Pokemon Ultimate League

[Flaze]

okay here is my second fanfiction this doesn't mean that I will give up of my first one it's just I had this idea on Ash's last pokemon league so that he can become a master but he needs to worry about team rocket starting they're final move, his feelings for a girl that he has known for a long time but he has to decide which, and on top of it all he has his own student, so now lets see what happens in his last adventure.


Chapter 1: Ash’s return

The pokemon world a world surrounded by human a pokemon this creatures live play and help us live.

these creatueres have live among us since the begining of time there's a lotof defferent types of pokemon and they're increasing by the day.

creatures like this have different powers different abilities, personalities, and types. but the thing that linked them all is their bond between them, us and the world.

There’s many regions in this pokemon world there’s Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, and sinnoh. This four regions have something especial, pokemon trainers who aim to be the best.

Right now we’re in the Kanto region, to be more specific Pallet town. A town surrounded by trees people and a lot of pokemon.

In a house of Pallet town a white house with a red roofs a terrace and a pond on the back. Inside there’s a woman with coffee brown hair pale white skin pink scarf and a yellow dress, is in the kitchen cooking something.

Down from the second floor comes a kid with brown skin black hair which you can barely see cause of his red crimson hat, he also had a dark blue jacket, and black sneaker.

“hey Ms. Ketchum where do you want me to put this stuff.” He said when he came down with a box.

“put them by the sofa Tory Mr. mime will take care of that” Ms. Ketchum said, actually her name is Delia but not a lot of people learn her name.

Tory then went to the living room and put the box down he looked at a picture that was on the living room desk in the picture was Delia professor Oak a great pokemon researcher, Tracey his assistant, a guy with dark skin a brown jacket with a green undershirt and swamp green pants.

The other people were a kid around Tory’s age with a green shirt brown shorts black hair black shoes and glasses, then there was a girl with a red shirt a red skirt with blue undershorts yellow shoes brown hair and a red bandage on her head.

Then there was another girl with yellow shirt yellow shorts red hair white skin and yellow shoes.

And last but not least a kid about four years older than Tory with a blue jacket aqua blue jeans red and blue shoes a red hat with black in the front and a green pokeball in the middle black hair and a skin the same color as Tory.

He them turned to Delia, “hey Ms. Ketchum is this your son.” He asked Delia has always told him about his son and his adventures, and that he was always visiting new regions and meeting new pokemon.

“yeah that’s my Ashy” she said giggling, his name was Ash and he was a pokemon trainer although he’s not very well known Tory has known of him through Delia’s stories and he has now become a great fan of him.

“when would he get here” Tory asked smiling.

“he said he would be home today so I am making his favorite meal.” She giggled again happier than ever.

Outside in the forest a teenager around fourteen years old is walking through the forest he’s wearing a black jacket with a yellow line on the top, a white undershirt dark blue jeans, a red hat black in the front and a blue pokeball in the middle. He was smiling happy to be back to his hometown.

A pikachu was following him it looked like this two had a great bond considering that the pikachu was sitting in it’s shoulder like a pet.

He was seeing his house from there it has been more than a year since he left to the Sinnoh region.

Yeah this is Delia’s son Ash he left to the Sinnoh region almost a year and a half ago he wanted to participate in the Sinnoh league.

He lost in the finals and then went to challenge the Sinnoh battle frontier which he won and became the frontier champion. Now he was back for a little rest after so long.

He got home and open the door he saw his mom cooking, Mr. mime cleaning the floors, and a kid watching a video of his battle in the Sinnoh league.

“hey everyone I am back” Ash yelled with happiness and Tory came running to him.

“wow it is you I can’t believe I am meeting you after so long this is so great.” Tory was jumping with happiness after meeting Ash for the first time.

“okay mom who is he” Ash asked confuse.

“he’s Tory his family moved here from Johto about three months ago.” She said without turning away from her cooking.

“then why isn’t he with his family” Ash said kinda nervous he wasn’t good meeting people that jump him he was good meeting people but not people that surprised him like Tory did.

“his mom works almost all day, and his dad is working as a scientist in Cinnabar Island, so he hangs around here and he helps me with the cooking.”

“oh well nice to meet ya but don’t jump me again okay” Ash said losing his nervousness.

“pleasure to meet you and sorry for the jumping” Tory was laughing as Ash turn to look at Delia’s cooking. “wow mom that smells good, looks like my trip from Sinnoh was worth it.”

After eating about six plates of curry and croquettes Ash finally decided to visit professor Oak and his old pokemon, Tory decided to go with him he wanted to see Ash’s Sinnoh team up close.

When they got To professor Oak’s lab Oak welcomed them with hospitality.

“hey Ash, Tory how good to see you two.” He was cracking a big smile.

“hey professor how have you been” Ash crack a smile back.

“did you just got back” Oak ask.

“yeah I came to see the others and Tory wants to follow me everywhere I guess” Ash answered to Oak.

They went to the living room. A teenager about Ash’s age was sitting there he had a black shirt purple pants black shoes brown spiky hair and a pendant on his neck.

“hey Ash, how’s it going” he asked.

