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The story of the tiny Pumpkaboo

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Once upon a time, in a big city far, far away, lived a tiny Pumpkaboo called Pumpkin. It was so minuscule, it was even smaller than a Poké Ball! When it prowled around in grass, it could hide itself completely. One could only notice it when it flashed its colorful lights as brightly as it could and cried out as loudly as it could.

The small Pumpkaboo wanted to make friends. It went to the biggest city park, and tried to talk to other Pokémon and people. But because of how small it was, sadly, no one noticed it. Once, a careless human that was strolling about, almost stepped on it, and did not even realize!

Pumpkin felt discouraged, so it tried to look for advice from its own species, but the other Pumpkaboos did not want to talk to it. “You are too small! You don’t fit in our club! What even are you? You are too small to even be the “small variety”! Come back when you become bigger.”- they said to it, and then went on to ignore it.

As expected, this conversation did not lift Pumpkin’s spirit at all. “Is there something wrong with me?” it thought to itself. “I have no choice, I must change myself!” it decided, and went on a quest to make itself grow.

It decided to spend some time in the sun. Maybe that would help it become bigger? It found a nice, bright spot in the park and sat there, trying its best to imagine itself becoming huge, gargantuan, even bigger than the Prism Tower! Needless to say, it did not work. The only thing that happened was Pumpkin’s skin becoming a little dry from sitting in the direct sun.

Since sunlight did not help, Pumpkin decided to try something else! It gathered all the berries in the park in one huge pile, and ate them all, one by one! Surely that would make it larger! If it can’t become taller than maybe at least it can become wider? As wide as Rust Syndicate’s Office!

It consumed all of the berries, and started to feel a little funny. “Is this what a human would call a belly ache?” Pumpkin mused. Unfortunately, the Pumpkaboo still did not grow even by a single centimeter.

All right. Sunlight did not help, and neither did the berries. What now? Pumpkin remembered that it once overheard some humans talking about “growing through experience”. It wanted to try it out. It was Fall, and everyone was in a mood for spooky fun, so Pumpkin decided to go Trick-or-Treating!

It went all around the city playing pranks! With its powers, it turned a bunch of people and Pokémon into ghosts. This caused all kinds of shenanigans. Those who were turned into ghosts started to go around scaring each other. The streets became filled with goofy ghostly wails and laughter. “Booo! Booo!” the cries echoed in the streets and shopping arcades, and everyone was having fun. The city authorities organized a big event in Dormez Bien Cemetery to give out sweets to all ghost Pokémon in order to appease them.

Pumpkin, however, did not get its candy, because no one noticed it.

No one realized that it was the first to start the tricking either, so no one thanked it for its contributions to the Fall festivities. Another, much larger Pumpkaboo claimed to be the party starter, and everyone believed it. Pumpkin tried to say something, but its quiet voice went unheard in the general commotion. Pumpkin almost got stepped on again.

Hungry, sad and lonely, Pumpkin retreated into the safety of a shadowy back alley. Even after all this effort, it still did not manage to become bigger.

It tried to improve its moves and powers by itself, but it was quite difficult, as it had no one to guide it and no one to practice with. Pumpkin became a little stronger, but still did not grow bigger.

The tiny Pumpkaboo started to lose hope about ever having friends.

Fall passed, and turned into winter. Soon, The Solstice arrived, and afterwards the days started to become longer again. Humans and Pokémon alike were preparing the New Year celebrations.

Pumpkin found a safe spot on a mailbox and sat there to watch the city getting ready. It wished that it could participate in the merriness too, but gave up on it. There city organized a public party which, in theory, was open for everyone to attend, but it would be too crowded to be safe to attend for the tiny Pumpkaboo. There were no spaces designated for small Pokémon, so it could be easily stepped on. And Pumpkin did not want to be stepped on or hurt. Watching from afar was its only option.

Night fell and people gathered either in their own homes or in the Bleu Square. Pumpkin sat on its box silently and listened to the distant laughter and music.

After a while, Pumpkin noticed someone passing by. A very tall human figure.

“Why aren’t they with everyone else?” Pumpkin though to itself, and looked up curiously. The human noticed the movement and leaned towards Pumpkin, as if to see it better. The tiny Pumpkaboo made a surprised and happy sound. Did someone notice it?

