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Power Lord - Harry Potter/Pokemon Crossover

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Hey I'm new to the garden, but I looooooooove fanfics. Anyways, here is mine. It's a HP/Pokemon cross, so if you are into that...enjoy. If not...oh well.


Chapter 1: Unexpected Inheritance

Harry was at home in Private Drive, sitting on his bed, watching the clock. He's been sitting there for 10 minutes and the clock now says 11:58pm. He then started to get tired and lied down.

As soon as the clock struck 12, pain shot through his entire body. He felt himself being over loaded with knowledge of everything through out the world, and about these wierd creatures that had special abilities that he didn't even know about 'til now. He also felt his magic increase ten fold.

After awhile he couldn't take the pain no more and fell unconscious.

-Meanwhile at Hogwarts-

Albus was fire calling Minerva and Severus to come with him to Private Drive.

As soon as they stepped outside the wards around Hogwarts, they quickly appariated outside of #14.

Snape assisted by blasting the door open and followed the Headmaster and Minerva inside.

They walked up the stairs to the door with a bunch of locks on it.

Dumbledore unlocked them all and walked inside, followed closely by the two professors, Minerva gasped when she saw Harry lying unconscious on his bed.

She then levitated Harry off his bed and Dumbledore followed her out.

Snape stayed behind a bit, and looked around. He was pretty sure that someone or something was watching them. When he looked around and saw nothing, he quickly left and appariated to Hogwarts.

Nothing was said while the three professors rushed towards the infirmary.

"Poppy! We need you!" Dumbledore yelled.

The nurse ran out of her office and towards the bed that they professors were standing around. She quickly scanned Harry was surprised to see that his magic has increased in power and is still increasing. She also noticed taht there was new powers working along side his magic.

Poppy explained to the professors what she found out and their eyes widened a bit.

"How could that be possible? He never showed signs of new abilities before." Minerva said.

"Well it's probably from a recent inheritance that he had," Pomphry said, "That's also probably why he is unconscious because his body is adjusting to the increase of power and new abilities."

"Well, whatever it is, we'll wait 'til he wakes up and we'll see how he is then." Dumbledore said.

All of them agreed to this decision and left.

Later on that night, when everything was still dark, except for the moon shining through the window. A creature appeared next to Harry's bed and looked down at him.

Instead of standing on the ground, it was floating in mid-air. It had an extremly long tail that looked to be twice as long as it's body. Had long feet and small arms and hands. It had a kinda cat shaped head and big, bright blue eyes. The weird thing about it though was that it's whole body was colored pink.

"Mew," the creature whispered.

Harry shifted on the bed and turned on his side, and yet still didn't wake up.

Another creature appeared next to the floating pink one, except this one was standing. Instead of having pink colored like the first one, it had purple. Two shades of purple to be exact.

Most of its body was pale purple, while its tail was... well, purple.

'Is he the one?' the 'purple' creature asked the one next to it.

"Mew," the other creature answered.

The newly arrived creature looked down towards the human boy, who would soo be his master when he woke up.

'I swear on my life that my master will be protected and would never die like our last master centuries ago.' it said.

The pink creature nodded in agreement. It then floated down to the bed and lied down next to Harry.


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Chapter 2: Finding Out

It has been two weeks since the two creatures arrived. The purple one, stood guarding the two that were resting on the bed next to him.

Three more days later, Harry was stirring and started to open his eyes. He wasn't surprised to find that he was in the infirmary, but was surprised to find two creatures watching him. One was standing on digi-graded legs while the other was levitating next to it.

His mind told him that the pink one was called Mew and the purple one, Mewtwo. How he knew that, he wasn't sure.

"Mew," Mew said with concern.

"I'm alright. I'm just a bit shocked to see you and Mewtwo here. And why am I talking to you like I've met you before?" Harry mumbled to himself.

Mewtwo was about to say something, when the door to the infirmary opened.

Mewtwo got ready to attack whomever is going to try and harm his master.

Minerva walked into the infirmary to check how Harry was doing, and was surprised to find two creatures, that she had never seen or heard of.

She started to reach for her wand, but when the purple creature realized what she was about to do, it's hand started to glow.

She then looked over towards the bed and was happy to see that Harry was awake.

