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EVERYONE: - Ongoing The Legends Keeper

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Well if you still haven't found out who I am, I'm Dark Tyranitar.
Name sounds familiar? I'm the guy who makes all of those Fanfictions about legendaries. Now here's a trainer story for a change...even though but its part Legedary Fanfiction.

Enjoy!

The Legends Keeper

Chapter 1
A trainer with a strong wills to prevail will always prevail. This is what our hero’s philosophy. A young boy dressed in dark clothing and a hat walked with bruises in his tattered shoes. Toshin walked awkwardly through the moist tall grass to Professor Elm’s Laboratory. Today is the day he is going to have his first Pokemon. He sighed thinking how he can become the greatest trainer one day and be at least remembered. He finally reached New Bark Town stumbling and was half asleep. With a last breath of air, he fainted.

The next morning, he found himself sleeping in a bed. He stood up and looked around the room. It was fragrant with flowers. He then regained to his senses and was trying to remember how he eventually got here.

“You’re awake I see,” Said a woman’s voice standing in front of the door. “My daughter, Lyn, found you outside and oh my! You were dirty and badly bruised.”

“I came from Viridian City…” Toshin said Solemnly.

“Well that is a long place to go! Where you even bothered by hunger or cold?” the woman asked.

“No…I come here as a new trainer.” He replied in a slow and lax voice.

“My, were your parents even worried? Look at you! You have scratches and bruises all over you and you looks so thin!”

“No need to worry,” said Toshin “I’ll be just fine.” He said as he jumped of the bed. He noticed that his wounds are healed.

“Thank you…” he said

“Thank my daughter. She found you in the streets.” Said the woman

“By the way, you haven’t introduced yourself.” Said another voice. It was a much more younger and fresh voice. A girl about Toshin’s age appeared behind her mother’s back.

“Oh, My name is Toshin”

“Nice to meet you Toshin, I’m Lyn,” she said as she giggled. “I’m the one who found you.” She then smiled.

“Lyn is getting her Pokemon too at Elm’s Laboratory today.” Said Lyn’s Mother

“I’ll be happy to show you there,” Lyn said as she bowed.

“Thanks, but I think I should be going on my own…”

“Nonsense, It wouldn’t hurt if you two would be together.”

“Thank you but…” Toshin was suddenly interrupted when Lyn pulled his arm.

“Come on! It’ll be a few blocks away!” she said as they ran out of the house.

To be continued...
 
Interesting. A bit short, I wonder why it was stopped there? It's like an incomplete thought. I know that you're better at this than me, though. I tried to write a story like this and failed because even though I wrote many chapters, I don't take the time to go through several drafts, but I don't want to make it into a big writing assignment, I just want to have fun. I don't want to stop writing it since I got so far with it. Sorry, I'm just having problems right now. Never mind me, I go on and on. Anyway, I await the next one.
 
Part 1
“So you came all the way here from Kanto?” Asked Lyn as they walked down the street “Aren’t your parents worried when you don’t even have the equipment to survive?”

“My parents are dead,” Toshin sighed, “The only relatives I have are my two cousins and a grandfather who lives around in Jhoto.”

“I’m so sorry,” said Lyn as they arrived at the front of the Laboratory. “This is it!” she said with a smile.

“Out of my way!” yelled another person coming behind.

Toshin and Lyn looked back and saw a boy their age with a blue jacket and blue pants.

“Excuse me, but that’s very rude.” Said Lyn as she faced the boy.

“Back of girl,” said the boy insolently “I’m picking my Pokemon!”

“You’re not the only one!” replied Lyn

“Well then, I’m going first!” he then ran into the laboratory never minding who he bumped.

“That was rude,” said Lyn to Toshin “He didn’t even apologize or introduce himself.”
_

“Sorry, but we have to wait for the other trainers,” said Professor Elm at the young boy.

“I want to pick my Pokemon now!” he yelled.

“It’s no use being rude,” said Toshin as he stepped into the room “It will just lead you into trouble.”

“Ah, here there are now,” Said Elm with a smile “Now please choose your Pokemon wisely” he said opening a metallic container with three Pokeballs.

The boy walked closely and picked up a Pokeball. Then Toshin moved forward, then Lyn.

“Now, let us see you Pokemon,” said Elm

Toshin held out his Pokeball and out came a Chikorita. Lyn held out hers and a Totodile came out.

