The Kanto League Saga

PK I'm BAAACK~ · Mar 15, 2010

The Kanto League Saga

Summary: Many people enter the league in Kanto… Who knows who WILL win? This is the story where trainers fight to win the league in Kanto! This is the battle filled challenge about to take into action!!! Little do they know they’re also going to all face up against team universe!!! (Team rocket and galactic combined)

Genre: Action/ Adventure

Rated: PG (for some bullying and battles that don’t just involve pokemon…)

Cast (trainers may be added):

M.C.
Aqua
Red
Bob
April
Shadow
Matt Matkin
Riley
Nathan Jones
Jamie
Devin
Brooke
Fire
Karen
Izumo

EDIT: Oh My God It's a new spoiler let's click it! =D

Prologue:

The M.C. walked into the opening of the flashy stadium. She wore a blue outfit with a lighter blue hat. “Welcome to the great Kanto League!!! Today is the opening ceremony where we pass the torch! Tomorrow will be an extra training day for the trainers participating, after that the action will begin!” The M.C. cheered. The ground joined in with excitement, they were looking forward to the upcoming events… Well some…

In came a bunch of trainers, making even more excitement as the crowd roared!

“How long do you think this is going to be?” Asked a young boy. He didn’t mind the wait but like any other trainer, he was excited too. He seemed the average height, very slim, medium-long brown hair, blue eyes. He wore green shorts, a black U2 T-shirt, and rectangular glasses with a black frame.

“Matt, calm down,” said an anoyed male voice. He wore black hat,black shirt,black pants,black hair and black eyes. He pretty much had all black. Just as the boy had all shadow pokemon, not to mention the only one with a team full of shadow pokemon! Just as he had shadow pokemon, his name was Shadow!

“How do I calm down if the battles are only a day away,” cheered Matt.

“Simple, you train to make more challenging battles, it also helps amuse me,” interupted a female voice. The girl had brown hair that went past her shoulders wavily. She had a black t-shirt under a purple tank top. Purple tights that had a blue skirt over them made in with the same material as jeans. To top it of, she had blue snow boots and came from shinou!

Beside the girl was a young boy the same age as her, 15! The boy had a dark blue jacket (it makes the shirt be non-seen unless you take of the jacket), orange t-shirt. He also had blue jeans, green runners, black cape and black hair. They seemed to both be great friends!

“Who are you two,” asked Shadow.
“My name is Aqua, this boy here is my best buddy Bob, thanks for asking,” answered Aqua.
“Is that creepy spy over there yours to?” Shadow again asked.
“No, I don’t think I know him, but that girl is also my buddy,” Aqua said pointing at one of the red heads.

The girl had a red sweater tied around her waist, blue t-shirt, black jeans, white runners, and finally red hair.

“Hey, Red, over here!” Aqua called to her long time friend. Red quickly ran over.
“Hey, Aqua, hey, Bob, I want you guys to meet someone,” Red greeted. With that, they all followed the teen to the kid that looked like a detective.

The kid wore a gray detective hat, sunglasses, black dress coat, gray jeans, black boots, and black gloves.
“Hey Jamie, meet Aqua, Bob, and… Guys, who are those two?” Red pointed out.
“Nice to meet you, Jamie, I’m Shadow, this is my friend, Matt,” Shadow introduced.

Jamie just turned away shyly. The other thought it was a little mean.
“Don’t mind Jamie, he’s just shy,” explained Red. The others just nodded.
“I’m used to that part, Matt, is like that to,” said Shadow.
“Well then, they should get along just fine!” Red hoped.

‘Knowing Jamie, they won’t’ She said to herself while sighing. She knew things might not go well with Jamie at first. Remembering how they both met, things would be very hard for them all to get along.

“Hello, Jamie, are you excited,” asked Matt shyly. Matt was nearly the same as Jamie, but they could become friends if they tried.
“Hey,” Jamie replied.
“… Who’s up for the torch!” Cheered Aqua as another trainer passed on the torch.

Just as Aqua reached out to grab the torch, another hand got in the way and took it! The person was female. She wore ripped blue jeans, a black fitted t-shirt, baggy-ish grey zip-up sweatshirt, black hiking boots and had long blonde ribbon-curled hair.

“What, no welcome Riley,” Teased Riley.
“Riley, it’s you!” Chirped Aqua.
“Yep, it’s me, who are these four?” Asked Riley.
“Hey Riley, this is, Bob, Matt, Shadow and Jamie,” anwsered Red. Back in the day, Aqua met Riley and Red in kindergarden when she was little. They all quickly became friends in shinou. Then Riley moved to hoenn, Red moved to Johto, and Aqua moved to Kanto.

Watching the group in the distance was strange boy spying o them. “So those are the kids we’ll haft to deal with huh?” muttered the boy.

AND THAT CONCLUDES US TO THIS WEEKS PROLOGUE!!! (Yes it’s a little short but it gets longer!

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****Special After Show Comes On****
On the screen was a young girl in a pink kimono with blonde curly hair and red eyes. Beside her was a boy in a blue kimono with brown hair and blue eyes.

