EVERYONE: - Ongoing Rising of the Manus Custos’s Sun

[mythion251]

Pokemon Generation 13: Rising of the Manus Mythion ’s Sun

Book1: The Summer of Notus wind

Pokemon Generation 13: Rising of the Manus Mythion ’s Sun

Book1: The Summer of Notus wind

Prologue: The attack of the nightmarish men

In the world of Pokemon, their lives hundreds of amazing animal families, they are then divided in “Clans” or “Types”. Though there are different kinds of creatures that are part of two different types. Then there are Pokemon that go past the limits of normal, these ones though are sometimes hunted for their rarity or power. These kinds of species are called legendaries but, in the Mythion region, they were known to be Gods. Though, gods are hard to can be sealed, you just have to find a way. The gods once had an evil member among them, Erebus, a creature of chaotic powers. She once had a true body, yet it vanished as she became a monster who posses the weak and her servants known as the golycna who bear a curse. For the first to bear it is immortal and when passed on onto the next generation, it weakens and is invective. Some say that Erebus was once good, but now only thing to stop her evil schemes, are the Manus Curtos clan. This clan can control the power of the gods and help balance nature by communicating with it.

The wet, summer day seemed boring to two people, Chris and Lisa Kessler, though it had then begun to rain. Christopher was a tall lean 11 year-old with light blue eyes and short, dirty blonde hair with a black shirt, orange jacket, blue jeans, a red pair of snickers and a orange cap. His sister, Lisa, was of the hair and eyes, though her hair was longer. Her outfit consisted of a pink miniskirt, a green top, a white pair of sneakers and a white hat. It felt like any other Saturday morning to them, dull and boring, as they would help out their parents or grandparents with their careers.

Chris then heard something rustling in the bushes as he was walking to his grandfather’s house with his sister. He then ran to the grassy blueberry bush in the pouring rain as he saw two cold shivering hatchlings that were of the Wiruti and Dalunt species. The Wiruti fur was sky blue and yellow and was no bigger then a raccoon with brown eyes. Then the Dalunt looked like a small Dalmatian with weird patterns on his body with pair of dark, green eyes. He then met up with his sister who had found two, different piles of eggshells. Chris then took off his jacket and wrapped the two Pokemon in it. They then ran in the opposite direction into town, heading to the Pokemon center.

Many hours later, the twin sat in their mother and grandmother’s Pokemon center for they feared about the hatchlings health. When a Chansey and one of the nurse joys reappeared with the Pokemon. They then announced that they would be put up for adoption or be set back out into the wild when they got older. The two children then left the Pokemon in the care of the nurse Joy as they began to walk home later in the evening.

That night moved slowly for Christopher, as he tossed in his sleep as he had a dream related vision. He had discovered he was psychic on his 9th birthday; he loved the ability because he could talk to Pokemon and sense their feelings. Though, as he gained a powerful gift, the cost was agony of fear and caution toward the premonitions he had. He felt like relaxed while he wondered in his dream and then began to drift away from reality.


/There were thirteen men in a circle chanting something, Chris stand their in the center as he was holding a burned, golden egg. The cloaked men were holding 13 candles as each were chanting a melodic type spell to a ritual.

Summon the light if you must
For it shall be guided by a only pure gust
For when only chaos takes time again
The battle of shadows shall then will never end
For only cursed blood will help to prevail

The demons of darkness shall be caught
As their stole aura can be neutral fended
For when happiness is there again
In the hearts of the faded beasts
As the winds of purity shall be unleashed

Summon the beasts of the starry, night sky
Shall the heaven kingdom’s idols hatch
And help form the new Magnus Custos. /

The dream had faded as Christopher had awoken to birds chirping outside, he knew it was the dawn of a new day. It was Sunday as he was going to his Grandfather’s lab to help him with his current research. After a quick shower, the boy had gotten dressed in a Red jacket over a black shirt and covered his wild hair with a red cap as usual. He walked down to his family’s garage to get his bike. Chris realized his sister must be already there because he had not seen her bike while he got then on his.

