the fate of riolu

[empoleonater]

today i will tell you a story long ago their was a pokemon it wanted to be happy it was a riolu it wanted to evolve to fight the mean machampion but life was sad soo one day when a mr mime came to the village he told him to tell him a joke the mr mime thought the riolu was sad so the mr mime told him to find some freinds to take on an adventure to get the griseomo orb makeing anyone happy.ok this is my character forum
:mail:
name
pokemon species
shiny/normal
evolution requirements
moves
:mail:
me
:devil:
name emporer
pokemon species empoleon
shiny
none
moves hydro pump surf waterfall dive
:devil:.

 

[Flaze]

Okay that plot sucks honestly since there's no background plus it sounds more like a fairy tale, plus you can't use smilies

 

[Politoed666]

I laughed so hard when I read this.

 

[Sarcastically Insane]

You could read it? I couldn't.

 

[Kamen_Fanatic]

EPIC FAIL.

 

[woops]

Name: H4XX0Rz
Species: Arseoos
Shiny
N/A
Judjment Brick Break hydro pump splash

Now, to spend two months trying to figure out what this plot actually is...

Got it. Gotta get the griseomo orb. So Riolou can be happy and evolve and leave the others behind to never see them again and fight the big bad Machampion. Nice.

 

[ShinyFlareon]

EPIC FAIL RPG is...oh wait, that's been done.

Spoiler

That's more like it.

 

[woops]

A big clear box with an X in the top left corner? Clarify.

 

[ShinyFlareon]

Hope that one works...it's an internet image link, it should show up

 

[woops]

Oh. That's better.

Above Post = Thread

Anyway, when will it start!? I'm so hyped up to help my Riolou friend evolve by getting the griseomo orb!
[/sarcasm]

 

[empoleonater]

ok stop saying my threads suck i am still new to threads.

 

[Flaze]

Not exactly considering you joined in June and you've made a lot of threads (which have gone to the HoS) so technically that's just a stupid excuse for an immature person

 

[Kamen_Fanatic]

Now, to spend two months trying to figure out what this plot actually is...

Got it. Gotta get the griseomo orb. So Riolou can be happy and evolve and leave the others behind to never see them again and fight the big bad Machampion. Nice.

Griseomo Orb sounds like a misspelling of Griseous Orb, which powers up Giratina. Machampion sounds like Machamp. Am I right?

 

[Spectre]

You are all really harsh! You can tell he's just a kid from the pattern and lexis used! So, just lay off a bit, K? And for his age, I think its rather good.

 

[Flaze]

According to him he's nine years old plus just because he's a kid it doesn't mean that we have to give him special treatment.

 

[Kamen_Fanatic]

Uuuuuh huuuuuuuuuh.... dude, we have more experience in RPGs then you Jake, or empoleonater. We need something concrete. A plot and backstory, for one, would be greatly apperciated.

 

[Spectre]

Yeah, well he can post here if he wants, I don't see no mods telling him off. You just lay off, k? Or deal with me.

 

[Flaze]

There's a difference here, because it's an RP an RP needs a good plot good characters and a good background this is something that even a six year old would fine sappy

 

[Kamen_Fanatic]

Yeah. I mean, come on. This is worse when Shiny Palkia tried to rip off my friend here from his RPG series Pokemon Special Agents.

 

[Flaze]

Point is he's a nine year old boy, he could at least know how to write well, again this plot is something only a little kid would like, at least I know that I still would've hated this plot when I was nine because, well I was Shonen crazy back then. Now don't take me wrong I love kids and I'm really good with them in fact I have a friend that's eight years old but there's a difference the kid actually learns from his own mistakes and he's more mature than this guy and doesn't just give random facts and he actually knows the names to the Pokemon