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Hiya, I'm new to this part of the forums, you wouldn't know me if you never stopped around the anime section. Anyways, I have a bit of a series here that I hope will be enjoyed, it follows a Pokemon exploration team so its not completely original but hey. Just a question about what to do with part 2, do I post it on this thread? How would people know that part 2 is up? Hopefully if your reading this you can awnser and if you like it, please don't hesitate to tell me.
Well of we go...
The sun rises on a lush and beautiful land, the light reflecting and twinkling off the wet pebbles of the brook and making the river gleem. A soft spring breeze sends a number of small pink blossoms through the clearing in the forest and past a bed of leaves. On the bed layed a Shinx, soundly asleep. A blossom pettal gently falls towards the Pokemon's nose. The Shinx stirs, streches out and yawns, swallowing the blossom. It coughs and spluters, rolling out of the bed and herrendously tries to coff up the blossom. After an efforted coff, the small blossom flies out of the Shinx's mouth, swirls around in the wind and lands perfectly on the nose of an unhappy and shaken Shinx.
Back by the river, a Cyndaquill is washing its face, dabbing at its cheeks and then looking to the left and right slowly. Looking back at the river, the Pokemon stairs at its reflection and sighs, it is clearly the voice of a girl. Suddenly, a foot comes from behind Cyndaquill and she is knocked to the middle of the river. It is shallow but Cyndaquill panics and splashes. An obnoxious laugh comes from Cyndaquill's attacker, standing where Cyndaquill was, a chortling Treecko. As Cyndaqill continues to struggle, a Bubblebeam attack comes from up the river. Treecko dodges the move slickly and fiendishly smiles. A Piplup stands across from him, furiuos and shouting. "Treecko!" Its voice was young, that of a boy's. "What makes you think you can bully everyone like that? It dosen't make you big!
"Ha! And what about you short stuff? It's a good job you swim so good cause you couldn't stand in the river could you" his voice is filled with both confidence and arogance. Piplup replies in annoyance
"It's well" and fires another Bubblebeam. Treecko dodges the attack and heads back into the forest, jumping from tree to tree and continuously laughing. Piplup sighs but then remembers Cyndaquill in the river. He runs over to the river and wades over to Cyndaquill, she contiues to struggle and panic but Piplup grasps her hands with his own and looks straight at her. "It's ok" he said. "Just Stand". Cyndaquill stops and stands still, breathing deeply.
Walking through the forest Piplup turns to Cyndaquill and asks "Why do you let that guy push you around? Cyndaquill remains silent. "Your a fire type, if anything you should be bullying Treeko". Cyndaquill turns to Piplup and says sharply
"I'm not a bully" and turns back.
"No, I didn't mean that". Piplup said apolageticly "What I meant was..."
"I know what you meant". Cyndaquill said more calmly. "It's just I... I"
"Yes?" Piplup replied. Cyndaquill stops walking.
"I haven't been able to use any fire type moves yet". Piplup sits beside her and pats the ground behind her. Cyndaquill sits.
"That's nothing to worry about, your awsome at using Swift" Piplup started. "And hey, Treecko can't dodge a Swift attack".
"But he can hit back with his own attacks" Cyndaquill said while resting her head on her hands. "Why are you hassling me anyway, Treecko bullies everyone". Piplup stands up and speaks lound and sarcasticly.
"Well, I guess I'll go ahead to town on my own". Cyndaquill gasps quietly
"Wait". Piplup roles his eyes. "I'm sorry, we'll go together" Piplup giggles
"Come on then" he says excitedly. The two Pokemon run towards a town made from rocks and trees.
"Aup" Shinx calls to Cyndaquill and Piplup as he joins them at the entrance to town, his voice is confident and eager.
"Hey Shinx" his friends say to him. The trio notice that there is a huge gathering in the square.
"What's going on?" Cyndaquill asks.
"I don'no, I just got here" Shinx replies.
"Let's check it out" Piplup says running towards the commotion. The trio make their way to the front, crawling under the bigger Pokemon. A Dusknoir is standing in the middle giving a speech. Gallade, the towns journalist is sitting, franticlly scribing everything. Piplup spies Treecko on the otherside of the audience. The grass type smiles at Piplup again, but he ignores Treecko and listens to Dusknoir.
"And so we are offering a group of three children a chance to form an official exploration-rescue team. The winning team of these games will enter into this most rewarding career".