“hey Gary glad to see you again guess you haven’t change that much” Ash responded.

“hey be glad that I decided to invite you to my pokemon researcher graduation” Gary said kinda mad by Ash’s comment.

See Gary is Oak’s grandson and Ash’s rival they had been since they were kids at first it was to see which one was better, then to see who has improved since the last time they battle and them they just fought for fun.

Gary decided to become a pokemon researcher after losing to Ash in the Johto league and a few months ago he had a ceremony of graduation that took place in Sinnoh so he decided to invite Ash and his friends.

“yeah okay, hey professor can I see my pokemon now.” Ash asked.

“sure you don’t have to asked Ash just go” Oak said still happy.

Ash, Tory, Oak, and Gary went to the backyard which looked like a field it was full of pokemon most of them Gary’s and Ash’s.

“well now lets do our comeback pokemon reunion.” He said as he got his pokeball out. “go staraptor, grotle, infernape, buizel, and gliscor come on out” he got all of his pokemon out.

“okay guys this are the others go see and meet them and good luck” Ash said but his pokemon got a head start.

His pokemon were bonding fast, his grotle was together with his boulbasour, glalie, and torkoal. Gliscor went with bayleef, heracross, kingler, donpham, and muk. He’s buizel got along just fine with his sceptile and corphish considering that all of them thought they were the stars.

His Staraptor went flying with noctowl, and swellow. And finally his infernape went with his snorlax totodile, and cindaquil.

“well pikachu it looks like they all like each other already ah.” He said unable to hide his happiness he was seeing all of his pokemon hanging out together acting like good friend, no like brothers, they were linked by him by his adventure by his captures and by his friendships that was the way of a trainer and of a pokemon.

“wow they are all amazing” said Tory astounded.

“yeah and someday you’ll be able to have that many pokemon Tory.” Oak said to Tory.

“yeah I can’t wait” he was anxious to become a trainer but he had to wait another year to become one.

“hey Ash I had a proposition for you” Gary spoke from the door to the backyard.

“what is it Gary” Ash asked.

“I challenged you to a welcomed back pokemon battle, my blastoise against your infernape.” Gary said.

“okay lets go then” Ash said more ready than ever.

They were in the center of the backyard ready to start their battle.

“now ready to see who’s better” Gary said very proud of himself. “go blastoise” he yelled as his blastoise came out of his pokeball.

“well we’ll just have to wait ha Gary” Ash said assuming battle stand and throwing his pokeball. “go infernape” his infernape came out ready to battle.

“now blastoise use your hydro pump” Gary yelled as blastoise let out a big stream of water.

“now infernape use your flamethrower” infernape let out a stream of fire which crash against blastoise hydro pump.

The battle was raging on and now a big rival battle was about to begin.

End.

 

[Blackjack Gabbiani]

You really have to work on this. From the OPENING SENTENCE I could tell it was going to have much the same problems as your other one.

The pokemon world a world surrounded by human a pokemon this creatures live play and help us live.

Now I ask you, what does that mean? How many real sentences could be gotten out of that? "a pokemon this creatures"--WHAT?

 

[Flaze]

well I edited the chapter although the reason I didn't explain much is cause well I couldn't remember the whole pokemon lecture so I just put the more important part and added something of my own.

by the way besides that how was the story of the chapter, and my new character although he might be a little annoying but I wanted someone to be just like Ash was when he started his adventure.

actually if you look at the description, I didn't think I got it right but if you read closely he's described as the main character in pokemon Gotta da ze.

 

[White Len]

Dude, you seriously need to imporve on your grammar, your spelling and your capitalization.

 

[Blackjack Gabbiani]

by the way besides that how was the story of the chapter, and my new character although he might be a little annoying but I wanted someone to be just like Ash was when he started his adventure.

That's going to be a massive problem considering your fic as-is is nearly undecipherable.

Also, why would you want someone to be JUST like a canon character? Why not just write about Ash then?

actually if you look at the description, I didn't think I got it right but if you read closely he's described as the main character in pokemon Gotta da ze.

Um no. And that's not even the title--at least get that right!

 

[White Len]

I believe you've heard of the Gary Stu and Self-worship???

 

[Flaze]

no I don't know what that is sorry. and blackjack sorry for not getting the name right it's just that I am not good at remembering names of manga that are fully japanese so I got trouble sometimes.

oh and if you'll like to tell me what's unclear about the story tell me cause i really really need to get better.

by the way your right the name was wrong it was pokemon getto da ze.

 

[Flaze]

Episode 2: the big welcoming battle.

Last time, Ash return to his hometown Pallet town in the Kanto region. When he got home he got to see his mom, and Tory a kid that has just move into Pallet receive him in a good way kinda.

And after a great diner Ash had gone to see professor Oak, and his rival Gary, after a reunion he and Gary decide to have a battle. With Ash ordering his infernape to use flamethrower, and blastoise used hydro pump.

As both attacks crashed together a big cape of vapor surrounded the whole yard.

As the smoke cleared both pokemon attack once more.

“Now infernape use your flamewheel” Ash yelled as infernape surrounded itself in flames and started spinning like a wheel.

