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TEEN: - Ongoing Princess Raredy 7 to 25; The Ponytale of a Purely Innocent Girl.

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WARNING!!! I may rate this as Teen, because some teenager and possably young adult issues might crop up in later chaptors. I may edit the story title with that when nessasary. :) It might only be the first 2 chaptors that are 'kid friendly', possably. i'm not sure where i'll be going with this, though...

Yeah, strange, random idea...:zzz: But I came up with this from the top of my head. It's reminisent to a girl I once knew, and this story will possably blow your mind...

By the way; This is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction. If you do not like that cartoon, you probably won't like to read this. Personally I find the show awesomely entertaining...

Writen from the young girl's perspective; Thus, she spelled 'Rarity' wrong. It's spelled 'Raredy', instead. Since the girl had spelling issues...

Now to begin the story.:kiss:

I do NOT own My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Lauren Faust does. I only own Princess Raredy 7 to 25.

I'll edit this post with the prolog soon, but I kind of need to switch computers first..so hang tight, fans. This story will blow you world.:cool: Some way or another...

~Pachibakfoon~

Feel free to comment as you wait~:look::unworthy:

And, no; She isn't an 'ordenary girl' by the least. Not how you would see one, anyways. Either way, this story may change how you see 'ordenary little girls' COMPLETELY...possably for the rest of your life.

You have been warned... ....beautifully warned, that is. :)

Here come's Chaptor one!!! :D;
Chaptor 1; The Prolog; A dream?;

It was all so...so clear. Light...it shone everywhere, every corner. Flower petals fell from the sky, reaching the ground, joining together and then turning into huge, giant, beautiful flowers of so many colors that just soothed the soul. Children laughed, but not maliciously. They joined hands, and, then, danced around in a circle. Girls and boys as well. All joyous, all...peaceful. All friends. Flower petals fall on them, and they continue to smile..nothing was sad in the beautiful world...was this, prehaps, heaven?...possably....

Feel free to tell me what you think so far. :)
 
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Chaptor 2: It's a new day :) (i'm sorry if this is poorly writen; i don't practice fanfiction that much, i guess...)

"Yawwwn!" A young girl wake's up. She has long, purple, curled up hair, and, a white dress with diamonds on one side. And a golden-colored headband/tiara with a white unicorn horn. Her name is Princess Raredy 7-25, because she cannot spell Rarity, and, this is her story...Also, i'll be calling her 'Raredy' for short. Don't confuse this with Rarity now! Remember the intended misspelling ;)


"What a strange dream.." The girl stated. She always had that same dream; A land of eternal, flowering medows, no violence, no anger, none of that. Only peace and happiness. Yet she felt sad inside. She didn't want to think about it, and, carefully brushed her hair in front of a mirror. She stared into the mirror, questioning 'why' she was brushing her hair, what she feel's day-by-day. All she knew was this; Somehow, she was following her own path. And not a path like any other human being, though she's more of a human being that may possably have magical powers. And how true it would be how different she is as time would fly by...

Life in Canterlott sure felt beautiful. Why couldn't the other ponies be here with her? What could they of done wrong to not be able to be around thios beauty? If only she knew...

So, she is rode to Ponyvile by charriot to see her pony friends. Finally! They are in ponyvile!

Now, Raredy is going outside to great the ponies. Starting with Fluttershy, since she found her closeness to animals fasanating. She always seemed to get along best with Fluttershy...And while Rarity found her sweet, there was a clash between them that couldn't be explained, even though, maybe, it wasn't so bad (afterall; what could possably be wrong with Rarity, right?). Princess Raredy didn't understand this 'clash', though. What was it that made her so...different?....

"Hi, Raredy!" Said Fluttershy...shyly. "I see your deep in thought..."

"I...I'll be okay. :)" The little girl replyed. "I just...keep on having..that dream...."

"Hmn.." Fluttershy tried to think for a moment. Then, Rainbow Dash flew by, splashing mud on Princess Raredy 7-25's beautiful dress. "Oops! Sorry hahaha" Said Rainbow Dash with a grin. Raredy couldn't understand why Rainbow Dash would do something so mean as to splash mud on her dress! Was it she didn't respect the beauty, the charm, the bright, shinningness that was Princess Raredy 7-25? Then, she started to...cry...

"Why would she ruin my beauty like that?...Fluttershy, why would she do it?" She asked her best friend with a face full of tears. "I only wanted to shine in this world...like the flowers...."

"I'm sure... she ment no harm...." Said Fluttershy, though slightly unsure. "She's just...Rainbow Dash. I'm sure she was just playing around or something :)" But Raredy still didn't understand. She'd never understand, but little did she know that some people only used beauty for popularity and control over others. Princess Raredy 7-25 wasn't like that. She just wanted to be a shinning light...that brought love to all. She never mean's to be vain. But why would others want to use beauty for such reasons unheard of to such a kind hearted girl?...

Raredy wonder's off throughout ponyvile, and find's Pinkie Pie. She thought Pinkie Pie was great cause all she wanted to do was smile and have fun. Everyone love's fun, right?..so she goes over and smile's to her.

"Pinkie Pie..." She spoke softly. "Do you like my dress?...it got mud on it, though...I may have to take a bath, or change my clothes. But I feel sad right now..." She sighed.

"Just relax and have a PARTY with me!" Pinkie Pie cheered with a huge grin. "True beauty only run's skin deep! Try to spread some joy from within!"

Raredy liked this idea. Still, she wasn't sure what the difference was between 'inner' beauty and 'outer' beauty, because don't the eyes matter, too?..but no matter; making others laugh is a good idea. Little did she know, some ponies may not like the noise of parties....




Anyways...yeah...that's all I could think of for now. Post if you found the story interesting, I guess. Sorry about the double post; I didn't want to see this on the second page...o_o;

~pachubakfoon~ ^_^

I don't have anything agenst Rarity. I only seen that she want's fame, sometimes, but, she still seem's nice. :)

Confession, really, is the girl in this story is based off... ....me. And the confusion I face day by day due to my... autism?......keep reading if your interested in how I feel about the world and stuff. Try not to get too...scared now....
 
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