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Hello everyone. I come to you with a new fanfic based on Fushigiboshi no Futago Hime. If you've been reading my other work I have to apologize. I've pulled it up by the roots, thrown it on a pile of kindling, doused it with gasoline, took a lit match to it and threw in a couple sticks of dynamite for good measure. Okay, I abandoned it, but I thought this imagery was more dramatic.
There are many reasons why I decided to discontinue it. I found myself unhappy with the direction it was going in and found that decisions I had already made in it were not to my liking. I'll spare you the gory details.
As I said, I come to you with a new story that I hope you will all like. It's got a similar setup and the same characters but I've completely rewritten the plot and reorganized my thoughts. This is actually an extrapolation of one of my ideas for the Dungeons and Starships contests.
Also, if you're curious (and can read Japanese) I suggest checking out the original concept by BIRTHDAY to learn more about the series. Much of my material came from here including some that was never showcased in the anime.
I'll try to post once a week on Thursday mornings. Look here for updates.
24/09/2008: Prologue posted
02/10/2008: Chapter 1 posted
09/10/2008: Chapter 2 posted
16/10/2008: Got rid of the book thing. They'd wind up being only a few chapters each.
16/10/2008: Chapter 3 posted
23/10/2008: Chapter 4 posted
30/10/2008: Chapter 5 posted
06/11/2008: Chapter 6 posted
20/11/2008: Chapter 7 posted
28/11/2008: Chapter 8 posted
Without further ado, I give you The Weather Makers of the Mysterious Planet: The Legend of Huracan.
Skyline: Can the Mysterious Planet withstand the storm?
Cover Jacket Introduction:
The Mysterious Planet is a hollow world where its people live inside its shell instead of on the surface. Its civilization is divided into seven countries each with a duty to make the interior habitable. It is peaceful and prosperous with a culture built on cooperation and interdependency.
The Mysterious Planet is also a world of myths and legends. Many know the story of Princess Grace of the Sunny Kingdom and how she saved the planet from the ravages of the Black Crystal. Her successors, Princesses Fine and Rein, then cast the vile entity from the Mysterious Planet once and for all.
However, many more legends are out there on the lips of elders and pages of books. Five years after the Black Crystal’s defeat, the Mysterious Planet would find itself facing the most powerful and terrifying legend of all. It would strike deep into its civilization and shake it at its very core.
Once again the fate of the Mysterious Planet will fall in the hands of unlikely heroes. But do they have any hope against a force of nature? More importantly, is this world even ready for them?
Legal Crap: This is a work of fiction. All persons, places, and events are products of the author’s imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, places and events is purely coincidental.
Fushigiboshi no Futagohime is the copyrighted property of BIRTHDAY, NAS, TV Tokyo, BANDAI Networks, NEC Interchannel, Ciao Comics, Hal Filmmaker etc.
Acknowledgments: I’d like to give special thanks for Ledian_X who created the sci-fi contest that gave rise to this idea. As well as Yamato-san as working helping him with his projects inspired me to go for this.
Warning:This story is rated PG-13. I contains foul language, violence, and covers topics some might find offensive.
Historian’s Note: This story takes place about five years after the end of the first series.
Based on 『ふしぎ星の ふたご姫』 (The Twin Princesses of the Mysterious Planet):
Concept by BIRTHDAY
Prologue: Beware the Walrus
As an industrialized nation, the Water Drop Kingdom was ruled more by the clock than by the Sun’s Blessing. Even with the darkness of night falling Saginaw City, its capital, was still active. Pale light poured from the windows in the round, white walled and blue onion top roofed buildings and overhead lamps shined down on the canals that crisscrossed one another like streets through the community on the edge of the world.
Rising above it all was the kingdom’s castle, also emitting light from its many windows. Its design was similar to the other buildings only much larger. The structure appeared to be a blend of a tower and a fountain with water spilling over the rim of the central tower’s base into the top moat and then falling into the lower moats before flowing out into the inlet leading to the ocean.
The castle was more than just the residence of the royal family. Housed within its structure was the machine of the Water Drop Kingdom; the device that converted liquid water into clouds for all of the Mysterious Planet. A cloud would periodically form from the distributor on the top of the central tower and expand as it was carried off the wind. The process went along, day or night as the need for the clouds and the life giving rain they carried never slept.
Princess Milro looked up from her canvas through the sliding glass door at the darkness speckled by points of light from the city. She instinctively turned to the alarm clocking sitting on her nightstand. The hands of the analogue face were positioned to show it was nearing a quarter to ten.