“Hello! This is Mayuma here in the after show!” Cheered Mayuma. (The girl)
“And this is Kayachi,” Continued Kayachi.
“Right, and we’re here for previews and after show annoncements!” Mayuma chimed.
“We also ask questions in hope our reviewers will answer to lets us know that they’re still there! You can ask us any questions and get anwsers from us next time!” Added Kayachi.
“Right, Question 1, who’s that creepy spy guy and whats he yapping about,” asked Mayuma cutely.
“Well, Mayuma, we’ll find that out later on in the story, but that doesn’t mean you guys can still guess!” answered Kayachi.
“Alright, so to make things more interesting next time we see you in chapter one, ask and share you’re ideas ok guys!” Mayuma yelled excitedly.
“In other words, sorry for the short show, and until next time, we’ll see you!” said Kayachi.
“Right, bye bye guys, Kayachi and I will answer and reply to all your questions next time on ***After Chapters Saga Special***” concluded Mayuma.

pikachu_pancakes! · Mar 15, 2010

Hey! Looks neat! Definately nedds to be longer but its still good!

My "fanmail" for the ***After Chapters Saga Special***

Dear: Mayuma

Just an idea for the show; will you guys have special guest stars? You know to make things more interesting you could interview a user. Or bring in a character? Also, can you help give hints on who that mysterious spy guy is? When will he be revealed? Whats your favourite color???

Signed: pikachuluver44

XD I did it for fun to see what you would do!

EDIT: Now that I think about it, double trouble is right, it's fine length wise... You know what, I'm just to used to reading XD

double trouble! · Mar 15, 2010

Doesn't seem that short to me. Maybe it's because I'm not used to reading.
Can't wait for the first chapter, that spy character seems interesting.

Deleted member 34284 · Mar 15, 2010

I think this is quite a good start. The personalitys of Jamie and Shadow interests me. Can't wait for the first chapter, keep it up. ^^

PK I'm BAAACK~ · Mar 21, 2010

Chapter/ Episode One: The New Doctor Phill

We left the gang when the torch was being passed. Now, we see them on the soccer field after the opening ceremony. But what’s all that yelling about?

“Manectric can so own an ampharos!” yelled Matt.
“No way, Ampharos is waaay better,” argued Jamie.

“Will you two just shush! We’ve been listening your mine is better then yours for hours now!” Whined Shadow.
“Yet Red thought they could get along,” shruged Aqua.
“I said that I thought that, I really thought they wouldn’t knowing Jamie, to be honest, the peacefulness lasted longer then I expected.” Red said while scratching her head.

“I bet your Ampharos couldn’t even dream of beating my Gallade,” teased Matt.
“Please, my Ampharos wouldn’t even break a sweat,” continued Jamie.
“What about your other weak and stupid pokemon!!!” Yelled Matt furiously.
“Mine aren’t they weak and stupid ones, yours are!” screamed Jamie.
“Will you two shut up! You’ll waste this weeks entire episode if you keep that up!” Interupted Shadow. “Plus if you really want to settle this then your both weak and stupid!” He continued.

“I beg your pardon?” Then came another interuption from an unknown red head. She had long, red hair that has occasional spikes of red hair sticking out. She wore a plain black
t-shirt with baggy blue jeans.

“I wasn’t talking to you, I was talking to these other attackers,” pointed out Shadow.
“Well, you were calling them weak and stupid, therefore you are calling all humans weak and stupid. Is that right? Are we weak and stupid?” Asked the girl.
“Yes, we’re weak and stupid because we’re intelligent.” Red shrugged innocently. The others glared at her for her comment.
“Moving on, you’re both equal, we’ll figure out who’s stronger later on in one of the league battles.” Explained the girl.
“Alright Dr. Phill,” sighed Shadow.
“Oh! By the way, what is your name ma’am?” asked Aqua.
“Oh right, excuse me, my name is, Fire,” introduced the girl.
“Nice to meet you, I’m Aqua, and these are my friends, Red, Matt, Shadow, Jamie and Riley” introduced Aqua.

“Riley, you haven’t said much,” commented Red.
“I know, I’m just staying out of it for now,” explained Riley.
“Smart,” said Red.
“I know… Hey you want to go get some ice-cream while they all talk about the new doctor Phill?” Offered Riley.
“Sure,” replied Red. With that, Riley and Red, went of to visit the ice-cream parlour.

***At the ice-cream parlour***

“Hey, Red, are you sure that guy isn’t one of your friends?” Asked Riley, as she pointed to the guy in the spy outfit staring at them.

“Riley, I swear Jamie is the only guy I know walking around in a strange suit!” Red yelled, she was very frustrated that they all thought SHE knew him. “The only other people I know would be me on halloween, you guys never dress up anymore” She muttered.

***Behind A Building Nearby***

“Guys, I swear, I’d help you b-but I just can’t!!!” Screamed Bob, he was scared as he was being surronded by a gang of cheaters. They knew Bob was a creative guy, though he wasn’t the smartest. He always came with great strategies, which is what the gang came for.

“Well, well, well, if you can’t help us, then we’ll help you and your trip to the hospital,” threatened one of the guys. Bob had gone of from the others but accidentaly ran into the gang of bullies. He kept refusing to help them, but it was getting too rough now. Speaking of which, poor Bob was just punched in the face!

“Back of you losers!!!” Yelled a very angry Aqua. Those guys were beating up her best friend after all. She hated it when guys would pick on Bob, she liked the guy when he was happy, not sad! She got in between the gang and Bob as she formed a fist with her left hand.

“Aqua, it’s ok,” said Bob, he was worried that he would drag Aqua into this yet again. It seemed like a habit of her interupting these sort of moments with Bob. However Aqua was to stuborn to back down from her friends request, and punched the guy back.