When he had gotten to his Grandfather’s lab, It was silent when a large cybernetic-looking creature appeared out of nowhere through a wall. The door opened suddenly when a girl ran around to return the beast to its pokeball as she asked Chris for help.

“Well, well, well, Mrs. Inferior can’t figure out that the only way a Goaind would return is to be polite to it.” Chris then went up to snatch the ball as he did so and returned the Goaind after saying please to it.

After they had went inside, Chris then asked the girl, his sister Lisa, to a practice battle. He then grabbed two of the new trainers beginner Pokemon’s pokeballs and tossed one to his sister.

Chris then grabbed his pocket-sized copy of “Battle Tech for Dummies”, when he tossed it to Lisa and replied “Oh and Lisa, you’ll need this more then me and lets go whoever you are ready. ” Chris toss the ball as so did Lisa when out of the blue, came two cloaked figures that summoned a Joehic and Chiogh and challenged the new trainers to a battle. The first creature was like a kangaroo Joey mix in with an Abra. The other was a muscular version of an Apiom or a smaller version of a Vigroroth.

“Who are you guys?” replied Lisa who then summoned a large blue, Waealf. “Waealf, use a water gun attack on the Joehic” as the calf, replied to her pre-trainer.

<Do I have to? > Replied the small, bluish calf known as a Waealf.

“Yes, you do.” replied Lisa.

<All right then> said Waealf who then took a shoot at the Joehic that was successful.

“Well, we’re known as… wait, none of your bee’s wax.” Said the taller one out of the mask-covered men.

“How rude.” said Lisa.

Chris then summoned a Firub as they helped Lisa and Waealf defeat the weirdoes as they did so. After the grunts ran off with nothing of value, the twins then return the Pokemon to their Pokeballs and found their grandfather tied up in a closet. They untied him asked if they took any important information he just said no. The rest of the day was uneventful as they just study the method of evolution with their grandfather, a man in his late fifties and

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It was a sunny day in pallet town harbor as Ash Ketchum was having a battle with a weird, young teenager named Paul. The two met as Ash’s Raichu went and meet a weird new Pokemon called Magnezone. He had won fourth place in the Shinnoh league as he had went home with him a Pikachu, Staraptor, Torterra, Abomasnow, Aibipom, and a Lucario.
/////Trainer Ash vs. Trainer Paul/////

“Go Magnezone, use Thunder.” As the boy released a weird armored UFO with three eyes.

“What’s that?” as ash pulled out a pokedex as it replied “No data” “Than it’s unknown?” Ash then realized he was up against the 13-year old challenger known as his rival, Paul.

“That’s actually a Magnezone from Shinnoh, moron.” As Paul rolled his eyes at the 17 year old who was clueless. He then thought about how to counter ash’s Pikachu attacks that Paul found out with the help of his pokedex.

“What?” Asked ash as he released Pikachu, who formed out of a red beam of light.

Paul replied that it is known, it just that scientists have been having trouble studying it. After the long battle they only both had only one Pokemon left as Ash summoned his lucario as Paul summoned his Infernape,

“Use Close combat.” Paul said with calmness in the voice

“Use Wave-guiding bomb, lucario!” as ash barked the command

“Fire blast” said Paul, as it hit the lucario it burned it to where it had been knocked out though lucario had used feint when Infernape used protect as the large, bluish wolf had broke through the attack and knocked it out

Many hours later, Ash got to his house where he saw a man in there with Professors Sam and Gary Oak and his mom. The stranger told they were friends who had wanted to meet up with the friends. He then had reintroduced them selves as professors Rowan. Then they had sent in Ash’s friends’ Dawn, Misty, Brock, Tracey, May and Max. Dawn was a blue haired and eyed girl of 13, while misty was a red haired, green-eyed teenager of 18. Brock and Tracey were young men, both had black hair, while Tracey had black eyes with Brock always had them squinted and having darker, tan skin. May was of the age of 14 with brown hair and blue eyes while her brother had blue hair and hazel eyes. Professor Rowan told about where an old friend of his, Mr. Robone, hailed from as ash and May heard about the contests and gyms where you had 17 different ribbons and facing the elite four as Delia return from the kitchen with Ferry tickets. Max then blurted that Mr. Robone was famous for helping build a new pokedex known as the Net dex. The amazing device can scan a specimen and learn about it on the Internet. The three professors said that they should split up the group as Professor oak passed out new pokedexes.

