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Stainless Rivalry [Lugion, Gastly's Mama & SCND collaborative crossover]

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Hi everyone. This is a new story that Lugion and I have been working on for a little while now. It will probably only end up being 5 or 6 chapters long but I hope you all enjoy it.

Contents

Chapter 1 - Blue's Perspective I [by Gastly's Mama]
Chapter 2 - Steven's Perspective I [by Lugion]

Chapter 1​


Blue Oak had spent the last year studying and training intensively; so much so that he was rarely available to take challenges to his Gym. Although the resignation of Samia, the reigning Grand Champion, had come as a shock to almost everyone in the world, Blue had been unfazed. He had seen it coming. The exact same thing had happened to Lance when he had held a similar, albeit lesser, position for a comparable amount of time. It was inevitable. There was to be a tournament to decide who would take Samia’s position as the new Grand Champion. To even compete, one had to have defeated the Elite Four of the Kanto-Johto Alliance, Hoenn and Sinnoh, as well as taking part in at least two major tournaments and placing in the top eight. Fortunately, in the several years since he had left Pallet Town armed with a small Charmander, Blue had racked up these qualifications.

First, he had defeated the eight Gym Leaders of Kanto, qualifying him to challenge the Elite Four and become the first ever Champion of Kanto. Of course, he had been the Champion for under an hour before the title was taken from him by his rival, Red. Shortly after this, he had been given the position of Viridian City Gym Leader by the previous Leader, Giovanni, and was, for a while, happy with this situation. Of course, he had never been one to remain static and his desperation for greater recognition began to take over him. Blue had managed to use his status as former Champion of Kanto and the most powerful Gym Leader of all of Kanto and Johto to get the opportunity to challenge the Elite Four and Champions of both Hoenn and Sinnoh. Although he had been unable to actually take the title from the reigning Champion on either occasion, he had been successful in beating the Elite Four, which was enough to afford him the chance to compete in the Grand Champion tournament.

Over this day alone, Blue had fought through several fierce battles, securing himself a safe place in the quarter finals. He sat on a wooden bench in a relatively small changing room, alone apart from his Pokémon, who were all out of their Poké Balls, as he waited for the other matches to finish, so that he could find out who his opponent would be. His grandfather, Professor Oak, had advised him to watch every match so that he could get a better scope on his potential competitors, but he had decided not to. To the surprise of almost everyone who he told, Blue hated watching Pokémon battles. He hated taking the role of a spectator. He loved competing but he despised being a mere witness. Instead, he elected to spend some time with his Pokémon making sure that they were up to scratch for the impending battle.

The Pokémon he spent the most time preparing was his Alakazam. Blue wasn’t at all worried about Alakazam’s power, in fact it was probably Blue’s strongest Pokémon – it was the Pokémon’s personality that was the problem. In fact, it was Alakazam’s arrogance that had resulted in him losing the position of Kanto-Johto Champion!

“We’re in the big leagues now, Alakazam,” said Blue, “Don’t lose your head. I know it seemed like Red was a bad ass back then but these guys are the real deal.”

Alakazam nodded with a twinkle of apology in its eyes. Blue patted Alakazam on the shoulder and was about to say something else reassuring when he heard a knock at the door.

“Blue Oak?” came an enquiring voice.

Blue tried to respond but choked on the words. It took him a few seconds to recover.

“Come in,” spluttered Blue eventually.

The door opened slowly to reveal a man in a uniform that Blue recognised as one of the co-ordinators of the tournament.

“Please return your Pokémon to their Poké Balls,” requested the co-ordinator, “Your quarter final battle is about to begin.”

Blue immediately returned all of his Pokémon to their Poké Balls and jumped to his feet. Had the match to decide his opponent finished that long ago?

“Who’s my opponent?” asked Blue.

“Steven Stone,” answered the co-ordinator curtly as he led Blue out of the room.

As Blue followed the co-ordinator out of the changing room and into the field, he thought about his next opponent. Although he had refused to watch the battles of his potential opponents, he had done a lot of research into them. Steven Stone was the son of a rich business owner, a Steel type specialist and, once upon a time, the Champion of Hoenn. His team included a Metagross, an Aggron and some other Steel type Hoenn Pokémon that Blue didn’t know a massive amount about, having only visited Hoenn once. Unfortunately, Blue hadn’t studied Steven a great deal. Blue generally didn’t take type specialists very seriously and had never expected Steven to get all the way to the quarter finals.

When Blue arrived on the field, though, he could tell that Steven Stone was not just any type specialist. The young man had intricately styled blue-grey hair, a sharp, black suit worn over a white shirt and a red tie with jagged, purple stripes running down the front of it. However, that wasn’t what set Steven apart from other trainers that Blue had battled. It was his eyes. They spelt out determination and power. Blue could tell that Steven wasn’t just a little rich boy whose father had bought him some strong Pokémon. He was, as Blue himself had told Alakazam, the real deal.

Looking down at his own attire, Blue felt a little underdressed compared to Steven. He had done nothing extravagant with his hair – he just wore his brown hair spiked up like he did every day. He had brown cargo trousers on and wore the black jacket that Giovanni had given him years ago over his favourite black polo shirt. Still, he was adamant that he wouldn’t be intimidated by his opponent. Once he let that happen, it would all be over.

