Rate my first team

[infectious_Vendetta]

Hello, I just created this team and it's my first one on a more competitive level then the basic in game teams. I would greatly any constructive criticism and advice.

Infernape Focus Sash
Blaze: "Powers up Fire-type moves in a pinch."
64 Atk / 252 SpA / 192 Spe
Hasty (+Spe / -Def)
~Fake Out
~Stealth Rock
~Fire Blast
~Close Combat

Rotom-W Choice Scarf
Levitate: "Gives full immunity to all Ground-type moves."
252 Spa / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
~Thunderbolt
~Shadow Ball
~Trick
~Hydro Pump

Kingdra Life Orb
Swift Swim: "Boosts the Pokémon's Speed in rain"
208 Atk / 136 SpA / 164 Spe
Rash (+SpA / -SpD)
~Rain Dance
~Waterfall
~Hydro Pump
~Draco Meteor

Gliscor Life Orb
Hyper Cutter: "Prevents the Attack stat from being lowered"
40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe
Jolly (+Spe / -SpA
~Swords Dance
~Earthquake
~Night Slash
~Roost

Shaymin Life Orb
Natural Cure: "All status problems are healed upon switching out"
252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 SPE
Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
~Seed Flare
~Earth Power
~Hidden Power Fire
~Leech Seed

Drapion @Life Orb
Battle Armor: "The Pokémon is protected against critical hits"
252 Atk / 4 Hp / 252 Spe
Jolly (+Spe / - SpA)
~Swords Dance
~Crunch
~Earthquake
~Aqua Tail

 

[AshK]

Hello, I just created this team and it's my first one on a more competitive level then the basic in game teams. I would greatly any constructive criticism and advice.

Infernape Focus Sash
Blaze: "Powers up Fire-type moves in a pinch."
64 Atk / 252 SpA / 192 Spe
Hasty (+Spe / -Def)
~Fake Out
~Stealth Rock
~Fire Blast
~Close Combat

Rotom-W Choice Scarf
Levitate: "Gives full immunity to all Ground-type moves."
252 Spa / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
~Thunderbolt
~Shadow Ball
~Trick
~Hydro Pump

Kingdra Life Orb
Swift Swim: "Boosts the Pokémon's Speed in rain"
208 Atk / 136 SpA / 164 Spe
Rash (+SpA / -SpD)
~Rain Dance
~Waterfall
~Hydro Pump
~Draco Meteor

Gliscor Life Orb
Hyper Cutter: "Prevents the Attack stat from being lowered"
40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe
Jolly (+Spe / -SpA
~Swords Dance
~Earthquake
~Night Slash
~Roost

Shaymin Life Orb
Natural Cure: "All status problems are healed upon switching out"
252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 SPE
Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
~Seed Flare
~Earth Power
~Hidden Power Fire
~Leech Seed

Drapion @Life Orb
Battle Armor: "The Pokémon is protected against critical hits"
252 Atk / 4 Hp / 252 Spe
Jolly (+Spe / - SpA)
~Swords Dance
~Crunch
~Earthquake
~Aqua Tail

Very balanced team with some neat pokes and attacks. Attacks themselves on the pokemon do not all have perfect coverage but one pokemon's problem is another's plaything so you did great there.

It is a hyper offensive team since def. and sp. def. seem to be invested the least. Might I suggest putting in a wall or bulky defensive pokemon in there just so that you can switch it in to sponge attacks? also to spread around status, throw out entry hazards, phaze, maybe explode? whatever suits you best. if you switch pokemon in your battles they are gonna get hurt from big attacks because none have much investment in defense. You could make a more defensive gliscor (you gonna need to find one with poison heal however for best effect), or if not that, then try physical defensive pokemon like gliscor or donphan. Or specially defensive pokemon like eviolite chansey (if gen 5) or blissey. There are plenty more out there.

 

[infectious_Vendetta]

Hello, I just created this team and it's my first one on a more competitive level then the basic in game teams. I would greatly any constructive criticism and advice.

Infernape Focus Sash
Blaze: "Powers up Fire-type moves in a pinch."
64 Atk / 252 SpA / 192 Spe
Hasty (+Spe / -Def)
~Fake Out
~Stealth Rock
~Fire Blast
~Close Combat

Rotom-W Choice Scarf
Levitate: "Gives full immunity to all Ground-type moves."
252 Spa / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
~Thunderbolt
~Shadow Ball
~Trick
~Hydro Pump

Kingdra Life Orb
Swift Swim: "Boosts the Pokémon's Speed in rain"
208 Atk / 136 SpA / 164 Spe
Rash (+SpA / -SpD)
~Rain Dance
~Waterfall
~Hydro Pump
~Draco Meteor

Gliscor Life Orb
Hyper Cutter: "Prevents the Attack stat from being lowered"
40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe
Jolly (+Spe / -SpA
~Swords Dance
~Earthquake
~Night Slash
~Roost

Shaymin Life Orb
Natural Cure: "All status problems are healed upon switching out"
252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 SPE
Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
~Seed Flare
~Earth Power
~Hidden Power Fire
~Leech Seed

Drapion @Life Orb
Battle Armor: "The Pokémon is protected against critical hits"
252 Atk / 4 Hp / 252 Spe
Jolly (+Spe / - SpA)
~Swords Dance
~Crunch
~Earthquake
~Aqua Tail

Very balanced team with some neat pokes and attacks. Attacks themselves on the pokemon do not all have perfect coverage but one pokemon's problem is another's plaything so you did great there.

It is a hyper offensive team since def. and sp. def. seem to be invested the least. Might I suggest putting in a wall or bulky defensive pokemon in there just so that you can switch it in to sponge attacks? also to spread around status, throw out entry hazards, phaze, maybe explode? whatever suits you best. if you switch pokemon in your battles they are gonna get hurt from big attacks because none have much investment in defense. You could make a more defensive gliscor (you gonna need to find one with poison heal however for best effect), or if not that, then try physical defensive pokemon like gliscor or donphan. Or specially defensive pokemon like eviolite chansey (if gen 5) or blissey. There are plenty more out there.

Thank you for your advice. I am definitely going to make a more defensive gliscor and try it out. I will look into having a wall but I must say I don't know much about them and even who would be a good option to take out of my party to replace with a wall. If you have any suggestions on that I would greatly appreciate it, but I will definitely do some research on my own and work on it.