RP Character Prototype: ph34r!

[Seadra Reef]

my friends and I are in the planning stages of a new RP, and we needed to draw our characters. So at 1am lastnight, I started drawing. I made up the whole thing as I went, but the overall design came out pretty groovy. I was also half-asleep when I did this, so the proportions are a bit off (IE freakishly long right arm and torso). Right now, she has no name, I'm still working on her character, but I love all the belts. XD

 

[Cferra]

Looking good! I like how it looks. It's really good and I can't wait to see more. You draw really nice! At most, I can draw superheroes and stuff. Hmm..that gives me an idea...


L_X

 

[Pacific Pikachu]

That's really cool, Seadra Reef! I love how much detail you put into her character design. The costume is very intricately put together, with an excellent sense of specific originality, which is very nice to see. The folds on her pants were executed well, and the belt fetish is funny. XD I like it. Nice job!

 

[Myuu]

Wow, I love the outfit. Very nice proportion, too! It's a little smeary, but that's okay. You could really be a good clothes designer, and you could defintely draw your own sketches for your ideas too!

 

[Abyss]

Very cool concept. The belt idea is cool, but they kind of give the illusion that they are printed on the clothing itself, rather than wrapped around the body, especially with the belt under the breast. My advice would be to define the belts a bit more, instead of making them flow with the outlines of the character herself. Gah. I hope you understand what I mean. You see the belt on her right leg (on our left)? It looks perfect. It looks exactly like a belt that was wrapped around the leg. If you could do that with the other belts, it'd be perfect.
Again, this is a really neat concept! If you want, I know how you can remove the blue notebook lines (unless you like them. This is just an FYI) Open PSP or PS and select the Colors tab. Then select Split Channel, and click "Split to RGB". It will give you three different images, and one will be free of lines. This only works with black and white images though.
Very cool art, Seadra Reef!
-Abyss

 

[Legend of Didesy]

Pretty nice, I like your lines and the head and stuff, however as I noticed with most of your drawings, they look too stiff... I think you might need to make them more flowy, even though he's standing - most of your pics are in exactly the same pose.. And the pants are almost always the same, big and wide - why don't you show us his handsome legs?

 

[Seadra Reef]

Originally posted by Legend of Didesy
Pretty nice, I like your lines and the head and stuff, however as I noticed with most of your drawings, they look too stiff... I think you might need to make them more flowy, even though he's standing - most of your pics are in exactly the same pose.. And the pants are almost always the same, big and wide - why don't you show us his handsome legs?

Hehe, she's a girl. ^^;

Since right now I'm mainly doing character design pictures, most of my sketches are basic poses, so the outfits are clearly shown. I'm hoping to start some actual drawings of the characters together, since I'm almost done all my character designs. As for the pants, I luff baggy pants. XD Sides', I'm horrible at drawing male legs. ^^;

 

[DGE]

Does she go shopping with Yugi Mutou? XD

I agree with Didesy, because I have the same problem. A series of poses in a "character sheet" type deal would be a good thing to see. And to practice with.

But she's cute. Androgyny is good. ^.^ *is looked at suspiciously*

 

[Vaporeon Lugia Krabby]

I like the clothing design, but I think the proportions could use a little work in a few places. (Eyes too far apart, small stuff, no biggie.) Still, I do like the picture.

 

[Mild_Altaria]

Yes, I do think it looks very nice. All the detail and shading were done almost perfectly. Good job, Seadra Reef. Yes, proportions could use a little work, and I agree with LOD that it looks a little stiff, but overall, it is excellent. I know, by the way, that it isn't easy drawing in the middle of the night. Heh