Blue took a deep breath and took his focus off of Steven. He looked around him and saw the audience. The arena was completely packed out. It was as if every seat had been sold and then twice as many people had somehow snuck in. Of course, this was the biggest battling event since Samia himself had become the Grand Champion so the turnout was hardly surprising. He quickly scanned the audience and managed to spot a few ‘Blue Oak’ banners, as well as a few ‘Steven Stone’ banners.

Blue looked to his belt. Now wasn’t the time to be thinking about fan bases. He was just three battles away from becoming the Grand Champion. Then no one would be able to say that Red was a better trainer than him. He slowly ran his right hand over the Poké Balls on his belt as he tried to decide which Pokémon to open with, all the while remembering that Steven Stone was a Steel specialist.

Rhydon was unlikely to last very long. Its Rock typing meant it was vulnerable to Steel type attacks. Although Steel types were weak against Ground types such as Rhydon, Rhydon’s success would still be dependent on the gargantuan rhinoceros out speeding its foe, which Blue was not confident that it was capable of.

Alakazam also didn’t seem like a very good choice. Although Blue generally referred to Alakazam as his strongest Pokémon, it still wouldn’t be much use against a Steel specialist. Alakazam’s moves were Psychic, Ghost and Electric typed and Steel Pokémon were resistant to both Psychic and Ghost and many were dual type Ground, which would be resistant to Electric.

Pidgeot, too, didn’t seem likely to land many hits on Pokémon with iron defence. Flying and Normal type moves did little to pierce Steel types.

Exeggutor was dual type Grass and Psychic. Again, both of these types weren’t much use against Steel types. Of course, Exeggutor could easily put Steven’s Pokémon to sleep before going on a slow offensive so it wouldn’t be entirely useless.

Gyarados too had quite a range of attacks and would easily be able to hold its own against a Steel type.

In spite of running his hand across his five other Pokémon, though, Blue knew what he was going to use – his Fire type – the Pokémon that had a type advantage over Steven’s entire team. More conservative trainers would have saved this Pokémon for later but Blue liked to go out guns blazing and show his opponent who was in charge as early as possible.

“Go! Charizard!” yelled Blue at the top of his voice, throwing the appropriate Poké Ball out in front of him.

The huge dragon burst out of its Poké Ball with a ferocious screech and let off a jet of fire into the air before flying a quick lap around the arena. A collective gasp of amazement came from the audience as the impressive Pokémon showed itself off.

Blue smiled; getting his first Pokémon back from Red was the best decision he had ever made. Similarly, giving it to Red in the first place was the worst decision he had ever made.

“I see,” muttered Steven in response to Blue’s selection, “I thought you might open with that Pokémon.”

Blue was a little concerned that he had acted rashly, giving Steven the chance to see his first Pokémon before choosing his own but he soon realised that Steven had been holding a Poké Ball in his hand from when he walked into the arena.

Steven threw the Poké Ball out into the arena, opposite Charizard. A huge, bipedal creature which resembled a metal Rhydon with two horns on its forehead instead of one by its nose burst out. Just one year ago, Blue would have been dumbfounded seeing this beast but now he knew what it was. Aggron, one of Steven’s most well known Pokémon.

Blue smiled to himself. Before his year of preparation for this competition, he knew how this battle would have ended. Blue would have, with his poor knowledge of Hoenn Pokémon, assumed Aggron to have been either a pure Steel type or a dual Steel and Ground type. He would have therefore deduced that the metallic giant was vulnerable to Fire type attacks and had Charizard hit it with a Fire Blast. Of course, in reality Aggron was dual type Steel and Rock, meaning that it wasn’t vulnerable to Fire type attacks at all. Aggron would have hit back with a Rock typed attack, probably either Rock Slide or Rock Blast, which Charizard was incredibly vulnerable to and would have probably been knocked out in a single hit as a result.

Fortunately, Blue had done a lot of training in the last year and now knew a lot about almost every Pokémon from Hoenn and Sinnoh, as well as those from Kanto and Johto. Having a grandfather with a comprehensive encyclopaedia on all of the nation’s Pokémon definitely came in handy. Not only that but Blue had also taught his Pokémon a lot of new moves and had extensively practised on how to get the most out of these techniques.

“Flying Brick Break!” commanded Blue fiercely.

This was a drill Blue had run with Charizard on many occasions. The theory was this – Charizard would build up speed by flying around the arena, leaving its opponent unable to land hits, and then use the extra propulsion to land a Brick Break with twice as much force as it would usually deliver. Since both Steel types and Rock types were vulnerable to Fighting type moves, this would be more than enough to take out Steven’s Aggron without Charizard taking any damage whatsoever. Blue couldn’t help but let out a little chuckle as Charizard burst into the sky.

Steven looked up at the Fire type beast as it flew above. He looked composed but Blue was sure he must have been terrified. The only thing he could do to save Aggron was switch Pokémon and even then he’d have to sacrifice another Pokémon in exchange.

“Thunder,” ordered Steven calmly.

