Stranger in a strange world. (A Remix of my first Post here.)

[Light Fang]

Stranger in a strange world.
Chapter 1 A camping trip.

I’m out with my family and some of our relatives at a campsite next to a forest for summer vacation. Normally I don’t like to go camping but I have a bag with things I like to do like a story I write… Oh and my name is Zachery but I prefer to be called Zack for short I’m a seventeen year old boy who is 6’ 2” and weigh only a little over 100 hundred pounds. I may be a boy but people say I act like a girl but it doesn’t bother me…

“hahaha… Why am I writing this? I mean it’s not like someone is actually reading this…”
“BOO!”
“WHA!”

As I’m getting myself lost in my thoughts someone stunk up behind me then surprised me from behind causing me to fling my newest journal right into a puddle completely ruining it and when I turn around I see my cousin Kameron who is one of the six kids my Aunt Christen has and he sees the look of pure anger I have on my face.

“KAMERON!!!”
“Oops sorry…”
“Oh I’ll show you sorry!”
“Not if you can’t catch me.”
“You can’t get away!”

Kameron takes off like bullet but I dash off after him like a rocket shot out of a cannon right behind him. We run all over the campsites weaving through people jumping over benches back through my mom’s campsite, through Grandpa’s campsite, then through Kameron’s mom’s campsite and just as I’m about to grab him by the neck…

“Ha-ha LOW BRIDGE!”
“Oh ya righ-”

He wasn’t trying to trick me so I end up ramming face first into a low hanging branch and falling backwards onto my butt and holding my now throbbing nose tears streaming from my eyes. Then my cousin Kameron the cause of my pain starts to say he told me so and my sorrow of pain into pure unholy rage.

“Kameron…”
“Uh… yes Zack?”
“I’M GOING TO KILL YOU!”
“But I tried warning you.”
“Well here’s a warning for you.”
“What???”
“RUN!!!!!!”

He gets a minor head start then I zoom off after him but it was now pointless I catch him ball his shirt sleeve but I don’t do anything and I let him go because it would be pointless the Journal is ruined and I can’t get it back so hurting him would not bring it back it’s over.

“Kameron just leave me alone…”
“Ok I don’t want to get hurt…”

As Kameron runs back scared to his camp site I head back to my mom’s and I grab my bag of things, head over to a bench, and pull out my Pokémon in the REAL world story after a while I finish chapter 75 entitled Into the Heart of Darkness. I put it back into my bag then I pull out my DS and Pokémon Platinum version and I breed my Pokémon, feed them poffins, then I enter my shiny Eevee I named Cream into a cute contest while I tell myself…

“One can really lose their selves in these types of games because it’s like playing a better style of one’s own life. The Role Playing game series is just a virtual life which people play to enter a world that is better than their own life…”

I play for a while then I put it away and pull out a sketch book and a Pokémon book containing pictures and stats/data on all 493 Pokémon which includes Arceus and all his plate based forms plus it even shows what the Pokémon look like in a shiny form. I also pull out a digital camera that I had gotten from my dad for my 15th birthday.

“Sketching real animals or made up creatures from a book is fun but I hope I get lucky enough to take something’s picture… but if I’m just sketching Pokémon I will still be ok…”

To be continued…

 

[Vasili]

Ouch!
Anyway, i can't really give an opinion yet, because i don't really know yet what the plot is.

 

[Light Fang]

Chapter 2 Some Deer new friends.

With both my Camera and Sketch book and pencils out of my bag I walk off towards the woods in hopes of finding somewhere nice and quiet place to do some sketching eventually I come to a large dense area of trees so I walk into it and when I reach the center it’s a large open meadow with an old looking bench and it’s quiet with the trees encircling it keeping outside noise down.

“This is perfect! I can easily concentrate here plus it has nothing to distract me either.”

So I go over to the old bench and set my Pokémon book, Sketch book, and Pencils down as I take a seat. At first I start to sketch an Eevee from the book until I hear a twig snap and I look up for the most adorable sight ever a light baby fawn.