It’s getting late, she thought.
She could become so engrossed in her painting that she would lose all track of time. The memory of one time she was painting and when she looked at the clock it was three in the morning came to mind. Fortunately she still had some time make the evening rounds before bed.
She set down her brush and glass palette on the table next to her and stretched as she stood up. She picked up the cloth she had laid over her lap and laid it over the almost completed painting of a lighthouse on a small, rocky island.
She paused to think about her latest work. It was a landscape like many that she had painted before. However, unlike her other paintings she had never seen the subject before. The idea just came to her seemingly out of nowhere. However, that and the last few details could wait for morning.
She turned to a full body mirror between her bed and the sliding glass door. A dainty girl in her mid teens wearing a long-sleeved, robin egg blue bodice and full length, white bell skirt decorated with blue raindrops looked back to her. She appeared human aside from the beige, beaver like ears nestled in her light brown hair in front of a small, blue, curled raindrop shaped hat perched elegantly on her head. She straightened her clothes as they had become a little askew from her sitting for so long.
A knock came at the door. Milro immediately thought it was her younger brother wanting a story before bed.
“Come in,” she replied in her gentle voice as she started looking through the books on a shelf above the head of her bed.
The door slid open but instead of her younger brother a diminutive, anthropomorphic walrus dressed in a yellow tunic and tinted goggles stepped in. The small pinniped pulled out a small device with a large parabolic dish on the front as he crept quietly towards the unsuspecting princess. Milro pulled out a book bound in a red leather cover filled with fairytales.
“What do you want to hear tonight Nalro?” Milro asked as she turned around.
She looked down and jumped back in shock. She dropped her book when she saw the walrus standing in front of her. “Who are you?” she asked.
The walrus said nothing in response. He instead pointed the device at her and squeezed its clumsy trigger. The device loosed a red energy that struck and spread over Milro.
Milro tried to move away but her body wouldn’t budge. She saw that her room was expanding…or…more specifically, she was growing smaller. She urged her body to move but it wouldn’t. She could only watch helplessly as the world around her took on giant proportions. The device finally ceased, leaving her less than a dozen centimeters tall.
Her body came under her control again. She stepped back and looked around. Her bed was now a mesa of blue cloth. She backed into the wooden leg of her easel up to the painting she was just working on now high above her. Even the book she had been holding was huge compared to her.
Her attention turned to the walrus that now towered over her. He looked down at her. His mouth formed into a wide, toothy grin behind his stubby tusks and although his eyes were hidden by his goggles they no doubt had lit up. Before they could do anything else a voice shouting caught their attention.
“Princess Milro-sama,” the voice called out.
Chief Engineer Spigot ran into the doorway and rested against the jam. The anthropomorphic beaver was visibly winded, panting and gasping as he tried to catch his breath. His blue best was wrinkled and sat askew on his small, stocky frame as well as the blue visor on his head.
“Dammit,” he gasped, “I’m too late.”
The Walrus spun around to him. He pointed the device towards him but the engineer tackled him and smacked the machine from his hand. The two rolled over and threw each other off.
“Mr. Spigot,” Milro panicked, “what’s happening?”
“There’s no time to explain,” Spigot said as he kicked the Walrus in the gut. “You have to get out of here now.”
The Walrus was stunned by the blow but rolled back up onto his flippers. He grabbed Spigot by his collar and threw his weight into them. Spigot’s back landed on the device that shattered under their combined wait.
A sharp pain shot through Spigot’s body as his back bent over the machine. He gave a groan as he kicked off his attacker. He rolled over onto his hands and knees and grabbed his back, still throbbing. The Walrus curled his flipper and punched him in the face as he tried to get to his feet.
Spigot was stunned for a second but jumped to his feet. He grabbed the Walrus from behind and held him in a tight headlock as the pinniped flailed to get free. He looked back to Milro still standing there, looking on in bewilderment.
“I said GO!” he shouted.
Milro was taken aback by his outburst. She paused for a second but she nodded and ran for the open door. Spigot grabbed the Walrus’ head and snapped it violently to the side with a loud, sharp crack and dropped the lifeless body on the carpet.
Milro ran out into the hall leading out of her bedroom. The gently curving hall extended in either direction with evenly spaced floor to ceiling windows along the wall opposite her door. Several more Walruses dressed in identical garb as the first come out from around the curve.