With all the screaming, Red and Riley, who were nearby, came running into the scene.
“Bob, what happened to you!” Riley panicked.
“I’m ok, I was just being picked on as usual,” shruged Bob. Though he made it seem like it was no big deal, he was emotionally hurt. This was one thing that only Aqua knew, she knew all to well that she had some cheering up to do later.

“Well, I guess when there’s stupid guys, there’s also a victim, now let’s turn this table around and make them the victim!!!” Red demanded, just like she said, she punched a guy in the stomach and kicked a guy in the leg. “Now, let’s play some wack a loser!” Red yelled again. Both Red and Aqua punched a guy in the stomach and face. With that the beat up guys ran off. “Told ya they were losers!” Red chimed.

“T-Thanks guys, I thought I was a goner,” Bob sadly whispered.
“Don’t worry, I’m always here to help!” Aqua winked.
“Like a Prince and a Princess… Only it’s the other way around?” Red spoke.
“Ha ha, Red, you think anyone would be a couple!” Riley joked.
“Yea, that’s because if I don’t, people will start thinking I’m dense like that kid on the show pokemon.” Red explained. Everyone laughed at her comment.

***After Chpaters Saga Special***
“Hello everybody! This is Mayuma and Kayachi here in the after chapters saga special!!!” Mayuma cheered.
“Yep, we also got all you comments and would like to thanks you for your kindness of telling us your thoughts!” Thanked Kayachi.
“Right, so first, I’ll answer pikachuluver44’s thoughts! Ahem, I like the color pink the most, and yes, we will interview people from time to time! Like: the author, Samantha, who will be our first guest star in episode THREE! Which is also when we-erm the author, will reveal more about the spy guy! So don’t miss it!” Mayuma winked.
Kayachi nodded, “We will also interview the users that play characters, which is our intention for chapter five, we’ll interview pikachuluver44, the author, and >=3. Also our question this time is, What do you think the personality of Fire is?”
“Ops, I forgot about our question! Well, we have two now! When should we post our chapters?”
Kayachi sweatdroped, “I also forgot that one, anyways we hope you guys keep reviewing and reading, so until next time!’
“And thanks for reading this episode, see you later in the next! AFTER CHAPTER SAGA SPECIAL!!!”
*the camera goes off*

Deleted member 34284 · Mar 21, 2010

I found chapter1 quite interesting!
I was laughing at the beginning with the arguement between Matt and Jamie. xD And when Bob was threatened and beaten by those Gang of cheaters (poor me. xD) I just had to keep Reading!

So yeah, very good. Better than the prologue. Can't wait for chapter2, keep it up.

PK I'm BAAACK~ · Mar 21, 2010

Authors Note: This is a "one hour special" since I was supposed to bring you guys chapter one earlier. *sweatdrops*

Chapter/ Episode Two: Cheering Up Old Buddies

We find Bob, Jamie, Red, Aqua and Riley, in Bob’s hotel room. No yelling right now, but there is some talking between two best friends… Let’s catch up with whats going on!

“I was so weak back there,” Bob sobbed.
“It’s okay, you were strong not weak, if you were weak you would’ve gave in to those losers!” Aqua comforted.
“B-but I was hit a-a” Bob was interupted.
“-and you still didn’t give in! You were great back there Bob!” Aqua interupted.
“I probably would’ve eventually or I would’ve been in the hospital if you guys didn’t show up!” Bob cried.
“Don’t think like that, you know I’m always here for you!” Aqua patted his back. With that the two stared at eachother.

Red coughed, “Couple,” and cleared her throat. Riley laughed at her coment and watched as Aqua and Bob quickly turned away. “Aw, sorry, didn’t mean to ruin the cute little couples moment like that!” Red said. Though she “apologized” she wasn’t actually trying to say sorry, she was just proving her point from earlier.

“WE ARE NOT A COUPLE!!!” Yelled Bob and Aqua at the exact same time.
“Sure…” Red said doubtingly.

“Alright, you know what, we have battles tomorrow, Bob you should get some rest after today!” Suggested Aqua. “Also, tomorrow, if I see those guys that picked on you, I’ll give ‘em a real wack!”
“Alright settle down, Aqua” Bob sweatdroped at his best friend’s coment. After everyone returned to their rooms to rest up.

***The NEXT Day***

*nock, nock, nock* There was a loud nock at Bob’s door. He was just getting dressed in his usual clothes, and ran to answer the door. In came Aqua to wake him up for the new battle filled day.

“Hey sleepy head! You ready to head out to the stadium?” Aqua greeted.
“You bet! Did you eat already? Also, it a little early, right now it’s 9:00 and the matches don’t start until 10:00!” Bob replied.
“I know, we’re eating breakfast with everyone else, so come on!” Aqua pulled Bob to the cafeteria.

***Later That Day At 9:45***

The M.C. stood on the middle platform to introduce the league again. “Hello everyone! Welcome to the Kanto League! We have a few minutes, but I’ll introduce the first battle!
The first battle is between Matt Matkin and Joey Kitts! Each of those two trainers will only have one pokemon on the field and may use one pokemon for this battle round!” Started the M.C. “Now, trainers have already picked their pokemon for round one, so we’ll see how this battle goes!” The M.C. and the crowd cheered loudly.

“Good luck out there Matt!” Cheered the others (Authors Note: Erm, lets say A/N: When I say Others or Group, I am refering to the main characters that are focused. E.X. Shadow, Red, Aqua, Bob, Riley, Jamie, Fire… You’ll know if one is apart of this if they are not the M.C. have a name, and when they’re introduced they’ll have the description of their clothing.)