"Mr. Potter are you alright? How are you feeling?" asked Professor McGonagul.

"I'm fine professor and please don't attack Mew or Mewtwo. They'll take it the wrong way and think you trying to get to me." warned Harry.

McGonagul nodded and pulled her hand out of her pocket.

Mewtwo lowered his hand a bit but was still ready to attack at any given moment.

"Professor Dumbledore and Professor Snape should be here soon. Mr. Potter,... um... do you know what or who these creatures are?" Minerva asked.

"I'll tell you when the two professors get here, 'cause I don't want to repeat it again." Harry said.

They didn't ahve to wait long for the two professors to get there. They too were startled to see Mew and Mewtwo there and they both pointed their wands at them.

Mewtwo raised his hand again, but never got the chance to do anything because Harry got out of bed and stood in front of him.

Harry raised his hand and summonded both their wands."

'Master...?' Mewtwo asked in confusion.

"Don't worry Mewtwo. I won't tollerate anyone that whill try to attack or cause harm to any of my poke' mon." Harry said without turning to look at him.

"Mr. Potter what's the meaning of this?!" Snape yelled.

"The problem is you professor, all three of you. As soon as Professor McGonagul walked in here, my instincts recognized her as a threat, so I watched and waited to see what she was going to do. Then when you two professors walked in, my threat meter went up a few notches. So I had to step in and protect my two companions." Harry explained.

"So, the inheritance you've gained is telling you that all wizards and witches are enemies to you?" asked Dumbledore.

Harry nodded, "Yes. So, I'm not going to stay here. I'm going to go with my companions, go to their world, and stay there. Don't try to find a way to follow me, 'cause if you do, I won't hesitate to attack you." Harry said.

"What about Voldemort?" Albus asked.

"When it's time, I'll come back. Until then, don't follow me."

Harry held onto both poke' mon and all three of them disappeared out of sight.


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eh... it's okay.

The idea is there, but I'm a stickler for characters remaining in character even in fan fiction and... well, you're characters aren't really all that true to the original work. The dialogue is also a bit choppy and doesn't flow as well as it could.

It's a good start, but it does need some work. Unless of course you are one of those writers who doesn't care about staying in character in which case that's your deal.

Also, how does Madame Pomfrey scan him for magical powers?
 
Chapter 3: 5 years later

"Max! Slow down, will ya!" yelled May.

"But we're almost there! Look, this is the lake I... wanted to show you." Max told his sister and his two friends that were close behind her.

The reason that he stopped was because it was something that he saw at the lake.

Ash, Brock, and May got to Max and looked at him in confussion.

"Max, why did you stop getting all excited all of the sudden?" asked Brock.

Max just pointed at what he was looking at. Ash, Brock and May looked in that direction in gasped.

What they saw was a man sitting on the opposite side of the lake, with Suicune resting next to him and Mew sitting on his shoulder.

The man looked like he was in his early twenties, had shaggy, ebony black hair and emerald green eyes. He wore a black trench coat that covered most of his body, had on blue slacks and a navy blue t-shirt.

The man was softly pettine Suicune's head, as it rested its head on the man's thigh. Mew had its tail wrapped around the man's shoulders as it watched them silently.

Pikachu climbed out of Ash's backpack, wondering why everyone got so quiet. Pikachu's eyes widened when he realised who the man was.

"Pika-pi!!" Pikachu yelled excitedly. He jumped off Ash's shoulder and ran around the lake towards the man.

"Pikachu! Wait!" Ash yelled chasing after Pikachu.

Max, May and Brock followed closely behind him.

Harry looked up and chuckled when he saw a Pikachu running towards him. He noticed that four people were following the Pikachu and figured that the boy with the baseball cap was its trainer.

Suicune raised its head and started growling but toned down a bit when harry gently layed his hand on its head.

"Easy Suicune, their just poke'mon trainers. I can take caer of them if I need to." Harry said to calm the Suicune.

Suicune layed its head back down but was still growling a bit.

Ash finally caught up with Pikachu when he stopped next to the man.

Harry gently petted Pikachu on the head and smiled when the yellow mouse cooed.

"It's nice to meet you Pikachu. I'm sure you've met Mew and Suicune here." Harry said.

