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Talk About Imbalance [PG - PG-13]

Shiay

Actual Cannibal Shiay LaBeouf
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First off... I should probably introduce the characters that are in the story seeing as the three main ones that are going to be used are going to be OCs (original characters) created by myself and a few other close friends of mine. However, if people decided that they like this and PM me a character profile that includes everything I need to know and I like how unique they are, I may spot them in for a cameo appearance~

The Main Characters

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Name: Dixie Azure Tucker
Nickname: Dix, Rainbow Girl
Age: 10 [January 24th]
Birthplace: Saffron City

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Name: Jakkaru Korekuta
Nickname: Jakk, Karu
Age: 12
Birthplace: Viridian City, Kanto

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Name: Jaxx Meola
Nickname: none
Age: 11 [July 29]
Birthplace: Fuchsia City

Chapters Guide
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine

And now... to the story! Also! Honest C+C is greatly appreciated!

Credit goes to both Cranlon and MizuJakkaru for some of the writing in here.

Talk About Imbalance


Chapter One

Beyond the windows and past the horizon, the land was still dark... the flowers were curled up tightly, awaiting the sun's first days rays upon them so that they could slowly rouse and wake from their slumber. However... even as the land, people and Pokémon still slept, there was one that was awake before the shrill ring of her alarm clock had gone off. In fact, this girl had arisen from her bed about an hour prior to the actual ringing of her clock, getting all of the things that she needed to be getting out of the way said and finished.

Just about everything had been all done. All the things that she needed were packed away in a rather bulky messenger bag that remained on her bed as she laced up the multicolour laces that were woven to keep her shoes secured and bound to her feet for the journeys that she was about to set out on. Whether she met new faces or not was yet to be determined at the moment, however, it was inevitable if she were going be traveling from where she was now to be going into the Indigo League someday!

Standing back up straight and assuring her shoes were on securely, Dixie threw a fist into the air with much enthusiasm and then swiftly grabbed the black and multicolour bag from her bed. She swiftly and silently made it to the door of her room, opening it slightly only to have it creak, it sounding a lot louder than she had remembered it so be. Perhaps it was because of her nervousness and determination of getting out of the house silently, though quickly that had a minor role to attribute to how it was the creaking had sounded to her ears; for what this girl wanted was to make it out of the house without alerting her aunt to her presence.

Looking out and checking both sides of the hall, the dark-haired girl adjusted the red barrettes that were in her hair, pinning her bangs back and then tiptoed to the stairs, the wood underneath her weight seeming to squeak loudly after every step she took. It made her grow even more nervous about sneaking around -- she thought if all of this continued, there was no doubt that her aunt or at least some of the Pokémon that lived in the same household would awaken and impede her initial trek to Professor Oak's laboratory. That wouldn't have been good as far as she was concerned, she wanted to get there as early as possible to get her very own Charmander companion. So long had she been looking forward to this day ever since she filled out the trainer's application to be going in to be eligible for a Pokémon from the lab.

Nearing the stairs, the dark-haired took a look down then and then turned her gaze to her aunt's bedroom door. It was still closed... okay, so that was a good thing.

Reaching over, the girl placed a hand upon the railing of the stairs and started downwards, trying to calm her thinking from all the thoughts that raced and coursed through her mind. So many scenarios playing through her mind with her brand new Charmander companion. Oh... just how it would be like to finally be on her own journey with her very own Pokémon. The thoughts were so exhilarating to her.

"Up awfully early, Miss Dixie..." came an older woman's voice in the direction of the kitchen that caused the dark-haired girl to freeze in place all together and slowly turn her emerald gaze over to where the kitchen table was. As she did, she saw her Aunt Sicily sitting there with a cup of freshly brewed coffee in her hands. The smell was rather pungent in the air, how did Dixie not notice this before? Her mind must have been far too occupied with the thoughts of having that new Charmander started at her side to really notice it.

"Auntie..." was all that escaped from Dixie's mouth for the time being before she averted her gaze to the greenhouse that had been built onto the home. She bit at her bottom lip for a moment and then spoke up again, "Auntie Sicily... I... I didn't think you'd be up this early..." at that, he girl took a folded up note from her pocket and then gave a sheepish chuckle, "I-I guess I don't need this anymore. It was a note telling you that I had left for Professor Oak's to get my starter and head out on my journey."

"Tut, tut, Dixie..." Sicily scolded for a moment, pushing brown bangs from obscuring her vision and giving Dixie a rather stern look, "you know that I worry for you, Dixie... leaving here with only a note left behind isn't a very good way to start. You left your parents and allowed for them to say goodbye... well, after these two years of having you stay here, I'm going to have to see you off as well." She smiled to Dixie, raising from the table and making her way over to the preteen, her wavy, long brown hair bouncing with each step she took.

"Aw, Aunt Cici..." Dixie started again, using the nickname that she had given her aunt for those past aforementioned years that Sicily had talked about. She rose her green eyes to meet with the blue ones that her aunt had and saw her aunt lean down, placing her lips upon her forehead, giving the young girl a soft kiss and then standing back up straight.

"I'm going to miss you, kiddo..." Sicily said, smiling down to Dixie. The girl kept her gaze up to her aunt, giving a slight smile back.

"I'll miss you, too, Auntie," Dixie replied, shifting her messenger bag slightly and turning her gaze back to the door of the greenhouse. Sicily followed her gaze, placed a hand on the girl's shoulder and then motioned her over to it, opening the door and turning on the lighting, creating the artificial sunlight that slowly roused the grass-type Pokémon that were housed within. As the plant Pokémon opened their tired eyes, their attention averted from the nothing that they had their eyes set upon to Sicily and then to Dixie.

"Well everyone... this is your time to come here and wish Dixie farewell..." Sicily said to the Pokémon, "she's leaving for her very own journey today... won't be seeing her for a while."

With that, Hoppip, Skiploom and Jumpluff hovered over to the girl, using either their tiny feet or arms to cling onto her, silently begging her not to be gone for too long. Oddish and Gloom had unearthed themselves enough to look to the girl, though they didn't make their way over, as they were semi-rooted in the specially prepared soil that was specifically for them.

Raising her hands to pat the animal-like plant-type Pokémon that clung to her, Dixie smiled to them and then said, "it's alright guys... I'll be sure to come back to visit. You guys are my friends, after all. Hehe."

Hearing her words, the Pokémon acknowledged them and then let go of her, leaving her to Sicily and the rest of the day that still had yet to actually begin. Sicily had gone over to remove the greenhouse coverings with the push of a button, the screening overhead retracting and opening up to the now lightening sky. Upon seeing that as she turned off the lights of the greenhouse, Sicily motioned Dixie out and then to the front door of the house.

"Listen Dixie... I know the whole ordeal that Professor Oak may be telling you... but just remember, it's a very big world out there and a whole bunch of things can happen. Keep on your toes, alright, kiddo? Of the two years that I've gotten to spent time with you, I know you've got a good hold of that head of yours..." she gave another swift kiss to Dixie's forehead and then rose her hand to stroke the back of her head.

"I'll be sure to be careful, Auntie," Dixie assured, smiling up to Sicily and adjusting her bag again.

"You'd better..." Sicily replied, "oh... there is something else that I wanted you to have, Dixie." Sicily left the girl at the front door for a few seconds and then reappeared with something in her grasp. What it was was something that piqued Dixie's interest and she tried looking for a way to see if there was some how see it better to get a clue as to what it was.

"Here, Dixie... just in case you ever need anything..." Sicily then held out what it was that she had in her hands and revealed the item to be a PokéGear. Dixie stared at it in awe and then rose a hand to put it over it.

"B-but Aunt Cici... I couldn't..." Dixie said, looking at the device.

"It's yours, little Miss Dix..." Sicily responded, turning over her hand and placing it firmly within Dixie's grasp, "it'll come in real useful... and you can even contact us with it if you have to. Your elder sister's number is already programmed into it as well as your parents' and my own. Just take it as a parting gift from me, alright? I got it just for you."

Her fingers curled around the device and Dixie smiled up to her aunt, "of course, Auntie... thank you so much," she stepped forwards and hugged Sicily, "like I said before, I promise to come back to visit. You can count on it!"

"Atta girl... now you keep strong and you hurry to Professor Oak's before you're late."

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The sun was just peaking over the horizon and a boy was making his way over the crest of a hill, a scruffy looking Growlithe by his side. His appearance seemed very worn, and the backpack that was slung over his shoulder sported small tears from the traveling that he had done. However... to him, this was all worth it. From Fuschia to Pallet Town, just so he could finally be getting his own starter. The journey had been long, and in some cases, rather rough, but thanks to the Growlithe companion that trekked beside him the whole time, things weren't as challenging as they could have been were he to have been alone.

"Heh... look at that, Fang.... Looks like we've finally made it here," the boy looked down to the Growlithe, it's fur shining dully in the sun's first rays upon the land. The Growlithe yipped up at the boy and then started forwards once again, turning back and looking to the boy, remaining loyal to staying by his side for as long as it would take, or until the boy were to return him to his PokéBall capsule.

Giving a silent laugh, the boy started forwards once again, "coming, boy, I'm coming...." At that, the Growlithe yipped happily once again and trotted forwards, stopping every now and then to be pacing alongside his owner.

Fang wasn't much of a battling Pokémon, no.... He and this boy, they had grown up together... and even though one was human and the other beast, they were like brothers. The boy refused to call Fang a pet, but a friend and a very good companion. To him, the Growlithe was his very best friend... he had grown up with it, turned to it when the other kids would make fun of him, tell it his secrets because he felt it to be the only thing alive that he could trust. Sure... there were his older brothers... but like any other siblings, there always came sibling rivalry... and with them, it was hard for this teen to cope with them more than half the time, causing him to only turn to a Pokémon for any kind of support.

Keeping up along the trail, the boy had made it to the gates to the lab of Pallet Town and he looked up to the building, shoving his hands into his pockets and then lowering his gaze to Fang. He gave a small sigh and then withdrew a hand from his pocket, reaching up for the gates handles, not noticing the quick pattering that was slowly growing louder.

Fang, on the other hand, noticed this and then stood in a defensive stance, growling and capturing the boy's attention. What they saw was a girl running towards the gates, her bag flopping rather vigorously against her side as she did. The boy couldn't help but to quirk a brow at this. There was another out here... this early? He had an excuse to be out this early... but the girl looked as if she were recently bathed, dressed and prepped for what was going on.

Must have been from around here.

Fang gave a bark as the girl neared them, startling her and causing her to slip forwards, grabbing onto the boy and falling down onto the ground.

"O-owe..." the girl whined as she had fallen face-down against he ground, the boy having been pulled down with her. He jerked his arm away from the girl and then stood back up, giving a highly annoyed look in the girl's direction before sighing and offering her a hand. She had pushed herself back up to sitting on her knees and shook her hands slightly as she looked up to the boy. After a moment or two, she hesitantly took the boy's outstretched hand and gotten helped up.

"I'm very sorry about that, I didn't mean to fall... just... the Growl--..." the girl stopped in mid-sentence and looked down to Fang. It was apparent that she had actually never seen one for real before. There's was a certain pulling in her being that wanted to bend down and pet it, but it seemed that it wouldn't have allowed for her to do that, as it still stood in his defensive stance, the fur along the ridge of his back standing up to make him look more intimidating.

The boy shook his head and then took a PokéBall, calling back the fire-type Pokémon. He then turned his attention to the girl, "it's fine... I'm not hurt."

"Oh, okay, well that's good!" the girl responded, grinning up at him and then grabbing the handles of the gates and pushing them open. She took a moment to look back to the black-haired male and then introduced herself, "by the way, I'm Dixie! Dixie Tucker! It's really nice to meet you... uh..."

"Jaxx."

"Oh, Jaxx! Okay, nice to meet you!" Dixie happily chirped, starting towards the lab, slightly clapping her gloved hands togeher to get the stinging sensation out of them.

"Sad to say I can't say the same about you..." Jaxx had muttered under his breath, following after the walking rainbow of a girl and raising a hand to his necklace. The crescent moon charm that dangled from it shone dully in what little light the sun provided at the moment, but it gave him satisfaction knowing that the charm was still there and had been ever since receiving it.

Jaxx snapped out of his thoughts as soon as Dixie's rapping across the door reverberated through the air. Just went to show how one was highly enthusiastic about what was to be going on that very day. It slightly amused Jaxx to think about that, however, he still didn't find a way to like this new girl that had tumbled into him upon meeting. In a way, he was thinking that she would be just like all the other kids that he had met in Fuschia and would turn to being one of those girls that seemed nice at first, but then, like the others, would snub him when she got the chance.

Whatever... he would just get his starter and go. He didn't need to be worrying about this girl and her apparently bubbly nature. It was probably all just a show anyways.

The door to the lab opened and a very sleepy Professor Oak stood there, rubbing at his eyes and looking down to the two kids that were there. A small grin had found it's way upon the professor's mouth and he opened the door wider, motioning for the two kids to come in, "hello, welcome to the Oak Laboratory," he chimed with long practiced ease.

He took in the two soon-to-be trainers carefully, appraising their readiness. The girl was colorful, she looked like she wore a Smeargle's pallet, and he liked that. It meant she was more than likely a cheerful person, ready to make friends with the Pokémon she would be capturing on her journey. The boy, on the other hand, was more reserved. The fact that he seemed more quite was something that Oak took a rather fond liking to. The boy would be calm and collected in his wanderings.

Ah... the many varying types of trainers never ceased to amaze Oak, and his eyes closed in content at the aspiring trainers before him. "Please, come in you two, it might be early, but I certainly don't want you two waiting outside forever."

Doing as they were told, both Dixie and Jaxx had made their way into the front of the lab and then were instructed to follow after Professor Oak as he led them to a room that had a table in the center with three glistening PokéBalls upon it -- each one with their very own marking on it: a leaf, a water droplet and a fire emblem.

"So... so do we get to see them, huh?" Dixie asked, almost bouncing with sheer excitement as she turned her gaze from the PokéBalls upon the table to Professor Oak.

"Soon enough, soon enough. Now then...," he placed a hand upon a table, fingers resting upon the hard, metallic surface.

"I am, as you know, Professor Oak. I study the relationship between humans and Pokémon as a profession." He gave the speech to all of them, all the young trainers, hoping to prepare them for the wide world they faced out there.

"The world we live in is vast and there are still many Pokémon species we have yet to discover. You will see many wonders on your journey as a Trainer, and no matter what your future holds, you must always head towards the horizon." Sometimes he wondered if young Trainers thought he was just a great windbag... perhaps they did... perhaps they did not.

Grinning regardless of his wonderings, he eyed the eagerness in the girl, Dixie, and he also watched the young boy. Ah... his name escaped his memory. Jak...? Jacks? No... Jaxx, yes. That was it. He really needed to review the requests sent to him for new Trainers more carefully before they came flocking to his door. Beyond knowing their names, he knew very little of the soon-to-be Trainers before him other than what he could gather from their personalities. And so, as was customary, though he hated making them have to endure what must seem like a torturous wait to get what they were really here for, he continued in his rambling.

"But first, before we get to your starters, tell me a little about yourselves." He waited patiently for their replies. It was key that he learn about them. Though they would be able to choose their own Pokémon from the three he would provide, he also needed to know that said Pokémon were going into good and capable hands.

Taking in a deep breath and looking to the boy once again, Dixie turned her attention to Oak and started off, "well, I'm Dixie Tucker, I'm ten years old and I come from Saffron City. I've been looking really forward to getting a Charmander companion ever since I started living here with my Aunt Sicily. Though, aside from that, I would say that my most favourite Pokémon is actually Smeargul-- just because they love to paint and are all colourful!" Grinning a bit, Dixie continued, "I actually used to have a Smeargul friend when I was attending a daycare in Saffron, I called him Arty. Hmm... I also think that traveling the region and battling at the gyms to earn league status would be something really awesome to achieve."

Dixie stopped talking and looked back to the boy, tilting her head somewhat. She had gone on long enough. This boy was someone that was getting their starter, and Oak had addressed the both of them-- if wouldn't have been fair of Dixie to have kept going on without giving him a chance to have been telling Oak of himself, now would it? ... Certainly not, that was for sure in her mind.

"Anyways... now that I'm done," Dixie smiled over to the boy that stood a good couple feet away from her, "it's your turn!"

He gave an inaudible scoff. Like he needed her permission... oh well, best let the younger one feel inclined to do so, no one was exactly sure what was going to happen if she didn't get what she wanted when she wanted. Lifting his head, he looked over to the Professor, then to Dixie -- back to the Professor once more.

Nothing was all that interesting about him though, he was just a normal kid from his home town, he was no hero, nothing that was really worthy of writing a long, exquisite book about somewhat like the ones that lined the shelves in the building currently being visited by them. That's what he thought, anyways.

Hnh... always seemed like he was being pressured into these things in some way or another.

Taking in a short breath, he exhaled, closing his eyes momentarily before starting, "Jaxx Meola from Fuschia City."

"I came here with my Growlithe that's been in my family for some years, he isn't much, but he's family enough," he paused, unsure of where to go from there. "Don't really have a favorite Pokémon... Don't think much of fighting and training either..."

Awkwardly, it seemed his nice speech had come to an end. Opening his eyes, he looked over to Dixie, giving her a slightly odd look that seemed to speak "Are you satisfied?". However, that didn't last for that long as he looked back to the Professor, giving a slight nod -- at least that way he could continue on what he was doing now; the reason they were bother here.

Oak nodded in satisfaction, eyes closed as he listened to the two childrens' voices prattle or mutter away their short biographies for him. Yes, yes. They seemed like they would do fine. He opened his eyes and nodded to Dixie. "It's a wonderful thing to take the Gym Challenge and aspire to fight against the Leagues -- and it takes quite some doing to get to that stage. But, come the day you walk down Victory Road, you will find nothing but happiness in where you have gotten, should that be where you truly wish to go in your journey."

And then Oak turned to Jaxx, eyes crinkling at the corners knowingly. "Nor is there anything wrong with disliking battles. Many people see Pokémon as pets or as long time companions, seeking never to battle with them. There is fulfillment to be found in coexisting with Pokémon without battle, just as there is in finding it with. Whatever path you choose," he turned to look at them both, "none of them are wrong."