Matt ran out into the stadium with one pokeball. Just as the other trainer did. Aqua realised the guy was from that gang that attacked Bob. This got her more mad and determind to make sure Matt won.

“Lets Go! Pidgeot!” Matt threw the pokeball into the air. Out of the pokeball came a red flash that formed a figure on the ground; when it returned to the ball, a pokemon was seen.

It had cream colored feathers under it’s body. On top the feathers were a slightly darker version and looked like brown. With two peach like bird feet on the ground the same color as it’s beak. It looked like it had yellow hair with two red lines on the sides of the yellow.

“Your Turn! Linoone!” Called Joey. He too threw a pokeball with the same thing happening to the red light. However a different figure came out of it.

It looked like its fur was beige and looked similar to a weasel/ badger. With peircing blue eyes on the sides of its head. It had some stripes of brown on it’s fur as well. With vicious sharp claws on the ends of its paws.

The M.C. started, “Alright, heads or tails boys?”
“Heads!” Said Joey before Matt could.
The M.C. flipped a coin, “Matt gets to go first, it was tails!” (A/N: Chapters/ Episodes that have league battles in them may be longer!)

“Alright! Pidgeot, lets use Twister!” Matt comanded. Pidgeot flew up higher and made a small wind tornado, big enough to do some damge to linoone. It got worst coming down and linoone didn’t get to dodge, so it was a hit!

“Arg… Linoone jump up and use headbutt!” Ordered Joey.
“Pidgeot, Look out!” Matt cried. Pidgeot didn’t have enough time and was hit by the speedy Linoone.
“Quick, now use swift!” yelled Joey. A bunch of spinning yellow stars came at Pidgeot up close. This caused the bird pokemon to fall to ground.

“Man, things aren’t going Matt’s way are they?” Shadow said.
“Arg… COME ON MATT!!! GET YOU SELF TOGETHER!!!” Aqua yelled.

***After Chapter Saga Special***
“Hello again everybody! Looks like we’ve gotten faster!” Cheered Mayuma.
“That’s for sure! We’re one chapter away from the interview about that weird spy dude! Our question is: What will happen next? Matt doesn’t have the battle going his way. So how will things turn out?” asked Kayachi.
“They could turn out anyways, Kayachi, but I hope Matt makes it through! It seems like Aqua was very mad at how things were going.” Explained Mayuma.
“I agree! Also, we’ve decided when we’ll post our chapters! In our Authors time its every Tuesday and Friday, when we’ll get new chpaters. Unless we post two in one day, we’ll skip it. So episode three won’t be until Friday. WHAT A WAIT!” Cried Kayachi.
“Yea it sucks… Well, thanks for saying your thoughts on last chapter! That shout out goes to Eevee91, Double Trouble and >=3! Thanks for your kindness! AND YES! That fight was funny, so was Red’s ending line. AND… POOR BOB!!!” Mayuma began to cry anime tears.
“He he, well we’ll see you next time, and keep reviewing! Tell us that your still reading!… preferably could you juist post here on the thread…” Kayachi muttered the last bit.
“Right! We’ll see you with Samantha this Friday on…! AFTER CHAPTER SAGA SPECIAL!!!” Mayuma concluded.
***this part ended and a preview comes on***
Aqua: SO WHO’S THAT SPY GUY!!!
Red: Nevermind that, WHO IS TEAM UNIVERSE???
Bob: Well…
Matt: I think… though I don’t want to say it… but we should ask Jamie…
Shadow: WHA???
Jamie: Team Universe? I can explain…..
Riley and Fire: See you next time on, Chapter/ Episode three: Hello Nathan and Brooke!
***camera of***

TeamGalacticMercury · Mar 21, 2010

good so far... they could probably be longer. I have a question about the characters; are the chubby or skinny? are they tall or short? What eye color do they have? Also, what is the dialog after the story? Or is it even a story? Is it just an extremely short reality show? You really shouldn't post all the characters in the story before the first chapter, or for that matter post the names of the people who the character came from. What if someone who reads this it hurt emotionally because they weren't in the story???? I know some people on this site who would feel that way. Another thing; what does it look like outside? Rainy, sunny, snowing??? Is it a forest, a plain, or is it a city life? You are okay with what they are wearing, but you need work on everything else. As far as I can tell, you did well on on your spelling and grammar. hope this cleared the water a little.

Deleted member 34284 · Mar 22, 2010

This is really great! Each chapter seems to get better and better. I found the whole "couple" thing between Bob and Aqua quite funny and I can see you put lots of thought with the battle between Matt and Joey! The battle scenes certaintly kept me Reading!

Can't wait for Chapter 3. Keep it up!

eevee91 · Mar 23, 2010

Can't wait till Friday!

Every Breaking Wave · Mar 24, 2010

I'm enjoying it so far (and I'm pretty stoked that I got the first line of any main character!), though I agree with most others that the length could be longer. You've gone straight into the action which can work for shorter stories, but if there is any intention in making it a nice and long one you should probably slow down a bit and help to evolve the character's personalities. Remember, you don't have to cram it all in straight at the beginning. You can keep them relatively blank (with a few of their quirks) at first and add to them over time; it helps to build the characters up and makes them mature more visibly, and it's also more interesting to the reader since it sucks them in that little bit more (it can also help to give your chapters that extra bit of length).

Keep it up; I'm looking forward to the next installment!