“Oh that is so adorable… Wait I have my camera!”

I quickly take a picture perfectly capturing the Fawn in an amazing picture then out of the forest comes a Doe and a Large antlered Deer which I can only assume is the parents which is correct when I see the Fawn joyful prance over to them.

“Amazing I have to get a picture of this sight because this might be my only chance ever to do it.”

I prepare my camera for another picture but I forgot to turn off the flash so when I take it the Flash startles them and they notice me which freaks me out because Deer my act fragile but they can hit hurt so I start to pack my things.

“Oh not good. Not not good… AH!”

I started to get up when I realize they are coming at me but I trip and when I got back up the little Fawn is staring straight into my eyes which makes me shout in surprise shock which scares the Fawn and cause it to back up and I notice the parents getting closer.

“Maybe if I try something nice I won’t get hurt.”

As I get back up I pull out of my bag a piece of bread I had planned on snacking on but instead I crumple it up in my hands until it is nothing but bread crumbs then I nervously stick out my hand with the bread crumbs in it out to the Fawn who stares at me then nervously approaches me.

“Don’t be scared I didn’t mean to scare you. You had just startled me. Here is something to say I’m sorry… and hopefully won’t cause me to get hurt…”

After a few nervous sniffs of my hand by the fawn it finally starts to lick the bread crumbs from my hand and the fawns tongue tickles my hand which makes me giggle and I lose all fear because right now is the cutest moment in my entire life.

“hehehehe it tickles so much…”

Next thing I know the Fawn finished the bread crumbs and licks me on the nose which makes me blush then I sneeze startling the fawn which it falls down revealing to me it is a girl but I help her up just as her mother comes over to me.

“Oh no please don’t hurt me… OH!!!”

I’m so nervous that a fall down into a sitting style my heart racing in fear then the Doe licks my face surprising me then I nervously move my hand toward her and again she shocks me by laying down beside me and letting me stroke her.

“this is so amazing… ah…”

The fawn gets comfy in my lap as I pet her mother lovingly even her father comes over and lays down near me and I am the happiest kid in the world.

“I wish this would never end it is so great…”

As I sit there the Doe obviously loving the petting I’m giving her and the Fawn fast asleep in my lap makes me feel sleepy but when I stopped petting the Doe she licked me again on the cheek so I continued to stroke her lovingly I wish I could take a picture of this but my camera is still the bench.

“Oh I wish I could take a picture…”

The deer I guess understood me as it catches to strap on my camera with its antler and it moves it to me I thank it which I find weird as I take the picture with the flash off to keep them at peace then the Doe falls asleep.

“I wish this would never end… That I could stay right here with these cute animals…”

I start to fall asleep when suddenly…

To be continued… (Sorry for the cliff hanger but I can’t just skip chapter 4 by giving away the cause of the conflict it will have.)

 

[Vasili]

The deer where i live wouldn't do that, by now you would be in the Hospital.

 

[Pokemon of Vulcan]

This is OK, although I find the run-on sentences a little bit annoying. The deer near my cabin wouldn't even consider doing that- they, in a contradiction to Vasili said, would run away as soon as you moved over just a tiny bit. Boring skittish deer.

 

[Vasili]

This is OK, although I find the run-on sentences a little bit annoying. The deer near my cabin wouldn't even consider doing that- they, in a contradiction to Vasili said, would run away as soon as you moved over just a tiny bit. Boring skittish deer.

Wow, you have boring deer. The deer where i live charge you.

 

[Light Fang]

Chapter 3 A wish to far.

As I continue to stroke the deer her fur feeling so soft to the touch and all my senses going to pleasant relaxing feelings all seems great until… ZOOM! As an arrow zoomed past and in the distance I spot my Uncle John ready another arrow into his bow and I quickly realize that I need to get the Deer away from here.

“NO QUICKLY RUNAWAY!”