Turning back to the the table, Oak held out a hand out to the capsules that contained the three Pokémon he offered. "Now, without any further lectures or ados, I present you with your three choices. Bulbasaur, Charmander and Squirtle. Bulbasaur, the Seed Pokémon, is a grass and poison-type. Charmander, which is the Lizard Pokémon, is a fire-type. Then finally, there is Squirtle, the Tiny Turtle Pokémon, which is a water-type."

Professor Oak pointed to each capsule as he explained them. Then his hand moved over and depressed another button, and each capsule opened in turn. The three Pokémon stood upon the table, each eying the potential trainers in their own way.

"It is up to you two to make the choice as to which you would like to have, but choose wisely, because your starter Pokémon will grow to be a great companion in your years to come."

Giving an inaudible sigh, Dixie pushed away the impatience that was starting to boil up and through her persona as Professor Oak explained to them each individual starter that he had there. She had already stated that she had been wanting a Charmander, and that wasn't going to change.

Unless....

Dixie turned her gaze to Jaxx for a moment, wondering what starter it was that he would be wanting. She already knew that he had a Growlithe with him... so why was he here if he already had a Pokémon, huh? Maybe he favoured fire types and wanted a Charmander for himself! That would really suck in Dixie's opinion, for had been looking really forward to making friends with her brand new Charmander friend.

No! Shaking her head a bit, Dixie looked back to where the Pokéballs were and watched as each of the three starters were released and were presented before herself and Jaxx. The curious eyes of the Pokémon peering at the two of them. Just seeing that made the girl feel giddy and happy all over again. There was a joy in seeing the young Pokémon just giving you that questioning look. Except... that Charmander... it didn't seem to be questioning or even slightly all that interested. It had looked to her and Jaxx and then turned away in what seemed to be disgust. In fact... there was something about that particular Charmander that piqued Dixie's interest -- he was a golden colour instead of an orange.

Making her way over to the Charmander, Dixie soon came to be facing the small creature and offered it a small smile. The Charmander gave her an unimpressed look and turned away with a 'hmpf!'

Laughing lightly, Dixie lightly poked his side, "aww... c'mon there, Charmander... don't be like that. You and me can be friends." Dixie watched as it slowly started to look back towards her -- though... his expression still not changing. The girl continued to smile at the small lizard Pokémon, hoping that the smile would soon show it that she meant him no harm whatsoever and truly did want to be his friend.

Jaxx watched after the dark haired girl. She sure seemed that she knew what she wanted and wasn't afraid to act upon it. Jaxx personally didn't care which one he was going to be given, which he chose, whatever the situation might have been. Either way he came out with a Pokémon -- and that was the purpose of the whole situation and process that they were undergoing.

Looking between the two, Jaxx motioned his eyes over to the Squirtle, noting its relatively welcoming expression... and of course, being an eleven year old, he figured it'd be easier to train that one and to have it like him in return. So, he paced over to the turtle slightly, holding out his hand in a friendly manner as it drew nearer.

Definitely a keeper.

"Professor, he's really cute! Why's he differently coloured?" Dixie's voice rang out.

In the corner of his eyes, Jaxx looked over to Dixie and to the Charmander that she had chosen as she had spoken up. It definitely was different from the one that his brother, Drew, had chosen a few years back, differently colored and whatnot. In fact, he too was intrigued by the question that the girl had asked to the professor -- wanting an answer.

The Professor's smile widened somewhat, seeing not one, but two sets of curious eyes peer up at him at the girl's question. "Ah, yes... his color," the professor absently began to pet the Bulbasaur. He could feel his intellectual urge to prattle off into a biological lecture about all the intricacies of the Pokémon genomes. That, however, would more than likely send the children into a coma from science-overload. Even Tracey sometimes let his mind wander when the Professor really started going...

"Well, the field studying Pokémon coloration is still a very new one, but there are researchers that have isolated a gene that they can attribute to the varying traits in Pokémon. It can lead to singular traits, such as a Roselia with different colored blossoms, or to something akin to the effect in this Charmander." He paused, pondering the subject. He would have to visit the University of Celadon, or at the very least, request some of the reports turned in there... perhaps coloration might effect human-Pokémon interactions as well.

"When I was young, the gene seemed to not be as prominent, but there have been more and more reports of alternately colored sightings. Perhaps you recall the incident a few years ago at the Lake of Rage near Mahogany Town, Johto? Well, the Gyarados there... wait. No. A picture speaks a thousand words, as Pokémon watchers tell me..."

With that, the professor turned around and made his way towards a large filing cabinet, he rifled through it for some time before finally pulling out a folder. And this too he dug through for some handful of seconds before pulling out a snapshot. He walked back over to the duo, pleased to see that the Squirtle had taken a liking to the boy as he made his way back over. He showed the picture to them, which clearly depicted a red Gyarados.

"You see? They are proven to be no different than the colors we consider normal, so there's nothing to fear should you see one. Think of it as different eye or hair colors."

Oh... just how Jaxx wanted to speak up, to correct the old man. Of course, that would be rude, and that was something that, even as the young child he was, he knew was worse than saying nothing at all. The way he had learned to see others thanks to his brother slightly differed from what this was.

Dixie, on the other hand, stared at the photograph in awe. All this talk of seeing differently coloured Pokémon was something that piqued her interest greatly. She had always been a kind of colourful person, and getting Pokémon that were multitudes of colours was something that just right up her alley. If anything, she wanted a team of colourful Pokémon that she befriended and caught and is able to scale the edges of the world with. It's been a dream for her-- and perhaps with this Charmander was where it started.

The male preteen was always taught to see what was on the inside rather than the outside. The first judging of appearance often led bias opinions and... well... didn't go far. Admittedly, he still did judge on occasion, though as a human, it's fairly hard not to. This Charmander wasn't any different from the others that were being placed out for selection other than its difference in species and abilities. It was no different to Jaxx than others of it's species.

"Wow... so cool. So, so... this Charmander is like... rare?" the girl's question bubbled up excitedly at the possibility that this Charmander was rarer, and he had to smile.

"Yes, as a matter of fact, he is. The gene is a very weak strain that causes the changes in color among Pokémon. It's grown stronger over the years, but you can go a lifetime without actually seeing one in person. In fact, this is the second I've seen myself, though I have many photos and documentatio--."

"Hehe... well, aren't you a special little fire-type, then?" she reached a hand over to pet the Charmander on the head before Professor Oak had finished his explanation only to have it met by his mouth clamping over her hand. His teeth dug into her flesh a bit, and the dark-haired girl bit her lower lip to keep from making any noise to notify those around her that it hurt. She had reacted rather admirably, though. She hadn't reacted to the pain beyond acknowledging it and she had stifled herself from uttering any noise at the pain. Oak nodded to himself with pleasure. This was good. The colourful girl had succeeded in keeping from startling the young creature and she had also refused to give it the upper hand.

The Squirtle that Jaxx had kept his attention on turned it's gaze over to Dixie and then so did his new trainer. Sure didn't seem like her to suddenly go quiet, though, as his eyes met with what was going on, he was given an answer. Teething perhaps? He wasn't sure just what to place it upon, though the lizard didn't seem all that willing to let go anytime soon. It was apparent that she was trying her best not to react, though in turn, that only made the situation more noticeable to someone who had grown up with younger Pokémon throughout the years due to his his eldest brother's breeder status.

Silently, he moved over, closer to the girl while remaining kneeling. Holding out his hand he stroked the Charmander under the jaw-- hoping to relax the muscles and tension in the process, causing him to loosen his hold. Jaxx's other hand rested overtop of Dixie's slowly gripping it and pulling back slightly after he started the stroking process with the other.

When Dixie felt a hand upon her own that she let out a very small, surprised gasp. Jaxx had come over to where she and the Charmander were, lightly taking hold of her hand and stroking underneath Charmander's jaw. Dixie rose her brow some as she felt the small lizard's grip on her hand start to wane and ease up. Jaxx had also lightly pulled her hand back and Dixie could feel herself becoming slightly flustered. Why was it that he could get it to let go of her and not be able to do it on her own?

Oak, himself, was rather surprised to see that Jaxx had stepped forward, and with an unmistakable breeder's touch, began to coax the Charmander to release the girl's hand. It was rather easy to see that he had grown up around young Pokémon already. Oak tried to recall Jaxx's application clearer, but last night's long studies fogged his memory. He did recall that Jaxx had shown up with a Growlithe of his own, so it was possibly he had grown up with or around a practiced breeder.

Oak shook his head. The types of young trainers that walked through his laboratory never ceased to amaze him.

Pulling her hand back away from Jaxx, Dixie looked to her hand and the small puncture marks where Charmander got her and gave a small sigh. Slowly, she put her other hand on top of the small bite marks and applied pressure to cease any and or all bleeding and then turned her gaze to be looking at Jaxx, "thank you... um..." she paused to take a moment to remember what his name was, "Jaxx...."

Standing up, he brushed off the knees of his jeans, continuing to look over at the Charmander, "don't mention it" Jaxx murmured slightly. She had called him by name... that was one sign that it was more sincere than just a simple 'I need to say this due to common courtesy' type of ordeal. Hm... it felt good for some odd reason. Normally he wasn't one to go out of his way to try and gain popularity or whatever; he did it because he felt inclined to do so. It was just nice to have appreciation, that rare feeling. Perhaps she was different from the other kids that he knew after all.

The Charmander gave a small snort in the preteens' direction and turned away once again with a 'hmpf'. Dixie turned her attention back to the golden lizard for a moment and then gave a small smile, "you know... maybe... if I gave you a name, things would be a little easier between the two of us, huh?" She watched as the Charmander's gaze averted back to her, it's interest slightly piqued, however, it's expression still holding that unimpressed look. Again, it gave a snort, however, this time not with as much attitude as it did the last time.

"Zalaras," Dixie's grin widened, "your name shall be Zalaras from here on out!"

The Charmander blinked a couple of times, shrugged and laid down, yawning loudly-- still obviously resistant to going on any sort of 'adventure' with this... person that just decided to waltz up and decide that he was the starter for her.

"Well. That's quite the start for you two." Oak laughed at his own joke. He assumed the Charmander would come around eventually on the girl. He has already, though only a little, starting to let her grow on him. He had accepted the name it seemed and it hadn't out right lashed at her. It would take some time, oh yes, Oak grinned knowingly, recalling a particular trainer. It could take time. But it would happen, and unbreakable bonds would be formed between trainer and starter.

"Now then..." Oak walked over to one of the counters surrounding the laboratory. He opened a metal case there, and pulled out two of the many red devices contained within it in a type of protective, black foam. They glimmered in the sun light. Each had a type of camera on the top, as well as a cover to protect the data screen. Though they had gone through many models throughout the years, it was unmistakable what they were. PokéDexs.

He walked back over to the duo once more. "This is my invention, as you may know, the PokéDex. It automatically records data on Pokémon you've seen or caught. It's a hi-tech encyclopedia. Jaxx and Dixie. Take these with you."

Oak sighed slightly as he held out the devices to the two children, reminiscing. It had been a dream once, long ago... He had wanted to make a complete record of all the Pokémon in the world. But age caught up with him. It was for this reason he had invented the PokéDex. To send Trainers off into the world with a device that could record on sighting the data about a Pokémon they saw. It was brilliant. What was more, each time they connected to a PC with the device, it would transfer the data to a mainframe. This information would be published for all Trainers to see, far and wide. Slowly, facts would be collected in a database. It was a marvel to see his dream come true in such a way.

As soon as Professor Oak had come back to both she and Jaxx, he had in his hands, a red device that Dixie had seen her sister make off on her journey with. A PokéDex. Oh, how she had also been waiting for the day that she, herself, had gotten her hands on one of those. It was like a pocket digital encyclopaedia on Pokémon... no, wait... that's exactly what it was, wasn't it? And included in all that technological jazz, it was also something that proved Trainer status to those that were curious of the holder of the Dex.

"These signify you two as liscenced Pokémon Trainers, as well as catalog data for you as you journey across the land."

To the male preteen, the PokéDex sounded like some sort of cereal, though Jaxx really knew that that wouldn't help all that much with helping to catch Pokémon and see the world some more... Though, things were cleared up as his gaze fell upon the devices. Jaxx simply took his, flipping through the various functions that it served, nothing much more than just a simple catalog it seemed, lots of different types; some that he'd never even seen before.

Reaching a hand out to take a hold of her very own PokéDex, Zalaras had gotten up from his laying down position and leaped up. Before Dixie had gotten a hold of the Dex, Zalaras had grabbed a hold of it in his jaws, giving them all this slightly smug look. Dixie frowned a bit and looked over to Zalaras, going over and crouching over next to him with a slightly pleading look on her face.

Starting from the front and moving onward, Jaxx stopped as he noticed the Charmander, looking between the one that Dixie had received and the one illustrated in the picture. Obviously there was something different about that one's appearance, and... probably -- no, most likely its personality, seeing as Dixie's was currently stealing the device from her before she could even flip through.

"Aw, c'mon Zalaras... that's not the way to be acting..." here, the dark-haired girl held out her hand once again to the small fire-type Pokémon and replaced her frown with a small smile, "now... will you please give me the PokéDex? I would really like to have it...."

Shaking his head Jaxx continued once again, pausing at the ringing of bells towards a certain picture. It was Squirtle's, the one that the professor had given him was just like the one in the picture, so nothing to special about that.

"Heh," He started, turning around the device to show the turtle, "Looks just like you..."

Obviously there was some sarcasm in his words, you'd have to be deaf not to tell. The Squirtle was a tad frustrated at first, though that was calmed down some by a slight smirk granted by Jaxx. Quickly, he drew back his device, closing it and placing it in his pocket, looking over to the Charmander, then to the professor.

That thing certainly wasn't wanting to go anywhere, that was for sure... and placing it in a Pokéball wasn't going to help anything at all.

Turning his gaze upwards, Zalaras growled somewhat at Dixie and then looked to Professor Oak for some kind of reassurance. After being in the lab for most of his time, Zalaras had really only become close to him and a select few aides that were running around here and there. Even then, however, Zalaras had proven himself to be quite the spoiled acting handful. His clench on the PokéDex did not waver... and it wasn't going to be anytime soon. If this slowed down the 'adventure going', then so be it. Zal wasn't keen on leaving, and he was going to be making that very apparent with the way that he decided to act.

Professor Oak lit a knowing smile down at the Charmander as it gazed up at him with it's dark eyes. He had expected a reaction like this from the tiny creature. The tiny lizard had been quite the bundle to raise. Oak remembered many a singed coats due to this one. But he was fond of the creature nevertheless. he was fond of all of them, of course. Oak knew, however, that no starter could stay in his lab for an eternity, and the Charmander was quite ready to leave, it just didn't realize it.

"Professor..." Dixie started, frowning again and looking up at him, "I really don't want to put him back into his PokéBall just because of the way he's acting... if I do... then that wouldn't be a way for me and him to becoming friends any faster.... I refuse to let his temperament to get to me, but he seems very resistant to this whole thing, and if kind of worries me about what will be going on in later journeys with him."

Nodding at the girl's statement when it came, Oak had come to admiring this girl's way of thinking. It would be difficult for her to achieve a friendship with the Charmander, but Oak felt if anyone could do it, it may very well be Dixie Tucker. Tucking his hands in his pockets, Oak addressed the problem.

"You are very wise for you age to not force him to return. Running from a problem will never solve it, only delay it. As for your future journeys... only you and he can decide how they will go. For this, though, I will help you."

Again, the Chamander gave a small growl, this time, it ending with a snort.

The Professor knelt down near Zalaras and patted him lightly on the head, holding his hand out for the Pokédex. He would not take it from Zalaras, but rather wait for him to hand it over willingly.

"Come now, little one. I know you're reluctant, but in remaining here you will only harm yourself. Without expanding your horizons, you will not grow nor mature. The first step is always the hardest, even for the starter, not just for the trainer. You're trusting yourself to someone unknown... and it takes a brave creature indeed to do so."

Continuing to hang onto the Dex, the Charmander gave a slight growl as Professor Oak made his way over to him. He was still too young to understand some things, but what the professor had been explaining to him was something that had gotten to the small, golden lizard. Hesitantly, Zalaras crept forwards, his movements somewhat stiff. Though, instead of heading towards Professor Oak, Zalaras had gone in Dixie's direction. He wasn't all that happy about it, but there was something within him that aspired to be one of the greatest fire Pokémon that wandered the surface. Slowly, it moved forwards, raising his head towards the girl, his grip on the PokéDex slackening.

At the motions, Dixie smiled and knelt down, holding her hand out to Zalaras, "hehe... s-see there, Zal? You and me really can be friends," at this, Dixie gingerly put her other hand on top of Zalaras' head and the small lizard dropped the Dex in her hand. Looking to it for a brief moment, Dixie gave a small chuckle, "well, at least I'll be able to tell my PokéDex apart from others."

The Dex now had four nice little indents on it, two on the front and two in the back. It wasn't something that Dixie really minded at all. As long as the PokéDex was still functional, she'd be A-OK with it.

Moving back from her hand, Zalaras gave a slightly defiant look, looked to Professor Oak and then sighed in slight defeat. It's not like he had a choice of staying or going anymore. This girl had chosen him to be her starter Pokémon, and he couldn't change that. No matter how fond he grew of the laboratory or the people that worked in it, he supposed it was finally his time to be getting out and exploring the world. It was an exciting thought for him... he just didn't really want to do it with the accompaniment of a human.

Dixie turned her gaze to Jaxx and she smiled up at him, "hey, hey! You're probably going to be going in the same direction as I am... do you mind traveling together at all?"

The dark-haired male was a little more preoccupied with his own Pokémon for the time being, and failed to hear most of what Dixie had to say. The Squirtle moved over slightly taking a hold of Jaxx's long-sleeved shirt, tugging on it slightly, pointing over to Dixie. Jaxx arched a brow at this motion; was there something going on he wasn't sure about? Turning his head slightly, he looked to the younger girl.

... Yup, he totally wasn't listening.

"What?"

"Do you mind traveling together? I mean... since we're most likely going in the same direction and stuff."

Looking away for a moment, he stroked the top of his Squirtle's head rewardingly. Squirtle obviously enjoyed it, giving a grin and moving a tad more closer to his trainer. Well, at least they were bonding well, and they had much more luck than Dixie did with her Charmander.

But... traveling with Dixie? Dixie. He'd barely known her for more than an hour and she was expecting him to follow her? Jaxx, honestly, had just planned on heading home; traveling was something that he wasn't sure he wanted to do or take part in.

