So I decided to write another story this time I call it:
The Rebirth Of A Hero
Reviews would be nice please. I need some critics.
This 1st Chapter took me 1-2 hours to wright all up, so Enjoy
Chapter 1: A Hero's end, A New Beginning
It was a nice summer's day - not too hot, and a slight breeze. Most people would have said this was the perfect day, but in a hospital near Celestic Town, this was the worst day to happen to a young Pokémon Trainer. Many people would have recognized this person, if he were not covered in serious burns.
Team Galactic had attacked a Pokémon Center, and soon it was covered in flames. This Pokémon trainer had stayed inside the burning Pokémon Center to try and rescue the Pokémon inside. As soon as the last Pokémon escaped the inferno, the building collapsed and the Pokémon Trainer became trapped inside.
The firefighters managed to bring him out of the building. Now, he was in very critical condition and his chances of survival were slim.
His family and friends all were waiting outside, in the waiting room, all waiting for the doctor to come out. Even the person the Trainer would have least expected was there. Everyone was worried, but the one who was devastated was the Trainer's Pikachu. This Pikachu was the Trainer's first Pokémon, and was the most closest out of all his other Pokémon.
After an hour passed, the doctor finally came out, and he looked extremely exhausted. The Trainer's mother hurried over to the doctor, and frantically asked him, "Will my son be okay? Is there anything you can do? Please tell me!" The doctor looked at all the Trainer's friends, and then looked at his mother, with a saddened face and said, "I'm sorry to say this, but I don't think we can save him. He's covered in third degree burns, not to mention he has many broken bones as well. His chances of living are very slim."
The trainer's mother, who was on the verge of tears, stumbled back into her chair, and began to weep, and the professor who was sitting next to her tried to comfort her. The trainer's Pikachu looked at the doctor in disbelief, trying not to believe that its trainer, who it had spent so much time with, its best friend, was dying.
"Pika pika..." cried Pikachu
A red haired friend of the Trainer picked up the shocked Pikachu and started to comfort it, as she tried not to burst into tears herself. An older boy, who looked to be around 18 with dark tan skin and had eyes that looked like they were closed, tried to comfort the two crying females.
~Meanwhile, in the trainer's hospital room~
It was mostly quiet in this room, the only things you would hear in this room was the small beeps from the hospital's machines and every once in a while a small cough. The room was plain white and dull, just like most hospitals. The Trainer lay in a hospital bed, and around him were machines trying to keep him alive. It was like any patient's room… or was it?
Because right outside the window, was a pink feline-like Pokémon, and it was staring at the trainer. This Pokémon was extremely rare, so rare that some people thought it was a mere legend. This Pokémon's name was Mew.
The Mew looked on at this trainer with pity. This human had tried to save countless others, basically sacrificing his own life for them. This Mew knew that this human had lived an incomplete life, and like the other people who had lived those kind of lives, he would allow them to come back to finish it, but on one condition.
Soon the Trainer would die, the Mew could tell. Then one of three legendaries could talk to them about this. These three legendaries were Arceus, Giratina, And Mew itself. Sometimes, when they were busy, the other legendaries would take on this job. In this case, it was Mew's turn. Mew knew that the time was coming very soon.
Soon the trainer died, and everyone started to mourn. Everyone thought that this was the end of the Pokémon Trainer's life. However, this was just the beginning of an adventure for the Pokémon Trainer whose name was Ash Ketchum. This adventure will give Ash a new look on the Pokémon world, as he makes new friends, fights off Team Galatic, and tries to find his old friends.
The Rebirth Of A Hero
Reviews would be nice please. I need some critics.
This 1st Chapter took me 1-2 hours to wright all up, so Enjoy
Chapter 1: A Hero's end, A New Beginning
It was a nice summer's day - not too hot, and a slight breeze. Most people would have said this was the perfect day, but in a hospital near Celestic Town, this was the worst day to happen to a young Pokémon Trainer. Many people would have recognized this person, if he were not covered in serious burns.
Team Galactic had attacked a Pokémon Center, and soon it was covered in flames. This Pokémon trainer had stayed inside the burning Pokémon Center to try and rescue the Pokémon inside. As soon as the last Pokémon escaped the inferno, the building collapsed and the Pokémon Trainer became trapped inside.
The firefighters managed to bring him out of the building. Now, he was in very critical condition and his chances of survival were slim.
His family and friends all were waiting outside, in the waiting room, all waiting for the doctor to come out. Even the person the Trainer would have least expected was there. Everyone was worried, but the one who was devastated was the Trainer's Pikachu. This Pikachu was the Trainer's first Pokémon, and was the most closest out of all his other Pokémon.
After an hour passed, the doctor finally came out, and he looked extremely exhausted. The Trainer's mother hurried over to the doctor, and frantically asked him, "Will my son be okay? Is there anything you can do? Please tell me!" The doctor looked at all the Trainer's friends, and then looked at his mother, with a saddened face and said, "I'm sorry to say this, but I don't think we can save him. He's covered in third degree burns, not to mention he has many broken bones as well. His chances of living are very slim."
The trainer's mother, who was on the verge of tears, stumbled back into her chair, and began to weep, and the professor who was sitting next to her tried to comfort her. The trainer's Pikachu looked at the doctor in disbelief, trying not to believe that its trainer, who it had spent so much time with, its best friend, was dying.
"Pika pika..." cried Pikachu
A red haired friend of the Trainer picked up the shocked Pikachu and started to comfort it, as she tried not to burst into tears herself. An older boy, who looked to be around 18 with dark tan skin and had eyes that looked like they were closed, tried to comfort the two crying females.
~Meanwhile, in the trainer's hospital room~
It was mostly quiet in this room, the only things you would hear in this room was the small beeps from the hospital's machines and every once in a while a small cough. The room was plain white and dull, just like most hospitals. The Trainer lay in a hospital bed, and around him were machines trying to keep him alive. It was like any patient's room… or was it?
Because right outside the window, was a pink feline-like Pokémon, and it was staring at the trainer. This Pokémon was extremely rare, so rare that some people thought it was a mere legend. This Pokémon's name was Mew.
The Mew looked on at this trainer with pity. This human had tried to save countless others, basically sacrificing his own life for them. This Mew knew that this human had lived an incomplete life, and like the other people who had lived those kind of lives, he would allow them to come back to finish it, but on one condition.
Soon the Trainer would die, the Mew could tell. Then one of three legendaries could talk to them about this. These three legendaries were Arceus, Giratina, And Mew itself. Sometimes, when they were busy, the other legendaries would take on this job. In this case, it was Mew's turn. Mew knew that the time was coming very soon.
Soon the trainer died, and everyone started to mourn. Everyone thought that this was the end of the Pokémon Trainer's life. However, this was just the beginning of an adventure for the Pokémon Trainer whose name was Ash Ketchum. This adventure will give Ash a new look on the Pokémon world, as he makes new friends, fights off Team Galatic, and tries to find his old friends.
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