Pikachu nodded, turned towards Ashe, and leaped back onto his shoulder. May, Max and Brock were already standing next to Ash.

"Who are you? And is the Mew and Suicune your poke'mon?" Max asked.

"My name is Harry Potter, I'm a Power Lord, and no, the Mew and Suicune aren't exactly my poke'mon. They can still come and go as they please." Harry said smiling.

Max's eyes narrowed with suspicion.

"Max, what's a 'Power Lord'?" Ash asked.

"A Power Lord is someone who can control every single legendary poke'mon and also has all the attacks and abilities of every poke'mon. It's just a myth thought. Some Poke'mon Trainer's around the world dedicate their lives to search for the Power Lord but never found him. If you're really a Power Lord, then use Psychic." Max said.

Harry sighed, "Alright."

Harry stood up from the ground, along with Suicune. Harry's eyes glowed bright green and his right hand glowed the same color. He pointed his hand towards Max and soon Max was covered in the same glow and started to float in mid-air.

"Whoa, okay, okay! I believe you! Can you put me down please?" Max asked.

Harry slowly put Max on the ground. Harry smiled when his eyes dulled back to the original emerald green.

"Well, now that you believe me, I'll take my leave now." Harry said turning around, with Suicune following closely at his heels.

"Wait! Where are you going!?" Ash yelled.

Harry stopped and turned slightly, "It seems to me that this group called Team Rocket is trying to capture Moltres and got him angry. So, I'm going to go there and stop them."

"How are you going to get there?" asked Brock.

"Ah, I have my ways." Harry smiled.

And with that said, Harry, Suicune and Mew vanished.

Well, here's this chapter. Tell me what you think, at least you got a sneak peak of what Harry can do. Don't worry, he'll show a bit more of his powers in the next chapter.

See ya then.
 
love the idea for the story. Pokemon and HP are two of my favorites so I'm loving the combo of the two, but the story could use a bit more description and detail. Also maybe a little more time spent on delevoping and introducing the characters would be cool.

Overall tho I'm liking the premise! Great start!
 
Chapter 4: Team Rocket Blasts off Again!

Ash was still thinking over what had happened yesterday. He asked Max if he could tell him more about Power Lords and was surprised of what he'd learned.

Flashback...
-Early Morning during breakfast-

"Hey Max, can you tell us more of what you know about Power Lords?" Ash asked.

Max quickly swallowed the food that was in his mouth and nodded, "Well, you could say that they're like Poke'mon Trainers but they're the strongest one there is. They really, REALLY care about poke'mon, and hate it when poke'mon are being captured and used like slaves. They can even take away your status as Poke'mon Trainer, if you cross the line."

"Wow, they're really that strong aren't they?" Brock asked really interested of what he's hearing.

"Yeah, so far, there's no written record that any poke'mon trainer, not even a gym leader or one of the elite has ever betten a Power Lord." Max said.

"Wow. When you say it like that, they seem unbeatable." May complimented.

"Yep." Max agreed.

"I wonder what it's like to battle a Power Lord?" Ash wondered.

"Well, maybe you can ask Harry to battle you, when we see him again." Brock suggested.

"Yeah, I'll do that." Ash said.

End Flashback...

Well here they are, walking towards Lilycove City to get supplies, when out of nowhere, a rubber gloved hand came and grabbed Pikachu from his shoulder.

"Pika!!" Pikachu yelled out in panic.

"Pikachu! Hold on buddy!" Ash yelled.

Before Pikachu got to Team Rocket, something sped by and destroyed the metal arm.

"What the-? What happened?" Meowth yelled out.

"How am I supposed to know, it happened to fast." James complained.

"Well, whatever it was, we need to catch it." Jessi said while taking out a poke' bal, "Seviper, I choose you!"

A black serpent came out of the poke' ball. It had two poisonous fangs sticking out its mouth and an even more poisonous blade at the end of its tail, and blood red eyes.

"Seviper!" the serpent poke' mon said.

Ash caught Pikachu before he hit the ground, and released his companion from the rubber gloved machine hand.

"You alright, buddy?" Ash asked.

Pikachu nodded.

