Dragonfree
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NOTES:
1: I am aware that this fic has an extremely bad title. Don't remind me. I'm just so weird that I can't change things, so it's still named the same thing as it was when it was an extremely bad trainer fic with no plot. Just look past it.
2: You may notice that I said trainer fic, and yes, I know nobody likes trainer fics and yada yada yada, but the trainer fic theme is NOT the main plot, and it DOES have twists all over it so you don't have to leave.
3: It has... LEVELS! *half of potential readers leave* But the way I've implemented them does make sense and stuff. Just wait until Extra II, which will explain it all. I assure you that it's very logical.
4: "Ilcoeth revision" means that this is the I've-Lost-Count-Of-'Em-th revision. That's actually a lie because I have kept very carefully count of them; it's the seventh, and is absolutely exclusive apart from having been posted at Pokémon Dimension Network (where one person replied, so I kinda gave up on that). Read it before sometime? Perhaps a version called UMR? This is totally different. So yeah...
5: Each chapter has its own rating, because they vary very much in their content. Also, it's a detailed rating, not just a PG or G or something. Well, you'll see it in a paragraph or two...
Given that, the fic can finally start.
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RATING
Violence: None, but the whole thing is aftermath of violence.
Gore: A bit. Well... quite a bit.
Sexuality: None at all.
Profanity: None.
Other: Nothing special.
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Prologue
The flaming remains of a town burned sadly in the sharp wind. On the singed ground lay bodies.
Humans, mostly. The plant-less soil was littered with them. Dry blood colored it dark red. Most of them were pretty much in one piece; a few were still weakly breathing although they would certainly never wake up again without medical aid.
There were also several virtually torn apart corpses. They were not of humans. It was like a supernatural being had swept past with the sole intention of killing those but its mere presence had made everything else drop dead too.
The mutilated ones were powerful creatures known as Legendary Pokémon. There were twelve or so dead Legendary Pokémon in these former streets in total – although admittedly, only two of them were not in bloody bits with their guts spread around.
Both had somewhat catlike shapes. One had blood-stained whitish-pink fur; it was rather simple-looking, with stubs for ears, small front paws but large, rabbit-like back legs, and a long, thin tail ending in an oval shape.
The other one looked a bit similar to the pink one, but a lot larger; it was whitish gray with a deep violet, muscular tail; it narrowed towards the similar oval on the tail end. The ears were smaller in comparison to the head and more pointed than the pink one’s. The overall shape of the body was more human; it had long, bony arms with three ball-like fingers although the legs were more like a kangaroo’s. It had a large, bleeding wound in the middle of its chest.
The pink one stirred. It was still breathing. The life slowly returned to the little body. A leg twitched. Soon enough, its eyes opened.
“Mew?”
The small creature rose up and stared wide-eyed at the destruction.
The Legendary Pokémon levitated a meter or so into the air as its big, innocent-looking sapphire blue eyes fearfully scanned the area.
Then it stopped, kicked the air with both legs and darted towards the place it was staring at.
Terrified, the Legendary looked upon a black, feline-like head. It had likely belonged to a Legendary Pokémon the size of a leopard or so. Two neon green stripes pointed downwards from the top of its head. The same green shade was also on six long spikes which sprouted from the back of its head, three on each side, and on two slash-like markings on either side of the muzzle. The left eye socket was empty; what had been the right eyeball was now merely a torn, bloody mess.
The pink Legend’s disbelieving eyes stared at the severed head in horror.
“Chalenor!” sounded a desperate telepathic scream. But nobody was around to hear it.
1: I am aware that this fic has an extremely bad title. Don't remind me. I'm just so weird that I can't change things, so it's still named the same thing as it was when it was an extremely bad trainer fic with no plot. Just look past it.
2: You may notice that I said trainer fic, and yes, I know nobody likes trainer fics and yada yada yada, but the trainer fic theme is NOT the main plot, and it DOES have twists all over it so you don't have to leave.
3: It has... LEVELS! *half of potential readers leave* But the way I've implemented them does make sense and stuff. Just wait until Extra II, which will explain it all. I assure you that it's very logical.
4: "Ilcoeth revision" means that this is the I've-Lost-Count-Of-'Em-th revision. That's actually a lie because I have kept very carefully count of them; it's the seventh, and is absolutely exclusive apart from having been posted at Pokémon Dimension Network (where one person replied, so I kinda gave up on that). Read it before sometime? Perhaps a version called UMR? This is totally different. So yeah...
5: Each chapter has its own rating, because they vary very much in their content. Also, it's a detailed rating, not just a PG or G or something. Well, you'll see it in a paragraph or two...
Given that, the fic can finally start.
-------
RATING
Violence: None, but the whole thing is aftermath of violence.
Gore: A bit. Well... quite a bit.
Sexuality: None at all.
Profanity: None.
Other: Nothing special.
------
Prologue
The flaming remains of a town burned sadly in the sharp wind. On the singed ground lay bodies.
Humans, mostly. The plant-less soil was littered with them. Dry blood colored it dark red. Most of them were pretty much in one piece; a few were still weakly breathing although they would certainly never wake up again without medical aid.
There were also several virtually torn apart corpses. They were not of humans. It was like a supernatural being had swept past with the sole intention of killing those but its mere presence had made everything else drop dead too.
The mutilated ones were powerful creatures known as Legendary Pokémon. There were twelve or so dead Legendary Pokémon in these former streets in total – although admittedly, only two of them were not in bloody bits with their guts spread around.
Both had somewhat catlike shapes. One had blood-stained whitish-pink fur; it was rather simple-looking, with stubs for ears, small front paws but large, rabbit-like back legs, and a long, thin tail ending in an oval shape.
The other one looked a bit similar to the pink one, but a lot larger; it was whitish gray with a deep violet, muscular tail; it narrowed towards the similar oval on the tail end. The ears were smaller in comparison to the head and more pointed than the pink one’s. The overall shape of the body was more human; it had long, bony arms with three ball-like fingers although the legs were more like a kangaroo’s. It had a large, bleeding wound in the middle of its chest.
The pink one stirred. It was still breathing. The life slowly returned to the little body. A leg twitched. Soon enough, its eyes opened.
“Mew?”
The small creature rose up and stared wide-eyed at the destruction.
The Legendary Pokémon levitated a meter or so into the air as its big, innocent-looking sapphire blue eyes fearfully scanned the area.
Then it stopped, kicked the air with both legs and darted towards the place it was staring at.
Terrified, the Legendary looked upon a black, feline-like head. It had likely belonged to a Legendary Pokémon the size of a leopard or so. Two neon green stripes pointed downwards from the top of its head. The same green shade was also on six long spikes which sprouted from the back of its head, three on each side, and on two slash-like markings on either side of the muzzle. The left eye socket was empty; what had been the right eyeball was now merely a torn, bloody mess.
The pink Legend’s disbelieving eyes stared at the severed head in horror.
“Chalenor!” sounded a desperate telepathic scream. But nobody was around to hear it.
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