Gollumbells
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I restarted soul silver the other day and I am turning it into my own story as I go along. The way I am doing it is I will play a bit of the game, and then when things happen I will write it down. The chapters are done in gameplay stints, but always finish at a suitable point. I will try to upload 1 "Chapter" a day. I currently have 6 written down on another site, and they will be updated on that site as soon as I do them. Since this site is much more active, I only want to post 1 a day so I can get some feedback. Warning, the beginning does suck a little and I need to re-work it, but it gets better as it goes along. (I hope) xD (When things are in brackets, that is usually me talking / thinking inside my head)
Here it is, the beginning.................
PART 1
There I was, overjoyed at beating the elite 4. My dreams and goals had been accomplished and professor oak was inputting my data into the hall of fame. I was the new champion and had beaten my long term rival Gary Oak.
When I get home my mum is impressed with the trophy I bring home and starts to cook me my favourite dinner. Gammon and egg with chips and peas. I sit down and stretch out and gaze out of the window to see the calmness of pallet town. Tomorrow would be a pretty fun day with a big celebration to congratulate me on my success, and to con gratulate Gary as well since he did well to beat the elite 4 before me.
Slowly my eyes close and I fall into a slumber. Before me I am dreaming of professor oak who is telling me all about the world of pokemon like I am some kind of noob. For some unknown reason he asks if I am a boy or a girl. Surely a professor of such esteem should be able to tell the difference between a lad and lass. Anyway, I ask him if he is being serious, and professor oak gets a bit embarresed and asks me again. In a confused tone I tell him I am of course a boy. Then he asks for my name. Man, this dream is getting weird. Playing along with the dream I tell him my name as well. Surely he has not forgotten registering me into the hall of fame??
Suddenly I wake up, in my room like I had been asleep for ages. Stretching and yawning I make my way downstaires. My mum greets me and then tells me my friend Lyra came to find me and that she was playing hide and seek with her marill (Who on earth is lyra and what is a marill???) Also professor elm wants to see me and asks me for a favour. Professor Elm??? C'mon. Everybody knows the real professor is Oak.
*Sighs*
This dream is already random.
Walking outside, I suddenly bump into a small blue blob, and then a girl appears and the blue blob runs off to her. Was that Lyra and a marill? Interesting, I am thinking up new pokemon in my dreams. I shall have to try and remember them and draw them to Prof. Oak and see what he thinks when I wake up. Looking around I realise I am not in Pallet Town. Oh well, I probably would have guessed as much the way things are going right now.
As I start walking, my legs yearn to run but I guess it is a bit too early to run so I shall just stroll about this new world. As I pass a house on my right, a girl comments on my nice new bag which my "mum" gave me. As I near the tall grass, eager to see what pokemon my mind can make up I suddenly hear a frantic shout from behind me. It was the girl who liked my bag! Grabbing me by the arm she drags me back to the centre of town (Which I have yet to find out its name) The girl berates me for being stupid for going out into the grass without a pokemon. (Stupid women, I am the champion of kanto. I know I shall scare her off with my Charizard) Grabbing for my pokeball, I realise I have NONE on me. WHAT THE HELL?? Where did all my pokemon go? I spent ages training them up, the battles we had to beat the gym leaders........... Ah, yes. This is a dream. My pokemon are safe with Professor Oak at the moment in his lab.
Knowing I cannot go out into the grass I decide to look for the girl and her blue blob. While looking around town, I see this odd guy with red hair. (Cool look bro! >.> ) and when I ask him if he is seeing anything interesting, he pushes me away and hurries back to the window. Who the hell is this rude lad, Gary was rude but this guy is something lower than Garry. I decide to give him a piece of my mind, but he just shoves me back yet again. Ugh. My body is so weak in this world. Realising that this is my dream, I try to dream up a massive sword to slice this chump in half, but nothing happens. Susan (The girl who dragged me back into town) Asked if I was ok. It turns out my face was red and that I looked like I was constipated. Slightly embarresd I decide to take an alternate approach.