“Now blastoise use your skull bash” blastoise started to tackle as it’s head glew in green and it crashed with infernape’s.

They both stayed like that for a few seconds till infernape couldn’t keep on and it’s attack got cancelled and his head was all wounded.

Right now Ash was in deep thought any move he makes would be cancelled by Gary. After all blastoise has the more experienced attacks and almost all of them were stronger against infernape.

“I got it” he yelled finally giving a command. “Now infernape spin and then ember.”

“Blastoise go use rapid spin” Gary ordered he’s blastoise as it started spinning.

But when blastoise rapid spin was gonna hit, infernape made a spin and then let out fire bullets which hit blastoise back and it damaged it’s shell.

“wow, professor do you think that Ash is gonna win” Tory asked he was too happy he has never seen a battle so big like this even though he had seen Ash’s battle this was way better.

“Well, I’ve seen this two battle a lot of time, and from my experienced I could say that well will just have to wait” Oak said without looking away from the battle.

“What do you mean by that professor” Tory asked confused.

“That this could be a battle to be define by luck.” Oak responded.

“Really wow, then I guess I better take notes for when I become a trainer” Tory said bringing out a notepad.

“Guess you like to write down strategy.” Oak said.

“Yeah, I like to write strategies down this is like my own way to study, cause well I am bad at school, plus I like to write the strategies in case I need them.” Tory responded to Oak.

The battle kept raging on as infernape and blastoise kept sharing punches.

“Time to go back to work, infernape use your close combat” Ash ordered prepared to see what infernape could do. He had train infernape to use close combat for a long time, considering that everytime he used it lost it’s energy.

“Close combat” Gary gasped as he heard Ash tell infernape his command.

Then infernape’s fist and legs started glowing in blue as he started hitting and kicking blastoise with rage and power. After a few hits blastoise shell started to break.

“Our plan worked, now that his defenses are down, infernape use your iron tail” infernape’s tail glowed in a bright white as it hit blastoise shell finally revealing it’s weak points.

“Well, I see you learned a lot in Sinnoh, including how to break blastoise shell” Gary smiled as he was surprised for the move his rival used.

“What does he mean by that” Tory asked professor Oak.

“Well, you see a blastoise is one of the pokemon with the best defense in the world, and there’s only one way to break it’s shell.” Oak answered bu he got cut off.

“What do you mean professor” Tory asked.

Oak took a deep breath and started to talk “that there’s only one way and that is by attacking every side of it’s shell. Ash attacked blastoise back by using infernape’s ember, then used close combat to break the sides which is hard to hit, and finally he used iron tail to break the front.”

“Wow, I better note that out” Tory started writing it but Oak stopped him.

“Some things are better by just watching Tory, and that’s one of the first rules of a trainer” Oak said.

Blastoise was kneel down but kept it stand so that infernape didn't he was losing, while infernape was breathing heavily.

“Okay, infernape time to use your strongest attack, go use your flare blitz” Ash yelled at the top of his lungs.

Infernape started getting all his energy out and his body glowed in deep dark red and it was covered in flames, only thing you could see was infernape’s flaming shadow, then infernape growled with all his might.

“Your infernape knows flare blitz, plus it can control blaze, I got to admit you have gotten rally strong and I am glad” Gary closed his eyes took a deep breath ready to tell blastoise his last command. “Now blastoise use your hydro cannon.”

Blastoise let out a big stream of water from it’s cannons and the water was so strong that it even produced electricity, considering that it was the stronger water attack ever.

Infernape started running, growling, and yelling as it crashed with blastoise Hydro cannon it let out a lot of steam.

A few seconds later infernape came out of the steam still all fired up. It ran to his fullest till it got close to blastoise and finally gave him a right punch in the center of blastoise shell.

Infernape lost it’s fire power and it’s blaze and fell but didn’t fell unconscious, while blastoise just stood there.

All of them were waiting to see who fell but in the end, blastoise fell to the floor with it’s eyes blank.

“I made it I won” Ash jump in the air throwing his fist in the air.

He then ran to infernape together with pikachu, and he hugged his great pokemon “that was a great battle infernape, and that blaze was the best you really learn to control it.”

You see infernape used to be unable to control blaze. The first time he used it infront of Ash he got out of control and attack Ash. But after training, evolving, and trusting Ash he finally got the hang of it.

“Wow that was so cool, no the coolest of the battles I ever seen” Tory was amazed.

“Yeah it was my boy, there’s a lot of things you can learn from Ash” Oak smiled at Tory.

Gary then started walking to leave the lab.

“Where are you going Gary” Ash asked.

Gary gave him a thumbs up. “take this Ash you deserve it.” He threw a badge an earth badge to be more specific.

“Why are you giving me an earth badge I already got one remember” Ash said confused.

“That’s to show you that a great trainer has more than one profession” Gary said shooting a grin.

Gary gave him another thumbs up “hey Ash why don’t you go to Viridian in three days, that is unless your scare.”

“Why for” Ash asked.

“lets just say that you’ll go if you want to have one hell of a battle” Gary responded.

Finally Ash gave Gary a thumbs up so did Gary as he left the lab together with the pokeball he picked up from the floor.