Blue’s heart stopped. Had he heard Steven correctly? Perhaps his Flying Brick Break technique wasn’t unstoppable after all. As Charizard flew in a circle near the top of the arena, building up speed and completely unaware of what was going on below, Aggron roared and pointed its horns towards the ceiling. Electricity started building up between the two horns and sent a few small jolts upwards. Blue chuckled to himself – was that Aggron’s version of a Thunder? If so, he had nothing to worry about.

Unfortunately, it soon became clear that that wasn’t Aggron’s version of a Thunder at all as a huge bolt of lightning flew down from above and hit Charizard dead on. There were screams of shock and excitement from the audience. Sweat dripped slowly down Blue’s forehead. Charizard began plummeting out of the sky and a smile broke out on Steven’s face. Blue hissed in rage – it was just as infuriating as battling Red. Blue couldn’t believe that Steven had managed to turn this amazing situation around so easily and stomped his feet in frustration. He couldn’t even look at what was going on, instead he just focused on which of his Pokémon he needed to use next.

Suddenly, a thousand gasps of excitement could be heard from the on looking spectators and a blood curdling war cry from Charizard. The dragon Pokémon hadn’t been knocked out by the Thunder attack! Blue tried to figure out why and remembered that Aggron weren’t known for their special attack and so, although the attack had done a lot of damage, it had been nowhere near enough to knock Charizard out. Charizard’s war cry had come as it managed to regain control over its trajectory after its tumble out of the sky following Aggron’s Thunder attack. Less than a second later, Steven’s Aggron lay unconscious on the ground, having taken a not quite perfectly executed Flying Brick Break attack from Blue’s Charizard.

Blue let out a deep sigh of relief as Steven retreated Aggron to its Poké Ball. He didn’t feel happy though. Charizard should have come out of that battle ready to easily take out a second opponent but instead it was battered, bruised and struggling to breathe. Blue doubted it would last much longer.

“Never take victory for granted,” said Steven, “When you do, you’re sure to lose.”
 
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Re: Stainless Rivalry [Lugion & Gastly's Mama collaborative crossover]

oh wow awesome this seems like it will be really interesting to read
 
Re: Stainless Rivalry [Lugion & Gastly's Mama collaborative crossover]

This, I like. The battle was well done, not to mention the stats were used quite well. That must be one hell of a Charizard.

As for Alakazam, I have a feeling that arrogance is going to come up later, considering he didn't even battle this time. It also sounds like Blue's been a busy man since taking over the gym. I'm curious as to whether or not he's fully moved on past losing the title of Champion.

This is going to be good.
 
Re: Stainless Rivalry [Lugion & Gastly's Mama collaborative crossover]

Heheh, it's pretty funny that you made a crossover. :D
 
Re: Stainless Rivalry [Lugion & Gastly's Mama collaborative crossover]

Whoa! A crossover of some of the best fics in the workshop...this is good. Really good, I'm wondering if we'll have a POV switch? A very original idea, that I want to see play out!
 
Re: Stainless Rivalry [Lugion & Gastly's Mama collaborative crossover]

Welp, looks like the idea of our crossover(s, I need to ask you something) won't be hated =P

I love this first chapter. It shows Blue's learnt from his defeat and taken steps to learn from it =3. I can't wait for chapter 2, but one question remains: does this mean Stainless Steel is part of the Rivalsverse?
 
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This is great,finally Blue returns.

I really like how you opposed Blue's fiery and Steven's calm natures.

Also one question:Did Red die in the meantime?I mean he's not mentioned participating and he's one of the most powerful trainers ever.And would that mean Blue got his Charizard back after Red's death?
 
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I'm wondering if we'll have a POV switch?!

Yup. Each chapter will alternate between Steven and Blue, and I believe SCND will be writing the final chapter from Alanah's POV.
 
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Yup. Each chapter will alternate between Steven and Blue, and I believe SCND will be writing the final chapter from Alanah's POV.

And Alanah POV will definitely be interesting...nice to see some of the best authors in the WW collaborating in one story! It makes it 100 times more epic!
 
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:eek: (where'd my jaw go?) Combining some of the best stories in the garden, hell yeah I want more!
 
Re: Stainless Rivalry [Lugion & Gastly's Mama collaborative crossover]

Agreed. It's a very cool concept to crossover your two fics' worlds! The battle had the same awesome style that Gastly's Mama is known for. If I understand right, you and Lugion will be alternating, which is good. Two of the best authors in the Garden! Should be amazing!
 
This is very interesting! I'm very much intrigued. Can't wait to read more!

I did spot an error or two.
''which Charizard was incredibly vulnerable too and would have probably been knocked out in a single hit as a result.'' The too should be to.

I noticed you always used something like, "said [insert name here]". It's not that it's wrong, I just think maybe switching it would be a nice addition to the story - but that's just me.

Also, the spelling is, what, British? I'm not really sure - all I know is we spell two words differently - realized and encyclopedia.

Anyways, both of you (assuming this chapter was a collaborated effort) really described everything amazingly. Not too much and not too little. And you knew, in a way, where to put the details.

Great job!!

~MM

EDIT: Now, I should go off to read the other stories (Stainless Steel and Rival's Story..). Should I also read Red's Return and the other fics? Are they needed so I can understand this story better? Also, what happened to Red? He's not here? XD
 
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Thank you all for the kind words =D I'm glad you all seem to be enjoying this so far!