I scare them causing them all to run off scared and while tears fill my eyes my Uncle John comes over to my furious and he yells in my face spit landing on my cheeks.

“WHY DID YOU DO THAT!? They would have been my greatest catch ever!”
“Well I actually was able to get close to them. A feat that people can only dream of and it was all ruined thanks to my own Uncle being a stupid HUNTER!”
“Hey give that back Zack!”

I had taken my Uncles bow and I started to run off toward the lake with him following close behind me trying to take back his bow but I reach the Lake first and I chuck his bow in which quickly sinks to the bottom.

“Now you have gone too far Zack!”
“So what!? OW!”

He slaps me then dives into the water after his bow but while he does that I ran tears streaming down my face back to the spot the deer used to be and I drop to my knees and start to my heart out and I say through my tears…

“I HATE EVERYONE! I wish I could be with people, creatures, or a combination of both just as long they actually cared for me!”

As I continue crying out my heart a sudden chill runs through my very being then a mysterious voice is heard and it says or maybe tries to give me warning…

“You should be careful what you wish for…”

I quickly look up but I don’t see anything so I put my head back down and cry more but this time I say something completely different.

“I wish I had someone who cared for me as much as I care for the Pokémon on my Pokémon Platinum game!”

There is a long and eerie silence which is swiftly broken when the same mysterious is heard saying…

“Make that wish again… It might just come true…”
“Ok… I wish I had someone who cared for me as much as I care for the Pokémon on my Pokémon Platinum game!”
“hehehe…”
“What!? Wait you can’t be a… Ughn…”

I look up swiftly but I suddenly collapse onto the ground as if all my energy was suddenly stolen from my very body at that very instance. I passed out and later woke up and all was completely black so I check my watch and see that it is 3 o’clock in the morning at first I’m still to dizzy to realize the time but after my head stops hurting enough that I finally do realize just how late it is I FREAK OUT BIG TIME!!!

“Ugh… my head… what time is it? 3 o’clock am… wow… WAIT 3 O’CLOCK AM! I have to get back to the campsite! Even though I will be yelled at for being late and throwing John’s bow into the lake… Why should I? Oh well if I go back now I won’t be in extra trouble…”

I let out a defeated like sigh as I pick up my bag and things but when I start to head to back to the campsite I trip over something landing on my face.

“Ok… Ouch… What did I trip over? What isn’t that the Fawn from before?”

I vaguely see in the darkness of the night a figure on the ground similar to the fawn I had been with earlier so I pull out a flashlight to check and sure enough it is! It wakes up from my light and licks me on the nose then it prances of a bit then it stops and looks back at me.

“What do you want me to follow you?”

It nods yes which surprises me then I follow it into the woods for quite a long while until we reach a stream with a waterfall crashing into it but the strange thing about it is the water remains calm even thou the water from the waterfall is crashing down into it.

“Whoa this is strange is this what you wanted to… Wait where did you go? WHOA!”

I looked away and see that the Fawn has disappeared then I look back at the strange stream and suddenly I am sucked into it but I didn’t make a splash and the water remained unchanged ever calm and pleasant.

“Whoa that is like something from a story I once wrote and if it is then I will suddenly pass out…”

Sure enough I suddenly do pass out my body feeling as if it’s both falling and floating…

To be continued…

 

[Light Fang]

Chapter 4 Stranger in a strange world.

I can feel myself still falling in the inky darkness off this strange place completely void of any and all light and sounds. I manage to open my eyes and look around. Every which way I turn my head I see the same thing--black emptiness, so I reclose my eyes and take a deep breath as I continue to fall. The only sound that I start to hear is my own heart beating.

“Hehehe...I’ve wished that I could escape life sometimes, but I guess I’m getting my wish now...The only thing I don’t know is where I’m going...”

I feel like I will fall forever, but suddenly I brace myself as if I’m about to hit something. I finally hit the ground, and I hear voices--some with shocked or scared tones in them, others with curiosity in them. Then one rings out in an angered tone.