Ash went back to his house about three hours later, Tory had left earlier, he actually couldn’t wait to see him leave Ash finally knew what made Misty so mad at him so much when they met.

“What the hell” Ash yelled when he was talking to his mom in the living room while Tory was watching tv. “He’s staying here.”

“Don’t use that tone with me young man” Delia nagged at Ash considering that Ash had forgotten that he was at his house now where he’s mom could surely send him to his room.

“And yes he’s staying with us, his mom called me and said that she was staying in Johto for a few days so Tory has to stay with us” Delia answer him about Tory.

“But mom, how come I have to sleep on the couch” Ash whined.

“Cause I called dibs about three hours ago that’s why I left early” Tory got up and made a teasing face.

“Come on Tory it’s me your hero remember” Ash was begging in his knees he knew the couch was gonna break his back.

“Sorry but in war, love and sleeping places everything’s fair” Tory said crossing his arms.

Ash finally decided to sleep in the couch, worst night of his live by the way and he had sleep most of the last four years in the floor.

Tory went down the stairs in the middle of the night to get a glass of water and he saw Ash so he just had to ask “are you awake Ash.”

“No I am cursing in my sleep of course I am awake” Ash said angry.

“Sorry you have to sleep in the couch, and sorry that I been on your case for a long time it’s just that I want to be like you and you’re my hero so I want it to ask, can you take me as your student” Tory finally got it out.

“My student, but why I mean I’m not even a master yet” Ash was shocked.

“I don’t care and you’re a master to me I mean the way you fought today, it was the best” Tory was trying to see if Ash was changing his mind.

“Okay I’ll think about it, but if you want to become my student you’ll need to past a test” Ash said nodding his head with his eyes close.

“Really, wow I’ll do anything what’s the test” Tory asked.

“Lets just say is to see how you can control pokemon” Ash responded with a mischievous smile.

“Okay thanks” Tory went back up.

“Tory wait" but Tory had already left "I forgot to ask him if he could give me the bed pikachu” Ash said while pikachu just raised it’s elbows.

And that way Ash have had a great welcome back day a welcome back battle and a new student but what is the test Ash is talking about, and what was Gary talking about.

TO BE CONTINUED...

 

[The Outrage]

Now I ask you, what does that mean? How many real sentences could be gotten out of that? "a pokemon this creatures"--WHAT?

Not to mention the redundancy of mentioning that it is the Pokemon World, then going on to say how it is a world inhabited by Pokemon.

You also need to work on your tenses.

Last time, Ash return to his hometown Pallet town in the Kanto region

Should be: " Last time Ash returned to his hometown of Pallet Town in the Kanto region..."

That entire first sentence is also a bit sketchy. You are bundling three different topics all in one sentence, jumping from one idea to another.

You put comas where there should be periods.

And, never start a sentence with "and"....

..."but" maybe since I believe there is an exception to that however, And is always used to connect two ideas, things etc.

Spoiler

btw my starting a sentence off with "and" is supposed to be an ironic joke, don't spoil it by pointing out purposeful grammar mistakes for the sake of emphasis

 

[Flaze]

I edited some things I'll get to edit the rest of the errors tomorrow thanks for posting.

 

[White Len]

LOL GARY GOT PWNED. So did your grammar. Seriously, capitalize the first letters of sentences. Next, capitalize all names of Pokémon. Third, get your vocabulary fixed. Using 'said' all the time drives Pokéfags readers crazy.

 

[Blackjack Gabbiani]

Seriously, capitalize the first letters of sentences. Next, capitalize all names of Pokémon. Third, get your vocabulary fixed.

That second one isn't necessary. However, the others are.

 

[Flaze]

I know but sometimes I just don't come up with other words, but I am glad you liked it thanks for posting and for the steps.

by the way how you like my combination of flare blitz and blaze.

 

[Flaze]

Episode 3: The student's test

Yesterday Ash came back to his town of Pallet town. Having fought against his old rival Gary and winning the battle he decided to stay for the night at his house. Soon after that Tory the new kid in Pallet town beg for him to take him as his student Ash took a little time but he finally accepted.

As we’re heading down in route 1 we see Ash and his pikachu walking up the hill down in memory lane. While Tory was following them and writing all the things Ash was saying.

“That’s where pikachu and I tried to capture spearow, pikachu and I weren’t so good friends back there so we kinda ended up in a bad plan as we got attack. But them pikachu saved my life, we escaped and then we became friends.” Ash finish talking as Tory was going like crazy trying to write all he said.

“Master, I don’t get it, how come I have to write everything you say” Tory asked tire of writing so many word he wasn’t exactly a fast writer.

“Cause, when you become a trainer if there’s a pokemon that doesn’t obey you there’s one thing you can do.” He answer Tory’s question easily as Tory was about to laugh.

“So you mean what I have to do is get a flood of spearows to attack me and stab me to death so my pokemon can obey me.” Tory had a doubtful smile on his face.

“They weren’t stabbing me, they were trying to stab pikachu, and I protected him thank you very much.” Ash corrected him with an annoyed smile.

“Sorry if this sounds disrespectful but I don’t freaking care okay, I thought I was gonna have to train with a pokemon today” Tory yelled at Ash.