“Perfect,” said Elm “Now you can start on your journey!”
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Outside, Toshin and Lyn’s Pokemon were following them as they strolled towards Lyn’s home until they met the same boy that they saw at Elm’s Laboratory.

“Hey you!” he pointed to Toshin “How about a battle”

“You haven’t introduced yourself yet!” yelled Lyn “You are very rude to run at us at the lab!”

“Shut up girl!” Yelled the boy “I’m not talking to you.”

“If you may please, answer her question” said Toshin

“Fine!” said the boy as he walked towards them “The name’s Eliwood”

Lyn giggled a bit

“What’s so funny?” yelled Eliwood “I bet one of you have heard a name like that once!”

“I’m sorry, but no.” replied Toshin “But my name is Toshin”

“Hah! Freaky name!” said he laughing a bit

“Before you laugh at other’s names why don’t you know your name first?” yelled Lyn

“And what might be your name?” asked Eliwood with an insolent tone.

“Just call me Lyn.” She replied quickly

“So are we going to battle?” he asked Toshin

Toshin called his Chikorita and was ready for battle.

“Fine by me! Go! Cyndaquil!” he then threw his Pokeball and out came Cyndaquil.

“Quill!” yelled his Pokemon as flames erupted from its back.

“Pretty cool huh?” said Eliwood folding his arms.

“Chikorita! Double team!” Chikorita multiplied into dozens of Chikoritas and shocked Cyndaquil.

“Hey! I wasn’t ready yet! Cyndaquil use smokescreen!” Cyndaquil sent out a burst of smoke that covered the whole field.

“Chikorita…sense it…” Toshin whispered

A loud crack of whips was heard and as the smoke cleared, Chikorita was standing in front of the fainted Cyndaquil.

“What did you do?” yelled Eliwood as he hurriedly picked up Cyndaquil.

“I have no intentions of fighting against you that’s why I ended this battle as quickly and as possible.” Toshin said closing his eyes.

“Get away from me freak!” Eliwood said as he ran away.

Lyn was standing there dazed with her Totodile with an opened jaw.

“How did you do that?” she asked Toshin.

“I don’t know yet…but I’ll learn,” said Toshin as he patted his Chikorita.

To be continued
 
Fascinating. This kinda confuses me, but I'm certain that it will be cleared up.
 
Thanks for replying ^_^ it will all soon clear up in the next couple of chapters...
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Part 2

“Bye Mom!” said Lyn as she waved her arm in the air.

“Take care Lyn! I’m rooting for you!” her mother replied.

Lyn then turned to Toshin.

“Do you think we’ll meet that Eliwood guy again?” she asked

“Probably,” Toshin replied with his head down. “He won’t quit until he beat me.”

“Why are you always like that?” said Lyn

Toshin then looked at her

“You’re always so serious and think too much of yourself! I didn’t even see you smile one bit!”

“My life is just hard and cruel,” Toshin replied in a solemn voice. “You won’t understand how much in my life I have to endure.”

“Stop using big words!” Lyn said

“Well, well,” said a familiar voice behind them.

Toshin and Lyn looked behind and saw Eliwood standing in front of them.

“I don’t know how you beat me last time,” he said pointing at Toshin “But I swear to bring you down this time!”

“If you are challenging me to a battle, please do it quickly.” Toshin said as he grabbed his Pokeball.

“Go Cyndaquil!” Eliwood yelled

“C’mon out Chikorita!”

“Cyndaquil, use Tackle!”

“Chikorita, hold it down with Vine Whip!”

Cyndaquil lunged forward and jumped toward Chikorita. But Chikorita sent out vines and stopped Cyndaquil from colliding.

“Cyndaquil! Use Ember!”

“Chikorita, throw Cyndaquil away!”

Before Cyndaquil can send out a wave of fire, the vines that were holding it threw him back.

“Chikorita, use your Tackle!”

Before Eliwood can hesitate, Chikorita charged toward Cyndaquil and rammed it so hard that Cyndaquil was sent flying.

“Cyndaquil, you know what to do!” said Eliwood

Cyndaquil balanced itself and landed on its foot.

“Chikorita, Tackle once more!”

“Cyndaquil, dodge it!”

Chikorita sprinted forward and tried to ram Cyndaquil but missed when Cyndaquil jumped into the air.

“Use Ember, Cyndaquil!

Cyndaquil sent out a wave of fire but missed Chikorita when it rolled away.

“Use Vine Whip again, Chikorita!”