Milro noticed one of them carrying bell jar with three tiny figures trapped inside. As they drew near she gasped when she saw them. Her parents and brother, shrunken to the same size as her pounded against the glass. “Mom, Dad, Nalro!” she called out.
The Walruses all stopped and looked at her. A particularly short Walrus with a gold tusk wearing a red aloha shirt with a palm tree motif pushed his way to the front. He turned to the others and shifted his eyes up and down the line in an irritated glare.
“Why did you all stop?” he growled.
“It’s Princess Milro Waltu-sama.” One of the Walruses pointed to the tiny princess.
Waltu turned around momentarily to see her before turning back to the others. “I can’t see that, you imbeciles,” he shot back. He threw his flipper out to point at her. “GET HER!”
Milro backed up a couple steps before she spun on her heel and ran away. The Walruses gave chase, running as best they could on their back flippers. She looked back and saw that although clumsy and awkward, the Walruses were gaining on her, their flippers extended to grab her. She looked away tried to run even faster.
“Somebody,” her voice cracked between labored breaths as tears streamed from her eyes, “please, help me.”
As she ran in front of an opened window a stiff gust of wind blew in. The cool breeze swept Milro clear off her feet and picked her up off the ground. The Walruses piled on the floor where she had just been trying to grab her. She tumbled helplessly through the air as the wind carried her out the window.
The gust died, allowing her to fall. She screamed as she fell into the pool of water in the base of the castle’s main tower. She splashed through the water and swam back up to the surface, spitting out the semi-salty water to take a breath.
She looked up at the tower. The Walruses stared down at her from the window. She heaved a relieved sigh as she grabbed her hat floating next to her.
She began to feel like she was being carried away from the tower. She looked behind her and saw that she was being pulled towards the spillway. She treaded water frantically to get out of the current but the water carried her over the fall into the moat.
The current carried her down into the lowest moat. Her dress grew heavy and waterlogged and she coughed and choked on the salty water. She felt herself sinking as her body was being overcome by exhaustion.
She saw a piece of driftwood float by. With the last of her strength she swam to it and pulled herself onto it. She collapsed from exhaustion as the convenient piece of debris was carried out of the moat. It drifted out of the inlet and into the open ocean with its unconscious passenger.
Hello everyone. I come to you with a new fanfic based on Fushigiboshi no Futago Hime. If you've been reading my other work I have to apologize. I've pulled it up by the roots, thrown it on a pile of kindling, doused it with gasoline, took a lit match to it and threw in a couple sticks of dynamite for good measure. Okay, I abandoned it, but I thought this imagery was more dramatic.
There are many reasons why I decided to discontinue it. I found myself unhappy with the direction it was going in and found that decisions I had already made in it were not to my liking. I'll spare you the gory details.
As I said, I come to you with a new story that I hope you will all like. It's got a similar setup and the same characters but I've completely rewritten the plot and reorganized my thoughts. This is actually an extrapolation of one of my ideas for the Dungeons and Starships contests.
Also, if you're curious (and can read Japanese) I suggest checking out the original concept by BIRTHDAY to learn more about the series. Much of my material came from here including some that was never showcased in the anime.
I'll try to post once a week on Thursday mornings. Look here for updates.
24/09/2008: Prologue posted
02/10/2008: Chapter 1 posted
09/10/2008: Chapter 2 posted
16/10/2008: Got rid of the book thing. They'd wind up being only a few chapters each.
16/10/2008: Chapter 3 posted
23/10/2008: Chapter 4 posted
30/10/2008: Chapter 5 posted
06/11/2008: Chapter 6 posted
20/11/2008: Chapter 7 posted
28/11/2008: Chapter 8 posted
Without further ado, I give you The Weather Makers of the Mysterious Planet: The Legend of Huracan.
Skyline: Can the Mysterious Planet withstand the storm?
Cover Jacket Introduction:
The Mysterious Planet is a hollow world where its people live inside its shell instead of on the surface. Its civilization is divided into seven countries each with a duty to make the interior habitable. It is peaceful and prosperous with a culture built on cooperation and interdependency.
The Mysterious Planet is also a world of myths and legends. Many know the story of Princess Grace of the Sunny Kingdom and how she saved the planet from the ravages of the Black Crystal. Her successors, Princesses Fine and Rein, then cast the vile entity from the Mysterious Planet once and for all.
However, many more legends are out there on the lips of elders and pages of books. Five years after the Black Crystal’s defeat, the Mysterious Planet would find itself facing the most powerful and terrifying legend of all. It would strike deep into its civilization and shake it at its very core.