Heheh, it's pretty funny that you made a crossover. :D

Good funny, I hope... Well, even if it's bad funny, I'm glad I have entertained you.

I love this first chapter. It shows Blue's learnt from his defeat and taken steps to learn from it =3. I can't wait for chapter 2, but one question remains: does this mean Stainless Steel is part of the Rivalsverse?

No, in fact, if you wanted to get technical, this story is set in the 'verse of Seasons with Blue and Steven having walked straight out of their respective 'verses with no tangible reason why. The first rule of crossovers is that it doesn't have to make sense.

Also one question:Did Red die in the meantime?I mean he's not mentioned participating and he's one of the most powerful trainers ever.And would that mean Blue got his Charizard back after Red's death?

Hm... I originally explicitly mentioned Red in this chapter but I guess I edited that out. Well, I'm not usually one for authorial intrusion so feel free to make what you will of Red's absence, I'm not going to elaborate.

This is very interesting! I'm very much intrigued. Can't wait to read more!

I did spot an error or two.
''which Charizard was incredibly vulnerable too and would have probably been knocked out in a single hit as a result.'' The too should be to.

I noticed you always used something like, "said [insert name here]". It's not that it's wrong, I just think maybe switching it would be a nice addition to the story - but that's just me.

Also, the spelling is, what, British? I'm not really sure - all I know is we spell two words differently - realized and encyclopedia.

Anyways, both of you (assuming this chapter was a collaborated effort) really described everything amazingly. Not too much and not too little. And you knew, in a way, where to put the details.

Great job!!

~MM

EDIT: Now, I should go off to read the other stories (Stainless Steel and Rival's Story..). Should I also read Red's Return and the other fics? Are they needed so I can understand this story better? Also, what happened to Red? He's not here? XD

Thanks! I'll change that now!

And this chapter was written by me, although Lugion and I have been planning together. He will write the even chapters while I will write the odd chapters.

This chapter did indeed use British spellings as I am British but, as Lugion is American, the next chapter will use American spellings! SCND is ALSO British though, so when he writes a chapter it'll ALSO be British spellings (I presume). Sorry for the confusion =P



Also, there should be no need to read Stainless Steel, Rival's Story or any others to enjoy this story, particularly in the later chapters, but, just for reference, it involves the characters of Stainless Steel, Rival's Story and Seasons by Some Colour No Doubt. This chapter (and probably only this chapter) makes a brief reference to my story Dragon Days but reading that won't really help you understand this any better at all.
 
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Two of my favourite authors collaborating on a single Fic?
Fantastic!

And well, I may have to and read Lugion's Stainless Steel right now, to see what I've missed!

Anyway!
A very interesting read indeed!
 
Wow. Really, really good. I'll try and give a proper review:

The first two paragraphs were a perfect form of summary. You covered all of the significant and/or relevant events quickly but in enough detail so I had an idea of where the whole thing was starting from.

However, and now I tell this to a lot of writers: you need to describe the environment. I mean, it was a pretty simple layout; just a changing room and then the stadium, but there's not a lot of atmosphere; or at least not as much as there could be. I got that it was a changing room, and there was a bench...what else? I get that it's a stadium, and I get there's an audience around it, and I get there's Blue and Steven...what else? I feel this was a gaping hole in a pretty much perfect chapter. Here's what I would have done:

Over this day alone, Blue had fought through several fierce battles, securing himself a safe place in the quarter finals. He sat on a wooden bench in a relatively small changing room, alone apart from his Pokémon, who were all out of their Poké Balls, each of their eyes fixed upon him. Blue began wringing his hands in anxiety, and began to search all around the room for something to distract him.

The changing room could probably only fit fifteen people in it, and even that would be a rather tight squeeze. The bench that Blue sat on was aligned with the decaying, sky-blue wall directly behind it. He had inspected the other two benches; one stood opposite him and the other barely a metre to his right. They had both been coated in grimy, sickening substances. On the wall between Blue and the bench to his right was a battered, unused coat rack, held in place by a pair of aged nails. The floor beneath his feet was tiled and one of the few perfect objects in the room. It wasn't exactly glamorously clean, but Blue was able to walk from one place to another without slipping or placing his ill-fated foot in anything resembling Grimer offspring. Each of Blue's six Pokemon stood or sat on the floor, each of their eyes filled with one clear message: I'm nervous, Blue.

Oh my God, did I just correct the G-Mama?


Other than that, the description was brilliant. It was elegant and flowed smoothly, and you clearly has an expansive vocabulary. Steven, even though I already know what he looks like, seemed like a completely new figure with the adjectives you provided. Blue; less so, but I could still picture him to be a walking, talking person, rather than the pixelated sprite from HG/SS.

Personalities were perfect as well. The characteristics of everyone was clearly expressed through their actions, motions and speech. I could picture what that person would act like in many situations, and that's pretty much indispensable for this kind of work.

It's too early to comment on the storyline, but it does seem to have its ups and downs. The way the battle progressed was excellent; that was done very well. However, the time lapse in the changing room wasn't as good. From what I would guess, Blue would have been sitting there, cringing over his nerves in spite of the presence of all his friends. From Blue's perspective, time would have passed slowly. I remember last time I was sitting in the green room with my band in our first gig, as I was waiting for our turn, I was extremely nervous, and I jumped at the slightest noise as if it was the door opening for someone to tell me it was gig time.