Izumoshep · Mar 24, 2010

Interesting so far, have found it to be rather short for my tastes, but good general plot and considering the size rather well done character development. 8/10 so far from me.

pikachu_pancakes! · Mar 25, 2010

hm... It's very intresting, can't wait for tomorrow! =) My character is funny and just like me! LookAtTheirVm'sShipping for the win!!!

PK I'm BAAACK~ · Mar 26, 2010

Chapter/ Episode Three: Hello Nathan and Brooke!

We last left of with our heroes in the middle of a battle between Matt and Joey. Inside the dome like light filled sun-shining stadium.

***Flashes Back To Last Chapter***
“Quick, now use swift!” yelled Joey. A bunch of spinning yellow stars came at Pidgeot up close. This caused the bird pokemon to fall to ground.

“Man, things aren’t going Matt’s way are they?” Shadow said.
“Arg… COME ON MATT!!! GET YOU SELF TOGETHER!!!” Aqua yelled.

***Back To The Story***

“Arg… Pigeot, come on!” Matt yelled desperately.
“Linoone, use the fall to double the power of a headbutt,” Joey instructed. Matt watched as the Linoone straitened itself out ready to make a finishing full power attack. But just then, a thought occurred to him!

‘Hold it! Linoone can only go in one direction when their going so fast, that means it will hurt itself if I just…’ Matt thought then commanded, “Pigeot, dodge it, now!” Finally, the bird pokemon got up and flew out of the way. This caused the Linoone to hit the ground really hard. “Alright, time to turn things around with Wing Attack!” Matt ordered. Pigeot’s wings began to glow white as it charged it self at the Linoone. It was a good hit, it’s wings hit the Linoone hard.

“Linoone! Come on! Use Hyper Beam!” Commanded Joey. ‘That’s not the best choice. Using hyper beam while your pokemon is already tired. It takes time and aton of energy.’ Matt thought. ‘Oh well, easier for me!’

“Pigeot, use Air slash!” Yelled Matt. A ball of wind began to form blowing violently and quickly the pidgeot threw it at Linoone just before hyper beam! It hit Linoone… The hyper beam however, was strong enough to still make it to pigeot! BOOM! There was a loud explosion. Dust filled the dry rocky field for once and it was impossible to see the two pokemon. Once it cleared up a bit, they were finally visible and…

“Linoone is unable to battle! Pigeot and Matt are the winners!” Cheered the M.C.

“Thank goodness! Pigeot we did it! I’m so proud of you!” Matt hugged his bird pal, it looked very tired. After that tuff table turning battle, Matt couldn’t believe it still stood strong. “You deserve a good rest pigeot,” Matt comforted. He took out the red and white orb, as pigeot was engulfed by the red flash.

“Way to go Matt!” Cheered Shadow.
“That’s how you kick a guys but, rock on old Matt!” Chimed Riley.
“Looks like you made it through buddy!” Yelled Fire.

Aqua sighed a sigh of complete relief. If Matt didn’t finish Joey, she would’ve been honored to do it for him. But knowing that the guy officially was beaten by Matt. Made her feel ten times better then punching him in the face. The poor guy had to wear sunglasses to hide the black eye. Now she wouldn’t haft to deal with him again… Nor would Bob. With those thoughts she placed her hand on her chest.

Red noted this, “Thinking ‘bout someone?”
“Huh? Ah! N-no, I’m just happy Matt won.” Aqua stuttered.
“Right,” Red said sacastically.
“What, no thinking about any SPECIAL someone, say Joey looks kinda familiar… Didn’t you guys punch him yesterday when you were trying to protect Aqua’s new boyfriend?” Riley chimed.
“Oh, not you too Riley…” Aqua whined, well Red and Riley just laughed.

***Later, they congradulated Matt***

“You did awesome Matt!” Fire cheered.
“Uh-erm… Thanks” Matt breathed out.
“Hey, who’s that guy?” Asked Fire, she pointing towards a spy dude who was staring directly at… Red?
“Hey, Red, do you know him?”
“Huh… Oh no, not another accusation.” Red sighed.
“So tell me how it feels to always get bothered about something?” Aqua emphasized.
“I’ll just go talk to the gu-ah!” Red was pushed back.
“Wait… Don’t talk to him just yet,” Jamie whispered.
“W-why? He keeps staring at us!” Red muttered.
“Just… Let me figure some stuff out about this guy okay?”
“Huh, alright, but I hope you find out something useful,” Red sighed in defeat.

***With Jamie***

The spy guy was talking on the phone at the pokemon center. A place the had been painted pink and swept clean.

“Boss, I swear those are the kids!” Whined the spy guy.
“HOW COULD THEY be the kids? Matt nearly lost.” The man spat.
“Yea, but this is the beginning,” whispered the spy guy.
“… I hope your right about these kids Kinsu, or you’ll be fired for sure from team Universe…” Said the othe man on the phone calmly.

“W-What! T-team Universe? Why are they after us? Why them? What are they up to?” Muttered Jamie.

“They are looking for the secret gaurdians of the elements.” Replied a boy who stood behind Jamie. He had a pokeball top and a blue bag. Blue jeans and white trainers, and he had a pokeball hat.

“Who are you? How did you know that?” Asked Jamie, who was very shocked.
“I’m Nathan… Nathan Jones… I have my ways of knowing.” He replied calmly.
“What ways?” Jamie eyed suspiciously.
“That’s none of your buisness,” Nathan coldly spat.

“Nathan, settle down!” Scolded a female voice. She had light skin, brown hair, and brown eyes. She wore jeans, a light purple shirt, and white sneakers. Like everyone else, she was about 5.5 feet?