I decide to go straight into the house where the guy seemed to be perving on this old man. (Eww, whatever floats your boat..) As soon as I enter, the man said he had been waiting for me. He asked If I knew about his research. I have no idea who this guy is so I ask him to explain. He starts to yabber on about how pokemon are now carried in their pokeballs, yabba yabba yabba. I perk up at the mention of Lyra and a Marill (That has got to be the girl and the blue blob I saw earlier!) He then tells me he will give me a pokemon! Before he proceeds to give me a pokemon he gets a email from Mr. Pokemon (How original. I did not think I was this mentally retarded.) He asks for me to go and see what he has discovered, and now after some more yabbering he lets me pick a pokemon.
Excitiedly I look at the pokemon on offer, and to my surprise Charmander, Bulbasaur and Squirlte are nowhere to be seen. Instead my mind has created a whole new set of starters. Daym, Prof. Oak will love this. Not knowing what to call them, Prof. Elm tell me that the blue water pokemon is Totodile, the green grass one is Chickorita, the blue backed thing with fire coming out of it (Charmander rip off) is Cyndaquill. I decide to take the fire version as it looks like someone put a candle near it while it farted. On impulse I decide to call it Farted. (Might as well have as much humour as I can here! ) Prof. Elm tells me Mr. Pokemons house is a little north of Cherrygrove city.
As I start to exit the building, some guy in a lab coat gives me some potions. I guess I could use them, so I thank the aide adn walk out. As soon as I walk out, the girl and her blob are there! She gets all excited that I picked a cyndaquil. I asked her if her name was Lyra, she just laughs like it was some kind of joke and calls me silly. (I guess that is Lyra then, and the blue blob must be marill) I decide to tell my "Mum" that I was going on a trip to see this Mr. Pokemon. She then gives me something called a pokegear that can make phone calls. I guess this could be kinda cool. I can get peoples numbers and prank call them xD. This dream could be pretty funny.
I decide to check if there was anything of importance in my room, but alas, it was empty. Testing the bed to see how it compared to my real one and it felt nice and soft. Pulling the duvet over, I become so relaxed and sleepy and just fall asleep................
Here it is, the beginning.................
PART 1
There I was, overjoyed at beating the elite 4. My dreams and goals had been accomplished and professor oak was inputting my data into the hall of fame. I was the new champion and had beaten my long term rival Gary Oak.
When I get home my mum is impressed with the trophy I bring home and starts to cook me my favourite dinner. Gammon and egg with chips and peas. I sit down and stretch out and gaze out of the window to see the calmness of pallet town. Tomorrow would be a pretty fun day with a big celebration to congratulate me on my success, and to con gratulate Gary as well since he did well to beat the elite 4 before me.
Slowly my eyes close and I fall into a slumber. Before me I am dreaming of professor oak who is telling me all about the world of pokemon like I am some kind of noob. For some unknown reason he asks if I am a boy or a girl. Surely a professor of such esteem should be able to tell the difference between a lad and lass. Anyway, I ask him if he is being serious, and professor oak gets a bit embarresed and asks me again. In a confused tone I tell him I am of course a boy. Then he asks for my name. Man, this dream is getting weird. Playing along with the dream I tell him my name as well. Surely he has not forgotten registering me into the hall of fame??
Suddenly I wake up, in my room like I had been asleep for ages. Stretching and yawning I make my way downstaires. My mum greets me and then tells me my friend Lyra came to find me and that she was playing hide and seek with her marill (Who on earth is lyra and what is a marill???) Also professor elm wants to see me and asks me for a favour. Professor Elm??? C'mon. Everybody knows the real professor is Oak.
*Sighs*
This dream is already random.