Cyndaqull looks to Shinx, who is smiling and then to Piplup who is also smiling. She lets out a big sigh.
TO BE CONTINUED....
Well of we go...
Chapter 1-Part 1
The sun rises on a lush and beautiful land, the light reflecting and twinkling off the wet pebbles of the brook and making the river gleem. A soft spring breeze sends a number of small pink blossoms through the clearing in the forest and past a bed of leaves. On the bed layed a Shinx, soundly asleep. A blossom pettal gently falls towards the Pokemon's nose. The Shinx stirs, streches out and yawns, swallowing the blossom. It coughs and spluters, rolling out of the bed and herrendously tries to coff up the blossom. After an efforted coff, the small blossom flies out of the Shinx's mouth, swirls around in the wind and lands perfectly on the nose of an unhappy and shaken Shinx.
Back by the river, a Cyndaquill is washing its face, dabbing at its cheeks and then looking to the left and right slowly. Looking back at the river, the Pokemon stairs at its reflection and sighs, it is clearly the voice of a girl. Suddenly, a foot comes from behind Cyndaquill and she is knocked to the middle of the river. It is shallow but Cyndaquill panics and splashes. An obnoxious laugh comes from Cyndaquill's attacker, standing where Cyndaquill was, a chortling Treecko. As Cyndaqill continues to struggle, a Bubblebeam attack comes from up the river. Treecko dodges the move slickly and fiendishly smiles. A Piplup stands across from him, furiuos and shouting. "Treecko!" Its voice was young, that of a boy's. "What makes you think you can bully everyone like that? It dosen't make you big!
"Ha! And what about you short stuff? It's a good job you swim so good cause you couldn't stand in the river could you" his voice is filled with both confidence and arogance. Piplup replies in annoyance
"It's well" and fires another Bubblebeam. Treecko dodges the attack and heads back into the forest, jumping from tree to tree and continuously laughing. Piplup sighs but then remembers Cyndaquill in the river. He runs over to the river and wades over to Cyndaquill, she contiues to struggle and panic but Piplup grasps her hands with his own and looks straight at her. "It's ok" he said. "Just Stand". Cyndaquill stops and stands still, breathing deeply.
Walking through the forest Piplup turns to Cyndaquill and asks "Why do you let that guy push you around? Cyndaquill remains silent. "Your a fire type, if anything you should be bullying Treeko". Cyndaquill turns to Piplup and says sharply
"I'm not a bully" and turns back.
"No, I didn't mean that". Piplup said apolageticly "What I meant was..."
"I know what you meant". Cyndaquill said more calmly. "It's just I... I"
"Yes?" Piplup replied. Cyndaquill stops walking.
"I haven't been able to use any fire type moves yet". Piplup sits beside her and pats the ground behind her. Cyndaquill sits.
"That's nothing to worry about, your awsome at using Swift" Piplup started. "And hey, Treecko can't dodge a Swift attack".
"But he can hit back with his own attacks" Cyndaquill said while resting her head on her hands. "Why are you hassling me anyway, Treecko bullies everyone". Piplup stands up and speaks lound and sarcasticly.
"Well, I guess I'll go ahead to town on my own". Cyndaquill gasps quietly
"Wait". Piplup roles his eyes. "I'm sorry, we'll go together" Piplup giggles
"Come on then" he says excitedly. The two Pokemon run towards a town made from rocks and trees.
"Aup" Shinx calls to Cyndaquill and Piplup as he joins them at the entrance to town, his voice is confident and eager.
"Hey Shinx" his friends say to him. The trio notice that there is a huge gathering in the square.
"What's going on?" Cyndaquill asks.
"I don'no, I just got here" Shinx replies.
"Let's check it out" Piplup says running towards the commotion. The trio make their way to the front, crawling under the bigger Pokemon. A Dusknoir is standing in the middle giving a speech. Gallade, the towns journalist is sitting, franticlly scribing everything. Piplup spies Treecko on the otherside of the audience. The grass type smiles at Piplup again, but he ignores Treecko and listens to Dusknoir.
"And so we are offering a group of three children a chance to form an official exploration-rescue team. The winning team of these games will enter into this most rewarding career".
Cyndaqull looks to Shinx, who is smiling and then to Piplup who is also smiling. She lets out a big sigh.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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