After the group decided on who was going with whom, as Ash said that he was going to travel solo first. He knew about Mr. Robone already, as that was the last name of his own grandfather. Ash had not seen him in a while or his 4 cousins, Elizabeth, Michael, Eric or Christopher.

When they had gotten to the Pallet town port, the caravan had gotten on the famous ferry, The S.S. Torrent. Max had been with Ash in his cabin on the way to Mythion, as it would appear they had been on the ship for a year as it was actually a week. Max then told ash that he had traveled in Johto and had with him a Gardevoir, Mightyana, Houndoom, Mantine, Pichu and a Hitmontop, but was going to only travel with his Pichu. They then went to sleep later that night as they would be in Mythion in a about a week.

~

The next day, far from Corpusa town or the Kanto region, it was a harsh, hot day. As one of the greatest Professors of history and relics was stuck in a deserted place as his twin children were taking an exam that morning. As he went lower into the old sandy tomb of the Dun Desert, he had found what he wanted: an old plate of rock and metal. The object was of triangular shape as it had weird Runes that were written on it. He had then notice a unique risk band on the floor as living symbols appeared out of nowhere to gather around him, as he called out his Yawat, a large ground/electric horned mammal, named jack.

/////Professor Kessler vs. Wild Hielan/////

“Let’s go with a roaring Thunder strike with a large powerful stone edge, jack!” As he barked out the commands, the Hielan, a small shaped curved H symbol, had used an attack to take control with Jack’s first attack, but it almost got knocked out with the Yawat‘s large tremor as it caused a field of spiky rocks to appear from the ground as it hit it at the bottom.

“Go Junior ball.” as the capturing device engulfed the oddly marked creature in a spread of flashing light. As the Hielan was caught, he continued with his exploration of the tomb as he got a sudden call. He retraced his steps back to the vary entrance after he picked up the unique objects and to take the call though.
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“Professor we need you back in here in Sanel city right away.” Said to be the voice of a young man. As the voice disappeared with no detail about the reason as it just went away. The intern who gave the message worried about the city’s museum’s safety as he had gotten a threat from anonymous stranger earlier that day.

“Alright I am going to be right there in a few minutes.” The man had then summoned large condor or Consare as he tried to fly to city located in the central part of the dun desert. As he was about to take off, two odd armored men grabbed him from behind as they dragged them on to the back of a truck near by. He had tried to get free from the men’s grip but failed to do so as one of them had summoned a weird colored Pokemon from it’s ball to use a sleep powder attack on him. While he was knocked out cold as his Consare grabbed his pokeball and his teammates ones and took off to hide.

At Cryar’s school for middle graders in Corpusa town, the Kessler twins teacher, Mrs. Haynie, had then gave her present class a Large test over the past 6 years as the class started it. The following day was when the kids would found out if they passed their tests to a high score where they have gotten commended performance. The lucky people were Chris and Lisa Kessler, Julian Trevino, Chase and Joey, were in the top 50% in the pass the horrid test. After lunch, the Kessler twins began to talk in class during that very afternoon.

“Chris, don’t you think were lucky?” Asked his sister with a worried face as she did not believing in her self. She then got sot some confidence, as she knew she was as smart as her brother.

“We were, but still.” He thought about the very situation at stake with a lot of different sides of it.

“Well, I hope we see cousin Ash again, it’s been four year since the family reunion. ” Ash’s mother had a twin sister who was mostly identical accept for her hair, who was the twin’s mother, and that he was mainly related to the joys by mostly the ones in Mythion.
s the twins got home an hour later, they went straight to their mailbox to found out if their report cards came in. They then opened their envelopes they were shocked to receive the same grade for their year average. The weekend pasted by though very quickly as it was short and boring.


The next Day was exciting because Chris went to get his permission slip on Monday from the Principal to become a licensed Trainer or in his sister’s case, a coordinator in contests. The next day was mainly a ceremony to respect the 1024 new trainers in the region, as they would head off in the following morning. That very night when Chris heard a knock on the door as he was watching his brother, an Elite Four member, on TV.