"I would like to thank whomever saved you." Ash said. He then heard what sounded like a cross between a wail and a bark and quickly turned around. Ash's eyes widened when he saw two poke' mon that he'd thought he'lll never see again.

"Latios?! Latias?!" Ash yelled.

The two said poke' mon flew toward him and stopped in front of him. Latias flew around him once and let Ash pet her, before moving aside to let her brother get to him.

Latios purred a little when Ash scratch the side of his neck.

"It's great to se you guys, too." Ash smiled.

"So, you do know them." said a voice at his right.

Ash turned quickly and saw the Power Lord standing there with Mew floating next to him.

"I was just visiting Latios and Latias, when I senced a poke' mon was in danger. These two wanted to come and here we are." Harry said. He then turned to Team Rocker and glared.

Jessi and James looked at him in confussion, while Meowth and Seviper recoiled in fear and horror.

"Uh-oh, we're in big trouble, big, BIG, trouble." Meowth said while slowly moving back.

"What do you mean Meowth? He's just an ordinary poke' mon trainer." Jessi said.

"Calling him ordinary is an insult to him. The reason why I'm scared is because he's the Power Lord!" Meowth yelled.

Jessi and James's eye widened when they heard that. Then their eyes filled with greed and smirked.

"Seviper, forget Pikachu, use Poison Tail at the Power Lord." Jessi commanded.

Seviper sent a quick apologic look towards Harry and leapt at him with his tail ready to strike.

"Don't leave me out of this, Cacnia use Needle Arm!" James yelled out throwing his poke' ball.

Cacnia came out, but instead of attacking Harry, he turns around and attacks James instead.

"Not me, the Power Lord!" James whined.

Harry quickly dodged Seviper's attack and tackled him with his side. He also dodged Cacnia's Needle Arm. He then made a fist and pointed it towards the two poke' mon. A stream of fire started to form around his arm and grew larger and larger. When it got large enough, Harry shot a powerful Fire Spin attack toward the two poke' mon, and they both shot into the trees when they were hit.

Jessi, James and Meowth looked at him with shock, while Ash, Pikachu, Max, May and Brock watched him with awe.

Harry then lowered his arm and turned back towards Team Rocket.

"Now, what am I going to do with you?" Harry asked out loud.

Jessi, James and Meowth quickly turned and ran down the path.

Before they could get far enough, Harry shot another Fire Spin towards them and sent them flying.

"Team Rocket is blasting off again!!" They yelled, and then they were gone.

"Well, they're taken care of, for now anyways." Harry said.

"How do you know that their going to do something again?" Brock asked.

"I have Espeon's ability to see glimpses of what's going to happen in the future, so I'll be ready." he face towards Ash, "Is your Pikachu alright?"

"Yeah, he's fine. Thank you for saving him." Ash said with a smile.

"Let me guess, that Pikachu was your first poke' mon." Harry said.

"Yeah, but how'd you know?" Ash asked.

"I can see that you care dearly for him. Well, I should be on my way." Harry said walking away.

"Wait, can you travel with us for awhile?" Max asked with a pleading look.

Harry stopped and thought about it, "Alright. I'll come. Latios... Latias, you two can go on and head home, 'kay."

The two poke' mon nodded, said good-bye to everyone and flew off back home.

Meanwhile, someone was watching them from their hideout through the hidden camera in the nearby tree.

The person was the one and only Giovanni.

Giovanni smirked evilly and continued to watch the group while petting the Persian that way lying on the floor next to him.

"Well, who would've thought that a Power Lord would be back in this world. I need to come up with some way to get him under my control." Giovanni grinned.

He then chuckled softly which then change to an evil laugh.

Uh-oh, the Team Rocket leader is starting to gain interest in Harry. I'm already finished writing chapter 7, so I'm going to stop writing until I get that chapter updated.

Well, hope you liked the story thus far. Also, there goes another one of Harry's attacks that he can use.

Tell me what you think, 'kay?
 
Well, all this is really so-so IMO.

First of all, Harry is way of character. I'm a very big fan of HP and you're kinda... butchering his character. You think you're making him more badass but you're actually turning him into a Merry Sue (or a Gary since he's male). He can use Pokemon attacks, has enormous power, the rules bend for him... yup, he scores high on the Sue test.

