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Ok! So this fanfiction is about the Dex Holders "going" to an academy :flinch: Here what it looks like. 
hew:
-The small blue regtangles are really nice cabins
-5 people belong in each cabin.
-The red flags are resturants
-The purple bursts are sport/battle areas
-The orange shiny shape is a library/art area
-The green retangle with the blue i in it is a welcome/info area
-The blue water drop is the beach
-The red smiley face is the pool
- The school itself is 5 mins away :3
-Lastly the orange moon is the Opening gates
It is just a fun fanfiction I'm writing, of course it is hard working with characters from the BW series, it is always changing :/
Here's part of chapter one, I usually draw not write.....it's my first fic, please help with ideas, grammar help, and please don't criticize the story line! And other characters are coming in later :shy:
hew:-The small blue regtangles are really nice cabins
-5 people belong in each cabin.
-The red flags are resturants
-The purple bursts are sport/battle areas
-The orange shiny shape is a library/art area
-The green retangle with the blue i in it is a welcome/info area
-The blue water drop is the beach
-The red smiley face is the pool
- The school itself is 5 mins away :3
-Lastly the orange moon is the Opening gates
It is just a fun fanfiction I'm writing, of course it is hard working with characters from the BW series, it is always changing :/
Here's part of chapter one, I usually draw not write.....it's my first fic, please help with ideas, grammar help, and please don't criticize the story line! And other characters are coming in later :shy:
“The moon was full and the sky was dark, like….like… Ha! A dusk stone! Perfect! Like a dusk stone. He was staring at me, with hope. But, I did not know what to do. He was fading, and so was I.”
(Big font for easy reading)
Few Years Earlier
CHAPTER 1- Searching Condo #5!
White’s POV
I looked down at our Condo Card, we were number 5. I still don’t know why we were here...
“Number 4….and here! Number 5!” Black said cheerfully
Oh Yeah. Black is my intern that has to pay his debt, or more so past debt, but earlier on we made a deal that we would still travel together if I supply potions and poke balls of sorts.
My side of the deal? He has to wear the BW logo on the back of his jacket, talk about being great for the business!
“Oh good, my back was starting to hurt again…” I said rubbing my neck
“Ya know there are such things called Advil.” Black looked at me
“I’m not buying that stuff since they rejected using my Pokemon for the commercial!” I yelled back. Humph.
It’s not my fault that the Pokemon they wanted, you know, back stabbed me on a Ferris wheel.
“Well, let’s go in” Black said taking the key out and putting it in the lock.
As the door opened I walked in and looked around, it was a nice place, but not ‘nice-nice’.
It was one huge room with half walls acting for the walls, than there was a swirly staircase in the middle, and to my right was the kitchen.
It looked like a great place for the morning, with a coffee maker and four blue and white stools next to the silverish blue counter island.
To my left was the living area, with a huge red T.V that had a couple of brown love seats surrounding it.
“Pretty nice, huh?” I heard Black say behind me
I turned around to face him
“Ehh, as a Company President, I’ve seen much nicer.” I said bluntly
“Well to me its looks fancy enough” Black said as he walked past me and headed up the royal blue staircase.
“Hey look there’s four rooms!” Black yelled from half-way up the stairs
I started to follow him up the stair case to see myself; by the time I arrived he was looking in a door.
“Oh, the first ones a bathroom.” He continued down the hallway and I continued to follow.
“And it seems the rest are all large bedrooms, except for this smaller one.” He said coming back down from the hall.
KNOCK! KNOCK!
“Oh! It’s the others!” I said and paced down the stairs
I noticed the door knob was wiggling back and forth, finally the door opened.
“Took ya long enough” said the first girl rudely
“Uhhh we’re the ones with the key, not you. How did you even get in?”
The girl smirked at me and the key in her hand transformed into a pink blob.
“Umm, what is that thing?”
“What? Have you been living under a rock for your whole life? It’s a Ditto!” The girl said
“Well I do come from Uno-“
“HURRY UP SUPER SERIOUS GAL!!!” I heard a person yell from outside the house.
A boy with messy black hair came running in.
“COME ON!!!!!”
“I’m coming’, I’m coming’!!!!”
Lastly a girl with very dark hair up in pigtails and a huge hat walked in.
She than glared at him.
“Oh, hi! You must be our new roommates!” She said, her personality changing quickly
“Yeah, I’m White and he’s Black” I than said
“I’m Cryst-“ Cryst got cut off.
“I’M GOLD AND YOU’RE ALL LUCKY TO MEET ME!!!!!!!!!!!” Gold yelled
“Oh shut up.” Cryst said “I’m Crystal, glad to meet you! ~” She cheerfully said
What about the sneaky girl? “Who are you?”
She was too busy laughing. “Oh man! You two are perfect for each other!”
Crystal kicked her in the shin, she was blushing. “Oh shut up!!!”
“Well, I’m Blue!” She happily cheered, done laughing “Nice to meet you two.”
Silence. Blue was becoming impatient “Well, aren’t we gonna go in!” She yelled
“Oh yeah” Black said “I’ll show you around”
We all proceeded to follow him, it was the same as before, but what shocked me is that the stairs went to a third floor…a solo room. Nice view and everything!
Of course we all started fighting.
“I should get the room!!!” “No I do!” “Shut up Serious Gal! We all know I get the room!”
I sighed; this should be a fun four years…
“Ok, be quiet!!!” Black yelled with the same loud voice he’s known for.
“We got assigned our rooms” he said quietly, scared at the angry glares towards him.