“Hey don’t talk to your master like that. About the test I know I told you I was gonna give you a pokemon to train with and here it is.” Ash got out a pokeball “I haven’t used this pokemon in a long time so there might be a slight chance it will obey you.” He pressed the button and a totodile came out.

“Toto to dile” totodile came out dancing like crazy.

“A totodile” Tory had a blank face on. “You gotta be kidding me, a totodile almost all the pokemon around here are grass types they can easily defeat water types.” Tory yelled again.

“Yeah but totodile is stronger than that” Ash told him and making a point.

“pika pi” pikachu agreed with Ash.

“Okay guess that’s the only thing I got.” Tory finally gave up and decided to stay with totodile.

Ash finally gave Tory his test, Tory had to capture at least one pokemon out of two he could have gave him more but Tory was just a rookie trainer.

Tory had left Ash as he went with totodile so that he could catch a pokemon himself.

“According to the pokedex Master gave me it can tell me what kind of pokemon live here.” Tory opened the pokedex.

“The pokemon here are caterpie, venonat, pidgey, spearow, and nidoran male, and female.” Tory closed his pokedex letting totodile go up front so that he could battle.

“Well then lets find our first victim” Tory started looking around route 1 as he saw a venonat walk around in the grass.

“Allright a venonat I am gonna catch it” Tory assumed battle stand and started telling totodile his command. “Now totodile go use your water gun” totodile shoot a stream of water out of his mouth it hit venonat but it didn’t made a little damage.

“According to the pokedex venonat is a bug pokemon and he receives normal damage from water pokemon.” Tory looked at his pokemon remembering what Ash said before Tory left.

“Listen Tory totodile has a strong water attack but the only way for him to unleash him is for you to make him trust you a good thing is to do what he does best.” Tory ended his flashback.


“Okay then totodile lets go” Tory told him as totodile started dancing.

Tory then started dancing like totodile which made venonat a little embarrassed to be seen around them.

“I don’t get it it’s not working” he noticed that totodile was also getting embarrassed cause of Tory.

“This is hopeless” Tory put his head down.

Then he noticed two things a nidoran male appeared from nowhere and the venonat escaped.

“Hey a male nidoran that’s so cool, lets try this one totodile” Tory looked at totodile who responded by dancing happily.

“So your ready to get that pokemon” totodile nodded.

“Okay go use water gun” totodile fired another water gun this one made a strong hit on the male nidoran and send it flying to a tree.

“Alright now for the pokeball” he threw a pokeball that hit the male nidoran and started wiggling but opened in the second one.

“Darn it, we have to do it again. Totodile use your ice fang attack” totodile’s fang started glowing in blue with an icy aura as he leapt on he bit the male nidoran freezing it.

“Now for the next one go pokeball” Tory threw his second pokeball.

It started to wiggle once…

Twice…

Three times and then it made a ping sound meaning it had capture the pokemon.

“Yeah I got my first capture” Tory jump in the air holding the pokeball.

Totodile just stayed there dancing happy that it help it’s master student to make his own capture.

“Well now that we’re done I think it’s time we go back with Ash ha totodile” Tory just smile as totodile nodded.

When they got back to the meeting place they discovered that Ash wasn’t there anymore but there was a note in the floor.

“Hey Tory if your reading this then I haven’t come back and that you have made your first capture. Okay lets get back to topic you see I just remember that I made a little promise to someone about three years ago that someone should still be around here so me and pikachu decided to find. Well good luck, you can take this time to practice.” There was a little smile in the end of the letter.

“Okay in that case lets go” he raised his hand as the nidoran male and totodile prepared for a great training section while they were waiting for Ash.

So Tory has had a very productive day, he started his training with Ash, befriended Ash’s totodile, and he made his first capture. But now he has to prepared cause the training it’s just beginning and things are gonna become harder for now on.

 

[The Outrage]

I'm just wondering why the first sentence of episode two is in quotations.

You don't need to keep reminding us that Pallet Town is Ash's home town like you did in the begining of episode three when its already been established.

 

[Flaze]

I already edited and I just want it to recapitalize the last two episiodes this is the last time I'll do it.

Other than that how's the episode

 

[Flaze]

Episode 4: a old bird in a new world

Ash and Tory left Pallet town so that Tory could catch a pokemon as his test to become Ash’s student. Tory fought hard together with Ash’s totodile, but after all that hard work they managed to capture a male nidoran.

But while Tory was capturing pokemon, Ash was having an adventure of his own.

“Okay pikachu, I think we can find him here,” Ash said while he was looking through his binoculars.

“Pika pi” pikachu went running inside the forest.

“Hey pikachu, comeback here” Ash went and followed pikachu.

Ash and pikachu wandered far in the forest; as Ash and pikachu got farther they started remembering stuff from that day, the day he said goodbye to his pidgeot.

Three years ago, after Ash had lost the pokemon league he and his friends set on another adventure to go to the orange islands, during this time Ash and his friends got attack by a school of spearows led by a fearow; who had evolve from the spearow Ash and pikachu met on their first day of training.