The human was very tall and thin, and to Pumpkin, they looked almost like a tree!

“Hello! They call me Sequoia.” said the tall human.

“Pumpk!” Pumpkin said in a conversational tone.

“So you’re Pumpkin?” Sequoia asked, unsure if they understood correctly.

“Pumpk!!!!” the Pumpkaboo confirmed enthusiastically.

“They are going to start the New Year’s light show soon, as it is near midnight already. Do you want to watch it together?”

“PUMPK!!” Pumpkin exclaimed, with tears of happiness gathering in its eyes.

The human carefully extended their hand towards Pumpkin, and the Pumpkaboo sat on it. Then they found a nice spot on the roof of one of the nearby buildings. They could see the entire city from here.

Pumpkin kept crying tears of happiness, it was so relieved to finally have someone notice it.

Sequoia looked at Pumpkin for a while in silence, as if trying to listen to Pumpkin. They shed a tear of their own as well.

“I understand what it’s like, to not fit in anywhere. Literally. Look at how tall I am! I can’t go through most doors! I can’t even buy a galette in peace, because there is always someone there pointing their fingers at me. But there is nothing wrong with being me. I think you are fine just the way you are, too. It’s okay.” they said after a while. Pumpkin stopped crying, and looked at Sequoia, and then at the cityscape. The countdown to midnight was already starting!

10! 9! 8! 7!

“Is it… really okay to just… be me?” Pumpkin thought.

“It’s okay!” said Sequoia.

6! 5! 4! 3! 2! 1!

As the old year came to an end, and the light show celebrating the New Year started, Pumpkin started to shine itself. Something shifted inside it, and then it started to change outwardly! In a final burst of light, it evolved! It became a minuscule Gourgeist.

“Congratulations on your evolution, Pumpkin! And happy New Year. I hope it treats us well.” Sequoia said happily.

After this, Sequoia and Pumpkin became good friends. Sequoia brought a “TM017: Protect” from a friend at the Pokemon Research Lab and taught it to the Gourgeist, so it no longer had to worry about being stepped on. They also designed a floating magnifying glass and gave it to Pumpkin, so it could be easily seen by others, if it wanted to. Pumpkin explained to Sequoia to the best of its ability what it is like to be so tiny, and taught them all it could about hiding.

Sequoia, with Pumpkin’s help and encouragement, also wrote a strongly worded letter to the Lumiose city officials. In their petition they explained the need to adapt the city's infrastructure and planning for Pokémon and humans of all shapes, sizes and types.

Then, the pair went on a journey and experienced many adventures together. But that is a story for another day.
 
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Okay. Time for my Review:
The story, "The Story of the Tiny Pumpkaboo", was a great piece about accepting yourself, no matter how big or small they are. Acceptance of self is very important, and that really shines in the piece. I felt bad for Pumpkaboo, as someone who has been a loner myself. There was a very good ending, and a nice feature to see the bond between Sequoia and Pumpkin grow over time. I would have liked to see Pumpkin be captured by Sequoia at the end so they could go on the journey together in the future.

Nicely done, and it was good to see Pumpkin begin to grow and be proud of itself. This was a great piece. Would like to see a journey story with the tiny pumpkaboo, and later Gourgeist. Perhaps in the future?
 
Hiya, and belated welcome to the Workshop! I'd meant to check out your other story + hopefully still will ("cw: late stage capitalism" [sic] will ALWAYS have my number), but 'tis the season of Roundtable, so to the trick or treat/new year mashups I go!

I like the format of this a lot, and I think you juggle some pretty heavy ideas very naturally via the use of fable--it's all very comical, in a way that I think would really kill in a drawn comic or Pokemon Concierge visual format, but that I think still really works here. The bit of Pumpkin almost being stepped got me every time--ig not in the "lmao" sense, but the light-hearted "oh no". Each bit felt like the perfect length, and the story also felt like it had a really natural conflict/attempted fix/resolution arc. I think that can be really hard in both comedy (balancing your setup/payoff) and moralistic/fable stories (presenting an opportunity for positive growth that feels relevant to both the reader and the protagonist)--all in all, huge props!
“Is there something wrong with me?” it thought to itself. “I have no choice, I must change myself!” it decided, and went on a quest to make itself grow.
I'm admittedly such a sucker for these kinds of questions, and I really like how you resolve things. In a sense, Pumpkin does change, both by evolving and no reaching peace with itself, and I think that strikes a really nice balance--the world is wrong to ask Pumpkin to change its size, but we are often asked to (or simply do) change other parts of ourselves, and I think including both gives the story a nice sense of nuance and greyness that made the ending hit better for me.

