awake pikachu. “Pikachu, this is your chance… run” Ash coughed up some blood as he fell to the floor. He looked at pikachu; pikachu just jumped in front of Ash preparing to receive the many pecks and drillpecks that were coming their way.

Pikachu started charging the thunderbolt; it looked confident about this attack. It fired the thunderbolt right when the attacks were at his face and the fearow and spearows were fried out. Pikachu stopped firing the thunderbolt and it fell down. Ash got up using all his strength and he grabbed pikachu. “Thanks buddy, you really helped me” pikachu just smiled at him. “Now let’s go” Ash looked at Viridian city which was in front of them now. “We made it, now let’s go” Ash started walking down to the city; finally after a long trip they could finally take a rest on Viridian.

Ash could see professor Oak’s assistant waiting for him; he was wearing a lab coat and a pair of glasses.

“So, you must be Ash, you look like you really went through a lot of trouble to get here, well congrats, you’re a minute before your two hours are up” the assistant walked to Ash and gave him his hand; Ash just kept walking. “I’m glad that I passed but now I need to get pikachu to a Pokemon Center” Ash turned to the assistant. “Okay, I’ll help you, you look like you need some assistance too” he took pikachu and started walking with Ash to the Pokemon center.

Ash was talking to professor Oak through the phone. “So you made it my boy, I’m really glad for you” Oaky said holding the results for the test. “Yeah, so how did the rest of the class did?” Ash asked staring at the sheet of paper. “Very well might I add, all of them past, now you can comeback and get your license” Oak said. “Thanks, but I’m going to call my mom and tell her to send my backpack with my stuffs, I’m going to keep going to Pewter” Ash clenched his fist. “All right, good luck” Oak turned the phone off.

Ash looked at a sleeping pikachu nearby. “Okay, pikachu, looks like our journey has finally started” Ash smiled at it. He stared at the map that was on the roof. “We’re going to cross the whole region of Kanto and become the best” Ash pointed at the map and then clenched his fist in confidence.
 
E-Man to tell you the truth this story kinda confused me... and the whole story seems rushed and not thought out. It looked to me the characters you put in came out of nowhere... It's a great idea ( reminds me of my fic) but the execution was not so great. I'm sure you can do better.
 
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