Apart from everything negative I mentioned, perfect chapter! Can't wait for #2.
 
Sorry this took so incredibly long, but we haven't given up on this! I was busy back in May, and had been dealing with cases of both Writer's Block and Lazy Ass throughout June, but the new chapter is finished!

Chapter 2


Steven smiled slightly as he returned Aggron to his Poké Ball. “Interesting choice of attack,” he mumbled to himself. He could already tell that this was going to be a hard-fought battle on both sides. Evidently, Blue was much better at thinking creatively and adapting to situations than he'd been when he'd fought Red for the title of Champion in their home region.

Steven had seen videos of Blue's battles before. He always seemed to have a plan going in, and tried to be flexible during battle, but it was evident from the loss of his title, though no one but the two combatants themselves really knew what happened, that he hadn't been good enough. Steven himself would've been surprised to see Red enter the Champion's chamber so soon as much as he would've been surprised to see Wallace enter in the same fashion.

The truth was Wallace had indeed arrived to challenge Steven years after their adventures had ended, and Steven was more than happy to step down. It was, quite simply, boring, since nothing was happening. Challengers came and left empty-handed infrequently, and there was no evil to fight. Steven would much rather have been searching for rare stones in the depths of the Meteor Falls, or the Dewford Cave.

But now was not the time to dwell on the past, however pleasant or unpleasant.

“Never take victory for granted,” Steven said aloud. “When you do, you're sure to lose.”

Steven removed his next Poké Ball from his waist and hurled it over the field, revealing a round black Pokémon with many red eyes.

“This Pokémon and I have been through a lot together,” Steven said.

“It doesn't look so tough!” Blue said. “Charizard, Flamethrower!”

“Light Screen!” Steven countered. A jet of flames erupted from Charizard's open mouth as it bore down on Claydol from the air, but a glowing translucent pink wall formed around Claydol, sparing it from the fiery attack.

“Now, Claydol, knock it out of the sky with AncientPower,” Steven said as the flames stopped.

Claydol's eyes shut tight as it concentrated, lifting chunks of the concrete battlefield into the air. The rocks circled around Claydol, and Blue shouted, “Charizard, get away!”

Charizard wheeled around in mid-air and rocketed away as fast as its wings could carry it, but it was too late. One of the rocks hit its mark, smashing into Charizard's back and slamming the fire-type into the ground. It growled weakly.

Blue seemed only marginally shocked. Steven guessed that Blue had realized how little more Charizard could take, but not the extent of Claydol's power. Charizard disappeared in a flash of light, and the concrete shattered against the ground.

Blue's next Pokémon would've sent a shiver down a younger Steven's spine. He knew very well the atrocities any Pokémon was capable of, but this particular species seemed to be a favorite among those planning any sort of violence.

The slender blue serpent bellowed.

“Gyarados, use Dragon Dance!” Blue shouted.

Steven watched warily as Gyarados slithered to and fro on its side of the field in a dance that would have a psychological effect on it, causing its physical attacks to deal more damage and its speed to increase. Steven would have to counter the increase in physical attack power with an increase in physical defense, but it would have to wait until just the right time.

“Hold steady, Claydol,” Steven said reassuringly.

And just as Steven had expected, Blue gave his next command: “Waterfall!”

Gyarados' body became enveloped in a sheet of water, and it sprang toward Claydol with a ferocity Steven hadn't witnessed since his days as a rookie trainer. Steven quickly calculated the distance between the two Pokémon and estimated the time it would take for Gyarados to hit its mark.

“Now! Reflect!” Steven said. Claydol immediately erected a glowing translucent purple wall that blocked Gyarados' attack and sent the mighty serpentine water-type recoiling back to the ground.

Blue growled from his side of the field. “No defense is impenetrable for us! Gyarados, get up and use Dragon Dance again!”

Gyarados rose to its full height, snarling at the relatively tiny Claydol that spun in midair so calmly, before once again swaying and slithering to an inaudible aria.

“Now, get in close and try Waterfall again!” Blue said.

Gyarados lunged forward, its body once again veiled in a thick watery current.

“Claydol, Reflect, and then use Ancient Power!” Steven countered.

Gyarados once again collided with an invisible barrier, and was then repelled by concrete boulders ripped from the ground by Claydol's Ancient Power attack, coming to rest in a heap at the far end of the battlefield.

“Now, Claydol, trap it with Earthpower,” Steven said.

Claydol's eyes began to glow and its body began to spin faster as the concrete all around Gyarados began to split and crumble into crevasses formed in the ground beneath. Gyarados seemed shaken by this move, but it was obvious that it wasn't about to just give up. Especially not with its trainer commanding it.

“Gyarados, use Earthquake!” Blue commanded. The battlefield shook violently, causing the fissures to widen and expand.

Steven gave a perplexed look. “I'm honestly surprised, Blue. I thought you would know that ground-type moves affect neither of our Pokémon. It's a careless mistake, and it's going to cost you! Claydol, use Ancient Power!”

Blue smirked. “Gyarados, dive into the cracks and use Hydro Pump to fill them with water!”