There had been reasons he tried to delay this as much as possible; he didn't want to have to train. Maybe if he went with her he wouldn't have to... and Drew and Haku would understand, heck, they'd even be glad he was at least talking to someone.

Looking back to her again, he gave a slight nod, "Sure... if you want me there, I guess."

Dixie beamed as Jaxx had said that and clapped her hands together. Oh, how it was going to be great to be traveling with someone for some of the way. However... parting ways... that may have been quite the painful task, should it ever come up. Dixie had a like and want to be with people for as long as she could stay with them. So... for however long that this journey with Jaxx would last, Dixie would be sure to cherish it for that time, just like she would cherish her time bonding and slowly becoming friends with the golden Charmander, Zalaras.
 
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very very good start to the story. there are a few issues with punctuation and run-on sentences, but nothing major. i'm hooked. i'll be reading.
 
Ah! Thank you very much! I'll try my best to tone down the run-ons and see where it is that I'm messing up with my punctuation. Thank you, once again, and I'll hopefully have the second chapter up later tonight or early morning XD
 
Praise:
The story had a lot of detail. Although the plot isn't especially unique you made it grab the reader's attention. It had a certain charm that I think will keep me reading.

Criticism:
The font colors are very distracting. I had to highlight the whole thing in different colors. Actually, if I were you I would take all of the character profiles out. They seem like RPG applications and you'd never see something like that in professional writing. Also, quite a few run-on sentences. Another thing is it seems too casual to be written in anything but first person. Try adding less of your own thoughts and more of the characters thoughts.
 
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Thank you for that, Zephy, I'm glad to see that you will be reading further. The critique is also very much appreciated. However, I'll be honest... my opinions on first-person perspective aren't that high, as I try my best to avoid it.... I like my third person, omniscient, and well... like it so commonly goes, 'to each their own'. Though I do have some writings in the first person narrative... it just... doesn't seem to suit me. =\

I also apologize about the font colours and the fact that they looked like RP apps (the truth is, was that they were, indeed, snippets of RP applications as I was a bit on the lazy size to edit them before). I made sure to edit out what I felt readers would find out later in the story, however, I'm going to keep up itty-bitty snippets of the trainers still yet up there.

Now... for chapter two~

Chapter Two

"These are for you. You may know, that once you capture a full team of six Pokémon, the next one you obtain will be transported to the PC. Your Pokédex will handle the transportation, and you can access the PC at any of the Poké Centers across the land. And... I am afraid... it is with my giving these to you that our meeting has begun to come to its closing."

Professor Oak frowned a little, perhaps one of the first times he had done so in the past hour. He always hated to see starters leave. Hated, but loved. He remembered his own reckless journeys when he was younger, and it always made him glad to meet the young Trainers that wished to make their own. And in turn, it always upset him to see them go, wishing for what he could not have anymore at his ripe age. Ah, but he had lived a good life, and so there was no reason for self-pity! With that in mind, he gave them another smile.

Dixie and Jaxx took the five other PokéBalls from Professor Oak that accompanied both Squirtle's and Zalaras' own, The colourfully dressed girl looked to the fire symbol on the one for the golden lizard and put the other capsules in her messenger bag. As for Jaxx... he had to juggle the capsules in his hold before getting them balanced enough and attaching them to a chain that dangled at his side.

The dark-haired girl looked to Zalaras' capsule more. Symbols on a PokéBall... seemed to be a good idea to tell the difference of what Pokémon it was that Dixie was going to be sending into battle or calling upon for aid. She took mental note of this and was going to make sure to mark her PokéBalls for future reference.

The system that surrounded the PokéBall seemed very high-tech, very secure... trust-worthy. Seemed that everything was going to be fine. And apparently, both parties had someone to go on this journey with now... perhaps things were better than what they had thought of them from the beginning.

Opening her bag, she stuck five of the PokéBalls in a pouch and then made her way back over to Zalaras. Crouching down, Dixie knelt beside him and then showed him the PokéBall. The golden lizard winced and edged away some.

Giving a slight shake of the head and putting the PokéBall away, Dixie held out her hand to Zalaras and then said to him, "don't worry Zal... I'm not going to keep you in the PokéBall if you don't want.... I just wanna be friends with you. Together, we'll be traveling, doesn't if sound exciting?"

Holding out one of the balls, Jaxx rolled his eyes at the girl and then he withdrew his Squirtle, looking down at the ball as it disappeared within. It was his, it was in there... his responsibility in his hands. He nodded up at the professor, and offered a simple, "thanks... for everything." With that, he had made for the front of the laboratory, figuring that both Dixie and the stubborn Charmander would soon catch up.

The Professor nodded at the thanks, "you're most welcome. And best of luck to you, of course," he called after the boy as he left. That boy sure was a quiet one... perhaps this was a good thing, though, Oak mused. If Dixie and Jaxx would be traveling together, well, Dixie had enough energy and spunk for the both of them. That, and the Squirtle he had chosen suited him well... and for that, Oak was pleased.

It was then that the Bulbasaur snorted, bringing Oak back out of his musing. Oak patted it once more. "Yes, yes, my young friend. Your turn will come soon enough as well." With that said, he turned to Dixie once more, perhaps for the last time.

Not paying much attention to either Jaxx or the professor at the moment, Dixie was still crouched next to Zalaras and then said, "so what do you say, huh, Zal? You and me, the dynamic duo? The dream team? Anything?" continuing to hold her hand out to Zalaras, Dixie watched as the lizard stood up on his hind legs and get up, going over to her, turning his head away and offering a small hand. Dixie's grin widened at the act and she shook his hand gingerly.

Smiling down to her as she and the Charmander seemed to be bonding, Professor Oak placed a hand on her shoulder and the girl let go of Zalaras' small hand, getting up. Oak began to walk her back to the entrance of the lab, following the way Jaxx had walked back out. He would see them off, watching from the doorway, until they turned the corner into Pallet and onward into the wilds of Route One.

At the door way, he knelt down once more and pulled a PokéBlock from his coat pocket and offered it to Zalaras. "Here you go, little fellow. Take care of yourself now and remember to grow. Straightening back up, Oak grinned at Dixie. "Well, Dixie Tucker, as with him, I wish you the best of luck."

"Oh, don't worry Professor Oak! Me and Zal'll become the best team Kanto's ever had! Count on it!" Ah yes, the preteen had dreams -- and with all of her hopes, she really wished to see this dream being carried out. She looked back down to Zalaras and met the Charmander's gaze with a friendly look. He returned the look only somewhat and then the duo were off and down on their way towards Route One.

"He--ey, Jaxx!" Dixie huffed, a little annoyed that he had left them behind as she and the golden lizard had caught up with him. She straightened up and looked at him with a grin and then said, "I thought we were going together! Just that excited to get going, or something?"

A slight scoff was exerted as Dixie said that. Jaxx never was one for excitement, especially over something as minor as beginning a journey that he'd already started. He left his home, came this way, he knew what was to be expected. He supposed that perhaps he was just a tad eager to start, though that was mostly through the fact that he felt some guilt for taking the Professor's time.

"Hehe. Can't say I blame you, though..." she looked down to Zalaras, "ain't that right, Zal?"

The Charmander gave a shrug, yawned and fell into step next to Dixie. At least he didn't have to be in his capsule... that was something right there that had earned a small bit of his respect for the girl.

Grinning for a moment, Dixie hurried to Jaxx's side and then looked down to Zalaras with a smile. The Charmander simply tilted his head at her and gave a slight huff, folding his little arms over his chest and trailing after both Dixie and the boy.

Trotting forwards just a bit, Dixie fell into step beside Jaxx and clasped her hands together. There was something comforting about traveling with him and Zalaras. Thinking of him for that brief moment, she turned her head and looked to the small golden lizard. He seemed to have this distant look on his face as he walked not too far behind the duo; seeing it made Dixie ponder about him for a moment.

Trailing behind the duo still yet, the Charmander yawned once more, not really paying attention to his surroundings, only following both the boy and the girl from watching them in his peripheral vision. There was so much to see, so much to do... he contemplated running away from them. However.... Zalaras rose his gaze to the girl that had chosen him as her starter. She was kind... she had given him a name... she had even allowed for his freedom from a PokéBall as the two traveled together.

As the golden lizard pondered about the girl, Dixie, herself, still watching him, wondering what was up.

Shrugging it off for a moment, Dixie looked up ahead, glancing at Jaxx for a moment and then fiddling with her gloves. There were times where she knew exactly what to talk about, then there were these times (like now) where she didn't know what to bring up at all. Dixie didn't really know a thing about Jaxx, so there wasn't something easy that she could bring up that they could discuss without it being awkward.

Getting lost in her own mind for a moment of what to bring up for discussion, noises went by unnoticed by Dixie... that is until Jaxx had snapped her out of her thoughts by saying, "Dixie... Do you hear that?"

Blinking for a moment, Dixie looked up at Jaxx and then looked around, "do I hear wha--?" she had started before the call of a Sentret rang out like a siren to the others that lived around the area. Dixie kind of felt giddy at the thought of being able to catch one and then looked to the messenger bag that hung at her side. However... having Zalaras listening to her... there was the challenge right there.

"Since when were Sentret Kanto native?" Dixie had asked, listening to the cries of the Pokémon for a little longer.

"Guess you don't pay attention to the news all that much..." Jaxx scoffed, "there was a newscast about how some poachers had gotten their hands on Sentret and Furret and tried bringing them over to this region. Someone foiled their plans and the Pokémon went loose around this area." He looked to her for a moment and then shook his head slightly, "it happened about half a year ago, you lived around here and you didn't know that?"

"Well... I wasn't allowed to venture out past here till today..." Dixie replied, frowning to him.

"Whatever.... Anyways, it doesn't sound like it's just passing by to me," Jaxx commented, pulling Squirtle's PokéBall from the chain at his side and expanding it. He released the Tiny-Turtle Pokémon from its capsule and it stood quick at attention.

Dixie had nodded in agreement. Sentret that screeched out like that were usually warning the others that there was danger or something lurking about. It was a fairly deafening noise if you were in close proximity, but if you were farther away and heard it, a being such as Dixie would have found the cries to have been quite the adorable noise.

Zalaras, on the flip side of the coin, rushed up to Dixie's side for a moment, looking around for the disturbance, the flame on its tail burning a little more vigorously. It may have been quite the reluctant and stubborn Charmander, but it didn't mean that he was going to disregard everything including his own well being at the point and time. If he needed to defend himself from enemies, then he was going to do so. Perhaps not in full compliance with the human, but he would still do so nonetheless.

"It's starting to hurt my ears..." Dixie said after a while or listening to the Sentret's cries, raising her hands up and clasping her hands over her ears. Both she and Jaxx started looking around for the Sentret that was making all the ruckus. Zalaras was doing the same, however, he decided to run up and close to the grass, wondering if he were able to go and find it so that he could perhaps battle it.

With a swift dash, a Sentret with a brown and white checkered fedora ran in front of the humans and Charmander, standing guard in front of the burrowing hole of their colony. The fuzzy little fellow tossed his hat off and balled his white paws into tiny little fists, preparing himself for a fight.

Jaxx sighed, signaling for his Squirtle to move in for an attack. It was a low level, didn't know many attacks, it should be rather obvious what was going to happen.

Squirtle placed his foot firmly to the ground, digging into it slightly. He was concentrating... choosing a target... he would need to start off with one, but it seemed that the Sentret and likes had chosen the 'leader' to be the victim for this one.

A slight smirk crossed the water-type's mouth and then Squirtle ran forward, launching itself soon after at the furry Pokémon. Tackle, that'd show 'em!

As the tiny turtle launched itself at the Sentret, the rodent Pokémon scooched to the side in time, narrowly avoiding the attack. He countered with a Tail Whip straight to the turtle's face, hoping to ward him off.

Zalaras, on the other hand, had narrowed his eyes at the Sentret and then saw the Squirtle charging for it. Tch, that turtle was going in for the attack already? Nuh uh... the golden lizard wasn't going to have it. That turtle already had the advantage by being a water-type, but going in for the first attack? Not cool... not in the least. Furrowing his brow, Zalaras rushed in ahead as well, his claws drawn back and getting ready to use a basic Scratch attack.

"H-hey, wait, Zalaras! I didn't say to attack, yet...." Dixie called out to him, sounding almost helpless as to what to do. She couldn't be blamed. Dixie may have lived with a lot of Pokémon that her Aunt had owned, but that didn't mean that she had any experience in how to actually take command and tell her very own Pokémon what to be doing.

The Charmander had caught the Sentret by surprise because of both coloring and an assault, the fuzzy little fellow wound up taking the Scratch attack. He recoiled a bit from the attack, then attempted to counter with a Tackle, hoping to pound the daylights out of the Charmander.

Zalaras prided himself for a moment, being able to have his attack hit the Sentret, however, what caught him was the Spearow that had swooped down out of no where and started to take away his opponent before its Tackle were to hit. He heard his trainer gasp, and he was about to shrug it off, being the fact that he still didn't really care all that much for her. When he saw the Spearow begin to take fight with the rodent in his talons, that's when the lizard jumped up and bit onto the tail feathers of the fowl. Hopefully this would impede the bird greatly enough to stay grounded.

Jaxx had also reacted to the situation that had just now happened before his, Dixie's and their Pokémon's very eyes. Normally he would have shrugged it off. He would have said that that was how nature worked. It's how his brothers had taught him -- Spearow were hunters. Sentret and Rattata were prey... it was the circle of life.

"Leave it alone," he spoke through tightened lips, clenching his fists and furrowing his brow as he looked to the Spearow. What else would he do? What else could he do? Even his Squirtle was a bit taken aback, stopping and taking a step back from the target, looking to the bird, slightly nervous. That was a pretty big bird to just suddenly appear out of nowhere... really... really big.

Dixie, on the other hand, looked to the Sentret and then looked back to Jaxx, not really sure on what to do. Hesitantly, she took a step forwards, hoping to get to the battling creatures and at least intervene if she needed to. Battling Pokémon was something that she was looking forward to to get into the Indigo League, yes, but there were things that just weren't going to fly... and apparently, that was the Spearow, seeing as Zalaras had bitten down on the tail feathers. Dixie winced slightly as she heard a growl escape form Zal's mouth and at the Spearow.

"H-hey, Jaxx?" the dark-haired girl turned her attention to her peer and gave a sheepish look, "perhaps if we get our Pokémon to actually work together, we can get the Sentret away from the Spearow...?" she didn't sound too sure, then again, why would she? Dixie didn't want to see the poor Sentret get carried off like that, it made her sick to her stomach even though she knew that what was going on was part of how nature worked. A majority of the bird Pokémon were hunters, and rodents and reptiles were their prey.

As it stood, the Spearow flailed his wings wildly as the fire-type had his maw clamped tightly around his tail feathers and the Sentret was wailing loudly once more. Jaxx's Squirtle more or less at a loss of what to do next, the high vibrations of the Sentret's call's sound waves vibrating through his head. How could that Charmander not mind all of that and still be so determined to hold on to that bird while all of that was happening?

Watching this scene for a few seconds longer, Jaxx turned his attention to Dixie and then nodded, "right..." he turned back to Squirtle and then motioned towards the Spearow, who was now flapping its wings and pecking angrily at the golden coloured Charmander. Its clutch on Sentret still held strong, though. It didn't seem all that willing to let up its meal. In fact... the Spearow seemed to have tightened his grip on the Sentret, causing it to shrill like a banshee.

"Hnn... Squirtle! Go in for a Tackle attack!" Jaxx commanded, not wanting to hear the pained shrieks that emitted from the Sentret's mouth any longer.

The little turtle nodded as he had heard the command through the cries of the rodent and charged forwards once again, throwing his body against the Spearow and knocking it off balance. This time... this time the Spearow's grip on the Sentret faltered and the brown creature fell to the ground, small puncture marks showing through its once smooth and undamaged fur.

Dixie's hand immediately traveled to her messenger bag and inside. Feeling around, she rummaged through various supplies, her hand brushing against the six Pokéballs that Professor Oak had given her and then to the Potion that she had nicked from the greenhouse the day before leaving her aunt's house to get started. Now that she had it firmly in her grasp, she darted out and scooped the Sentret up in her arms. She then returned to Jaxx's side, fumbling with the potion in her hands.

The Spearow didn't seem to approve of this. As he kicked up from the ground, the Spearow beat his wings wildly at both Zalaras and the Squirtle, shaking the lizard's grip on him and making him let go. Now airbourne, the Spearow looked down to the Squirtle and dove down, aiming a Peck attack straight for his forehead.

The Squirtle tried to back up, however, the Peck attack hit him square in the head, knocking him back onto his back, leaving him to squirm and try rolling back into a suitable position. Taking note of this, Zalaras growled and darted for the Spearow, not really caring if he was supposed to be taking orders from a human. He didn't care that she was his trainer. He ws his own being, his own thinker, and he would act upon that.

Drawing his claws back once more, Zalaras leaped into the air and then aimed a Scratch attack to the fowl. His claws struck across the bird, causing feathers to pull off and reveal three nice scratch marks from where the golden lizard had struck it.

"Dixie... you sure you should really be taking care of that thing now?" Jaxx asked as soon as he had momentarily averted his attention from the battle to the Sentret that she cradled in her arms. It looked just like a normal Sentret... however... he supposed that like people, Pokémon were all different, too. He had remembered seeing Sentret in his Dex, but as he looked at this one, he could only see two differences. The paws of the creature where milky white and the very tip of his tail was coated with black fur.

"Well, what do you want me to do?" Dixie asked, spraying the contents of the potion on the Sentret.

Shaking his head, Jaxx turned back to his Squirtle and saw that it had managed to get back up onto his own two feet once again. Giving a slight smirk of satisfaction, Jaxx called out to the turtle once again, "Squirtle, go ahead and aim another Tackle attack for it!"

Giving another nod, Squirtle clenched its little hands and charged for the Spearow as it landed to the ground. Fortunately enough, the Spearow was squaring off with Zalaras, eying the Charmander with much disdain. Before the Spearow started after the lizard, Squirtle had tackled it from behind, causing it to tumble forwards and remain quite motionless for some time.

Jaxx watched the Spearow for what seemed like minutes before detatching a PokéBall capsule from his chain and throwing it out to the Spearow. The bird became engulfed in the red light of the PokéBall and then encased. Jaxx's eyes stayed glued to the red light on the PokéBall as it shook and then nervousness started to rise within his being. Shake after shake, the male preteen could feel the palms of his hands start to break out in sweat.