“Sorry, Brooke,” Nathan apologized.

Brooke sighed, “Nathan, is actually from Orre, he found out about team universe when they threatened his hometown… It was something about elements and pokemon types… He snook a look at their plans with some help from one of his old friends, but he couldn’t stop them as they escaped. They said, “We have to go somewhere better then this!” then that was the last since then.”

“Oh…” Jamie felt a little sorry. Attacking his hometown? Poor guy…

“I’ve got a bet to settle with those people! So I’m trying to track them down! They kid-erm adult napped my Mother!” Nathan screamed angerly.

***Back with the others***

“SO, WHO IS THAT SPY GUY!!!” Aqua yelled frustrated.
“Well…” Bob wasn’t really sure.
“Guys, though I hate to say it… We should ask Jamie…” Suggested Matt.

Then, as if on cue, Jamie walked in with his two new friends…

“WHA?” Shadow was shocked to see who he now saw. It was his old friend from Orre, Nathan!
“The spy guy is a member of team Universe…” Said Nathan, he was eavesdropping on their conversation.
“Team Universe? I can explain…” Started Jamie. He told them the information he found out about earlier.
“So, WHO’S THAT SPY GUY!!!” Aqua was freaked.
“Nevermind that… WHO’S TEAM UNIVERSE!!!” Shrieked Red.
Jamie sighed, “Do I haft to repeat myself?” Everyone said “NOPE!” they didn’t want to hear it all again.

“Good, now this is-”
“Nathan and Brooke!” Interupted Shadow.
“Shadow!” Nathan and Brooke greeted.
“Um… Am I missing something here?” Red asked.
“We were friends a long time ago in Orre, Shadow helped me get some information on team Universe, but we could never get my Mother back…” Nathan answered.

“So you’re the friend Brooke mentioned?” Jamie had his mouth wide opened.
“I think that part is clear,” Muttered Fire.
“Yea, I was just making sure,” Jamie whispered.
Red yawned, “I’m going to go to my room…”

***In Her Room***

Red’s room was all white, it had a soft bed, a couch, T.V., small kitchen, and a bathroom. Itt was well kept and mostly white.

Red sighed, “so much commotion went on today… What was with that whole “People with Powers” part? We don’t have powers!”

Suddenly, both of her eyes vision disappeared! It looked like she was time traveling, but she was actually still sitting on her bed. What was happening?

***After Chapter Saga Special***

“Hello again everyone, this is the ***AFTER CHAPTER SAGA SPECIAL*** with your hosts, Mayuma, that’s me, and Kayachi, and the guest star, Samantha!” Mayuma introduced the girl beside her. The girl wore a blue dress and had long brown hair, her eyes were also brown.

“Hey, I’m Samantha, or the author, I’d like to thank everyone for reviewing and say thanks for helping! Every review helps, so let’s start answering! The characters are skinny, about 5.5 feet tall, the team universe boss is about 6.0 and the grunts are around 5.0.. The eye colors will be told later for my own secret story plot reason

If you don’t mind.” I started.

“ The dialog after the story is either the ***After Chapter Saga Special*** or a preview. I was being a little forgetful with scenery, for I forgot to describe that, so I hope this chapter was better. The league is inside a city which is surronded by a forest. The city is also kept a surprise though for the plot. I will try to improve on the length of the chapters (hope this was better).” I continued on like a babbling machine.

“I will either stall you on characters or bring in some immediately. I mainly needed, Matt, Bob, Jamie, Red, Shadow, Aqua and Riley to be introduced early. Fire was kinda rushed. Nathan and Brooke had to come in now… Or it would be no reason for me to bring in Red, Jamie, Shadow, Riley and Matt. Which would’ve left us on a story with Aqua and Bob, that wouldn’t be as good. The character development is little by little put in, the big push comes in later on!” I finally stopped.

“Whoa, looks like a lot of answers…! Oh right, we forgot the question. What is going on with Red?” Kayachi asked.
“Well… Samantha, what is going on?” Mayuma repeated.
“That’s my secret, you’ll haft to wait and see!” I winked.
“Hm… OH! We’ve waisted quite some time with this show, we’re officially over and out, so see you next time on-” Mayuma started.
“THE AFTER CHAPTER SAGA SPECIAL!!!” We all ended with a cheer.
***camera goes of until Tuesday!***

Deleted member 34284 · Mar 26, 2010

Another awesome chapter! ;3
The rest of that battle between Joey and Matt was just epic! And what this Team Universe has planned seems pretty interesting too! Also, glad to see afew more characters. :3

can't wait for chapter four, keep it up. ^^

eevee91 · Mar 26, 2010

This is getting very interesting

I would just make sure you proof read as best as you can for errors.

PK I'm BAAACK~ · Mar 30, 2010

Chapter Four: Princess Kazagumo?

What is going on with Red? We left her and everyone when Red was in her room. Some how, she doesn’t quite see, well, for now…

***Flash Back***

Red sighed, “so much commotion went on today… What was with that whole “People with Powers” part? We don’t have powers!”

Suddenly, both of her eyes vision disappeared! It looked like she was time traveling, but she was actually still sitting on her bed. What was happening?

***Flash Back Ended***

… Colors in a tunnel is all she saw… Wait? What was that? A figure that seemed like a blue blur was there, something was happening… Wait! That’s Aqua! Then everyone else is… Here! Wait, why are they all crying? Red tried talking to them but found that she currently couldn’t, or at least, they couldn’t hear her…

“I wish we all knew this sooner!” Cried Aqua… Knew what?
“Why did they haft to take her!” Cried Riley.
“Red… We will find you…” Whispered Jamie. ‘Wait what? Find me? I’m right here!’ Red thought. Then another tunnel formed. She was back to her room for all she knew… But, she couldn’t see!

