Rate my D/P team please..

[infernape96]

My team..for 6 on 6 single battle with a few friends
Infernape
Item:Charcoal
Moves:Shadow Claw,Flamethrower,Focus Blast,Grass Knot
EVs Just Spd and Sp. Attack

Electivire
Item: Magnet
Moves:Thunder Punch, Fire Punch, Giga Impact, either Brick Break or Low kick.
Evs Spd and Attack

Togekiss
Item: Razor fang
Moves: Air Slash, Aura Sphere, Flamethrower, either Shock Wave or Psychic
EVs Sp. Attack and Sp. Def

Metagross
Item: Not sure yet
Moves: Meteor Mash, Zen Headbutt, Earthquake, Hammer Arm
Evs Attack and probably Sp. Defense

Gallade
Item: Not sure yet
Moves: Thunder Bolt, Close Combat, Drain Punch, Psycho Cut
Evs Attack and Speed

and as for the last one I'm debating on...
Dragonair
Item: the berry that weakens Ice type moves or Persim Berry
Moves:Outrage, Waterfall, Fly, and Fire Punch
Evs HP and Attack or Attack and Speed

OORRR..

Shuckle as a survivor..
Item:
Moves: Withdraw, Bide, Rest, and Earthquake
Evs Defense and HP

Please rate my team..if you see that my team really needs some work than say it. If you want to suggest moves or natures or whatever that'd be great!! Just don't leave any rude comments as I am new to EV Training and strategies and stuff like that...

 

[King Eriandor]

I like....
just a few suggestions. going from top to bottom:

Infernape: Nice hard-hitter, Infernape, like blaziken, work best as suicide fighters that deal tonnes of damage in short amounts os time. a close-combat would be better than focus blast because infernape have mutch MUTCH higher Atk than Spatk naturally. For the same reasons a flare blitz would work better than flame thrower. I know it sounds risky but it's better to suicide bomb than to be bombed.

Electivire: pretty good all round but an earthquake somewhere would rase his chances.

Togekiss: in one word Solarbeam.

Metagross: Perfect!

Gallade: relpace thunderbolt (it's one word) with a leaf blade. Gallade has very little sp.attack

Finally shuckle (not Dragonite): once it reaches lv48 it can learn power trick which makes it THE MOST POWERFUL OFFENSIVE POKEMON!!!! of course it leaves it's defences wide open. keep rest because it's halarious to look at your opponent's face once he/she goes through all that work to cut down a shuckle's HP.

Hope this helps!

 

[infernape96]

I was thinking the same about Infernape.. However, I was thinking, that with thunder bolt for gallade
I could take out Flying types who dont normally have great Sp. Defences

 

[jaamoon]

My team..for 6 on 6 single battle with a few friends
Infernape Jolly
Item:Life Orb
Moves:U-Turn,Flare Blitz,Close Combat,Stone edge
EVs Just Spd and Attack

Electivire Jolly
Item: Expert Belt
Moves:Thunder Punch, Fire Punch, Ice Punch, Earthquake.
Evs Spd and Attack

Togekiss Bold or Calm
Item: Leftovers
Moves: Air Slash, Aura Sphere, Roost, ThunderWave
EVs Hp and Defense

Metagross Jolly
Item: Choise Scarf
Moves: Meteor Mash, Zen Headbutt, Earthquake, Hammer Arm
Evs Attack and Speed

Gallade Jolly
Item: Choise Band
Moves: Ice Punch, Close Combat or Drain Punch, Psycho Cut, Trick
Evs Attack and Speed

Dragonite Adamant
Item: Lum Berry
Moves:Outrage, Dragon Dance, Earthquake, and Fire Punch
Evs Attack and Speed

I think so..

 

[jaamoon]

i think you really need a special attacker or two in your team... someone like gengar

 

[King Eriandor]

you were thinking... I'll give you that much.
also Thunderbolt is 1 word.
jaamoon does make a good point though, an Sp attacker would be good.

on the other hand jaamoon, an ice punch with electivire is too weak and kind of ruins his power, same thing with a U-turn for infernape.
ice punch for gallade is a good idea though (can he larn that...?) I deny all of Jaamoon's changes to metagross except for jolly. and forget dragonite you already have a pseudo-legendary. Replace both dragonite and shuckle for a special attacker like porygon-Z.