Then... it stopped, the light fading and the Spearow staying caught within.

Relaxing his stance, a smile was seen upon the preteen's face and he went over to the calmed PokéBall. Jaxx bent down and picked up the ball. He averted his gaze to Dixie for a moment and then saw her making her way to the checkered fedora with the Sentret still cradled in her arms.

The rodent didn't seem to look too pleased, however, it had calmed down a lot as the potion that Dixie had used started to take effect and numb his pain. Jaxx noted the slight squirming that Sentret exerted when Dixie had gone over and picked up his hat.

Taking both the Pokémon and the hat to Jaxx, she handed them over to him. Jaxx took them rather reluctantly and then arched a brow to the girl as he saw her quickly go over to the Charmander's side and reach out for him.

"Hey Zal, you did a really good job out there, I hope you know that!" Dixie grinned, crouching down to be more level with the lizard. Charmander had looked up to her, a little confused. He didn't listen to her... and yet she was praising him.

Jaxx watched both Dixie and the Charmander for a moment before looking down to his Squirtle and giving the Pokémon a small smile. The Squirtle grinned back up to his trainer and then went over to his side, trying to look up at the injured Sentret that was now cradled up in his arms. The water-type's eyes were filled with curiosity and Jaxx gave a small laugh as he crouched down, showing the Squirtle the Sentret.

Sentret looked to Squirtle and then sharply turned away from it, causing it to let out a small whine of pain from where the Spearow had gotten it.

Dixie had made her way back, Zalaras trailing reluctantly behind her.

"How's he looking?" Dixie asked, turning her gaze to the Sentret.

"Better, thanks to the potion you used on it."

"Hehe, that's good," Dixie received the Sentret, as well as the fedora, back from Jaxx and then looked down to it. Giggling softly she cooed to it, "everything's gonna be alright, little guy. That mean Spearow's not around any more."

"... Do you always do that?" Jaxx asked, giving the girl a skeptical look as he saw her talking to the Sentret.

"Do what?"

"Always act friendly towards Pokémon even though there's a risk of getting attacked..." Jaxx had then motioned to her hand where Zalaras had bitten her. He shrugged and then looked away, "just doesn't seem to be the type of behaviour that should be exerted if you're really intending to go to the Pokémon League. If you were going to be a Breeder, maybe...."

"Well... all trainers have their own way of training Pokémon and stuff... this is just my way..." Dixie replied, frowning a bit. Kneeling down, Dixie put the Sentret down on its own two feet, giving it a reassuring smile as she saw the quizzical look that was shown in its expression.

She put the fedora back onto the Sentret's head and then stood up, motioning for Zalaras to come over to her side. Of course, the Charmander reluctantly went over, giving a look to the Sentret. He was still prepared to battle, though it looked as if the tussle with the Spearow had left it rather shaken.

"Anyways! Let's get going to Viridian!" Dixie said enthusiastically, looking up at Jaxx with a grin. In return, the boy arced a brow at her and then withdrew the Squirtle to its capsule. Putting it back onto the chain that held his three other Pokémon as well as the unoccupied capsules, Jaxx started forwards some.

"You're not going to catch the Sentret?" Jaxx asked.

"Nope!"

"Any reason why, even though it was right there and weak?"

Dixie gave a shrug of the shoulders and then looked down to Zalaras, "I wanna catch the Pokémon that will be part of my team by befriending them."

"... Good luck with that..." there was obvious sarcasm in Jaxx's tone, though Dixie merely brushed it off and started forwards, leaving the confused Sentret behind.

"Girls are so confusing...."

"I can say the same thing about boys."

Rolling his eyes, Jaxx gave an inaudible scoff and continued forwards, deciding against arguing with the girl.

"Anyways, do you know how long it'll take to be getting to Viridian?" Dixie asked, stretching her arms up for a moment.

"Viridian isn't that far away from here.... We'll probably make it there by the time late afternoon rolls by...."

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Stalking the forest in the early morning ambiance, a girl had a large bag slung over one shoulder and she looked through the trees and grass for any Pokémon that she could find. She had gotten up early in hopes of finding Pokémon that were only active in the mornings... however, she probably didn't need to worry about that aspect being in Viridian Forest.

"All right, it's Jakkaru the great Pokémon collector on her way," the girl said to herself with a grin, venturing further into the forest and pushing past bushes. The leaves and branches caught at her clothes, leaving behind small damaged areas. It was stuff that Jakkaru didn't mind, she was far too used to it.

However, as the brunette walked through the grass, the stillness in the air seemed to unnerve her. It was far too quiet this morning for nothing to be up and about. Usually Caterpie and Weedle were up with their morning feeding upon the lush grass or leaves.

Inhaling and taking in the the area around her, Jakkaru came up to a tree, set her bag down and started to climb the branches. As she did, she could hear the rustle of young Pidgey as they shifted nervously in their nests. Smiling to herself, Jakkaru left them alone and continued up a little more, pausing as she came across a Metapod.

Her smile widening at the sight of the Pokémon, the brunette gingerly took the Pokémon from it's spot and then made her way back down from the tree, making sure not to cause any damages to it.

"Well... the first catch of the day! Wasn't that easy?" Jakkaru asked herself, looking down to the Metapod and beaming. The cocooned Pokémon stared back at her idly and then closed it's eyes back up. Jakkaru seemed to grin even more at this -- it seemed that the Metapod was rather lax about what was going on and didn't mind one bit.

Picking up her bag and slinging it over her shoulder, Jakkaru made her trek to leaving the forest and back to Viridian. Though she would have stayed longer within the forest to get a better look around, she decided that the Metapod would do for now.

"It's only morning after all..." Jakkaru reminded herself, cradling the Metapod. When she looked down to it, she couldn't help but notice how big they actually were. She thought back for a moment and recalled other Metapod that she had seen. They were either at a distance, or she had been chased off by angered Beedrill before she had gotten the chance to actually make a grab for it.

Taking a deep breath once more, Jakkaru started to hear chirping of Pidgeotto. They weren't those normal, early bird callings either. No, these ones sounded angered and quickly, Jakkaru looked up, trying to pick her way through the foliage for the disturbance. The cries were near, and then a shrill caw of a Fearow rang through the air.

'Oh no...' Jakkaru quickly thought, clutching the Metapod a little tighter and then quickly looking for an exit. After running around for a good couple of minutes, Jakkaru found a clearing and then cast her eyes back up, looking for the two bird Pokémon that she had heard before.

Their movements seemed more stiff than usual as Jakkaru observed them. Less graceful than what she had seen before. She pondered to herself and came to theorize that perhaps a Beedrill or something of the like had poisoned them.

'But the both of them?' Jakkaru found herself to be thinking, 'if they really had been poisoned by a Beedrill, there's no doubt that they would be chased off by a swarm of angered Beedrill.' She clenched her jaw for a moment and then knelt onto the ground, putting down the Metapod and then opening her bag, pulling out her PokéDex, hoping that it may have the answers to both the Pidgeotto and Fearow's movements.

Opening the Dex with the press of a button, the pocket encyclopedia turned on and picked up on the two birds that it was aimed at and came back with a response, "there is no information on the condition."

"Well that's just darn useful..." Jakkaru sarcastically muttered under her breath, closing the Dex and putting it back into her bag. As she leaned over to pick the Metapod back up, she saw the Pidgeotto take a plummet and then land on the ground about five feet in front of her. The Fearow had followed shortly after, it's wings spread wide and it's chest heaving, obviously growing worn from the battle it was having with the other fowl Pokémon.

Wincing a bit as the two birds had gotten closer to where she was, Jakkaru saw the Pidgeotto push itself back up and stagger forwards some. The smaller of the two birds also spread out its wings and gave a weak, yet angered cry towards the Fearow.

Backing up from the two birds a bit, Jakkaru shifted her bag slightly and wondered if she could catch these two birds as well as opposed to the Metapod that she had in her clutches. As she saw it, these two Pokémon were tired... and after their little bout, there's no doubt in her mind that they would be easy to capture within PokéBalls.

As she had given thought to that very thing, both Fearow and the Pidgeotto collapsed to the ground, both panting rather heavily. Jakkaru quickly put the Metapod down and then ran over to the two of them, worried for their well being. She debated capturing them now as opposed to when they were in at least a little better condition.

"They need to be taken to a Pokémon Center..." Jakkaru muttered angrily to herself, pushing away her collector's train of thought. Looking to them again, she clenched her jaw... there was no way that she could just simply go and carry these two Pokémon to a Center. They were both far too big, and to add that onto both her bag and the Metapod... there was no way that she could do that the entire time she made her way back to Viridian.

She gave a sigh and then went back over to her bag, quickly opening it once again and pulling out two PokéBalls. Expanding them, she tossed them towards the two birds, watching the capsules shake for a good half minute or so then come to a calm. Jakkaru sighed once again as she tried to push away the worry that was starting to bubble up.

"Okay... have these two... time to hurry back to Viridian and get them to Nurse Joy..." Jakkaru said, giving herself the verbal reminder so that it would better stay in her mind to do so. Picking up her bag once more and then scooping the Metapod back up after putting the now occupied capsules in her bag, Jakkaru hurried to where it was she had entered the forest from.

It took a good ten or fifteen minutes, but Jak had made her way out of the forest and back along the route to Viridian. She had to stop to mentally curse herself fot arising very early this morning to be getting her Pokémon findings done, as it would have easily been about a thirty minute walk to Viridian.

Taking a quick look at her watch, Jakkaru grimaced.

9:48 AM.

"Darn it... not even a full three hours out here yet..." Jakkaru sighed, looking back up and starting her way down the trail. A little irritated, she grumbled to herself about not having a bike so that walking to and from places wouldn't be so difficult.

By the time that Jakkaru had entered Viridian City, her watch read 10:34 AM. Frowning at that, Jakkaru cursed to herself again and then started to hurry to where she knew the Pokémon center to be. The Metapod gave a slight shake, obviously a tad disgruntled with the fact that Jakkaru had taken to running again.

As she had made it in front of the Pokémon Center, Jakkaru took a moment to catch her breath and then entered through the automatic doors. Nurse Joy was behind her desk, filing papers. Her gaze immediately turned to Jakkaru as the girl made her way to the front desk and she gave the girl a look.

"Back again, Jakkaru?" Nurse Joy said, putting her hands on her hips. "Isn't there a day that can go by where you don't show up here at unusual times with an injured Pokémon of some sort?"

"Sorry... but this time it wasn't my doing, I swear!" Jakkaru said, placing the Metapod on the desk and then digging into her bag. She pulled out the two PokéBalls and then handed them over to Nurse Joy. Jakkaru was a little hesitant to do so. The expression that was on Nurse Joy's face wasn't the usual happy looking one that she had sported when there were other people coming in to have their Pokémon treated and looked after.

"One's a Pidgeotto and the other is a Fearow," Jakkaru explained, "I saw them fighting out in Viridian Forest, but there's also something about them that I couldn't quite figure out. I tired using one of the features on my Pokédex to find out what was up with them, but it didn't have any information."

"What do you think?" Nurse Joy asked, putting the capsules on a tray and preparing to take them to the back.

"At first, I thought it may have been poisoning... but when Dexter said it wasn't that, I couldn't think of anything else since they didn't show any symptoms of slight paralysis..."

"I'll see what I can come up with, then..." Nurse Joy replied, taking a few steps forwards and then pausing, "but you know... I've also noticed that a lot of Pokémon are starting to act differently these days...."

"Really?" Jakkaru's interest was suddenly piqued.

Nodding again, Nurse Joy continued, "but I'm not quite sure what it is that could be causing it."

"... That's so weird..." Jakkaru murmured, looking down to the Metapod and giving this matter more thought than she previously had. When she had seen both of the fowl Pokémon, she had only figured it to be a slight condition that had been bestowed upon them somehow. However... thinking that they both had fought till they passed out instead of having one exerting their dominance.... That was strange indeed.

"... karu... Jakkaru?"

"Huh?" Jakkaru snapped out of her thoughts and looked to Nurse Joy.

"Why don't you wait in the lobby for your Pokémon to be healed up," Joy gave that kind smile of hers and then started for the back of the center to tend to the Pokémon. Looking after her, Jakkaru pondered more about what the nurse had said then took the Metapod and made her way to the lobby.

This was all so very interesting... "and maybe Katy would want to know about the behaviours, too... I wonder if she's noticed them, actually." With that, Jakkaru plopped down on one of the couches in the lobby and then put the Metapod in the empty space next to her. It eyed her idly and then closed his eyes, not really giving a care to his surroundings and falling into a slumber.

Digging into her bag once more, Jakkaru pulled out a journal and then flipped it to an empty space and then pulled a pen from one of her pockets. She had made sure to take notes on the Fearow and the Pidgeotto and how it was that their movements looked when she had watched them.

While in Viridian Forest, I had recently picked up a Metapod and then was getting ready to make my way back home. I heard the cry of a Pidgeotto and then tried looking for it. Having no luck, I rushed to a clearing and saw that it had been fighting with a Fearow.

I have seen Pidgeotto and Pidgeot both fighting Fearow to keep their territorial boundaries. Their movements, even though they are attacking, are so graceful and fluid. When I watched the ones that I had captured today, I noticed that their movements were stiff and when they dove at each other, it was sharp. The Pidgeotto had fallen from it's flight after a while, the Fearow landing on the ground before it.

The Pidgeotto seemed to show a sense of determination. It had pushed itself back up and gave an angry cry to the Fearow. However... it seemed that's all both of them could handle before they had both passed out from exhaustion.


Her hand came to a halt as soon as she had written 'they had both passed out from exhaustion'.... Pursing her lips together, Jakkaru tapped her pen against the journal and then gave a small scowl.

"That's all I can really write?" she wondered aloud, her voice in a relatively irritable tone, "this is nothing that would even interest her...." Jakkaru leaned back on the couch, dangling her head over the back of the couch a bit and staring up to the ceiling, hoping for some inkling to what it was that she saw and that Nurse Joy had mentioned.

Sitting back up, Jakkaru closed her journal with a rather annoyed huff and then stuck it back into her bag. After she had done so, she looked to the Metapod and then tilted her head at it.

"You don't seem to be acting all that differently..." Jakkaru observed, reaching a hand out and patting the Metapod on the top of its head. She paused after a couple of pats and then rose her other arm to check the time again.

11:16 AM

"... This day seems to be going awfully fast already..." Jakkaru commented, giving a slight sigh and continuing to pat the Metapod.
 
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Awright! I got chapter three done, and thanks to Legacy for offering to be a beta~ >w< Much love to that~ Also... thanks to everyone that seems to enjoy this~ I'm happy to be pleasing the readers ^^

Chapter Three

"Meta, Meta, Metapod~ Meta, Meta, Metapod~" came along a singsong voice. Jakkaru had woken up from being on the couch in the lobby to find that the Metapod that she had found earlier that day was missing. Sitting up quickly and frantically looking around for the green chrysalis encased bug, Jakkaru started to panic. She hadn't really caught the Metapod, which meant that somebody else could have waltzed over and claimed it for their own.

Quickly, Jakkaru raised her arm to check the time.

1:49 PM.

"Wow... I was napping for that long?" Jakkaru asked, not even realizing that she even became drowsy enough to have fallen asleep in the first place.

"... I really don't think you should be touching that Metapod, Dixie... really..." came another voice, this one male.

"But... but look at it, Jaxx!" she grinned, holding it up to the dark-haired preteen. "Isn't it just so cute?"

"... But it's not yours..." Jaxx simply replied.

"I-I know... b-but, it's not like I'm stealing it...."

Jakkaru turned her attention to to her left where she saw two kids that looked to be younger than her standing. The girl, Dixie, with the Metapod in her arms and with a Charmander at her side. As Jakkaru stared more intently at the Charmander, her attention drifted from the fact that this unknown girl was holding the Metapod that she had found and was now primarily focused on the golden lizard.

"Whoa! How cool!" Jakkaru exclaimed, scrambling over to them and coming to eye-level with the Charmander. "I've never seen a Charmander like this! Where'd you find him? Oh man, Katy would kill to see this!"

"Huh...?" Dixie looked down to the girl that seemed to be too close for comfort to Zalaras. She blinked a couple of times and lowered the Metapod from showing Jaxx and then said, "y-y'know... I really wouldn't be all that close to Zal if I were yo--"

The Charmander had reacted before Dixie could get her warning out, snapping at Jakkaru's face.

Narrowly avoiding the golden lizard's fierce snap, Jakkaru had tumbled backwards a bit and gave a rather surprised look. It took a moment for her to gather up her thoughts and composure. After that moment, she sat back up and brushed the brown locks of hair from her vision, then smiled up to the duo that were now here at the Pokémon Center with her.

Jakkaru stood up and offered a hand to the both of them... or rather, either of them that would reach out and shake her hand. Dixie had glanced down and tried shifting the Metapod in her hold so that she could carry out the handshake gesture. Jaxx, on the other hand, looked away and shoved his hands into his pockets.

"My name's Jakkaru, and I must say, your Charmander is really awesome! Ember is nothing like it, and it's just... so stunning to look at it!" Jakkaru introduced herself and then looked over to Zalaras once more. The Charmander stuck its tongue out at her and then folded his arms over his chest, growling somewhat.

"I'm Dixie!" the dark-haired girl replied, finally setting the Metapod back down onto the couch and reaching over to shake Jakkaru's hand. The boy had rolled his eyes and then gave an inaudible, unimpressed scoff, keeping to himself rather than socializing with the girl that they had kind of taken the Metapod away from.

Receiving a nudge in the side after a moment, Jaxx gave a scowl in Dixie's direction.

"Introduce yourself, at least...."

Jaxx turned his gaze to Jakkaru and then resisted giving another roll of the eyes. He kept his hands securely in his pockets and then looked away once again, introducing himself, "name's Jaxx...."

"It's so great to be meeting the both of you, then!" Jakkaru said, crouching back down to look at Zalaras. She slightly ignored his discomfort with how close she was to him, though she only stayed around to be looking at him for a good few seconds to observe him. Jakkaru grinned to herself and then stood up straight once again, placing her hands on her hips and then turning her gaze to the two other kids once again.

"Say, which one of you has this Charmander as your partner?"

Dixie jumped up at that, "right here! Zalaras is my companion!" she looked down to Zalaras and beamed, "ain't ya, Zal?"

"Charmander char char..." Zalaras replied, turning away sharply and giving a slightly disgruntled look. He gave off this air that said 'I'm too good for a human trainer'. Dixie just gave a slight smile towards Zalaras and then looked back to Jakkaru.