I also like that the act of trying to change its body is both what makes Pumpkin realize this is a poor course of action, and also what makes them able to meet Sequioa. This is mostly structural, but I think if the catharsis had just been reached with Pumpkin alone, it would've felt like the story could've just ended by Pumpkin simply declaring "actually i am based" (and would've robbed us of a nice speech).
With its powers, it turned a bunch of people and Pokémon into ghosts.
really minor, and in general I think the fable-ish format works well without a lot of details as you had it, but in this case the lack of description/familiarity with the worldbuilding (and maybe my own internet brainrot vocab?) made me initially read this as "it killed them". I get that Pokemon can be affected by the mechanical move Trick or Treat which may change their type temporarily through ~magic~, but I didn't initially get that humans could also have types ig, so their inclusion kind of threw me for a loop.

This was a lot of fun to read, and I also like how you mashed the two prompts up together! Thank you for sharing.

ps the art was also very pretty! that grass texturing!! :o
 
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Thanks for the warm welcome, and thanks so much for your kind review, @kintsugi ! It really means a lot :D
it killed them". I get that Pokemon can be affected by the mechanical move Trick or Treat which may change their type temporarily through ~magic~, but I didn't initially get that humans could also have types ig, so their inclusion kind of threw me for a loop.
Ooops! Yeah I did not think that it could be read that way haha. I guess I made a little bit of mental shortcut here, my bad :D I will keep this in mind, to make sure to check this tendency of mine! I did mean that everyone, including the humans had their types changed ofc. No murder in this fable :D :D
 
Here's my review of "The Story of the Tiny Pumpkaboo":

First off, this was such an unexpected joy to read! I don't know what I was expecting with this fic, but it surprised me with how sweet and genuine it is. It reads like a children's picture book and I can imagine some parent reading this to their children as a bedtime story.

"Pumpkin almost got stepped on again." I don't know why this line made me laugh and cry at the same time. It was so unexpectedly direct and funny but so sad because poor little Pumpkin is having such a rough time. I feel for it.

As others have stated, this story does a wonderful job about making the point of just being true to yourself and accepting yourself. Yes, it is okay to want to change, but you shouldn't change because you want to feel accepted or seen. It's important to change for yourself, so you can be who you truly are meant to be. Accepting oneself is so important to learn and learning this lesson makes Pumpkin such a relatable character and makes this story so much fun.

Thank you for sharing such a fun, wonderful story with us!
 
As kint said, welcome to the Workshop!!! This was an adorable fic, and I'm glad I stopped by to read it! Pumpkaboo is actually one of my favourite Pokemon, so I felt extra happy to see a story featuring it so prominently! (Cute Pumpkaboo drawing, by the way! It nicely helped to illustrate just how small Pumpkin was.)

Hmm... I think what stood out to me the most is kind of a big concept, but I think it'll make sense: something about your plot and word choice reminds me a little bit of a picture book, and I mean that in a very good way! I could see this as being adapted as an episode in the anime, for instance, or as a picture book of its own. You'd just need (quite) a few extra drawings here and there, lol... it's a short and sweet story, and I think that Pumpkin's new unitement with its partner could lend it well to sequels in the future, if you ever wanted to write any.

I love how this fic takes the reader into Pumpkin's mind so readily! Simple comparisons and similes like 'even bigger than the Prism Tower' or 'as wide as [the] Rust Syndicate’s Office' feel very childlike but sincere, and they really help to show how big Pumpkin's desire to be noticed is. Pumpkin tries so hard in so many ways, and does a lot of things with the utmost hope that it'll grow, but nothing seems to work. I think that its dissapointment is something we can all innately relate to, and it felt honestly poigant, personally.