 

[King Eriandor]

username: infernape96
lead pokemon: infernape

username: shadowblaziken
lead pokemon: Gigalith

something is wrong with this picture...

 

[infernape96]

Hmmm I saw the special attack thing as a problem to but, I tried to solve it with togekiss. And instead of having Infernape as a physical attacker(like everyone expects it to be) I thought I should make it a special attacker..But I see were you going with that..as for the thunderbolt spelling thing I guess it's just a bad habit..

 

[King Eriandor]

I was making a joke (although a bad one)

your name is infernape and you use infernape
my name is blaziken yet I use gigalith... okay it's not funny.

 

[jaamoon]

you were thinking... I'll give you that much.
also Thunderbolt is 1 word.
jaamoon does make a good point though, an Sp attacker would be good.

on the other hand jaamoon, an ice punch with electivire is too weak and kind of ruins his power, same thing with a U-turn for infernape.
ice punch for gallade is a good idea though (can he larn that...?) I deny all of Jaamoon's changes to metagross except for jolly. and forget dragonite you already have a pseudo-legendary. Replace both dragonite and shuckle for a special attacker like porygon-Z.

ice punch is for dragons and Gliscor, i dont see any better cover up move for Electivire.

u-turn on infernape its necessary, for scout and gain momentum , also i think infernape will be the lead on the team..

 

[infernape96]

Youre right Infernape will be and will most surely always be my lead..I have a few questions though..what is a pseudo legendary and, by scouting do you mean checking out an opponents moves??

 

[King Eriandor]

a pseudo legendary is a pokemon who is at - par or more powerfull than certen legendaries namely draonite, tyranatar, salamance, metagross, garchomp, and hydreigon to be a pseudo legend a pokemon must be duel type and have 3 evelutionary stages along with a base power of 600
I beleve by scout he means swich out infernape, see what the opponent uses and prepare yourself.

 

[infernape96]

So I thought about it and the way I see it Infernape is just as good a sp. attacker as it is an attacker.
If my infernape had a modest nature I think it would do great as a special attacker. And I said dragonair in the first post but I meant dragonite..I'm always mixing up there names..

 

[jaamoon]

yep and force the opponent to change ... i think maybe Choise item on Infernape would fits better

 

[King Eriandor]

before you use a choice item think what would happen if the opponent sent out a ghost type after your "Focus Blast (tbd)".

 

[infernape96]

I though choice items only allowed to use one move..

 

[jaamoon]

So I thought about it and the way I see it Infernape is just as good a sp. attacker as it is an attacker.
If my infernape had a modest nature I think it would do great as a special attacker. And I said dragonair in the first post but I meant dragonite..I'm always mixing up there names..

yeah but he have a better physical-based moveset, maybe as a lead you can put stealth rock, flamethrower, focus blast and i dont know, u-turn for the momentum maybe

 

[jaamoon]

before you use a choice item think what would happen if the opponent sent out a ghost type after your "Focus Blast (tbd)".

change pokemon obviously, the same thing if he send out a tentacruel or something like that, we cant cover all pokemons

 

[infernape96]

I might keep Infernape as a special..just because, like you said, I need a special attacker.. as for the shuckle vs dragonair that'll recquire some time to think about...I like the power trick combo..but I'm kind of feeling the outrage and dragon dance combo as well.. If you guys have any other suggestions feel free to post them..Thanks so much for all the tips and advice..I'll definetely take everything you guys have said into account

 

[jaamoon]

I might keep Infernape as a special..just because, like you said, I need a special attacker.. as for the shuckle vs dragonair that'll recquire some time to think about...I like the power trick combo..but I'm kind of feeling the outrage and dragon dance combo as well.. If you guys have any other suggestions feel free to post them..Thanks so much for all the tips and advice..I'll definetely take everything you guys have said into account

I spend too many hours trying to find a good Shuckle's Moveset and i dont... if is dragonite vs shuckle, there's no doubt, but better use other special swepper like Alakazam or Gengar on that slot.