After his pidgeotto lost to fearow; it evolved into a pidgeot. After an areal battle pidgeot defeated fearow. Ash, hoping that fearow wouldn’t attack the pidgeys, and pidgeottos in the area, he left pidgeot as the leader of the flock. But Ash did promise that he will come back for him one day.

Ash, and pikachu got lost in the forest, apparently Ash had been out on his adventure for so long that he doesn’t even remember his way through the forest.

“I think we’re lost pikachu” Ash looked around the forest, he put a mark around the tree to make sure they don’t walk in circles.

Then a screech was heard around the forest; a screech that Ash had heard before. “You’re not thinking what I’m thinking are you pikachu” Ash turned to pikachu as the little rat nodded.

Something came down from the sky it was a big bird; Ash couldn’t see well cause of the sun. “It’s him again; fearow,” as in cue fearow came down from the sky as soon as Ash said its name.

“Fearowwwwwwwww” the fearow screech its name; which send sound waves through all the forest.

“I see he still remembers us” Ash grinned preparing to defeat this fearow as he had before.

Fearow leapt into the air, and it started using drill peck. “Pikachu lets have a contact battle, go use volt tackle.” Pikachu charged electricity around it’s body; it waited till fearow was close enough to attack.

When fearow was about three meters away from pikachu, it jumped into the air as it crashed together with fearow. The hit was so strong that fearow fell to the floor; unfortunately he didn’t fell unconscious.

“Looks like this fearow has gotten strong” Ash prepare to give pikachu another command; when all of a sudden a huge gust of wing past behind Ash, it was pidgeot.

As pidgeot held back fearow, Ash just couldn’t stop looking at the pidgeot. “Guess we finally found you pidgeot. Pikachu use your thunder bolt attack” pikachu sent out a thunder bolt making sure not to hit pidgeot at the same time. The thunderbolt managed to strike fearow really hard knocking it out.

“There’s only one way we can stop this fearow, pokeball go” Ash threw a pokeball at fearow; it started to wiggle and after the third time it had capture it. “That will take care of it” Ash put the pokeball back in his belt; he only took pikachu, grotle, and infernape with him so he had three spaces for his team.

“Now, it’s been a long time hasn’t pidgeot” Ash turned around looking at pidgeot. “Pidgeeoott” pidgeot replied in agreement.

“You should probably tell us what’s happening in the forest, so show us the way old friend” Ash rode over pidgeot, and they went father into the forest. They got to a huge tree in the middle of the forest.

“Wow this is your house, it’s so big; do you have a widescreen TV to go with it” Ash chuckled, and pidgeot shrugged seeing his trainer hasn’t change a lot since the last time. A bunch of pidgey, and pidgeotto landed in the tree; they all stared at Ash noticing that he was a stranger.

“Guess you should tell them about me” Ash got scared looking at the faces of the pidgey, and pidgeotto.

It took a few minutes till the pidgey, and pidgeotto understood; but they did in the end. “Okay now, for all I know the spearows and fearows are back after a long time, do you know why” Ash said putting his hand on the cheek. Pidgeot just nodded and it signal the tree nearby.

“I get it, their neighbors, both of you live in big trees, but the fearows and spearows want to control this tree too. That makes sense when you think about it” Ash got up and gave a thumbs up to pidgeot reassuring that everything was gonna be okay. “Don’t worry I’ll help you out, no matter what” Ash smiled pidgeot just stared at him remembering how he missed the smile of his friend.

About an hour later Ash, pikachu, and pidgeot flew out of the tree and went on to the fearows and spearows tree to make a little negotiations. “Tree on sight” Ash yelled making himself clear to the fearows and spearows that were sleeping in the tree.

“Pika pika” pikachu tugged on Ash’s jacket, it was angry that his trainer had just ruined their plan. “Don’t worry pikachu we got grotle, infernape, and pidgeot. There’s no way they can beat us” Ash started laughing out of confident, while pikachu just sighed.

As pidgeot landed on the tree the fearows, and spearows didn’t wasted a moment before attacking the young trainer.

“Ah, hey everyone, don’t be alarm we just came to help you” Ash said nervously, and started laughing. The fearows and spearows just sweat drop at Ash’s stupidity. “We just came to make a truce between you, and pidgeot’s family” Ash got his confident back waiting for their reaction.

The fearow in the front leaped up, and made its own drill peck. “Watch out” Ash screamed dodging the attack. “What the hell your problem, I was just trying to make a truce.” The fearow just squawk at Ash as it made an areal ace.

Ash climb up pidgeot, and they left the tree preparing to battle. “Guess our plan didn’t work. Okay grotle infernape; join pikachu and keep the other fearows, and spearows away” Ash threw grotle’s, and infernape’s pokeball back into the tree as they joined pikachu.

“Now, pidgeot go use wing attack” pidgeot’s wing started glowing and it hit fearow, but it didn’t made a lot of damage. The fearow did another drill peck; this time it hit Ash, and pidgeot, making pidgeot fall into the forest.

Ash got up to see if pidgeot was okay. “Pidgeot, get up we have to win” Pidgeot opened his eyes. “It’s time to fight just like the old times” Ashian smiled. Pidgeot let out a tear, it remember all the battles he, and Ash had a long time ago, now it was time to get back in the horse, and help his trainer become the best.