As Cyndaquil landed, Chikorita grabbed Cyndaquil with its vines and slammed it hard into the ground.

“Finish this with Tackle!” Toshin yelled

Chikorita rammed Cyndaquil and sent it flying. It landed on the ground, fainted.

“Cyndaquil No!” Yelled Eliwood as he picked it up.

“I’m sorry, but you need to trust your Pokemon and your heart rather than your ego.” Said Toshin as he sat down with Eliwood. “That’s what your friends are for.” He said as he smiled.

Lyn glanced at Toshin and saw he smile for the first time. Eliwood then stood up and returned his Cyndaquil.

“I’m sorry,” he said as he lowered his head. “You thought me a lot from that battle.”

“Your Welcome,” said Toshin as he reached out his arm.

Eliwood then grasped his arm and shook it. They then both smiled and looked at Lyn who was also grinned.

“Looks like we have a new friend,” said Toshin.

To be continued...
 
That was certainly unexpected. These chapters are really short. How long were these on whatever you use as a word processor?
 
Ahh, making a friend out of an enemy. So what's to happen to our upstart trainers now? Hopefully something super crazy. Good luck devising a plot twist or three. ^_^

<-- weird lack-of-sleep mood
 
I just apologize for the short chapters because I try to slow down before writer's block overcomes me like the last time I wrote a fanfic. That's why the parts are very short. As for the plot, its preety much stereo type in the beggining but I promise that its not a stupid stereo type made up by a jerk that sits on his computer all day doing nothing.

Thanks for the comments by the way. ^_^ (even though they are a bit negative O.o)
 
That's ok. I try to deviate from stereotypes, too, but I have no idea what the stereotype is, unless it's the anime. The only arguement I have is that Johto has been done over and over. If that is what this is about, it would have to have a really fascinating twist to make it interesting. I'm one to talk, though. I have a trainer fic with appearances by legends, only it's set in Hoenn. I don't really know if anyone finds it good or not, they keep confusing me, but nonetheless, I continue. I've had a few people tell me it's good.
 
Okay, I'll try my best to lengthen it a bit...This reached 5 pages in my word processor...
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Part 3
So now, our heroes, Toshin, Lyn and Eliwood are walking near Violet City, their first destination.

“So Toshin, are you going to collect badges?” asked Lyn

“Sorry, but I have to attend something else around Violet City,” he said

“That’s odd,” said Eliwood “How come a trainer like you won’t collect badges?”

“I have different goals…very different.” He whispered as he looked at the sky.
_
At the Pokemon Center in Violet City, trainers were gathered around and were talking about the mysterious disappearance of the gym leader.

“You hear?” said a trainer “Falkner didn’t return after investigating in the Ruins of Alph.”

“Yeah and they say that mysterious Pokemon abducted him…”

The hubbub caught Eliwood’s attention and approached the group.

“Excuse me,” he said as he cleared his throat “If your talking about my brother, this better be good!” he said gripping his fist.

“You’re his brother?” said one trainer “I don’t see the resemblance except the color of your hair.”

“Just shut up, okay?” Eliwood said, “My brother will just be fine and he’s not…” Eliwood was suddenly interrupted when an officer enterer the Pokemon Center.

“The Gym Leader is missing!” the officer said.
_
The Ruins of Alph were full of people searching for Falkner. They searched the whole area trying to find a clue or a single print to where Falkner is.

Eliwood was there too, joining the search for his brother.

“I didn’t know you were his brother,” said Lyn

“I’m always at his shadow and never as popular as him.” Eliwood replied searching around the bushes.

Toshin was examining the walls with bizarre writings.

“What’ya got there, Toshin?” asked Lyn examining the cryptic writing too.

“There must be something not right in here…” Toshin said as he felt the carved writings. “Something about a sacrifice to bring back the Great One.” Toshin narrowed his eyes viewing the wall.

“Sacrifice?” said Eliwood out loudly “What do you mean by that?”

“Something has to sacrifice someone to summon the Great One.” Repeated Toshin as he felt through the cracks in the wall.

“It doesn’t make sense doesn’t it?” asked Lyn as she walked back to Eliwood.

“Doesn’t make sense to me,” said Toshin wearily “But I believe this has something to do with your brother…”

“What do you mean by that, Toshin?” asked Eliwood as he awkwardly ran next to him.

He examined the walls and to him, it made no sense at all. The letters seem to have eyes that stared on forever without blinking. He looked at Toshin.

