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The Eevee Adventures

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POKESHIPPING, don't like, don't read!!!!!
If you sue me over Pokemon, all you'll get is a plushie, some games, & pics on my computer. In short, me no own.

Prolouge​

Ash & Misty were alone in the forest. Brock & Dawn had each convinetly "forgotten" something at camp. So now, it was just them, Azurill & Pikachu. Misty sighed wistfully, & Ash felt like doing that too. Both were wondering what the other was thinking. He was thinking about her & vice-versa.

Just then Ash looked at her. "Mist?" He asked warily. "Mmm-hmm?" Misty replied, glancing up at him. "I...I'm in love with you. Misty, I love you, &-" Misty cut Ash off. "Just kiss me already!!" So, he did
"Isn't that sweet?! Too bad!" Jessie's voice rang out, making Ash & Misty break apart. Team Rocket did their Motto, then battled The Twerp & The 1st Twerpette.

4 minutes later​

"WE'RE BLASTING OFF AGAAAAINNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Where were we?" Ash asked when TR was out of sight. "Right here." Misty replied softly. & they kissed again.
 
I know that this fic is focused on Poke Shipping and everything, but it would be nice if you added the battle in. Expand on the description of the expressions on Ash and Misty's faces when they are left alone. The hesitation before they admit should be longer because A) They've traveled so long so it has become a big secret and B) Big secrets are hard to choke out. Personally I think it is way too rushed, and could be better.

Oh, and this would be more of a Chapter 1 than a Prologue. Just saying.
 
Hola, me write more story now. I don't own Pokemon. But I do own Sukki. (The Shiny Eevee)
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Chapter 1​
2 weeks later

Ash & Company were lost again. "We're lost & no1's yelling." Brock commented. "I could get used to this." Ash & Misty laughed & shoved him playfully. Just then, Dawn asked "Wuzzat?"

Looking ahead, the group saw a small cave. Inside, laying on it's side, was an Espeon. It raised it's head & looked at them, almost like it was pleading. Just then, it layed it's head on the ground & it's breathing stopped.
Trembling, Misty sank to her knees with her head in her hands. Ash knelt down next to her & held her. Brock & Dawn shook their heads sadly.Ash & Misty got up. They wanted to check out the cave. Something seemed wrong.
Entering the cave, they walked around the Phycic-Type. Misty gasped. "Ash, it's an Eevee!" They knelt down beside it. "It's Shiny." Ash said. The Eevee's fur was a pretty silver. It must've been quite young, because it's eyes weren't even open.

"Are you okay, little 1?" Misty asked, rubbing it, worried that something was wrong. "C'mon, wake up, Eevee." Ash coaxed. The Normal-Type stirred. It's big, dark eyes opened & it stared at them, as if in wonder.
"It's alright!" Misty exclaimed, delighted. "Hey there." Ash said, patting it gently. He turned to her. "We should take it to Nurse Joy, Mist."

So, she picked it up & they went to the nearest town. Dawn explained what they'd seen. (Brock had stayed outside.) "I'll give her a looksie." Nurse Joy said kindly. "Oh, so it's a girl Eevee." Dawn commented. She went outside to Brock-sit.
A few minutes later, Nurse Joy came out to Ash & Misty. What was the 1st thing this Eevee saw?" She asked. "Uh... us." Ash replied. "That explains it." The Nurse said. "The Eevee thinks you 2 are her parents." "Oh, crap!!!" Ash & Misty exclaimed.
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R&R please!
 
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Don't own. I had a cute idea & couldn't wait. (This chappie's in Sukki's dialect. Don't think I'm that bad at grammer)

Chapter 2​

I be all alone. The pink-hair lady who took me was gone. I lookded up; the door was openining. Mama & Daddy comed in. I yelled, glad to see them. They smiled at me. "Hi, little 1." I smiled when Mama talked. Her talk was nice-sounding. Her & Daddy sat down. Daddy petted me. "You're a special 'lil Eevee, ya know that?"