Once again the fate of the Mysterious Planet will fall in the hands of unlikely heroes. But do they have any hope against a force of nature? More importantly, is this world even ready for them?
Legal Crap: This is a work of fiction. All persons, places, and events are products of the author’s imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, places and events is purely coincidental.
Fushigiboshi no Futagohime is the copyrighted property of BIRTHDAY, NAS, TV Tokyo, BANDAI Networks, NEC Interchannel, Ciao Comics, Hal Filmmaker etc.
Acknowledgments: I’d like to give special thanks for Ledian_X who created the sci-fi contest that gave rise to this idea. As well as Yamato-san as working helping him with his projects inspired me to go for this.
Warning:This story is rated PG-13. I contains foul language, violence, and covers topics some might find offensive.
Historian’s Note: This story takes place about five years after the end of the first series.
Based on 『ふしぎ星の ふたご姫』 (The Twin Princesses of the Mysterious Planet):
Concept by BIRTHDAY
Prologue: Beware the Walrus
As an industrialized nation, the Water Drop Kingdom was ruled more by the clock than by the Sun’s Blessing. Even with the darkness of night falling Saginaw City, its capital, was still active. Pale light poured from the windows in the round, white walled and blue onion top roofed buildings and overhead lamps shined down on the canals that crisscrossed one another like streets through the community on the edge of the world.
Rising above it all was the kingdom’s castle, also emitting light from its many windows. Its design was similar to the other buildings only much larger. The structure appeared to be a blend of a tower and a fountain with water spilling over the rim of the central tower’s base into the top moat and then falling into the lower moats before flowing out into the inlet leading to the ocean.
The castle was more than just the residence of the royal family. Housed within its structure was the machine of the Water Drop Kingdom; the device that converted liquid water into clouds for all of the Mysterious Planet. A cloud would periodically form from the distributor on the top of the central tower and expand as it was carried off the wind. The process went along, day or night as the need for the clouds and the life giving rain they carried never slept.
* * *
Princess Milro looked up from her canvas through the sliding glass door at the darkness speckled by points of light from the city. She instinctively turned to the alarm clocking sitting on her nightstand. The hands of the analogue face were positioned to show it was nearing a quarter to ten.
It’s getting late, she thought.
She could become so engrossed in her painting that she would lose all track of time. The memory of one time she was painting and when she looked at the clock it was three in the morning came to mind. Fortunately she still had some time make the evening rounds before bed.
She set down her brush and glass palette on the table next to her and stretched as she stood up. She picked up the cloth she had laid over her lap and laid it over the almost completed painting of a lighthouse on a small, rocky island.
She paused to think about her latest work. It was a landscape like many that she had painted before. However, unlike her other paintings she had never seen the subject before. The idea just came to her seemingly out of nowhere. However, that and the last few details could wait for morning.
She turned to a full body mirror between her bed and the sliding glass door. A dainty girl in her mid teens wearing a long-sleeved, robin egg blue bodice and full length, white bell skirt decorated with blue raindrops looked back to her. She appeared human aside from the beige, beaver like ears nestled in her light brown hair in front of a small, blue, curled raindrop shaped hat perched elegantly on her head. She straightened her clothes as they had become a little askew from her sitting for so long.
A knock came at the door. Milro immediately thought it was her younger brother wanting a story before bed.
“Come in,” she replied in her gentle voice as she started looking through the books on a shelf above the head of her bed.
The door slid open but instead of her younger brother a diminutive, anthropomorphic walrus dressed in a yellow tunic and tinted goggles stepped in. The small pinniped pulled out a small device with a large parabolic dish on the front as he crept quietly towards the unsuspecting princess. Milro pulled out a book bound in a red leather cover filled with fairytales.
“What do you want to hear tonight Nalro?” Milro asked as she turned around.
She looked down and jumped back in shock. She dropped her book when she saw the walrus standing in front of her. “Who are you?” she asked.
The walrus said nothing in response. He instead pointed the device at her and squeezed its clumsy trigger. The device loosed a red energy that struck and spread over Milro.
Milro tried to move away but her body wouldn’t budge. She saw that her room was expanding…or…more specifically, she was growing smaller. She urged her body to move but it wouldn’t. She could only watch helplessly as the world around her took on giant proportions. The device finally ceased, leaving her less than a dozen centimeters tall.