*nock, nock, nock* “Red, you okay?” Aqua asked. Red could recognize the blue blur.
“Aqua? I can’t see!” Red cried.
“What? What happened?” Aqua got worried.
“I-I don’t know… I saw these weird things… You guys were all crying, saying things like, you wish we knew this sooner… Then I was back here in my room, and now I can’t see!” Red explained.

“H-how did this happen?” Aqua asked. Then everyone else from the group stepped into the room.
“Red! Are you okay?” Riley asked.
“Something weird has happened!” Aqua panicked.
“What do you mean?” Riley got scared. Aqua explained what she heard from Red.
“… That… Means she has… Powers…” Jamie frowned.
“Then if she has powers that means… Team Universe is after her!” Nathan realised.
“Nathan, Jamie, how do you know?” Brooke questioned.
“It happened to my mom, I told Jamie that since he wants to help stop Team Universe… I haven’t told you guys much about it…” Nathan admited.

“They are visions…” Fire said.
“Do we have powers too?” Shadow asked.
“We might,” Fire replied.
“But what are our powers? How will they affect us? Will team Universe be after us too?” Questioned Matt.
“We don’t know what they could be, or how they’d affect us, but if we do get powers, they’ll be after us,” Fire answered.

“Guys, I can’t see! If they’re after me, how do I run?” Red panicked.
“I-I don’t even know when they’ll strike, but we’ll haft to be there to help,” Aqua yelled with determination.
“B-but this is team Universe we’re talking about,” Bob exclaimed.
“Too bad, we’re helping,” Aqua demanded.
“Aqua is right, we aren’t letting them get her!” Riley approved.
“Thanks guys,” Red thanked.

***At the pokemon center***

“Here, Aqua, you take Red to one of those chairs!” Commanded Riley. Aqua nodded and sat Red down on one and then sat next to her.

“Looks like the boss was right… The first one of them was the red head… She can’t see now…” Said the spy guy.

“Uh-oh we’ve got trouble…” Jamie muttered, listening and eyeing the spy guy. Aqua gave the spy guy a good glare and don’t touch her look. The spy guy gave a I’m innocent look.

Next, an explorer look a like came in carrying suitcase that held a laptop. He opened it up, the laptop said “You’ve got picture mail!”. “Awesome! It’s here!” He exclaimed.
“What’s here?” Matt asked out of the blue.
“My mail, it has the pictures from these ruins I visited, I need to find out what the drawings mean.” He started typing a lot of stuff.
He read out loud, “Princess Kazagumo, the legendary princess of aura, was captured a long time ago by great villains, she had strange handcuffs that were purple with pink diamonds and pink plastic. The plastic absorbed her aura whenever she worked, so they forced her to give them her energy by making her work for them. She was wiped and slashed whenever she didn’t listen.”

He continued, “One day she had enough of it! Princess Kazagumo stood up to the men and the king of the evil organization. The king however, was too strong and got his pokemon to attack the princess. Her body glowed with a strange purple aura and she fell to the ground, a large purple diamond came out of her body and shattered to a million pieces all over. The shards turned into souls of the unknown people, they gave the people powers of their own to take down the great evil organization. Once defeating the boss, they must find the lost mountain of Kazagumo named after the princess. The shards shall rise from their bodies and form into one big purple diamond again. Then the princess will come back with her powers and congratulate the people by letting them be able to control their powers. She will go to Arceus and keep balance once again.”

“I wonder what Kazagumo means?” He started typing… “Aha! Elements! This is the elements legend!” He exclaimed.
“What!” Aqua was shocked.
“Kazagumo huh? I’ll help!” Red yelled.
“You can’t help unless you have powers yourself, oh and by the way, I am Nigel,” Nigel stated.
“She has psychic powers, she has occasional visions…” Fire explained.
“What! Then you must find others that are apart of the legend and get them to help you! It’s a grand journey!” Nigel laughed. “Though I wouldn’t know.”

Suddenly Red’s eyesight came back for another flash, she saw the future again…

***Vision***

It was… Matt? What was happening to him? A huge blade was placed firmly in his hands. It was silver and glowed a white light of aura; it looked like a face was on the holding end. The face seemed like a female face, the face had long brown hair similar to Matt’s. A girl walked behind him.

She had long brown hair in a ponytail at the side. Red tank top that has flowers on its straps (where the straps connect to the shirt at the front); the pedals are purple. Magenta skirt that ends at the knee caps. Long white knee socks and blue running shoes. She had shining blue eyes, however, that wasn’t their exact color, it changes when she’s in battle. (A/N: Hint hint. She is another new character non introduced in the actual story. The color her eyes change to in battle is un-revealed for a reason.)

“Matt? Are you training for the adventure?” She asked.
“Yes Karen, I won’t let my friends down, I shall fight that evil organization Team Universe once and for all!” Matt declared. Aparently he knew the girl who was named Karen.

“I hope it turns out right, I’m a little scared…” Karen whispered.
“Don’t worry,” Matt comforted.
“Ok, Kazagumo Night,” She nodded.