“Will someone get this kid off of me!?”
“That Sue is one strange looking kid…”
“Ugh…my head…my eye sight…”

I open my eyes and everything is fuzzy. I vaguely see that I’m on top of a woman wearing a red kimono, that is until she shoves me off her and I get my glasses so I can see better.

“Oops I’m sorry miss-”

With my eyesight clearer, I notice that the woman in the Kimono I had fallen on has ears and nine tails similar to the Pokémon Ninetales. I stumble back in shock, and then I stutter in my speech.

“Y-y-you-you-you're-!" I stutter.
“I’m a what!?”
“AN ANTHRO NINETALES!”
“So, and you’re a Machamp that has a tan or pale skin condition," she says.
“No I’m a human!” I explain.

This causes the woman and everyone else to gasp. Then they laugh saying that is the funniest joke that they have ever heard. To prove my point, I pull out my Pokémon book and show the woman the picture of the Ninetales.

“Well if your really a Ninetales then why don’t you look like this!?” I ask.
“Oh, well, that’s simple; I like to be in this form.”
“This form!? No way you’re lying to me!”
“Fine here," she says.

The woman changes right before my eyes from an anthropic to the actual Pokémon, which scares the heck out of me, making back up into another girl. Judging by her ears and tail, I would guess she is an anthro Raichu.

“WHA! ANTHRO RAICHU!”
“Geez for a Machamp you sure are jumpy,” she says

I back away from her, and this time I bump into more of a Pokémorph Pikachu. I’m guessing she is young in her age.

“You should probably calm down.”
“Who are you to tell me to calm down!?” I ask.
“Well my names Pika," the Pikachu says.
“OK, I’ve heard that name before, but I have to get the heck out of here!”
“Wait you dropped your bag and DS… Wait, this can’t be! I know the owner of this game!”

Pika picks up my bag and DS, but when she looks at it, she instantly realizes that she knows the kid who plays the game, which then makes her realize that it’s me--the owner who, in terms, is her trainer.

“ZACK!”
“HEY LET ME GO!” I complain.

She looks for me, but she sees me getting grabbed by an anthro Mewtwo in a lab coat who then takes me away…

To be continued…

 

[Light Fang]

Chapter 5 Belief.

As the Mewtwo anthro carries me off, I drop my bag, which the Pokémorph Pikachu picked up.

“Maybe if I show the others Zack’s stuff they will believe me that this time Zack really is here. I had better hurry; my Pikachu form is faster, so I’ll change and rush home.”

So she changes into her Pikachu form, puts on my bag, and rushes off towards a large house way off in the distance. Meanwhile I’m struggling to get free off the Anthro Mewtwo’s grasp on me as he takes me to some lab.

“LET ME GO! I SAID LET ME GO!”
“No way Zack.”
“Wait how did you-!?”
“I read your mind.”
“Ok then guess what I’m going to do now.”
“Don’t you Dare...”

I gave him the swift kicks right between his legs and he lets me go--feeling great pain. I dash off, but he teleports ahead of me and hits me in the gut, causing me to pass out.

“Whoa!”
“I’m sorry but I need you.”
“OOF!”

He picks me up and continues taking me to a lab. It was the exact direction I was running to since I’m in a place that I’ve never been and I don’t know my way around. When the Pikachu finally reaches the house where she changes back into her Pokémorph form with my bag still on her. She is completely winded. She enters the living room area where she finds an Anthro Leafeon and a shiny Pokemorph Eevee who, upon noticing her enter, greet her.

“Ah Pika. Welcome home. Why are you so early and why are you so tired?”
“Because…huff huff… I saw… huff huff… Zack!”
“Not again… This is the third time this week… Zack isn’t here…”
“B-b-but he is. I saw him.”
“But you don’t have proof…”
“OH YA!”