And you need to add more description and character development. Yes, we all know who Harry, Ash and the gang are, but you can't leave it at this. They need growth as characters. And they seem kinda bland to me as they are now. Aside from a few mistakes, your grammar is fine tho.

Also, your fic seems to have the fundamental problem of all crossovers- why does it happen. Okay, Harry gets new kickass powers, he suddenly knows everything about Pokemon and travels to the Pokeverse. Okay, two questions:

Question numer one: why?

Question number two: how?
 
Well, all this is really so-so IMO.

First of all, Harry is way of character. I'm a very big fan of HP and you're kinda... butchering his character. You think you're making him more badass but you're actually turning him into a Merry Sue (or a Gary since he's male). He can use Pokemon attacks, has enormous power, the rules bend for him... yup, he scores high on the Sue test.

And you need to add more description and character development. Yes, we all know who Harry, Ash and the gang are, but you can't leave it at this. They need growth as characters. And they seem kinda bland to me as they are now. Aside from a few mistakes, your grammar is fine tho.

Also, your fic seems to have the fundamental problem of all crossovers- why does it happen. Okay, Harry gets new kickass powers, he suddenly knows everything about Pokemon and travels to the Pokeverse. Okay, two questions:

Question numer one: why?

Question number two: how?

I agree with this.

The idea of combining Harry Potter and Pokemon is cool. Although, I'm not sure how special and wondrous pokemon would seem to wizards who deal with basalisks, goblins, and the rest of the magical creatures in their own world. But in any case, I like the idea.

I would echo Aladar's point about character development and just overall description of what's going on besides just quotes and one-sentence fillers.

Just improve the amount of detail in this story and I think it'll be great! Will look forward to the next chapter!
 
Chapter 5: Mayhem at Hogwarts

Ever since Harry Potter has vanished from Hogwarts, people were starting to give up home of ever winning against the Dark Lord.

Innocent bystanders were getting killed left and right in both wizarding and muggle worlds. Snape got killed by Voldemort when he got caught being a spy, and Lucius and Narcissa took his place.

Right now, everyone was at the headquarters having an Order meeting.

"Lucius, have you found out when the Dark Lord will have his next attack?" Dumbledor asked.

"Not yet Headmaster, right now, he's still trying to figure out where Potter had gone and how he's going to get to him." Lucius answered.

"Speaking of Mr. Potter, Remus... Miss Granger, have any of you found any way to get to him?" asked Dumbledore.

"Yes we have, we finally did. It took us a long time to trace his magic, but we've managed it. He's in a dimension that's filled with many creatures called Poke' mon. There's muggles that live there, and they can capture a small few of these creatures and use them in battle. Now, in Harry's situation, he can control all of these creature's anytime he wants." Hermione explained.

"What about those two creatures that we've found him with? What did he call them... err... Mew and Mewtwo?" McGonagul asked.

Remus decided to explain this, "Well, the muggles that live in this world call them 'legendary poke' mon'. The reason being is because there's only one of each of them."

"How many legendary poke' mon are there?" Moody asked.

(a/n: Okay before Remus answers, I'm not going to include Dialga and Palkia or any other legendary from Sinnoh 'kay. Well, back to the story, enjoy.)

"There's 21 of them, total from three different regions. They call them: Kento, Johto and Hoen. Each one is unique in their own way." Remus said.

"So, how are we going to get to this dimension?" Arthur asked.

"We just need to conjure a strong enough portal, that will last long enough for all of us to get through. Oh, and we also have to becareful about using our magic. Even though we're just using it in defence, there's some poke' mon there that are resistant to magic." explained Hermione.

"Well, let's get started on this portal shall we." Dumbledore said while getting up. Everyone followed him back to Hogwarts and to his office.

-Back in the Poke' mon World-

"Hey Harry, can you help me train my poke' mon for my next gym battle?" Ash asked.

"I don't know Ash." Harry started.

"PLEASE, say yes Harry, please. I would like to see how you use your other attacks." Max interrupted, he put on his best baby Growlithe look.

Harry sighed, "Alright, I'll battle you. Mew, I want you to stay out of the way, 'cause I don't want you to get hurt."

Mew nodded and stayed with Max.

