The Four Region Journey

[Kantomasta]

Before I start, I would like to make a few notes.
1. I know I have had a problem with “Abandoning” fanfics, but I wont with this or element benders
2. I am hoping people will comment with good( or bad/criticism posts.)
3. Plz post for things that can be improved. And if this works, I hope to have my character go through all regions
4.now for my fanfic


The four region journey
Prologue:
It was a fine day in pallet town. The pidgey were chirping, the rattata playing and in this town two young trainers would start their journeys. One of these boys is our hero in this story, Lan. The other trainer is Lan’s rival and childhood friend, Davis. Both of these boys knew that their journeys would start today. Little did they know that today would be the start of what would change their lives forever.

This is where our story takes place. Lan awoke with the alarm going off at 6:00 that morning. Lan heard the alarm, rolled over and shut it off. He sat up and smiled. “Today is the day,” Lan said to himself. He woke up, got dressed in his usual outfit of a black baseball cap, turned backwards. He also put on a blue jacket over a red t-shirt. Blue pants with a belt that had five pokeball slots. A necklace with one pokeball slot. Red sneakers and his black hair stuck out from the cap.

Lan went downstairs, ate breakfast and kissed his mother good-bye. Lan walked out of the doors of his house, and saw Davis coming out too. “Hi Davis,” Lan said.

“Hey Lan,” Davis said. He had blonde hair and wore a black shirt and blue pants. Lan noticed Davis was holding a pokeball. “I have an eevee. Gramps says he has a special for you too,” Davis said. Lan nodded and walked to professor Oaks lab.

“Hi professor, I’m here for my first pokemon,” Lan said. He saw the professor sitting at his desk holding a pokeball. Lan walked over to the professor.


“Hi Lan,” The professor said. “I have a special pokemon for you, its not one of my starters”. Lan walked over and grabbed the pokeball from a table. A sign was in front of the pokeball saying Lan.

“Go pokeball,”Lan said. A blue pokemon appeared in front of Lan. “A poliwag!” Lan said. He knew this wasn’t rare, but he made the professor happy. “Professor, what moves does he know?” Lan asked.

“Ask your pokedex,” Oak said. Oak handed Lan a pokedex and five pokeballs and Lan immediately opened the pokedex. It was red and had buttons on the inside.

“Poliwag, the water pokemon. It’s move set is Tackle, tail whip and scratch,” the pokedex said. Lan was amazed that the pokemon already knew scratch, it never occurred to Lan that poliwag does not normally learn scratch. Lan thanked the professor and started to walk outside. Davis stopped him though. “I challenge you to a battle,” Davis said....


TBC.......

Pokemon: Poliwag
Badges: None
Money:3000
Pokedex: Seen 1 Caught 1

 

[PK I'm BAAACK~]

There are a few fragments and spelling mistakes. Try to remember the difference between "its" and "it's"... People seem to be mixing that sort of stuff up a lot... Example:

“Poliwag, the water pokemon. Its move set is Tackle, tail whip and scratch,” the pokedex said.

When you wrote "It's" you were saying:
"It is move set is Tackle, tail whip and scrath"

When you write, its, you are saying, "its" as in something that belongs to the it. Understand?

 

[Kantomasta]

good point.

 

[Kantomasta]

srry bout takin so long Chapter 1: New Battles

When we left off, our hero was about to engage in his first battle. Lets get back into the action.

“Go Poliwag ” Lan yelled. A flash of red happened and then a small blue pokemon stood in front of Lan. Lan already knew what his opponents pokemon was, so he knew it would be a hard battle.

“Eevee. Stand by ,” Davis energetically said. Another flash of red happened and a small brown kitten pokemon appeared. Both pokemon stood facing each other, prepared to fight.

“Poliwag, Scratch ” Lan ordered. Poliwag ran up, and not having arms, jumped and used scratch by his feet. Eevee took little damage. Lan decided to would be best to figure out his opponents strategy. He pulled out a pokedex and pointed it at eevee, while Davis thought of his move.

“Eevee, the kitten pokemon. Its move set is tackle, tail whip and metronome,” the pokedex replied. Davis had finally figured out a move and prepared.

“Eevee Use metronome” Davis yelled. Eevee just stood there, then, out of all the moves it could have used, it used explosion. Eevee fainted, and left Poliwag barely standing. “I cant believe I lost due to my own move,” Davis gloomily said. He payed Lan 750 dollars.

“Next stop, viridian city ” Lan exclaimed. Lan took off down the road and realized that it would be a long way to the next town. Poliwag had to run to keep up with Lan. Lan walked around and found a group of rattata. Lan pulled out his pokedex, and checked the rattatas info.

“Rattata the mouse pokemon. Its fangs will keep growing until it reaches raticate form. Its move set is tackle, tail whip, quick attack and hyper fang,” the pokedex said. Rattata growled and stared at the pokedex, so Lan quickly put it away.

Poliwag stepped in front of Lan, preparing to fight. Rattata stepped up, baring its fangs. “Scratch ” Lan yelled. Poliwag came up and hit rattata with his foot. Then, poliwag began to glow. “Your evolving ” Lan excitedly exclaimed. Then, poliwag rammed rattata and turned blue again. “Oh, its take down,” Lan said. Rattata was flung backwards, and landed on his back. Lan was about to finish him off, when he remembered rattata would disappear.

“Pokeball, do your thing,” Lan said. He threw a pokeball at the rattata and his pokeball shook. Once...twice....three times. Lan jumped over and picked up the pokeball to look inside. When he looked inside. He saw rattata, about to feint. Lan returned poliwag and started to run to viridian.

Later, at viridian


LAn walked around and noticed this city was huge compared to pallet town. He looked around and saw a pokemart, a pokecenter and a gym were the three biggest buildings. Lan decided he better go to the pokecenter first. He walked in and saw nurse Joy. “Can you heal my pokemon?” Lan asked.

“Yes dear, but our machines are running slow so it will be awhile,” nurse joy replied. Lan handed over his pokeballs and left. He ran to the pokemart and saw they had pokeballs and potions for sale. Lan bought 5 pokeballs for 200 dollars each. That took 1000 dollars, but was worth it. Lan walked out into the forest to battle, but then remembered he had no pokemon. Lan walked back to the pokecenter and realized their was a phone call for him.

“Hello? Lan?” Professor Oak said. When Lan realized it was him, he sat up. Lan noticed a trainer was standing behind the professor. It was Davis. “I was wondering how far you are,” Oak said.

“I’m healing in viridian,” Lan answered. Lan noticed nurse joy walking over with two pokeballs.

“Here you are sweetie,” Joy said as she handed over the pokeballs. Lan thanked her and turned back around to the screen.

“Hmm Viridian...” Oak said. Oak was thinking and then realized something. “Lan! DO NOT BATTLE THE GYM LEADER!!” Oak yelled. Lan was curious, but decided to listen st oaks instructions.

“Ok professor, I have to go now,” Lan said. Lan turned off the computer screen and walked outside. He went to route 1 for some training, and battled a few trainers. “Off to the forest!!” Lan yelled out.

Pokemon: Poliwag, rattata
Items:5 pokeballs and pokedex
Pokedex: 3seen, 2 owned
money:2500