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Remember me (Ikarishipping PG)

Midnightmoon602

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Okay it has been awhile since i posted a fan fic here so here it is. this is my first Ikarishipping fic so if you find something weird just tell me okay? allright here is my fanfic.

Oh yeah the shippings that will be in this fic are
Ikarishipping
Advanceshipping


Okay now to the fic!

Remember me​
A Ikarishipping chapter fic

How does it feel to lose the only thing precious to you? The only thing that makes you wake up each morning and the last thing you see before you close your eyes? Even worse that the only one you loved in your life is now gone from you and their feelings are gone…like dust. Like nothing even happened.

Chapter one
A New beginning

He hears the passing of objects in front of him. He feels the rushing of people trying to save other people from death itself. Sitting there waiting for someone to save him. The most important person in his life is now holding onto life and here he is. Useless and waiting. Waiting that good news would be there to greet him. His hands together gripping each other. His face looking at the clear white tiles. To clear that he could see his own worried face. He never act like this to anybody in his entire life. Then he heared the opening of the emergency room. A man in a long white coat was there to greet him.

“Are you Paul?” he asked.
“That is me” the young boy replied as he got off his seat. “Is she…okay?”
“She is fine” the doctor replied.
“May I…see her?” he asked in a slightly soft tone of voice.
“You May” the doctor replied to the young pokemon trainer. “I will show you where she is”

The two started to walk down the crowed hallway. There were nurses and doctors running between them. There were carts with badly injured patients on bored them with their family by their side. Soon they both reached their destination. The doctor opened the teal door for the young boy. When the door was big enough to let a person though Paul walked himself in. he saw his only precious possession in her bed with her eyes closed shut. Her bandage wrapped around her navy blue hair. Paul walked up to her and brushed her hair behind her eye. Then he kissed her on her forehead hoping that the sleeping beauty wouldn’t wake up from her sleep.

Paul looked back and saw two of her dearest friends where there. His own rival Ash was there with his own girlfriend May was there. The young brunette had her hands over her mouth in shock. Shocked to see her own best friend in such a critical condition. Ash had the same shocked expression as his girlfriend. As they both walked there Paul could see May’s legs trembling in shock. Ash was even holding her as she walked to her best friends side.

“D…Dawn” the young coordinator was as she collapsed her arms around the unconscious bluenette. “What happen to her” she asked the two young men as they watched May still hugging her best friend.
“They told me that she is in a critical condition after the crash” Paul replied as he put his hand on top of the bluenette.

Then out of nowhere the young bluenette’s eyes started to flick a few times before opening them completely. She looked around her with no expression at all. Like she didn’t knew the friends in front of her. Her friends on the other hand had huge smiles across their own faces. They were so glad to know that their dear old friend was awake. Still there was no word coming out from the young coordinator’s mouth.

“Dawn?” Ash asked. “You okay?”
“Dawn?” the young girl replied. “Who is Dawn?” she asked the three.

They felt like they broke like glass. They could still here the echoing of glass breaking in their ears still.

“She…she forgot her own name” May gasped.
“That’s mean…” Ash said in shock.
“She can’t have” Paul thought. “Dawn do you remember me?” Paul called out to her.

Dawn looked at Paul with blank eyes. She blinked a few times. The word clueless was written all over her face.

“Who are you exactly?” Dawn asked.

“Who are you exactly?” Where the words echoing in the young boy’s ear. With so much shock he took his hand away from Dawn’s. He couldn’t believe what he had heard. Even he was deaf he could tell what she said. Paul was shaking in what he had heard.

“If she forgotten about me then she has forgotten how she felt for me” Paul said in his mind. “No!” Paul mumbled under his own breath. “Please tell me I’m lying” Paul told himself.

Paul’s fist was clenched with anger. Angry to know the truth.

May looked over her shoulder and saw Paul with his eyes widen. She knew why this was happening and why this was happening.

He already knew.

May looked over to her boyfriend who was at the other end of Dawn’s bed. She looked at his and Ash replied with a nod. May walked over to Paul and put her arms around the young pokemon trainer. Paul was shocked to even get hugged by a girl other than Dawn.

“Everything will be fine” the young brunette said as she stopped hugging Paul. “There is still hope”

That made Paul lift his sprit up. His sprit that was already in to much pain. He looked at Dawn and Dawn did the same. But it didn’t have that spark like the first time they did. It was like a new completely Dawn he was looking at. Her eyes could tell her that her feelings for him where gone. Down the drain.

Gone. Missing. Died. Lost.

Whatever you called it they all meant the same. Her feelings for him where gone and it was too late to do anything about it.

The young boy couldn’t stay any longer in a place where you were called a stranger. Paul started to take a few steps out her door. Without looking back. While his friends Ash and May where left with Dawn.

Meanwhile Dawn watched Paul walk out her room. She looked at the two. Even her best friends she couldn’t remember.

“May I ask something?” Dawn asked.
“Go ahead Dawn”
“Who are you two?”

May sifted her eyes away from Dawn while Ash who was sitting down next to her on a chair put head on his knees with his arms covering. Now they had the same look and feeling like Paul. May looked back at her best friend.

“Can’t you remember anything at all?” May asked. Hoping a positive answer would be there to greet her.
“I’m really sorry but I don’t”
“It like starting life all over again” Ash mumbled as he got off his chair and sat next to Dawn. “Well my name is Ash Ketchum and this is my girlfriend May Maple and your name is Dawn Berlitz. The that boy that you just saw walking out of your room was Paul. Your boyfriend”
“My…boyfriend? But I don’t remember him at all yet have any feelings for him!” Dawn called out.
“Imagine the pain he is going though” May said to herself. “The only person you love has completely forgotten you”

Dawn heard these words and looked into the hallway and saw her suppose boyfriend leaning on the wall with his hands in his pockets and one of his foot pressing against the wall. With a glare of nothing to care about. A reaction of remembrance came back into her mind.

“I do remember him” Dawn said. “He is Ash’s rival”
The joy that the two had quickly sunk to the bottom of the sea.
“I wish she could say that he was her boyfriend and not my rival” Ash replied with a sigh.
“It is a start Ash” May said as she put her hand on top of the young boy’s.
Ash replied with a smile. He was glad that she was here with him.
“I’m glad that you are here with me” Ash said as they intertwined their fingers. “I don’t know what I would do without you”
“Many things Ash” May smiled.

As Dawn saw this she felt a string of uncertainly go though her veins. She felt uncomfortable near the two. Like she didn’t like May near Ash. Then she looked at Paul. He was still there. Looking at her. She really didn’t like anybody sad and alone.

“Paul!” she called out to the young pokemon trainer. “Come join us!” Dawn called out once more with a smile.

With that smile it gave Paul hope. For the first time since she awoken that smile gave that spark she once had.

“Maybe…Maybe it’s not too late”

End of Chapter one
 
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Hmm...

With a ship like that, there has to be some hook. As it stands right now, Paul is massively out of character, so I really hope there's going to be something that shows why he changed so much from the rampaging, self-centered prick we know from the episodes to a caring boyfriend.
 
So you've posted this fic.
Well, I think it's decent so far. It's coming along cooly.
 
Promblem.

I was half asleep when i was writting this so when i woke up and went here i just went.

"Did i really write this?"

But i think i will rewrite it. i missed out a few scenes.
 
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