“How can a guy like him understand all this?” he thought to himself.

“Come on, it’s getting dark.” Toshin said as he began to walk away.

Part 4

“Why do we sleep at the Pokemon Center when we can sleep at Eliwood’s house?” Lyn murmured to Toshin.

“It’s pretty embarrassing to bring a bunch of freeloaders you know,” Said Toshin

“Are you calling me a freeloader?” Yelled Lyn.

“You guys are welcome to my home anytime!” Said Eliwood happily.

“That’s the signal,” whispered Toshin to Lyn’s ear.
_
Later on, at the Violet Mansion, Lyn was wandering around her room looking at beautiful painted walls when she noticed something odd in the bookcase. A thick book inscribed with ancient letterings similar to the ones at the ruins. She opened the book and looked at the mysterious patterns that we’re moving at a fast rate.

“This looks odd,” she thought as she walked out from the doorway.

At once, the mysterious patterns ceased their movements and returned normal. She then notices this and goes back into her room. The book seams to react whenever she’s inside the room.

She quickly went of and tried to find Toshin and Eliwood. When she found them, in their rooms, she dragged them back into her room and pointed at the book.

Toshin looked oddly at the book and seem to understand every word that appears inside.

“Your brother is in danger,” he said quickly

“What do you mean?” asked Eliwood.

“We have no time to loose, this room must be connected to the ruins. There must be a secret passage.” Said Toshin ignoring Eliwood’s question.

“Where did you found this book anyway?” Eliwood asked Lyn.

Lyn then pointed to the bookcase. Toshin examined the bookcase and its sides.

“There seems to be no trace of an entrance of some sort,” he said. He then glanced at his watch and glanced at the book once more.

“Right,” he said as he started pushing the bookcase aside.

“C’mon, help me here.” He said to the other two.

They all pushed the bookcase with all their might and it seemed to move. At last, the entrance was now enough for them to enter.

“You two go first,” Toshin said “I’ll be right behind.” He then pointed at a staircase leading down a dark tunnel.

“I don’t know,” trembled Lyn “It looks very scary to me.”

“Just go!” commanded Toshin.

Lyn and Eliwood moved slowly as they descended upon the dank staircase. Toshin followed them with the book on one hand. The book seems to react wildly as it illuminated the tunnel.

“This is now so weird.” Said Lyn as they went deeper and deeper into the tunnel.

Part 5
As they go deeper down in the cold tunnel, the darker it went. The darker, the more the light was emitted from the book. Lyn and Eliwood glanced at the book and saw mysterious Pokemon floating inside it as if the book was a hole into another dimension.

“This is getting creepy,” Said Eliwood “I don’t think I want to hang around here anymore.” He said as he began to turn.

But remembering the darkness that surrounded them, he had no choice but to follow Toshin and Lyn. Toshin seemed to have full concentration on the book as they kept walking. Suddenly, they found themselves in what it seems to be a dome with a circle of rocks in the floor.

“This is odd” shuddered Lyn “Very, very odd.” She said as she examined the rocks.

Toshin went near the walls and touched the rocky surface. The book began to emit more light. Light so bright that the whole dome seems to be filled with its light. Toshin then placed the book in the center of the circled rocks. The book began to turn its pages as if a wind is blowing through it. A loud raucous noise echoed through the tunnel and into the walls of the dome. The group covered their ears as the noise became sharp into a screeching voice. The book then floated and sent out a blinding light throughout the room and then, there was darkness. The book fell to the ground. The noises stopped, the light ceased and they were all gone. Not a trace of them left.

To be continued...
 
That was fantastic. I assume this is where the legend stuff begins. I have only one problem-How in the world did they get to Violet City so fast? It seems like they were instantly transported from New Bark to Violet, and nothing inbetween.
 
I'll place the explanation to that. Some authors have their plots already set. In this case, it's not any regular trainer story. It only appears to be one. I made a much more deeper plot so I excluded some parts that don't tie in with the story. anyway, here is/are the next part(s):
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Part 6
Toshin regained his senses and realized that he passed out after the screeching and the blinding light. He looked around and saw Lyn and Eliwood, motionless as they floated. He then looked around more. The whole place seemed to have changed. The rocky walls changed into deep purple plasma that seems to be unreachable. The plasma pulsated with every beat of his heart.

“Where are we?" Toshin whispered as he floated around. He then reached Lyn and Eliwood and tried to wake them up.

