moosie
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Alright. Since it was a long bit ago since I last posted anything in my last thread, and it was cluttered even after deleting alot of my posts, I decided to make a new one. Could be called more redneckier than before, or might as well say better art.
Now. Here, to save space and stuff, I'm gonna be posting chapter by chapter. And so far I have one. Now, these comics are text loaded, as I decided to start writing alot more in my work. I mostly draw in realistic, but I'm starting to get a cartoony of sorts style, which may not be as good at the first style I mention. This, unlike my old versions, this is read left to right like a redneck should be stylin' his comics.
I'm working on the second chapter, although it will mostly be text, but after that, I have around a few chapters of buffer, that may have to be released as chapter parts, but whatever.
NOW TO THE ACTUAL COMICS
Nuzlocke rules are simple.
1. Can only catch one Pokemon per area
2. If they faint, they're dead, and most likely will be put in a box or realeased.
If there is any rules, they will be mentioned in comic.
Derrick's Story--Black and Black 2
Comment, critique (both story and comic), and enjoy!
Now. Here, to save space and stuff, I'm gonna be posting chapter by chapter. And so far I have one. Now, these comics are text loaded, as I decided to start writing alot more in my work. I mostly draw in realistic, but I'm starting to get a cartoony of sorts style, which may not be as good at the first style I mention. This, unlike my old versions, this is read left to right like a redneck should be stylin' his comics.
I'm working on the second chapter, although it will mostly be text, but after that, I have around a few chapters of buffer, that may have to be released as chapter parts, but whatever.
NOW TO THE ACTUAL COMICS
Nuzlocke rules are simple.
1. Can only catch one Pokemon per area
2. If they faint, they're dead, and most likely will be put in a box or realeased.
If there is any rules, they will be mentioned in comic.
Derrick's Story--Black and Black 2
Synopsis:
A country boy, Derrick Blakeson, and his friends start their own journeys, for their own reasons.
Derrick is using this as an excuse to try to find his 'missing' father, who disappeared way back when he was a toddler. This excuse, though, is one that requires entry into the Unovan League to have access to their searchin' resources. Therefore, he has to get all the badges.
Bianca "Belle" Lauray is going on her journey to prove to her drunkee, sexist of a father that she can make it in the world. She isn't necessarily needing to beat the league to prove, but rather get the badges.
Cheren "Rinnard" Rinlin is going to make his mother, a champion of a far away region, proud. He is aiming for the league, like Derrick.
But not all follows accordingly for them, when a mysterious, shadowy being force them into his challenge of death, and an eco-terrorist group are thrown into their ways.
Rules:
Basic Rules with a duplicates clause.
Table of contents
Extras:
Made a new topic because the first one was too cluttered. I won't redo this and waste over 4 pages of pointless posts.
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Town and route renaming guide.
Okay, I decided to rename the towns and routes to go along with changing how they look, for originality. Almost all are named after either local towns to me, or just some place in Ohio, the state I live in. For those lost, here ya go:
Nuvema town= Feedsprings (Based off of a local "town" named Feed Springs)
Route one= Seabreeze Hills (Just a made up location)
Acumula town= Dearlington (named Deersville on gijinka comic)(Based off of another local town, Deersville)
Route two= Region Highway 250 South (real highway)
Straition City= Scian (Si-an)(Based off of larger town called Scio, it has both a good (yet small) resturaunt, and a school I used to go to.)
Route three= Region Highway 250 North (I remember route three has a small lake, and the highway has a lake to the side of it named Tappen)
Wellspring Cave= Abandoned Crediz Mine (I'm sure that it's real, Cadiz had a coal mine, I just don't know for sure)
Nacrene City= Crediz (Cree-dis)(Based off of a small city called Cadiz, it has the largest library I've seen (though never been in))
Pinwheel Forest=Just a wooded area, nowhere specific (based off the woods outside my my house, why not?)