Walking outside, I suddenly bump into a small blue blob, and then a girl appears and the blue blob runs off to her. Was that Lyra and a marill? Interesting, I am thinking up new pokemon in my dreams. I shall have to try and remember them and draw them to Prof. Oak and see what he thinks when I wake up. Looking around I realise I am not in Pallet Town. Oh well, I probably would have guessed as much the way things are going right now.
As I start walking, my legs yearn to run but I guess it is a bit too early to run so I shall just stroll about this new world. As I pass a house on my right, a girl comments on my nice new bag which my "mum" gave me. As I near the tall grass, eager to see what pokemon my mind can make up I suddenly hear a frantic shout from behind me. It was the girl who liked my bag! Grabbing me by the arm she drags me back to the centre of town (Which I have yet to find out its name) The girl berates me for being stupid for going out into the grass without a pokemon. (Stupid women, I am the champion of kanto. I know I shall scare her off with my Charizard) Grabbing for my pokeball, I realise I have NONE on me. WHAT THE HELL?? Where did all my pokemon go? I spent ages training them up, the battles we had to beat the gym leaders........... Ah, yes. This is a dream. My pokemon are safe with Professor Oak at the moment in his lab.
Knowing I cannot go out into the grass I decide to look for the girl and her blue blob. While looking around town, I see this odd guy with red hair. (Cool look bro! >.> ) and when I ask him if he is seeing anything interesting, he pushes me away and hurries back to the window. Who the hell is this rude lad, Gary was rude but this guy is something lower than Garry. I decide to give him a piece of my mind, but he just shoves me back yet again. Ugh. My body is so weak in this world. Realising that this is my dream, I try to dream up a massive sword to slice this chump in half, but nothing happens. Susan (The girl who dragged me back into town) Asked if I was ok. It turns out my face was red and that I looked like I was constipated. Slightly embarresd I decide to take an alternate approach.
I decide to go straight into the house where the guy seemed to be perving on this old man. (Eww, whatever floats your boat..) As soon as I enter, the man said he had been waiting for me. He asked If I knew about his research. I have no idea who this guy is so I ask him to explain. He starts to yabber on about how pokemon are now carried in their pokeballs, yabba yabba yabba. I perk up at the mention of Lyra and a Marill (That has got to be the girl and the blue blob I saw earlier!) He then tells me he will give me a pokemon! Before he proceeds to give me a pokemon he gets a email from Mr. Pokemon (How original. I did not think I was this mentally retarded.) He asks for me to go and see what he has discovered, and now after some more yabbering he lets me pick a pokemon.
Excitiedly I look at the pokemon on offer, and to my surprise Charmander, Bulbasaur and Squirlte are nowhere to be seen. Instead my mind has created a whole new set of starters. Daym, Prof. Oak will love this. Not knowing what to call them, Prof. Elm tell me that the blue water pokemon is Totodile, the green grass one is Chickorita, the blue backed thing with fire coming out of it (Charmander rip off) is Cyndaquill. I decide to take the fire version as it looks like someone put a candle near it while it farted. On impulse I decide to call it Farted. (Might as well have as much humour as I can here! ) Prof. Elm tells me Mr. Pokemons house is a little north of Cherrygrove city.
As I start to exit the building, some guy in a lab coat gives me some potions. I guess I could use them, so I thank the aide adn walk out. As soon as I walk out, the girl and her blob are there! She gets all excited that I picked a cyndaquil. I asked her if her name was Lyra, she just laughs like it was some kind of joke and calls me silly. (I guess that is Lyra then, and the blue blob must be marill) I decide to tell my "Mum" that I was going on a trip to see this Mr. Pokemon. She then gives me something called a pokegear that can make phone calls. I guess this could be kinda cool. I can get peoples numbers and prank call them xD. This dream could be pretty funny.
I decide to check if there was anything of importance in my room, but alas, it was empty. Testing the bed to see how it compared to my real one and it felt nice and soft. Pulling the duvet over, I become so relaxed and sleepy and just fall asleep................