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COMPLETE: Silver Eyes (Poem)

TeamGalacticMercury

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Warning: Depressing

A non-pokemon poem


Silver Eyes


Into the summer's night,
I howl grievingly.
You're losing your last fight,
Darkness absorbing you thievingly.


I remember when we danced together,
Beneath the autumn moon.
I remember when we sung together,
Beautifully as a loon.


I can't forget the hunger,
Starving near to death,
Or silently, solemnly grieving
Our pup's final breath.


The memories are fading
As you're breathing grows ever faint.
Your lovely eyes are dimming,
I know it is too late.


The precious, sacred liquid
Is seeping no longer.
The redness has stained the grass,
Along with your silky fur.


I know the time is here
When I must bid you farewell,
I let your struggles cease
Before my tears should swell.


I hope that, wherever you are,
You are safe and warm and alive.
I will never forget our time together,
My beautiful silver eyes...

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Anyway, I was bored and has a bit of inspiration. Thoughts? Critisisms? And yes, I know, Thievingly is not a word, but i needed something and nothing else came to mind. It is pretty easy to figure out what I mean.
 
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Wow, awesome poem TeamGalacticMercury! Sorry I missed it until now!

Love the gracefulness of your words and the tradegy of death and the way you describe it. Awesome!
 
It's a very emotional poem, very poetic( lol,shaped like itself). Now, I wished I was less lazy so I can even get started on my poem. Your's is amazing.
 
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