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The story takes place in the future after the battle with Primal Dialga in Mystery Dungeon.

Characters- Grovyle, Celebi, Dusknoir, and many others.

Chapter 1 - Peaceful Rest setting: sharpedo bluff.

Grovyle wakes up one morning as the sun rises. Celebi pops in from behind and says "It's good that now we get to see this everyday and no longer fight." Grovyle responds happily "It is all thanks to Tim(a shinx) and Riolu that we can enjoy this life." Dusknoir appears from the wall and says "Grovyle, a client is here to see us. You two are late." The client was a Lucario, whose friends were kidnapped by The Dark Organization and needs help getting them back. Afterwards they met an Espeon named Viseon and thought that he could help them out. Viseon said "At a path of heat and rocks, one that isn't what it appears will harm them unless the light is revived." However, later that night a shadow attacked Viseon and trapped it in a rocky cage guarded by Houndour. The shadow smirked and said "Now it is time to activate Operation Hatred upon this world in order to bring complete darkness and chaos to the world. Now Zorua, go to Treasure Town and spread rumors of us."

The dark fox visited Treasure Town and told the Kecleon Brothers, Duskull, and Electivire that the Dark Organization lives in the heart of Huge Volcano. Zorua thought to itself, "I hope that someone can defeat my mother. I'll probably be killed for thinking that." The Zorua bought 20 reviver seeds before leaving Treasure Town.

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Next Time: Chapter 2 - The Espeonage Begins.

 

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Chapter 2: The Espeonage begins


The poketectives were walking through Treasure Town gathering items. They heard from the shop owners that a black fox like Pokemon knows about the Dark Organzation. The group found out that it was last seen near Huge Volcano. Dusknoir said "I will find the fox alone since all of you are weak to fire moves." Grovyle said "I will find some clues where Lucario last saw its friends. Celebi, you stand guard. Lucario, take a break."

Later at the Huge Volcano, Dusknoir was attacked from behind with a Pursuit attack. It turned around and saw Lucario with an evil smirk on its face. Lucario said "You fools have been tricked by me, Zoroark!" Zoroark threw the bulky Dusknoir into a cage with Viseon and Lucario. Dusknoir angrily said "What is her plan?" A Zorua that just walked in replied "She was possessed by an Evil Sphere. My mom was a nice Pokemon at one point, but began to change when she saw this deep black orb near Temporal Tower." Dusknoir shuddered in fear because that was exactly what had happened to Dialga and muttered "The Dark Orb."

Next time: The Illusion of hope.

 

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Re: The Poketectives of the Future Chapter 3 coming soon

You probably want to make the chapters longer. It took me about two minutes, literally, to read both chapters. Anyways, it definentally has potential.

 

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Re: The Poketectives of the Future Chapter 3 coming soon

Thanks for the criticism, Bidoof.

Chapter 3: The Illusion of Hope

Dusknoir began to pace back and forth and said "The Dark Orb is the aura of evil in a ball form. It is said to possess the holder with an evil power in exchange for their soul. However, there is a way to destroy it. It involves the Liberty Orb found on Victory Peak." Viseon replied agreeingly "The Liberty Orb is said to grant peace to many Pokemon, but it can only be used once every 50 years under the Machoke constellation and it is guarded by a phantom that everyone calls 'Vic'." Dusknoir tried to escape the cage, but the seal tags kept it in.

Meanwhile, Grovyle saw a strange mountain on the way to the Lost Valley. He had decided to rest and watch the sunset over the mountain. That night, Grovyle had strange dream in which Celebi was thrown in a cage filled with bugs.

At that moment, Zoroark had visited Temporal Tower again and beat up Dialga and sealed it in a blue crystal. Then, she decided to seal Palkia in a pink orb after raiding Spacial Rift.


Later that afternoon, Grovyle decided to try to climb the V-shaped mountain in order to gather more clues. While climbing, Grovyle was ambushed by a Lucario and Victini. The Victini angrilly said "You shall not pass unless you can defeat Luca here." Grovyle replied "Sounds fun. Don't hold back."