"He doesn't seem to be very social, does he?" Jakkaru asked, placing her hands on her hips and giving the lizard a look. Grinning as an idea came to mind, the brunette made her way back over to her bag and then dug through the PokéBalls that were within and then pulled out one of her own that sported the same fire-emblem on it.

"Whoa, did you start off with a Charmander, too?" Dixie asked, beaming as she saw the PokéBall that was in Jakkaru's grasp.

"Yup! I named him Ember..." Jakkaru replied, giggling somewhat. "Here, I'll introduce you all."

She released the Pokémon that resided inside the capsule and before them, a Charmeleon was standing. It gave a smile to the trio of trainers and then looked over to the Charmander. Noticing it and its different colouration, the Charmeleon immediately went over and started to sniff at Zalaras. It was interested in the little creature, and it was evident by the confused look that it was giving the smaller Pokémon as he continued to sniff and look Zal up and down.

The Charmander didn't seem to care for the attention that it was suddenly getting. His jaw tightened and his little hands balled up into fists. Zalaras' dark eyes also narrowed at the Charmeleon and he waved an arm out, trying to shove away the nosy Charmeleon.

Jaxx let out a sigh and detached Squirtle's PokéBall from his chain once more. With a push of a button, he made the previously ping-pong sized ball expand into the size of a baseball. Another push of the button and Jaxx had released the tiny turtle Pokémon that was within the water-drop marked capsule.

"Squirtle squirt!" the light blue skinned reptile chirped, smiling a bit and wagging his curled tail. He was happy to be out again, and this time with other Pokémon who's intentions weren't to battle, but to get to know each other better. Waddling his way over, Squirtle waved slightly to both Ember and Zalaras. The motions from the Squirtle caught Ember's attention and the Charmeleon had backed away from Zalaras and had made his way over to the Squirtle, now sniffing at him instead.

Giving a slight laugh, Jakkaru gave an apology, "sorry he's like that.... He's got a rather silly and curious nature, you see?" She knelt down next to him and started to pat his head. Ember the Charmeleon stepped back from the Squirtle and leaned his head more into his trainer's patting, enjoying the attention that he was now receiving.

At the sight, Dixie couldn't help but smile. She turned her green eyes down to Zalaras and then crouched down next to him.

"See Zal? Like Jakk and Ember, we can be good friends like that, too!" she reached out and stroked the Charmander's head. Zalaras recoiled a bit, though later just stiffly stood and accepted the attention that Dixie was giving him. He still didn't look all that pleased about it, however, it seemed that his expression softened some as Dixie pulled her hand away after some time.

"Oh... I totally forgot..." Jakkaru started, standing back up and looking to both Dixie and Jaxx. "You two are new around here, aren't ya? And judging by your Pokémon, you guys just came from Pallet Town, huh?"

"That's right..." Jaxx replied.

"Mhm!" Dixie chimed in, "do you live around here, or something, Jakkaru?"

"Yup! Viridian is my home," she took the moment to explain. She looked up to the ceiling of the center again, thinking for a moment before looking back to the duo and opening her mouth once again, "I'm also guessing that you're probably traveling around for gym challenges, or something. Am I right?"

"I'm not..." Jaxx looked down to his Squirtle companion and saw that both he and Ember seemed to be poking fun at Zalaras. He gave a very subtle smile towards the three Pokémon as they seemed to be having a little bit of fun. If Jaxx couldn't see the enjoyment of hanging out with Dixie, then he'd at least allow for his own Pokémon to see it... and that seemed to be the socialization that they got to experience by being with another.

Shaking his head and averting his attention from the scene, Jaxx turned his gaze back towards Jakkaru. The brown haired girl seemed to have had her own attention stuck on Dixie... who had apparently said something while Jaxx was busy watching the Pokémon that were there.

"I'm afraid you're not going to have much luck with the gym leader here..." Jakkaru was saying.

"Huh? Why not?" Dixie asked, giving a rather disappointed expression.

"Well, the gym's gone through three gym leaders so far that I know. Giovanni, before it was found out that he was part of Team Rocket and then... just disappeared. Then some guy by the name of Gary Oak reigned over the gym for a while before deciding to follow in hi--"

"Whoa, wait, the Gary Oak?" Dixie interrupted, now shocked by what it was that she was hearing. "I've totally wanted to get a chance to be able to meet him. I've heard a lot about his research studies, and they're just so amazing! Oh man, I forgot to ask Professor Oak about him at the lab, too. I feel so stupid."

Jaxx had a puzzled look on his face. "I-I know who Gary Oak is... I just never thought that he revoked his trainer status to become a researcher."

The brunette gave a slight laugh at the two. "Yeah, you're both thinking of the right Gary Oak. I hear he's conducting studies in the Sinnoh region and had been for quite some time." Jakkaru looked to the Ember and the started up again, "however... moreover on the gym.... The last person that was in charge of it was Agatha."

"Agatha... why does her name ring a bell?" Dixie wondered out loud, going back in her mind to see if she could remember anything.

"Well... she used to be in the Elite Four. She retired not too long ago... within the last year, at least."

"Oh... so then... who's in charge of the Viridian City Gym, then?"

"Hm... I think recently, it was a person that went by the name of Marina."

"M-Marina Kris, you mean?" Dixie questioned, giving a slightly baffled look. "But I thought she was a coordinator."

"She splits time between both being a trainer and being a coordinator," Jakkaru explained, "however, these days with her being the leader of the gym, she's got less time to be participating in contests and stuff of the like."

"Wow..." Dixie had turned awestruck. Just thinking that there was a well known trainer and coordinator here in Viridian City. Though, there was another thing that had crossed the dark-haired girl's mind.

"But... isn't Marina Kris also from Johto?"

"Mhm... she came over here once she heard that Viridian City was in need of a new gym leader, and showing her status. She instantly secured her spot as the new leader." Jakkaru explained, looking out the large windows of the center and eying the gym that was only a good few blocks away.

"I wouldn't go off and battle her right away, though..." Jakkaru continued, "if I were you... I'd head to Pewter City first and battle Forrest."

"Oh... h-how long would it take to get there?" Dixie sounded uncertain. To her, she was in a city that had a gym... and to just simply skip it and head to the next one.... Dixie had high hopes and dreams when she had left Saffron City to be going to live with her Aunt Sicily. Those dreams consisted of going out and battling other trainers to eventually go and earn recognition as a great trainer.

"Hm... well... if you rested here for a while and then left early tomorrow morning..." Jakkaru started, pondering about the question. Her gaze turned downwards as she continued thinking about it. "Well... for me, when I left, it took me about two and a half days to make it there."

"Really... that long, huh?" Dixie asked, a little disappointed. She shifted her attention to Jaxx for a moment and then looked back to Jakkaru. "So... if you're suggesting what gym to be going to first, does that mean that you do the gym challenges as well?"

Jakkaru gave a slight laugh and then nodded, "I did, yeah... but I've only got so many badges.... I mean, I kept returning here because I easily get homesick... so I don't travel all that much." With that, she returned to her bag and pulled out a lavender case. Opening it, she revealed the badges that were neatly nestled within. At the sight of the three polished badges, Dixie's eyes began to sparkle and she looked to Jakkaru with admiration.

"Wow! It's the Boulder, Cascade and Thunder badges!" Dixie exclaimed, bouncing on the balls of her feet. "Tell me, tell me! How strong were the leaders? Were they just totally awesome? I bet they were! Oh man, I so can't wait to battle them now!"

"Dixie... shouldn't bombard the acquaintance with all of that at once..." Jaxx finally spoke up after being silent for more than half of the time. However, his attention was split between the two girls and the Pokémon that were their apparent starters. Even though it looked as if nothing was going to be breaking out anytime soon, Zalaras still carried that annoyed look upon his reptilian face.

"Oh, it's fine, really... uh... Jaxx, wasn't it?" Jakkaru replied, rubbing at the back of her neck with her free hand as she had forgotten the boy's name in the short amount of time that they had known each other.

Jaxx had grimaced as he had heard the uncertainty in her voice. He shoved a hand into his pocket and then turned his head to the side. "Yeah... that's it. Jaxx." He said it to allow her to know that she had been right... but he couldn't help but be bothered just a tiny bit by the girl's forgetfulness.

"Well... Forrest is no big deal if you have grass or water-type Pokémon," Jakkaru began to explain, turning her attention back to Dixie. "Also, Misty of Cerulean City won't do good against electrical or grass-type Pokémon either. Lieutenant Surge, on the other hand..." Jakkaru winced as she had mentioned his name and then turned her gaze back down to Ember and the other two basic evolutionary Pokémon that he was with. She had shut her lavender badge case and then clenched her free hand.

"His Raichu is awesomely strong... it was really hard for me to come up with a tactic to beat him." Jakkaru seemed to have a pained expression cross her face as she had mentioned that.

"I had eventually switched out one of my own team to make room for a Geodude that I had caught prior to that." A smile crossed Jakkaru's face to hide her expression, "luckily he pulled through... and after all of that, he evolved into a Graveler!"

"So cool..." Dixie said, marveling at the older girl. Jaxx gave another roll of his eyes and took a few steps towards the Pokémon, taking the Metapod with him. He wanted to see the reactions that they other Pokémon would give being introduced to the bug-type Pokémon. That... and he didn't really think it was all that fair that the Metapod had been being ignored for most of the time now that Dixie had gotten her attention captivated by the brunette that was there, too.

As the two girls seemed to chit and chatter away at gyms and challenges, Jaxx knelt by the Pokémon that were there. He liked spending time with them more than he actually did the girl that had asked to travel together, that was for sure. There was just something about the Pokémon that suited him more than actually being with a person. Perhaps it was the fact that they more often times than not didn't judge people. As soon as one was to befriend a Pokémon, they offered unconditional love and friendship... no matter who it was.

A grin found its way upon Jaxx's lips as he saw his Squirtle start to edge away from him and then near the Metapod out of curiosity. Zalaras shrugged off the bug and Jaxx scooted over next to the lizard. He looked down to the golden lizard and then held out his hand to it in a friendly manner.

"Heh... you seem to be quite the troublemaker, huh, Zalaras...?" Jaxx questioned, giving the Charmander a kind look. He shifted his gaze to the Charmeleon for a moment. Taking note of the slight, uncertain wag of the tail that the Charmeleon gave, Jaxx held out his other hand towards Ember. The Charmeleon smiled again and then neared the dark-haired boy's hand, sniffing at it before resting his snout in the palm of his hand.

Zalaras looked down as Jaxx started to pat the Charmeleon rather affectionately and then turned away. He had already started warming up to Dixie just a little bit, but this Jaxx kid, on the other hand. Even though his trainer had taken a liking to him, it didn't mean that the gold lizard had. Zalaras considered himself a loner... or perhaps he had let all the people that made him feel mighty about himself get to his head.

A sweet and tangy scent met Zalaras' nostrils and the golden Charmander turned to look to Jaxx once again. The boy's hand was outstretched towards him and was holding a cubic shaped... piece of something. Zalaras sniffed at it as the scent had piqued his interest. Not to mention, the Charmander was growing quite hungry as well. He didn't even notice that he was nearing Jaxx because he was slowly pulling his hand back. It was that block that Jaxx held that Zalaras wanted.

Giving a small laugh, Jaxx moved his other hand from Ember and then gingerly placed it on top of Zalaras' own. He could feel the reptile flinch beneath his touch, though the golden lizard continued to sniff at the mysterious block that the dark-haired male held within his grasp.

"Char... mander?" Zalaras tilted his head slightly and then opened his mouth, moving forwards and gently taking the block from Jaxx. At that, the smile on Jaxx's face widened and then he watched as the Charmander proceeded to eating the block.

A look of surprise mixed with joy crossed Zalaras' face for a split second.

"Like that? It's called a PokéBlock..." Jaxx explained, taking a small PEZ dispenser looking container from his pocket and giving it another shake. A blue one fell into the palm of Jaxx's hand and he held it up. "Heh... the one that you had was a sweet and sour one that my eldest brother made from Pecha and Aspear berries. This one here is a dry flavoured one made from Rawst berries... I don't think you'll like it if sweet and sour are to your liking."

"Hey Jaxx, what'cha doin'?" Dixie's voice rang out. It had turned apparent that her discussion with Jakkaru about gym matches and stuff of the like had ended. She had made her way over and crouched next to both Jaxx and Zalaras. At the sight of him and Jaxx getting along, Dixie smiled, hoping that her own friendship with Zal would soon blossom into something more than what it currently was.

"Looks like he's introducing your Charmander to PokéBlocks." Jakkaru quipped, crouching down to her Ember as she did. The Charmeleon had immediately gone over and started to nuzzle at the girl. Dixie watched the two, a sense of jealously hitting her as she saw how affectionate Jakkaru's Charmeleon was towards her.

A silent sigh escaped the younger girl's lips. 'Why can't Zalaras and I be like that? I mean... even Jaxx and his Squirtle get along....' As if on cue, Squirtle had edged away from the Metapod and gone over to Jaxx. It stood on its tip toes and reached up for his hand, wanting to know what it was that his trainer was holding. Jaxx obliged to the Squirtle's curiosity, showing him the dry flavoured PokéBlock and laughing as Squirtle had taken the treat into his mouth and immediately sported a disgusted look after eating it.

Zalaras had glanced to the other Pokémon getting along with their trainers and then looked to Dixie as well. He wagged his tail to brush off her longing gaze. Zalaras wasn't going to succumb to the girl... not yet... and most likely, not ever.

"Hey... you guys need a place to stay? I mean, you get started to Pewter now, you'll both probably end up staying the night in Viridian Forest. Probably don't want that, do you?" Jakkaru asked the both of them. It had snapped Dixie and Jaxx's attentions from their Pokémon to looking to the girl that they had become acquainted with.

"That's really kind, but I don't think I could do that. I-I wouldn't want to be a burden to someone that we just met..." Dixie said before Jaxx could open his mouth to speak.

He shot her a look. So she didn't mind asking him along on a journey, and yet she was afraid of being a burden to someone who had offered them a place to stay just for the time being. It was a little irritating to have to think about that... just a bit. However, she had asked him if he was willing to travel with her. He obliged. Giving that thought, Jaxx's irritation quickly boiled away and he gave a slight sigh.

"It's really quite fine, and my mom would love it if I brought friends over just to stay for a bit!" Jakkaru pressed, hugging Ember to her. There was a wide smile plastered upon her face as she continued to insist that the two stay over at her house for the time being.

"W-well... I guess it would--" Dixie had started before getting cut off.

"Jakkaru, I've gotten your Fearow and your Pidgeotto all healed and fixed up. They'll need to stay overnight to recover fully, but they're doing just fine." Nurse Joy had flashed that signature smile of hers and then turned her attention towards both Jaxx and Dixie.

"As for you, young man..." Joy started, focusing on Jaxx. "Your Spearow is just fine. A few damages here and there, but nothing severe. I'm guessing that it was your first catch as a trainer?" As Nurse Joy asked that question, she had taken the PokéBall that she had in her grasp and had handed it over to the dark-haired preteen.

Jaxx nodded in response, hesitantly reaching over and taking the capsule back from the red-haired nurse. He held the ping-pong sized ball in his hand for a moment, smiled back at Joy for a brief second and then attached the capsule back onto the chain that dangled at his side.

"Thank you, Nurse Joy..." Jaxx kindly said, averting his attention back to the red-haired nurse for a moment once again. After she had nodded and then turned down the hall back to where a Chansey was waiting for her, both Jaxx and Dixie had turned their attentions onto Jakkaru. Dixie had taken a moment to fiddle with the green and purple striped gloves that she sported before she spoke up.

"Anyways... I guess... if it's fine with you... I suppose we could stay." Dixie looked over to Jaxx for even just the tiniest bit of support. "I mean, it's only one night, right?"

"Right! And then you two can be off to Pewter City first thing in the morning!" Jakkaru added, grinning from ear to ear. She was more excited of the prospect of having people who she already seemed to have considered friends staying over at her house -- and especially with a differently coloured Charmander with them!

"It sounds good to me." Jaxx gave a slight shrug as his Squirtle went over to his side and tugged at his pant leg. Looking down to the small turtle, Jaxx knelt down next to it and then placed an affectionate hand on top of its head. The Squirtle seemed to smile as he did, leaning more against his trainer's touch.

"All right then! To my house we'll go!" Jakkaru cheerily said. Ember seemed to be ecstatic about the two humans and the other Pokémon that were with them staying for the time being as well. His tail wagged happily and he made his way back over to Zalaras again, offering a clawed hand in friendship.

Snorting, Zalaras turned away from the Charmeleon and gave a rather disgruntled sigh. In response, Ember had gone over and given the Charmander an affectionate nuzzle. As he did, the golden Charmander growled and swiped at the larger, red lizard. Zalaras stomped his feet a bit and then hurried to Dixie's feet, just hoping that the more experienced, though annoying, Charmeleon would just leave him alone. He quickly clung to Dixie's multicoloured pants and then scowled at Ember, sticking out his tongue for good measure.

Dixie had looked down and saw that Zalaras seemed to be holding onto her leg while scowling towards Ember. She gave a slight laugh and then leaned over, gently patting Zalaras on the head. The golden lizard only growled as she did, his attention more focused on Ember than anything else at the moment.

"Hey Zal... guess what, we're leaving in a bit to Jakkaru's..." Dixie said, giving the creature a reassuring look. The golden lizard had turned his attention towards his trainer for a split second before letting go of her pant leg and then giving another snort. He didn't push away Dixie's hand, though -- and that, right there, seemed to be an improvement for the starter.

"So... ready?" Jakkaru asked, making her way back to her bag and getting it zipped up. She made her way back, looking rather encumbered with that huge bag dangling off her shoulder as she also leaned over to pick up the Metapod that was there. Ember reached up as if he also wanted to be picked up. Looking down to him, Jakkaru did her best to lean his way and then patted him on the head. She shook her own head at him and then gave a slight laugh before turning her attention back to both Jaxx and Dixie -- awaiting their answer.

"I'm ready as can be!" Dixie chirped.

"... Guess I am, too..." Jaxx said after a moment. He had taken Squirtle's capsule and had withdrawn it. He turned his gaze back to both Jakkaru and Dixie for a moment before reattaching the capsule to his chain and then making his way to the front of the building. He shoved his hands into his pockets in the process, not really waiting up for the two females to be catching up with him.