To Steven's surprise, Gyarados avoided Claydol's attack and disappeared into the web-like network of crevasses that encompassed the battlefield. Almost immediately, a torrent of water filled the cracks almost to the surface, leaving Gyarados completely in its own element.

“Mistake, huh?” Blue retorted.

Steven stared at the water, almost scanning it, trying to detect any hint of movement. “Clever. Very clever,” Steven admitted aloud. But he could still restrict Gyarados' movements another way.

“Claydol, use Ancient Power to block off the crevasses,” Steven said.

Several previously-scattered chunks of concrete rose into the air and wedged themselves tightly into the crevasses at key points. Even if they couldn't stand against Gyarados' strength, Steven would see the movement and be able to counter effectively.

“Gyarados, get under Claydol and use Hydro Pump!” Blue commanded.

Steven's eyes poured over the watery network between him and his opponent. There was very little movement at the top- he was sure this was because Blue had trained Gyarados to be nigh-undetectable under the water. After all, what use would water be as cover if your Pokémon couldn't move around without causing a wake?

There was a ripple here and there, but that was to be expected- not only were there multitudes of people watching, moving restlessly in anticipation, and causing vibrations all throughout the stadium, there was also the factor of the air conditioning and the building's natural air currents causing disturbances on the water's surface.

There. Near one of the concrete boulders. “Earthpower!” Steven said, pointing at the spot where he'd seen the movement.

The boulder dissolved as if it were made of powder, and Gyarados burst from the surface, sailing through the air just ahead of alternating jets of earthen material, bellowing loudly, before crashing back beneath the surface and disappearing once again.

“Claydol, use Ancient Power again! Close Gyarados off!” Steven said.

From the more stable areas of the battlefield, more chunks of concrete were torn from the ground and dropped into the water.

“Now, use Ancient Power again, but use the rocks as a defense,” Steven said.

Claydol telekinetically ripped seven rocks from the ground and pulled them in close to its body, and they began to revolve around it.

Then Gyarados burst out of the water directly beneath Claydol, and a current of water shot from its gaping mouth.

“Claydol! Protect yourself with Light Screen!” Steven shouted.

An instant before the Hydro Pump made contact with Claydol's body, another pink barrier deflected the attack, sending a spray misting down over the battlefield and the crowd.

“Switch to Waterfall!” Blue countered.

Gyarados rocketed upward, smashing through Claydol's Light Screen, and just narrowly missing the Pokémon itself.

“That was too close,” Steven said to himself, before shouting, “Claydol! Use your rocks now!”

Claydol seemed to nod in acknowledgment, and all seven rocks slammed into Gyarados' side, and the titan collapsed to the ground.

“Gyarados, retreat!” Blue ordered. “Get back in the water!”

Gyarados growled, weakly rolling itself back into its crevasse hiding place.

“Claydol, press your assault! Keep using Ancient Power!” Steven said.

Claydol advanced across the field, tearing chunks of concrete away from the openings of the cracks and sending them tumbling down into the water below.

After a few seconds, there was a pained screech from beneath the waves, and Gyarados' head broke the surface before collapsing onto the adjacent concrete. The crowd roared, a bizarre mixture of disapproval and delight that he'd only experienced once before.

Blue grimaced at the sight of his Gyarados lying unconscious there like that; Steven was sure that he wasn't used to it being defeated, especially not like that. It disappeared in a flash of red light as its owner returned it.

Steven glanced at Claydol. It was miraculously almost entirely unharmed. Though Gyarados had most definitely given them both a run for their money, Claydol could've easily ended up in much the same way as Aggron had, with Gyarados' typing advantage.

Either way, Blue now had to call out his next Pokémon. And Steven would have to continue to outmaneuver and outsmart his foe.
 
Hello all! After another inexcusably long break, the next instalment of Stainless Rivalry has arrived! I apologise profusely for the delay. Please read and reply!

I hope you enjoy! (This chapter's a little faster paced than the previous ones as we're getting towards the climax of the battle now.)

Chapter 3​

Sweat dripped down Blue Oak’s forehead as he tried to decide what his next Pokémon should be. With his Charizard and Gyarados knocked out he was left with Alakazam, Rhydon, Pidgeot and Exeggutor, none of whom were particularly well equipped for taking on Steel type Pokémon, which was the speciality of his opponent, Steven Stone. Fortunately, after having his Aggron knocked out, Steven had resorted to using his Claydol, which wasn’t actually a Steel type. Blue realised that this was probably his best opportunity to use his Rhydon, which was a strong Pokémon but, due to its Rock typing, vulnerable to Steel attacks.

Blue threw the appropriate Poké Ball into the arena and it exploded to reveal the gigantic stone rhinoceros, which let out a ferocious war cry as it stared down its foe. Blue opened his mouth to give a command but, to his surprise, Steven’s Claydol disappeared in a flash of red light.

“I don’t think Claydol is the right Pokémon for this battle,” announced Steven casually, “I think I’ll use Metagross instead.”

A buzz of excitement was heard from the audience at the mention of ‘Metagross’, Steven’s most famous Pokémon. Blue didn’t know much about Steven but he knew what a Metagross was – a formidable Steel/Psychic Pokémon. Steven hurled a Poké Ball out into the arena, out of which burst what appeared to be a bandaged, blue Steel orb supported by four limbs protruding from its head. Rhydon growled as it appeared. Metagross did not make a noise.