His talk sounded nice, too, but not like Mama's. Mama's talk was light & sweet-ish. Daddy's sounded warm & friendidly. I didn't know what "Special" was, so I cockded my head. Daddy laughed. "You're a good Eevee." He explained. "Oh." I said.

Mama & Daddy were talking to eachother now. I didn't pay attenation. I crawleled into Mama's lap. I was getting sleepy. Mama looked down at me. "Sukki?" She asked. "Is Sukki a good name for you?" I thought. I nodded.

"Sukki good name for me!" I exclaimeyed. Mama hugged me & her & Daddy laughed. I felt happipy.
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R&R please!
 
Good, but you could give more description, that would make it longer.
Can't wait to see what happens!
 
Okay, since it seems people actually like this, (Which amazes me) I'll add more. All rights to all characters in this story except Sukki go to Satoshi Tajiri, Game Freak, & PUSA.
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Chapter 3
(MPOV)​

When Ash & I left the Pokemon Center, Dawn immedetly started cooing over Sukki. We explained to the little Eevee who Dawn & Brock were, & introduced her to our other Pokemon & such things. We were on our way back to camp when she reached up with 1 paw & touched my face.

I gasped, freezing where I was. "Mist?" Ash asked, alarmed/worried. "Misty? Mist?!" I barely head him. When Sukki touched me, I saw in my mind, our little group, appaerently as she saw us. It was full of color & yet, slightly transparent. When she let her paw drop, the image vanished. "What was that?!" I gasped.

"Misty? What's wrong with you?!" All my human companions said together. "S-Sukki... touched me, & I saw... us. The way she does. I saw her thoughts, I think." I did my best to explain. "Really?" Ash, in typical Ash-fashion, seemed curious, not alarmed, like 1 would expect. "Can ya show me, Sukki?"

She nodded, her huge, dark eyes -which looked like deep pools of hot chocolate- innocent as she touched Ash. "Awsome!" He exclaimed when she let go. Sukki then showed the same thing to Brock & Dawn. "I suppose," Brock mused "that Sukki has that sort of supernatural gift. She can show people her thoughts. Her memories, too, I'll bet."

Ash looked at me, & in his chocolate eyes, I could see that we had the same thought: DAY-UNG!!!! Eventually, we made it back to camp. Pikachu & Azurill showed Sukki around, but she seemed uncomfortable walking off from Ash & me.

Running his hand gently though my hair as we sprawled out on the grass, Ash said "Dang, Mist, things just keep hap'nin' really fast." "Mmm-hmm." I agreed quietly. Just then, Sukki came over & flopped down in the small place between us, proof she didn't take up much room. I was tired, so I layed my head on Ash's chest & started drifting.

Sukki was complacent under my arm. 1 of her paws was on my cheek, the other on Ash's. Her thoughts were those of a happy baby enjoying some quiet time with her Mama & Daddy. Ash held her & me close & murmured "I love you. Both of you."
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Sukki's power is based on Renesmee Cullen's in Breaking Dawn

R&R!
 
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Only Sukki is mine.
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Chapter 4
(MPOV)​

The next morning, we packed up our stuff after breakfast & headed on. Sukki pressed her paw to my cheek. Mama, where we goin'? "Ash, where we goin'?" I reiterated. "Wherever we end up." He replied. "We don't know 'till we get there, most of the time." Dawn rolled her eyes & said to Sukki "'Cause most of the time, he's leading & holdin' the map upside-down." Ash gave the bluenette a death glare. "That's not true, Sukki." He told the Eevee, who was watching with curious, interested eyes.

"It is so true!" Dawn replied. "You just wanna make it seem like you're impressive." "Oh, like you're not just like that, Miss I'm-Gonna-Be-A-Top-Cordinator." Brock smiled condensendingly at the Normal-Type in my arms.

"Welcome to our family, Sukki."
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Sorry for shortness, but I'm being kicked off the computer.

