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I wrote this, like, two years ago and I just found out something to do with it. Enjoy! Reviews would be apreciated!
Saturn’s story
Finally, I can start my Journey. For years I couldn't wait until I got out of that orphanage. I bring out my starter Pokémon, a Turtwig, and we start training right away. We train intensely for about 8 weeks. Then one night I leave Turtwig out to stargaze with me. As I drift of to sleep I hear a scampering noise. ‘It’s just a Ratatta’ I think to myself. When I wake up I find Turtwig had left. I stayed and waited at the campsite for 3 days. Then I packed up and left, sadly excepting Turtwig was gone. I drudged slowly onto the next town wishing I had made time to catch at least one more Pokémon. I hear a screech and let my ears lead me to the source, a Ryhorn. It looks pretty beat up. I throw a Poke ball and hope it’s too weak to struggle. The Poke ball seals. I grab it and sprint to the next town. I was relieved to find the first building I saw was a Pokémon center. As I sit waiting for my Ryhorn I vow to not catch another Pokémon until I find my Turtwig. I was delighted to see Nurse Joy bring out a Poke ball. My Poke ball. For the first time I really got to meet my first catch.
6 months went by. My Ryhorn evolved into Rhydon. Now I’m at Lake Acuity trying to get a glimpse of the legendary Pokémon Uxie. One night I was in the Pokémon center watching Sinnoh Pokémon Hustle and Bustle when someone called my name. I turn around to find Tony my old roommate.
“Hey Saturn! How are you?” He asks.
“Fine, I guess.” My voice is quiet. The only person I’ve talked to for the past few months was a Nurse Joy.
“Hey do you want to battle?” Tony blurts out. “My Prinplup against your Turtwig.”
“I…I can’t.” I say glumly. I explain how Turtwig ran away and how I caught Rhydon.
“Ok. Prinplup against Rhydon.” He offers mischievously.
“Sure.” I mutter suddenly frightened.
The next morning I wake up and dread what lies before me. I eat alight breakfast and head down to the lakeshore to get some training in before the battle. After training for about half an hour I spot Tony.
“
Let’s battle here and now.” He tells me. “You can use the first move.”
“OK. Rhydon use hammer arm!” I yell.
“Prinplup dodge and use whirlpool.” He says casually.
I watch Ryhorn fall to the ground. ‘Come on…get up.’ I think desperately. As if he heard me Rhydon hauled himself triumphantly but obviously in pain.
“Now Prinplup use bubble beam.” I could tell Tony said something but I didn’t know what.
Suddenly Prinplup creates a magnificent display of bubbles that hit Rhydon strait on. He falls and doesn’t get up.
“Rhydon return. Thanks that was a great battle.” I tell Tony.
“Oh it’s not over yet.” He says with an evil grin. “Mr. Mime come on out and use Confusion… on Saturn.” I gasp in horror as I’m lifted into the air and violently slammed back onto the ground.
I get up and suddenly I don’t know left from right or up from down.
“Confused aren’t you.” Tony yelled to me. I try to nod but just feel extreme pain. I slump downwards (at least I hope it was down) and try and get my thoughts strait.
“Now Prinplup use hydro pump” I’m thrown into the air and my head violently slams into a rock. I pass out before I feel the pain of the blow.
I wake up in a strange room. At first I think I’m back in the Orphanage then I remember what happened. I wanted to scream in fury, but first I had to figure out where I was. I got up and looked around. Nothing much only a nightstand, a mirror and one door. I sit back down and for the first time wonder where my Rhydon is.
The door opens and I see a tall, gruff looking man step into the room.
“Hello. I’m Cyrus.” He says.
“Where am I? Where is here? Did you take Rhydon?” I blurt.
“You’ll find out soon enough. There are clean clothes in the nightstand. I’ll send some one to get you in an hour.” And with that Cyrus leaves.
I look in the mirror and I see my body and face is covered in bruises and cuts. I change into the clothes that Cyrus gave me and sit down. Surely enough a girl comes in about an hour.
“I’m Mars follow me.” She says sounding almost annoyed.
“Sure.” I say pathetically. She brings me to a large banquet hall where Cyrus is waiting for me.
“I believe you have a number of questions and I am ready to answer them so ask away.” He says calmly.
“Ok. To start, Where am I?”I ask.
“You are in Team Galactic HQ.” Cyrus says with out a second thought.
“Did you take Rhydon?”
“Yes.”
“Where is he now?”
“Being healed. It seems like you had just been through a great battle.”
“We have...only I don’t think it was the stuff of legend.” I say with a sigh.
“Do you have any more questions?” Cyrus asks.
“Yes, one more. How did I get here?”
“I found you out in the forest unconscious. It seems you and your Pokémon had been through a lot.”
“Yeah… I guess you could say that.” I explain to him how Tony’s Prinplup had beaten my Rhydon with two hits and how he attacked me like I as another wild Pokémon. When I finished some servants brought out a large variety of food. I ate my fill and waited permission to leave. When I got back to my room I found my poke ball with Rhydon in it.