“Earthquake!” commanded Blue, hoping to get the upper hand on Steven.

Although Rhydon was vulnerable to Steel typed attacks, Blue also knew that Metagross was vulnerable to Ground typed attacks and figured that if he took Metagross out quickly, he wouldn’t have to worry about Rhydon’s weaknesses. Unfortunately, Steven was too sharp to be caught out by a trick that simple.

“Magnet Rise, Metagross! Quickly!”

As Rhydon stomped its feet on the ground wildly, causing the whole arena to shake, Metagross floated into the air where it was completely invulnerable to any Ground based attack. Steven stared intently into Blue’s eyes as Rhydon’s attack had no effect whatsoever.

“Now that Earthquake was a mistake. There’s no denying it.”

Blue growled in annoyance.

“Rhydon, use Smack Down!” he yelled.

A look of surprise flashed across Steven’s face. He had not been expecting this. This was not the first time Blue had encountered a levitating foe and, for that very reason, he had equipped his Rhydon with the move Smack Down. A Pokémon using this move would jump into the air and drag its opponent back to the ground, dealing damage and making it vulnerable to Ground typed attacks once more.

“Magnet Rise again as soon as you’re on the floor!” commanded Steven coolly, regaining his composure.

Rhydon leapt into the air and grabbed its floating foe by the sides of its head and pulled it to the floor, smashing it against the arena floor. Unfortunately for Blue, as this was a Rock typed attack it did a minimal amount of damage and, just as Steven had commanded, Metagross began slowly rising back to its previous position as soon as it hit the floor. Blue knew that if the two of them continued using those two moves repeatedly that Metagross would eventually be knocked out and Rhydon would be victorious but it would be a risky stratagem. If Steven made one unexpected move, which he almost certainly would, Rhydon wouldn’t stand a chance. That didn’t matter though, after the first Magnet Rise, Blue’s plan had never been to hit Metagross with another Earthquake anyway.

“You know what to do, Rhydon!” shouted Blue, “Just like we practised!”

Blue couldn’t help but grin when he noticed the look of confusion on his opponent’s face as Rhydon held on to its foe, rising up into the air with it. Steven looked unsure how to deal with the situation. Rhydon was grabbing on to the top of Metagross’ head, making it practically impossible for Metagross to attack without a major risk of hurting itself. Of course, Blue was sure that, to the unknowing onlooker, Rhydon’s position on Metagross’ head probably looked generally harmless. After all, Rhydon could only really use Normal, Rock and Ground typed moves; with Ground moves being useless while floating in the air and Steel types, such as Metagross, being heavily resistant to both Normal and Rock typed attacks.

“Shake it off, Metagross!” commanded Steven, “Move as much as you can and send that rhino back down to the ground where it belongs!”

Metagross began shaking wildly, Rhydon barely able to hold on.

“Now, Rhydon! Hit it with a Horn Drill!” yelled Blue excitedly.

There was a shocked gasp from the audience at this command. Horn Drill was practically never used in competitive matches – its accuracy was far too unreliable but, at point blank range, there was no way Rhydon could miss. Using all of its strength to hold on to Metagross, Rhydon sank its spinning horn into the Steel Pokémon’s head. Metagross began to move slower and slower until the pain became too much to bear and it fell unconscious, plummeting to the ground. It was clear that Rhydon was used to using that technique as it managed to jump off of Metagross’ head with perfect timing before it hit the floor.

“I make that 2-2!” yelled Blue across the arena, “Now send out your next Pokémon so I can take the lead!”

Steven did not rise to Blue’s goading, instead simply retreating Metagross to its Poké Ball and picking another one from his belt. Blue couldn’t help but be irritated by his calmness. The Steel specialist threw his chosen Poké Ball into the arena, revealing a large, blue, bug-like Pokémon with claws, a shell, a few feathers near its neck and red eyes that Blue recognised as Armaldo. He smiled to himself, proudly. Against everyone’s advice, he had spent quite some time studying extinct Pokémon, like Armaldo, from Hoenn and Sinnoh just in case they somehow made their way to the competition. His logic being that, if he could, as he did, possess an Aerodactyl, it was far from unthinkable that a foreign trainer could possess an extinct Pokémon of their own. Blue was also pleased to see Steven using another Pokémon that lacked his signature Steel typing, meaning Blue would not have to switch Rhydon out.

“Stone Edge!” commanded Blue, wasting no time.

He knew that Armaldo was dual type Bug and Rock, which meant it was weak against Rock typed attacks.

“Metal Claw!” retorted Steven.

Armaldo darted towards Rhydon and struck it with its claws, which briefly flashed metallic silver as Rhydon summoned a barrage of sharp stones up from the ground beneath Armaldo. Both Pokémon appeared heavily damaged from the clash and retreated a few feet away from one another in an attempt to recover from their respective injuries. Blue could tell that Armaldo was far worse off than Rhydon was but he also knew that that was irrelevant. Rhydon was on less than half health, which meant that both Pokémon could be taken out with just one more hit and Armaldo was faster, which meant Rhydon was in trouble. Fortunately though, Blue had prepared for a situation like this.

“Stopping Stone Edge, Rhydon!” commanded Blue cryptically.