 

[Luis92]

Nice story keep it up

 

[mythion251]

Chapter 1: A New Tale with a Twist.

It was almost midnight as Chris was relaxing in his room studying about Starter Pokemon and wondering about which one he wanted the most. His room had a laptop in it on an oak wood desk, with also a dresser and a bed of oak. Then there was his light, flat-screen TV, a Wii counsel, then last and not least, a large bookshelf of hundreds books. A door then swung opened, Chris’s twin sister Lisa, in her blue and red pajamas, barged into his room as she then yelled as a howling monkey his name. “CHRISTOPHER!”

“What Lisa?” he replied as he went over to the doorway to see what was the problem. He then told his sister to come in as she lay on the bed as he sat as his desk. She then replied in a screaming voice to him.

“Its 10:00 o’clock at night Chris.” she yelled back with a grouchy and then a worried voice. She looked up at the ceiling thinking of the past two weeks of school with exams or that IQ test.

“Okay Lisa?” As Chris rolled his eyes as he replied to the sarcastic statement he just heard come from his own mouth.

“Tomorrow is where we chose are starter Pokemon.” She then grabbed the Pokemon encyclopedia on the floor and looked up the starters’ stats and attacks. The one she wanted was the one she used in her grandfather lab a week ago.

“Wait, then why you are still up?” he asked with curiosity and wonder. He then went over to the sink to brush his teeth as he still heard the muffling voice being projected by the TV.

“That’s because I’m trying to figure out what should be my starter.” As she overviewed different types of Pokemon by watching famous rewinds of contests a few weeks ago wondering which starters where used the most.

“Have you decided yet?” With some thought in the sentence as he thought that he could pick the one that could beat hers.

“No, but it may be a Waealf for their strength and beauty. Well then, good night.” As she walked and wondered about how they would then spilt up the 3 starters with 5 kids.

“Good night, little miss drama queen.” Then as he retreated to the bed after turning off the lights

“Don’t call me just because I was born a few minutes after you!” when was she becoming was angry with him for making that unnecessary joke. They went to bed an hour later as they thought about tomorrow’s important choice. They both did not say about having the same dream again in their conversation as the images replayed in their dreams.

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Ash stood on the docks as Brock and Misty left for meeting with the other gym leader for a meeting in Chesboa city. May was going to enter a contest in Rivine as her and Max was going to stay at the Pokemon center to stay for the night. The group had gone out to eat as Ash told why he was going solo.

“Well, I’m actually related to the Nurse Joys and that I promised my two, younger cousins that I would travel with them when they got their first Pokemon.” He then felt that they would not remember him after so many years.

“Wow, that’s so cool Ash.” Brock then drooled at the thought of being able to finally gain a single nurse joy’s phone number because ash finally admit his connections, though misty grabbed him by the ear and replied…

“It is cool, though. She then sighed as she drank more of the soft drink as she continued. But what is your family like though?’

“Well, my mom’s twin is a doctor like my grandfather, my grandma is a nurse, and my uncle’s a Archeologist. He then looked back to the red head that was also his crush. They then retreated to the Pokemon center, Ash then met up with a very familiar old woman…


The next morning, at the Kessler home, Chris heard Lisa’s voice shouting, “WAKE THE BLOODY UP!” She then had screamed like a banshee in the night.

Chris woke to see Lisa’s face in his door way. She was fully dressed in a light-blue top, a pink skirt with a light brown belt with having a bronze-yellow like purse. Chris then got up and closed the door, as he then got dressed. He packed rope, small notebooks, his G.A.T.E., a toothbrush, toothpaste, clothes, a canton, a flashlight, a pair of sneakers & his wallet as he put the items in his backpack for the journey. The mirror then made him glance at it as he was wearing a black under shirt with a red jacket and blue jeans. He ran down stairs and said goodbye to his mom as she was doing the daily crossword puzzle. He and Lisa then went out the door, as they headed to their grandfather’s house. When they got there, Chris rang the doorbell, as their grandmother had answered it.