The Pikachu takes the bag off her back and hands it to the Anthro Leafeon. Leafeon says, "Where did you buy it?" The Pikachu quickly tells her to open it for this proof she wants so badly, so with a sigh, the Anthro Leafeon opens it. She is shocked to find a journal falling apart.

“This can’t be!”
“IT IS!”

She reads the title on the ripped cover and it reads Pokémon in the REAL world by Zack C. It really is mine, so Pikachu is telling the truth which brings the Leafeon to tears for not believing her this time. Then she notices the fear in the Pikachu’s eyes.

“What’s wrong? Zack’s here; you should be thrilled?”
“Yes except that…”

This sudden pause brings up mixed emotions of confusion, fear, and interest, but the Pikachu doesn’t seem to want to tell her what is wrong. Since she doesn’t seem to be willing to talk, Leafeon tries the thing she always does to calm the Pikachu down enough to tell her. She wraps her arms around Pikachu into a hug and sings a sweet lullaby. This calms the Pikachu down and she speaks…

“OK, he was taken by a scientist to some lab for study… I’m sorry I could have stopped them… I should have stopped them… but I was too focused on proving to you that he’s here…”
“It’s OK; you just wanted to prove to me…”
“Now what do we do?”
“You’ll stay here while we get Zack.”
“We?”

The Leafeon runs down a hallway and the sound of gasping is heard before she returns, followed by an Anthro Lucario and an Anthro Gardevoir.

“If Zack really is here then we will save him.”
“If it isn’t already too late.”
“LET’S GO!”

The three Anthro Pokémon dash out the door and rush off in hopes of finding me OK and hopefully uninjured.

To be continued…

 

[TeamGalacticMercury]

Cool! What are anthro pokemon? o_0 You need to put some description here. Hopes this helps!!! ^_^

 

[Light Fang]

Chapter 6 Study and Check up…

As the three Anthro Pokémon of a Leafeon, Lucario, and Gardevoir rush frantically in search of me, I find myself waking up in a white room with a small book shelf in it along with a single chair.

“OK, I guess all I can do is read, since I lost my bag when I was grabbed. Thank you so much Mewtwo!”

I’m blaming Mewtwo, but I should actually blame myself, since I didn’t have the bag on tightly. It was pointless to go on, so I go over to the bookshelf and I notice a book entitled The 12 Faults of the Human.

“This could actually be an interesting read, since I don’t know what exactly these form-changing Pokémon think of me or any other humans.”

So I grab the book and take a seat in the chair in my room. I start to read it, and most of it seemed pretty accurate--some more accurate than others. Then, when I reach number ten, I’m angered by it.

“Fault number 10: All humans are dirty, no good, liars. I don’t lie! OK, well, I do, but not all the time like my sister. She gets me in trouble by blaming me for her problems… Well there are two more to go.”

I read number eleven which is humans stay up at night, all night long and sleep during the day. It isn’t very far off, but still, that doesn’t make it true. Then number twelve is super far off.

“Number 12: All humans are evil!? That's not true! Sometimes that seems true, but there is always a reason behind doing such wrong things. This book is mostly lies!!!”
“Whoa!”
“Oops sorry…”

I had thrown the book at what I thought was a wall but it opens, revealing to be a door. The book zooms right pass an Anthro Chansey wearing a nurse's uniform, and I quickly apologize to her.

“I am so sorry! So very sorry…”
“It’s alright. Now time for your check up. Hehehe…”
“Uh… Check up?” I gulp.

The Anthro Chansey nurse goes over to a wall and pulls down a hidden table then tells me to get on it. I refuse, so she uses Charm and I can’t control myself as I forcibly set myself on the table.

“That was so unfair. Charm? You are a cheater! By using such a cheap trick…”
“Sorry but I need to check you… Now take a deep breath.”
“WHOA!!! That is freezing cold!”
“Just take a deep breath…”
“But I already had a check up three days ago.”
*charm* "Now take a deep breath…”

She used charm as she lifted my shirt, and, again with that cheap trick, makes me take a deep breath as she places her still freezing cold stethoscope against my chest to check my heart beat. I inhale and exhale about three more times as she moves the stethoscope around. Then she stops, allowing me to pull down my shirt.