Kazagumo night? Who is that? Is that one of the element powers? Of course, it means Element Night! Whoa, way to go Matt. Red congratulated in her head. Then everything turned blury again…

***Vision Ended***

“Red? What was it?” Riley asked.
“A vision, Matt is the Kazagumo Night!” Red exclaimed.
“I’ll look that up!” Nigel muttered and again started typing.

“Aha, the Kazagumo Night, the protector of the Elements and Soul sword. Its actually called the ElementSoul. Said to be passed on to a family member of Princess Kazagumo! Once in the right hands it will glow a white light of aura, the more the person trains with it, the more powerful the aura becomes.” Nigel read.

“W-WHAT!” Matt was shocked.
“Congrats Sir Kazagumo!” Riley joked.
“I can’t be the Kazagumo Night! How?” Matt asked, obviously not believing what he heard.
“Normally Red would be the one to crack that joke,” Aqua blurted outloud.
“True,” Riley whispered, knowing her friend was no longer her usual self. Maybe this legend could help everyone? Maybe it would do us some good and let us gain what we need! Riley thought to herself.
“Arg… The ladies will go crazy now over Sir Element, I bet that girl…” Red stopped.
“What girl?” Matt asked.
“N-nevermind!” Red laughed nervously.

“Anything else about this?” Aqua asked.
“We’ll haft to wait…” Nigel said disapointedly.
“Oh… What about us, do we get powers!” Riley screamed.
“Calm down… Riley,” Jamie muttered.
“You know what, where’s Bob?” She asked out of the blue.

***With Bob***

“Hindaiki indoieek (Hind-Die-Eek-E and In-Doy-Eek when you see Doy think boy with a d) Hindaiki indoieek, Hindaiki indoieek, Hindaiki indoieek” Sang a strange voice. Bob was walking around looking for where the voice came from.

He was in a forest surronded by trees and little sunlight. He kept hearing what sounded like a woman singing. It was only him here.

“Hello?” He asked.
“Hindaiki indoieek, onoscoptey ikieek (On-o-scope-t-ay and Eek-e-eek)” Sang the voice even louder. It was like it was calling him. “Bob, Bob, Bob, Bob, Hindaiki indoieek, onoscoptey ikieek!”

Wait… It WAS calling him? He looked around and came to an opening. He saw what looked like assasin nunchucks, they were gold with a bright orange aura surronding them. The chain was silver with a lighter orange aura around it.

“Whoa!” is all he said. Amazed, even the voice stopped calling him the moment his eyes found the feirce weapon.
“Bob, this is yours!” Said the voice as it disapeared. It guided him here? It sounded like the female was now younger. He picked up the nunchucks and placed them in his pocket.
“Work hard,” the voice said one last time.
“Thanks!” He exclaimed.
“No problem, Kazagumo Ninja,” the voice weakly whispered, getting further away.
“Kazagumo Ninja?” he asked. He got no answer, so he headed back.

***Arriving at the pokemon center***

“Hey guys! How is it going?” He asked cheerfully.
“Uh… Hey…” Red whispered.
“Where were you!” Riley shouted.
“Um, following a voice,” He admitted, though it sounded odd. “Hey do you guys know anything about what Kazagumo Ninja means?”

“Ninja? Element Ninja?” Aqua turned to Nigel who was already googling it.

“Kazagumo Ninja, the elemental ninja or assasin… He carries the glowing nunchucks called, lightning heart, glowing with white and yellow as it’s aura. It’s speed is incredible as well as the heart of the owner, he has great care but only with his weapon, shall his powers start. The power of lightning and gains willpower, a part of the Kazagumo legend. He only works with his weapon and friends, as well as a trustworthy friend of the Kazagumo Princess. A long time ago he exsisted, until every element vanished and is to be recreated by the people that have Kazagumo crystals in their hearts.” Nigel read.

“Okay… What is a Kazagumo and a Kazagumo Princess?” Bob asked.
Riley face palmed, “You should’ve been here!!!”

Nigel laughed and explained the story to Bob…

CHAPTER FOUR HAS ENDED
*** After Chapter Saga Special***

Mayuma bounced up and down, “Oh my god! So much came this time!”
Kayachi laughed, “Yea… Oh we have a note from the author… It says: “Dear readers, sorry, I had to do some re writing on the beginning of this chapter, I was going to make it a fight for Red but now that’s next time. =P If you have any questions about the new plot and all, tell me! Also, I request PMs from the following USERs: Furball The Umbreon ; pikachuluver44, say that you’ve read this and agree to the interview… I’ll PM you guys after. =P Also, from now on, chapters only come every Friday. ‘Cause I’m to busy every other day T_T sorry…” Kayachu finished.

“Whoa! Sooo much! I wonder… Oh. Here’s our question to the readers, How do you think Matt will get his sword?” Mayuma smiled.
“It could be any way,” Kayachi shrugged.
“Right… Well that’s all for now, see you next time on THE AFTER CHAPTER SAGA SPECIAL!!!” Mayuma cheered.
***Camera goes off until Friday***

eevee91 · Mar 31, 2010

I love it!

pikachu_pancakes! · Apr 1, 2010

Chapter four was definately good! Red has vision powers! =D Then that homemade legend thing is cool, I think we got a hint this will be a looong story. But it's interesting and just getting started! Also, I liked the plot that you're hinting us, thw whole team Universe and Elements legend... Also (again) Kazagumo is in romaji right? For element? COOL! =P Can't wait until chapter five! *is now PMing*

Every Breaking Wave · Apr 2, 2010

Wow, so it looks like I've got a special role in this story. Awesome! I'm looking forward to the next chapter very much!

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