Sweet Veil
Bright Days
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Hello, my first attempt at writing a fanfiction was "Opelucid's Investments" my current and only fanfiction. It's a fanfiction based on the character of Iris from Pokemon Black and White. Some of you might not know but a new feature called the "Memory Link" was introduced and gave some pretty nicely expanded back story on her character. Explaining she is not indeed from Unova but from a far, far, far away place and was brought to Unova by Drayden. Well, that actually sounds like a more interesting back story now that I think about it. Not to mention it ties in nicely with all of the story I've planned out so far for Iris, and I came into Opelucid's Investment's as a complete rookie when it came to writing stories, grammar, pacing, description, being my worst traits and I've somewhat sharpened up on these flaws. So, I sorta think a restart where I could really do justice to her character with this expanded backstory as well as bettered writing in myself could be interesting. Not to mention I would terminate several points in the story that were fairly useless as well as it would help fix this "writing as I go along" feel, I feel my story has. My question is do you think it would be a good idea? Is it worth it? Because I know others like Legacy and Tsutarja have done restarts on their stories before, so I was curious about the possible idea. I have the plot blueprinted out to the near-end of the BW storyline. I also wanna change things, while the story will primarily be about Iris. It just isn't her story anymore, it will also be Drayden's in a way. Criticisms? Thoughts?
@Chiplet;
@Soulmaster;
@Human;
@Tsutarja;
Since you're the only four people I have on my tag list, I was curious what you thought about it? Would you read it if it was a restart?
Also, I was curious what you guys think of restarts in-general?
@Chiplet;
@Soulmaster;
@Human;
@Tsutarja;
Since you're the only four people I have on my tag list, I was curious what you thought about it? Would you read it if it was a restart?
Also, I was curious what you guys think of restarts in-general?
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