“Hello Christopher and Elizabeth are you ready to pick your starter.” The tall old nurse’s replies again with a smiling grin with a joyful laugh. She told them to follow him as they went through the door. They then went into a narrow hallway as the group keeps talking.

“Yes, and why?” He asked with a worried and surprised face. He then thought what his grandmother just said.

“Well I have we have a surprise guest for you.” She replied as she then checks if the items were still in her pocket.

“Who is it?” As Lisa asked with a cheery tone in her voice after she said the statement.

“Come to your Grandfather’s lab to find out.” she said with eagerness and with a few laughs. As she then told them to follow here to the large separated dome from nine others.

As they walked down the hall, as Chris wondering what the surprise was.

As they entered into a room of shelves, Doctor. Robone [their grandfather] grabbed 2 junior balls from their grandmother. He them each 1 ball & told them what they had gotten.

“Lisa gets the Dalmunt. Chris, you get the Wiruti. Well your friends are in the forest area, so go see them. Oh, and your Pokemon may already know you and vice-versa.” He said with a grinning smile.

“Okay.” They both replied at the very same moment. Chris then threw the ball to unleash the Pokemon; he then realized that it was the same Wiruti he befriended a week ago. The Pokemon then ran up to the familiar friend and jump on to Chris’s shoulder. The Dalunt then did the same thing to Lisa by jumping into her hands.

As the 2 trainers went on, a forest appeared. Their 3 friends were battling, Joey with a Firub, Julian with a Natera, and Chase with a Waealf. Chas where battling the Pokemon there in the forest area. On the sidelines was none others than their black-haired cousin with a Pikachu.

“ASH!” They both ran up to the teenager who then greeted them back.

“Well, nice to see you guys again. Oh, and I guess you like to see my Pikachu again. He then lets the Pikachu greets the trainers as it merrily said hi.
“Ash your Pikachu is so CUTE! Lisa then squealed at the supposedly cute Pokemon as her Dalunt then became aggressive to his master. He then starts using his tail to use a double slap attack in her face to get her out of the trance.

“Hey, Lisa do you want to battle?” As Chris asked with a weird voice as he was saying the question.


“Sure Chris.” She suddenly replied with barley anytime to talk about the subject.

/////Pokemon Trainer Chris vs. Pokemon Coordinator Lisa /////
“Go Topaz…” as Chris was about to call out his new Pokemon, he then got interrupted the very next moment.

“Wait!” as their grandfather screams as he appeared out of the blue.

“What grandpa?” they asked while being worried as the old professor told about a sudden call.

“Your Aunt Kim just called and has 3 eggs that hatched, so I need Chris to go get them and find a worthy trainer to give them to.” He then stared directly at his kind-hearted grandson. Then Chris stared back at his grandfather as he nodded.

“What about me?” Since Chris caught on at the jester

“So your willing to take care of them Chris?” he asked with a proud voice of reasoning.

“Yes.” As Chris had a grinned on his face from the surprise, he then thought of his upcoming battle with his sister

“Oh, I’m still working on your upgrade, so when your done in rivine, come back and they will hopefully be ready for you. As he had worried tone in his voice as he said the statement.

“Okay, well let’s finish our battle first, and Go Topaz.” As he replied after he heard his grandfather. He then called out a small fluffed up rat-type creature.

“Go Max.” As Lisa also replied as she also sent out her new starter that looked like a spotted Great Dane.

“Topaz make a shot at Max with a thunder shock and low kick.” Then the young mouse shot a small thunderbolt of pure electricity as she then swiped at the puppy like of Pokemon.

“Max, go now and attack Topaz with a Quick Attack.” As Lisa replied the command with no thought at all. A speedy counter then hit the creature as Topaz knocked out the weird colored canine.

“Yes, total hit.” With a great grin, Chris then started to gloat at his quick and easy victory. He then recalled his small mouse to let her rest.

“Uh-oh, I lost. As Lisa started to groan with losing to her brother as he then replied. Well, its okay, but I’m going to beat you sometime Chris and that is a promise. ” As she paused after her last statement
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“Well I’m going to heal my Wiruti. So I’ll be there in a minute. When he was done, he caught up with his friends.” With thoughts of what’s going to happen next in this weird and eventful day.