Harry stood on the opposite side of Ash, "Choose your poke'mon, Ash. Choose the right one." Harry warned.

Ash nodded and unhooked a poke'ball from his belt.

"I choose you, Sceptile!" Ash said while throwing the poke'ball into the air.

Sceptile shot into the air, did a cartwheel and then landed on the ground. Sceptile took one look at Harry and bowed down on one knee towards him.

Harry just smiled gently, "Rise Sceptile. You don't need to bow everytime you see me."

Sceptile nodded and stood up. He then realised why he was called out and looked at Harry with a hit of fear in his eyes.

"It's okay, Sceptile. Just for now, in this battle, don't think of me as a Power Lord, think of me as you would any opponent. Alright?" Harry said, "Give me everythine you've got at your fullest."

Sceptile nodded and took his battle stance.

"Ready Sceptile!" Ash askeds, who was still trying to shake off the shock of seeing the interaction between his poke'mon and the Power Lord. He should expect to see the high respect all poke'mon hold for the Power Lord, but it still surprises him.

"Sceptile!" Sceptile yelled in agreement.

"Alright, Sceptile use Bullet Seed!" Ash yelled.

Sceptile leapt into the air and thousands of seeds shot out of his mouth towards Harry.

Harry quickly dodged the attack and then used Double-Team. Surrounding Sceptile in a full circle.

While Harry was battling, he never took notice that he was being watched.

A camera that was camophlaged in leaves was watching his everymove. Giovanni was at the other end watching. (Now, before I continue, I just want to warn you. If you don't like yaoi(guy/guy) at all, then stop reading the story. There isn't going to be any major yaoi, so you don't have to worry.)

While his obsession for the Power Lord to be in his control increased, he started to take notice of the beauty that the Power Lord had.

Ebony black hair that moved gracefully as he moved, and how it brought out the emerald in his green eyes. The small nose that fitted perfectly on his face and the soft red lips that often smiled gently towards those he called friend.

Oh, and how Giovanni wanted to touch the Power Lord's skin, to prove that it felt as soft as it looked. He grinned when he finally came up with a way to get the Power Lord into his clutches.

Giovanni stood up and walked out of his office door, followed closely by his beloved Persian. He walked down the many hallways, 'til he got to the destination he was going to. He opened the door that had a fire symbol on it.

Sitting in the leather chair in front of him, just happend to be the Team Magma leader, Marcie.

Marcie looked up at Giovanni and gave him a questioned look.

Giovanni just grinned, "I would like to make a preposition and a favor of you."
 
Great effort, mate. Please work on making the HP characters a little more accurate. You can do this by simply adding more details and descriptive words while talking about them.

Don't simply write what they say (quotes), but also tell the reader what they are doing and show how they are feeling. It will go a long way!
 
I LOVE harry potter(if you don't believe me, I read the latest one in 2 days). First and formost, I really don't agree with crossing something realistic-looking like Harry Potter or Twilight with pokemon, but, hey, your story. I really can imagine what harry would look like animated. You do give a description, but I need more details. So MORE DESCRIPTION!

Also, you never say exactly how Harry gets his powers. Did he just sit there at midnight and get it? I mean, really? This screams Uber Mary Sue. Your killing Harry for who he is. What about Voldemort? When is this taking place as far as the Harry Potter book? It most likely is before book six. Dumbledor isn't dead yet. And Snape doesn't die till the last book. UNLESS you are talking about Dumbledor in his picture frame. Everyone is completely out of character except Ash. And May and Brock aren't getting any attention, despite you mentioning them.

You also have numerous grammatical and spelling errors. I'd say that you need some proofreading.

I am not trying to be mean. I just am expressing my god given right to state my mind AND I am trying to help you get better. I may now be on your hate list, and that does not bother me one bit. Will be checking in every once and awhile.
~TGM
 
It's good so far; definitely better than most of what I've seen, but it does need work. There are spelling errors and the dialogue is kind of choppy still. For the speaking parts, try saying them out loud; alone of course (wouldn't want anyone to think us authors insane...) if it doesn't sound right, then there is most likely something wrong with the grammar or the way the person speaks. And no, yaoi doesn't bother me. *hides nosebleed*
 
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