"Doesn't talk all that much, does he?" Jakkaru questioned, not really addressing anyone in particular and returning Ember to his own capsule. Shifting the bag upon her shoulder for a moment, Jakkaru went to get the Metapod and then started after him, motioning for Dixie to follow her.

Watching the brunette, Dixie looked down to Zalaras and smiled again. "Looks like it's time for us to be going." She grinned, "c'mon! I bet being with her is going to be good for the both of us!"

Zalaras gave a roll of the eyes and then started following after his trainer after she started to follow Jakkaru and Jaxx. He took a moment to ponder why it was that he was still following after Dixie, though he simply shrugged off the thought and continued trailing behind her.

The doors slid open and the trainers stepped out into the open. Dixie had taken her time to stretching her arms high above her head and taking in a deep breath before noticing that Jakkaru was starting to lead the way to her home. And Jaxx was following after her, looking back and smirking at Dixie. It seemed to be a way of saying, 'C'mon, slowpoke'.

Giving a slight scowl, Dixie started forwards before getting tapped on the shoulder and turning to be facing two people. A male and a female. Perched on top of the man's shoulder was a Murkrow that was happily preening itself, and beside the woman stood a Meowth that licked at its paws.

"U-um... h-hello?" Dixie greeted, a little uncertain by the two people that had come up to her.

"Hi there, young trainer!" the female piped up, brushing her long orange hair out of her face. "My name is Rachel Hopkins, and this is my partner, Harvey Yeltz. I must say, your Charmander is certainly a beautiful specimen! Tell me, are you willing to trade for it?"

Dixie's expression became shocked. "What? Zal? No... No! Zalaras isn't up for any 'trade'!" Dixie sounded disgusted as she said that. Zalaras had turned his attention up to his trainer, curious as to know what was causing her sudden change in attitude. He turned his gaze up to the two new strangers and then gave another slight growl -- he disliked their scent already.

"Oh, but surely you'll reconsider when you hear what we have to offer for it!" the male quipped, coming over to the dark-haired girl's side. He held up a PokéBall and then started to go on, "we have Dratini, Eevee and even Johto and Hoenn native Pokémon that we'd be willing to trade for it!"

"B-but... but Zalaras is my starter! He's also my friend, I-I can't just trade him!" Dixie said, her thoughts drifting over to her owning a Dratini or an Eevee of her very own.

Quickly, she shook her head and backed away from the duo, Zalaras quickly trailing after her and clinging to her pant leg once more. He didn't seem too sure about the people that were talking to Dixie, but he didn't like the tone that his trainer was using with them -- which most likely meant that they were wanting something that she didn't want to give them. He noticed that their gazes shifted over to him for a moment and Zalaras' body tensed, bracing itself for battle.

"C'mon, girl!" Rachel pressed, nearing Dixie. "You're passing up owning your very own Dratini or Eevee to keep that Charmander of yours? Think about it! Eevee... just by raising it under any type of extreme condition, over day or night, or just simply using a stone, you could have one of your very own 'Eeveelution' that's powerful." Rachel stepped closer to the colourful girl, her Meowth following close behind with a rather mischievous look on its face.

"Or even Dratini!" Harvey interjected. "You could evolve it into the great serpentine being of Dragonair and then raise it some more to have it evolve into the great and powerful Dragonite! If you're planning on entering the Indigo League one day, it's definitely one to have on your team!"

"But I don't want any other Pokémon for Zalaras!" Dixie yelled, capturing both Jaxx and Jakkaru's attentions. The duo had made their way towards the brunette's house and were actually quite a ways off. Hearing Dixie's yell, though, Jaxx had slipped off his backpack and then came darting to her side, looking to the two people that seemed to be bothering her. His hand was drawn to his chain, his fingers tracing along the PokéBall that contained Fang.

"This is a once in a lifetime trade, girlie!" Rachel almost growled, fighting to keep her composure about herself. Harvey had immediately gone over to Rachel's side, shaking his shaggy, forest green hair out of his eyes and looking down to the boy that had just arrived. It seemed that Rachel was still too focused on Dixie to have noticed that her 'friend' had come up to them as well.

"Just leave me alone and save your rare Pokémon for someone else who would rather trade off their friends just to have a strong team." Dixie was obviously disgruntled as she had said that, as she crouched down and placed her arms around the golden lizard protectively. Zalaras had no objections to this action this time. He just stood there with his mouth clenched and a small growl emitting from the back of his throat as he stared at Rachel and Harvey.

"We'll battle you, then! If we win, you trade, if you win, we'll leave ya alone." Rachel said, pulling a capsule from the belt that was slung around her waist.

"I'd love to battle, but not under those lousy condi--" Dixie started before getting cut off again.

"Hey! That's not right! Dixie said that she didn't want to trade! You shouldn't force her into a battle that has those kind of rules set up when she doesn't want to do that!" Jakkaru had finally made her way over to where all the fuss was starting to break out and had a relatively annoyed look on her face. She, too, had a PokéBall in her hand, seeing if she would need to summon the creature within.

"You two should really mind your own business..." Harvey said, grabbing a PokéBall from a strap that dangled from his side and expanding it. He narrowed his eyes at the two kids that had come up to defend the darker-haired girl.

"I don't want to trade!" Dixie shot at them, her embrace on Zalaras tightening. "H-he may be a stubborn Charmander at times... and maybe a little hardheaded, but I'm not going to give up and start anew with one of your Dratini or Eevee. Gaining trust takes time, and I'm going to take that time to bond with him."

Zalaras looked up at Dixie, not really knowing what to think of his trainer anymore. A realization soon came over him and he turned his attention to the two people that stood before them. Breaking free of Dixie's grasp, he ran out and stood in an offensive stance, getting ready for battle.

"Char char mander Charmander!" Zalaras angrily started, the flame on the tip of his tail burning a little more vigorously than it had been.

"Zalaras...?" Dixie looked out the the golden lizard that new stood in front of her. He shifted his gaze back to her for a moment and then gave his full attention to Rachel and Harvey. Getting the message, the colourfully clad girl stood up and grinned a bit.

"Fine... looks like Zal is up for it. I accept your challenge!" Dixie announced, giving off this aura of new found determination.

Jaxx glanced over to Dixie for a moment and then fiddled with Fang's PokéBall on his chain once again. Detaching the PokéBall, he pressed the button on it and expanded the capsule to something the size of a baseball and held it out. A smirk made its way upon his lips as he asked a question, "looks like you two are up for a two-on-two battle. You don't mind if my Growlithe battles alongside her Charmander, do you?"

"Heh, knock yourself out, boy." Rachel sneered, throwing out the PokéBall that she held and releasing the Pokémon within. Immediately, a foul stench filled the air and just about everyone besides Rachel, Harvey and their own Pokémon had covered their noses. As the white light that engulfed the Pokémon revealed what it was, it was shown that the plant-type Pokémon that had been released glittered underneath the light.

The Gloom, itself, had a green body and a greenish-tinted flower blossoming upon its head instead of the normally seen blue bodied, reddish flowering Glooms. Drool dribbled down its large mouth and it bounced on its feet slightly. The flower petals bobbed up and down as it moved, the stench growing more rancid as the spores from the flower started to spread through the air. Gloom's mouth stretched itself into a smile as soon as it saw that the kids and other Pokémon seemed to have been affected by the smell that her flowering appendage was producing.

"Th-that explains the putrid stench!" Dixie coughed, raising an arm to cover her nose and using her free hand to pull out her Dex and flip it open.

'Gloom, the Weed Pokémon.' Dexter's robotic voice rang out as soon as it had scanned the Pokémon. 'Gloom gives off a very unpleasant smell. While strong against Water Pokémon, Gloom is weak against Fire and Flying types.'

"All right!" shouted an excited, though muffled Dixie. "Zal! It looks like you have the type advantage, bud!"

"Puns..." Jaxx scoffed, releasing Fang and using his other hand to pull the collar of his shirt up over his nose.

Fang howled with joy as he was released out into the open, though his expression quickly changed and fur immediately stood up along the ridge of his back as soon as he saw the Gloom. He growled slightly, though it was cut short. As soon as Fang's sharp, canine senses picked up on the stench that Gloom gave off, Fang had crouched down low to the ground and then placed a paw up and over his nose.

"Nn... sorry boy..." Jaxx muttered when he saw Fang's reaction to the Gloom's smell. He clenched a fist and then averted his attention to Harvey. Jaxx wondered what Pokémon that he'd be sending out. So far it looked like Dixie and himself had the type advantage against the Gloom, but whatever the green-haired man had, it would definitely factor into him and Dixie coming out of this the victors or the losers.

Smirking, Harvey threw out his PokéBall and an odd cry rang out. A Drowzee stood before them, towering over Zalaras and Fang both. His skin, too, glittered in the sunlight that was cast over them. The Drowzee's skin was a mauve colour that seemed to also sport twilight lavender colourings at its lower half.

Dixie had moved her Dex from Gloom to the Drowzee and awaited it to scan the creature. As soon as the image came up for the Pokémon, the girl narrowed her eyes. The picture that Dexter provided showed that Drowzee was normally a golden colour with a brown lower half.

'Drowzee, the Hypnotic Pokémon. It is said to feed on the dreams of its opponents. It is also known for its powerful Psychic attack.'

Jakkaru's muffled voice called out to both Jaxx and Dixie, "you both be careful with that Drowzee! They've got a nasty combination of Hypnosis and Dream Eater! It's definitely bad news for your Pokémon!"

"Got it..." Dixie muttered, trying not to let the aroma of the Gloom get to her.

"You won't have a chance to attack! Gloom, immobilize that Growlithe and Charmander with your Stun Spore attack!" Rachel commanded.

"Ga-loooooom!" the Gloom had sprung back and arced its head down, releasing a cloud of yellow spores that made its way towards both Fang and Zalaras.

"Fang! Don't let it get to you! Flamethrower!" Jaxx called out.

Snarling somewhat, Fang quickly stepped back and then opened his mouth. A stream of flames fired from his mouth and towards the cloud that contained the immobilizing spores. The spores seemed to burn before reaching either Zal or Fang, and seeing that, Rachel had a look of annoyance on her face.

"Let's see how well that works when your Pokémon are asleep!" Harvey exclaimed. He motioned Drowzee forwards and then told it to attack, "Drowzee, show that mutt your Hypnosis!"

Giving another one of its odd cries, the mauve and twilight lavender coloured Drowzee stepped forwards and out in front of Fang. The Growlithe growled at it, though was suddenly caught up in the mesmerizing motions that the Drowzee was displaying by waving its arms up and down. As soon as Fang's eyes were focused on the Drowzee, the tapir-looking Pokémon's eyes then glowed a blue colour and its Hypnosis attack started to take place.

Fang's eyes started to grow heavy and he staggered forwards. He tripped over his own feet and was soon asleep on the ground. His breathing was slow and deep of that of being in slumber and a small disgruntled scoff could be heard coming from Jaxx.

Throwing a fist into the air in triumph, Harvey called out another attack for the Drowzee to use, "all right then, Drowzee... give that pooch a good nightmare, why don't ya? Dream Eater!"

Cackling in delight, Drowzee's eyes faded from its blue glow and then shifted to a red colour. As it did, Fang started to writhe on the ground, whimpering and whining. Jaxx gritted his teeth as he saw his Pokémon going through the combination of attacks that Jakkaru had specifically warned them about.

"Go after that Charmander again, Gloom! Use Razor Leaf this time!" Rachel shouted out.

Gloom charged forwards this time while tilting her head down. She neared Zalaras and attempted to knock him off balance before releasing a barrage of leaves into the air to slice and cut at the small Charmander.

"Oh no, Zal! Get out of the way if you can!" Dixie yelled, removing her arm from over her nose.

Trying to react quickly, Zalaras jumped from where he was, his left arm getting scratched up by the razor sharp leaves as they rushed past him. The golden lizard winced in pain, though held his ground fairly well as he looked back up to both the Gloom and Drowzee.

"Go after Drowzee, Zalaras! Use Scratch!"

Quickly swiping his tail at the Gloom to ward her off, Zalaras drew his claws back and then charged after the Drowzee. Luckily, it was still enjoying its time feeding off of Fang's dreams to react in time to the golden lizard, despite that Harvey had yelled out to warn the tapir-looking Pokémon. Looking to the Charmander in surprise as the little lizard jumped up, the Drowzee stumbled back some, releasing its hold on the Growlithe and getting scratched across the face.

"Atta boy, Zal! Good going!" Dixie praised, jumping up and clapping her hands together for a moment before composing herself once again.

"Heh..." Harvey's expression turned smug as now the Charmander was close to his Pokémon. "Now's your chance, Drowzee! Use Hypnosis on that little reptile!"

"What?!" Dixie was taken aback. Her eyes widened as the Drowzee's eyes glowed that blue colour once again and stared straight at Zalaras. She flinched as she watched the golden lizard's eyes start to droop and his legs start to wobble.

"Ah-- Zalaras, c'mon, you can fight it!" Dixie shouted. Much to her dismay, the small golden lizard had fallen to the ground much like Fang had and was now in a deep slumber. Taking a step forwards, the colourfully-dressed girl was about to run out to her Pokémon before Jaxx held out an arm and had returned Fang to its capsule.

"Didn't say we couldn't switch out our Pokémon." A slight smirk had made its way onto Jaxx's lips as he said that. He reattached Fang's PokéBall to his chain and then pulled off another capsule. Dixie immediately saw it as Spearow's, as the capsule lacked the water droplet mark that his Squirtle's PokéBall had.

"You sure you should be sending that one out so soon?" Dixie asked.

Jaxx nodded. "It's not like its going to come to bonding with me if I never send it out, after all."

"Tch, go and give that Charmander your Petal Dance before that kid can send any other Pokémon out, Gloom!" Rachel scoffed, narrowing her eyes to the two preteens.

"Gloom ga-loooom!" Petals started to flow from the flowering appendage on top on Gloom's head and then swirled through the air. Like the Razor Leaf attack before, the petals rushed for Zalaras as did Gloom. The grass-type Pokémon came into contact with Zalaras and the lizard was thrown back, more scratches upon its body from the Petal Dance.

"No, Zal!" Dixie pushed past Jaxx as he released his Spearow and then quickly knelt down beside her starter. Scooping him up, she looked to the Gloom that seemed to have a rather malicious grin on its face and then moved herself back with the sleeping and battered Charmander in her grasp.

"Dream Eater on that little Pokémon!" Harvey commanded, ignoring the fact that Dixie had basically taken Zalaras out of battle.

Drowzee's eyes glowed red once again and then Zalaras started to flail weakly in Dixie's grasp. The dark-haired girl tightened her embrace around the small fire-type and then furrowed her brow as she looked up to both Rachel and Harvey. There was no other Pokémon that she could possibly be using now that Zalaras was out and apparently having nightmares.

"Spearow! Dive down at Drowzee with a Peck attack! Break its focus!" Jaxx called out after looking at Dixie for a moment.

Doing as he was instructed to do, Spearow dove down from his spot in the sky and aimed for his beak to hit the Drowzee in the forehead. The Drowzee broke his Dream Eater attack and looked up the Spearow at the last second, getting hit right in the nose by the fowl.

The Drowzee gave a cry of surprise before staggering backwards and raising his hands to his nose and rubbing at it gently to make the pain go away. When the Drowzee removed his hand from his nose, a large scratch from where Spearow had gotten it was revealed.

"Show that bird no mercy, Drowzee! Psychic!" Harvey called out, watching the Spearow circle high above.

Obliging to his trainer's command, Drowzee's eyes locked on Spearow. A force was exerted out and Spearow was now hurdling towards the ground as if someone had grabbed it and was pulling it down. Drowzee's hands glowed with a blue aura as this happened, a slight smile stretching upon its face.

"Sentreeeeeeeet!" a high pitched cry echoed out.

Everyone that was there turned their attention in the direction that the cry had come from. As they did, a Sentret donning a checkered fedora had burst out from the neighbouring bushes and jumped onto the Drowzee. It rose its milky white paws and then extended the claws hidden within and then proceeded to scratching wildly at the psychic Pokémon's face.

"Gloom, do something about that rodent!" Rachel cried out, trying to hide her surprise of the sudden appearance. She clenched a fist and then issued another command, "use Bullet Seed on that Sentret!"

Nodding, the green Gloom opened her mouth and fired a series of seeds towards the tan Pokémon. Unfortunately enough for the grass-type, Sentret had picked up on that and had jumped out of the way, the seeds hitting the Drowzee square in the face and knocking him onto his back.

With his attention fully set upon the Gloom now, Sentret darted forwards, showing off its Quick Attack. The Gloom and her trainer, both, looked at the speeding little creature and just as Rachel was about to issue another attack, it was too late. Sentret had tackled the Gloom backwards and then jumped back. It looked to the Spearow for a moment, still not happy with the prospect that it tried to capture him.

"Dixie... that's..." Jaxx started, looking at the Sentret that had immediately taken to attacking the two alternately coloured Pokémon.

"What's he doing out here? I thought we left him to stay back with his colony..." Dixie commented, still cradling the sleeping Zalaras in her arms. She was quite surprised to see that the hat-wearing Sentret had seemed to had followed them all the way into Viridian.

Harvey and Rachel's gaze were still set upon the Sentret that zipped across their line of sight. After a few bouts of a series of Quick Attacks to both the Gloom and the Drowzee with only some assistance from the Spearow, Sentret had gone in at the most opportune moment and slammed into Drowzee, knocking it back into Gloom.

Both of the Pokémon struggled back up, showing themselves to be too weak to continue to battle. They had already been slightly worn down from Zalaras and Fang previously, and now the Sentret appeared and easily outdid them with its speed.

Angered, both Rachel and Harvey called back their Pokémon and considered sending out both their Meowth and Murkrow before stepping back. The two looked at each other for a moment and then saw the Sentret scurry over to Dixie's side before deciding to just leave their meeting with the kids at that.

"Well... I'm just going to go out and say that you kids got lucky this time around..." Rachel announced. "However, that Charmander will be ours... just as well as any other rare, alternately coloured Pokémon shall be."

"This isn't the last you'll see of us, I can assure you that." With that, both Rachel and Harvey, as well as their Meowth and Murkrow, turned along a trail and started down it. Jaxx, Dixie and Jakkaru simply looked after them, not really caring much for the last thing that Rachel had said to them.

"Sentret sen!" the small rodent waved his arms up at Dixie and then balanced up on his tail.