Her body came under her control again. She stepped back and looked around. Her bed was now a mesa of blue cloth. She backed into the wooden leg of her easel up to the painting she was just working on now high above her. Even the book she had been holding was huge compared to her.
Her attention turned to the walrus that now towered over her. He looked down at her. His mouth formed into a wide, toothy grin behind his stubby tusks and although his eyes were hidden by his goggles they no doubt had lit up. Before they could do anything else a voice shouting caught their attention.
“Princess Milro-sama,” the voice called out.
Chief Engineer Spigot ran into the doorway and rested against the jam. The anthropomorphic beaver was visibly winded, panting and gasping as he tried to catch his breath. His blue best was wrinkled and sat askew on his small, stocky frame as well as the blue visor on his head.
“Dammit,” he gasped, “I’m too late.”
The Walrus spun around to him. He pointed the device towards him but the engineer tackled him and smacked the machine from his hand. The two rolled over and threw each other off.
“Mr. Spigot,” Milro panicked, “what’s happening?”
“There’s no time to explain,” Spigot said as he kicked the Walrus in the gut. “You have to get out of here now.”
The Walrus was stunned by the blow but rolled back up onto his flippers. He grabbed Spigot by his collar and threw his weight into them. Spigot’s back landed on the device that shattered under their combined wait.
A sharp pain shot through Spigot’s body as his back bent over the machine. He gave a groan as he kicked off his attacker. He rolled over onto his hands and knees and grabbed his back, still throbbing. The Walrus curled his flipper and punched him in the face as he tried to get to his feet.
Spigot was stunned for a second but jumped to his feet. He grabbed the Walrus from behind and held him in a tight headlock as the pinniped flailed to get free. He looked back to Milro still standing there, looking on in bewilderment.
“I said GO!” he shouted.
Milro was taken aback by his outburst. She paused for a second but she nodded and ran for the open door. Spigot grabbed the Walrus’ head and snapped it violently to the side with a loud, sharp crack and dropped the lifeless body on the carpet.
Milro ran out into the hall leading out of her bedroom. The gently curving hall extended in either direction with evenly spaced floor to ceiling windows along the wall opposite her door. Several more Walruses dressed in identical garb as the first come out from around the curve.
Milro noticed one of them carrying bell jar with three tiny figures trapped inside. As they drew near she gasped when she saw them. Her parents and brother, shrunken to the same size as her pounded against the glass. “Mom, Dad, Nalro!” she called out.
The Walruses all stopped and looked at her. A particularly short Walrus with a gold tusk wearing a red aloha shirt with a palm tree motif pushed his way to the front. He turned to the others and shifted his eyes up and down the line in an irritated glare.
“Why did you all stop?” he growled.
“It’s Princess Milro Waltu-sama.” One of the Walruses pointed to the tiny princess.
Waltu turned around momentarily to see her before turning back to the others. “I can’t see that, you imbeciles,” he shot back. He threw his flipper out to point at her. “GET HER!”
Milro backed up a couple steps before she spun on her heel and ran away. The Walruses gave chase, running as best they could on their back flippers. She looked back and saw that although clumsy and awkward, the Walruses were gaining on her, their flippers extended to grab her. She looked away tried to run even faster.
“Somebody,” her voice cracked between labored breaths as tears streamed from her eyes, “please, help me.”
As she ran in front of an opened window a stiff gust of wind blew in. The cool breeze swept Milro clear off her feet and picked her up off the ground. The Walruses piled on the floor where she had just been trying to grab her. She tumbled helplessly through the air as the wind carried her out the window.
The gust died, allowing her to fall. She screamed as she fell into the pool of water in the base of the castle’s main tower. She splashed through the water and swam back up to the surface, spitting out the semi-salty water to take a breath.
She looked up at the tower. The Walruses stared down at her from the window. She heaved a relieved sigh as she grabbed her hat floating next to her.
She began to feel like she was being carried away from the tower. She looked behind her and saw that she was being pulled towards the spillway. She treaded water frantically to get out of the current but the water carried her over the fall into the moat.
The current carried her down into the lowest moat. Her dress grew heavy and waterlogged and she coughed and choked on the salty water. She felt herself sinking as her body was being overcome by exhaustion.
She saw a piece of driftwood float by. With the last of her strength she swam to it and pulled herself onto it. She collapsed from exhaustion as the convenient piece of debris was carried out of the moat. It drifted out of the inlet and into the open ocean with its unconscious passenger.
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