Rhydon nodded indicating obedience but did not move. Steven stared at the Rock Pokémon for a few seconds, clearly building up an idea of what tactics Blue was employing. The idea was that Blue would use the fact that Armaldo’s Metal Claw was a close range attack, while Stone Edge was not, to his advantage. Rather than trying to hit Armaldo with Stone Edge as quickly as possible, which would allow Armaldo, the quicker Pokémon, to gain the upper hand, Rhydon would choose a small area of the arena on the path between it and Armaldo and launch a Stone Edge attack there just as Armaldo passed over it on its way to land its Metal Claw, knocking it out and ensuring that it never reached its target.

There were a few seconds of silence as nothing happened. Blue’s heart thumped as he silently prayed that Steven would not figure out his tactic. The entire audience sat with bated breath, not one of them daring to make a sound that might interrupt the spectacular battle going on in front of them.

Suddenly, Steven cleared his throat.

“Water Gun,” he commanded.

Blue froze. He couldn’t believe what he was hearing. Rhydon was going to be knocked out and there was nothing he could do about it. He had never expected Steven to equip his Armaldo with Water Gun. It was such a low power attack that he couldn’t imagine it being useful in many battles and it was the only Water type attack that Armaldo could learn so Blue hadn’t accounted for it using one. In spite of its low power, Rhydon recoiled in pain and fell to the ground as it was hit; since it was dual type Rock and Ground it had a spectacular vulnerability to Water, to the extent that even the weakest attacks could deal a great amount of damage.

“Why didn’t you just open with Water Gun?” snapped Blue furiously without even retreating Rhydon to its Poké Ball.

“If I had done that, Rhydon would have beaten Armaldo,” explained Steven calmly, “Water Gun would not have knocked Rhydon out from full health but it would have done a lot of damage. You would have been able to prepare a counter for Armaldo using Water Gun again. This way I was able to catch you by surprise.”

Blue retreated Rhydon to its Poké Ball, fuming. He stopped to take a few deep breaths. In his younger years, he had lost many Pokémon and battles due to his bad temper but, since had had gotten older, he had stopped making snap decisions when he got in a mood. After a few seconds of calming himself down, Blue put his hand to his belt to pick his next Pokémon with a calm frame of mind.

His remaining Pokémon were Alakazam, Pidgeot and Exeggutor. Blue selected Exeggutor, although it would fall to even one Bug typed attack, which he was sure Armaldo would be equipped with, he was confident that he could end the battle before that happened.

“Wood Hammer!” commanded Blue as soon as the Coconut Pokémon was ready for battle.

“X-Scissor!” countered Steven.

As predicated, there was the powerful Bug type move. Fortunately, Exeggutor had the speed advantage and was able to hit Armaldo with its Wood Hammer attack before taking any damage. Wood Hammer was an incredibly powerful Grass typed move, which dealt as much damage as Solar Beam but without the necessity to charge up first. That enormous base power coupled with Exeggutor’s power boost when using Grass type moves made the attack obscenely powerful. The only drawback was that the attack was so reckless that Exeggutor invariably caused itself a lot of damage when executing it.

Exeggutor burst forwards, as Armaldo raised its claws to attack, violently knocking the ancient Pokémon to the ground unconscious. A huge grin broke out across Blue’s face. It was the easiest knock out that he had managed for this entire battle.

“I wouldn’t get so cocky if I were you,” said Steven seeing Blue’s smile, “All you’ve done is bring it to 3-3 and with the damage your Exeggutor got from that attack, I’ve still got the upper hand.”

Although he dropped his smile, Blue’s confidence was not shaken by this comment. He watched intently as Steven sent out his next Pokémon. An audible gasp was heard from the audience as a plant like creature with a long neck and four stubby limbs burst out of a Poké Ball. Blue recognised it as a Cradily – another long extinct Hoenn Pokémon. Blue didn’t waste time wondering how Steven had come to get his hands out not one but two ancient Pokémon, but instead started thinking about how he was going to defeat it.

“Sludge Wave,” commanded Steven, cutting into Blue’s thoughts.

“Light Screen!” shouted Blue, in a panic.

A wave of purple liquid quickly flew across the arena from Cradily to Exeggutor, with the latter barely managing to summon a Light Screen shield quickly enough to resist the onslaught. Blue knew that Exeggutor was weak against Poison type attacks and that one that powerful was sure to knock it out. The attack was so effective, in fact, that, even with the protection of the Light Screen, Exeggutor sustained a fair amount of damage. This, along with the damage it gave to itself after its reckless Wood Hammer against Armaldo, meant its remaining health was at a critical level.

“Sludge Wave,” repeated Steven.

Blue didn’t have time to think of a way for Exeggutor to get out of this mess but that didn’t mean Exeggutor’s contribution to the battle was over.

“Toxic!” commanded Blue.

As the wave of sludge surged towards it, Exeggutor launched a small blob of poison of its own that fired forwards and landed on Cradily, seeping into its pores. Exeggutor was knocked out but left Cradily with an intense poison that would become more and more venomous the longer the battle lasted. Blue was all too aware that he was now down to two Pokémon, his Pidgeot and Alakazam while Steven still had three including his Cradily. It would be tough but he knew it was still possible for him to win if he gave it his all.
 
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