Sky Arrow Bridge= Region Route 77 (based on State Route 77, I think the longest traveled road between Cadiz and Cleveland)
Castelia CIty= Clasteland (Clay-st-land)(Based off of Cleveland. It's a big city, and the biggest one in this state I've been in)
Route 4= Interregion Route 90 (Based off of Interstate Route 90, a road between Cadiz and Sandusky)
Desert Resort+Relic Castle= An abandon farm, abandoned way back when the Two Brother's Civil War happened.
More locations coming soon.
Nimbasa City= Nambusky (Nam-bus-key)(Based off of Sandusky. Cedar Point is a cool amusement park)
A country boy, Derrick Blakeson, and his friends start their own journeys, for their own reasons.
Derrick is using this as an excuse to try to find his 'missing' father, who disappeared way back when he was a toddler. This excuse, though, is one that requires entry into the Unovan League to have access to their searchin' resources. Therefore, he has to get all the badges.
Bianca "Belle" Lauray is going on her journey to prove to her drunkee, sexist of a father that she can make it in the world. She isn't necessarily needing to beat the league to prove, but rather get the badges.
Cheren "Rinnard" Rinlin is going to make his mother, a champion of a far away region, proud. He is aiming for the league, like Derrick.
But not all follows accordingly for them, when a mysterious, shadowy being force them into his challenge of death, and an eco-terrorist group are thrown into their ways.
Rules:
Basic Rules with a duplicates clause.
Table of contents
Chapter One-Highway 20 Ride:
Music for the part:
[video=youtube;gZMCkufE0X0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gZMCkufE0X0[/video]
Page One:
Page Two:
Watch out for Mr. Slim in the background.
Page Three:
Page Four:
Page Five:
Page Six:
Like Derrick said, sorry for being rushed, I just don't want this taking too long.
[video=youtube;gZMCkufE0X0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gZMCkufE0X0[/video]
Page One:
Watch out for Mr. Slim in the background.
And no, If you spot him, he will not have any effect on the story, at least, not a lot. He might show up again later on, but I'm gonna make it harder to spot him. If you spot him, and post about it, ya may get a prize of a drawn request.
Like Derrick said, sorry for being rushed, I just don't want this taking too long.
What the crap is this:
So I got bored and made Derrick sprited as if he's in homestuck.
So I got bored and made Derrick sprited as if he's in homestuck.
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Town and route renaming guide.
Okay, I decided to rename the towns and routes to go along with changing how they look, for originality. Almost all are named after either local towns to me, or just some place in Ohio, the state I live in. For those lost, here ya go:
Nuvema town= Feedsprings (Based off of a local "town" named Feed Springs)
Route one= Seabreeze Hills (Just a made up location)
Acumula town= Dearlington (named Deersville on gijinka comic)(Based off of another local town, Deersville)
Route two= Region Highway 250 South (real highway)
Straition City= Scian (Si-an)(Based off of larger town called Scio, it has both a good (yet small) resturaunt, and a school I used to go to.)
Route three= Region Highway 250 North (I remember route three has a small lake, and the highway has a lake to the side of it named Tappen)
Wellspring Cave= Abandoned Crediz Mine (I'm sure that it's real, Cadiz had a coal mine, I just don't know for sure)
Nacrene City= Crediz (Cree-dis)(Based off of a small city called Cadiz, it has the largest library I've seen (though never been in))
Pinwheel Forest=Just a wooded area, nowhere specific (based off the woods outside my my house, why not?)
Sky Arrow Bridge= Region Route 77 (based on State Route 77, I think the longest traveled road between Cadiz and Cleveland)
Castelia CIty= Clasteland (Clay-st-land)(Based off of Cleveland. It's a big city, and the biggest one in this state I've been in)
Route 4= Interregion Route 90 (Based off of Interstate Route 90, a road between Cadiz and Sandusky)
Desert Resort+Relic Castle= An abandon farm, abandoned way back when the Two Brother's Civil War happened.
More locations coming soon.
Nimbasa City= Nambusky (Nam-bus-key)(Based off of Sandusky. Cedar Point is a cool amusement park)