The tiny Pumpkaboo started to lose hope about ever having friends.
Hungry, sad and lonely, Pumpkin retreated into the safety of a shadowy back alley. Even after all this effort, it still did not manage to become bigger.

I really like how you broke up some of the more impactful sentences into singular (or, at least smaller) lines. It's a technique I adore and make frequent use of in my own writing, and I think it helped to emphasise how alone Pumpkin felt.

I'm happy that this story had a happy ending, too. Pumpkin deserved it! Having Pumpkin befriend a human who similarly felt like an outcast was a smart idea, and Sequoia is a very fitting name! Watching fireworks together to ring in the New Year (new changes! new relationships!!) is a really nice mental image, and the evolution!! I hope that even though Pumpkin didn't grow to be big in size, its evolution (though not their goal!) brought itself some comfort -- it worked very hard, after all.

It's the sort of situation where comparisons to others tend to not make us happy at all, but self-acceptance can be a very tough task. It's difficult to know what to turn to when all one's attempts go awry... but, sometimes, the kind words of another person can make all the difference. I think it's a really beautiful (and true!) sentiment, right? And with that in mind... I like how Pumpkin helped Sequoia, and vice versa -- I hope they have many happy travels together (and it seems as though they did!)

You might have more range than this, and if you do that is lovely, but I think I'd like to see more short yet sweet stories like this from time to time. I feel like you probably had a lot of fun writing it, at least I hope you did! Thank you for sharing, and for the smile I had while reading this. :bulbaWave:
 
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Thanks so much reading, for the kind review and the encouragment!
I am very glad this small story is so well received :D
I did have thoughts of making a couple more illustrations for this actually, but... Got distracted drawing other things :D
If I ever have ideas and write similar stories, I will make sure to post them here then! It was quite a spontaneous creation.
 
Very sweet and charming. I got some good chuckles out of the humor:
The only thing that happened was Pumpkin’s skin becoming a little dry from sitting in the direct sun.
It consumed all of the berries, and started to feel a little funny. “Is this what a human would call a belly ache?” Pumpkin mused.
I like how the story incorporated the event theming, where we see the jack-o-lantern Pokémon species get upstaged on its own day, only to find its resolution on a subsequent holiday that represents a fresh start; it's a fun twist for this style of story. I also enjoyed how it ties into LZA's plot point about equitable development, with the stakeholders representative of humans and Pokémon petitioning the municipal government about more specific concerns that affect them personally, which works well to broaden that angle of the narrative.

Beyond that, it's nice to read a story like this where the moral isn't "actually your freakishness makes you more useful for labor." I'm glad you didn't go for something where they need to send Pumpkin into a tiny space to save the day or anything like that and just gave the little monster accommodations to enjoy itself.
 
Thanks so much for reading and the kind review! :bulbaLove:
the moral isn't "actually your freakishness makes you more useful for labor."
Yeah I hate this narrative IRL, so I am doing my part in creating different ones haha :D I am glad this landed well.
 
Onto the next part of the table~ This one looks interesting.

- I like the fairytale opening. Once upon a time! I love it!
- I wonder who gave it that name? I mean its parents who there are no sign of, but I always ask myself that when wild Pokemon have names.
- When it flashes AND when it cries loud? Shame for the blind and deaf then, because it requires both apparently. Unless you change that.
- Seems to be a pointless comma when the careless human almost steps on Pumpkin.
- I idly have to wonder how Alpha Pumpkaboo get received in his world of irregular size hating amongst the species.
- Typo, should certainly be the Rust Syndicate's office. Also I guess that answers where and when this is set.
- They'd call it a tummy ache, but I like it being slightly wrong.
- A literal move based use of the Trick-Or-Treat theme? Interesting. I suppose this could also be a City Secret. Not technically a New Year though.
- I guess in this case the move drives them to a sort of madness.
- Didn't flash and cry, so no treats for it.
- Probably proves parental abandonment. It has a name and no one to turn to, so only thing I can think of.
- Oh there it is the timeskip and the swish. Good stuf.
- It goes from wishing it could participate to giving up in the same sentence. Mmm, no. I'd say that sentence could be rewritten. Even if it is a bit of justified mood swinging, it could use a lot more than just that.
- At this moment, I have to wonder. There's other tiny Pokemon around that are almost just as small. Including Flabebe which are absolutely native and their main body is definitely smaller than a Poke Ball. Did it like, never ever run into one of these? I guess they're more vibrant so they would be noticed better, but I'd like to think they'd have noticed their fellow mini-mon.
- Hm, I must've not encountered Sequoia yet. I'm assuming their understanding Pokemon is canon. I should really get back on ZA.
- Nice little speech there.
- ...oh, when I looked them up, I guess Sequoia is original. Which is fine! I guess there's more than one super tall person in the city who doesn't consider a basketball career.
- Well, I guess this doesn't technically fit "new me" because the theme is being yourself, not a new you. :^)
- ...okay, famous last words. Happiness evolutioning the trade evolution? Well, not like the latter are easy to handle.
- Shoutouts to TMs! And uh, floating magnifying glasses? Not sure what that's supposed to be.
- I thought the evolution would make it tall enough to be noticed: after all, most double or more in size.
- Also hm, I guess Sequoia didn't just catch Pumpkin. Until maybe later?
- Well, there's no explicit happily ever after to go with the start of the fic, but "story for another day" is in line with it.