“Are you guys okay?” he asked them as they began to regain consciousness.

“Were are we?” Lyn asked.

“That’s what I’m asking myself.” Eliwood said.

They seemed to be dumbfounded with their surroundings. The deep purple plasma began to pulsate faster.

“What the heck is happening here?” Eliwood said as they floated aimlessly throughout the plasma.

Suddenly, fragments of the plasma seem to separate from the whole thing. They began to take shape in what seems to be letters. Dozens of letter looking Pokemon appeared around them.

“What are these things?” said Lyn in disgust.

“Unowns,” said Toshin “They can manipulate any molecular substance in any dimension. They can also transfer anything to any dimension.” He said.

“Wait a minute,” yelled Eliwood “Are you telling me that these things threw my brother in a different dimension?”

“Not exactly but close,” said Toshin as he pointed at a group of swarmed Unowns.

He floated closer to the swarm and waved his arm on them. The Unowns suddenly turned back into plasma and revealed the lifeless body of the Violet City Gym Leader.

Part 7
“Falkner!” Yelled Eliwood as he floated towards his lifeless body. A swarm of Unowns blocked his way.

“Get off me!” he said as he flailed around the Unowns. The Unowns began to come closer to him. They seem to find interest on this foreign being.

“Eliwood! Don’t get near them!” Toshin Yelled as he dragged Falkner to them.

Falkner was unconscious but his body seems to be pale and dying.

“What’s wrong with him?” said Eliwood as felt his Brother’s cold hands.

“He seems to be in a lost state of mind,” said Toshin “His mind is separated from his body.”

“That can’t be true,” said Lyn hysterically “That’s just impossible. No one lives without their minds!”

“That’s my point,” said Toshin examining a pulse. “This dimension seems to keep the connection of the mind and body intact, but not that strong.”

“Where is he then?” said Eliwood getting impatient.

“He must be still here,” said Toshin as he noticed the Unowns gathering all around them.

They began to multiply in different forms and they began to go closer to the group.

“The Unowns have him,” whispered Toshin “If we find a way to destroy them, they may release his mind.”

“But what do they want it for?” asked Lyn.

“They wanted it to take over the world,” said Toshin as his voice trailed off.

Lyn and Eliwood looked at Toshin in a bewildered manner.

“But how?” Eliwood Replied after a long moment’s pause.

“They need Falkner’s mind to take over a Legendary Pokemon’s mind,” he whispered. He then fell silent.

“Long ago,” he began “A great Legendary Pokemon named Ho-oh ruled this realm of the living. Its wings are said to glow in the different colors of the rainbow. It protected the people of Jhoto against any invading Legendary Pokemon from different regions. One day, after a savage attack from titans of Hoenn, Ho-oh was injured fatally, and even though it was a Legendary, it will die soon without an alignment with humans.”

Toshin stopped and bowed his head. Lyn and Eliwood looked at him with their faces with eager.

“Ho-oh died and turned into ashes. Its ashes were stored in an urn. But that sacred urn was lost and never found again. It is said that Ho-oh can only be resurrected when aligned with a human being willing to give up his life in exchange for his return.”

The group didn’t noticed that Unowns have multiplied into hundreds and are around them everywhere.

“I think we’re in a bit of a bad situation,” said Lyn as they looked around them.

The Unowns began to send Psychic energies around them creating powerful blasts.

“We should get going by now,” Said Eliwood as he took his brother by the collar and floated as fast as he could.

Toshin and Lyn followed him but the Unowns were at their backs sending more psychic blasts at them.

“Where should we go anyway?” asked Eliwood.

“I don’t know,” replied Lyn “Why ask me?”

“Just keep on going straight!” Toshin yelled as the Unowns began to gain fast.

More psychic blasts are being fired at them and Unowns began to appear everywhere.

“This whole place must be made with these guys!” said Lyn “Go Totodile!”

She threw out her Pokeball and out came her Totodile.

“Use water gun!” She commanded. Totodile sent out a blast of water at the Unowns and disabled a few at their tracks.

“Wait up!” Yelled Eliwood as he took out his Pokeball. “Go Cyndaquil! Use your Ember!”

With a fiery blast, Cyndaquil sent out waves of fire to the Unowns. The Unowns seemed to stop but after a split second, they were at it again.

“Aren’t these guys stopping?” Yelled Eliwood.