Jakkaru laughed. "Did you two meet this guy already? Looks like he seems to take a liking to you, Dixie."

"R-really?" Dixie questioned, looking up and Jakkaru and then back to the Sentret.

"Maybe it's because you helped it out by using that potion on it and then exerting no want to catching it by battling it..." Jaxx suggested, shrugging and then holding out his arm. The Spearow had hopped from the ground and fluttered to the outstretched arm, using it as a perch and then proceeding to preen himself.

Looking back to the Sentret, Dixie rose a hand cautiously and then held it out in front of the Sentret. "You... wanna be part of my team?" she asked, a little uncertain.

Bouncing on its tail slightly, the Sentret nodded and then placed both of his furry paws up against her hand. He smiled up at her and then lowered himself back to standing on his own two feet. He pulled his paws away from her and then took off his checkered fedora.

Lowering her hand into her messenger bag, Dixie pulled out a PokéBall and then showed it to Sentret. "Care to make it official... Scout?" she offered a smile and hoped that the nickname that she had said would be satisfactory for him. The Sentret hopped at the name, feeling more accepted as being part of the team and then pressed a paw to the PokéBall's button, becoming encased within.

"Heh... ended up capturing it after all..." Jaxx remarked, returning Spearow to his own capsule.

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"Really, Ruth... we're just going to let those kids get off scott-free without getting that Charmander?"

"Oh shush, Harold!" 'Rachel' snapped back. "You really want to get Officer Jenny involved with us again for keeping a battle up with those kids in front of a Pokémon Center? I don't know about you, but I'd rather get the collecting done without having to deal with those officers again."

"Right..." Harold meekly replied, looking to the Murkrow that flew alongside him.
 
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Still one or two instances where you split the quotes, but the second half of the quote should start with a capital letter if it's a new sentence.

Other than that though, I love it. I love Jaxx's rude personality especially. All of the characters in fact have uniqueness and everything so that's great!
 
I love the Suddenly Sentret! I want to see a Sentret in a fedora now.

You write battles way better than I ever could. I could totally get a feel for what was going on. And I have to ask--"Rachel" and "Harvey"...you wouldn't be a Dark Knight fan, would you?
 
@ Legacy:

Uwah @A@;; I have to look closer to those when I proofread and edit, then D;

@ Blackjack:

I want to draw Sentret in a fedora XDD;; *may get that up in her art thread in the Artist's Alcove when she can*

Ah, thanks~ >w< I love writing out battles, and I'm glad that I got the chance to do so in this chapter. Also... the 'Harvey' and 'Rachel'... I actually wasn't thinking of Dark Knight at all. I just chose the names because their real names, Harold and Ruth, started with the same letters XDD;;
 
I really liked the third chapter. I liked the way that the battle was written, I could actually picture what was going on. And the plot was good, everyone is distinct and individual. I liked the Sentret coming back, Karma FTW! AGain, nice work with Chapter 3!
 
>w< Yay~ Thank you so much! I'm very happy that you like it, Phoenicks~ Means a lot to me. owo;; Where are my manners? I'm glad that everyone that's kind enough to leave feedback and constructive criticism has enjoyed it~ <33

I'm hoping to get the fourth chapter up soon~ Should be ready in another two or three days ;3
 
Je l'aime beaucoup. C'est un piece d'écriture très bonne et je suis excitée pour la prochaine chapitre. Shiay, tu es certainment une très bonne écrivain.
 
Je l'aime beaucoup. C'est un piece d'écriture très bonne et je suis excitée pour la prochaine chapitre. Shiay, tu es certainment une très bonne écrivain.

Merci, Merci!! >w< Unfortunately that's the pretty much the limit of my French XD;; Well... except for "Je n'ai parle pas Francais, mais petit peux." ... And I don't even know if that's correct XDDDD;; *had to used a translator -- AKA her brother* XD;;

But the next chapter shall be up soon~ Perhaps tonight 8D
 
Ah... sorry for the lateness .D.;; Ah -- much love to one of my friends for reading over and getting to me with things I could improve.

Chapter Four


Since the battle had come and passed, several hours had gone by. In those several hours, Dixie and Jaxx had both been scolded by Nurse Joy for engaging in a Pokémon battle right outside the center. Dixie had come to apologizing for what she and Jaxx had gotten into and then explaining to Nurse Joy what it was that had gone on and why the battle had taken place. After the scolding and Dixie declining Nurse Joy's offer to take in Zalaras for minor wounds, the duo were soon being led to Jakkaru's house once more.

It took a moment for Dixie and Jaxx both to adjust to seeing Jakkaru's house when they had reached the gates that led to the entrance. The house, itself, was huge. It had two floors and Dixie even caught sight of a relatively large pond in their backyard when she and Jaxx were being walked to the front door of Jakkaru's house.

As the Jakkaru opened the door to her home, a pleasant aroma wafted through the air and hit all three of the kids' noses. The smell was alluring and immediately drew both Dixie and Jaxx in the house. Jakkaru couldn't help but to smile slightly in amusement to their reactions to her mother's cooking.

"So... this is were I live. Be sure to make yourself at home!" Jakkaru happily said, stepping in through the door and taking off her shoes. She motioned for the other two to do the same, and they did. Jakkaru stepped into a living room looking area and then spread her arms out to show off the decently sized room. However, she motioned more to the maroon coloured, leather couches and then waved the two over. After she had, Jakkaru walked out of the room and towards the area that was presumably the kitchen.

Both Jaxx and Dixie hesitantly made their way over to the couch and took a seat on it. Jaxx furthered himself from Dixie and the golden lizard and took to leaning against the arm of the couch. His black hair shagged over his eyes for a moment before he shook them out of his face and then turned his attention to Dixie. She was cradling Zalaras as he slept, a small smile on her face as she cooed to him.

Jaxx gave an inaudible sigh as he watched Dixie with her Charmander and then subconsciously fingered the PokéBalls that were attached to the chain that dangled on his left side. Noticing this, the dark-haired male took three of the occupied PokéBalls from it and released each Pokémon that were contained within. Now before him, a Spearow, a Squirtle and a rather dazed Growlithe stood.

Dixie had averted her gaze for a moment and then saw that Fang the Growlithe had jumped up onto the leather seating of the couch and snuggled up against Jaxx. A smile grew onto the boy's mouth as Dixie watched him and his Pokémon together. He seemed so different when interacting with Pokémon as he did with people in general. Dixie had tilted her head a little as she watched Jaxx's Squirtle also come over and reach up, hoping to get pulled into its trainer's lap.

Succumbing to the Squirtle's wants, Jaxx had leaned over and picked the Squirtle up, placing it next to him. The little turtle Pokémon seemed pleased by this and like the Growlithe, curled up against Jaxx. The boy's Spearow, on the other hand, had taken to a potted plant that stood next to the couch on Jaxx's end and was fluffing his feathers. As it did, it eyed both Jaxx and Dixie rather cautiously and then gave a slight series of chirps that resembled a cackle when it saw Zalaras' rather poor condition.

"Slooooooow pooooooke..."

Turning their heads in the direction of the sound, Dixie, Jaxx and their Pokémon came to be looking at a Slowpoke that had meandered into the room. It gave them all a rather dumb look and then proceeded to yawn before walking ahead a couple more feet. It completely ignored the fact that both of the preteens were watching him with piqued interests. Dixie more so than Jaxx, as she had pulled her PokéDex from her messenger bag and aimed it for the Slowpoke.

'Slowpoke, the Dopey Pokémon. No one can tell when a Slowpoke is thinking, if it ever does think. Its specialty is fishing with its tail.'

"Huh..." Dixie was looking at the image that Dexter had provided and then looked up at the Slowpoke that was slowly making its way into another room. As Dixie compared the image that was on the screen that was on her PokéDex, she noticed that the one she was seeing right in front of her was more of a light peach colour as opposed to the pink colour that Dexter was showing that they normally were.

"Never seen one like that back at the zoo in Fuchsia..." Jaxx commented, raising a hand to pat Fang on the head affectionately. He had shrugged off the sight of the Slowpoke as if it were no big deal... the same as he had when he laid eyes upon Zalaras and his different colouration at Professor Oak's laboratory.

"... What's it like in Fuchsia?" Dixie asked him, now no longer focusing on the Slowpoke, but now looking to Jaxx and putting her Dex away. Zalaras had stirred in his sleep as his trainer had moved, however, as she sat back and placed a hand on top of him, he seemed to come to be more at peace.

"It's nothing all that special..." Jaxx started with a shrug, not looking to the dark-haired girl. "It's like any other city. It's got a gym, it's got a Pokémon Center, a mart.... Like I said... nothing special."

"B-but... there's the Safari Zone there!" exclaimed Dixie, edging a little closer to Jaxx with a grin. "I mean... there's so many different and exotic Pokémon living there! Doduo, Nidorino, Nidorina, Chansey, Tangela, Kangaskahn, Scyther, Pinsir, Tauro--"

"I get it, Dixie... and there's no point in listing them all for me. I come from Fuchsia, remember?" Jaxx said, a little annoyed with her. "We all have our views, alright? I come from Fuchsia, so it's not that exciting to me...."

"... Sorry..." came a meek response from Dixie as she turned her attention back to Zalaras. She slowly started to stroke him and then remembered Scout, who was still within his PokéBall. She reached for her messenger bag once again and then pulled out the occupied PokéBall. Looking to it for a moment, she pulled a permanent marker from her bag as well and uncapped it.

Arching a brow to this, Jaxx watched as Dixie drew a fedora on the capsule.

"Any particular reason you're doing that?" Jaxx questioned, turning his attention back to Fang.

"Mhm!" Dixie held the PokéBall capsule out to Jaxx and grinned. "It's so I can tell the difference between what Pokémon is in what PokéBall!"

"Jakkaru... how many times have I told you to come home during the afternoon so that we know that you're at least alright?" an older woman's voice rang out, catching both Dixie and Jaxx's attentions. They had turned their heads to look to the other room that the voice was coming from and saw a relatively tall, brown-haired woman who's hair came to about her mid-back. She had a hand towel in her hands and was walking rather hastily out of the kitchen towards where Jaxx and Dixie were sitting.

The woman's brown eyes had caught sight of both of the preteens with their Pokémon sitting on the couch in the living room and she swiftly made her way over, a smile finding its way upon her lips. She tucked the hand towel into the pocket of the apron that she wore and then looked back to Jakkaru.

"You didn't tell me that you brought friends over, sweetie..." the brown-haired woman said to Jakkaru.

"... Yes I did, mom..." Jakkaru responded, a little flustered. She looked over to Jaxx and Dixie, a slight pleading look in her expression.

"When was this?"

"When I walked into the kitchen. I said, 'mom, I hope you don't mind, I brought a couple friends here to spend the night so that they can be on their way to Pewter City tomorrow.' ... Didn't you hear me?"

"I must've not been paying attention. I'm very sorry, sweetie." Jakkaru's mother then turned her attention to both Dixie and Jaxx, offering them a warm and welcoming smile. Extending a hand to Dixie and then Jaxx for the handshake greeting gesture, she was quick to [belatedly] welcoming them into their home.

"This is the Korekuta residence. It's pretty much a haven for both Pokémon and us. But please! Certainly make yourselves at home!" She brushed a lock of brown hair out of her face and then took a seat in one of the empty chairs that was also in the living room. "My name is Tora Korekuta... and obviously you both know my daughter, Jakkaru. Though, if you two ever spot my husband around, his name is Hinaki."

"So... what are your names, hm?" Tora looked to both Dixie and Jaxx, that warm smile still on her face.

"I'm Dixie Tucker!"

"Jaxx Meola...."

"Ah, such a pleasure to be meeting you both. I'm really glad that Jakkaru was able to bring people here this time instead of only Pokémon." Tora looked back to her daughter and gave her a wink to let her know that she was kidding around. Averting her attention from her daughter and back to the two preteens that were sitting on the couch.

"I'm also guessing that you two aren't from around here, either. Judging by your Pokémon, I'm going to say that you both have come from Pallet Town."

"Yep! Me and Jaxx are going to be on our way to Pewter City tomorrow morning!" Dixie chirped, patting Zalaras and giving a small grin in Tora's direction. Jaxx had merely turned his attention from her again and then looked to the Spearow that was perched upon the potted tree's branches.

"Pewter City, huh?" Tora questioned, her expression becoming thoughtful before a man's voice rang out from the kitchen.

"Tora, dinner's starting to burn!"

"Oh my..." Tora started, hurriedly getting up from the seat and rushing over to the doorway that led to the kitchen. As she made her way over, Tora had taken to smoothing out her apron and muttering to herself, "I shouldn't really be all that forgetful, I really need to start to remember the things that I was doing."

Jakkaru made her way over to where it was that her mother was sitting and took up the seat. She gave an apologetic look to both Dixie and Jaxx as she smoothed out her shirt. Not really sure on how to bring up any kind of topic.

"I apologize for my mother, she gets distracted real easily when she's not in her study..." Jakkaru explained while looking to her left and motioning towards a door. Both Dixie and Jaxx glanced at the door and then turned their attention back to Jakkaru. She gave then a sheepish smile as soon as they looked to her and then rubbed the back of her neck, still not quite sure on what to say.

"What's with that Slowpoke?" Dixie asked, looking in the direction that she remembered the Slowpoke going in.

"You mean Mango?" Jakkaru questioned. She smiled some in acknowledgment that it was the orange-y Slowpoke that Dixie and Jaxx had seen before, "Mango is a pet that my parents found on the Orange Islands. His colour is something that my mom was looking into, but we came up that it was just from what area that they found it from. My mentor actually showed me that there were other kinds of Slowpoke, but the ones that are like your Charmander are actually much darker in colour."

"The Orange Islands? Wow... that must have been really awesome! What was it like there?" Dixie asked, hugging Zalaras to her and waking up the small lizard Pokémon. Zalaras fidgeted a bit before sitting up and looking around rather tiredly.

"Yeah! Let's talk more about that at dinner... I'm sure my mom has finished it up. Oh! And why not also let out your Sentret? I'm sure that it would like something to eat as well."

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Outside, the air was crisp and cool as Dixie had made her way into the Korekuta backyard. It was a good size for a yard as the dark-haired girl looked around and observed some of the decorations that were out there. She paused near the pond and then crouched down next to it to look inside. A smile found its way onto her lips as she looked down and saw Magikarp and Goldeen in the water.

Staying there for a few minutes, Dixie got up and then continued towards a gazebo that was a few paces away. There was a few times where she actually stopped to admire the Butterfree that fluttered around in the moonlight.

Pulling out the PokéGear that her aunt had given to her before leaving, Dixie finally had made it to the gazebo and then checked the time. She had gotten up after everyone else was tucked away in bed and had made her way to coming outside. Luckily for her, none of the Pokémon that Jakkaru or her parents had inside really made any noises as she passed by to go outside.

12:43 AM.

Putting the Gear away and then proceeding to drum her fingers against the railing of the structure that she stood in, Dixie rose her gaze to the moon. Thoughts about gym battles and some day entering the Indigo League entered her mind. They were all very exciting thoughts, there was no doubt about that. To actually compete against some of the best trainers in the region... it was something that she had looked forward to when she and Trixie had left from Saffron City together.

"There you are..."

Jumping, Dixie turned and looked around to be looking over to Jaxx. He stood in the center of the trail that led to where she was and had a hand stuffed into his pocket. She waved to him and then offered a slightly sheepish look.

"Hey Jaxx, what are you doing out?"

"I could ask you the same question. I had woken up and saw that Zalaras and your Sentret were asleep on the bed without you."

"Oh..." Dixie then gave a slight chuckle and then turned her attention back up to the moon.

"I wanted to get out since I couldn't go back to sleep...."

Jaxx made his way into the gazebo and then leaned against the railing that was opposite of her.

"Why are you checking up on me anyways?" Dixie asked, also leaning with her back up against the railing and giving him a rather playful smirk. "Ya can't tell me that you were actually worried about me."

"Tch, no.... Honestly? I'd be more worried about your Pokémon before I'd even consider being worried about you."

Dixie gave a subtle flinch at that. She liked her Pokémon a lot, yes... but the fact that Jaxx had just said that to her in all seriousness was something that felt like a slap across the face. Turning away from Jaxx, she propped her arms up on the railing and then scowled a bit, keeping quiet. She didn't voice it, but it showed in her expression... Dixie was saddened by what words that came from Jaxx's mouth. There was a hope when she had met him at Professor Oak's that they would at least be able to become rather close friends.

"Whatever... at least you're not out and about or doing something stupid, I guess I can go back up..." Jaxx said after a while, pushing himself from the railing and walking away from the gazebo. Dixie had clenched a fist, keeping herself from calling out to him as she heard his footsteps against the cobbled pathway as he made his way back to the Korekuta residence.

Hearing the door close, Dixie stayed out for just a few moments longer before slowly making her way back to the house as well.

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"Sentret sen seeeeentret!"

The small cries of Scout had made Dixie stir in bed and then finally sit up to rub at her eyes. Looking around and blinking to clear the blurriness from her eyes, the dark-haired girl made out Jaxx's figure. He looked to be getting his stuff packed away into his bag and getting his hair fixed at the same time.

Turning, he gave Dixie a look and said rather curtly, "it's about time you got up."

"What time is it?" asked a very tired Dixie as she ended her question with a small yawn. Scout had put his checkered fedora down, scampered over to her and nuzzled against her as soon as she had looked over to where he and Zalaras were.

"Almost late enough that if we don't leave within the hour, we're not getting to Pewter for another two days..."

Hearing that, Dixie had thrown the covers off and jumped out of bed. Scout was held in her arms looked a little surprised by how fast she had reacted. He fidgeted a bit before coming free from her hold and crawling up to hang onto her shoulder.

"Ahh! I need to get dressed!" Dixie exclaimed, marching up to Jaxx and pushing him. "Out, out!"

"Hey, watch it! I'm going, I'm going! Jeeze..." Jaxx replied, a little annoyed by the action that the dark-haired girl had exerted. He went outside of the room and turned to say something before getting the door shut in his face. He scowled slightly and then folded his arms over his chest, very disgruntled with what just happened. There was something that he had wanted to say to her... looked like it was going to have to wait.

Dixie, on the other hand, also sported a rather annoyed look on her face as she backed away from the door and made her way to her bulky messenger bag that was slung upon the back of a chair. She pulled out Scout and Zalaras' PokéBalls and returned them into their capsules. Zalaras gave a small fuss, but ended up going inside anyways. Dixie then pulled out her colourful array of everyday clothes from it and began to get dressed.