“OK, now open wide and say ah…”
“OK…sigh… AH…”

I open my mouth as wide as I can and she takes a look around inside, but instead of a tongue depressor, she uses her finger, which leaves a strange taste in my mouth. Then she removes her finger and says one more thing.

“OK… ATTRACT!”
“WHAT!?”

I try to move but I can’t, and then the attract hits. At first I fall silent then I look up. The Chansey looks at me, both scared and intrigued.

“Anything?”
“Nothing…”
“OK that’s everything bye.”
“Uh… bye.”

She leaves and I look at the books again and notice one called The Stages of Pokémon and the Time They Go from Pokémorph to Full Anthro.

“Well this sounds very interesting; I guess I’ll read it then…”

I start to read it, learning quite a bit about this new place I have found myself in.

To be continued…

 

[Light Fang]

Chapter 7 Release?

I start to relax reading this book. It is giving me all the information that I most likely will need to know so I can easily adapt to my new environment. Thanks to my little check up, it was revealed that this isn’t some kind of weird dream. Instead of going into a freaking out, hysteric flurry of fear, I remain calm by learning.

“Whoa this is actually really interesting. Apparently both Pokémorph and Anthro Pokémon have the exact same type of bone and body structures as humans have, well besides extra features such as tails, ears, and some cat like Pokémon even retain their cat eyes… It’s creepy but very interesting.”

I finish the book keeping all the information that I had learned locked up inside my head. As I put it back, another book catches my eye and it is entitled I’m a Pokémon who knows this strange name and where it came from.

“This sounds really interesting. That's strange, its writer is named Arrow Aerodactyl. I knew a girl who had an Aerodactyl by that name. I think her name was Alice.”

Like I had mentioned, it was written by an Anthro Aerodactyl named Arrow. One day a name had suddenly popped into his head. He curiously studied every possible aspect of it, combed every single article in every newspaper that was ever published, and he even checked the oldest sites on the web. Nothing ever mentioned the name. For years he searched for his answer but never found anything to help him. Then one day a human girl about 17 appeared. Her name was Alice… (hmmm, weird…) This girl was apparently the answer that the Aerodactyl had been searching for and he learned from her that he is just like the Aerodactyl from her Pokémon game. He learned that all the Pokémon that exist here are from some human’s game in another world, and all Pokémon dream of the day where, just like Arrow and Alice, that they meet their human… I close the book with my mind racing in excitement to learn something so cool.

“Wow so since I’m here there are Pokémon wanting to see me… Wait I think I might have already met one!”

I remember just before I was taken away that someone yelled out my name. I believe that it was the Pokémorph Pikachu that I had seen. If she was really the one, then I’ve definitely met one of my Pokémon from one of my games!

“But… it could be possible that the Pikachu I met is someone else’s… Now I really don’t know," I sighed.

I start to think more about that as I put the book away and return to the chair. Just as I’m about to reach it, WHAM! The door open and slams right into my face, causing me to fall backwards completely out cold. I guess some water is thrown on my face and I see the Anthro Mewtwo with a big grin on his face.

“Sorry about that. Now since you can move again, we can leave.”
“I can leave? Really?”
“Yes we have gathered all the data we needed on a human boy…”
“Oh… OK…”
“But first I’m starving…”
“No don’t eat me!”
“Eat you!? No, I meant would you care to join me for lunch?”
“Oh OK, I am rather hungry. Thanks.”

I walk with Mewtwo to what has to be the lunch area. It was a little awkward for me to walk with him because a lot of Pokémorph and Anthro female Pokémon nurses would laugh and giggle with their faces blushing to see me walk by. I accidentally bumped into a Primeape nurse. I got scared thinking she would pound me but instead she picks me up and kisses me on the cheek saying that how could she get mad at something so cute. Eventually we enter and I’m given a simple peanut butter sandwich and a wink form the female Anthro Raichu.