Fearow was waiting for Ash and pidgeot to come out. After five minutes he decided to leave only to see pidgeot passing it at an incredible speed.

Ash, and pidgeot turned around looking right at fearow. “Your not the only one with a few aces on their sleeve” Ash gave fearow a grin. “Now pidgeot, extreme speed” pidgeot flapped it’s wings as it flew right at fearow at a super fast speed, when fearow could finally move it had been in the gut by pidgeot.

“We made it” Ash threw his fist in the air, and pidgeot flew back to the tree and see how things went.

After everything was clear, and the fearows, and spearows promise not to attack the pidgeys and pidgeottos. Now it was time for the big question. “Pidgeot, a long time ago I promised that I will comeback for you, well I have; so do you want to be a part of my team again?” Ash asked. Pidgeot just stare at him. After a moment of thought it got Ash and pikachu in his back and flew out of the three. After smiling at pidgeot both Ash and pikachu waved goodbye at the pidgeys, and pidgeottos.

“Now that I remember, we kinda forgot about Tory” Ash scratched his cheek hoping that Tory was okay.

Ash and pikachu got to the rendezvous point. As Ash got down he saw Tory lying sleep on the floor.

He tried shaking Tory to see if he woke up; he didn’t. “Aw when his sleep he’s not so annoying, too bad I took to long on getting pidgeot back” Ash raised his shoulders. He noticed that Tory had managed to catch a pokemon.

“I know, I said that there were two parts to this exam, but Tory won’t be waking up soon, and I’m dead tire. So lets go back home, and tomorrow we’ll give Tory the surprised” Ash lifted Tory up, and left on pidgeot back to his house. “It sure has been a big day hasn’t it pikachu” Ash looked at pikachu. “Pika pika” pikachu nodded.

 

[pikachu200]

Cool a new traveling companion for Satoshi that's great

 

[Flaze]

thanks, he's supposed to be Ash's student, you will see a lot of him in the future.

 

[Flaze]

Episode 5: come Ash, come to the ice battle.

In the pokemon lab of professor Oak, Ash, and Tory are training. It’s been three days since Ash got back to Pallet town, Tory has become his student, and Ash is training for the battle his having today in Viridian city.

Ash, and professor Oak were watching Tory train his new totodile, and male nidoran.

“So, Ash, are you really giving Tory your totodile; he might be too strong for Tory” Oak ask looking at Ash who look back at him with a gentle smile.

“Yeah, totodile hasn’t have a lot of battles lately, which means he couldn’t be so strong as to not obey Tory, plus they’re already good friends so” Ash kept looking at Tory’s pokemon training.

“Okay totodile use your water gun, nidoran use your horn attack” Tory ordered clenching his fist. Totodile fired a water gun, while nidoran’s horn glew white and went for a hit at totodile, but the water gun was to strong, so it sent nidoran flying back.

“Tory sure needs help with his attacks” Oak told Ash while Tory kept training. “Yeah, but guess since I’m his master now, I’ll need to help him” Ash scratched his head with an “it’s difficult” smile on his face.

“Totodile use your water gun attack again, nidoran practice your horn drill!” totodile fired another water gun this time the stream was bigger, and was absorbing air. Nidoran’s horn glew white again, but this time the horn started spinning, it raised the grass around the two pokemon.

Nidoran started running, as it crashed with totodile powerful water gun, it got sent backwards again. “Why can’t we do it!” Tory clenched his teeth in anger.

“Tory, first lesson, think about which attack your gonna use, just because the attack is strong doesn’t mean is gonna give you victory” Ash said in a strong tone. “What do you mean master?” Tory asked looking up at Ash.

“You see, totodile’s water gun is very strong, and it can do a lot of damage to your nidoran at this level. In case you can’t understand, you can’t use physical attacks to block elemental attacks, cause with that your will only lose it’s strength faster, you understand that?” Ash pointed at both nidoran and totodile while he was speaking, Tory wrote the things Ash said in his notepad.

“Yeah, I understand master, should I keep training?” Tory asked kneeling. “First stop kneeling it’s kinda gay, and no, your coming to Viridian with me this afternoon; it’ll help you out for when you start traveling” Ash smiled, and Tory left to Ash’s house so he could pick some stuff.

A few minutes later Ash and Tory were back at Ash’s house eating. “So you two are going to Viridian today hah?” Delia asked while Ash stole a pizza slice from Tory’s hand.

“You eat that, I’ll kill you” Ash glared at Tory; totally ignoring his mom. “Ash, look at me when I’m talking to you” Delia stated with mad eyes. “Sorry mom” Ash said smiling nervously.

“Hey master, do you know who your going battle?” Tory asked trying to distract Ash, so that he could steal back his pizza. “Nope, Gary didn’t told me anything, and prepare to die” Ash jumped out of his seat as he and Tory started fighting in the floor; letting away a cloud of dust. “It doesn’t matter how much he grows up, Ash will always be Ash” His mom sighed and smile.