“Who am I with? I doubt I got the room” Crystal said
“Uhhhh, oh crap.” Black said well knowing that Crystal hated Gold
“Well???” Crystal said worried “Look for yourself.” He said handing her the paper
Her face became extremely pale, she than screeched “GOLD!?!?!?!” She than froze up
“OH MAN, HELL YEAH!!!!” Gold rejoiced
“Did I get the room?” Blue took the paper off the frozen Crystal and looked at the paper
“Yay~!” Blue cheerfully squealed. She looked at me “Looks like you’re with Black”
I could feel myself heat up…why in the world would they pair up boy/girl in one room? Wouldn’t they have girl/girl or boy/boy for….you know…..”wanting purposes”?
“Well!” Blue’s cheerful personality was really getting to me. “Let’s set up? Shall we? Hohoho!” She giggled, staring at all of our sunken faces; even Gold seemed a bit nervous.
(Big font for easy reading
)Few Years Earlier
CHAPTER 1- Searching Condo #5!
White’s POV
I looked down at our Condo Card, we were number 5. I still don’t know why we were here...
“Number 4….and here! Number 5!” Black said cheerfully
Oh Yeah. Black is my intern that has to pay his debt, or more so past debt, but earlier on we made a deal that we would still travel together if I supply potions and poke balls of sorts.
My side of the deal? He has to wear the BW logo on the back of his jacket, talk about being great for the business!
“Oh good, my back was starting to hurt again…” I said rubbing my neck
“Ya know there are such things called Advil.” Black looked at me
“I’m not buying that stuff since they rejected using my Pokemon for the commercial!” I yelled back. Humph.
It’s not my fault that the Pokemon they wanted, you know, back stabbed me on a Ferris wheel.
“Well, let’s go in” Black said taking the key out and putting it in the lock.
As the door opened I walked in and looked around, it was a nice place, but not ‘nice-nice’.
It was one huge room with half walls acting for the walls, than there was a swirly staircase in the middle, and to my right was the kitchen.
It looked like a great place for the morning, with a coffee maker and four blue and white stools next to the silverish blue counter island.
To my left was the living area, with a huge red T.V that had a couple of brown love seats surrounding it.
“Pretty nice, huh?” I heard Black say behind me
I turned around to face him
“Ehh, as a Company President, I’ve seen much nicer.” I said bluntly
“Well to me its looks fancy enough” Black said as he walked past me and headed up the royal blue staircase.
“Hey look there’s four rooms!” Black yelled from half-way up the stairs
I started to follow him up the stair case to see myself; by the time I arrived he was looking in a door.
“Oh, the first ones a bathroom.” He continued down the hallway and I continued to follow.
“And it seems the rest are all large bedrooms, except for this smaller one.” He said coming back down from the hall.
KNOCK! KNOCK!
“Oh! It’s the others!” I said and paced down the stairs
I noticed the door knob was wiggling back and forth, finally the door opened.
“Took ya long enough” said the first girl rudely
“Uhhh we’re the ones with the key, not you. How did you even get in?”
The girl smirked at me and the key in her hand transformed into a pink blob.
“Umm, what is that thing?”
“What? Have you been living under a rock for your whole life? It’s a Ditto!” The girl said
“Well I do come from Uno-“
“HURRY UP SUPER SERIOUS GAL!!!” I heard a person yell from outside the house.
A boy with messy black hair came running in.
“COME ON!!!!!”
“I’m coming’, I’m coming’!!!!”
Lastly a girl with very dark hair up in pigtails and a huge hat walked in.
She than glared at him.
“Oh, hi! You must be our new roommates!” She said, her personality changing quickly
“Yeah, I’m White and he’s Black” I than said
“I’m Cryst-“ Cryst got cut off.
“I’M GOLD AND YOU’RE ALL LUCKY TO MEET ME!!!!!!!!!!!” Gold yelled
“Oh shut up.” Cryst said “I’m Crystal, glad to meet you! ~” She cheerfully said
What about the sneaky girl? “Who are you?”
She was too busy laughing. “Oh man! You two are perfect for each other!”
Crystal kicked her in the shin, she was blushing. “Oh shut up!!!”
“Well, I’m Blue!” She happily cheered, done laughing “Nice to meet you two.”
Silence. Blue was becoming impatient “Well, aren’t we gonna go in!” She yelled
“Oh yeah” Black said “I’ll show you around”
We all proceeded to follow him, it was the same as before, but what shocked me is that the stairs went to a third floor…a solo room. Nice view and everything!
Of course we all started fighting.
“I should get the room!!!” “No I do!” “Shut up Serious Gal! We all know I get the room!”
I sighed; this should be a fun four years…
“Ok, be quiet!!!” Black yelled with the same loud voice he’s known for.
“We got assigned our rooms” he said quietly, scared at the angry glares towards him.
“Who am I with? I doubt I got the room” Crystal said
“Uhhhh, oh crap.” Black said well knowing that Crystal hated Gold
“Well???” Crystal said worried “Look for yourself.” He said handing her the paper
Her face became extremely pale, she than screeched “GOLD!?!?!?!” She than froze up
“OH MAN, HELL YEAH!!!!” Gold rejoiced
“Did I get the room?” Blue took the paper off the frozen Crystal and looked at the paper
“Yay~!” Blue cheerfully squealed. She looked at me “Looks like you’re with Black”
I could feel myself heat up…why in the world would they pair up boy/girl in one room? Wouldn’t they have girl/girl or boy/boy for….you know…..”wanting purposes”?
“Well!” Blue’s cheerful personality was really getting to me. “Let’s set up? Shall we? Hohoho!” She giggled, staring at all of our sunken faces; even Gold seemed a bit nervous.
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