Toshin then came in front of them and confronted the oncoming Unowns. He held out his hand and suddenly, there was a great flash of light that dazzled with different colors and there was smoke that filled the whole area.

“Go!” Said Toshin as they hurriedly continued their escape.

Out in the distance, they saw a small square opening that grew bigger as they approached it.

“This thing must lead out,” Said Toshin “You guys go first!” he said Pointing to Eliwood and Lyn. “And bring Falkner with you!”

Lyn and Eliwood didn’t pause to hesitate. They jumped into the hole and disappeared. Toshin then looked around making sure that it was clear and jumped into the hole.

Part 8
A bright light filled Toshin’s eyes and the next moment, he found himself lying in the floor of the dome dazed. He stood up and looked around and saw Eliwood carrying the unconscious gym leader by the shoulder. Lyn was standing next to them.

“Are you okay?” Lyn said

“I’m fine,” Toshin said as he dusted himself.

“We got sucked into the book!” Said Eliwood Pointing to the now afloat book.

The book was glowing an odd color and began to vibrate. It then glowed a mysterious light that softly filled the room.

“What’s happening?” Said Lyn as she stepped near Toshin.

A loud burst of noise and colors came from the book and, like water, filled the whole dome. It was the same plasma that was inside the book that engulfed them. But now, it was clear and clean without any dark colors. Toshin felt a surge of pain in his lungs and looked at the group. They too, were feeling the pain. Lyn fell into her knees while Eliwood struggled to stand upright. Toshin felt light headed and the surroundings began to swirl. He felt his body failing and numb as he blacked out.
_
Toshin felt a surge of energy go through him. He opened his eyes slowly and looked around. The substance that he saw earlier still engulfed them. He looked at the unconscious Lyn and Eliwood and besides them, was Falkner, still unconscious. He noticed that they were as if in water where they’re hair floated but they were never wet. He tried to go closer but his feet were so heavy as if they were cemented to the ground. He then realized that his whole body was paralyzed and he can’t move an inch. He tried to speak but no words came out, only small bubbles came from his mouth.

“What’s happening? How come I can’t seem to do anything.” He thought to himself.

He then noticed Unowns being formed all around him. He watched in terror as they multiplied and approached him.

“You…” he felt a faint small whisper running through his ear. “Chosen boy…” said the voice again. He felt pressure moving around him as the cold eyes of the Unowns glared at him. He tried to close his eyes but was unable to.

“Chosen…to…” Said the voice again.

Toshin’s mind raced as he thought what it meant. He didn’t understand the whispers.

“Are the Unowns talking to me?” he thought as he looked back at the eyes of the Unowns.

“Chosen…to bring back…the great one,” whispered the voice.

Toshin had no time to hesitate. The Unowns charged into him and covered his whole body. He felt the thousands of beings running through his body inside and out. He felt surges of power running through his fingertips.

“The boy has power,” said the voice in a louder tone. Toshin felt his head spinning as he felt more Unowns running through him. He tried to scream but was unable to. He felt his mind screaming in despair as he felt the Unowns running through his mind. And then suddenly, it was over. The moment went quickly like a split second. Then, he only heard a voice calling out into him.
_
“Toshin,” said a girl’s voice. “Speak to me!”

Toshin felt the words ringing in his head.

“Am I dead?” he thought as his arms wandered into the darkness groping for an object, but his hands were heavy.

“Wake up, Toshin!” said the girl’s voice again.

He opened his eyes and saw Lyn’s face. It was filled with tears and a worried look. He then smiled at her.

Lyn seemed to react to this when she smiled and placed her arms around him. She began to sob and shed tears of joy.

“Oh Toshin, I thought you were dead.” She said as she hugged him tightly.

“Why do you worry of me when we haven’t known each other since a few days ago?” Toshin said weakly as he smiled. He looked beyond Lyn’s shoulder and saw Eliwood smiling and Falkner standing, his face was no more pale but vibrant and full of color. They seemed to have gone from the dome because trees surrounded them and the sky was decorated by the colors of dawn.

“What a great view to see,” he thought as he gazed at the shades of gray, purple and blue filled the sky. “How I wish I could awaken earlier.”

“Don’t worry about me Lyn,” he whispered to her “I’ll be alright.” He felt her tight embrace loosen and saw her face filled with tears. The sun has risen and its rays reflected on her face. “Thank you.” He said as he closed his eyes and slept.

To be continued...
 
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