R&R
 
The word bluenette made me laugh. I can't wait to see where they end up.
 
Do I really haf'ta keep sayin' it? PKMN ain't mine! (But Our favorite Shiny Eevee is) The things in italics w/out being in quotation marks are Sukki's thoughts that she's showing/telling to some1
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Chapter 5
(APOV)​

At the Pokemon Center again. Sukki saw Croakgunk "Take care" of Brock & she replayed the event for me (I was the 1 holding her) & wondered why it had happend. "Brock's girl-crazy" I muttered to her. "That's just Croagunk's way of makin' him shut up." Oh. KK. After she, Pikachu & the rest of our Pokemon were heald up, we kept going.

Suddenly, a huge metal hand with a ruber-glove-looking thing on it came down & plucked Sukki right out of my arms. "HEY!!" I yelled. "Straw is cheaper, grass is free. Buy a farm, ya get all 3!" James taunted.

"TEAM ROCKET!!!!!!!!!" We yelled. Man, if that isn' Taboo by now... Cue Stupid Motto. "Dis'll make a great present for Da Boss!" Meowth cackled as the hand holding Sukki reached the basket of the Meowth Ballon. Sukki squrimed & cried out in panic.

"You let Sukki go!" Dawn commanded. I rolled my eyes briefly. We all knew they weren't gonna listen. On Mist & I's shoulders, Pikachu & Azurill started growling. Pikachu's cheeks started sparking. "No!" I ordered. "You'll zap Sukki."

Jessie was holding Sukki, who was squirming fit to wake the dead. "Aw, is the little cutie mad at Jessie?" She cooed with sickining sweetness. Sukki bit her. "I'd take that as a yes!" Pik crowed, punching the air with his paw. As Sukki jumped onto the rim of the basket, Misty, who'd been silent & staring by my side, got her Bright-Idea Look.

"Sukki, use Bite!" She called up suddenly. I stared at her with my mouth hanging open. But then, Sukki, after a brief look of puzzlement, lunged at Meowth & used Bite. "OH YEAH!!!!" Mist & I cheered, grinning. "Why I ought'ta-!" Meowth took a swipe at her with his claws. Sukki neatly dodged. "Tackle!" I ordered. Sukki Tackled, but then lost her balance as she landed back on the rim, & fell.
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Ooooh, cliffe!
R&R, lovley readers!
 
Me: "Hello, readers! I hate doing the disclaimer so a friend is here to do it for me."

Sukki: "PokeFanGirl dun't own Pokies Mon, but she duz own me."

Me: "Good job, Sukki! Enjoy, my lovelies!"
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Chapter 6
(MPOV)​

"SUKKI!!!!" We all shouted. Sukki started twisting in the air, as if she was trying to get a certain way. "Aw, no!" Meowth moaned "Eevees 're like foxes, an' foxes 're like cats; & cats always land on 'dere..." Sukki hit the ground on all 4 paws, perfectly unharmed. "feet." Meowth concluded.

Ash & I nodded to eachother. Now that Sukki was out of the way, we knew exactly what to do. "Thunderbolt/Water Gun!" "Pikaaachuuuuu/Azuuuriiiil!" "WE'RE BLASTING OFF AGAIAAAAAAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "Sayonara, suckeeers!" Ash, Dawn & I yelled after the TRio, laughing.

Sukki jumped into my arms. She showed me Team Rocket & wondered who they were. "Bad guys." I explained. "They wanna steal Pokemon." Sukki didn't like them. "Neither do we." "You 2 okay?" Ash asked, walking over & puting his arm around me. Sukki nodded, reaching up to use her gift on him. When she was done, he nodded. Brock, who'd been setting up to stay here a little bit, called out "Chow time!" Every1 cheered.

(APOV)​

After a good lunch, we kept moving. Finally, we came across a little house. "Hello?" I called, opening the door.
 
It was short, but I'm glad Sukki's alright.
Can't wait to see what happens.
 
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