Cyrus was the closest thing I had to a father and Rhydon quickly further evolved into a Rhyperior. I never found my Turtwig but I went against my vow and caught some more Pokémon. I trained hard and joined Team Galactic. I became who I am today the powerful right hand man of Cyrus. Saturn… of Team Galactic
Saturn’s story
Finally, I can start my Journey. For years I couldn't wait until I got out of that orphanage. I bring out my starter Pokémon, a Turtwig, and we start training right away. We train intensely for about 8 weeks. Then one night I leave Turtwig out to stargaze with me. As I drift of to sleep I hear a scampering noise. ‘It’s just a Ratatta’ I think to myself. When I wake up I find Turtwig had left. I stayed and waited at the campsite for 3 days. Then I packed up and left, sadly excepting Turtwig was gone. I drudged slowly onto the next town wishing I had made time to catch at least one more Pokémon. I hear a screech and let my ears lead me to the source, a Ryhorn. It looks pretty beat up. I throw a Poke ball and hope it’s too weak to struggle. The Poke ball seals. I grab it and sprint to the next town. I was relieved to find the first building I saw was a Pokémon center. As I sit waiting for my Ryhorn I vow to not catch another Pokémon until I find my Turtwig. I was delighted to see Nurse Joy bring out a Poke ball. My Poke ball. For the first time I really got to meet my first catch.
6 months went by. My Ryhorn evolved into Rhydon. Now I’m at Lake Acuity trying to get a glimpse of the legendary Pokémon Uxie. One night I was in the Pokémon center watching Sinnoh Pokémon Hustle and Bustle when someone called my name. I turn around to find Tony my old roommate.
“Hey Saturn! How are you?” He asks.
“Fine, I guess.” My voice is quiet. The only person I’ve talked to for the past few months was a Nurse Joy.
“Hey do you want to battle?” Tony blurts out. “My Prinplup against your Turtwig.”
“I…I can’t.” I say glumly. I explain how Turtwig ran away and how I caught Rhydon.
“Ok. Prinplup against Rhydon.” He offers mischievously.
“Sure.” I mutter suddenly frightened.
The next morning I wake up and dread what lies before me. I eat alight breakfast and head down to the lakeshore to get some training in before the battle. After training for about half an hour I spot Tony.
“
Let’s battle here and now.” He tells me. “You can use the first move.”
“OK. Rhydon use hammer arm!” I yell.
“Prinplup dodge and use whirlpool.” He says casually.
I watch Ryhorn fall to the ground. ‘Come on…get up.’ I think desperately. As if he heard me Rhydon hauled himself triumphantly but obviously in pain.
“Now Prinplup use bubble beam.” I could tell Tony said something but I didn’t know what.
Suddenly Prinplup creates a magnificent display of bubbles that hit Rhydon strait on. He falls and doesn’t get up.
“Rhydon return. Thanks that was a great battle.” I tell Tony.
“Oh it’s not over yet.” He says with an evil grin. “Mr. Mime come on out and use Confusion… on Saturn.” I gasp in horror as I’m lifted into the air and violently slammed back onto the ground.
I get up and suddenly I don’t know left from right or up from down.
“Confused aren’t you.” Tony yelled to me. I try to nod but just feel extreme pain. I slump downwards (at least I hope it was down) and try and get my thoughts strait.
“Now Prinplup use hydro pump” I’m thrown into the air and my head violently slams into a rock. I pass out before I feel the pain of the blow.
I wake up in a strange room. At first I think I’m back in the Orphanage then I remember what happened. I wanted to scream in fury, but first I had to figure out where I was. I got up and looked around. Nothing much only a nightstand, a mirror and one door. I sit back down and for the first time wonder where my Rhydon is.
The door opens and I see a tall, gruff looking man step into the room.
“Hello. I’m Cyrus.” He says.
“Where am I? Where is here? Did you take Rhydon?” I blurt.
“You’ll find out soon enough. There are clean clothes in the nightstand. I’ll send some one to get you in an hour.” And with that Cyrus leaves.
I look in the mirror and I see my body and face is covered in bruises and cuts. I change into the clothes that Cyrus gave me and sit down. Surely enough a girl comes in about an hour.
“I’m Mars follow me.” She says sounding almost annoyed.
“Sure.” I say pathetically. She brings me to a large banquet hall where Cyrus is waiting for me.
“I believe you have a number of questions and I am ready to answer them so ask away.” He says calmly.
“Ok. To start, Where am I?”I ask.
“You are in Team Galactic HQ.” Cyrus says with out a second thought.
“Did you take Rhydon?”
“Yes.”
“Where is he now?”
“Being healed. It seems like you had just been through a great battle.”
“We have...only I don’t think it was the stuff of legend.” I say with a sigh.
“Do you have any more questions?” Cyrus asks.
“Yes, one more. How did I get here?”
“I found you out in the forest unconscious. It seems you and your Pokémon had been through a lot.”
“Yeah… I guess you could say that.” I explain to him how Tony’s Prinplup had beaten my Rhydon with two hits and how he attacked me like I as another wild Pokémon. When I finished some servants brought out a large variety of food. I ate my fill and waited permission to leave. When I got back to my room I found my poke ball with Rhydon in it.
Cyrus was the closest thing I had to a father and Rhydon quickly further evolved into a Rhyperior. I never found my Turtwig but I went against my vow and caught some more Pokémon. I trained hard and joined Team Galactic. I became who I am today the powerful right hand man of Cyrus. Saturn… of Team Galactic
