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TEEN: Reds Creed: Pokehood (CHAPTER 1 START; Vs. MissingNO.)

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CHAPTER 1: Vs. MissingNO

Scientists are working on the discovery of a peculiar species of Pokemon dubbed "MissingNO" it is unknown what type of Pokemon this is but the actions of it are pretty suspicious.

"Boss, have we got something on this strange Pokemon?" a scientist asked a woman sitting on a chair facing a screen.

"Nothing yet...I wish we got some more data on this strange Pokemon...go check the charts to see if there is anything" the woman replied sighing.

"Yes, Mam!" the scientist replied running off into another room.

"...What could this thing be?" the woman thought to herself "Whatever it is...its creepy as hell" she said, looking around from the chair for the first time.

"Sazzafrazz" there was a loud,robotic, frizzled noise coming from the chamber MissingNO was held.

"W-what was that?" a scientist stammered.

"NOOOO!" the creature hollered and started banging against the chamber.

"Boss what do we do?" a scientist shouted.

"Leave it...there is nothing we can do at the moment.." the woman sighed.

"B-but" the scientist replied

"LEAVE IT!" the woman shouted angrily at the scientist

"O-okay" the scientist wimpered

"MISSINGNO!!!" shouted the creature finally breaking out the chamber "N-no." it shouted and started wreaking havoc around the laboratory.

The creature managed to smash against the wall creating a giant hole in the side of the laboratory, MissingNO had escaped and started destroying the entire area of Chicole Town.

"Somebody help us!" a man screamed holding onto a tree that was set on fire.

"Please!, for the children!" a woman screamed whilst her 2 young children clinged to both of her legs.

"God dammit!, we are all gonna die!" A Gym Leader shouted from the room of a gym.

"...Why must I do everything?" there was a voice from the sky.

"W-Who was that?" the woman from the lab stammered

"...This should be easy" said a voice flying down on his Charizard "Snorlax, Lapras, Ivysaur, Blastoise and Pikachu, come on out!" the figure said throwing out his pokemon from their pokeballs "Snorlax first!, use Shadow Ball!" the figure shouted as his Snorlax charged up a Shadow Ball with its palms.

"Mis-Missing?" the figure looked confused, using what seemed to be mimic.

"SNORLAX!" Snorlax shouted letting off the Shadow ball.

"MISSINGNO!" MissingNO had used mimic and fired a bigger, more powerful Shadow Ball from its mouth.

"Snore!!" Snorlax shouted, getting completly knocked out by the Snorlax, showing a big cut with blood streaming out on his chest.

"D-damn it" the figure muttered as the MissingNO seemed to be laughing ready to attack at any time "I-if were going to do this we are going to have to attack all at once, minus Snorlax" Red then added.

MissingNO started floating around killing thousands in Chicole Town, Woman and Children WERE NOT SPARED, MissingNO then head for the village elder's house, the Village Elder was now aged 122 and had no strength to fight back.

"Stay away from the Village Elders house!" the figure (im sick of calling him figure, lets call him Red from now on) shouted angry.

"MissingNo" the MissingNO said in its frazzled, robotic voice charging up a Sheer Cold heading for the Village Elders house.

"Guys!, we need to attack now!" Red shouted at his Pokemon, but it was too late..the Village Elder's house was destroyed with the Village Elder in it "...You monster!" Red shouted at MissingNO.

"No-No-No-No" MissingNO just laughed at Red and the Deep Frozen house.

"You killed my Father...VENUSAUR USE FRENZY PLANT!, LAPRAS USE BLIZZARD!, BLASTOISE USE HYDRO CANNON!, CHARIZARD USE DRAGON PULSE! AND PIKACHU USE THUNDERBOLT!" Red screamed,shouting demands at his Pokemon hoping it would be enough.

"Pfft, No" MissingNO just laughed at them and tried to use Mimic.

Snorlax immediantly got up at that point and used Shadow Ball.

"MissingNO?" MissingNO looked confused and got hit with them all, evapourated within seconds.

Snorlax still had the gash on his chest and it got worse. Snorlax looked at Red and just simply said "...Lax", Snorlax then lay on the ground, not moving...Dead.

"...Snorlax..." Red sobbed running over to Snorlax "Dont die buddy!, no! dont die!!!" Red just started crying on Snorlax's stomach.

"He saved us!" people shouted coming out of their homes.

"LEAVE ME!" Red just shouted at then pushing his hands up at them, the crowd then realised Red's brave Snorlax had died.

(M'kay this took for AGES.)

UPCOMING CHAPTER; Chapter 2: Funeral for a fiend...Or not?
 
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Pretty good! Great job! I can't wait to see what happens next!

But, why was Red's Snorlax affected by the mimic Shadow Ball?
 
Ok, make it a little longer, improve on grammar and write in paragraphs, but otherwise this looks to be an interesting story.

By paragraphs, I mean:
"LEAVE ME!" Red screamed at the growing crowd, throwing his hands up at them in a move away gesture. The crowd stopped in their tracks, unsure of Red's outburst. Then, they saw the grim truth and backed away in respect of the trainer. They had realised Snorlax had passed.

Like that.
 
Re: Reds Creed: Pokehood(UP COMING CHAPTER; Funeral for a fiend...or not?)

New chapter up soon.
 
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