Ash and Tory were walking in the forest. Ash was whistling together with pikachu, while Tory was carrying a huge backpack. “Why do I need to carry this” Tory cried out of the heavy back. “It’ll help you get stronger, plus there’s not that many rocks inside is there” Ash smiled innocently, while Tory remembered how Ash told him that he had to carry a bag full of rocks to Viridian.

Ash, and Tory entered Viridian; they both notice that the city was kinda unpopulated. “That’s weird I heard that Viridian was full of people?” Tory asked looking for a place to dump the bag. “Yeah, it’s normally hard to find someone in this place, but guess people must be on vacation.” Ash notice that they were in front of the Viridian gym.

“Hey is that the gym, it looks like a mini colosseum” Tory had a big smile on his face. “That’s the Viridian gym, I got a million memories there, I wonder if Agatha is there” Ash went to the gym and read a note that was on the door.

“Attention all trainers, today the elite 4 member Prima is coming for an special battle, I’ll be at the Viridian stadium” Ash finished reading the note. “Viridian stadium, they must have finished constructing it while I was in Sinnoh” Ash and Tory left, and went to the Viridian stadium, he could see both Agatha, and Prima again, and probably show them both how strong his become.

When Tory and Ash got to the stadium they saw Gary standing in the door. “Hey Gary what are you doing here?” Ash wave at Gary from far.

“You’re here, I thought you’ll never come, hey Tory” Gary said kinda angry at Ash. “What’s with the attitude” Ash asked laughing. “Just come with me!” Gary grabbed Ash and took him and Tory inside the stadium.

Gary took Ash, and Tory through the whole stadium, he finally stopped in front of an aqua blue door that was in the middle of the hall, there was a man dress like a butler on the door.

“Hello Mr. Ketchum, your locker room is ready” The man said, as Gary just told him to go away. “What was he talking about Gary?” Gary opened the door and Ash looked at the screen that was lit up with the view from the stadium, the spectators and Prima. “What’s this for” Tory asked trying to touch the screen. “Listen Ash I forgot to tell you, I booked you up for a battle with Prima today” Gary looked at Ash who was surprised to hear this.

“You what, why didn’t you told me” Ash was astounded. “Sorry, I knew you’ll get all worried, if you knew so I just didn’t told you” Gary gave Ash a please forgive me smile. “Guess I can’t blame you plus I been wanting to have a big battle” Ash smiled and walked up to the computer.

“Tory go with Gary to the spectator seats, I’ll go out to the stadium soon” Ash sat on the computer calling professor Oak.

The stadium was screaming to their fullest. “Now we’re ready for this great battle, on this side being one of the most beautiful, and most powerful trainers in the world Primaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa” The announcer yelled as Prima came out of the left aisle.

“Now on this side, his the number one trainer in Pallet town. He has been in the best 16 of the Kanto league, defeated the Orange league, was in the best 8 of both the Johto, and Hoenn league, defeated the Battle Frontier, ended up in second place on the Sinnoh league, and defeated the Sinnoh Battle Frontier, here is Asssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhh Ketchummmmmmmmmmmmm” the announcer yelled one more time while the crowd roar.

Ash came out of the right hall staring at the crowd, he had been in a lot of league battles, but none of the battles were set for him. “So we meet again Prima” Ash said looking right at Prima.

“So Ash, it’s been a long time has it, hope your ready to prove me how much you improved” Prima said calmly, Ash clench his fist. “I’m ready as I’ll ever be, and you’ll see that as soon as this battle starts” Ash was confident, and ready to battle.

“Now we will start by choosing the field” the announcer said as four figures of different elements appear on the screen above Ash, and Prima. There were the figures of a rock, a raindrop, a snowflake, and a leaf. After about five spins the wheel finally stopped in the snowflake meaning they were gonna battle in the ice field.

In the spectators seat, Tory and Gary were in the front row. “Oh great, Prima is an ice type trainer, Ash is in a huge disadvantage” Gary groaned.

Back on the field Ash stared at the field changing elements. The normal field went down the stadium, and an ice arena came out. “Okay pikachu it’s time to battle” Ash looked down at pikachu waiting for the screen to choose which one should start the match.

Unfortunately for Ash the wheel stopped on his picture which meant he had to start.

“Great like things weren’t bad enough now master needs to choose the first pokemon” Tory put his hand in his head. “Yeah, but Ash is known for coming out of some bad situations” Gary announced.

“Okay Ash choose your pokemon” Prima looked at Ash who got a pokeball out of his belt. “In that case, it’s time for your big combat; go pidgeot” Ash threw his pokeball to the icy arena, and pidgeot came out flapping his wings.

“Ash starts with his pidgeot, wonder what Prima will do” The announcer said through the mic.

“I choose dewgong” Prima threw her own pokeball and a dewgong came out. “Prima starts out with her loyal dewgong, now the battle really heating on” The announcer said as the crowd started cheering.

Ash looks at the field, and Prima trying to see what could happen, and what will happen to him in this important battle.

So, after traveling to Viridian with Tory, Ash discovered that he had to battle the elite 4 member; now the great battle of our hero is about to start, prepare for this super heated fight.

TO BE CONTINUED…