As they entered into a meadow, a wild salco appeared. Chris suddenly called out his Wiruti to attack the small falcon. The bird fainted on the spot and then fled after a few rounds with Chris’s Wiruti. The 6 trainers went on, as they headed to Rivine town, which was north of Corpusa.

 

[Bluntasaur]

There's a lot of flaws here, but this fic shows promise. Work on your grammar, descriptions, and story flow, and you'll do fine.

(P.S.; Sorry I'm being so blunt, but I suck at in-depth critiques)

 

[mythion251]

Chapter 2: Bon Voyage and hello again

As Chris and co headed to rivine, they finally see the city in the horizon. As they arrive, Chris’s Aunt Kim exited the Pokemon center; she went to Chris as she began to speak.

“Chris and Lisa; welcome.” She said with a great thought of happiness while being worried. She then told them to enter and follow her.

“Thanks Aunt Kim.” As the Kessler twins both replied as they notice her weird depressively face.

“Come into my Pokemon center, so I can give you the hatchings.” She replied and then told the group to be careful in the Breeding Facility’s Egg room.

“All right then.” As everyone replied and also thought about what the hatchlings look like.

As they walk inside, a nurse said hello to the group. They went into a padded room with shelves full of dozens of eggs. At the counter, Mrs. Kim grabbed three small, egg balls.

“Wait, do you still have the hatchings?” Replied Elizabeth, as they then came into the small nursery.

“Yes, their in here.” Said Mrs. Kim as she then said hello to a nurse in a room with then three, tiny starters that must have been only an hour old.

As the 6 headed into another room of eggs, there were 3 infants cryptomon on a table playing. The twin’s aunt Kim grabbed the cryptomon and tried to return them to their egg balls when the baby Natera ran off.

“Aunt Kim, I have a question, how were their 3 eggs from starter cryptomon not wanted?” Chris then suddenly became worried about the infants and their safety. He then petted the infant Firub as it stared to smile.

“Well during the last breeding season, there were 3 extra and the owners didn’t need the eggs.” As she replied with a small frown with her face as she then got the Firub and Waealf

“So then can we get Natera?” Replied Julian as he got His Natera to find where her brothering went.

“Yes!” As the nurse told them to spilt up as they did so. Everyone then called out their new Pokemon to help them find the missing Natera.

As our trainers run down the hall, they notice Natera with a nurse Joy. “Oh, it just wanted to say goodbye.” Replied Chris as he picks him up and gave it to his Aunt Kim.

“Well, come back Natera.” As the egg ball Kim was holding engulfed the small grassy lizard. The group then exited the small Building and then came upon a small opening.

As the 5 said good-bye to Chris’s Aunt Kim, they then walked back to Corpusa on the musty plain’s road known as route 501.

They talked about where they’re going to after this as they entered a meadow where they saw giant Buffalos and Bison near a pond. They stopped to take a rest and called out there Pokemon.

“Alright you guys are going to train, Gerri thunder shock with a tackle.” The command warned the Pokemon to try her very best. They then started to practice against nearby Pokemon to train as she had gotten to the level of 6 by the end of the session. As they continue back to Corpusa, they got their Pokemon to level up like Chris’s. As they entered the mansion, they headed to Dr. Robone’s lab. At the lab, they found the doctor in a room of mechanical stuff.

“Grandpa is the upgrade ready?” Lisa replied with a worried tone and voice.

“Well yes and your friends ones.” He then grinned and suddenly laughed oddly.

“What?” Lisa asked then become surprised.

“I made five others for your friends and for Christopher and Ash.” He then Replied and asked about his choice of them picking up the hatchlings.

He gave everyone a weird looking red steel Nintendo DS light card, as he said that you could buy or find more of these everywhere.

“Well I hope you like them and here are five junior balls, with a map card from your mom Chris for both of you and Ash.”

“Well looks like were off, bye Grandpa.” Replied Chris as the gang got out of the lab and headed off on their journey. As they saw their homes behind them, they headed back to rivine. As they walked, Chris checked out his new upgrade as they reentered Route 501.