“Thanks for the lunch.”
“You are quite welcome. Bye…”

I start heading towards the building's exit, but while I was walking through the halls I bumped into an Anthro female Gyarados. Again I’m thinking that I’m going to be in the largest amount of trouble, but again she picks me up like the Primeape did but instead of my cheek she goes full on the lips. Then she says, "Thanks for the thrill," and I walk dizzily the rest of the way. I get outside and rush back to where I arrived to see if my bag was still there. It wasn’t there.

“Oh man it’s not here, and I was hoping it was so I could put my glasses in the case instead of my pocket…”

I start to run off looking for my bag, zooming by crowds of male and female Pokémon who look at me and then continue talking. Some would chase after me and ask me, "What is wrong, little human?" Then eventually I get tired from running. Just as I’m about to stop suddenly…

To be continued…

 

[TeamGalacticMercury]

Lol, that's funny!!!

“Yes we have gathered all the data we needed on a human boy…”
“Oh… OK…”
“But first I’m starving…”
“No don’t eat me!”
“Eat you!? No, I meant would you care to join me for lunch?”
“Oh OK, I am rather hungry. Thanks.”

This cracked me up!!! Keep writing! I love it!!

 

[Vasili]

I like how you you offer more insight on what Pokémon think of humans.

 

[Light Fang]

Chapter 8 Running into ones own Pokemon (Literally)

WHAM!!! I ran into something so fast and so hard that it causes itself and me to fall backwards with our heads spinning from impact.

“OOF!”
“OW!”
“Hey I’m sorry I should have been watching myself… Miss…um…Leafeon, Gardevoir, and Lucario???”

I looked up and saw three Anthro Pokémon. The Gardevoir and Lucario are standing up but the Leafeon, who is apparently the one I ran into, is sitting back on the ground. I generously help her up.

“Oh it's no problem… Um…?”
“Oh yeah, My names Zack. How’s your head?”

I notice the Leafeon holding her head, so I guess we had a head on collision. She instantly stops holding her head when she had heard my name. It also surprised the other two she had with her.

“Zack!”
“We found you at last!”
“Yes!”
“What? OK, you're squeezing me too hard! OW!!!!”

They are so thrilled to apparently meet me that they all hug me at the same time. They are putting too much pressure into it that it is crushing me like somebody stepping on an empty can. When I cried out in pain, they quickly let go.

“Thank you… Hey, hey, hey! What are you doing!?”

The Lucario instantly grabs my right arm and the Gardevoir grabs my left leg. They carry me off, following the Leafeon who is leading the way. That's when I notice that she is wearing my bag.

“Wait isn’t that my bag you are wearing?”
“We’ll explain everything later. We’ll even teach you about us…”

I give her a look of disbelief which makes everyone stop, put me down, and then look confused.

“What is with the face?”
“Oh there is nothing that I don’t already know about the Pokémon here. I read a book that explained quite a bit…” I explain.
“Well here’s something you didn’t know…”
“What?”

I just cannot seem to believe them, since I learned quite a bit from that book. They do surprise me, however, with their answer after I humor them a bit.

“OK so what is it?” I ask.
“We are your Pokémon!”
“Really!?” I exclaim.
“Yes!”
“Awesome!”

I’m completely thrilled by this; I definitely now know that I really do have Pokémon here, and to add on to even more excitement, I ask a follow up question…

“Are you the only three?” I ask.
“No! There are others at home!”
“Really then let’s go!” I suggest.
“Right!”