Hey, a cute little fluffy fic, and good job working in all three themes in a coherent way! Took probably the most straightforward approach to it, but it works well. I really don't have much to say about it that hasn't already been covered in my point by point. Nice job on this, keep up the good work~
 
Forgive me if I'm wrong, since I haven't looked at such forms of narrative in a long time, but I take it the goal was to make something out of a fairy tale or picture book. "The story of the tiny Pumpkaboo" is very much a success at this, but this story is also a lot longer than a picture book, and I found myself getting annoyed at the drawn out cadence of a picture book. This is probably why I don't read picture books. I wouldn't take much of what I'm about to say seriously because of this bias. I'm also going to use orange text for things that bug me personally but I think are valid ways to take the story. You should ignore those more.

But because of how small it was, sadly, no one noticed it.
It would be better to remove the word “sadly” here. The rest of paragraph already set the stakes here, and “sadly” isn’t evoking any extra imagery.

Once, a careless human that was strolling about, almost stepped on it, and did not even realize!
The comma between “about” and “almost” isn’t necessary.

As expected, this conversation did not lift Pumpkin’s spirit at all.
Who is thinking of “as expected” here? I think this is meant to be the narrator, but if so the this sentence is being more mean spirited than the tone of the rest of the story. But if Pumpkin is thinking this, then it works very well to indicate the character’s hopelessness. Maybe I would go with “As Pumpkin expected…” if the latter meaning is intended.

Needless to say, it did not work. The only thing that happened was Pumpkin’s skin becoming a little dry from sitting in the direct sun.
This feels more wordy than it needs to be. I think the “Needless to say” portion is the first thing to cut from it.

“There city organized a public party which, in theory, was open for everyone to attend…”
You wanted to say “the”, not “there”.

I thought it was weird to have the longest of Pumpkin's attempts to be noticed, the Trick or Treat one, be the second to last of the attempts. And it was even weirder for that to be followed by single paragraph for the "practice powers" attempt. It's possible there's a point to this order, in that Pumpkin's deteriorating confidence and energy is being reflected by mostly skipping a narrative beat, and/or maybe its part of the fairy tale/picture book style. I personally think its weird for that half of the story to end so underwhelmingly. I would pick a different one of the attempts to end off that half of the story.

Pokémon is a kitchen sink fantasy franchise, but introducing a floating magnifying glass really did throw me for a loop. I don't know why, but I think it was because it seemed too cartoony. Additionally, it calls attention to what Pumpkin's exact size needs to be for the solution to be a magnifying glass, and my very unchildish scrutiny meant I was following that road when it would be more correct given the story's style to ignore it. (Just "smaller than a Poké Ball" shouldn't call for a magnifying glass unless people need to read Pumpkin's facial expressions, so I was assuming more extreme sizes.) Normally, "out of placeness" can be counteracted with more buildup, but that would bog the story down in a way that doesn't fit the fairy tale style.


One could only notice it when it flashed its colorful lights as brightly as it could and cried out as loudly as it could.
Other cadence thing. I really wanted this sentence to be shorter somehow.
 
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