Thoughts about what Jaxx had said to her last night were running though her head as she got dressed. The more she thought about it, the more she actually began to grow frustrated and a little more saddened by what it was that he had said to her.

"Didn't have to sound so mean about it..." Dixie muttered to herself as she pulled on her green and purple striped gloves and then clipped on her red barrettes to pin her bangs back. She started for the door and then opened it to find Jaxx still stand outside, patiently waiting for her to be finished.

"... Didn't expect you to be waiting out here..." Dixie said truthfully. She backed up into the room as Jaxx brushed past her and went to retrieve his backpack. Looking to him and folding her arms over her chest, Dixie made her way over to her own messenger bag, picked it up and made her way out of the room without saying anything more to Jaxx.

"Hey, I have something to... say..." Jaxx started a little too late. A scowl made it's way onto his face as he watched her disappear from sight before he had even finished his sentence and then quickly hoisted his backpack up upon his shoulders. Shaking his head a bit, Jaxx walked out of the room, following after Dixie and making his way down the stairs to find Jakkaru packed up and talking with the black-haired girl.

"So you really wouldn't mind me coming along with you guys?" Jaxx heard Jakkaru asked Dixie. At that, he couldn't help but to give an irritated scoff.

"Not at all! Besides, it would be fun to have you to talk with on our journey!" came Dixie's response. Jaxx clenched his jaw as he heard what she had said and then slowly made his way over to the two girls, gave them a look and then made his way over to the front of the house. More than anything, he was just hoping that they would hurry up and get going. He waited by the front door of the house, pulling on his shoes and then looking back to the two girls once again -- this time noticing that Jakkaru was holding an incubator that housed a pale blue egg with white spots.

Tilting his head slightly, Jaxx's interest was piqued by the sight of the egg. He had never seen one of that variety before, and his eldest brother back in Fuschia was a breeder. His attention quickly shied from the two girls as they made their way over, seeming to be all smiles and laughter as they talked with one another.

"So... you two ready to be leaving?" Jaxx asked as the two girls came even closer to being to the front door.

"I am." Jakkaru replied, smiling to him and then looking to Dixie, seeing what it was that her response would be. The brunette's smile faded a bit as soon as she saw Dixie's expression, though. The black-haired girl looked to Jaxx with an upset look upon her face. Turning her attention back to Jaxx for a moment, Jakkaru noted that he averted his gaze from the both of them and started for the door.

"Jakkaru! You and your friends leaving already?" came Tora's voice. All three of the kids looked up to see both Tora and Hinaki in the kitchen passageway. Tora had a large disposable bag in her hands that looked to contain a hefty amount of food that would suffice for the three preteens before making it to Pewter City. Hinaki, on the other hand, had a soft smile on his face and ran and hand though his brown hair while making it over to his daughter and clapping a hand onto her shoulder.

"You'll actually remember to call and check-in with us once in a while this time, won't you?" Hinaki asked, looking down to Jakkaru.

"Of course, dad." Jakkaru handed her incubating egg to Dixie for a moment, walked forwards and hugged her dad and then made her way over to her mother after receiving a swift kiss on top of her head. Tora also sported a smile on her face as Jakkaru walked over to her and walked forwards a bit, herself. The mother embraced her daughter and then handed her the bag to Jakkaru.

"Stay strong and be careful... okay?"

"I will, mom."

"That's my girl..." Tora said, a hint of sadness in her voice as she stroked the back of Jakkaru's head. Before standing up straight, Jakkaru's mother had also placed a kiss on her forehead and then motioned her towards Jaxx and Dixie.

"It was very nice to be meeting you both, and I hope that you two will take care of our daughter." Tora directed at both the preteens that were still in front of the door. She smiled to the both of them and then looked up to her husband. Hinaki merely smiled back to her and then the two of them guided all three of the young trainers out of the house to see them off.

Making their way outside, Dixie and Jakkaru waved to Tora and Hinaki whilst Jaxx stuffed his hands into his pockets and continued forwards.

"All right! This is so exciting! Finally getting to travel around with friends, see new places, catch more Pokémon..." Jakkaru sighed dreamily after she had finished the sentence and then hummed happily as she took her egg back from Dixie and then walked ahead of Dixie and Jaxx.

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Hours had passed and Jakkaru's humming had died down as they had been traveling through Viridian Forest for nearly two hours now. She glanced back to both Dixie and Jaxx several times, making sure that they didn't get lost or hurt. There was one thing that the girl couldn't shrug off, though. It was the fact that Dixie still looked a little irritated and that Jaxx looked a tad more serious than he had when she had met him.

Halting in her tracks and turning to face the two, Jakkaru furrowed her brow.

"All right, you two... what's up? You guys haven't said more than one word since we left my house! Is there something gong on that I don't know about?" the brunette shifted the incubator in her arms a little irritably as she eyed the two preteens.

"Nothing you need to know."

"Don't worry about it."

The two answers were simultaneous and both Dixie and Jaxx gave each other a look shortly after they had given them. They both looked away as quickly as they had turned their attention towards one another and then Jakkaru sighed. She was curious to know what had gone on between the two, but she knew it not right to pry at something that someone didn't want to talk about. She turned and then started ahead through the forest once more, Jaxx and Dixie following after her again.

The silence ensued between the three of them was something that unnerved Jakkaru a bit. She did her best to shrug it off, but she had no such luck. It was the fact that when she had met Dixie that she seemed so full of energy and vigor. Now whatever had happened between the two of them, it seemed to have drained her of both as Jakkaru had witnessed Dixie nearly walking into a few small trees and had quickly gone over to correct her.

"So... what's bugging you, Dixie?" Jakkaru asked as she fell into step beside Dixie and watched as the younger girl kicked at a rock.

"Nothing important..." was Dixie's response as she glanced over to Jaxx and then looked up to Jakkaru. The brown-haired girl gave Dixie a questioning look, though it quickly got shrugged off as they continued forwards. Jakkaru shifted the incubator in her arms once again then turned her attention forwards, trying not to think that something bad happened between Jaxx and Dixie.

"Anyways... do you know what's going to hatch from that egg?" Dixie asked, her question not filled with the normal pep and energy that her voice usually carried. Because of that, Jakkaru frowned and then looked to the incubator in her arms before giving a response.

"Well... I don't really know." It was an honest answer.

"You see... my mentor had given it to me a few weeks back and she said I'd find out soon enough," Jakkaru gave a small, forced smile as she explained that and then had it fade when she turned her attention away from Dixie. Silence had arisen once again and Jakkaru couldn't help but feel a little odd. Since they had all met yesterday, the brunette actually had a pretty good feeling about going with them... and now it seemed that perhaps what she had been thinking was wrong.

Fifteen minutes more of walking and still not a word was uttered. That was until a Caterpie had fallen from its branch and landed on top of Jaxx's shoulder. It was the only thing that had actually sparked a laugh out of Dixie as Jaxx had jumped and brushed the Caterpie onto the ground. The caterpillar Pokémon rolled on the ground a bit before getting back up on its feet and giving a hurt look.

Folding at the sight of the Caterpie, Dixie had gone over and held a hand out to it with a smile. The Caterpie looked to her quizzically and then turned its attention to Jaxx for a moment. As it looked back to Jaxx, the male gave a slight roll of the eyes and then turned his attention away.

"You okay, Caterpie?" Dixie asked, continuing to give the Caterpie a welcoming expression.

"Still going with that 'I'll catch Pokémon by befriending them' type thing, Dixie?" Jaxx asked, folding his arms. He obviously wasn't impressed by her way of trying to get the Caterpie to come to her. However, even though he wasn't necessarily fond of Dixie and her ways, he continued to watch just to see what the outcome of this would be.

"Cut her some slack, at least she's persistent with it, it seems..." Jakkaru interjected, also watching for the outcome of Dixie's way of getting Pokémon to join her team.

"It's never going to work for her in the long run... perhaps for the Sentret and maybe this Caterpie... but what about stronger Pokémon when she comes across them?" Jaxx questioned, giving a shrug of his shoulders and furrowing his brow somewhat. Shaking his head, Jaxx turned away from both girls and the Caterpie and then gave an inaudible scoff.

"I don't see you trying to come up with any other way to catch Pokémon other than battling them!" Dixie retorted, a little flustered and not noticing that the Caterpie had crawled up along her arm. In fact, she had gotten up after it had perched itself on her shoulder and marched over to Jaxx.

He wasn't paying attention. No, instead he was looking up, a slightly surprised expression on his face as Dixie scolded him.

"You could at least be a little more sup... port... ive..." her sentence was turned from angered to questioning that faded out, and both Dixie and Jakkaru had also turned their gaze upwards to look at what it was that Jaxx had his attention focused on. Up above, a bright object was flying through the sky. It almost looked like a plane that had somehow managed to have caught fire.

"No way..." Jakkaru said, her expression that of awe.

"What is that?" asked Dixie, the Caterpie perched upon her shoulder also looking up at what the three preteens were.

"I think... that was a Moltres..." Jakkaru replied, a smile finding a way onto her face. She quickly set down the incubating egg and then turned around to look at Jaxx and Dixie, nearly hopping for joy at what it was that they all had just seen. Quickly nearing both of the dark-haired preteens, Jakkaru slung her arms around their shoulders and then pulled them close.

"Oh wow, oh wooooow! We definitely have to follow it! I have to catch it!" Jakkaru exclaimed, now bouncing on the balls of her feet and letting go of both Dixie and Jaxx. She twirled while clapping her hands together and then beamed in both of her 'companions'' direction again.

"But... how do we even know where it's going?" Dixie asked, standing up straight and finally noticing the Caterpie that seemed to be cowering at Jakkaru's reactions. Dixie held her hand up to it again and then looked back to Jakkaru.

At the question, Jakkaru immediately stopped all her motions and her shoulders slumped. She picked up the incubator and then frowned, "guess you're right.... But still! I will catch a Moltres for my very own one day! I will!"

"And I'll catch a Lugia one day..." Jaxx replied with a smirk, teasing.

As the two bickered about that for a while, Dixie took her opportunity and dug in her messenger bag a bit and then held a PokéBall up to the Caterpie. Obliging itself to the capsule, the Caterpie waited for Dixie to use it and then later became encased within the red and white ball. Smiling to herself, Dixie mentally check-marked two out of however many Pokémon she'd someday come across as being befriended.

"Yeah, well... Dixie's right! You should be at least a little more supportive, Mister 'I-think-I'm-cool'!" Jakkaru heatedly said to Jaxx.

"Pessimist by nature," was all Jaxx said before shoving his hands into his pockets and continuing forwards. Jakkaru growled at his response and then looked back to Dixie, who was drawing a four-point star on a PokéBall. She made her way over, waited till the younger girl was finished drawing on the capsule and then grabbed her by the arm (lightly, of course), and started after Jaxx, still a little upset with him.

"Great... so now they're both mad at me..." Jaxx muttered to himself, giving a slight roll of the eyes and kicking at a rock. He heard it hit something, though merely shrugged it off and continued forwards. There wasn't much that he really cared about at that point and time other than getting back to Fuchsia City as soon as possible. He could have probably done it without being accompanied by two others... but he had to remember that he was the one that had pretty much given the okay to Dixie when she had asked.... Something that he was starting to regret.

"Aahhh! Run!" Jakkaru and Dixie screamed as they rushed past Jaxx. He looked at them quizzically and then glanced back, seeing the reason that the two of them were running. A swarm of Beedrill buzzed behind them. At the sight, Jaxx turned his attention forwards and broke out into a sprint as well, following after both of the girls.

"Why'd you have to go and anger a swarm of Beedrill?" Jaxx asked, looking at Dixie specifically. "Don't tell me you were dumb enough to try and befriend one of those! That's not how things work!"

"Don't yell at me!" Dixie quickly responded, dodging a low hanging branch and then looking to Jaxx for a split second. "I'm not the one that angered them! I didn't even see one until they swarmed! And it's not like I'd actually walk up to one, either!"

"Whatever! Fight later, just keep running!" Jakkaru yelled at the both of them, clutching the incubator close to her as she and the other two ran trough the forest and dodged any natural obstacles that the forest had provided.

The trio had dodged the Beedrill's attacks several times, luckily enough. However, as the three neared a thicket, Dixie had tripped on an upturned root and had fallen to the ground. Jaxx stopped and turned, a little aggravated that that had happened and Jakkaru had paused for a moment to see what was going on. Frowning a bit, though feeling a little glad that Jaxx had run over to help Dixie get back on her feet, Jakkaru had quickly opened her bag and pulled out a PokéBall capsule.

"Looks like you're up... let's see how well you're doing today..." Jakkaru murmured, throwing the ball out. "Whisper! Blow those Beedrill back! Use Gust now!"

The Pidgeotto trilled as she burst from the capsule and then flew up high to face the swarm of Beedrill that were still charging for them. She flapped her wings quickly and whipped up a strong airstream that was directed at all of the Beedrill. The strong winds that Whisper had created stalled the bee Pokémon and Jakkaru turned her attention towards Dixie and Jaxx, motioning them to get away while she held the Beedrill back.

Nodding to her, Jaxx, got Dixie steady and then motioned her ahead just in case she were to take another spill. After seeing her start forwards once again, he quickly followed after her, glancing back to Jakkaru and hoping that she'd be able to get at those Beedrill by herself.

"What about Jakkaru? Will she be okay?" Dixie asked, also glancing back.

"I'm sure she will be..." Jaxx replied.

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"All right, Whisper!" Jakkaru called out, watching as the Pidgeotto whipped up a strong airstream towards the Beedrill. However, it seemed that numbers of the bee Pokémon were slowly wearing out the fowl. Jakkaru gritted her teeth and then clenched a fist.

"Darn it... if this keeps up any longer, Whisper will have to be taken to the Pokémon Center again..." Raising the capsule for Pidgeotto, Jakkaru called back her Pokémon, put the capsule back into her bag and then clutched at the incubator again. Turning around, Jakkaru started to run in the direction that she had seen Dixie and Jaxx run off to, though she wasn't sure about how well she would be able to outrun these Beedrill this time. She had allowed for them to get relatively close to her for the stalling to have commenced.

Finding a ledge, Jakkaru took the jump and quickly rolled onto her back when she landed on the ground to avoid having the incubator break on her. She looked up and saw the Beedrill fly overhead, passing her by. Giving a sigh of relief, Jakkaru staggered back up to her feet and then looked around. The area she was in was a relatively clear area, which would be good for camping, she figured.

Taking a step forwards, Jakkaru looked around again, wondering if maybe Jaxx and Dixie had come this way as well. After walking around for a good few minutes, Jakkaru stopped and looked up once again as she saw a shadow pass over her.

A Spearow.

It circled overhead a couple of times before swooping down and landing on Jakkaru's shoulder for a brief moment. It pecked at her gently and then took to the sky once again, turning and looking at her.

Getting the message, Jakkaru started after it. It must've been Jaxx's Spearow, now that she was thinking about it. As she followed it, she looked down to the egg that was in the incubator and then smiled to herself, just thankful that the incubator was still okay as was the egg within. There's not telling what would have happened if she were to have accidentally cracked the egg... or broken the incubator. Perhaps have Ember tend to it at times when the time was right on that last one.

"Hey! Jakkaru!"

It was Dixie's voice.

"You okay?"

"Yeah, fine!" Jakkaru replied back to them as she looked up and saw Dixie and Jaxx both standing at the top of the ledge.

Both Jaxx and Dixie cautiously made their way down the ledge and over to Jakkaru. She smiled sheepishly to the two of them and then sat down on the ground. Giving a small sigh, the brunette gave a slight sigh and then laughed a bit.

"Ha... that was close..." Jakkaru said, setting the incubator on the ground next to her as Jaxx returned Spearow to its PokéBall.

"Yeah... it was..." Dixie agreed, giving a sheepish laugh and dusting off the dirt that had clung to her shirt from the fall.

"I think we should stay here for a bit... rest up from that..." Jaxx suggested, shrugging and looking away from the two girls. He walked a few paces away from the two and folded his arms over his chest.

"Sounds like a plan..." Jakkaru replied, taking her bag from her shoulder and also placing it on the ground. Looking to the two, she gave another slight laugh, "besides... thanks to the excitement... we may be getting to Pewter City later tonight or early tomorrow morning."
 
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Ooh Moltres!

Hey, sorry for not responding to your PM the other day. I didn't really have time to go over it. :(

But it looks like I didn't need to because this chapter was very good! Again, your descriptions and imagery is very solid and really shows the reader what's going on and paints a great mental picture.

Also, I'm still very impressed with your characters and how detailed they are. You obviously thought long and hard about what kind of people they should be and how they should behave. Good stuff!

Overall awesome work. I'm a loyal reader!
 
Ooh Moltres!

Hey, sorry for not responding to your PM the other day. I didn't really have time to go over it. :(

But it looks like I didn't need to because this chapter was very good! Again, your descriptions and imagery is very solid and really shows the reader what's going on and paints a great mental picture.

Also, I'm still very impressed with your characters and how detailed they are. You obviously thought long and hard about what kind of people they should be and how they should behave. Good stuff!

Overall awesome work. I'm a loyal reader!

Yus~ Moltres 8D I figured that that legend would be more believable since Moltres is known to make it's appearance at the Indigo League to light the flames -- if I'm remembering correctly from what I've seen in the anime, that is .D.;;

And thanks... haha, I actually send a copy to my friend because she's all like, "OMG~ You're typing a fanfic with my character, eeeeee~ <33 ;w;"

And thanks again ^^; the only characters (so far) that are mine are Dixie, Sicily, and Trixie, haha. Harold and Ruth are owned by both I and the creator of Jakkaru and her family. As for Jaxx, well, haha, he belongs to my boyfriend ^^~ Though I'm really happy that you like their personalities as I portray them -- I've been asking my friend how Jakkaru is and pretty much just winging it for Jaxx.
 
Love. The. Fan. Fic. And. Mol. Tres. And. Shiay. And. Her. Wri. Ting.
 
Ah, thanks Zephy~ Muchly appreciated 8D

To all of my readers... Eeg... sorry to disappoint by not having a new chapter up by now... but... uh... truth is....
Going to the beach with a lot of friends is really not conducive to writing and continuing it. I'll have it up in a couple of days, though... three or four, tops.

hurhur, I totally fooled you guys, didn't I?
 
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