Again Lucario grabs my right arm and Gardevoir my left arm, but this time they have a little bit of a skip in their step. Unfortunately it is starting to make me feel queasy and I can feel things coming up…

“HRMF! Can we slow down please? I’m feeling ill…”
“And you’re looking kind of pale--well, paler then usual…”
“Oh gee, thanks…”
“Sorry Zack…”

We stop and they let me go so I can ease my queasy stomach back down, but it just seems to be getting worse. I can’t hold it much longer…

“Oh… not good…I’m going to throw up…”
“Here let me help you Zack…”
“OK Gardevoir…”
“Zack its Grace remember you gave me a Nickname…”
“Oh…OK then Grace…”

To be continued…

 

[Vasili]

“HRMF! Can we slow down please? I’m feeling ill…”
“And you’re looking kind of pale--well, paler then usual…”
“Oh gee, thanks…”
“Sorry Zack…”

Haha!

 

[TeamGalacticMercury]

“Zack!”
“We found you at last!”
“Yes!”
“What? OK, you're squeezing me too hard! OW!!!!”

They are so thrilled to apparently meet me that they all hug me at the same time. They are putting too much pressure into it that it is crushing me like somebody stepping on an empty can. When I cried out in pain, they quickly let go.

You be funny!!!! I loved this! Keep on going!!!

 

[Light Fang]

Chapter 9 Returning the favor

As my Stomach continues to churn uneasily, Grace puts her hand on my forehead and then says something under her breath. I suddenly feel completely better, but she still has her hand on my head. I start to blush until I notice her fall down to her knees.

“Grace what’s wrong!?”
“It’s… nothing… I only… used my… healing wish move to… help you… Huffhuffhuff…”

She is tired and breathing heavily. Seeing how she is, I know she doesn’t have enough energy to stand up. I then remember that inside my bag I had packed an unopened bottle of water.

“Leafeon can I have my bag?”
“Oh yeah, sure Zack.”
“Thank you.”

Leafeon takes off my bag. I quickly take out my water bottle just as I see Grace falling backwards. I catch her and she stares weakly into my eyes, a slight blush running over her face.

“Thank you Zack…”
“Here, have some water,” I suggested
“Thank you Zack…”

I help her to drink the water and she regains enough energy to stand back up. We continue on our way with Grace thinking that she owes me one. We walk close together and I notice that each time she looks at me she blushes more and more each time.

“Hey Zack," Grace says.
“Yes?”
“I…”
“AERO,” I yell, “HEY PUT ME DOWN!”
“ZACK!”

Out of nowhere an Aerodactyl dives and snags me, carrying me off into the air way to high for me to survive a drop from it.

“What is your deal!?” I ask the Aerodactyl.
“Easy, I’ve heard that Humans are quite the most deliciously sweet treat there is...”
“Oh then to rebuttal… HELP!”

All of a sudden a green orb crashes straight into the Aerodactyl, and it makes him drop me. I’m freaking out as I speed toward the ground. I brace myself then suddenly I slow down and I see the reason--Grace is using what has to be psychic to slow my fall. She catches me and embraces me in a hug.

“Oh thanks Grace…” I tell her.
“Oh just returning the favor…”
“Come on we are almost home!” Lucario and Leafeon remind us.

To be continued…

 

[Vasili]

“What is your deal!?” I ask the Aerodactyl.
“Easy, I’ve heard that Humans are quite the most deliciously sweet treat there is...”

Yum!

 

[TeamGalacticMercury]

“Hey Zack," Grace says.
“Yes?”
“I…”
“AERO,” I yell, “HEY PUT ME DOWN!”
“ZACK!”

Out of nowhere an Aerodactyl dives and snags me, carrying me off into the air way to high for me to survive a drop from it.

“What is your deal!?” I ask the Aerodactyl.
“Easy, I’ve heard that Humans are quite the most deliciously sweet treat there is...”
“Oh then to rebuttal… HELP!”

All of a sudden a green orb crashes straight into the Aerodactyl, and it makes him drop me. I’m freaking out as I speed toward the ground.

*laughing so hard my sides hurt and I can't breathe* How do you do that???????????????????????????????? Oh, you probably could've made it longer.