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Starting a Pokemon comic, cause there isnt enough

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DJ Professah K

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So I started a Pokemon comic, based off Heartgold/Soulsilver, if you wanna check it out the banner in my signature links to it, just click it (it goes to a deviantArt, not some random site)

I dont know BB code to well so thats why I didnt just post them in this forum post haha, hope yall enjoy
 
tl;dr, your comics are way too wordy, remind me of CAD in the worst way. Art's good though, I enjoy the images in your signature in all their wordlessness.
 
Steampunk Abortions said:
tl;dr, your comics are way too wordy, remind me of CAD in the worst way. Art's good though, I enjoy the images in your signature in all their wordlessness.
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Haha thanks for the criticism, I will keep that in mind. Hopefully that will be something I can get rid of in future issues.

And thanks for the compliments everyone
 
These are AWESOME! Totodile is crazy!!!!!!!
 
Hahaha, these are great. Love your style. The only thing that bothers me is the text...I feel like the text isn't fitting into the bubbles very well, like they're too big and also misaligned. It's okay to resize your text to be smaller, y'know. : D;; As for tl;dr-ness, it looks like your first one is the only really bad one.

Anywho. MOAR PLZ. D:
 
Haha these are awesome. I don't agree with the text comments at all. Keep 'em coming
 
yeah, this is really good stuff, i laso think the text is just fine, is easy to follow and very well put
 
When Gold was offered the Totodile, his face totally made me ROFL! XD

Keep it up :)
 
I like it, the crazy pidgy is my favorite. I like how you do the 'mons in your own, semi realistic style. Keep at it!
 
Awesome, glad people like it!
just posted another page, if people want to check it out
 
Comic number 2 made me laugh the hardest. Poor Totodile.

I'd have taken it.

EDIT: I can't stop thinking about comic 2. It almost made me pee.
 
Oh. My. Goodness! every time I read them I laugh, they're so hilarious.
 
I didn't expect to like this as much as I do. Keep it up.
And I like its tl;dr-ness (even though I did read it...)
 
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